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i have a good idea! :D

Try Storyboard!
at the Relaxing parts you can have like a grey background
at the Kiai parts you can put on some cool effects and mabye some blinking ;)
Be sure to put a epilepsy warning!
hope you liked the idea and keep on the good work! :)i love this map <3
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Keep up the good work man.
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finally, hope you like it

http://puu.sh/h1iae/68cf27d568.rar
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Diff added!
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TAKE MY BABIES
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Normal diff is hard, need easy diff!
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gokugohan12468 wrote:

Normal diff is hard, need easy diff!
I know! Aka pls
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<3 this map. have a star :D
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hype
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the pending is real
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༼ つ◕_◕ ༽つ the real is hype ༼ つ◕_◕ ༽つ
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haipu ^^
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hi, about the song title~ no kd(∩・▽・∩)

there is a strange space between the 「プ」 and 「レ」 like this, so please try to copy 「不可逆リプレイス」 and change it


nice map! good luck~
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Great map! Hope it gets ranked. It deserves it!
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M o k o r i wrote:

hi, about the song title~ no kd(∩・▽・∩)

there is a strange space between the 「プ」 and 「レ」 like this, so please try to copy 「不可逆リプレイス」 and change it


nice map! good luck~
Updated, thanks!
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m4m

[Aka's Easy]
  1. 00:29:603 (3) - i would nc here, but thats just me. just a suggestion
  2. 00:39:203 (3) - ^
  3. 01:14:753 (1) - uh, why this nc? mistake?
  4. 01:19:553 (1) - ^
  5. 01:20:153 (1,3) - id fix the blanket here
  6. 01:24:353 (1) - seriously, i dont see the point in these little ncs in an easy
  7. 01:51:203 (3) - nc?
  8. 01:58:553 - why'd you map this part before the second kiai, but not before the first?
  9. 02:00:953 (1,1) - if possible id blanket these
  10. 02:07:553 (1) - again with the nc
  11. 02:31:553 (1) - ^
  12. 02:34:553 (4,2) - stack these?
  13. 03:28:553 (1,2) - nazi, fix blanket
  14. 03:30:353 (3,1) - ^
  15. 03:42:353 (5,1) - if i were you id add a break here. the long pause without a break might be unrankable. idk though


aka mapping <3
[Normal]
  1. id make the AR5 or something. going from 3.5 to 6 is a big difference from an easy to a normal
  2. 00:22:403 (1,2) - fix blanket
  3. 00:26:153 (3,4) - ^
  4. 00:48:803 - 00:50:078 - i doubt it matters but id remove the green points that are in between these times
  5. 01:05:753 (1) - id move the last anchor to the left once to even out with the previous slider
  6. 01:17:603 (1,3) - i dont really like this barely touching overlap, so maybe move the single note to the right just a bit?
  7. 01:19:553 (6) - id nc this to keep consistency with this nc 01:09:953 (1)
  8. 01:33:953 (1) - remove nc. i dont see a point for one here
  9. 02:12:353 (6) - same with above. nc to keep consistency
  10. 02:18:803 (4) - idk if this is rankable, but this slider goes far off the grid, so id move it to the left
  11. 02:40:703 (4,1) - this overlap could be fixed
  12. 03:08:453 (1,1) - is it ok to have two spinners start so close next to each other?
  13. 03:24:953 (1) - ♥
  14. 03:35:153 (6) - nc for consistency
  15. 03:42:803 (7,1) - same as the easy, idk about the no break here


go through and check blankets. other than that i like the diff
[pkhg's Hard]
  1. id make the AR at least 8. 8.5 seems too high unless an Advanced were to be mapped
  2. the nc'ing in the beginning seems a bit awkward to me. why not just nc every downbeat or so?
  3. 00:14:153 (5) - nc
  4. 00:18:953 (5) - ^
  5. 00:27:653 (2,1) - so nazi, fix stack please
  6. 00:28:403 (1,4) - ^
  7. 00:38:003 (1,1) - ^
  8. 01:19:553 (3) - remove the clap on the red tick
  9. 02:12:353 (3) - ^
  10. 03:35:153 (3) - ^ i just dont see the point for the claps


id go through and fix the stacks. there were a lot that were off
[Saut's Insane]
  1. 00:48:803 (1,1) - fix stack
  2. 00:52:253 (4,3) - ^
  3. 00:59:603 (1) - remove nc
  4. 00:59:903 (2) - nc
  5. 01:04:553 (5) - ^
  6. 01:04:253 (4,6) - so nazi, fix stack
  7. 01:50:753 (4,1) - i would fix the (1) so that it curves evenly over the (4). example: http://puu.sh/hlvBE/b2fe63bd25.jpg
  8. 01:55:253 (2) - maybe ctrl - g this?
  9. 02:11:603 (1) - i think this slider should be changed into 2 single notes. the slider to me doesnt fit
  10. 02:12:353 (8) - remove the clap on the red tick
  11. 02:16:853 (2) - remove clap on tail and add on head
  12. 02:36:353 (6) - i would ctrl - g this. the flow it creates plays so well
  13. 02:56:603 (2,4) - fix blanket
  14. 02:59:453 (5) - i personally would move this to x:200 y:220. where its at atm feels too close to the (3)
  15. 03:35:153 (8) - again with the clap
  16. 03:44:453 (3) - ♥


so, go through and fix some stacks and blankets. nice diff
[Infinite]
  1. https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3037907 ;-;...
  2. 00:04:403 (2) - maybe you could move this to x:248 y:100? to me the small space it makes between 00:03:953 (1) - and 00:04:403 (2) - feels nice
  3. 00:08:453 (7) - just a suggestion, but maybe you could do something like this? http://puu.sh/hlvV5/2f117aeac6.jpg it plays nicely imo
  4. 00:20:303 (2) - ctrl - g? it feels less awkward to play
  5. 00:21:203 (2) - ^
  6. 00:24:803 (1,2) - fix the blanket here? its slightly off
  7. 00:43:253 (2,3) - fix blanket
  8. 01:00:503 (2,4) - you should ctrl - g these separately. it plays so much better like that
  9. 01:03:353 (1,3) - ^
  10. 01:17:303 (6,7) - to me, this pattern is a bit meh to play. even when i was testplaying it it felt awkward. maybe come up with something else to do?
  11. 02:05:453 (6) - ctrl - g?
  12. 02:36:503 (6,7,1) - fix blanket
  13. 02:43:103 (4) - imo you should ctrl - g this. the flow it creates feels nice
  14. 03:10:553 (6) - nc?
  15. 03:25:403 (1,1) - fix blanket
  16. 03:40:853 (2) - ctrl - g?


in love ♥♥♥

aaaaa, i love this song. amazing choice
good luck with getting this ranked!
have my two stars~
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I think i'll check this when i have a bit of time, i love this song, and the map too ^^

You have my star btw~
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Moo-Chan wrote:

[Aka's Easy]
  1. 00:29:603 (3) - i would nc here, but thats just me. just a suggestion nah, there is still previous phrase, i wouldnt like making short ncs there :р
  2. 00:39:203 (3) - ^ same
  3. 01:14:753 (1) - uh, why this nc? mistake? it was intentional but i reworked on ncing now. removed ✔
  4. 01:19:553 (1) - ^
  5. 01:20:153 (1,3) - id fix the blanket here its not that noticeable but okay ✔
  6. 01:24:353 (1) - seriously, i dont see the point in these little ncs in an easy removed, removed ✔
  7. 01:51:203 (3) - nc? nah, the reason is the same as in first suggestion
  8. 01:58:553 - why'd you map this part before the second kiai, but not before the first? at first i wanted to map it but i dont like how it starts after the spinner. if i start after 1 measure or 2 measures later, it doesnt feel good for me for some reason, and the part is quite short now due to the spinner, so its okay i think to leave a break there. 2nd part sounds more intense for me :р
  9. 02:00:953 (1,1) - if possible id blanket these sure ✔
  10. 02:07:553 (1) - again with the nc yeah ✔
  11. 02:31:553 (1) - ^
  12. 02:34:553 (4,2) - stack these? uuuhm i changed ncs here already, so i suppose you meant 02:34:553 (4,1) - ? if yes then done ✔
  13. 03:28:553 (1,2) - nazi, fix blanket lmao ✔
  14. 03:30:353 (3,1) - ^
  15. 03:42:353 (5,1) - if i were you id add a break here. the long pause without a break might be unrankable. idk though its not unrankable but i added a break ✔


aka mapping <3 (///^///)
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thanks :3


http://puu.sh/hwqpM/b25e2c1109.osu
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love this! waiting for more one ok rock and my first story maps! :D
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