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Misawa Aki - Nostalgia

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Narcissu
1,744 posts
Joined August 2012
Topic Starter
Narcissu

[CSGA]Ar3sgice wrote:

nostalgia……喵喵喵

建议00:12:257 - 之前不要放那个clap 破坏音乐渐入的感觉……換了個毫無存在感的clap~
00:16:517 (5) - blanket又不能blanket的我觉得你不要放在这个位置比较好……我只是填空唔……
drum clap赞
00:44:109 (3) - 这个换成drum clap……fix~
01:10:868 (5) - 加个clap(……我覺得藍線clap很奇怪……
01:22:720 (5) - ^
01:44:109 (1) - 这地方那个finish存在感太弱了 建议给这四个滑条尾都加上clap……我覺得有太過了……唔……
04:18:184 (1,1) - ^
04:39:480 (1) - ^
05:02:628 (1) - ^
01:46:331 (3) - 这也加一个……好~
04:20:405 (3) - ^……好~
01:49:850 (5) - add clap 配合歌词……不加藍線啦……
02:09:480 (2) - 再加个clap(……亞達
02:18:739 (4) - 把前半和后半弄平行啊 这不是强迫症吗……哭哭我都是隨手拉的我修我修……
03:07:628 (1,1) - 这里怎么和那里一模一样的不好……不一樣不一樣>, < 前面的是下面直的這裡是上面直的【有區別嗎！
04:41:146 (1,2) - 滑条头clap……好~
05:04:850 (1,2) - ^……好~
结尾好良心 都不坑人出100……喵喵喵

感觉音效组选的很好 可是放在图里的pattern有些单一 大段大段的24clap 给人一种花了两小时翻遍图包找好wav 然后用音效工具五分钟加了全图的那种 虎头蛇尾的感觉 总之觉得你加些奇怪的花样可能会好一些 多做些各种组合来尝试……的確很多組合都是可以的而且聽上去不錯，但是我還是比較喜歡貧乳的蘿莉……理當如此……對……【對你個頭啊邏輯呢

嘛, 最后一段就挺好的 前面有些这样

排列挺不错的 点个赞

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还有啊, sonud是啥 uccu……窩英文老師死的早orz……
JJburstOwO
183 posts
Joined July 2012
JJburstOwO
[Nostalgia]
01:14:109 (4) - Ctrl+g
00:59:665 - 01:23:368 - 这段音效有点大，可以50%就好
02:02:998 (6) - Ctrl+g
02:14:665 (4,5,6) - 我猜是要跟音乐，这么摆吧
03:52:628 - 这段你应该也是跟音乐，但是这里漏了个，而且后面三连不是很舒服，试试这样？
04:05:406 (2,3) - Ctrl+g
04:32:627 (6) - 结尾用点音效吧，normal Clap如何？
04:49:850 (4,5,6) - 顺序用6→4→5比较贴合Vocal

[General]
图打着很舒服~ 可是总觉得..不够爽！有点昏昏欲睡。
跳可以更多样一点，flow时工整圆滑些，打破flow时就大方地拐锐角、jump or anti-jump，感觉那样比较大气_(:з」∠)_
总之加油啦！ （送4000W分 超良心_(:з」∠)_
Narcissu
1,744 posts
Joined August 2012
Topic Starter
Narcissu

JJburstOwO wrote:

[Nostalgia]
01:14:109 (4) - Ctrl+g……我喜歡同向……orz……
00:59:665 - 01:23:368 - 这段音效有点大，可以50%就好……好~
02:02:998 (6) - Ctrl+g
02:14:665 (4,5,6) - 我猜是要跟音乐，这么摆吧……好~
03:52:628 - 这段你应该也是跟音乐，但是这里漏了个，而且后面三连不是很舒服，试试这样？……這段只跟右手鋼琴……orz……那個三連是擺個梗避免3/4……orz……
04:05:406 (2,3) - Ctrl+g
04:32:627 (6) - 结尾用点音效吧，normal Clap如何？……好~
04:49:850 (4,5,6) - 顺序用6→4→5比较贴合Vocal……雖然合曲但是就很跳了惹……

[General]
图打着很舒服~ 可是总觉得..不够爽！有点昏昏欲睡。
跳可以更多样一点，flow时工整圆滑些，打破flow时就大方地拐锐角、jump or anti-jump，感觉那样比较大气_(:з」∠)_
总之加油啦！ （送4000W分 超良心_(:з」∠)_……覺得昏昏欲睡絕對是因為少女太觸_(:з」∠)_ …… 我一直不敢擺跳和anti-jump啊我覺得很奇怪111……
感謝摸圖111
Winnie
1,343 posts
Joined November 2013
Winnie
Here as requested from modding queue.

[Nostalgia]

00:12:257 (1) - Can this be pointed straight down? or arc in a way by any chance? Playing it feels awkward having to move mouse/pen backwards repeating 3 times when you can possibly make a cool sequence with that. Only my preference but your choice
00:15:405 (2) - Move this 1 notch to the right so that sequence can have consistent spacing
00:16:517 (5) - Same with this but move down 1 notch
00:21:146 (1) - Move this out more like this so it has more time to be hit or so the players can visualize it and it stays consistent with the next following note
http://puu.sh/d6DTb/ab7a2c4991.jpg
00:25:961 (2) - Left 1 notch for balance
00:27:628 (2) - Move to axis at x=340 y=324 reasoning behind why I'm doing this is because you don't want to go from a single DS to then somewhat a jump at a peaceful song like this. You want it to feel smooth as possible when playing it without rigity distance spacing
00:41:702 (6) - Move to where the axis shows in this picture so the sequence follows the the last 2 notes spaced properly I assume http://puu.sh/d6Eiq/0aaebdd55a.jpg
00:47:628 (6) - Move this to the right one notch so that star can look better
00:52:628 (2) - Move up one notch so those two sliders can match together
00:56:702 (1) - 2 notches to the left makes it look even
01:11:517 (1) - Why note make this blanket a little more with slider end adjustments (Fixed) http://puu.sh/d6EvN/7645e239cc.jpg
01:13:554 (2) - My preference but reverse slider like this a bit? http://puu.sh/d6Eyu/58e4e41ae6.jpg because it plays a lot smoother and it feels like you are cursor dancing in circle, thus making it more enjoyable
01:15:035 (2) - Move down 1 notch to go perfectly into the center of that slider
01:18:739 - Sounds to me like a note could be added here because you can hear that sound there :D
01:20:405 (1) - Adjust this slider spine to make it more appealing and smoother (Fixed) http://puu.sh/d6EIg/f780bbbd73.jpg
01:28:183 (2) - Move this to where all 3 of those sliders are perfectly spaced in your opinion. Those vocals are consistent so why not make the sliders consistent with it as well? :)
01:55:035 (3) - Move this slider 3 notches to the right for equal distance spacing
02:27:999 (4) - Move 4 notches to the right for the same reason
03:52:628 - Same reason that there should be a note here
04:19:109 (2,2,2) - Adjust all those notes to move down 1 notch because during the star that was created that note was closest to the center note while the others were equally spaced (Fixed) http://puu.sh/d6FlZ/5134a02d26.jpg
05:00:036 (2) - Move over right 1 notch
05:02:998 (2,2,2) - All should have a clap here and remove the sounds from this slider 05:03:183 (1) trust me with this one it will sound amazing.
05:07:072 (1,5) - Along with this one as well
05:25:590 (3) - Blanket in the center of the previous slider more
Other than that great map and great difficulty indeed.

Hope to see this ranked in the near future because it is an amazing song. :) :) :)
And below is what I've corrected but you should review it to see if I did it correctly 8-)


Code
osu file format v13

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AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 107269
Countdown: 0
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[Metadata]
Title:Nostalgia
TitleUnicode:Nostalgia
Artist:Misawa Aki
ArtistUnicode:三澤秋
Creator:Narcissu
Version:Nostalgia
Source:Touhou
Tags:C76 Last Remote Komeiji Koishi sound online tsukasa
BeatmapID:546148
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AIR
1,577 posts
Joined November 2012
AIR
[Nostalgia]
  1. 00:08:739 (4) - 挺好的键音，变成单点怎么样
  2. 00:17:720 - 这里存在感太强，还是补点啥吧，一个梨子
  3. 00:23:368 (4) - 尾部+clap挺好，同时00:24:850 (3) - clap移至尾部
  4. 00:39:480 (2,3) - 玩起来有点软，手感不好，又一个梨子
  5. 01:06:517 (3) - 这缺的感觉不对，后移半拍试试，改的话还有01:18:368 (3) -
  6. 01:51:146 (4) - 这个尾部红线感觉还是突出一下，还是梨子
  7. 02:14:294 (3,4,5,1,2) - 那个叮叮叮的挺好听，为啥跟了一半不跟了
  8. 02:37:999 (2,3) - 跟前面差不多
  9. 04:44:109 (9) - 最后一个kiai的开头气势不够
好听所以shoot
Narcissu
1,744 posts
Joined August 2012
Topic Starter
Narcissu

Kocari wrote:

Here as requested from modding queue.

[Nostalgia]

00:12:257 (1) - Can this be pointed straight down? or arc in a way by any chance? Playing it feels awkward having to move mouse/pen backwards repeating 3 times when you can possibly make a cool sequence with that. Only my preference but your choice ……]same direction is my love orz
00:15:405 (2) - Move this 1 notch to the right so that sequence can have consistent spacing……ok~
00:16:517 (5) - Same with this but move down 1 notch……ok~
00:21:146 (1) - Move this out more like this so it has more time to be hit or so the players can visualize it and it stays consistent with the next following note ……e……my english bad …… and the picture not distinct ……orz
http://puu.sh/d6DTb/ab7a2c4991.jpg
00:25:961 (2) - Left 1 notch for balance ……ok~
00:27:628 (2) - Move to axis at x=340 y=324 reasoning behind why I'm doing this is because you don't want to go from a single DS to then somewhat a jump at a peaceful song like this. You want it to feel smooth as possible when playing it without rigity distance spacing……move to 336.332 now~
00:41:702 (6) - Move to where the axis shows in this picture so the sequence follows the the last 2 notes spaced properly I assume ……i wish some different orz ……http://puu.sh/d6Eiq/0aaebdd55a.jpg
00:47:628 (6) - Move this to the right one notch so that star can look better……i use irregular stra to contrast other prat orz
00:52:628 (2) - Move up one notch so those two sliders can match together……match together not i wish ……
00:56:702 (1) - 2 notches to the left makes it look even……no……
01:11:517 (1) - Why note make this blanket a little more with slider end adjustments (Fixed) ……fix~http://puu.sh/d6EvN/7645e239cc.jpg
01:13:554 (2) - My preference but reverse slider like this a bit? http://puu.sh/d6Eyu/58e4e41ae6.jpg because it plays a lot smoother and it feels like you are cursor dancing in circle, thus making it more enjoyable……ok~
01:15:035 (2) - Move down 1 notch to go perfectly into the center of that slider……ok~
01:18:739 - Sounds to me like a note could be added here because you can hear that sound there :D ……
01:20:405 (1) - Adjust this slider spine to make it more appealing and smoother (Fixed) http://puu.sh/d6EIg/f780bbbd73.jpg
01:28:183 (2) - Move this to where all 3 of those sliders are perfectly spaced in your opinion. Those vocals are consistent so why not make the sliders consistent with it as well? :)
01:55:035 (3) - Move this slider 3 notches to the right for equal distance spacing…ok~
02:27:999 (4) - Move 4 notches to the right for the same reason…i wish 1.6* here ……
03:52:628 - Same reason that there should be a note here
04:19:109 (2,2,2) - Adjust all those notes to move down 1 notch because during the star that was created that note was closest to the center note while the others were equally spaced (Fixed) http://puu.sh/d6FlZ/5134a02d26.jpg
05:00:036 (2) - Move over right 1 notch……ok~
05:02:998 (2,2,2) - All should have a clap here and remove the sounds from this slider 05:03:183 (1) trust me with this one it will sound amazing.……no……i work finish x--x--x--x--……
05:07:072 (1,5) - Along with this one as well……no …… clap too noise……
05:25:590 (3) - Blanket in the center of the previous slider more ……ok
Other than that great map and great difficulty indeed.……

Hope to see this ranked in the near future because it is an amazing song. :) :) :)……喜歡就好喜歡就好~
And below is what I've corrected but you should review it to see if I did it correctly 8-)

AIR wrote:

[Nostalgia]
  1. 00:08:739 (4) - 挺好的键音，变成单点怎么样……唔……我覺得還是折返有感覺……
  2. 00:17:720 - 这里存在感太强，还是补点啥吧，一个梨子……好……這個有點難修……唔……
  3. 00:23:368 (4) - 尾部+clap挺好，同时00:24:850 (3) - clap移至尾部……我覺得紅線下clap不好……後面那個我是固定三線clap……
  4. 00:39:480 (2,3) - 玩起来有点软，手感不好，又一个梨子……這我clap就美麗惹……
  5. 01:06:517 (3) - 这缺的感觉不对，后移半拍试试，改的话还有01:18:368 (3) - ……
  6. 01:51:146 (4) - 这个尾部红线感觉还是突出一下，还是梨子……我沒有跟人聲啊……而且這個我NC強迫症也美麗了……
  7. 02:14:294 (3,4,5,1,2) - 那个叮叮叮的挺好听，为啥跟了一半不跟了……唔……雖然不清楚叮叮叮的是什麼不過我主要還是聽到什麼下什麼……orz……
  8. 02:37:999 (2,3) - 跟前面差不多……clap比較重要……
  9. 04:44:109 (9) - 最后一个kiai的开头气势不够……本來附點就是放緩用的啊111
好听所以shoot……喜歡就好喜歡就好><
eironeia
88 posts
Joined June 2013
eironeia
mod from in-game request.
Nostalgia
00:13:368 (4,1,2,3) - I think head of slider 4 here is too close to circle 2 and too far from circle 1, so might want to make the distances equal

00:15:405 (2,3) - might look better blanketed, but is all fine
00:20:776 (5,1) - I think these are a little bit too close to each other, I realize that you want to vary the spacing since it's a 1/3 gap, but since it's an I-rated diff you can space it further and still be OK
00:47:072 (3,4,5,6,1) - something is wrong with this pentagon, 3-5 DS is 1.35x but the DS between every other adjacent circle is 1.28x, you should check other pentagons to see if they have the same (minor) problem). picture for reference:

01:51:517 (1,2,4) - 4 too close to 1 and too far from 2, seen from approach circles:

02:44:295 (3,4,5) - you should move 5 further left to equal the distance between 3-5 and 4-5 and make it nicer to see.
03:36:702 - this break delay is unneeded, the music still goes on, so I think you should let the break start right away
03:49:480 - if you're following the piano here, there's a note you missed at this time.
05:07:813 (9) - this 3/4 note is still inside chorus/kiai, but you already lowered SV from 1.1 to 0.8 which I think is a little drastic--I think lowering to 1 is enough since it is still inside that loud part of the music--and you switch to 0.9 anyway after this note which is the softer part of the music, and moving up from 0.8 to 0.9 isn't very consistent
I can't find much, it's a beautiful map already imo, very good luck for app~
Narcissu
1,744 posts
Joined August 2012
Topic Starter
Narcissu

eironeia wrote:

mod from in-game request.
Nostalgia
00:13:368 (4,1,2,3) - I think head of slider 4 here is too close to circle 2 and too far from circle 1, so might want to make the distances equal……a……i not wish same distance all part……

00:15:405 (2,3) - might look better blanketed, but is all fine……orz……
00:20:776 (5,1) - I think these are a little bit too close to each other, I realize that you want to vary the spacing since it's a 1/3 gap, but since it's an I-rated diff you can space it further and still be OK……ok~
00:47:072 (3,4,5,6,1) - something is wrong with this pentagon, 3-5 DS is 1.35x but the DS between every other adjacent circle is 1.28x, you should check other pentagons to see if they have the same (minor) problem). ……i use irregular stra to contrast other prat orz
01:51:517 (1,2,4) - 4 too close to 1 and too far from 2, seen from approach circles:……

02:44:295 (3,4,5) - you should move 5 further left to equal the distance between 3-5 and 4-5 and make it nicer to see.
03:36:702 - this break delay is unneeded, the music still goes on, so I think you should let the break start right away……i wish player have a rest when interlude orz ……
03:49:480 - if you're following the piano here, there's a note you missed at this time.……ok~
05:07:813 (9) - this 3/4 note is still inside chorus/kiai, but you already lowered SV from 1.1 to 0.8 which I think is a little drastic--I think lowering to 1 is enough since it is still inside that loud part of the music--and you switch to 0.9 anyway after this note which is the softer part of the music, and moving up from 0.8 to 0.9 isn't very consistent……i wish the 3/4 slider length same as 1/2 slider ……orz
I can't find much, it's a beautiful map already imo, very good luck for app~
…… thx mod 111~
eironeia
88 posts
Joined June 2013
eironeia

Narcissu wrote:

03:36:702 - this break delay is unneeded, the music still goes on, so I think you should let the break start right away……i wish player have a rest when interlude orz …… what i mean above is: start the break at the end of the spinner (03:36:702) rather than at 03:38:183 (1) because the music doesn't suddenly introduce a new variation at the break like in this map: http://osu.ppy.sh/b/274085 :)
Narcissu
1,744 posts
Joined August 2012
Topic Starter
Narcissu

eironeia wrote:

Narcissu wrote:

03:36:702 - this break delay is unneeded, the music still goes on, so I think you should let the break start right away……i wish player have a rest when interlude orz …… what i mean above is: start the break at the end of the spinner (03:36:702) rather than at 03:38:183 (1) because the music doesn't suddenly introduce a new variation at the break like in this map: http://osu.ppy.sh/b/274085 :)
ok …… my english bad ><
Mafumafu
Beatmap Nominator
3,361 posts
Joined August 2013
Mafumafu
Hi! There is Regraz's mod! :)
There is a few points of my mod:
  1. Thank you for requesting a mod from me! Note that I am still learning modding skills, so I am sorry if I cannot provide help to you!
  2. Mod is just a kind of suggestion, so feel free if you dont want to make change.
  3. I hope you can reply to my mod since it can help me know the other mappers' ideas and I can also learn something new.
  4. Same issues won’t be repeated by me unless it is a GD..
  5. This is the one of the maps I modded since I used modding framework version 3 (mfv3)

General

  1. If you wont add a storyboard, uncheck the wide screen support.

Nostalgia


  • Rhythm:
  1. 02:37:455 (1,2,3) - Personally I'd recommend following the vocal here.
  2. 03:53:195 (1,2,3) - This triplet is overmapped though 03:53:566 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - these are fine.
    Structure:
  3. 00:31:158 (4,1) - How about making a jump here to emphasize the vocal at 00:31:529 (1) - by Ctrl+G 00:31:158 (4) - ? Also the flow will be better if so.
  4. 01:04:121 (1) - HP bar touching slider, you need to lower it down. Same as 02:08:936 (4) - 04:03:381 (1) -
  5. 01:46:343 (3,4,5,6) - You can just raise the DS between these 4 notes, the music is getting to a climax part, so there should be a transition instead of sudden change :3. Same at 03:09:306 (3,4,5,6) -
    Hitsounds
  6. 04:21:529 (1,2) - Just lower the volumn of these 2 sliderticks which sound really disturbing. Same at 04:27:455 (1,2) -
    Others:
  7. 05:33:420 (3) - NC to give players attention.

In all, nice map and nice style and also niiiiice song! Good Luck！
Narcissu
1,744 posts
Joined August 2012
Topic Starter
Narcissu

Regraz wrote:

Hi! There is Regraz's mod! :)
There is a few points of my mod:
  1. Thank you for requesting a mod from me! Note that I am still learning modding skills, so I am sorry if I cannot provide help to you!
  2. Mod is just a kind of suggestion, so feel free if you dont want to make change.
  3. I hope you can reply to my mod since it can help me know the other mappers' ideas and I can also learn something new.
  4. Same issues won’t be repeated by me unless it is a GD..
  5. This is the one of the maps I modded since I used modding framework version 3 (mfv3)

General

  1. If you wont add a storyboard, uncheck the wide screen support.……我應該已經關了啊……

Nostalgia


  • Rhythm:
  1. 02:37:455 (1,2,3) - Personally I'd recommend following the vocal here.……一直都沒有跟人聲突然跟了會很奇怪吧……
  2. 03:53:195 (1,2,3) - This triplet is overmapped though 03:53:566 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - these are fine.……沒有吧……我只有在kiai亂寫了一堆三連……
    Structure:
  3. 00:31:158 (4,1) - How about making a jump here to emphasize the vocal at 00:31:529 (1) - by Ctrl+G 00:31:158 (4) - ? Also the flow will be better if so.……ok~
  4. 01:04:121 (1) - HP bar touching slider, you need to lower it down. Same as 02:08:936 (4) - 04:03:381 (1) - ……我試試調下位置
  5. 01:46:343 (3,4,5,6) - You can just raise the DS between these 4 notes, the music is getting to a climax part, so there should be a transition instead of sudden change :3. Same at 03:09:306 (3,4,5,6) - ……加了一點點~
    Hitsounds
  6. 04:21:529 (1,2) - Just lower the volumn of these 2 sliderticks which sound really disturbing. Same at 04:27:455 (1,2) -……唔……聲音輕一點當打空氣吧orz
    Others:
  7. 05:33:420 (3) - NC to give players attention.……ok~

In all, nice map and nice style and also niiiiice song! Good Luck！……喵>,
arronchu1207
804 posts
Joined December 2012
arronchu1207
Hi OAO
我還是mod新手 如果我的mod很差的話 請別介意 ;w;;;;
[]
  1. 00:19:850 (2) - 我覺得這顆放在這裡會比較好看一點
  2. 00:24:850 (3,4) - Blanket 可以更好 w
  3. 00:32:998 (1,2) - ^
  4. 01:18:924 (1,2,3) - 這樣感覺比較好
  5. 01:27:257 (3) - 節奏好像是在 01:27:350 ?
  6. 02:36:332 (2,3) - 讓它們平行 ?
  7. 02:50:220 (3) - 節奏好像是在 02:50:313 ?
  8. 03:49:665 (3,1) - 平行 ?
  9. 04:01:331 (3) - 節奏好像是在 04:01:424 ?
  10. 04:11:888 (5,1) - 平行 ?
[]

做的真好 打起來很舒服 ww
GL ~ >w<
Narcissu
1,744 posts
Joined August 2012
Topic Starter
Narcissu

arronchu1207 wrote:

Hi OAO
我還是mod新手 如果我的mod很差的話 請別介意 ;w;;;;……我也是新手;w;;;;
[]
  1. 00:19:850 (2) - 我覺得這顆放在這裡會比較好看一點……我覺得不在一條線上比較隨性111
  2. 00:24:850 (3,4) - Blanket 可以更好 w ……fix~
  3. 00:32:998 (1,2) - ^……fix~
  4. 01:18:924 (1,2,3) - 這樣感覺比較好 ……順位的我用在0.9*SV的部分了orz
  5. 01:27:257 (3) - 節奏好像是在 01:27:350 ?……換成藍線了~
  6. 02:36:332 (2,3) - 讓它們平行 ?……我想要比較亂的版面和整齊的部分對比111
  7. 02:50:220 (3) - 節奏好像是在 02:50:313 ?…………ok~
  8. 03:49:665 (3,1) - 平行 ?
  9. 04:01:331 (3) - 節奏好像是在 04:01:424 ?…………ok~
  10. 04:11:888 (5,1) - 平行 ?
[]

做的真好 打起來很舒服 ww ……喜歡就好喜歡就好>,
GL ~ >w<
lkx_Shore
1,453 posts
Joined January 2010
lkx_Shore

General

  1. 你的前置时间加起来不够两秒，添加406ms确保玩家有足够的准备时间。

Nostalgia


  • 最后两条线的offset晚了点。
    Timing:
    BPM:67 offset:334297
    BPM:54.9 offset:335430
  1. 没有插好的绿线 - 333408ms.
  2. 00:06:331 (1) - 音乐在这有张力变化，加个Whistle在滑条尾巴，最好再做点跳在这些地方。
  3. 00:11:146 (3) - 这种音可以用类似的滑条来表现
    img
  4. 00:18:102 - 加note带Whistle？
  5. 00:19:109 (3) - 2走过来3是很卡手的...如果第二个滑条趋势不是顺着的就最好别放折返了。
  6. 00:55:961 (4) - 这个弄个跳比较好，有个重音在这。
  7. 00:57:998 (6) - 音乐和前面有变化，别stack。
  8. 01:08:184 (4) - 你在01:06:517 (3) - 是把clap添加到了滑条尾...但你在01:08:184 (4) - 又让clap出现在了滑条头，这一个部分就没过去就变来变去很容易打乱节奏，建议改掉。
  9. 01:30:035 (3) - 不用折返更好。
  10. 03:45:591 (1) - 在滑条加一个40%音量的soft-Finish?
  11. 03:52:955 - 为什么要漏这个音..
  12. 03:53:368 (3) - Remove.顺便把这一小段从03:53:554 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - 这个整体分开。
  13. 04:41:887 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - 偷懒，建议重排，而且间距应该是越来越大才对,缩小间距只会让人感到莫名。
  14. 04:44:109 (1) - 去掉折返，04:44:665 - 加note在 X:384 Y:208 左右的地方。
  15. 05:02:628 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - 2/4clap掉线？
  16. 05:07:813 (1) - 同 04:44:109 (1) -

Others

这个图有一个致命错误，跟人声时，节奏和音效是分开的。这样打的是一个节奏音效又是一个节奏完全没意思...
例如：01:18:924 (1,2,3,4,5) - | 01:07:072 (1,2,3,4) -
说句不好听的，这样下音效顶多只能哄哄外行人...
Star. Goodluck
Gaia
2,808 posts
Joined May 2013
Gaia
Narcissu 好萌啊啊啊
(｡･ω･｡)♥
Little
2,509 posts
Joined November 2012
Little
Hi

[Nostalgia]
  1. 00:20:035 (3) - I suggest moving this to a lower position on the screen. I think round flow will be nicer here: http://puu.sh/ddv2n/802984c872.jpg
  2. 00:20:776 (5) - Ctrl+G might be cool.
  3. 00:30:035 (1) - I think the reverse flows better: http://puu.sh/ddv8T/9c3b514fde.jpg
  4. 00:32:628 (4,1) - Maybe it will be nice to put a little larger spacing here since (1) is a downbeat.
  5. 00:36:517 (2) - I think it will flow better to put this more up and to the right: http://puu.sh/ddvq8/76e0cfc2c2.jpg (x:292|y:12)
  6. 00:59:294 (5,6,1) - I feel like this kind of movement is awkward, with jump to (6) and smaller spacing (6,1). I think (6,1) should have larger distance, or direction change to emphasize downbeat in song.
  7. 01:02:257 (4,1) - Random suggestion, just my preference: http://puu.sh/ddvHz/69b38291b9.jpg
  8. 01:04:109 (1) - This slider is touching the hp bar. It is best to avoid this to look better and avoid distracting the player. Move it down a bit to avoid this.
  9. 01:06:146 (2,2) - Fix stack.
  10. 01:27:072 (2) - The rhythm here doesn't match the song. If you listen carefully to vocals, the rhythm is not the same here. It is more like this: http://puu.sh/ddwOs/8ee2cc65df.jpg so I suggest using some different rhythm, maybe like this: http://puu.sh/ddwQb/f6b7c179fc.jpg
  11. 02:31:146 (4,1) - I suggest using larger distance for emphasis of downbeat on (1).
  12. 03:02:998 (2) - I think it will flow much smoother into the next note if you reverse this: http://puu.sh/ddwlC/2c834a95fb.jpg
  13. 03:18:924 (1,2) - (1) is touching the hp bar, so move them down a bit.
  14. 03:50:035 (1,2) - This feels a bit awkward to play. I suggest curving (1) in the direction of (2) for nicer flow.
  15. 04:03:369 (1) - This is touching the hp bar too.
Generally nice map. The style is cool.
Narcissu
1,744 posts
Joined August 2012
Topic Starter
Narcissu

lkx_Shore wrote:

General

  1. 你的前置时间加起来不够两秒，添加406ms确保玩家有足够的准备时间。

Nostalgia


  • 最后两条线的offset晚了点。……fix……其實我覺得前面哪兩個折返也有問題orz
    Timing:
    BPM:67 offset:334297
    BPM:54.9 offset:335430
  1. 没有插好的绿线 - 333408ms.……刪掉了111
  2. 00:06:331 (1) - 音乐在这有张力变化，加个Whistle在滑条尾巴，最好再做点跳在这些地方。……比起應和某個聲音我還是習慣按固定的規律下音效orz
  3. 00:11:146 (3) - 这种音可以用类似的滑条来表现 ……好~
    img
  4. 00:18:102 - 加note带Whistle？……唔……我思考下……
  5. 00:19:109 (3) - 2走过来3是很卡手的...如果第二个滑条趋势不是顺着的就最好别放折返了。……這段re了一下orz
  6. 00:55:961 (4) - 这个弄个跳比较好，有个重音在这。……我覺得6note夾雜跳放前面有點難orz
  7. 00:57:998 (6) - 音乐和前面有变化，别stack。……好~
  8. 01:08:184 (4) - 你在01:06:517 (3) - 是把clap添加到了滑条尾...但你在01:08:184 (4) - 又让clap出现在了滑条头，这一个部分就没过去就变来变去很容易打乱节奏，建议改掉。……限制太多我就排不動版了惹……基本上還是覺得人聲比較重要吧orz
  9. 01:30:035 (3) - 不用折返更好。……好~
  10. 03:45:591 (1) - 在滑条加一个40%音量的soft-Finish?……好~
  11. 03:52:955 - 为什么要漏这个音……..和下面那個overmap的一樣……我覺得這樣的打起來會更合理一點orz……雖然本來就是兩個音……但是二連很反人類啊111
  12. 03:53:368 (3) - Remove.顺便把这一小段从03:53:554 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - 这个整体分开。
  13. 04:41:887 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - 偷懒，建议重排，而且间距应该是越来越大才对,缩小间距只会让人感到莫名。……我試試orz
  14. 04:44:109 (1) - 去掉折返，04:44:665 - 加note在 X:384 Y:208 左右的地方。……3/4的間隔我也覺得容易墜毀orz
  15. 05:02:628 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - 2/4clap掉线？……這段已經一排finish了我覺得還寫clap會很吵orz……
  16. 05:07:813 (1) - 同 04:44:109 (1) -

Others

这个图有一个致命错误，跟人声时，节奏和音效是分开的。这样打的是一个节奏音效又是一个节奏完全没意思...……我也是這麼想的不過我覺得這是最好的處理手段了orz……很多歌也都是鼓點和人聲分開的嘛111
例如：01:18:924 (1,2,3,4,5) - | 01:07:072 (1,2,3,4) -
说句不好听的，这样下音效顶多只能哄哄外行人...
Star. Goodluck
感謝摸圖>,

Gaia wrote:

Narcissu 好萌啊啊啊
(｡･ω･｡)♥


CloudSplash16 wrote:

Hi

[Nostalgia]
  1. 00:20:035 (3) - I suggest moving this to a lower position on the screen. I think round flow will be nicer here: http://puu.sh/ddv2n/802984c872.jpg……ok~
  2. 00:20:776 (5) - Ctrl+G might be cool.……ok>,
  3. 00:30:035 (1) - I think the reverse flows better: http://puu.sh/ddv8T/9c3b514fde.jpg……your flow better but more change 111……i try orz
  4. 00:32:628 (4,1) - Maybe it will be nice to put a little larger spacing here since (1) is a downbeat.……ok~
  5. 00:36:517 (2) - I think it will flow better to put this more up and to the right: http://puu.sh/ddvq8/76e0cfc2c2.jpg (x:292|y:12)……too far for me orz ……
  6. 00:59:294 (5,6,1) - I feel like this kind of movement is awkward, with jump to (6) and smaller spacing (6,1). I think (6,1) should have larger distance, or direction change to emphasize downbeat in song.……(6,1) far than （5.6）now >,
  7. 01:02:257 (4,1) - Random suggestion, just my preference: http://puu.sh/ddvHz/69b38291b9.jpg……ok~
  8. 01:04:109 (1) - This slider is touching the hp bar. It is best to avoid this to look better and avoid distracting the player. Move it down a bit to avoid this.……ok~
  9. 01:06:146 (2,2) - Fix stack.……fix>,
  10. 01:27:072 (2) - The rhythm here doesn't match the song. If you listen carefully to vocals, the rhythm is not the same here. It is more like this: http://puu.sh/ddwOs/8ee2cc65df.jpg so I suggest using some different rhythm, maybe like this: http://puu.sh/ddwQb/f6b7c179fc.jpg……but i hear vocals in 3/4 www
  11. 02:31:146 (4,1) - I suggest using larger distance for emphasis of downbeat on (1).……ok~
  12. 03:02:998 (2) - I think it will flow much smoother into the next note if you reverse this: http://puu.sh/ddwlC/2c834a95fb.jpg
  13. 03:18:924 (1,2) - (1) is touching the hp bar, so move them down a bit.……i think it's just white link not downbeat 111
  14. 03:50:035 (1,2) - This feels a bit awkward to play. I suggest curving (1) in the direction of (2) for nicer flow.……
  15. 04:03:369 (1) - This is touching the hp bar too.……fix~
Generally nice map. The style is cool.
thx mod >,
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IA42
IA42
I cannot mod long map :cry: sorry but i like your song ;)
Shoot-->
tutuhaha
3,000 posts
Joined October 2010
tutuhaha
22:50 Narcissu: 嗨~
22:50 tutuhaha: hi~
22:51 Narcissu: 那個……我能求個mod嗎orz
22:52 tutuhaha: ...最近比较懒，要是你不介意我现在立马看看完提点意见的话就行
22:52 tutuhaha: 详细mod可能就..
22:52 Narcissu: 嗯嗯……orz
22:52 *Narcissu is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/546148 Misawa Aki - Nostalgia]
22:55 tutuhaha: 00:08:739 (4,1,2) - 这个间距调一下看起来一样比较好
22:56 Narcissu: 啊……
22:56 Narcissu: 嗯嗯
22:56 tutuhaha: 00:18:739 (2,3) - 这俩用同样的形状比较好，就是要不然都直的要不然都弯一点
22:57 tutuhaha: 00:24:109 (1,2,3) - 间距
22:58 Narcissu: 額……我覺得不一樣會比較率性吧……
22:58 Narcissu: orz
22:58 Narcissu: 到處都一樣的話挺奇怪的吧
22:58 tutuhaha: ............你有到处一样么
22:58 tutuhaha: 你也没到处一样对吧:O
22:58 Narcissu: 所以到處不一樣啊>,
22:58 tutuhaha: 那这么说，我觉得这里搞一样比较好
22:59 tutuhaha: up to you 哈
22:59 Narcissu: 嗯嗯
22:59 tutuhaha: 00:38:183 (3) - 这里我觉得拆成1/4搞跳比较好
22:59 Narcissu: 1/4？
23:00 tutuhaha: 00:47:072 (3,4,5,6,1) - 花搞正一点
23:00 tutuhaha: 用红线节奏
23:00 Narcissu: 這個特地不正的111
23:00 tutuhaha: 00:51:331 (3) - 这里也是用1/4节奏比较好
23:00 Narcissu: 這樣和後面kiai的正的會不一樣……
23:00 tutuhaha: ..........只看过特地正的还没看过特地不正的..........
23:01 Narcissu: 全是正的也會很奇怪吧orz
23:01 tutuhaha: 有时候真的没必要搞这么多不一样...一样会使全图看起来比较清爽
23:01 Narcissu: 02:03:368 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 這邊我就正的了orz
23:02 Narcissu: 都一樣的話不會很單調嗎111
23:02 tutuhaha: 01:07:813 (3,4) - 觉得这个可以再跳远一点
23:02 tutuhaha: 嘛随便啦
23:02 Narcissu: 嗯嗯
23:05 tutuhaha: 01:12:628 (3) - 搞更弯一点
23:05 Narcissu: 嗯嗯
23:05 tutuhaha: 01:21:887 (1,2,3) - 搞成个等边三角形跳比较漂亮
23:06 tutuhaha: 01:29:294 (1,2,3) - 间距搞一样
23:06 Narcissu: orz
23:06 Narcissu: 我不是很喜歡都一樣DS啊111
23:06 tutuhaha: 01:32:257 (1,2,1,2) - 看到这里我才看出来，这个颜色那么近可能会被喷最好搞分开一点
23:06 Narcissu: 那樣很難摆orz
23:06 tutuhaha: 嘛随便啦
23:06 tutuhaha: 用distance snap啊
23:07 tutuhaha: 我一般都是这么摆的，你不愿意就算
23:07 Narcissu: orz
23:07 tutuhaha: 颜色这个最好考虑一下bat很容易喷的
23:07 Narcissu: 要用一樣的顏色嗎
23:07 tutuhaha: 不是
23:07 tutuhaha: 就是颜色要区分开
23:08 tutuhaha: 01:43:368 (4,5) - 这里因为音调突然拔高了所以我觉得可以搞跳
23:08 Narcissu: 嗯嗯
23:08 tutuhaha: 01:46:702 (5,6) - 虽然知道你想摆花样但是这个跳怎么听怎么感觉不够啊
23:09 Narcissu: 不夠跳嗎111
23:10 tutuhaha: 嗯哼
23:11 tutuhaha: 02:02:628 (5,6) - 间距太小了找点大间距的摆法吧
23:12 Narcissu: 小了也不行啊111
23:12 tutuhaha: 02:15:221 (1) - 中间那个红线节奏我觉得不应该miss掉
23:12 tutuhaha: 小space没那感觉了就
23:12 Narcissu: 哦哦
23:12 Narcissu: 嗯嗯
23:13 tutuhaha: 02:15:405 (x) - 这个我觉得真的要改有了这个红线节奏感觉好了不少
23:13 Narcissu: X？
23:13 Narcissu: 為什麼會是x……
23:13 tutuhaha: x是自己打上去的
23:13 tutuhaha: 表示这里没有节奏
23:13 tutuhaha: 你前面mod没看过么
23:14 Narcissu: 黑科技的感覺……
23:14 tutuhaha: 哪有
23:15 tutuhaha: 自己先删掉你的slider
23:15 tutuhaha: 然后加上去的
23:15 tutuhaha: 然后把数字删掉打了个x
23:15 Narcissu: 聽上去很麻煩……啊……
23:16 tutuhaha: 好累啊...........
23:16 tutuhaha: 先这样吧...........
23:16 Narcissu: orz
Aira Siritori
42 posts
Joined March 2014
Aira Siritori
虽然不懂摸。。路过给个赞啥的。。打了打感觉燃点不太够，w 怎么说呢，感觉左手点击太均匀了，切纸太少什么的可能， :)
Narcissu
1,744 posts
Joined August 2012
Topic Starter
Narcissu

jimpky wrote:

虽然不懂摸。。路过给个赞啥的。。打了打感觉燃点不太够，w 怎么说呢，感觉左手点击太均匀了，切纸太少什么的可能， :)
感觉不到难点燃点那一定是少女太触了 :o
zxhzxhz
70 posts
Joined November 2012
zxhzxhz
感觉没啥大毛病，我就大概看了看O.O
00:01:887 (1) - 拉弯一点
00:24:109 (1,2,3) - 样子有点蠢><
01:04:109 (1) - ctrl+g
01:07:072 (1) - 这个不顺
01:21:702 (4,1) - 位置交换一下
01:29:109 (5) - 和4分开点（?
01:43:276 (4) - 弄成短滑条(?
01:46:517 (4,5) - 互换位置
01:58:183 (4,5,6) - 别做成原地的
02:27:350 (2) - ctrl+g
03:31:517 (3,4) - 互换位置
03:32:257 (1,2,3,4) - 这个梗建议重新弄一弄
04:43:368 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - 连打拆开比较有力，如果能的话考虑一下那种两个两个的有间距连打（我摆的有点蠢Orz）
SPOILER
04:50:220 (6) - 不顺
第一个和第三个kiai后的平缓段，有个清脆的啪啪啪的音效，有些地方听起来稍微有点不和谐
下面美丽orz
这种曲子不加个sb真的好么
Narcissu
1,744 posts
Joined August 2012
Topic Starter
Narcissu

zxhzxhz wrote:

感觉没啥大毛病，我就大概看了看O.O
00:01:887 (1) - 拉弯一点
00:24:109 (1,2,3) - 样子有点蠢><
01:04:109 (1) - ctrl+g……同向是我的愛orz……
01:07:072 (1) - 这个不顺……因為是1/1啊……順了就被當1/2了
01:21:702 (4,1) - 位置交换一下……掉頭也是我的愛……
01:29:109 (5) - 和4分开点（?……
01:43:276 (4) - 弄成短滑条(?……我從頭到尾都沒用過短滑啊111
01:46:517 (4,5) - 互换位置……
01:58:183 (4,5,6) - 别做成原地的……我所有連打都是原地啊111
02:27:350 (2) - ctrl+g……
03:31:517 (3,4) - 互换位置……那太遠了吧……
03:32:257 (1,2,3,4) - 这个梗建议重新弄一弄……
04:43:368 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - 连打拆开比较有力，如果能的话考虑一下那种两个两个的有间距连打（我摆的有点蠢Orz）
SPOILER
04:50:220 (6) - 不顺
第一个和第三个kiai后的平缓段，有个清脆的啪啪啪的音效，有些地方听起来稍微有点不和谐
下面美丽orz
这种曲子不加个sb真的好么……不會做sb哭哭
沒提的都改了111
Hakurei Yoru
688 posts
Joined September 2013
Hakurei Yoru
让我想起了最早玩EZNM时候的青春（明明现在还小

这首曲……太好听

00:19:850 (2) - DS1.8拖到3滑条尾个人感觉怎么都比现在好。
00:12:257 (1) - 往左拉个小弧度 要好看
00:47:072 (3,4,5,6,1) - 请务必善用功能 play中都可以看出来这个五角星不对劲辣
01:21:517 (3,4,1,2,3) - 这flow好诡异啊QAQ 反过来转可以吗
02:09:665 (3) - 这个位置很不合适，与上面的note1与滑条4成直线较好。
03:29:294 (1,3) - 修正一下blanket 这里看得出来
04:49:850 (4,5,6) - 其实像这种突然的折线的话 干脆把6再放开点
05:08:924 (2,3) - blanket可以更好
05:16:887 (4) - 个人建议就用直线滑条
05:31:887 (6) - 顺转20°再放上来一点

hmmm……非常不情愿地变成了骗kud性质的mod

就是觉得前面部分的跳还是要DS吧...

整张图的感觉还是很APP(adj 的

抱歉我做不好Hard QAQ

Star
Lavender
886 posts
Joined January 2014
Lavender
M4M，sorry for the delay。。。。自己的图都不想看

本来写得差不多了，想了想，把排列上的nazi全去掉了（感觉没资格），let's begin
Red means you must fix.
Blue means highly recommended to fix.
Black means my personal comments.

[General]
Tag加上专辑Starlight Vision
bg and hitsound checked, no unrank issues found.
[Nostalgia - Rhythm]
  1. 00:05:405 (3) - 感觉是否不stack，这里音乐是上扬的
  2. 00:29:294 (3,4,5) - 改成两个circle加一个slider？ 这里3和4的头有很明显的击打声，用circle打击感强一些
  3. 00:48:368 - 这里不放note感觉有点没有理由，不过打着还是没问题
  4. 03:47:257 (2,3,4) - 这里有主音571，而1和5是鼓点，建议改成一个reverse slider（我忽然忘记这个中文是啥了。。。回转滑条？）或者滑条加单点组合，最好不要stack。
  5. 03:53:183 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - 其实忽然下这个节奏有点莫名（虽然还是能打）只有第二个三连是契合音乐的，改一下吧？
排版比我好了一万倍，我做图的心态还是太急躁了。

[Nostalgia - Sound]
音效选得非常好。
  1. 00:12:257 (1) - 这里下个finish?
  2. 00:17:443 (3) - 整个滑条全下clap吧
  3. 00:26:331 (3) - 用绿线提一下clap的音量，不然打起来根本没感觉（其实我觉得要用不同的hitsound，但是试了试finish不适合），你也可以用新的hitsound。
  4. 00:29:294 (3,4) - 00:35:220 (3,4) - 00:38:183 (3) - 如上...我觉得这些地方你也应该知道，之后相同的就不说了。
  5. 00:59:665 (1) - 从这一段开始，音乐开始上扬（就是配器多了），所以音效加得密集一点，至少要和前面的不同，但是也不用下得像kiai那么多

    an example:
    01:00:776 (4) - 01:01:702 (2) - 01:02:257 (4) - 01:03:183 (2) - 加上clap（滑条均指滑条头），往后类推
  6. 01:04:109 (1,4) - 这两个滑条尾clap下得好，所以01:15:961 (1) - 这个应该是忘记加clap了吧
  7. 01:34:294 (3) - 这个滑条头的clap去掉比较好
  8. 01:34:572 (4,5) - 加clap，其实这属于我在前面提到的换音效的部分，所以还是为强击打换一个音效吧
  9. 01:35:220 (1) - 这一段的音效略大声，建议调小一点，53%左右吧，50%有点小了
  10. 01:44:109 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,3,4,5,6) - 圈出来点个赞，建议两个两个一组下绿线渐强，每次提2%吧（前提是你接受了我上一条，在前面降了音量）
  11. 02:58:183 (1) - 和上面一样，改成53%吧
  12. 03:07:072 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,3,4,5,6) - 渐强
  13. 03:59:665 。。。我怎么听不到这个clap，我还以为是漏音效了。。。。感觉有点神奇
    04:02:628 (3) - 怎么这个也是。。。我感觉我有点晕了，啊啊啊啊啊啊明天再来写
  14. 好那就接着来写啦 04:02:628 (3) - You know what
  15. 04:18:184 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,3,4,5,6) - You know what
  16. 04:24:109 (1) - 建议单提一下这个whistle的音量 04:27:072 (1) - 04:30:035 (1) - 同理
  17. 04:35:961 (1) - 加clap
  18. 04:38:924 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - 整段渐强
  19. 05:25:590 (3) - 咦这里怎么就变成只有滑条头加clap了，和00:17:443 (3)保持前后一致吧
[结语]
比我强太多了，希望我的这篇水mod能对你有所帮助。
呜呜呜呜呜我真是懒啊，想射星的时候kudosu都不够了。。。

Narcissu wrote:

I'm a loli
Narcissu
1,744 posts
Joined August 2012
Topic Starter
Narcissu

Hakurei Yoru wrote:

让我想起了最早玩EZNM时候的青春（明明现在还小

这首曲……太好听

00:19:850 (2) - DS1.8拖到3滑条尾个人感觉怎么都比现在好。……不想都是疊起來的111
00:12:257 (1) - 往左拉个小弧度 要好看……好
00:47:072 (3,4,5,6,1) - 请务必善用功能 play中都可以看出来这个五角星不对劲辣……我計畫就是平時的不標準然後kiai的標準111
01:21:517 (3,4,1,2,3) - 这flow好诡异啊QAQ 反过来转可以吗……好
02:09:665 (3) - 这个位置很不合适，与上面的note1与滑条4成直线较好。……直線的話能放的地方都太近了……
03:29:294 (1,3) - 修正一下blanket 这里看得出来……好
04:49:850 (4,5,6) - 其实像这种突然的折线的话 干脆把6再放开点……沒地方放辣……
05:08:924 (2,3) - blanket可以更好……好
05:16:887 (4) - 个人建议就用直线滑条……好
05:31:887 (6) - 顺转20°再放上来一点……我喜歡同向……

hmmm……非常不情愿地变成了骗kud性质的mod

就是觉得前面部分的跳还是要DS吧...

整张图的感觉还是很APP(adj 的

抱歉我做不好Hard QAQ …… 哭哭我只會做hard QAQ

Star……喵~
十分感謝摸圖~

[Teichan] wrote:

M4M，sorry for the delay。。。。自己的图都不想看

本来写得差不多了，想了想，把排列上的nazi全去掉了（感觉没资格），let's begin
Red means you must fix.
Blue means highly recommended to fix.
Black means my personal comments.

[General]
Tag加上专辑Starlight Vision
bg and hitsound checked, no unrank issues found.
[Nostalgia - Rhythm]
  1. 00:05:405 (3) - 感觉是否不stack，这里音乐是上扬的……好難改啊111……我在想想
  2. 00:29:294 (3,4,5) - 改成两个circle加一个slider？ 这里3和4的头有很明显的击打声，用circle打击感强一些……好
  3. 00:48:368 - 这里不放note感觉有点没有理由，不过打着还是没问题……orz
  4. 03:47:257 (2,3,4) - 这里有主音571，而1和5是鼓点，建议改成一个reverse slider（我忽然忘记这个中文是啥了。。。回转滑条？）或者滑条加单点组合，最好不要stack。……第一個也是有琴音的111
  5. 03:53:183 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - 其实忽然下这个节奏有点莫名（虽然还是能打）只有第二个三连是契合音乐的，改一下吧？……是overmap的不過我覺得會比二連更正常orz
排版比我好了一万倍，我做图的心态还是太急躁了。

[Nostalgia - Sound]
音效选得非常好。
  1. 00:12:257 (1) - 这里下个finish?……不要……
  2. 00:17:443 (3) - 整个滑条全下clap吧……不要……
  3. 00:26:331 (3) - 用绿线提一下clap的音量，不然打起来根本没感觉（其实我觉得要用不同的hitsound，但是试了试finish不适合），你也可以用新的hitsound。……厚，我去找找
  4. 00:29:294 (3,4) - 00:35:220 (3,4) - 00:38:183 (3) - 如上...我觉得这些地方你也应该知道，之后相同的就不说了。
  5. 00:59:665 (1) - 从这一段开始，音乐开始上扬（就是配器多了），所以音效加得密集一点，至少要和前面的不同，但是也不用下得像kiai那么多

    an example:
    01:00:776 (4) - 01:01:702 (2) - 01:02:257 (4) - 01:03:183 (2) - 加上clap（滑条均指滑条头），往后类推……不要……
  6. 01:04:109 (1,4) - 这两个滑条尾clap下得好，所以01:15:961 (1) - 这个应该是忘记加clap了吧……對，
  7. 01:34:294 (3) - 这个滑条头的clap去掉比较好 ……好
  8. 01:34:572 (4,5) - 加clap，其实这属于我在前面提到的换音效的部分，所以还是为强击打换一个音效吧……
  9. 01:35:220 (1) - 这一段的音效略大声，建议调小一点，53%左右吧，50%有点小了……強迫症要求我必須用5的倍數QAQ……55好了
  10. 01:44:109 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,3,4,5,6) - 圈出来点个赞，建议两个两个一组下绿线渐强，每次提2%吧（前提是你接受了我上一条，在前面降了音量）……我覺得這段不是漸強……都是對等的……
  11. 02:58:183 (1) - 和上面一样，改成53%吧
  12. 03:07:072 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,3,4,5,6) - 渐强
  13. 03:59:665 。。。我怎么听不到这个clap，我还以为是漏音效了。。。。感觉有点神奇……QAQ
    04:02:628 (3) - 怎么这个也是。。。我感觉我有点晕了，啊啊啊啊啊啊明天再来写
  14. 好那就接着来写啦 04:02:628 (3) - You know what
  15. 04:18:184 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,3,4,5,6) - You know what
  16. 04:24:109 (1) - 建议单提一下这个whistle的音量 04:27:072 (1) - 04:30:035 (1) - 同理……好
  17. 04:35:961 (1) - 加clap…………不好
  18. 04:38:924 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - 整段渐强
  19. 05:25:590 (3) - 咦这里怎么就变成只有滑条头加clap了，和00:17:443 (3)保持前后一致吧……都改成後面的clap了惹
[结语]
比我强太多了，希望我的这篇水mod能对你有所帮助。
呜呜呜呜呜我真是懒啊，想射星的时候kudosu都不够了。。。

Narcissu wrote:

I'm a loli
……那個什麼什麼的表情……
非常感謝摸圖111
guineaQ
1,588 posts
Joined December 2013
guineaQ
Haiii from PM request OwO

Nostalgia

[General]
Nothing :D

[The diff itself]
  1. 00:01:146 - I recommend switching 00:01:146 (3) - into single circle, since I don't think there is any significant note requiring a hold, and the music you mapped the slider end to actually should be an clickable object, try this rhythm
    SPOILER
  2. 00:04:109 (4,5) - same story but this time I would use this rhythm instead.
    SPOILER
    The reason is that the pitch of the last note at 00:04:665 - goes DOWN instead of UP unlike the last similar riff :D
  3. 00:06:702 (2,3,4) - Fancy this rhythm?
    SPOILER
    I don't think there is a strong enough beat in the 00:07:072 - for it to deserve something clickable AND a whistle hitsound :D
  4. 00:08:739 (4) - 3 circle anti jumps would be perfectly justified here. Since you didn't use any 1/4s it shouldn't be confusing either.
  5. 00:10:035 (3,4) - same as 00:01:146 -, and remember you can control the distance between those two circles that you will place (if you choose to do it) to decide how much emphasis you want to put on them (higher distance for more pitch disparity or less distance if it doesn't etc.)
  6. 00:23:183 (3,4) - this sounds better :3
    SPOILER
    there isn't really anything strong at 00:23:368 - :<
  7. 00:55:961 (4) - how about you increase the distance on this since there is a stronger beat here? :D I think somewhere around x:253 y:306 would work :D
  8. 00:57:072 (2,3,4,5,6) - :3
    SPOILER
  9. 01:18:739 - why u no map this strong beat D:
  10. 02:14:480 (4) - ok instead of having something holdable here, how does this sound to you :D
    SPOILER
  11. 02:17:813 (4) - PLS 3 circle triplet sounds so nice here D:
  12. 02:46:517 - to 02:46:887 - seems like you left them blank to give some break for players, but this part does have some awesomeness you can map with simple 3 circle antijumps :<
  13. 03:47:257 (2,3,4,5) - maybe.. :3?
    SPOILER
  14. 03:49:294 - add circle B)
  15. 03:50:776 - :c c-circle?
  16. 03:52:628 - :c ^
  17. 03:53:554 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - erm, this should be just single stream, but idk, I guess you can leave it as it is
  18. 05:09:294 (3,4) - yeah these are same as 00:01:146 -
  19. 05:12:257 (4,5) - ^^
  20. 05:15:220 (3,4) - ^^^
  21. 05:18:183 (3,4) - ^^^^
  22. 05:21:146 (3,4) - ^^^^^
  23. 05:24:849 (1,2) - ^^^^^^
  24. 05:26:331 (1) - I don't really like this rhythm in general but I think this is the time to use it
    SPOILER

>w<
/me runs
Kibbleru
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i really like this map let me know if u need someone to flame it :>
Narcissu
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guineaQ wrote:

Haiii from PM request OwO

Nostalgia

[General]
Nothing :D

[The diff itself]
  1. 00:01:146 - I recommend switching 00:01:146 (3) - into single circle, since I don't think there is any significant note requiring a hold, and the music you mapped the slider end to actually should be an clickable object, try this rhythm……i wish the rhythm can continuous …… play can hit note differ 1/2 ……
    SPOILER
  2. 00:04:109 (4,5) - same story but this time I would use this rhythm instead.
    SPOILER
    The reason is that the pitch of the last note at 00:04:665 - goes DOWN instead of UP unlike the last similar riff :D
  3. 00:06:702 (2,3,4) - Fancy this rhythm?……no……i work extra whistle and i want not skip it……
    SPOILER
    I don't think there is a strong enough beat in the 00:07:072 - for it to deserve something clickable AND a whistle hitsound :D
  4. 00:08:739 (4) - 3 circle anti jumps would be perfectly justified here. Since you didn't use any 1/4s it shouldn't be confusing either.……i dislike anti jump……and the sound very light …… i wish use slider……
  5. 00:10:035 (3,4) - same as 00:01:146 -, and remember you can control the distance between those two circles that you will place (if you choose to do it) to decide how much emphasis you want to put on them (higher distance for more pitch disparity or less distance if it doesn't etc.)
  6. 00:23:183 (3,4) - this sounds better :3……no…… it not sound here but it's white link orz
    SPOILER
    there isn't really anything strong at 00:23:368 - :<
  7. 00:55:961 (4) - how about you increase the distance on this since there is a stronger beat here? :D I think somewhere around x:253 y:306 would work :D……not jump here orz
  8. 00:57:072 (2,3,4,5,6) - :3
    SPOILER
  9. 01:18:739 - why u no map this strong beat D:……a……because i think play not hear the light sound orz
  10. 02:14:480 (4) - ok instead of having something holdable here, how does this sound to you :D
    SPOILER
  11. 02:17:813 (4) - PLS 3 circle triplet sounds so nice here D:……5 note too more orz
  12. 02:46:517 - to 02:46:887 - seems like you left them blank to give some break for players, but this part does have some awesomeness you can map with simple 3 circle antijumps :<
  13. 03:47:257 (2,3,4,5) - maybe.. :3?
    SPOILER
  14. 03:49:294 - add circle B)……no …… i only find right hand piano
  15. 03:50:776 - :c c-circle?
  16. 03:52:628 - :c ^
  17. 03:53:554 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - erm, this should be just single stream, but idk, I guess you can leave it as it is
  18. 05:09:294 (3,4) - yeah these are same as 00:01:146 -
  19. 05:12:257 (4,5) - ^^
  20. 05:15:220 (3,4) - ^^^
  21. 05:18:183 (3,4) - ^^^^
  22. 05:21:146 (3,4) - ^^^^^
  23. 05:24:849 (1,2) - ^^^^^^
  24. 05:26:331 (1) - I don't really like this rhythm in general but I think this is the time to use it……you are right but 1/4 too confusion imo……orz
    SPOILER

>w<……::>_<::
/me runs
thx you mod orz ……

Kibbleru wrote:

i really like this map let me know if u need someone to flame it :>
thx 111

but i just new mapper …… can‘t find any bat to bubble :?
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Sharlo
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你老实说音效谁下的。
TicClick
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TicClick
copy and paste this into timing panel (F6)
332998,444.444444444444,4,2,1,50,1,0
332998,-133.333333333333,4,2,1,50,0,0
333553,496.894409937888,4,2,1,50,1,0
333553,-133.333333333333,4,2,1,50,0,0

also change last offset's BPM from 54,90 to 56
Narcissu
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Narcissu

Sharlo wrote:

你老实说音效谁下的。
:o

TicClick wrote:

copy and paste this into timing panel (F6)
332998,444.444444444444,4,2,1,50,1,0
332998,-133.333333333333,4,2,1,50,0,0
333553,496.894409937888,4,2,1,50,1,0
333553,-133.333333333333,4,2,1,50,0,0

also change last offset's BPM from 54,90 to 56
thx your timging help and drum-hitwhistle.wav 111
X Light
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X Light
既然BAT来看过了我也不太敢多说了，稍微说点
01:42:628 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 这里直线的感觉不是太明显，不如干脆把滑条弄成弯的
01:44:109 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - 让我想到一个高举双臂的人
01:46:146 (2,3,4,5,6) - http://puu.sh/drByL/046387503e.png让我想到了这张图，图里的处理我觉得更好点，算是参考吧
02:43:925 (2,3,4,5) - 这里flow不太好...其实3放在4那也不错啊
03:52:813 (3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - http://puu.sh/drBVF/c03d7851a6.png个人建议
04:23:554 (3,4,5,1) - 这里我觉得很神
05:24:294 (3,4,5) - 05:27:257 (3,4,5) - 都可以弄成蜿蜒的图形

总体来说质量挺高的啊，不过有的地方感觉不太顺
Narcissu
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Narcissu

liuyiqiangbu wrote:

既然BAT来看过了我也不太敢多说了，稍微说点
01:42:628 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 这里直线的感觉不是太明显，不如干脆把滑条弄成弯的……厚
01:44:109 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - 让我想到一个高举双臂的人……233
01:46:146 (2,3,4,5,6) - http://puu.sh/drByL/046387503e.png让我想到了这张图，图里的处理我觉得更好点，算是参考吧……這個還是算了……是前面的複製翻轉過來的
02:43:925 (2,3,4,5) - 这里flow不太好...其实3放在4那也不错啊……厚
03:52:813 (3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - http://puu.sh/drBVF/c03d7851a6.png个人建议……亞達……平行是我的愛
04:23:554 (3,4,5,1) - 这里我觉得很神……不就是單純的DS直線嗎111
05:24:294 (3,4,5) - 05:27:257 (3,4,5) - 都可以弄成蜿蜒的图形……直線我的愛111

总体来说质量挺高的啊，不过有的地方感觉不太顺
感謝摸圖~
Kibbleru
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is this timing correct btw? you said tic click was still timing it or something.

also forum pm me because i tend to forget stuff.

mod will come soon!
Lavender
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要泡了
Kibbleru
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Kibbleru
[General]
  1. remove storyboard
  2. Theres a ranked short version for this song, perhaps you can go there and take some of the tags? https://osu.ppy.sh/s/182845
[Blah]
  1. 00:53:183 - i would recommend mapping this out? its pretty loud imo o-o
  2. 01:10:683 - perhaps add note here? this should be a 5 note stream imo
  3. 01:24:109 (2) - hmm how bout use this rhythm? since there is a guitar sound on 01:24:480 -
    SPOILER
    02:47:072 (2) - ^
    03:58:184 (2) - ^
  4. 01:43:368 (4) - maybe add NC here as sort of a lead in to 01:44:109 (1) - this section where nc is used alot?
    03:06:331 (4) - ^
    04:17:443 (4) - ^
  5. 02:17:813 (4) - how bout 1/4 repeat instead q: there's a piano
  6. 03:50:776 - why not map this sound out like u did for 03:47:813 (5) - :(
  7. 03:52:628 - eh skipping this kinda felt weird for me. if you map something like 03:52:813 - out then you should put something for this one too
  8. 02:04:109 (5) - could nc this owo? idk i just like to nc between long jump patterns
    03:27:072 (5) - ^
  9. 01:54:294 (4,5,1) - can you justify some of these overmaps for me? i don't really have anything against them but i want to hear your reasoning behind them
nothing to complain about, absolutely fantastic map! also your consistency is very nice :)
Narcissu
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Narcissu

Kibbleru wrote:

[General]
  1. remove storyboard …… fix ~
  2. Theres a ranked short version for this song, perhaps you can go there and take some of the tags? https://osu.ppy.sh/s/182845 ……ok ~
[Blah]
  1. 00:53:183 - i would recommend mapping this out? its pretty loud imo o-o……a……i give up some because it's not important orz
  2. 01:10:683 - perhaps add note here? this should be a 5 note stream imo……^
  3. 01:24:109 (2) - hmm how bout use this rhythm? since there is a guitar sound on 01:24:480 - ……ok ~ all change
    SPOILER
    02:47:072 (2) - ^
    03:58:184 (2) - ^
  4. 01:43:368 (4) - maybe add NC here as sort of a lead in to 01:44:109 (1) - this section where nc is used alot?……i skip some NC …… intent is keep all pink color in The fourth section …… NC can point jump but i prefer to keep form orz
    03:06:331 (4) - ^
    04:17:443 (4) - ^
  5. 02:17:813 (4) - how bout 1/4 repeat instead q: there's a piano……ok~
  6. 03:50:776 - why not map this sound out like u did for 03:47:813 (5) - :( ……www, i find piano only …… but many some point it 111, use a 1/2 slider instead of one note now
  7. 03:52:628 - eh skipping this kinda felt weird for me. if you map something like 03:52:813 - out then you should put something for this one too …… ok ~
  8. 02:04:109 (5) - could nc this owo? idk i just like to nc between long jump patterns
    03:27:072 (5) - ^
  9. 01:54:294 (4,5,1) - can you justify some of these overmaps for me? i don't really have anything against them but i want to hear your reasoning behind them…… i wish play have more click on the Kiai time orz, same as i give up some sound in other part. and i think add 3-hit note before downbeat is well …… of course i‘m ready delete it if you think it's wrong 111
nothing to complain about, absolutely fantastic map! also your consistency is very nice :) …… 喵~
thx your mod >,
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