Tsumetaku wrote:

柑橘U很多Quality mod了Q_Q

其實我比較喜歡慢歌 頂一個……喜歡就好喜歡就好~

★ = Some overall comments
◆ = Suggestions
▲ = Unrankable stuffs

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◆ Tag 雖然我不太清楚可是逗號OuO/?……www……換空格了orz
◆ 這根本沒東西摸R

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◆ Easy可以用1.10x變速嘛~:O 我不太確定 不過前面幾個摸的沒說應該試沒關係吧(?……沒問題的%……&吧……%
00:55:489 (5) - NC? 超過6了 還有01:13:774 (5) - ,02:10:918 (5) - ,02:29:203 (5) - ……一直是兩節一次啊orz……我還是喜歡長顏色不然8啊9啊存在意義都沒了【那是什麼？
03:46:918 (1,2) - 這1/4在EZ可能有點疑慮Q_Q……換成一個滑條接一個圈了>,

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03:11:489 (1) - 這邊NC是不是弄錯了……是啊是啊orz……

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02:56:632 - 可以試試把Break的前端拉到這邊做效果:D……好啊好啊，其他難度也改了~

美麗 扎扎實實滴水摸
補字一二三
/me run

Mei wrote:

如果难度名叫sola的话，tag就不需要sola了……嗯嗯……

[sola]

1. 00:05:204 (1,2,3) - 试试这样……好~
   
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2. 00:08:632 (3,4,1) - 试试这样……我覺得低難度裏面用1/4滑條很坑啊orz
   
   Picture

   
3. 00:12:632 (2,3) - 包一下？顺便移到x268 y172……好~
   
4. 00:14:061 (6) - 这里有人声在蓝线上，可以跟一下吗……我沒跟人聲啊orz
   
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5. 00:18:918 (1,2,3,4) - 如果不想跟人声，也请跟上背景最明显的那个鼓啊00:19:203……我也沒跟鼓點orz……我到底跟的是什麼呢……orz……
   
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6. 00:27:489 (4) - 这个滑条尾巴我听起来比较违和，试试把4去掉然后折返一下3，或者把4换成note……我是很喜歡用折返orz
   
7. 00:41:775 (1,2) - 中间的蓝线也是有音的，这个空拍比较违和啊，试试这样……這個我覺得會很難……對這個難度來說……
   
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8. 01:20:346 (1,2,3,4) - 加个滑条，后面也类似……
   
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9. 02:12:632 (5,1) - 这个跳来的十分奇怪，而且也不太好看，试试这样
   
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10. 03:11:203 (2,4) - 不如删掉这2note，听起来还好些……刪了~

[normal]

1. 00:32:632 (1,2,3) - 这样根号些
   
   Picture

   
2. 01:48:061 (1,2,3) - ^
   
3. 02:48:346 (2) - finish，因为背景有……加了~
   
4. 03:10:346 (1,2,3) - 节奏这样感觉好些……好~
   
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感觉这歌元素也是很丰富的，都没表现出来感觉比较可惜……我也試過跟些什麼……但是都不適合啊……管絃樂連1/8都有一大堆……人聲到處是附點會空掉白線……為了新人打起來正常點就乾脆什麼都不跟了……orz
唔总之加油

KaedekaShizuru wrote:

水仙酱prpr
音效是不是bug了 test还有editor里播放发出的咚咚声在timing里找不到 最开始还以为你下了一堆翔音效23333

Narcissu wrote:

KaedekaShizuru wrote:

水仙酱prpr
音效是不是bug了 test还有editor里播放发出的咚咚声在timing里找不到 最开始还以为你下了一堆翔音效23333

我下的就是咚咚咚的音效啊orz 会很奇怪吗。。。

1. BG size is 1023 * 767. so you should change 1024 * 768
2. You need to fix some kiai time http://puu.sh/d0zVQ.png

1. 03:30:918 (5,6) - change to slider? Six note is too many

1. 00:43:490 (5) - change to slider? I want very hitting 00:43:775 (X) http://puu.sh/d0uxD.jpg
2. 01:58:917 (5) - same
3. 03:14:347 (5) - same

1. 00:05:203 (1) - remove NC
2. 00:51:346 (2) - (nazi) Move to 1 grid left. Here is a little closer than the other
3. 01:13:488 (6,7,1) - move stack, too? Same as 01:11:203 (6,7,1) -
4. 01:23:203 (X) - add note?
5. 01:23:489 (X) - ^
6. 01:29:775 (1) - remobe NC
7. 02:06:918 (3) - (nazi) Move to 1 grid left.
8. 02:29:060 (7) - stack it in 02:28:917 (6) -
9. 02:39:917 (X) - add note
10. 02:56:632 (X) - Break time start is here
11. 03:42:060 (3) - change to 1/4 slider? http://puu.sh/d0n0n.jpg

rui wrote:

From irc request……>,

Almost I can't find to point it out.
Great map set.
[General]

1. BG size is 1023 * 767. so you should change 1024 * 768……fix~
2. You need to fix some kiai time http://puu.sh/d0zVQ.png

……fix~
[Easy]

1. 03:30:918 (5,6) - change to slider? Six note is too many……ok~ and i cut other long note part to slider……

[Normal]

1. 00:43:490 (5) - change to slider? I want very hitting 00:43:775 (X) http://puu.sh/d0uxD.jpg……ok~
2. 01:58:917 (5) - same
3. 03:14:347 (5) - same

[Sola]
If you add Insane diff, you must change diff name to Hard.……i know the rule …… but i dislike insane diff …… i wish “sola” can name hard diff …… orz …… i will ask for bat to confirm it

Rule

A difficulty's name must indicate its level of difficulty, with the exception of the hardest level of difficulty in a set.
The mapset's hardest difficulty may use an appropriate custom difficulty name, unrelated to a username.
Mapsets may also use a complete set of custom difficulty names that clearly indicate their level of difficulty to the player.
Marathon maps with a single difficulty may use free naming.

nothing to say
good diff……>,
[Insane]
Need Resnap All notes……orz……

1. 00:05:203 (1) - remove NC……i add NC all white link orz …… i wish keep it ……
2. 00:51:346 (2) - (nazi) Move to 1 grid left. Here is a little closer than the other…fix~
3. 01:13:488 (6,7,1) - move stack, too? Same as 01:11:203 (6,7,1) - ……ok~ although i add it random orz
4. 01:23:203 (X) - add note?……The sound is too low orz …… i add note >,
5. 01:23:489 (X) - ^……………^
6. 01:29:775 (1) - remobe NC……^
7. 02:06:918 (3) - (nazi) Move to 1 grid left.……fix~
8. 02:29:060 (7) - stack it in 02:28:917 (6) - ……ok~
9. 02:39:917 (X) - add note ……ok~
10. 02:56:632 (X) - Break time start is here……><
11. 03:42:060 (3) - change to 1/4 slider? http://puu.sh/d0n0n.jpg……ok~

Good luck……very thx~

EmingK wrote:

0.0 写完了感觉有点水好像有点对不起M4M了orz

This post is generated by EK's osu modpost generator.

Red=unrankable issue
Purple=Emphasis suggestion
Black=Suggestion
Gray=Feel free to ignore

[EZ]
原地1/2单点好像不太善良……全都去掉了>,
00:32:632 - +Drum1 Finish? 后面对称那只也是……本來是想easy的音效輕一點的orz……都加了……
01:20:632 - 这个音效也建议改成Drum1 Finish
01:38:917 - 这里音效不跟00:23:489 - 统一一下？……這段鈴鼓美麗了啊
02:36:060 - 到02:44:632 - 这一段的clap下得似乎没什么规律..……改成了固定三拍clap……
03:14:917 - finish……fix~

[NM]
00:16:632 (1,2) - 柑橘可以弄成对称的……ok~
00:42:632 - 这里的clap有点不太好听，建议去掉……都去掉了~
01:58:061 (2) - ^
03:13:489 (2) - ^
01:20:632 (1) - D1Finish……fix~
03:39:775 (1,2,3,4) - 这段用clap实在太吵了orz，找个软点的whistle或finish之类的……我去找找orz

[Sola]
03:39:775 (1,1,1,1,2,3) - 同NM，clap太吵了

[Insane]
00:33:489 - 和00:35:775 - 这两个clap下得好诡异.. 现有的音效声音太大，拿来做强调的话就会搞得重心失衡..……我試著改下……
01:48:917 (4) - ^
00:42:917 (7,8,9,10) - 这几只可以像前面一样方向打开一些..全做成平行的有点呆 ……換成等量增加傾斜角了惹
01:58:346 (7,8,9,10) - ^
00:53:060 - 这样的音效也不建议加..有点吵……長白前三連的都打算去掉了orz……其他的我再好好想想怎麼改
02:08:489 - ^
01:18:917 (2,3) - (2)跟(1)的角度差略小 这个方向会比较好看些 ok~
03:39:775 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - 每一组的音高逐渐降低，可以让每组note间距递减。音效同上……好

orz神麻婆……我是渣新人啊orz
GL

KaedekaShizuru wrote:

[General]
音效的问题就不多提了 建议SC1 小路那个下法就不错……我不知道哪一個是小路誒……orz……
曲子本身的鼓点存在感就已经足够强 如果再加鼓点就把曲子都毁了……音效我在研究一下orz……
难度名的话insane才应该是sola吧 hard还是hard就好……我比較喜歡hard啊111……i我覺得insane不合曲……現在的是unrank的……如果萬一能泡的話會改回去的orz

[Insane]
00:21:775 (2) - 建议提前到00:21:632和前面00:19:346 (2)相同……這裡人聲不是藍線惹
00:24:632 (4,5,1) - 这里flow不太好 但我也提不出什么好建议2333…… 我不懂flow
00:39:346 (9) - 没有必要的三连 建议删掉这个circle……那就一排1/2hitnormal了惹……主要還是音效問題orz……我回去修整一番
别的好想也挑不出什么了
建议有些地方修成二连和短滑条 像小路那样 泥垢了
另外KIAI段X1.1感觉有点低了……太長的滑條超難擺啊orz

[Sola]
00:17:203 (2) - 前后的间距注意……沒注意距離orz
00:17:775 (3) - 这里有些微秒的违和感 在不动00:17:203 (2)的前提下应该移动到X396 Y272
00:42:203 - 建议不要漏掉这里，00:42:775同，然后把相关的note拉近……我覺得那樣會很難打而且很擠……
01:57:204 (1,2) - ↑

[Normal]
有些原地二连单点建议保留一部分错开一部分 可能有点难了……錯開應該會更難的吧……
00:13:489 (3) - 建议空着……我覺得有圈比較好……

美丽

1. 00:34:918 (1,2) - You could fix the blanket on this some
2. 00:44:060 (1,2) - You could blanket this
3. 00:50:918 (1,2) - I'd make these symeyrical
4. 01:03:489 (3) - move this to x:159 y:251 to make the slider ends stack perfectly
5. 01:17:203 (3,4) - Blanket these
6. 01:17:203 (3,1) - ^
7. 02:01:204 (4) - I'd ctrl+G this to make it flow better
8. 02:24:061 (4) - move this to x:331 y:234
9. 02:39:489 (3) - Ctrl+G this to make it flow better imo
10. 02:42:918 (1,2) - Blanket these
11. 03:33:203 - I think the kiai should end here

Xellie wrote:

Irc mod request

[Sola]

1. 00:34:918 (1,2) - You could fix the blanket on this some
2. 00:44:060 (1,2) - You could blanket this ……slider will too bending if use blanket orz ……
3. 00:50:918 (1,2) - I'd make these symeyrical
4. 01:03:489 (3) - move this to x:159 y:251 to make the slider ends stack perfectly
5. 01:17:203 (3,4) - Blanket these…… ……^
6. 01:17:203 (3,1) - ^
7. 02:01:204 (4) - I'd ctrl+G this to make it flow better……too close ……
8. 02:24:061 (4) - move this to x:331 y:234
9. 02:39:489 (3) - Ctrl+G this to make it flow better imo
10. 02:42:918 (1,2) - Blanket these …
11. 03:33:203 - I think the kiai should end here……yes ……refrain end here …… but i think it's kiai too

That's all I can see, good luck~……>,

nikachyan wrote:

来摸惹;w;虽然我弱到掉渣;w;

sola

排列
00:09:203 (4) - 试着把这个滑条的flow颠倒一下，个人感觉会顺一点……全是順的不好啦
02:02:632 (2,3,4,5) - 多半是强迫症……总觉得这个三角形最好转一下
02:05:203 (3,4) - 每个独自ctrl+G？……^
02:10:346 (4) - 把3的弯曲方向反过来再把这个滑条ctrl+G之后向下挪一挪试试…………我喜歡同向orz
02:19:490 (4) - 也是一样……我觉得反向会好一点
02:28:632 (4) - 囍，我觉得这种flow我暂时还不知道怎么用，前面的建议全当我没说……囍，我只是什麼都試一遍orz
总体而言排列比我好太多，我没什么能指出来的……

音效
我太懒了所以就不一个一个指出来……
要说只有一点
音效太单调啦111我试图的时候好几次想睡着……
01:20:346 - 01:28:060这段和00:14:346 - 00:22:917的音效我很喜欢，但是其他地方的24clap如果没选对自定义音效的话不过你选对了就未免无脑了点……可能因为我是whistle表现旋律的那种反正我不正常
我想你一定是被原曲的kick节奏给弄糊涂了，试着多用些3normal1whistle看看？……
00:32:346 (6) - 类似这边的音效梗，我推荐换成soft hit然后调成40%……不要
02:46:061 (3) - 还有下两个NC的3（其实还有4），滑条尾换成soft hit（推荐）或者whistle，看你喜欢哪个，不换也行……

节奏
hard的节奏有啥好说的，你的比我好太多不敢乱加评论。
00:14:061 (6) - 可删……我只是為了節奏都連貫啊111
00:18:632 (4) - 可删，顺便把前后两个note的间距拉大点也行啊…………^
00:41:775 (1,2) - 为啥不连起来……1/4折返連起來的話排版就美麗……
00:45:203 (3,4) - 这边的附点节奏比两个滑条带感啊……那音效就美麗……我沒有跟人聲啊111
00:58:632 (2) - vocal从这里起，你把滑条和circle的顺序调换一下？……不……
01:00:632 (2) - 滑条尾盖住了vocal的一个有点明显的音，推荐换掉……我沒有跟人聲啊111
01:21:775 - 01:26:346 - 我觉得可以加个1/1滑条，把音效volume调成20%……
01:29:489 - 或许是为了难度考虑才漏的吧？……
01:57:204 (1,2) - 也是，为啥不接起来


总的来说这图风我很崇拜，一直想做成这样能不能收我为徒啊
音效和节奏略为单调但是也很diao了，至少听起来没什么违和感
期待I难度，如果有的话……insane做的overmap太嚴重了就放棄了orz……

M o k o r i wrote:

hii Narcissu, mod as your request from PM :3

General

1. remove .osb file from songs folder if you don't use SB.……fix~
2. also should be removed checks "Widescreen Support" and "Letterbox during breaks" , you can find it in Design tab of Song Setup.……fix~
3. remove "sola" tag and move it to source. (another same song that had ranked: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/13203&#41; ……fix~
4. it's ending theme, so i think you can also add tag "ending" ……ok~

Easy

• 
  it's only my impressions after i played it, don't have to change. its flow and placement are so nice
  though for example, after starting clockwise flow, it continue to go only clockwise for a while. it's same which is counterclockwise case.
  so i felt you should try some patterns to make uplifting in this diff. but as i said, it's so nice diff ……>,

1. 00:37:203 (1) - add Normal-Drum's finish to start of slider.……more finish too noise 111
2. 01:28:060 break should be end at here imo.……ok~
3. 01:48:061 (1,3) - you should add Normal-Drum's finish if you want to match sounds with 00:32:632 (1,3) - . you can also add it to 01:52:632 (1) - if you accept above suggestion.
4. 03:33:203 (1) - check DS to next. maybe you can solve it with moving 03:34:346 (2,3,4) - to left. ……fix~

Normal

1. 00:16:632 (1,2) - how about make those symmetry? ……a……i think all symmetry too boring ……
2. 00:32:632 (1,1,1) - add Normal-Drum's finish to start of slider.
3. 01:28:060 about break time same as easy diff……ok~
4. 01:48:061 (1,1,1) - about Normal-Drum's finish same as ^^
5. 03:10:346 (1,2) - make blanket better……fix~
6. 03:14:346 (5) - how about add Normal-Drum's finish?
7. 03:48:346 (3) - how about NC?(like sola diff)……ok~

Sola

1. 00:52:061 (3,1) - how about stack them?……ok~
2. 01:03:489 (3) - move it to x159:y251, then completely stacked with 01:02:346 (1) - ……fix~
3. 02:52:061 (1) - good job ……>,

that's all! it's nice song and mapset imo, take a star~ 喵~

liangv587 wrote:

hitnormal确认感太低，还不如用默认的

[Sola]
00:57:775 (1) - sampleset用到滑条上了 …… fix
01:16:060 (1) - 难道是故意的？……單純的複製粘貼 = =
01:17:203 (3) - 02:13:204 (1,3) - 02:31:489 (1,3) - 03:28:632 (1,3) - 03:43:203 (2) - 反正不好听 …… 對……我記得很清楚當時想多甩點音效帥一點 Orz……
02:51:775 - 可以在此加个1/4滑条……1/4有點坑的感覺……還是就空掉吧

[Normal]
00:21:203 (1,2) - 一弯一直不好看……這個顏色都分開了就不複製對稱了吧
00:57:775 (1) - 01:16:060 (1) - 02:13:203 (1) - 02:31:489 (1) - 03:28:632 (1,3) - 03:41:489 (4) - 滑条噪音
00:32:632 (1,2) - 01:48:061 (1,2) - ……居然這麼多紕漏……all fix Orz

都没什么问题，还不起飞

Adol Christin wrote:

正想说给我点时间送个gd，结果都20sp了。。。

另外source不写上SOLA吗

1. 01:06:917 (1) - jump a bit too big imo ><
   02:08:632 (1) - ^

1. 02:43:489 (2,3) - maybe you want to copy paste the sliders?
2. 03:20:346 (2,3,4) - kind of confusing. maybe something like this would be better
   
   SPOILER

   

1. 00:47:489 (5,6) - although this is low bpm, for the purpose of the spread, imo, it's best not to use any 1/2 like this (same goes for all the other ones)
   00:56:632 (6,7) - ^
   01:01:203 (5,6) - ^
   01:05:775 (5,6) - ^
   02:45:203 (1,2,3) - ^
   02:47:489 (1,2,3) - ^
   etc..
   I know I may be asking a lot but imo this will make the spread a bit more equal (since hard is fairly hard)

Kibbleru wrote:

ayy im back. …… wtf >.>
bored and this seems easy to deal with so why not

hard

1. 01:06:917 (1) - jump a bit too big imo >< …… ye it's 2.9* , but i still want to do it Orz , slider jump not hard ?
   02:08:632 (1) - ^

normal

1. 02:43:489 (2,3) - maybe you want to copy paste the sliders?……yes √
2. 03:20:346 (2,3,4) - kind of confusing. maybe something like this would be better …… ok
   
   SPOILER

   

easy

1. 00:47:489 (5,6) - although this is low bpm, for the purpose of the spread, imo, it's best not to use any 1/2 like this (same goes for all the other ones) …… but i unable add 2/1 slider as like other song …… the diff 1/1 all part if i delete 1/2 rhythm 。-。
   00:56:632 (6,7) - ^
   01:01:203 (5,6) - ^
   01:05:775 (5,6) - ^
   02:45:203 (1,2,3) - ^
   02:47:489 (1,2,3) - ^
   etc..
   I know I may be asking a lot but imo this will make the spread a bit more equal (since hard is fairly hard)

call me back when I get back to Canada q: