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Momizi
275 posts
Joined June 2013
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Momizi

Misure wrote:

求个m4m
[General]
  1. Hard Lunatic Extra Extra HP都是6 这样真的好么._.
[Extra]
  1. 00:14:475 (2,1) - 近了 要不1 2 note ctrl+G 2反选了
  2. 00:18:675 (1) - 连续折返太对付了... 这一段的vocal就这种重复的感觉。。除了转盘想到的就是折返了
  3. 00:25:725 (1) - 建议392|128 虽然你大概是刻意想搞的难读.. ×，故意摆的，因为1 2的音比较重而且相同所以叠一起了而且1跳的比较开
  4. 00:28:275 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 形状莫名的微妙... ×，还是好打的233
  5. 00:30:675 (5) - ctrl+G 修改
  6. 00:38:775 (6,1) - 感觉近了 后面几处类似的感觉也是 空一拍就最好不要保持原来的间距，至少从视觉上能区分的程度...或者干脆不空拍变滑条 都是个人建议
  7. 00:49:275 (9,10,11) - 最好从视觉上 等距 ×，感觉这样比较整洁没有堆叠在一起
  8. 00:51:375 (1,2) - 分别ctrl+G √，不错，修改了
  9. 00:58:875 (1) - 01:08:475 (1) - 这大概可以再快点 ×因为用的是0.5的速度，1.0相对够快了
  10. 01:05:475 (6,1) - 感觉近了 适当的右移了一点
  11. 01:26:775 (1) - 感觉后面连打出现的有点突然了 不如把这个改成滑条 修改
  12. 01:36:675 (1) - 。。。尾巴没声音实在是太奇怪了 打的时候心里一惊
  13. 01:40:275 (1,1,1) - 02:39:075 (1,1,1) - 可以吐槽这三个音效么...配合全图有点突兀，为什么春卷和FS那边效果就感觉好多了 ×,仔细听音乐确实有钟声，于是我就加上去了
  14. 02:16:875 (9) - 这个滑条我建议flow向右 也就是ctrl+H的方向 就有点星爷的意思了（并不 ×，感觉这样比较美观
  15. 02:52:725 - vocal故意丢掉么 是的。。和前面的鼓点一样
  16. 03:09:975 (7) - 和后面的滑条叠起来比较好 ×，后面差不多都是这个距离没问题

[Spring Roll's Extra]
  1. 01:09:075 (3) - 这个note大概可以比前面远点+NC 突出vocal 后面同理
  2. 01:16:875 (5,1) - 01:25:275 (6,1) - 01:26:475 (4,1) - 感觉stack1/2左右的效果 比较有意思
  3. 01:48:675 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 为什么强行空一拍 后面几组都没这样
  4. 第一段kiai的finish音好吵 建议换个音效，或者Lunatic的最后一段的finish那样的效果比较好
  5. 02:36:675 (1) - flow略反人类 ctrl+G
[Lunatic]
  1. 00:18:675 (6) - 同Extra
  2. 00:23:325 (1) - 这样的NC还是在长白线比较好 鼓点这个红线也是重音
  3. 00:35:175 (4) - ctrl+G 四个滑条flow全向内的效果 调整了4向内
  4. 01:06:675 (1,1,1) - 02:15:075 (1,1,1) - 不如都变成折返 × 折返的感觉就不一样了
  5. 01:29:925 (6,7) - ctrl+G 主要是接前面 ×
  6. 01:34:725 (6,7) - 这种情况我觉得视觉效果比DS重要 离开一点 把7移开了
  7. 01:46:275 (1) - ctrl+G？ ×故意这么摆的

[FreeSongs' Hard]
  1. 00:24:675 (1,6) - 差不多的形状，感觉flow不好，后面那个滑条转个角度？
    。。。挑不出啥问题啊
[Normal]
  1. 00:12:675 (1) - 不如反向完全包下一个note 没能理解，没修改
  2. 00:28:275 (3,4) - 彼此反向 修改
  3. 00:33:675 (2) - 这个音和前面比较紧密 所以向右弯 ×，感觉这样比较顺flow
  4. 01:19:875 (3) - 高点，因为(2)的flow 修改了2的弧度朝向
  5. 02:39:675 (6) - 反向弯曲 修改了
  6. 作为一个Normal note感觉还是太多了 一些连续单点可以适当变成滑条或者折返 因为mapset是做成了每个难度相差差不多一星的样子
[Easy]
  1. ctrl+A 布局整体过于靠下了
  2. 00:17:475 (3) - 00:27:075 (4) - Easy的话 折返少一次 ×，为了节奏和排列就不改了
  3. 00:25:575 (2) - 前面都没有的话 这个delete 修改
  4. 00:48:675 (4) - Easy里这种多次短折返还是少用 ×,这里节奏就是紧凑的连打
祝好运 :)
Mollon
86 posts
Joined February 2013
Mollon
没有办法打图只能靠看的，所以有些地方不打有点试不出来 水摸一枚 抱歉哈

非GD的低难度blanket不是太注意，感觉这玩意挺玄乎的但是还是稍微纳入考虑吧~

easy
图中出现了较多次的00:17:475 (3) - 或 00:28:275 (4) - 这样的一次以上折返滑条，
在easy里（别人摸了我的跟我说）可能不可以用。全图用的比较多，就不全截下来了。
00:57:975 (2,3) - 01:07:575 (2,3) - 02:15:975 (1,2) - 感觉容易误读
02:11:475 (4,1) - 滑条头似碰非碰，稍微分开一点点可能更好看一点
总体来看觉得物件的间距可能有点大，不过星级不超过应该也没什么问题。

normal
像01:29:475 (3,4,5,6) - 这种梗在n难度里会不会难了一点= = 其他没啥问题，不过
连续单点看上去有点密度偏大，可能也是和bpm有关系，不知道能不能部分滑条替代。

freesong's hard
挺神的。。就是体感来看遮的有点厉害，偏难读。应该比一般的hard难打不少

lunatic
00:46:275 (1,2,3,4) - 01:14:475 (1,2,3,4,5) - 间距可以考虑放大一点
挺好的~ 可能是个人打图习惯所以l难度里稍长的串都是直的转，感觉也可以像ex难度里一样加入弧形看上去多样一点（小想法）

spring roll's ex
都很整洁的感觉 就是03:25:800 (8,1) - 这个间距会不会大了一点。。

ex
00:22:275 (1,2) - 不好看。。2往下一点
00:30:075 (3,4) - 滑条头似碰非碰，和n一样问题 最好像后面00:30:675 (5,6) -
这种比较好看。
00:49:275 (9,10,11,1,2) - 有点挤在一起了，可以考虑把10和2往上移一点
01:14:475 (1,2,3,4,1,2,1,1,1,2,1,1,1,2,1,1) - 这里是跟的vocal，不过在ex里
会显得密度偏小，最好能加上滑条添一些
01:59:475 (1,2,3,4) - 滑条头一样问题
看着就感觉很爽。。。

似乎在摸里加了很多个人喜好的东西。。音效不会摸自己还在学。。看看就好~
Momizi
275 posts
Joined June 2013
Topic Starter
Momizi

Mollon wrote:

没有办法打图只能靠看的，所以有些地方不打有点试不出来 水摸一枚 抱歉哈

非GD的低难度blanket不是太注意，感觉这玩意挺玄乎的但是还是稍微纳入考虑吧~

easy
图中出现了较多次的00:17:475 (3) - 或 00:28:275 (4) - 这样的一次以上折返滑条，
在easy里（别人摸了我的跟我说）可能不可以用。全图用的比较多，就不全截下来了。 全部都改了
00:57:975 (2,3) - 01:07:575 (2,3) - 02:15:975 (1,2) - 感觉容易误读 ×，这个是抄了rank图的map的，应该不会
02:11:475 (4,1) - 滑条头似碰非碰，稍微分开一点点可能更好看一点 拉开了
总体来看觉得物件的间距可能有点大，不过星级不超过应该也没什么问题。

normal
像01:29:475 (3,4,5,6) - 这种梗在n难度里会不会难了一点= = 其他没啥问题，不过
连续单点看上去有点密度偏大，可能也是和bpm有关系，不知道能不能部分滑条替代。 难度之间差1星左右应该没问题

freesong's hard
挺神的。。就是体感来看遮的有点厉害，偏难读。应该比一般的hard难打不少

lunatic
00:46:275 (1,2,3,4) - 01:14:475 (1,2,3,4,5) - 间距可以考虑放大一点 ×，故意摆的近一点的，稍微大了一点的话并不会提升星级233
挺好的~ 可能是个人打图习惯所以l难度里稍长的串都是直的转，感觉也可以像ex难度里一样加入弧形看上去多样一点（小想法）

spring roll's ex
都很整洁的感觉 就是03:25:800 (8,1) - 这个间距会不会大了一点。。

ex
00:22:275 (1,2) - 不好看。。2往下一点 往下移动
00:30:075 (3,4) - 滑条头似碰非碰，和n一样问题 最好像后面00:30:675 (5,6) -
这种比较好看。 移动到错开的位置
00:49:275 (9,10,11,1,2) - 有点挤在一起了，可以考虑把10和2往上移一点
01:14:475 (1,2,3,4,1,2,1,1,1,2,1,1,1,2,1,1) - 这里是跟的vocal，不过在ex里
会显得密度偏小，最好能加上滑条添一些 ×添加了滑条就没有这种节奏感了
01:59:475 (1,2,3,4) - 滑条头一样问题 这个应该问题不大，是故意的
看着就感觉很爽。。。

似乎在摸里加了很多个人喜好的东西。。音效不会摸自己还在学。。看看就好~
Mollon
86 posts
Joined February 2013
Mollon

Momizi wrote:

Mollon wrote:

没有办法打图只能靠看的，所以有些地方不打有点试不出来 水摸一枚 抱歉哈

非GD的低难度blanket不是太注意，感觉这玩意挺玄乎的但是还是稍微纳入考虑吧~

easy
图中出现了较多次的00:17:475 (3) - 或 00:28:275 (4) - 这样的一次以上折返滑条，
在easy里（别人摸了我的跟我说）可能不可以用。全图用的比较多，就不全截下来了。 全部都改了
00:57:975 (2,3) - 01:07:575 (2,3) - 02:15:975 (1,2) - 感觉容易误读 ×，这个是抄了rank图的map的，应该不会
02:11:475 (4,1) - 滑条头似碰非碰，稍微分开一点点可能更好看一点 拉开了
总体来看觉得物件的间距可能有点大，不过星级不超过应该也没什么问题。

normal
像01:29:475 (3,4,5,6) - 这种梗在n难度里会不会难了一点= = 其他没啥问题，不过
连续单点看上去有点密度偏大，可能也是和bpm有关系，不知道能不能部分滑条替代。 难度之间差1星左右应该没问题

freesong's hard
挺神的。。就是体感来看遮的有点厉害，偏难读。应该比一般的hard难打不少

lunatic
00:46:275 (1,2,3,4) - 01:14:475 (1,2,3,4,5) - 间距可以考虑放大一点 ×，故意摆的近一点的，稍微大了一点的话并不会提升星级233
挺好的~ 可能是个人打图习惯所以l难度里稍长的串都是直的转，感觉也可以像ex难度里一样加入弧形看上去多样一点（小想法）

spring roll's ex
都很整洁的感觉 就是03:25:800 (8,1) - 这个间距会不会大了一点。。

ex
00:22:275 (1,2) - 不好看。。2往下一点 往下移动
00:30:075 (3,4) - 滑条头似碰非碰，和n一样问题 最好像后面00:30:675 (5,6) -
这种比较好看。 移动到错开的位置
00:49:275 (9,10,11,1,2) - 有点挤在一起了，可以考虑把10和2往上移一点
01:14:475 (1,2,3,4,1,2,1,1,1,2,1,1,1,2,1,1) - 这里是跟的vocal，不过在ex里
会显得密度偏小，最好能加上滑条添一些 ×添加了滑条就没有这种节奏感了
01:59:475 (1,2,3,4) - 滑条头一样问题 这个应该问题不大，是故意的
看着就感觉很爽。。。

似乎在摸里加了很多个人喜好的东西。。音效不会摸自己还在学。。看看就好~
看图学摆跳~ 总之非常感谢！
Narcissu
1,744 posts
Joined August 2012
Narcissu
我看別人圖的tag中的日文在論壇上面是可以正常顯示的但是你的是一堆 “?????” ，試試換個字體重新上傳一下？

音效的二組和三組都有消音滑條，可能CS:1你也會想放一個

[Easy]

不是很有必要的話不會更換NC的頻率和位置，尤其在低難度倒不如說是刻意讓人知道“我是有經驗的，才不是處男”……所以像00:29:475 - 開始的混雜各種奇怪的几小節一次的……建議全程統一為2或者4節一次，不建議三節因為歌曲都是按四節循環所以沒什麼意外都是按偶數分的也就是Normal難度00:29:475 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 和後面一片三節一次建議取締

然後就是00:40:275 (2,3) - 等橫平豎直和遮擋被人廣為詬病……嘗試略微傾斜和彎曲並且避免任何遮擋吧

[FreeSongs' Hard]

後面的難度的slidertickrate都是1 呢

[lunatic]



  • sampleset 默認更換addition 的，不必兩個一起換
  1. 00:11:475 (4) - NC
  2. 00:18:675 (6) - NC。除了1/4的tickslider……超過一次的折返挺少見的
  3. 00:20:475 (4,5,6) - 個人不建議在拍位放三連
  4. 00:21:375 (2) - 00:23:775 (3) - 應該放1/2，連續的3/4是很詭異的節奏，因為是soft底音聽不到所以沒有感覺，換成100音量的normal底音就會覺得奇怪了。這類附點節奏可以參考兩個GD
  5. 00:23:475 (2) - NC放這裡
  6. 00:27:675 (5) - 故意不放七角星下一個位置的麼……
  7. 01:07:575 (1,2,3) - 節奏選擇上我傾向紅線滑條，因為這幾段都是切分音，紅線才是重音位置而且是帶延音線的應該放點擊……另外你似乎同時想兼顧人聲和鼓點比如01:25:725 (2,3) - 兩個圈，可是後面放了圈前面的人聲就完全沒有感覺了，人聲又佔用了拍位沒有節奏感……還不如塞滿1/2痛快的多
  8. 02:39:075 (1,1,1) - 聽上去和前面沒有什麼區別，三個減速滑條梗略掉了大批鼓點反而違和，後面兩個轉盤也是。另外這種程度的鋼琴音效打圖是沒有感覺的，可以參考這個 https://osu.ppy.sh/b/598811
  9. 02:47:475 (5) - NC
我看下來是奇怪的小問題太多了，擺的隨意沒有條理而且不細心比如各種似乎要擺正的卻歪了，距離1.2一排混進去一個1.1，空拍接物件毫無變化等等。也不是和noraml難度02:18:825 (3) - DS崩了一類是會被吹毛求疵之徒DQ的東西我就不湊行數了……試試再多找點摸吧
Momizi
275 posts
Joined June 2013
Topic Starter
Momizi

Narcissu wrote:

我看別人圖的tag中的日文在論壇上面是可以正常顯示的但是你的是一堆 “?????” ，試試換個字體重新上傳一下？

音效的二組和三組都有消音滑條，可能CS:1你也會想放一個 滑条消音在1也添加了，另外tag ？的问题是ppy更新的锅;W;，每次上传图以后都要自己在论坛EDIT改才可以。

[Easy]

不是很有必要的話不會更換NC的頻率和位置，尤其在低難度倒不如說是刻意讓人知道“我是有經驗的，才不是處男”……所以像00:29:475 - 開始的混雜各種奇怪的几小節一次的……建議全程統一為2或者4節一次，不建議三節因為歌曲都是按四節循環所以沒什麼意外都是按偶數分的也就是Normal難度00:29:475 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 和後面一片三節一次建議取締
然後就是00:40:275 (2,3) - 等橫平豎直和遮擋被人廣為詬病……嘗試略微傾斜和彎曲並且避免任何遮擋吧 NC重新设置了一遍，滑条尾部被挡到多的也都做了修改


[FreeSongs' Hard]

後面的難度的slidertickrate都是1 呢

[lunatic]



  • sampleset 默認更換addition 的，不必兩個一起換 这是做完图以后才知道的;W;不过一起换影响不大，我也玩不动音效_(:з」∠)_
  1. 00:11:475 (4) - NC
  2. 00:18:675 (6) - NC。除了1/4的tickslider……超過一次的折返挺少見的 NC都改了，主要是这个往返这段的vocal是已经往复的感觉，L难度做来回单点可能有点难了
  3. 00:20:475 (4,5,6) - 個人不建議在拍位放三連 ×，因为这里有三连的音;W;
  4. 00:21:375 (2) - 00:23:775 (3) - 應該放1/2，連續的3/4是很詭異的節奏，因為是soft底音聽不到所以沒有感覺，換成100音量的normal底音就會覺得奇怪了。這類附點節奏可以參考兩個GD ×，就是因为用了soft音效所以这么摆的，对单双而言可能有点奇怪，但是对强双玩家而言，这种梗打着感觉是舒服的
  5. 00:23:475 (2) - NC放這裡 ×我设置的那个NC点也是个重音，所以我才设置在那儿
  6. 00:27:675 (5) - 故意不放七角星下一個位置的麼…… 做的时候看错flow了;W;，改了 7和5的位置
  7. 01:07:575 (1,2,3) - 節奏選擇上我傾向紅線滑條，因為這幾段都是切分音，紅線才是重音位置而且是帶延音線的應該放點擊……另外你似乎同時想兼顧人聲和鼓點比如01:25:725 (2,3) - 兩個圈，可是後面放了圈前面的人聲就完全沒有感覺了，人聲又佔用了拍位沒有節奏感……還不如塞滿1/2痛快的多
    ×，这两都是故意这么摆的，个人觉得这样会相对有意思一点w
  8. 02:39:075 (1,1,1) - 聽上去和前面沒有什麼區別，三個減速滑條梗略掉了大批鼓點反而違和，後面兩個轉盤也是。另外這種程度的鋼琴音效打圖是沒有感覺的，可以參考這個 https://osu.ppy.sh/b/598811 ×，由于图没有break，所以转盘可以当休息点而且还恰好可以跟人音，那三个钟声我也是顺应原曲听到有钟声 才找到加上去的;;W，你给的那个图挺不错的，学音效的时候可以看看;w；
  9. 02:47:475 (5) - NC √
我看下來是奇怪的小問題太多了，擺的隨意沒有條理而且不細心比如各種似乎要擺正的卻歪了，距離1.2一排混進去一個1.1，空拍接物件毫無變化等等。也不是和noraml難度02:18:825 (3) - DS崩了一類是會被吹毛求疵之徒DQ的東西我就不湊行數了……試試再多找點摸吧
Frey
1,205 posts
Joined February 2011
Frey
喵喵喵喵呜呜呜~~（歌曲里面有一段的背景音真的很像恶魔城的某一首bgm）


  • General
  1. Metadata存在问题：这里Artist请填：Senya，并把幽闭星光的名字划到Tags里面去。这里有必要和你确定一件事情，基本上Comiket或者博丽神社例大祭的曲子，在作者的一项，只要有标明都应该填最直接的名字（comiket之类的很少会用feat来表示合作）。因为类似幽闭星光或者Silver Forest是社团名，不是歌手的名字。况且你可以对比今年rank的幽闭星光的曲子，看哪首有以幽闭星光作为Artist的名字。（即便你是对的。你Feat.和歌手之间还差个空格;w;）
  2. Source错误：改成東方Project，尊重游戏原作者，所以用最原始的游戏名字和语言，而且Touhou也要划到Tags里面去。
  3. 音效长度过低，soft-hitnormal2长度过短，游戏中规定的最低音效长度是0.1秒，因为音效太短有些声卡会爆音，而这个音效不足0.1秒，只有0.028，这是违规的。这里是我做的合格版本，请替换它吧：http://puu.sh/l6XZr/97d83636aa.rar
  4. 击打音效的错误使用，soft-hitnormal4没有音效，请替换或者删除它。静音的hitsound-normal是违规的。不管你是从文件本身上消音还是从绿线的音效控制上消音，除了滑条中间和尾巴、和整个转盘以外，都是不准完全消音的。
  5. BG的长宽比不是很理想。当然4:3和16:9是推荐比率，不过不用也无所谓，非强制的。只是会有强制Letterbox和拉长拉宽和损失图片质量而已。
  6. 对比GD和你的音效，看得出来其实都差不多。这里我提个建议，你给00:19:875 - 到 00:28:275 - 的柔和音乐段落用的是一个强烈的音效，但是到了音乐更强烈的00:49:875 - 01:27:075 - 为什么你却用了音效效果更弱的Soft-hitclap或者是Drum-hitclap? 这在其他类似段落也有体现。我只是单纯觉得有点违和。

    Easy
  7. 00:28:275 (4) - 00:29:475 (1) - 00:59:475 (1) - 01:28:275 (1) - 02:48:675 (1) - 我强烈的不建议你在一个Easy难度中放这种鱼钩滑条，没错，Easy要是有了鱼钩滑条，被DQ的几率非常高。Easy的排版要求是直观。因为从新手的角度，就需要直观明了的物件走向。这种鱼钩滑条在今年的Insane中体现居多，虽然对于成熟的玩家，这个不是问题，但是你必须考虑第一次玩的新手的角度，别人看这种半个脑袋埋在滑条中间的滑条就是会看不明白。虽然这里我是加粗而不是红线（因为红线是书面和口头违规，必死），但是我还是希望你考虑一下，换一个更简单的滑条样式。
  8. 00:29:475 (1) - 口头规定中，Easy是不允许使用绿线变速的。变速的最低使用要求是Normal。把这里的1.1x sv 改成1.0x。Easy中的变速对新手来说很不好，新手不应该在Easy就面对变速的情况。
  9. 00:21:675 - 这里你漏掉了一个Clap音效，音乐里面也听得出来
  10. 00:27:675 - 理由同上
  11. 00:53:475 (2,1) - 印象中Easy里面滑条的头尾埋入滑条身的面积不能超过圆圈的1/2？这里我不是很确定，不过这样叠起来不好看，建议把他们两个一起修改。
  12. 00:59:475 (1) - 添加finish音效？我觉得挺适合的
  13. 01:04:875 (2) - 漏了clap音效
  14. 01:09:675 (2) - 理由同上
  15. 02:15:075 (3,1) - 交换NC，因为从乐理上他们同属一段，而且对比00:57:075 (1,2,3,4) - 就更应该这么做。
  16. 02:27:075 (1) - 我觉得这里可以放一个finish音效
  17. 02:55:875 (1) - 同上，Normal的和Soft的都可以

    Normal
  18. 00:18:675 (4) - 这里用1/2滑条听起来好奇怪啊，我觉得用一个3/4折返滑条然后隔1/2放一个圆圈完全没问题啊？
  19. 00:25:275 - 漏了一个clap音效
  20. 00:49:875 (1,2,3) - 为什么这里单单这样跟了00:50:775 (2,3) - 的节奏啊？看了看后面基本上都没有这么做的，为了统一性我建议和后面的一样吧。
  21. 00:59:475 - 添加finish
  22. 01:07:275 (3) - 漏了Clap
  23. 01:28:275 - 添加finish
  24. 01:39:525 (2) - 这里明显还差一次折返嘛...要不然和下一个部件的距离对不上号。
  25. 01:48:675 (3) - 为了一致性，添加NC。因为这里已经到了下一段，而且你在03:06:675 (1) - 也是这样做的。
  26. 02:04:875 (6) - 感觉这里漏了clap?
  27. 02:07:875 - 添加finish
  28. 02:15:675 (3) - 这里漏了clap
  29. 02:18:075 (2) - 这里也是差了一次折返，不管是跟人声还是跟乐器都差了一拍子
  30. 02:27:075 - 添加finish
  31. 02:38:475 - 02:38:775 - 漏了whistle
  32. 02:46:275 (3) - NC，很明显后面的一声finish音表明的下一段的开始。
  33. 02:54:075 -02:57:675 (5) - 03:00:075 - 03:16:875 (2) - 这些地方漏了Clap
  34. 03:32:475 (3) - 为了一致性，没有特殊理由请保持1.0x 的ds距离

    FreeSongs' Hard
  35. 00:19:875 (1,3) - the imperfect stack seems not good in gaming, better stack them
  36. 00:24:525 (7,1) - switch the new combo, then it would look clean and better
  37. 01:24:225 (3,4,5,6,7) - is this proper to be in a Hard? At least for me, I can't guarantee that I could pass it without a miss, cuz it's not very visible at the first sight. I suggest you put 01:24:525 (5) - to x60 y260.it's more visible and safe
  38. 01:46:350 (1) - why don't you extend it to 01:48:375 - ? oh well, shorten it , then create a new spinner at 01:47:475 - is fine too. like 03:03:150 (1,1) -
  39. 02:36:675 - seems you missed a finish

    Lunatic
  40. 00:18:675 (1) - 老实的跟3/4+1/2不好吗？这里只有这样节奏才对的上号啊...
  41. 00:29:475 (1) - 添加finish音效
  42. 00:48:675 (3) - 添加NC，这里到了另外一个段落了，鼓点的音效也不一样。
  43. 01:06:675 (1,1,1) - 这里延长到1/2或者3/4都是好选择，因为这里的音有拖音，所以加长更适合。
  44. 01:24:675 (5) - 放到x164 y156明显更好，图案上是五角星，flow也不差。
  45. 01:46:125 - 02:43:575 - 03:05:325 - 03:43:725 - 转盘结尾到下一个部件的距离太短了，而且也听不到音乐中合适的击打音来配合结尾，更何况这是bpm200的曲子，这个结尾十分不合理。
  46. 01:47:475 (5) - NC，理由同以上。

    Spring Roll's Extra
  47. 00:47:175 (6) - 把这个滑条缩短成3/4滑条，然后在原来的滑条结尾放一个圆圈。这样的话00:47:475 (1,2,3) - 的三个单点会特别带感。而且你又不是不能放3/4，既然是ex何必弄这么简单？
  48. 01:11:475 (3) - 01:13:875 (3) - 叠在2上如何？那一声why挺大声的，用同等距离及其以上应该是合适的。相比下放中间反而减弱了气势
  49. 01:37:575 (5,6,1) - 可以考虑重做这里，用1/4连打填满
  50. 01:57:675 (4) - 放到x166 y353如何？这里更能突出重音的效果。
  51. 02:12:075 (2,4) - Ctrl+G 对换？如果修改了的话记得修改音效~
  52. 02:24:525 (2,3) - 这里也可以对换一下，个人觉得这样的话，有个小跳会很好玩。
  53. 03:25:800 (8,1) - 200bpm来这种拆连打..有点危险。只是提醒。

    Extra
  54. 00:42:225 (5) - 有点歪，放到x272 y180吧
  55. 01:44:775 (1) - 02:41:475 (1) - 还是老样子，我觉得转盘尾巴和下一个部件的距离太近。但是这里是Extra,和Insane相比还是有一定商量空间...但是不看我，看QAT的心情了。为了安全最好缩短到前面那根白线。
  56. 03:29:775 (2) - Ctrl+G? 个人觉得这样的话2到3的衔接更好。
  57. 在检查了是否挡折返符号或者违规滑条后我就没什么意见了，因为我打不了这个Extra，即使能pass也没有什么实际感受。（实话）

被写一篇论文是幸运又是不幸的事。嘛..反正这个月的论文我已经写了，这是我的任务...你简短的回复就好，祝好运！ :D
Momizi
275 posts
Joined June 2013
Topic Starter
Momizi
感谢女神送摸，么么哒_(:з」∠)_。送你一朵大红fa ✿

Frey wrote:

喵喵喵喵呜呜呜~~（歌曲里面有一段的背景音真的很像恶魔城的某一首bgm）


  • General
  1. Metadata存在问题：这里Artist请填：Senya，并把幽闭星光的名字划到Tags里面去。这里有必要和你确定一件事情，基本上Comiket或者博丽神社例大祭的曲子，在作者的一项，只要有标明都应该填最直接的名字（comiket之类的很少会用feat来表示合作）。因为类似幽闭星光或者Silver Forest是社团名，不是歌手的名字。况且你可以对比今年rank的幽闭星光的曲子，看哪首有以幽闭星光作为Artist的名字。（即便你是对的。你Feat.和歌手之间还差个空格;w;）
  2. Source错误：改成東方Project，尊重游戏原作者，所以用最原始的游戏名字和语言，而且Touhou也要划到Tags里面去。
  3. 音效长度过低，soft-hitnormal2长度过短，游戏中规定的最低音效长度是0.1秒，因为音效太短有些声卡会爆音，而这个音效不足0.1秒，只有0.028，这是违规的。这里是我做的合格版本，请替换它吧：http://puu.sh/l6XZr/97d83636aa.rar
  4. 击打音效的错误使用，soft-hitnormal4没有音效，请替换或者删除它。静音的hitsound-normal是违规的。不管你是从文件本身上消音还是从绿线的音效控制上消音，除了滑条中间和尾巴、和整个转盘以外，都是不准完全消音的。
  5. BG的长宽比不是很理想。当然4:3和16:9是推荐比率，不过不用也无所谓，非强制的。只是会有强制Letterbox和拉长拉宽和损失图片质量而已。
  6. 对比GD和你的音效，看得出来其实都差不多。这里我提个建议，你给00:19:875 - 到 00:28:275 - 的柔和音乐段落用的是一个强烈的音效，但是到了音乐更强烈的00:49:875 - 01:27:075 - 为什么你却用了音效效果更弱的Soft-hitclap或者是Drum-hitclap? 这在其他类似段落也有体现。我只是单纯觉得有点违和。
    错误的地方都修改了，音效也替换和删除了soft hitnormal4 至于柔和段的那个音效我认为那个清脆的咔的音效更加配背景音乐不够强的;W;，然后后面用soft和drum是为了凸显原曲的声音_(:з」∠)_

    Easy
  7. 00:28:275 (4) - 00:29:475 (1) - 00:59:475 (1) - 01:28:275 (1) - 02:48:675 (1) - 我强烈的不建议你在一个Easy难度中放这种鱼钩滑条，没错，Easy要是有了鱼钩滑条，被DQ的几率非常高。Easy的排版要求是直观。因为从新手的角度，就需要直观明了的物件走向。这种鱼钩滑条在今年的Insane中体现居多，虽然对于成熟的玩家，这个不是问题，但是你必须考虑第一次玩的新手的角度，别人看这种半个脑袋埋在滑条中间的滑条就是会看不明白。虽然这里我是加粗而不是红线（因为红线是书面和口头违规，必死），但是我还是希望你考虑一下，换一个更简单的滑条样式。 全部的鱼钩滑条都改了
  8. 00:29:475 (1) - 口头规定中，Easy是不允许使用绿线变速的。变速的最低使用要求是Normal。把这里的1.1x sv 改成1.0x。Easy中的变速对新手来说很不好，新手不应该在Easy就面对变速的情况。 加速去掉了
  9. 00:21:675 - 这里你漏掉了一个Clap音效，音乐里面也听得出来 确实漏掉了;;W，加上
  10. 00:27:675 - 理由同上 加上clap
  11. 00:53:475 (2,1) - 印象中Easy里面滑条的头尾埋入滑条身的面积不能超过圆圈的1/2？这里我不是很确定，不过这样叠起来不好看，建议把他们两个一起修改。 改了排列
  12. 00:59:475 (1) - 添加finish音效？我觉得挺适合的 换排列的时候发现了233，已经添加
  13. 01:04:875 (2) - 漏了clap音效
  14. 01:09:675 (2) - 理由同上 加上clap
  15. 02:15:075 (3,1) - 交换NC，因为从乐理上他们同属一段，而且对比00:57:075 (1,2,3,4) - 就更应该这么做。 换了NC
  16. 02:27:075 (1) - 我觉得这里可以放一个finish音效 可以有
  17. 02:55:875 (1) - 同上，Normal的和Soft的都可以

    Normal
  18. 00:18:675 (4) - 这里用1/2滑条听起来好奇怪啊，我觉得用一个3/4折返滑条然后隔1/2放一个圆圈完全没问题啊？ 改成了一个滑条
  19. 00:25:275 - 漏了一个clap音效
  20. 00:49:875 (1,2,3) - 为什么这里单单这样跟了00:50:775 (2,3) - 的节奏啊？看了看后面基本上都没有这么做的，为了统一性我建议和后面的一样吧。
  21. 00:59:475 - 添加finish 短滑条改为note
  22. 01:07:275 (3) - 漏了Clap
  23. 01:28:275 - 添加finish
  24. 01:39:525 (2) - 这里明显还差一次折返嘛...要不然和下一个部件的距离对不上号。 确实少了
  25. 01:48:675 (3) - 为了一致性，添加NC。因为这里已经到了下一段，而且你在03:06:675 (1) - 也是这样做的。 修改了
  26. 02:04:875 (6) - 感觉这里漏了clap? 下错地方了;W;
  27. 02:07:875 - 添加finish
  28. 02:15:675 (3) - 这里漏了clap
  29. 02:18:075 (2) - 这里也是差了一次折返，不管是跟人声还是跟乐器都差了一拍子 主要是怕一次以上的折返出事情;W;以前听到说来着，不过还是先加上吧
  30. 02:27:075 - 添加finish
  31. 02:38:475 - 02:38:775 - 漏了whistle
  32. 02:46:275 (3) - NC，很明显后面的一声finish音表明的下一段的开始。
  33. 02:54:075 -02:57:675 (5) - 03:00:075 - 03:16:875 (2) - 这些地方漏了Clap
  34. 03:32:475 (3) - 为了一致性，没有特殊理由请保持1.0x 的ds距离 这里是没摆好。。因为之前调整了一次，另外上面的音效少的都添加了

    FreeSongs' Hard
  35. 00:19:875 (1,3) - the imperfect stack seems not good in gaming, better stack them
  36. 00:24:525 (7,1) - switch the new combo, then it would look clean and better
  37. 01:24:225 (3,4,5,6,7) - is this proper to be in a Hard? At least for me, I can't guarantee that I could pass it without a miss, cuz it's not very visible at the first sight. I suggest you put 01:24:525 (5) - to x60 y260.it's more visible and safe
  38. 01:46:350 (1) - why don't you extend it to 01:48:375 - ? oh well, shorten it , then create a new spinner at 01:47:475 - is fine too. like 03:03:150 (1,1) -
  39. 02:36:675 - seems you missed a finish

    Lunatic
  40. 00:18:675 (1) - 老实的跟3/4+1/2不好吗？这里只有这样节奏才对的上号啊... 修改了节奏
  41. 00:29:475 (1) - 添加finish音效 添加_(:з」∠)_
  42. 00:48:675 (3) - 添加NC，这里到了另外一个段落了，鼓点的音效也不一样。
  43. 01:06:675 (1,1,1) - 这里延长到1/2或者3/4都是好选择，因为这里的音有拖音，所以加长更适合。 这个别人也提过。。最后还是1/2好了
  44. 01:24:675 (5) - 放到x164 y156明显更好，图案上是五角星，flow也不差。 修改了
  45. 01:46:125 - 02:43:575 - 03:05:325 - 03:43:725 - 转盘结尾到下一个部件的距离太短了，而且也听不到音乐中合适的击打音来配合结尾，更何况这是bpm200的曲子，这个结尾十分不合理。 缩短了转盘的长度空了1拍，前面的一些转盘加了whistle音效增加转完的打击感
  46. 01:47:475 (5) - NC，理由同以上。

    Spring Roll's Extra
  47. 00:47:175 (6) - 把这个滑条缩短成3/4滑条，然后在原来的滑条结尾放一个圆圈。这样的话00:47:475 (1,2,3) - 的三个单点会特别带感。而且你又不是不能放3/4，既然是ex何必弄这么简单？
  48. 01:11:475 (3) - 01:13:875 (3) - 叠在2上如何？那一声why挺大声的，用同等距离及其以上应该是合适的。相比下放中间反而减弱了气势
  49. 01:37:575 (5,6,1) - 可以考虑重做这里，用1/4连打填满
  50. 01:57:675 (4) - 放到x166 y353如何？这里更能突出重音的效果。
  51. 02:12:075 (2,4) - Ctrl+G 对换？如果修改了的话记得修改音效~
  52. 02:24:525 (2,3) - 这里也可以对换一下，个人觉得这样的话，有个小跳会很好玩。
  53. 03:25:800 (8,1) - 200bpm来这种拆连打..有点危险。只是提醒。

    Extra
  54. 00:42:225 (5) - 有点歪，放到x272 y180吧 确实歪了，修改了
  55. 01:44:775 (1) - 02:41:475 (1) - 还是老样子，我觉得转盘尾巴和下一个部件的距离太近。但是这里是Extra,和Insane相比还是有一定商量空间...但是不看我，看QAT的心情了。为了安全最好缩短到前面那根白线。 缩短了转盘;W;
  56. 03:29:775 (2) - Ctrl+G? 个人觉得这样的话2到3的衔接更好。 感觉还是不反选比较好
  57. 在检查了是否挡折返符号或者违规滑条后我就没什么意见了，因为我打不了这个Extra，即使能pass也没有什么实际感受。（实话）

被写一篇论文是幸运又是不幸的事。嘛..反正这个月的论文我已经写了，这是我的任务...你简短的回复就好，祝好运！ :D
Frey
1,205 posts
Joined February 2011
Frey
唔啊，我才发现senya的s不是大写，我个笨蛋
sodarose
607 posts
Joined July 2011
sodarose
M4M

[EX]
感觉Narcissu说的对，擺的隨意沒有條理而且不細心。开头还能看，越往后越明显。跳也是想到什么梗就怎么下的那种01:35:475 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 这段跳间距莫名的大
你的变速只有0.5 0.75 1.0 1.5这几种，我个人认为应该把变速幅度缩小一点
作为新人我只能做这么多了orz，无从下手

[Spring Roll's Extra]
01:01:275 (7) - 这个不应该是1/2折返的吗
01:25:275 (6) - 歪了
01:40:275 总感觉这个减速怪怪的
02:36:600 note

就先这么多吧，要断网了orz
LigerZero
2,429 posts
Joined August 2013
LigerZero
[Metadata]
Title:Iro wa Jou e to Izanau OK
TitleUnicode:色は情へと誘う OK
Artist:senya OK
ArtistUnicode:senya OK
Creator:Momizi OK
Source:東方Project OK
Tags:Mayumi Morinaga Touhou 幽閉サテライト c84 大空魔術 ～ Magical Astronomy 天空のグリニッジ Spring Roll FreeSongs Added "Greenwich in the sky The Whole World Sanzen Sekai Yuuhei Satellite deitarabotchi Kamase Tora"
Momizi
275 posts
Joined June 2013
Topic Starter
Momizi

sodarose wrote:

M4M

[EX]
感觉Narcissu说的对，擺的隨意沒有條理而且不細心。开头还能看，越往后越明显。跳也是想到什么梗就怎么下的那种01:35:475 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 这段跳间距莫名的大 这段跳是故意这么摆的;W;因为节奏适合摆跳，我也顺便塞几个大跳提升下难度
你的变速只有0.5 0.75 1.0 1.5这几种，我个人认为应该把变速幅度缩小一点 至于速度的调整。。个人感觉这些差不多了_(:з」∠)_，不太会影响打图
作为新人我只能做这么多了orz，无从下手

[Spring Roll's Extra]
01:01:275 (7) - 这个不应该是1/2折返的吗
01:25:275 (6) - 歪了
01:40:275 总感觉这个减速怪怪的
02:36:600 note

就先这么多吧，要断网了orz
Momizi
275 posts
Joined June 2013
Topic Starter
Momizi

LigerZero wrote:

[Metadata]
Title:Iro wa Jou e to Izanau OK
TitleUnicode:色は情へと誘う OK
Artist:senya OK
ArtistUnicode:senya OK
Creator:Momizi OK
Source:東方Project OK
Tags:Mayumi Morinaga Touhou 幽閉サテライト c84 大空魔術 ～ Magical Astronomy 天空のグリニッジ Spring Roll FreeSongs Added "Greenwich in the sky The Whole World Sanzen Sekai Yuuhei Satellite deitarabotchi Kamase Tora"

Thank you for supplementing. :lol:
Spring Roll
230 posts
Joined April 2013
Spring Roll
刚说没时间马上就有空了
前面的mod都看过，太多了就不一个一个回复了

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F D Flourite
811 posts
Joined March 2013
F D Flourite
Hi, M4M
你这图太可怕了居然把Modding Assistant直接卡爆了
抱歉我已经很困了，所以估计会比较水
[General]
  1. Disable Widescreen Support and Letterbox during breaks on each diff? They are useless.
[Easy]
  1. 我几乎是第一次见到full ver的EZ没有break的。建议有1~2个break比较好

    Ranking Criteria Guideline wrote:

    Use breaks where possible. Even if they are only 5-10 seconds, it allows a bit of recovery and hand repositioning for players. However, try to avoid longer breaks that are in excess of 15 seconds. Breaks should especially be used with Easy/Normal difficulties.
  2. 00:27:075 (3) - 啊现在都没人在EZ用这种梗了。明显坑新人。
  3. 01:16:275 (3,4) - ^
  4. 00:51:075 (3,1) - ^
  5. 02:09:075 (2,3) - ^
  6. 00:52:275 (1,2) - 这个overlap好难看
  7. 00:39:075 (1) - 为何从这里开始的clap都是default的，我挺喜欢S:C2的clap的
  8. 03:31:875 (3,4) - 这种flow出现在EZ里也是很不好的
  9. 其实你这个diff偏简单了。完全可以多一点1/1节奏的。现在这个排列就是因为DS比较大显得很松散。而且也鲜有blanket之类的梗，不美观。
[Normal]
  1. skipped N diff icon, 小心dq
  2. 同clap
  3. 同break问题
  4. 01:18:675 (1,3) - 这里overlap了
  5. 02:18:075 (2,3) - 这里的距离和节奏搭起来简直有毒
  6. 整体的1/2节奏感觉有点乱，像是凭感觉随便放的
[FreeSongs' Hard]
  1. 01:24:225 (3,4,5,6,7) - Try to use some NC do make it more readable? it is a Hard diff
  2. 01:32:475 (5,1) - Improve the blanket
  3. 02:32:475 (2,3,4) - It doesn't feel good when playing. Flow will be better if you stack 3 on 2 instead of 4.
[Lunatic]
  1. 00:18:675 (1) - 玩的不舒服啊。减速感觉是不是会好一些？正好这一段声音也变轻了
  2. 01:06:675 (1,1,1) - 这个距离加上多个NC容易读成减速吧？
  3. 02:18:825 (5,6) - overlap
  4. 01:47:475 (5) - NC
  5. 01:59:025 (5,6,1) - 这个距离不行
  6. 02:06:375 (7) - 这个为何要叠起来？
  7. 虽然整个diff可以看出距离是有经过考虑的，但是太过于拘谨（简直开过DS）导致overlap严重，显得图的整洁度不够。（Extra也是）此外，还是有一些地方的距离控制不太好，比如01:56:625 (4,5,1) - 虽然看得出5->1的距离的确要大一些，但是对于Lunatic这种难度来说这种程度的距离很容易被当成跳。你看02:54:375 (5,1) - 这里就变成跳了。等等其它地方我就不多说了。
[Spring Roll's Extra]
  1. 03:33:075 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 你的drum-hitwhistle和NC呢？
  2. 03:24:525 (8) - 无论是离后面的距离还是overlap都感觉不太舒服
  3. 03:25:725 (7,8) - 确定不用滑条？这里和你整个diff的难度都不符啊
  4. 01:42:675 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 这一段的减速没看懂
[Extra]
  1. 00:15:975 (6,1) - 距离有毒
  2. 00:27:075 (9) - NC
  3. 00:30:975 (6,7,8) - 距离
  4. 00:40:500 (2,3) - 既然节奏是1/2就不要overlap
  5. 00:45:675 (3,4) - overlap看起来很难受
  6. 00:47:700 (2,3) - 这样看起来特别像加速连续1/2间隔1/4的梗。这里要避免overlap。
  7. 02:36:675 (10) - NC
  8. 02:59:175 (7,1) - 虽然是故意摆的梗，但是由于音乐在02:59:325 - 有一个很重的鼓点导致这个停顿显得相当不自然，这里的梗也就因此很容易被误读。建议加一个note在02:59:325 - 。
  9. 03:44:775 (5) - NC
  10. 看得出来还是有想法的，不过整体的掌控力感觉不够，东西很挤但是结构却依然显得有些松散。尤其是那些按照DS来摆的circle。看起来距离相等，但是效果差。此外，你需要在slider上面多花一些功夫。虽然在梗方面，你有对slider进行过修饰，但是对于kiai等比较缺梗的情况下，你的slider的完成度比较低，搭配也不是很好。多看其他人的图会对你的placement有所帮助。加油咯
Good luck.
Momizi
275 posts
Joined June 2013
Topic Starter
Momizi

F D Flourite wrote:

Hi, M4M
你这图太可怕了居然把Modding Assistant直接卡爆了
抱歉我已经很困了，所以估计会比较水
[General]
  1. Disable Widescreen Support and Letterbox during breaks on each diff? They are useless.
[Easy]
  1. 我几乎是第一次见到full ver的EZ没有break的。建议有1~2个break比较好 加上去了

    Ranking Criteria Guideline wrote:

    Use breaks where possible. Even if they are only 5-10 seconds, it allows a bit of recovery and hand repositioning for players. However, try to avoid longer breaks that are in excess of 15 seconds. Breaks should especially be used with Easy/Normal difficulties.
  2. 00:27:075 (3) - 啊现在都没人在EZ用这种梗了。明显坑新人。
  3. 01:16:275 (3,4) - ^
  4. 00:51:075 (3,1) - ^
  5. 02:09:075 (2,3) - ^ 全部都修改了滑条的方向
  6. 00:52:275 (1,2) - 这个overlap好难看 改成了不擦边的
  7. 00:39:075 (1) - 为何从这里开始的clap都是default的，我挺喜欢S:C2的clap的 思考了以后把SC1也替换掉了
  8. 03:31:875 (3,4) - 这种flow出现在EZ里也是很不好 改了个flow
  9. 其实你这个diff偏简单了。完全可以多一点1/1节奏的。现在这个排列就是因为DS比较大显得很松散。而且也鲜有blanket之类的梗，不美观。
[Normal]
  1. skipped N diff icon, 小心dq
  2. 同clap
  3. 同break问题
  4. 01:18:675 (1,3) - 这里overlap了 稍微调整到不擦边
  5. 02:18:075 (2,3) - 这里的距离和节奏搭起来简直有毒
  6. 整体的1/2节奏感觉有点乱，像是凭感觉随便放的 确实有点，因为一直是两滑条+三个note的节奏我怕玩家打起来无聊于是想到就加点
[FreeSongs' Hard]
  1. 01:24:225 (3,4,5,6,7) - Try to use some NC do make it more readable? it is a Hard diff
  2. 01:32:475 (5,1) - Improve the blanket
  3. 02:32:475 (2,3,4) - It doesn't feel good when playing. Flow will be better if you stack 3 on 2 instead of 4.
[Lunatic]
  1. 00:18:675 (1) - 玩的不舒服啊。减速感觉是不是会好一些？正好这一段声音也变轻了 可以
  2. 01:06:675 (1,1,1) - 这个距离加上多个NC容易读成减速吧？ 拉开了
  3. 02:18:825 (5,6) - overlap 拉开
  4. 01:47:475 (5) - NC 我这里已经NC了;;W
  5. 01:59:025 (5,6,1) - 这个距离不行 ×，故意这么摆的，适当拉开1的位置
  6. 02:06:375 (7) - 这个为何要叠起来？ 把7挪开+了一个8做堆叠的单点
  7. 虽然整个diff可以看出距离是有经过考虑的，但是太过于拘谨（简直开过DS）导致overlap严重，显得图的整洁度不够。（Extra也是）此外，还是有一些地方的距离控制不太好，比如01:56:625 (4,5,1) - 虽然看得出5->1的距离的确要大一些，但是对于Lunatic这种难度来说这种程度的距离很容易被当成跳。你看02:54:375 (5,1) - 这里就变成跳了。等等其它地方我就不多说了。 应该不会。。副歌部分前面的节奏都是这样下的，玩家心里也知道了这里是空了1拍的
[Spring Roll's Extra]
  1. 03:33:075 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 你的drum-hitwhistle和NC呢？
  2. 03:24:525 (8) - 无论是离后面的距离还是overlap都感觉不太舒服
  3. 03:25:725 (7,8) - 确定不用滑条？这里和你整个diff的难度都不符啊
  4. 01:42:675 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 这一段的减速没看懂
[Extra]
  1. 00:15:975 (6,1) - 距离有毒 。。。之前改前面的 456flow忘记改了这里
  2. 00:27:075 (9) - NC ×，虽然是符合新的一段可以开NC，但是三连突然换个颜色对玩家而言是一件看起来不舒服的事情
  3. 00:30:975 (6,7,8) - 距离 故意这样子摆，为了后面右边摆的开
  4. 00:40:500 (2,3) - 既然节奏是1/2就不要overlap 这里没问题的应该，打起来还是很爽的
  5. 00:45:675 (3,4) - overlap看起来很难受 拉开了距离
  6. 00:47:700 (2,3) - 这样看起来特别像加速连续1/2间隔1/4的梗。这里要避免overlap。 前面已经确定了节奏了，不会看成1/4，打图不是单纯看读，这种节奏重复多的歌曲特别容易掌握节奏。。
  7. 02:36:675 (10) - NC OK
  8. 02:59:175 (7,1) - 虽然是故意摆的梗，但是由于音乐在02:59:325 - 有一个很重的鼓点导致这个停顿显得相当不自然，这里的梗也就因此很容易被误读。建议加一个note在02:59:325 - 。 可以
  9. 03:44:775 (5) - NC OK
  10. 看得出来还是有想法的，不过整体的掌控力感觉不够，东西很挤但是结构却依然显得有些松散。尤其是那些按照DS来摆的circle。看起来距离相等，但是效果差。此外，你需要在slider上面多花一些功夫。虽然在梗方面，你有对slider进行过修饰，但是对于kiai等比较缺梗的情况下，你的slider的完成度比较低，搭配也不是很好。多看其他人的图会对你的placement有所帮助。加油咯
Good luck.
Hollow Wings
1,514 posts
Joined July 2010
Hollow Wings
m4m

Magical Astronomy

  1. 00:16:874 (2) - unsnapped。
  2. 01:20:025 (6) - 推荐反向。
  3. 01:28:275 (5) - nc。02:46:275 (5) - 同理。
  4. 02:29:475 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 这，突然跳那么大大丈夫。。。
  5. 02:49:725 (1,2) - 这里nc这么下不好，还是反过来。
  6. 03:13:875 (1,2) - 这边ds还是可以放大一点的，你前面1/4间距都跳那么大，这1/2小了打起来很不爽。
  7. 看了你的图感觉你就是比较执着于摆几何图形的那种类型，可以看出你在尝试各种跳或者具有某种结构的梗。这说明你确实思考了某些梗和曲子的相性，然而带来的问题也很明显，那就是这些梗之间的衔接，具体表现为ds和flow的急骤改变所给予的不自然感，如果可以请减少ds梗的使用，等到你熟练了consistent地改变ds时再进行更多的ds梗尝试。。。不过我个人是无所谓这个的，只要能读就行了，目前的情况来看还算勉强可以，真的要吐槽的话就是最好把排版再搞整齐一点，现在各种滑条叠在一起看起来有点乱。

Spring Roll's Extra

  1. 00:58:425 (1) - 建议去掉nc，好读一点。01:08:025 (1) - 同理。
  2. 做的挺好，不过，排版真的可以再提高一点。我觉得你对称用的是没错，但其实还可以加强一下，强制自己在造各类梗时加入对称元素，强烈建议你多看看反震的图，看看他怎么摆每一个note和滑条的，你会发现局部对称梗会非常适合你。

Lunatic

  1. 00:46:275 (1,2,3,4,5) - 这。。。建议ds变大。
  2. 01:06:675 (1) - 这里没必要nc spam。02:15:075 (1) - 同理。
  3. 01:37:275 (1) - 音量太轻，调响。
  4. 想说的和top diff差不多。

FreeSongs' Hard

  1. good map.

Normal

  1. 01:37:875 (3,1) - nc交换。
  2. 01:39:525 (2) - 低难度尽量避免2折返及以上的1/2滑条。
  3. 02:39:075 (5) - nc。低难度注意nc combo别太长了，基本downbeat就加一个。

Easy

  1. 全图nc过一遍，该加的加。
  2. 00:36:675 (1,2,3) - 最低难度最好不要这么挡。
  3. 01:16:275 (3,4) - 最低难度最好不要anti flow+滑条track影响读图。01:23:475 (1,2) - 同理。
  4. 02:06:675 (4) - 碰血条。
摸full ver真心慢啊。。。四暗刻。。。

good luck
Okoratu
Nomination Assessment Team / Elite Nominator
4,913 posts
Joined May 2012
Okoratu
Since this is a greenwhich in the skies remix and the voice follows the way the song is constructed mapping vocals in places like 00:11:475 - to 00:12:675 - should be following 2/3 rhythm and not two 3/4 rhythms
Momizi
275 posts
Joined June 2013
Topic Starter
Momizi
蟹蟹HW小姐姐,送你一朵fa，你的那个图我估计晚上能水出来一个摸;W;

Hollow Wings wrote:

m4m

Magical Astronomy

  1. 00:16:874 (2) - unsnapped。 fixed
  2. 01:20:025 (6) - 推荐反向。 感觉还是这样比较好，来回甩的一个感觉
  3. 01:28:275 (5) - nc。02:46:275 (5) - 同理。 fixed
  4. 02:29:475 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 这，突然跳那么大大丈夫。。。 因为这里的节奏挺符合摆跳的233，稍微拉大点也是为了提高一点难度（别人都说太送了，不过这跳摆上去也是随手接，sad
  5. 02:49:725 (1,2) - 这里nc这么下不好，还是反过来。 因为NC点的音和滑条那个音是一样的，不过滑条头更重一点的感觉，所以我就从这个点开始NC
  6. 03:13:875 (1,2) - 这边ds还是可以放大一点的，你前面1/4间距都跳那么大，这1/2小了打起来很不爽。 确实拉大点比较爽，fixed
  7. 看了你的图感觉你就是比较执着于摆几何图形的那种类型，可以看出你在尝试各种跳或者具有某种结构的梗。这说明你确实思考了某些梗和曲子的相性，然而带来的问题也很明显，那就是这些梗之间的衔接，具体表现为ds和flow的急骤改变所给予的不自然感，如果可以请减少ds梗的使用，等到你熟练了consistent地改变ds时再进行更多的ds梗尝试。。。不过我个人是无所谓这个的，只要能读就行了，目前的情况来看还算勉强可以，真的要吐槽的话就是最好把排版再搞整齐一点，现在各种滑条叠在一起看起来有点乱。

Spring Roll's Extra

  1. 00:58:425 (1) - 建议去掉nc，好读一点。01:08:025 (1) - 同理。
  2. 做的挺好，不过，排版真的可以再提高一点。我觉得你对称用的是没错，但其实还可以加强一下，强制自己在造各类梗时加入对称元素，强烈建议你多看看反震的图，看看他怎么摆每一个note和滑条的，你会发现局部对称梗会非常适合你。

Lunatic

  1. 00:46:275 (1,2,3,4,5) - 这。。。建议ds变大。 修改了排列
  2. 01:06:675 (1) - 这里没必要nc spam。02:15:075 (1) - 同理。 fixed
  3. 01:37:275 (1) - 音量太轻，调响。 感觉对我而言差不多这个音量够了;W;，先保留意见。。回头再看看
  4. 想说的和top diff差不多。

FreeSongs' Hard

  1. good map.

Normal

  1. 01:37:875 (3,1) - nc交换。
  2. 01:39:525 (2) - 低难度尽量避免2折返及以上的1/2滑条。 这里别人也提到过，后来只保留了一次折返，但是感觉音还是对不上，还是改回了现在的折返
  3. 02:39:075 (5) - nc。低难度注意nc combo别太长了，基本downbeat就加一个。 fixed

Easy

  1. 全图nc过一遍，该加的加。
  2. 00:36:675 (1,2,3) - 最低难度最好不要这么挡。 去掉note重新摆了个滑条
  3. 01:16:275 (3,4) - 最低难度最好不要anti flow+滑条track影响读图。01:23:475 (1,2) - 同理。 确实对新手可能有点难，不过作为一个E难度，稍微有点难度应该也没事，毕竟没爆星;W;
  4. 02:06:675 (4) - 碰血条。 fixed

摸full ver真心慢啊。。。四暗刻。。。

good luck
Momizi
275 posts
Joined June 2013
Topic Starter
Momizi

Okoratu wrote:

Since this is a greenwhich in the skies remix and the voice follows the way the song is constructed mapping vocals in places like 00:11:475 - to 00:12:675 - should be following 2/3 rhythm and not two 3/4 rhythms
is it have any problems except the 3/4 and 2/3?(in other words，can you give me a mod;W;）by the way，I asked some experienced mapper，they said 3/4 is fine to them;W;，and i am hesitate should i changed to 2/3.
Sakii
7 posts
Joined June 2014
Sakii
Senya QAQ <3
Luel Roseline
1,034 posts
Joined February 2014
Luel Roseline
I'll mod it, later.
Momizi
275 posts
Joined June 2013
Topic Starter
Momizi

S A V E R Y wrote:

I'll mod it, later.
fine,thanks anyway :D
DreaM117er
1,594 posts
Joined September 2012
DreaM117er
還摸啦

[General]
  1. 我覺得Lunatic還有Magical Astronomy之間的差距過大，Extra星數太高了
  2. 沒有用到SB就把Widescreen Support關掉吧
[Easy]
  1. 沒有問題，不過節奏也太不豐富了，讓人很想睡 :?
[Normal]

  • 00:39:675 (3,4) - 這裡沒有打算用1/2折返了??
    01:02:475 (3,4,5,6,7) - 我覺得這樣比較合曲，試試看：http://puu.sh/lx18R/097717b4c8.jpg
    01:07:575 (4,5,6) - 跟吉他聲比較好吧，這裡感覺有點混亂：http://puu.sh/lx1gx/d276958f15.jpg
    01:39:525 (3) - 一個Circle+1/2折返??
    02:24:525 (1) - 這個多餘了，刪掉吧
  1. 後面節奏一樣，那就沒問題了 :)
[Hard]
  1. Nice
[Lunatic]

  • 00:48:075 (2) - 這裡好像不是這樣的節奏吧 :?
    00:53:775 (1,2) - 平行??
    01:06:675 (1,2,3,4) - ^
    01:27:675 (3) - NC吧，比較好讀
    01:40:275 (1,1,1) - 好少看捯Insane有出過這麼長的Slider在跟vocal的，建議前兩個01:40:275 (1,1) - 結尾在紅線上吧
    01:45:075 - spinner要跟vocal的話應該是這裡開始，前一個spinner應該是01:44:775 - 結束。這裡也是一樣02:41:475 (1,1) -
    01:48:075 (9) - NC
    02:07:275 (3) - ^
    02:26:475 (5) - ^
    02:45:675 (3) - ^
    03:42:675 (1) - 我覺得不必要這個轉盤，還有其他節奏可以跟
  1. 我覺得，我有點看不太懂你怎麼下結奏的。感覺好像是這首歌節奏都很相似讓你比較不好下節奏？（我猜的
[Extra]
  1. 我覺得這個難度做得很好，有版感覺燈做出來，而且我感覺好像比下個難度難很多 :?
    03:25:800 (8,1) - 這個，太遠啦。無間格跳這個BPM不適合跳這麼遠，拉近一些吧
  2. 只要這條 :?

我真心佩服senya姐姐能夠忍受這首這麼沒有起伏的歌曲，還唱的了4分鐘 :?
說真的，這首歌不好聽...

圖的話，加油吧 :)
Momizi
275 posts
Joined June 2013
Topic Starter
Momizi

DreaM117er wrote:

還摸啦

[General]
  1. 我覺得Lunatic還有Magical Astronomy之間的差距過大，Extra星數太高了
  2. 沒有用到SB就把Widescreen Support關掉吧 没做过SB不太清楚这个的用处，关了
[Easy]
  1. 沒有問題，不過節奏也太不豐富了，讓人很想睡 :?
[Normal]

  • 00:39:675 (3,4) - 這裡沒有打算用1/2折返了?? 后面有用到，一般是没想法了加一个×
    01:02:475 (3,4,5,6,7) - 我覺得這樣比較合曲，試試看：http://puu.sh/lx18R/097717b4c8.jpg OK
    01:07:575 (4,5,6) - 跟吉他聲比較好吧，這裡感覺有點混亂：http://puu.sh/lx1gx/d276958f15.jpg 这里还是不了，感觉这样子就好
    01:39:525 (3) - 一個Circle+1/2折返?? 没能理解，不过你指的是往返一次以上的话，应该没问题吧，为了合音少个折返都不行
    02:24:525 (1) - 這個多餘了，刪掉吧 可以
  1. 後面節奏一樣，那就沒問題了 :)
[Hard]
  1. Nice
[Lunatic]

  • 00:48:075 (2) - 這裡好像不是這樣的節奏吧 :? 因为是个拖长音，一般可以用四分拍或者长滑条带过XD
    00:53:775 (1,2) - 平行?? ×，故意摆歪的
    01:06:675 (1,2,3,4) - ^ 这里摆平行了
    01:27:675 (3) - NC吧，比較好讀 OK
    01:40:275 (1,1,1) - 好少看捯Insane有出過這麼長的Slider在跟vocal的，建議前兩個01:40:275 (1,1) - 結尾在紅線上吧 可以，改了
    01:45:075 - spinner要跟vocal的話應該是這裡開始，前一個spinner應該是01:44:775 - 結束。這裡也是一樣02:41:475 (1,1) - 修改，就是怕后一个太短
    01:48:075 (9) - NC
    02:07:275 (3) - ^
    02:26:475 (5) - ^
    02:45:675 (3) - ^ 都加上了NC
    03:42:675 (1) - 我覺得不必要這個轉盤，還有其他節奏可以跟
  1. 我覺得，我有點看不太懂你怎麼下結奏的。感覺好像是這首歌節奏都很相似讓你比較不好下節奏？（我猜的
[Extra]
  1. 我覺得這個難度做得很好，有版感覺燈做出來，而且我感覺好像比下個難度難很多 :?
    03:25:800 (8,1) - 這個，太遠啦。無間格跳這個BPM不適合跳這麼遠，拉近一些吧
  2. 只要這條 :?

我真心佩服senya姐姐能夠忍受這首這麼沒有起伏的歌曲，還唱的了4分鐘 :?
說真的，這首歌不好聽...

圖的話，加油吧 :)
Luel Roseline
1,034 posts
Joined February 2014
Luel Roseline
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All checked(No problem)
AIR
1,577 posts
Joined November 2012
AIR
~~~
[Easy]
  1. 00:18:675 (2) - 00:47:475 (3) - 你觉得短一点到第二根白线怎么样，现在似乎有点拖沓
  2. 01:57:075 (2) - 尾部clap？跟第二个kiai一样
  3. 01:42:675 - 加个转盘怎么样，跟后边这里02:41:475 (1) - 比较像
[Normal]
  1. 00:12:075 (5) - 开头这一段不推荐加clap，有点吵。。
  2. 01:02:775 (4,5,6) - 01:06:675 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 这一段即跟吉他又跟鼓点，有点乱，然后又跟了人声orz 01:25:725 (1,2,3) -
    我的意见是低难度节奏没大变化时（01:28:275 - 到这里为止）尽量跟着一个音轨，大概新手玩起来没那么困惑 8-)
  3. 02:31:875 (1) - 建议咨询下bn现在这样的滑条是否合格，低难度滑条轨迹需要清晰可见
[FreeSongs' Hard]
  1. 挺好的
[Lunatic]
  1. 挺好的
[Spring Roll's Extra]
  1. 02:16:275 - 这里建议补个啥
[Magical Astronomy]
  1. 02:52:275 (1,2) - 这样如何
    SPOILER
  2. 03:07:875 (1,2,3) - 这节奏完全飞起来了（惊），总之我是打不了辣
  3. 美丽
摸太水了，扔个星跑
[Kurose Riku]
543 posts
Joined June 2015
[Kurose Riku]
Hello, M4M :D

[Easy]
建議把 HD 調到4 , OD 調到3


[Normal]
主要是節奏很不平均, 玩起來很不舒服

例如 00:17:475 (1,2,3) - 前面很有feel 突然就亂了

00:22:275 (1,2,3) - 00:19:875 (1,2) - 這組也是,來得太突然了

00:41:475 (1,2,3,4) - 跟隨上一組combo 的節奏會更好,不過我認為兩組的節奏其實都不太理想,
我把兩組combo組合了起來,試試看這樣放 玩起來會否覺得更流暢?


03:05:475 (1,2) - 把它們對稱起來 8-)

03:25:275 (2) - 這樣放好像比較美觀


[FreeDong's Hard]

玩起來很爽 8-)
that's all. good luck for ranked :D
Momizi
275 posts
Joined June 2013
Topic Starter
Momizi

AIR wrote:

~~~
[Easy]
  1. 00:18:675 (2) - 00:47:475 (3) - 你觉得短一点到第二根白线怎么样，现在似乎有点拖沓 因为是个拖长音的所以拉长了，放着问题不大不不修改了XD
  2. 01:57:075 (2) - 尾部clap？跟第二个kiai一样 漏掉了..添加上了XD
  3. 01:42:675 - 加个转盘怎么样，跟后边这里02:41:475 (1) - 比较像 可以是可以啦，就是曲子长,低难度没break不行，我决定删了后面的spin
[Normal]
  1. 00:12:075 (5) - 开头这一段不推荐加clap，有点吵。。 可以，去掉
  2. 01:02:775 (4,5,6) - 01:06:675 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 这一段即跟吉他又跟鼓点，有点乱，然后又跟了人声orz 01:25:725 (1,2,3) -
    我的意见是低难度节奏没大变化时（01:28:275 - 到这里为止）尽量跟着一个音轨，大概新手玩起来没那么困惑 8-) 稍微改了一点，对了吉他音和clap音，其实感觉吉他的音基本都在白线，对着鼓点和吉他是一样的感觉
  3. 02:31:875 (1) - 建议咨询下bn现在这样的滑条是否合格，低难度滑条轨迹需要清晰可见 有人说以前有图被这种滑条dq过，吓得我赶紧去换滑条
[FreeSongs' Hard]
  1. 挺好的
[Lunatic]
  1. 挺好的
[Spring Roll's Extra]
  1. 02:16:275 - 这里建议补个啥
[Magical Astronomy]
  1. 02:52:275 (1,2) - 这样如何 可以
    SPOILER
  2. 03:07:875 (1,2,3) - 这节奏完全飞起来了（惊），总之我是打不了辣
  3. 美丽
摸太水了，扔个星跑
Momizi
275 posts
Joined June 2013
Topic Starter
Momizi

SerakakiAoba wrote:

Hello, M4M :D

[Easy]
建議把 HD 調到4 , OD 調到3 参考的是别的easy，这里问题不大，我把HP调成了3


[Normal]
主要是節奏很不平均, 玩起來很不舒服

例如 00:17:475 (1,2,3) - 前面很有feel 突然就亂了

00:22:275 (1,2,3) - 00:19:875 (1,2) - 這組也是,來得太突然了 其实是图很长。。怕玩家一直打一个节奏会感觉无聊，稍微变化一点

00:41:475 (1,2,3,4) - 跟隨上一組combo 的節奏會更好,不過我認為兩組的節奏其實都不太理想, 可以。。改成了上一组的节奏
我把兩組combo組合了起來,試試看這樣放 玩起來會否覺得更流暢?


03:05:475 (1,2) - 把它們對稱起來 8-) 故意歪这的XD

03:25:275 (2) - 這樣放好像比較美觀


[FreeDong's Hard]

玩起來很爽 8-)
that's all. good luck for ranked :D
Pata-Mon
1,489 posts
Joined March 2015
Pata-Mon
m4m

[General]

有些地方音效音量有点小，至少我比较喜欢听清自己打在了什么地方

[Easy]
  1. 01:42:675 和02:41:475 加点东西，比如转盘。感觉这两个地方歌是渐强的感觉，空着不太合适
[Narmal]
  1. 02:31:875 (1) - 晚半拍结束感觉更舒服
[Hard]
  1. 00:24:525 (7) 和00:26:925 (8) - 这两个三连感觉不合适，而且副歌中都没有这种三连反而在这里有
[Lunatic]
  1. 00:23:325 (1) - ds，现在这么摆容易打晚。直接跟前面等距或者和前面一起一个比一个远都行
  2. 02:54:525 (1) - 同上
[Extra]
  1. ar建议9.3。
  2. 00:49:575 (5) - 可换成一个半拍的滑条
  3. 00:58:125 (2) - 被挡住加上没有ds的提示，不好读这里只隔半拍
  4. 01:57:075 (1) - 把2删掉然后把1改成滑条
[主难度]
  1. 00:23:325 (1) - 还是ds
  2. 00:25:725 (1) - 同上
  3. 01:12:075 (1) - 可以放远点
  4. 01:26:775 (1) - 这个滑条结尾的音效能听得更清楚的话节奏感可能会更好
给星星~
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Momizi
275 posts
Joined June 2013
Topic Starter
Momizi

showlf wrote:

m4m

[General]

有些地方音效音量有点小，至少我比较喜欢听清自己打在了什么地方

[Easy]
  1. 01:42:675 和02:41:475 加点东西，比如转盘。感觉这两个地方歌是渐强的感觉，空着不太合适 full ver的低难度为了能有够多的break time，我选择了这两个拖长音的地方，转盘和break没差的感觉。
[Narmal]
  1. 02:31:875 (1) - 晚半拍结束感觉更舒服 修改了，之前改滑条的时候长度没拉对233
[Hard]
  1. 00:24:525 (7) 和00:26:925 (8) - 这两个三连感觉不合适，而且副歌中都没有这种三连反而在这里有
[Lunatic]
  1. 00:23:325 (1) - ds，现在这么摆容易打晚。直接跟前面等距或者和前面一起一个比一个远都行
  2. 02:54:525 (1) - 同上 不做修改了，这样子没什么大问题，后两个note的音比较相似放在一起，而且是后两个重音适合跳过去
[Extra]
  1. ar建议9.3。
  2. 00:49:575 (5) - 可换成一个半拍的滑条
  3. 00:58:125 (2) - 被挡住加上没有ds的提示，不好读这里只隔半拍
  4. 01:57:075 (1) - 把2删掉然后把1改成滑条
[主难度]
  1. 00:23:325 (1) - 还是ds
  2. 00:25:725 (1) - 同上
  3. 01:12:075 (1) - 可以放远点 修改了一下
  4. 01:26:775 (1) - 这个滑条结尾的音效能听得更清楚的话节奏感可能会更好 和之前一样的音没修改，不过滑条头改成了drum
给星星~
BladesofSteel
192 posts
Joined April 2015
BladesofSteel
Hello. M4M modding.

Magical Astronomy
00:15:975 (6) - Consider replacing the hit circle with a slider running to 00:16:200 so that it follows the shi in 'rekishi' more smoothly.

00:23:400 - Add a hit circle?
00:26:325 - ^ It sounds a bit off here.

00:25:875 to 00:26:925 - This verse corresponds with the same rhythm as 00:21:075 (2,3,4) - so I suggest you consider remapping this part so that the rhythm matches that with the latter to remain consistent.

00:30:075 (3,4) - Please make a blanket here, so your objects look more neatly placed amongst each other.
00:39:975 (5,1) - ^

00:44:175 (2,4,5) - Since there's rarely any distance snap needed in this sort of diff, you can have these objects spaced out more so they're not touching each other.

00:57:075 (1,1,1) - Looks really messy. Some ways to make the overlap more appealing is if you had them stack over each other's heads. Here is an example:


That or, simply create a blanket with these sliders.

01:34:275 (5,1) - Make a blanket here, with addition of moving 01:34:875 (2) - under the head of slider 01:34:275 (5) - for a neater flow and to avoid unnecessary overlaps.

01:57:675 (3,4) - Consider making a blanket here for neater flow.
02:02:475 (3,4) - ^

02:15:075 (1,1,1) - Looks better, but I also want to suggest the same thing from 00:57:075 (1,1,1) -here.
02:39:075 (1,1,1) - ^

03:10:800 (4,5) - Blanket.
03:15:600 (4,5) - ^

Spring Roll's Extra
00:50:775 (3,4) - Should be placed closer, considering how 00:50:475 (2,3) - was spaced apart from each other and their different in timing.

00:53:175 (4,5,6) - ^
00:55:575 (4,5) - ^

01:18:675 (7) - If you're going to make a jump here, you may as well stack this note over 01:19:275 (1) - so it prepares the player for the next verse of the music.

01:19:725 (4,5) - Fix blanket.

01:48:075 (1) - Doesn't really fit here, consider continuing the stream at 01:47:475 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - till the end on 01:48:375.

03:00:675 - 03:01:875 is synonymous with 02:55:875 (1,2,3,4) - so they should share a similar rhythm. Moving some objects around as well as replacing old ones should help adjust the rhythm so they're the same on both phases in the song.

Lunatic
00:13:875 (1,2) - Make a blanket here around the head of 00:14:475 (2) - .

00:20:925 - Add a note here if you are following with the loud beats in the music.

00:24:975 (4) - Weird placement for a curved slider. Instead, how about having a copy of 00:24:675 (3) - , but flipping it so it creates a smooth jump between objects 00:24:675 (3,4,5) - ?
(Somehow I'm unable to upload an image of the example right now.)

00:51:375 (1,2) - Less curve on these sliders please.

01:03:375 (1) - can blanket the tail of 01:03:675 (2) - or 01:03:975 (3) - for smoother flow.

01:05:775 (1,2) - Blanket.

01:36:675 (5,6) - The placement of these objects completely throws off the nice flow effect you had going on for 01:35:475 (1,2,3,4) - . Please consider repositioning these objects. One suggestion is that you have 01:35:475 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - sliders all gradually rotated - meaning the next slider being angled more clockwise then the previous - until it fully results in the angle of the last mini-slider at 01:37:275 (7) - .

02:23:175 (2,5) - Space more apart for neater flow.

02:36:975 (6,7) - Try a blanket here?
02:59:775 (3,4) - ^

FreeSongs' Hard
01:40:875 (2) - You can aways consider using a flipped cope of 01:41:475 (4) - instead just to create that perfect blanket for 01:41:325 (3) -.

01:57:675 (8,2) - Not a pretty overlap. Consider repositioning these objects.

Normal
00:18:075 (3) - A little less curve please, so that players are able to distinguish it's body better.

00:46:875 (2,3) - Sounds slightly off, you may as well use the same slider as before 00:46:275 (1) - here.

00:49:875 - Consider adding a hit circle here with a finish.
02:07:875 - ^

00:59:475 (1) - finish on the head.
02:55:875 (1) - ^

01:30:375 (6) - Just to not overcomplicate the rhythm, try removing this object and adding a reverse to 01:30:075 (5) - ?

01:34:275 (2) - Less curve.
02:37:875 (3) - ^

Easy
01:07:575 (2,3) - Because mini-sliders are really hard to determine their timing they're usually not recommended in Easy mode. Instead, try a new rhythm: Add a hit circle at 01:07:575, then a slider at 01:07:725 - 01:08:175.
02:15:975 (2,3) - ^ Using same rhythm as suggested above.

02:37:875 (2,1) - Fix blanket.
02:59:475 (2,1) - ^ Around the tail of 02:59:475 (2) - .
03:36:675 (2,1) - ^

Good luck.
Momizi
275 posts
Joined June 2013
Topic Starter
Momizi

BladesofSteel wrote:

Hello. M4M modding.

Magical Astronomy
00:15:975 (6) - Consider replacing the hit circle with a slider running to 00:16:200 so that it follows the shi in 'rekishi' more smoothly. changed to 1/2 slider

00:23:400 - Add a hit circle? no，I want it to be a single tap's rhythm
00:26:325 - ^ It sounds a bit off here. a bit different,the accent is not same

00:25:875 to 00:26:925 - This verse corresponds with the same rhythm as 00:21:075 (2,3,4) - so I suggest you consider remapping this part so that the rhythm matches that with the latter to remain consistent. umm，but i dont want my map seem same every same rhythm，even the same rhythm，you can place some new array

00:30:075 (3,4) - Please make a blanket here, so your objects look more neatly placed amongst each other.
00:39:975 (5,1) - ^ dont understand

00:44:175 (2,4,5) - Since there's rarely any distance snap needed in this sort of diff, you can have these objects spaced out more so they're not touching each other. fixed

00:57:075 (1,1,1) - Looks really messy. Some ways to make the overlap more appealing is if you had them stack over each other's heads. Here is an example: look messy，but play fun in playing，I test it many times and placeed it now


That or, simply create a blanket with these sliders.

01:34:275 (5,1) - Make a blanket here, with addition of moving 01:34:875 (2) - under the head of slider 01:34:275 (5) - for a neater flow and to avoid unnecessary overlaps. its no problem，I ask many pepope test the map，everyone cold click the circle2

01:57:675 (3,4) - Consider making a blanket here for neater flow.
02:02:475 (3,4) - ^

02:15:075 (1,1,1) - Looks better, but I also want to suggest the same thing from 00:57:075 (1,1,1) -here.
02:39:075 (1,1,1) - ^

03:10:800 (4,5) - Blanket.
03:15:600 (4,5) - ^ all on purpose;D，for play funny

Spring Roll's Extra
00:50:775 (3,4) - Should be placed closer, considering how 00:50:475 (2,3) - was spaced apart from each other and their different in timing.

00:53:175 (4,5,6) - ^
00:55:575 (4,5) - ^

01:18:675 (7) - If you're going to make a jump here, you may as well stack this note over 01:19:275 (1) - so it prepares the player for the next verse of the music.

01:19:725 (4,5) - Fix blanket.

01:48:075 (1) - Doesn't really fit here, consider continuing the stream at 01:47:475 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - till the end on 01:48:375.

03:00:675 - 03:01:875 is synonymous with 02:55:875 (1,2,3,4) - so they should share a similar rhythm. Moving some objects around as well as replacing old ones should help adjust the rhythm so they're the same on both phases in the song.

Lunatic
00:13:875 (1,2) - Make a blanket here around the head of 00:14:475 (2) - . ..blanket notes will be boring，i think here is no problem

00:20:925 - Add a note here if you are following with the loud beats in the music. fixed

00:24:975 (4) - Weird placement for a curved slider. Instead, how about having a copy of 00:24:675 (3) - , but flipping it so it creates a smooth jump between objects 00:24:675 (3,4,5) - ? its no problem，i place it for played more comfortable
(Somehow I'm unable to upload an image of the example right now.)

00:51:375 (1,2) - Less curve on these sliders please. i think its funny。。
01:03:375 (1) - can blanket the tail of 01:03:675 (2) - or 01:03:975 (3) - for smoother flow.

01:05:775 (1,2) - Blanket.

01:36:675 (5,6) - The placement of these objects completely throws off the nice flow effect you had going on for 01:35:475 (1,2,3,4) - . Please consider repositioning these objects. One suggestion is that you have 01:35:475 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - sliders all gradually rotated - meaning the next slider being angled more clockwise then the previous - until it fully results in the angle of the last mini-slider at 01:37:275 (7) - . changed 5

02:23:175 (2,5) - Space more apart for neater flow. fixed

02:36:975 (6,7) - Try a blanket here?
02:59:775 (3,4) - ^ dont like blanket :d

FreeSongs' Hard
01:40:875 (2) - You can aways consider using a flipped cope of 01:41:475 (4) - instead just to create that perfect blanket for 01:41:325 (3) -.

01:57:675 (8,2) - Not a pretty overlap. Consider repositioning these objects.

Normal
00:18:075 (3) - A little less curve please, so that players are able to distinguish it's body better. for look good，dont chagne

00:46:875 (2,3) - Sounds slightly off, you may as well use the same slider as before 00:46:275 (1) - here. make the rhythm not unitary

00:49:875 - Consider adding a hit circle here with a finish.
02:07:875 - ^ fixed

00:59:475 (1) - finish on the head.
02:55:875 (1) - ^ fixed

01:30:375 (6) - Just to not overcomplicate the rhythm, try removing this object and adding a reverse to 01:30:075 (5) - ? its not overmap。。no problem

01:34:275 (2) - Less curve.
02:37:875 (3) - ^ seem funny

Easy
01:07:575 (2,3) - Because mini-sliders are really hard to determine their timing they're usually not recommended in Easy mode. Instead, try a new rhythm: Add a hit circle at 01:07:575, then a slider at 01:07:725 - 01:08:175.
02:15:975 (2,3) - ^ Using same rhythm as suggested above. its fine,i watched the same BPM ranked easy has used it

02:37:875 (2,1) - Fix blanket.
02:59:475 (2,1) - ^ Around the tail of 02:59:475 (2) - . fixed
03:36:675 (2,1) - ^

Good luck.
__Hatsune_Miku
598 posts
Joined July 2014
__Hatsune_Miku
#M4M

basic

  1. could you Trun off Letterbox during breaks? your map is unused Storyboard

Easy

  1. If possible make all same Distance (X1.00) please
  2. 00:22:275 (1) - http://puu.sh/lK1pw/f17115ef6f.jpg - is better
  3. 01:42:675 ~ 01:46:275 add spinner ?
  4. 02:01:875 (2) - blanketing front node?
  5. 03:42:675 (1) - This spinner end is 03:45:675 - here

Normal

  1. i cant finde it sorry ;w;

Lunatic

  1. 00:12:675 (1,2,3,4) - no stack
  2. 00:41:775 (3,4) - stack?
  3. 03:04:275 (1) - this spinner end is here 03:05:400

Magical Astronomy

  1. 02:39:075 (1,1,1) - No overlaps ?
FreeSongs
502 posts
Joined November 2012
FreeSongs
真是不好意思拖了这么久, 前一段时间一直很忙

fixed everything!

update
osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: Iro wa Jou e to  Sasou.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 108675
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 1
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 87075,126675,136275,145875,223875
DistanceSpacing: 1.5
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 2.1

[Metadata]
Title:Iro wa Jou e to Izanau
TitleUnicode:色は情へと誘う
Artist:senya
ArtistUnicode:senya
Creator:Momizi
Version:FreeSongs' Hard
Source:東方Project
Tags:Greenwich in the sky The Whole World Sanzen Sekai Yuuhei Satellite deitarabotchi Kamase Tora Mayumi Morinaga Touhou 幽閉サテライト c84 大空魔術 ～ Magical Astronomy 天空のグリニッジ Spring Roll FreeSongs
BeatmapID:664075
BeatmapSetID:226670

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:6
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:6
ApproachRate:8
SliderMultiplier:1.4
SliderTickRate:2

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"BG.jpg",0,0
//Break Periods
2,29675,38325
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples

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Combo3 : 34,202,251

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124,228,204375,2,0,P|126:262|112:304,1,70,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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Momizi
275 posts
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Topic Starter
Momizi
update,and fix some place in highest dif
xxdeathx
2,661 posts
Joined July 2013
xxdeathx
m4m

[春卷's eXtrAA]
  1. 01:36:375 (5,6,1) - straight line movement is more awkward to play than acute angle
  2. 02:16:875 (6) - i suggest using a slider to cover this drawn out sound
[magical astronomy]
  1. 00:13:875 (1,2) - awkward to play transition
  2. 00:19:500 (2) - snapped incorrectly, should be on 00:19:425
  3. 00:40:575 (2,4) - use consistent slider curve
  4. 00:50:925 (5,6) - terribly misleading because of the spacing
  5. 00:53:325 (5,6) - and more - ^ no reason behind this spacing
  6. 01:06:675 (1,1,1,1) - avoid such huge spacing for 3/4 gap since the slider leniency isn't being used right here
  7. 01:10:425 (5,6) - use bigger spacing or stack, easy to mistake for 1/2 rhythm gap
  8. 01:12:075 (1) - no need for too many NC's here
  9. 01:53:325 (1) - ^
  10. 02:29:475 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - really out of place fullscreen jumps since the music doesn't get any powerful notes here
  11. 02:36:075 (4,5,6) - awkward movement because it's almost a straight line, and with uneven spacing. jumps feel better as acute angles.
  12. 02:39:075 (1,1,1) - looks like lazy slider shapes tbh
  13. 03:07:875 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - these movements are really harsh especially 03:08:175 (3,4,5,6,7) - because of the almost completely straight movements through the circles and reversing the direction in the slider after. try curving the sliders or changing their angles some way so it's not completely reversed. this transition 03:10:575 (3,4,5) - is better.
  14. 03:21:975 (7,8,1) - bad movement for the same reason as 02:36:075 (4,5,6)
good luck~
Momizi
275 posts
Joined June 2013
Topic Starter
Momizi

xxdeathx wrote:

m4m

[春卷's eXtrAA]
  1. 01:36:375 (5,6,1) - straight line movement is more awkward to play than acute angle
  2. 02:16:875 (6) - i suggest using a slider to cover this drawn out sound
[magical astronomy]
  1. 00:13:875 (1,2) - awkward to play transition changed the place of 2
  2. 00:19:500 (2) - snapped incorrectly, should be on 00:19:425 fixed
  3. 00:40:575 (2,4) - use consistent slider curve fixed
  4. 00:50:925 (5,6) - terribly misleading because of the spacing
  5. 00:53:325 (5,6) - and more - ^ no reason behind this spacing plcaed it on puropose (
  6. 01:06:675 (1,1,1,1) - avoid such huge spacing for 3/4 gap since the slider leniency isn't being used right here fixed
  7. 01:10:425 (5,6) - use bigger spacing or stack, easy to mistake for 1/2 rhythm gap fixed
  8. 01:12:075 (1) - no need for too many NC's here
  9. 01:53:325 (1) - ^ fixed
  10. 02:29:475 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - really out of place fullscreen jumps since the music doesn't get any powerful notes here reduce the distance
  11. 02:36:075 (4,5,6) - awkward movement because it's almost a straight line, and with uneven spacing. jumps feel better as acute angles. fixed
  12. 02:39:075 (1,1,1) - looks like lazy slider shapes tbh umm，but its look good，I love arc
  13. 03:07:875 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - these movements are really harsh especially 03:08:175 (3,4,5,6,7) - because of the almost completely straight movements through the circles and reversing the direction in the slider after. try curving the sliders or changing their angles some way so it's not completely reversed. this transition 03:10:575 (3,4,5) - is better. fixed all
  14. 03:21:975 (7,8,1) - bad movement for the same reason as 02:36:075 (4,5,6) fixed
good luck~
Hakurei Yoru
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Joined September 2013
Hakurei Yoru
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[Easy]
滑条上有点问题……感觉不够规整
00:28:275 (2,1) - 像这一类单独出来的实在是很突兀，实在不行可以直接横着拉成直线
02:12:675 (1,2) - 还是对称比较好 1显得太奇怪
…………
我觉得可以找587这样的良心mapper来看看……
因为自己也不是很擅长ez但是这个我感觉问题挺多的。

[Normal]
00:18:075 (3,4) - 大概像这样
pic
fine

[Hard]
03:34:125 (3,4,5,6,7) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4167740 目前的样式在hard里算很不好打的
fine

[Lunatic]
00:12:075 (2) - 转180°
00:16:875 (2) - ^ 这样实在不是很好看……后面不一一提出
00:34:275 (1,2,3,4) - 迷一样……建议还是像前后那样摆得规矩一点
00:51:375 (1) - 这个弧度稍微松一点就会好看很多 其他类似于这样的滑条都一样
00:53:775 (1,2) - 没有对好
02:23:625 (5,1) - ^

感觉还需要慢慢改 摸再多图整体还是那样……
前后用梗要有套路性哇……可以多向卷卷学习一下

[Magical Astronomy]
排列散开了一点感觉好多了
02:59:325 (1,2,3,4) - 叠到一起
02:58:575 (4,5,6,7) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4167774
03:08:400 (4) - 我觉得可以为了突出重音把所有的这个note都删掉然后摆跳一点。

卷的感觉没什么危险的地方也没什么需要大概所以我还是偷个懒点个赞跑了吧w

已经不会摸图啦！！

Good luck~
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