Uchida Maaya - Gimme! Revolution [Osu|Taiko] · forum

xxdeathx

2,661 posts

Joined July 2013

xxdeathx 2014-11-11T05:25:23+00:00

twintails!

[General]

I don't think negative offset is needed since you don't have any timing sections before 00:01:164, so the red timing point can begin there. Shiro dislikes negative offsets too.
Add Thouars to tags because she's the character that ~~Rikka Takanashi~~ Uchida Maaya is voicing.

[Easy]
fine

[Normal]

00:12:831 (1,2) - improve blanket, middle is too far

[Hard]
fine

[Insane]

00:00:497 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - o.o trippy lol
00:02:330 (4) - should NC because it's really late after 00:01:164 (3) -
00:04:664 (2) - use 1/2 circles so player can hit key for both vocals?
00:06:997 - add circle here because here 00:05:664 (1,2,3,4) - you are following that sound in the music and the same sound is present at 00:06:997
00:34:830 - 00:34:997 - 00:36:164 - 00:37:497 - ignoring vocal sounds awkward
00:40:164 - this is a strong vocal on white tick so you should have a circle or slider start here because slider end is too weak
00:59:645 (7,8) - blanket?

[Revolution]

00:28:331 (4,5,6) - 00:29:664 (2,3,4) - ctrl-g suggested?
00:34:830 - ignoring this note sounds really weird and unintuitive
00:34:997 (6,7) - also don't ignore vocals on white ticks + spacing of 00:35:331 (7,1) - is too big for 1/4 jump
00:46:830 - don't ignore this vocal, how about make 3 1/4 sliders here?
01:23:664 (1,4) - Remove red point is simpler

Good luck with this!!

GGFFQQ55

121 posts

Joined March 2013

GGFFQQ55 2014-11-11T09:08:01+00:00

from m4m queue

newbie mod, sorry if there's any mistake

Kotone's insane

00:00:497 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - really hard to play and read...sliders or kick-back sliders are better maybe?

00:34:497 (1,2,3,4) - follow the vocal here maybe? I think it's better with the 1/2 with the flow going on

00:48:164 (3,4,5,6,7) - hard to read, maybe spread the 1/4 in a small DS

00:52:331 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1) - same as above

01:05:831 (1) - here maybe use 1/6 or 1/8?

01:14:164 (2,1) - too hard to play here, maybe ctrl+G 2 here?

01:27:747 (1) - spinner is fine, but try using a slider maybe?

Revolution

00:06:831 (1,2,3) - too hard ;w;

00:34:997 (6,7,1) - I dont see the reason using slow sliders here...

Hard

00:52:831 (4,1) - little bit hard to play for hard diff, maybe a full kick-back slider for this piece is better

I think it's kind of too hard for this diff, use less 1/4 rythm maybe

Normal and Easy

no big problem, only some detail problems, not crucial though ;w;

short mod orz, hope something may help QWQ

Atsuro

1,290 posts

Joined January 2013

Atsuro 2014-11-11T21:15:24+00:00

For M4M

[Mochi's Normal]

00:12:831 (1,2) - Maybe blanket this?

[Hard]

00:48:497 (3,1) - Put them a bit closer from each other, i think that jump after a repeat slider is a bit hard.
01:05:664 (3,4) - The sound that i think you're following with 4 starts here (01:05:830 - ), try to replace 3 with a circle and move 4 to where the sound begins and add a circle after
Click!

Loved this diff

[Kotone's Insane]

00:00:497 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - Too confusing and hard to read, i recommend changing it
00:06:997 - Add a note here, there's a sound
00:07:831 (1) - Make this slider 1/2, there's no reason for it to be 3/4 in my opinion
01:05:830 (1) - Try reducing the repeats and placing notes to differentiate the piano from the drum sound. (Is it a piano?)
Click!
01:10:497 - Put a note here, the blank space feels weird, or better move the slider 1/2 a beat forward and add a circle in it's place.
Good map, but i think it still needs some work

[Revolution]

I can barely play this one, so my suggestions here may be bad

00:34:164 (1,2,3) - I think it would be better if you deleted "2" and made it a jump.
00:34:830 - Add a circle?
01:12:997 (1,2) - This doesn't fit in my opinion, make the slider 1/1 and delete the circle?

Great map

Couldn't find anything in easy
I hope this helps, good luck

emilia

893 posts

Joined October 2012

emilia 2014-11-12T12:28:43+00:00

M4M?

[Easy]

00:00:497 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - Transition from white to red is rather weird, maybe fix polarity/try sticking to only white ticks here? Its fine as it is though.
00:08:497 (1,2,3) - Maybe make 1 lead directly into 2, then make 3 stack on 1?
01:13:831 (3) - IMO the circle is really tight, try making a slider that is simpler

The most part of the song is mapped on red lines, which I feel may be too hard for Easy players to follow. But its still fine.

[Mochi's Normal]
00:12:831 (1,2) - Blanket?
00:39:497 (1,3) - ^
01:03:664 (1) - This is off-grid. I suggest shifting it inside, but its fine. As long as it doesn't hit the ranking panel (?)

Great normal, I like the patterns + flow and everything

[Hard]
00:03:664 (1,2,3) - Why the sudden change in DS?
00:04:164 (2,3) - Blanket?
00:11:997 (1) - Highly undesirable double reverse, try 1 reverse then 1 hitcircle?
00:21:664 (3) - Try Ctrl g
00:32:997 (1) - Maybe make this similar to 00:32:330 (4) - ?
00:34:497 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - IMO this rhythm on red line is hard to follow, but its fine
00:43:497 (4,1) - Mini blanket fix
00:53:997 (4,1) - Flow is slightly conflicting here, since 4 goes to right, then 1 requires a shift back to left, kinda awkward IMO. Suggest shift 1 to right.
01:27:664 (1) - Try ctrl g?

I kinda like it. Flow is pretty good and patterns are also nice.

[Kotone's Insane]
00:00:497 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - Holy shit god DAMN. This looks insane to play. I suggest fast jumpy single reverse kick sliders.
00:06:164 (2,3,4) - I suggest stack these like here: 00:21:664 (4,5) -
00:48:164 (3,4,5,6,7) - Try using another pattern. A stream feels rather unnecessary here
00:53:164 (1) - Offscreen?
00:58:798 (2,3,4,5,6) - Use 3 blanket 6 and 2?
01:03:664 (5,1) - Highly undesirable, because I feel that the slider is being hidden too much.
01:17:664 (3,5) - Stack?

Some minor blanket problems. Also, I see a lot of sliders that are overly curved like 00:15:830 (4,5) - , 00:26:497 (4) - , 00:29:997 (4) - and 00:48:997 (1) - . These sliders may break flow, like in here, 00:48:997 (1,2,3) - , slider 1 doesn't exactly lead in to 2/3 properly, because its curved too much. Overall, still a good map.

[Insane]
00:52:831 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Rather hard to accomplish, since its hard to aim 5 stream keys then the slider is at a rather-far-away-but-enough-for-you-to-miss distance. Will suggest change, but its k
01:07:164 (5,6,7,8,1) - Why not perfect pentagon?

Suggestions:
00:03:664 (1) - Ctrl g so flow shift isn't that bad
00:05:664 (5,6) - I'd rather have something blanket 6 than have slider 5.
00:10:331 (1) - Ctrl g
00:14:997 (3) - ^
00:16:664 (5) - ^
00:20:831 (8) - ^
00:27:331 (5) - ^
00:38:997 (3) - ^, shift 4 after
00:53:831 (8,9,1) - Shift in flow here is quite bad, suggest change
01:14:164 (5) - Ctrl g

Generally a nice map. Why not change the name to Extra? Since its mapped in the style of an Extra. I like it

I like this spread. Mostly well done

Stefan

Global Moderator

10,393 posts

Joined January 2011

Stefan 2014-11-13T14:49:46+00:00

Made a really short check through the Taiko Difficulties and wanted to mod them but these doesn't seems to be ready. Call me after 2-3 good mods and I will see what we can do here.

Charlotte

1,905 posts

Joined December 2013

Charlotte 2014-11-15T15:44:40+00:00

Hi from Charlotte's Taiko Modding Queue

d
k
D(big d)
K(big k)

stu's Muzukashii

Song Setup→Design→Widescreen Support→(uncheck)

Ctrl + Shift + A=AI mod

*Almost unsnapped.

00:34:832 - add d.because,follow the vocal (same as Oni)
00:34:992 - add k.^
00:54:001 - change d
01:17:992 - ^
01:20:660 - change k

stu's Oni

Song Setup→Design→Widescreen Support→(uncheck)

Ctrl + Shift + A=AI mod

*Almost unsnapped.

00:36:174 - delete.because,better follow the vocal? & ddk ddk ddk is one pattern?

Nice map! Good luck

stu00608

146 posts

Joined October 2012

stu00608 2014-11-16T04:16:06+00:00

Charlotte wrote:
Hi from Charlotte's Taiko Modding Queue

d
k
D(big d)
K(big k)

stu's Muzukashii

Song Setup→Design→Widescreen Support→(uncheck)

Ctrl + Shift + A=AI mod

*Almost unsnapped.

00:34:832 - add d.because,follow the vocal (same as Oni)
00:34:992 - add k.^
00:54:001 - change d
01:17:992 - ^
01:20:660 - change k

stu's Oni

Song Setup→Design→Widescreen Support→(uncheck)

Ctrl + Shift + A=AI mod

*Almost unsnapped.

00:36:174 - delete.because,better follow the vocal? & ddk ddk ddk is one pattern?

Nice map! Good luck

Thanks~

qoot8123

1,500 posts

Joined March 2011

qoot8123 2014-11-16T05:09:37+00:00

hi o/

[

Muzukashii]

00:07:830 - ~ 00:11:664 - 我覺得這段有點不太協調,建議改成這樣跟吉他的節奏會比較合
00:13:664 (20) - 移到00:13:497 - 然後改成k,太過執著於vocal上反而會失去一些結構
00:24:330 (2) - 同上^
00:29:664 (25) - ^
00:15:497 (29) - 改成k這裡鼓的音調偏高,而且也不會影響到vocal
00:17:664 (35,36,37,38,39,40) - 這裡也是太過執著於vocal,建議把00:17:664 (35,36) - 移到00:17:330 - ,00:17:997 (37) - 移到00:17:830 -
00:18:997 (41) - 這個note可以刪掉,會讓難度比較簡單一點
00:20:164 (47) - 移到00:21:330 - 這樣的話00:19:664 (45,46,47) - 這三個note比較能凸顯vocal的節奏
00:26:664 (14) - 這個note可以刪掉
00:28:330 (19,20) - 移到00:27:997 - 同00:17:664 (35,36,37,38,39,40) -
00:36:997 (56,57,58,59,60,61,62,63,64,65) - 這一段你有跟鼓,但我覺得妳可以跟看看vocal,跟前面的00:35:664 (52,53,54,55) - 做配合,像是這樣 (61和64有加大圓)
00:43:497 (82,83,84,85,86,87,88) - 在oni這一段已經很密集了,我覺得Muzu不需要作停頓,建議改成這樣
00:47:830 (3,4) - 我覺得後者比較有power,建議大圓調換一下
00:49:664 (11) - 加個大圓吧,這首我覺得蠻需要大圓作修飾
00:53:664 (30) - 移到00:53:497 - 然後跟00:53:164 (29) - 的大圓做調換
01:10:830 - 這裡加個k,跟鼓和vocal都蠻合的
01:11:164 (101) - 改成k,跟vocal的音調
01:11:664 (104,107,110) - 這三個加大圓
01:14:163 (114) - 把大圓去掉
01:17:831 (15) - 這個note其實不太需要,建議刪掉
01:20:330 (27) - 同上^
01:21:497 (33) - 同上^然後01:21:664 (34) - 改成k,最後01:20:997 (31,32,34) - 這三個加大圓
01:23:664 (44,50,56) - 這三個加大圓

[

Oni]

00:07:330 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 建議跟鼓,像是這樣 (最後那個是大圓)
00:09:830 (17,18,19,20,21) - 建議把這五連改成3連(dkd)節奏會比較清楚
00:10:664 (23,24,25,26,27,28,29,30,31) - 試試看這樣,我覺得跟音樂比較和
00:14:497 (41,42,43,44,45,46,47) - 這裡我覺得可以用比較清楚的節奏,像是這樣
00:19:247 (70) - 移到00:19:414 - 跟前面那段做呼應
00:20:997 (81,82) - 刪掉,然後00:21:164 (83) - 加大圓,比較能加強vocal的節奏
00:31:580 (144) - 移到00:32:080 - 然後00:31:497 - 改成k我覺得能呼應後面的ddk kkd
00:41:164 (197,198,199,200,201,202,203,204,205) - 這裡我覺得可以跟一下vocal,像是這樣
00:42:664 - 加個k這裡突然停頓感覺怪怪的
00:44:580 - 加個d
00:47:830 (240,241) - 同muzu,把大圓對調
00:48:164 (241,242,243,244,245,246,247,248,249,250,251,252) - 這裡副歌缺少太多大圓了,試試看這樣 (248和251是大圓)
00:49:997 (253,254,255,256,257,258,259,260,261,262,263,264,265,266,267,268,269,270,271) - 這裡也是放太多note的情況,試試看這個 (263跟266是大圓)
00:53:497 (273) - 加大圓,同第一段
00:53:914 (281,286,288) - - 這三個note都刪掉,然後00:54:330 (285,290) - 這兩個加大圓
00:55:414 (292) - 這個note不是很必要,建議刪掉
00:58:247 (313,314) - 這2個note對調,00:58:414 (315) - 這個note刪掉,然後00:58:497 (316) - 加大圓,雖然00:58:414 - 沒跟到鼓,但我覺得大圓比較能凸顯這首歌
00:58:798 (317,318,319,320,321,322,323,324,325,326,327,328,329,330,331) - 這一段用太多note了,建議改成這樣會比較好
01:00:747 (333) - 刪掉然後01:00:831 (334) - 改成k聽起來會比較順暢
01:03:497 (352) - 改成k,跟vocal的pitch
01:14:163 (406) - 同muzu,把大圓拿掉
01:18:330 (23) - 改成k,跟吉他的音調
01:19:997 (33,34,35,36,37,38,39,40,41,42,43,44) - 這裡可以試試看這樣(40.41.42是大圓)
01:22:497 - 這裡可以加的d
01:23:664 (57,63,69) - 同muzu,加大圓

大致上就這些,Muzu太過執著於vocal了,反而缺少了一些結構,Oni的話大致上還可以,只是可以多用一些大圓來增強這首歌曲的節奏

@Stefan : I'll leave these taiko diffs to you

wcx19911123

3,862 posts

Joined June 2010

Topic Starter

wcx19911123 2014-11-16T07:21:48+00:00

updated taiko diffs(including changes to qoot8123's mod)

PatZar

3,079 posts

Joined March 2013

PatZar 2014-11-17T09:53:14+00:00

:^)
why so much Twintail request
well i don't like the song

so good luck! wcx!

neonat

Beatmap Nominator

3,528 posts

Joined April 2012

neonat 2014-11-17T09:55:50+00:00

Genocide wrote:
why so much Twintail request

Twintails is love, twintails is life

Momochikun

1,927 posts

Joined October 2012

Momochikun 2014-11-17T12:47:14+00:00

Thanks :3

p.s : missing video and BG ww

SPOILER

[code]
SliderTickRate:1

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//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
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scanter

2,385 posts

Joined July 2012

scanter 2014-11-18T22:53:42+00:00

go go <3

smallboat

1,687 posts

Joined January 2010

smallboat 2014-11-21T07:12:55+00:00

Forum PM

Red words: Should be fixed.
Blue words : Highly recommended suggestion.
Black words : In my opinion.

[General]

Insane diff 的 WidescreenStoryboard need to be canceled.

[Easy] 為什麼這diff漏加了一些音效組。

Unsnapped green line (But still suggest del these,no necessary to keep it,because already use previous green line) : 00:38:820,00:42:154,00:52:154,00:56:820,01:11:487,01:19:487,01:26:154.

00:05:997 (1,1) - Seems you forgot this slider so close the spinner end in easy diff ? Need to be spaced 4 beats. Delete this spinner and place this rhythm :
SPOILER
00:22:331 (3) - Missed a whistle end (Check you another diff already added here)
00:26:497 (1) - Missed a normal whistle sampleset.
00:37:664 (2) - Still missed a normal sampleset whistle in slider head.
00:40:997 (1) - The same as above
00:41:831 (3) - Still missed a normal sampleset whistle in slider head.
00:45:831 (2) - This slider end seems should be placed finish hitsound.(Check you another diff already added here)
00:49:331 (3) - 少加了一個normal sample set
00:50:997 (2) - Missed a normal in slider reverse.
00:52:831 (3) - Why this hitsound is not in the same with Hard and cutsom name diff?
00:54:664 (3) - 少加了一個normal sample set
00:59:136 (2) - Missed a whistle in slider end.

This diff rhythm looks fine,不過漏加了好多音效..剩下20秒你自己看看對照一下

[Mochi's Normal]

01:00:153 (5) - Try to add a whistle in slider end to follow vocal?
01:18:997 (6) - I think this slider head is a downbeat,suggest can add a finish here.

[Hard]

00:37:331 (2) - 要不要移動到(264,64)左右的位置來疊一點跟00:34:664 (2,3,2,3) - 一樣?
01:00:323 (4) - Missed a whistle in slider head.
01:08:831 (2) - Stack 01:09:164 (1) - slider feel have a good beat effect,you can try to stack here.
01:19:331 (4) - 這個擺放似乎沒處理好，turn a bit angle for thid slider and place here?
SPOILER

[Kotone's Insane]

00:02:331 (4) - This a downbeat vocal,add a NC here?
00:37:497 (5) - Feel miss a vocal,suggest add a note here? (I think will be played better.)
00:59:052 (4) - Sounds like there is no stream at this here,remove this note?

[Revolution]

00:17:747 (5) - The same as 00:59:052 (4)'s Kotone's Insane reason.
00:28:414 (5) - The same as above.
00:34:247 (2) - Seems this stream missed easily (Feel shouldn't place stream in quiet parts)
01:04:164 (3,4,5) - 你確定這樣放slider沒問題?
01:04:997 (1,2,3) - Suggest move left a bit make catch 01:04:830 (5) - this slider easily.

wcx19911123

3,862 posts

Joined June 2010

Topic Starter

wcx19911123 2014-11-21T11:31:20+00:00

smallboat

smallboat wrote:
Forum PM

[Easy] 為什麼這diff漏加了一些音效組。

Unsnapped green line (But still suggest del these,no necessary to keep it,because already use previous green line) : 00:38:820,00:42:154,00:52:154,00:56:820,01:11:487,01:19:487,01:26:154.
他们是用来让sliderslide重新从头开始播放的

00:26:497 (1) - Missed a normal whistle sampleset.
00:37:664 (2) - Still missed a normal sampleset whistle in slider head.
00:40:997 (1) - The same as above
00:41:831 (3) - Still missed a normal sampleset whistle in slider head.
00:45:831 (2) - This slider end seems should be placed finish hitsound.(Check you another diff already added here)
由于节奏密度不同，我感觉E用finish，高难度用whistle好些
00:49:331 (3) - 少加了一個normal sample set
00:52:831 (3) - Why this hitsound is not in the same with Hard and cutsom name diff?
也是节奏密度问题
00:54:664 (3) - 少加了一個normal sample set
关于N whistle，我觉得E节奏不够密加不了很多，没法很连续，所以就没加。不然听着感觉有点断断续续的。S whistle加了主要是因为听上去不太明显，不像N whistle那么大声，所以即使断断续续问题也不大
[Mochi's Normal]
Momochikun wrote:
i cant online for several days.. u can fix it fot me
01:18:997 (6) - I think this slider head is a downbeat,suggest can add a finish here.
跟其他diff保持相同，这里就不加了
[Hard]
00:37:331 (2) - 要不要移動到(264,64)左右的位置來疊一點跟00:34:664 (2,3,2,3) - 一樣?
节奏间隔不同，我觉得这里还是不anti-jump好点
01:08:831 (2) - Stack 01:09:164 (1) - slider feel have a good beat effect,you can try to stack here.
不太明白是啥意思，是全叠起来么，不过我感觉都叠起来不太好
01:19:331 (4) - 這個擺放似乎沒處理好，turn a bit angle for thid slider and place here?
这里是故意这样的，叠了一点
[Revolution]
00:17:747 (5) - The same as 00:59:052 (4)'s Kotone's Insane reason.
00:28:414 (5) - The same as above.
这两个三连感觉应该没问题
01:04:164 (3,4,5) - 你確定這樣放slider沒問題?
应该没问题吧，不过为了保险还是加了NC，应该好多了
01:04:997 (1,2,3) - Suggest move left a bit make catch 01:04:830 (5) - this slider easily.
这跳应该不大

其他的都改了

Stefan

Global Moderator

10,393 posts

Joined January 2011

Stefan 2014-11-22T16:44:01+00:00

Alright, let us see if they're finally ready.

[Muzukashii]
00:04:664 (12,13) - I'd recommend to swap them. It's an eaiser way to follow kdk dkd kdk than kdk dkd dkk. Beside of this 00:04:830 sounds deeper than 00:04:664 and if you really want to keep these hitsounds then I'd suggest to follow this.
00:15:830 (30,31,32,33) - This follows the background music better: http://puu.sh/d12HV/0923d191ab.jpg
00:21:330 (50) - I'd leave some room here to be not overchallenged with the current pattern, remove this note.
00:29:497 (25) - This pattern combo is quite long and you should leave some time to rest, remove this note.
00:31:997 (37) - Same like 00:21:330 (50), especially after the Don triplet.
00:42:830 (80) - Remove? I'd find it pretty good in the flow and making a break here.
00:48:330 (5) - I would emphasize 00:48:164 (4) more because of the Beat in the music, the vocal here isn't really determining here. Remove this note.
00:58:967 (52) - tbh I would suggest doing the same like the previous suggestion. Even when there is no really significant beat I think it sounds better without this note.
01:01:997 (65,66) - Same thing like 00:04:664 (12,13).
01:13:330 (112) - Same reason like 00:42:830 (80).
01:19:997 (24) - There should be some rest time so please consider to remove this note.

[Oni]
00:07:664 (7) - This is nonsense to have this note as d while the last two previous notes were k. Either do kkddkkddk or kkddkkkkk.
00:37:830 (173,174,175,176,177) - kdkdd instead? Sounds more fitting to the song.
00:48:497 (242,243,244,245,246) - ^
00:50:330 (253) - Finisher here maybe?
00:57:830 (298,299,300,301,302,303,304) - That works better as kkddkkd, song- and play-wise.

DakeDekaane

osu! Alumni

3,500 posts

Joined February 2012

DakeDekaane 2014-11-23T01:52:01+00:00

Hi, sorry for the late, but I'm already here.

Probably it'll overlap with mods above.

[General]

I don't want to be a party pooper, but you're using in a wrong way the sliderslide hitsound, it should be a continuous sound, not to be used as a custom slidertick. How to do the same? Use tickrate 2, lower the volume for the unwanted ticks and let the custom slidertick hitsound where you want to have it. You can also silence the sliderticks this way, but I'd suggest to change the custom sliderslide for the soft-sliderslide in the default skin.j

[

Easy]

[

Normal]

[

Hard]

[

Insane]
00:00:497 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - Uh, I'm not really sure what to say here, it's just annoying to read and it's worse as there's no musical intro to give the timing to hit them properly, making it really frustrating to play.
00:02:997 (6) - Vocals end on the white tick so yeah, better ending the slider there.
00:04:997 (3) - ^
00:07:831 (1,2) - It's really weird you only have a 3/4 slider here and not in the resto of this part, better making this a 1/1 slider for consistency.
00:21:414 (2) - Removing this note would allow you to follow the vocals clearer.
00:23:331 (5) - This is quite misleading as the slider points to the bottom, but the next slider is like "nope, you're going to the top", idk if you could adjust this.
00:36:997 (3,4) - This is really disruptive considering the previous rhythm patterns, either a 1/1 slider or two circles would work better.
00:37:664 (1) - I think you should split this in two circles, as it feels really weird to not begin the rhythm in 00:37:830 - by not clicking, as it's a really strong beat.
00:45:164 (1,2) - Same as in 00:45:164 (1,2) - , this time a 1/1 slider is better here.
00:50:331 (1,2) - ^
00:51:664 (1,2) - ^ And probably the rest of these 3/4 slider+circle patterns in the difficulty.
00:57:497 (2) - Make this a 1/2 beat slider, the pause will allow to begin the stream better and won't make players rage because they break their combo with a gimmick technique, considering we have a higher difficulty.
01:10:997 (3) - Probably change it for a triple in 1/4, as it's the same sound as in 01:09:664 (4,5,6) -
01:14:164 (2) - This could be prettier by avoiding the extremes to overlap and making the inside of the curve more visible, not exactly like in the screen, it'd need to be rotated a bit, but it gives the idea.

01:27:747 (1) - Don't you think the spinner is really short? Auto barely reaches the 1000 bonus points.

[

Revolution]
00:00:497 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - eeh, I really find this bad to play, as there's no musical intro to give the timing for these notes, leaving them to mere luck.
01:04:164 (3,1,1) - Shouldn't this be better as single circles? I get the intention, but I think mapping the fading noises isn't really a nice approach.
01:11:080 - There should be a note here for the drums you followed in 01:09:664 (2,3,4) -
01:27:747 (1) - Don't you think the spinner is really short? Auto barely reaches the 1000 bonus points.

There's some extended sliders that are very awkward to play, as there's no hold in the music, note that I'm not being picky about them, just pointing those which I think are not really good.
00:01:164 (1) - Here the vocals stops in the white tick, so this should be a 1/1 slider.
00:16:997 (1) - This feels weird passing over a beat and ending in nothing.
00:19:664 (1) - ^
00:27:664 (1) - ^
00:30:331 (1) - ^
00:34:997 (5,6,3,4) - Why are these different? Doesn't they represent the same sound?
00:46:664 (2) - This would probably be better as a 1/1 slider, as it's actually ignoring the vocals in that beat.

There's also a few triples that are literally on nothing, but I guess you won't change them even if I say that. I know you're putting them to "complement" certain beats, but sometimes they do the opposite, like 00:32:747 (7,2) - , the triples are very intrusive and doesn't let the "true beats" 00:32:831 (8,3) - to be emphasized nicely, refer to 00:21:331 (2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3) - , this works better and doesn't have any triple, and it's almost the same rhythm if not the same. Same for 01:12:081 (2,5) -

I'll continue modding the rest later.

wcx19911123

3,862 posts

Joined June 2010

Topic Starter

wcx19911123 2014-11-23T09:59:33+00:00

DakeDekaane

DakeDekaane wrote:
[General]
I don't want to be a party pooper, but you're using in a wrong way the sliderslide hitsound, it should be a continuous sound, not to be used as a custom slidertick. How to do the same? Use tickrate 2, lower the volume for the unwanted ticks and let the custom slidertick hitsound where you want to have it. You can also silence the sliderticks this way, but I'd suggest to change the custom sliderslide for the soft-sliderslide in the default skin.j
since sliderslide and slidertick can't be silenced together, I don't want to use higher tick rate to use ticks to follow the song, or the excess ticks which don't follow the song would sound a bit crowded and random, the feeling is not good imo

[ Easy]

[ Normal]

[ Hard]

[ Revolution]
00:00:497 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - eeh, I really find this bad to play, as there's no musical intro to give the timing for these notes, leaving them to mere luck.
I don't think they play bad.. and retrying at song's beginning won't make people annoyed imo, especially when the objects follow the song accurately
01:04:164 (3,1,1) - Shouldn't this be better as single circles? I get the intention, but I think mapping the fading noises isn't really a nice approach.
putting single circle makes me feel that the part is really empty, so I changed them into sliders to following the fading sounds
01:11:080 - There should be a note here for the drums you followed in 01:09:664 (2,3,4) -
well the drums are the same but the vocal isn't. 01:09:664 (2,3,4,5) - there's 3 heavy sounds(01:09:663 - 01:09:830 - 01:09:997 - ) in vocal at this part and the heaviest one is at 01:09:997 - ; but 01:10:831 (3,4) - there's only 2 heavy sounds(01:10:830 - 01:11:163 - ) in vocal and the heaviest one is at 01:11:163 - . so I did triple clicks at the first part but didn't do it at the second one, I'm not only mapping the drums but also the vocal. that's the reason why I used different rhythm here, to follow the difference in the song with different rhythm
01:27:747 (1) - Don't you think the spinner is really short? Auto barely reaches the 1000 bonus points.
yes, I have to follow the song exactly so it's short. but I don't think it's hard to play for those ones who can pass the diff(or at least can meet this spinner), people maybe can't get 1000 bonus here, but they can hardly break combo here

There's some extended sliders that are very awkward to play, as there's no hold in the music, note that I'm not being picky about them, just pointing those which I think are not really good.
00:01:164 (1) - Here the vocals stops in the white tick, so this should be a 1/1 slider.
well.. vocal stopped there indeed, but not all tracks in the song stopped there. I can't tell what the musical instrument is but there's sound continued to 00:01:664 - indeed
00:16:997 (1) - This feels weird passing over a beat and ending in nothing.
the vocal doesn't stopped at 00:17:164 - suddenly imo, I can hear the fading sound being continued to 00:17:330 -
00:19:664 (1) - ^
00:27:664 (1) - ^
00:30:331 (1) - ^
00:34:997 (5,6,3,4) - Why are these different? Doesn't they represent the same sound?
they look the same but they're different indeed in any other ways. the reason why I did this is for a better playing feeling. you can see 00:34:497 (3,4,5,6) - and 00:35:664 (1,2,3,4) - these 2 patterns, they're very similar but the rhythm of the circles are much different. to keep the spacing balance, I have to make the spacing between 00:35:664 (1,2) - much larger, so I can't use slow-down sliders for 00:36:331 (3,4) - or the jump between them is impossible to play.. anyway, making the 2 groups of sliders look the same is necessary imo
00:46:664 (2) - This would probably be better as a 1/1 slider, as it's actually ignoring the vocals in that beat.
umm, in fact I ignored the vocal here but used slider heads to follow the heavy drums sound instead. since the drums are the mostly audible sounds here, it's not bad to do this imo

There's also a few triples that are literally on nothing, but I guess you won't change them even if I say that. I know you're putting them to "complement" certain beats, but sometimes they do the opposite, like 00:32:747 (7,2) - , the triples are very intrusive and doesn't let the "true beats" 00:32:831 (8,3) - to be emphasized nicely, refer to 00:21:331 (2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3) - , this works better and doesn't have any triple, and it's almost the same rhythm if not the same. Same for 01:12:081 (2,5) -
umm, I don't know why it's bad to map differently in same parts in the song.. my thought is that the part at 00:21:331 (2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3) - is a bit more calm than the other 2 parts in the song. objectively speaking, my thought maybe not the truth, but the finally effect isn't that bad imo. or the map might plays a bit boring, lacks of diversification or creativity imo

I'll continue modding the rest later.
waiting it

thanks for your modding
but hope you won't mind my declining mostly of them orz. however, I explained my reasons in detail, hope you can accept them

stu00608

146 posts

Joined October 2012

stu00608 2014-11-23T16:43:56+00:00

Stefan wrote:
Alright, let us see if they're finally ready.

[Muzukashii]
00:04:664 (12,13) - I'd recommend to swap them. It's an eaiser way to follow kdk dkd kdk than kdk dkd dkk. Beside of this 00:04:830 sounds deeper than 00:04:664 and if you really want to keep these hitsounds then I'd suggest to follow this.
00:15:830 (30,31,32,33) - This follows the background music better: http://puu.sh/d12HV/0923d191ab.jpg
00:21:330 (50) - I'd leave some room here to be not overchallenged with the current pattern, remove this note.
00:29:497 (25) - This pattern combo is quite long and you should leave some time to rest, remove this note.
00:31:997 (37) - Same like 00:21:330 (50), especially after the Don triplet.
00:42:830 (80) - Remove? I'd find it pretty good in the flow and making a break here.
00:48:330 (5) - I would emphasize 00:48:164 (4) more because of the Beat in the music, the vocal here isn't really determining here. Remove this note.
00:58:967 (52) - tbh I would suggest doing the same like the previous suggestion. Even when there is no really significant beat I think it sounds better without this note.
01:01:997 (65,66) - Same thing like 00:04:664 (12,13).
01:13:330 (112) - Same reason like 00:42:830 (80).
01:19:997 (24) - There should be some rest time so please consider to remove this note.

[Oni]
00:07:664 (7) - This is nonsense to have this note as d while the last two previous notes were k. Either do kkddkkddk or kkddkkkkk.
00:37:830 (173,174,175,176,177) - kdkdd instead? Sounds more fitting to the song.
00:48:497 (242,243,244,245,246) - ^
00:50:330 (253) - Finisher here maybe?
00:57:830 (298,299,300,301,302,303,304) - That works better as kkddkkd, song- and play-wise.

sorry late reply qwq
almost fixed but somewhere I retain my set ~
thanks your mod !!

Stefan

Global Moderator

10,393 posts

Joined January 2011

Stefan 2014-11-23T21:26:22+00:00

I have problems with the Timing. The problem is that the Barlines are wrong placed due metronom:

I don't really know if this can be solved without messing up everything else but I will ask if that is possible. Beside of this:
00:58:798 - In both Taiko Difficulties: Please activate for this red line the option "Omit first bar line", see screenshot how to find: http://puu.sh/d2LYM/d269b3bd3c.png

If I get confirmation that the timing can stay then I will give the icon.

Kotone

2,402 posts

Joined August 2008

Kotone 2014-11-24T11:23:33+00:00

SPOILER

smallboat wrote:
[Kotone's Insane]
[notice]
00:02:331 (4) - This a downbeat vocal,add a NC here? ok
00:37:497 (5) - Feel miss a vocal,suggest add a note here? (I think will be played better.) no.I want to follow drum here~
00:59:052 (4) - Sounds like there is no stream at this here,remove this note?
umm...cant see any difference,no.

DakeDekaane wrote:
[ Insane]
00:00:497 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - Uh, I'm not really sure what to say here, it's just annoying to read and it's worse as there's no musical intro to give the timing to hit them properly, making it really frustrating to play. well...i think it's fine for almost players.
00:02:997 (6) - Vocals end on the white tick so yeah, better ending the slider there. umm...there are no difference if i ending it on white tick imo.
00:04:997 (3) - ^
00:07:831 (1,2) - It's really weird you only have a 3/4 slider here and not in the resto of this part, better making this a 1/1 slider for consistency. Sorry but...It's fine for me.
00:21:414 (2) - Removing this note would allow you to follow the vocals clearer. ok~
00:23:331 (5) - This is quite misleading as the slider points to the bottom, but the next slider is like "nope, you're going to the top", idk if you could adjust this. oh...it's my mistake.Fixed it.
00:36:997 (3,4) - This is really disruptive considering the previous rhythm patterns, either a 1/1 slider or two circles would work better. Sorry but i dont think so...it's ok for me
00:37:664 (1) - I think you should split this in two circles, as it feels really weird to not begin the rhythm in 00:37:830 - by not clicking, as it's a really strong beat. Great suggestion.Changed it already
00:45:164 (1,2) - Same as in 00:45:164 (1,2) - , this time a 1/1 slider is better here. same.
00:50:331 (1,2) - ^
00:51:664 (1,2) - ^ And probably the rest of these 3/4 slider+circle patterns in the difficulty.
00:57:497 (2) - Make this a 1/2 beat slider, the pause will allow to begin the stream better and won't make players rage because they break their combo with a gimmick technique, considering we have a higher difficulty. ok.
01:10:997 (3) - Probably change it for a triple in 1/4, as it's the same sound as in 01:09:664 (4,5,6) - umm...vocal is stronger than the drums here,no.
01:14:164 (2) - This could be prettier by avoiding the extremes to overlap and making the inside of the curve more visible, not exactly like in the screen, it'd need to be rotated a bit, but it gives the idea. well...i want to make it like a cirle...

01:27:747 (1) - Don't you think the spinner is really short? Auto barely reaches the 1000 bonus points. ummmmm.....changed it to a slider

Also fixed some mod in page3,thanks for modding & sorry for being late.
http://puu.sh/d3vSg/3a03b2eca4.txt

Momochikun

1,927 posts

Joined October 2012

Momochikun 2014-11-24T22:12:18+00:00

Fixed both, thanks !

wcx add video for me pls ww

SPOILER

osu file format v13

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[Editor]
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Title:Gimme! Revolution
TitleUnicode:ギミー！レボリューション
Artist:Uchida Maaya
ArtistUnicode:内田真礼
Creator:wcx19911123
Version:Mochi's Normal
Source:俺、ツインテールになります。
Tags:Ore, Twintail ni Narimasu. Gonna be the Twin-Tails!! OreTwi TV Size opening Momochikun stu00608 Kotone karenying
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418,284,46664,2,0,P|362:290|307:299,1,112,8|2,3:2|0:1,0:0:0:0:
251,313,47164,6,0,P|181:324|127:330,2,112,8|2|8,3:2|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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103,236,87664,1,4,0:0:0:0:

DakeDekaane

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DakeDekaane 2014-11-24T23:43:36+00:00

Continuing in other post.

[

Easy]
This difficulty was really weird, and replying what I said about the sliderslide here (besides being used incorrectly), I don't blame you, song isn't made for a cheesy Easy, rhythm is fine, but there's still the hitsounding. Personally I feel weird you hitsounding almost for drums exclusively but mapping a mix of vocals and instrumentals, although hitsounding makes sense, it doesn't give a nice feeling while playing.
Specially in 00:59:136 (2,3,4,1,2,3) - where drums are stronger than vocals. Custom sliderslide is really disruptive as it is stronger than the notes where the player is supposed to hit, I'd suggest to do a rhythm based on drums here, that or change a bit the hitsounding.

00:17:664 (3) - Considering you vocals are dominant here you could try beginning this 1/2 later, making it a 3/2 slider.
00:28:164 (3) - ^
00:37:664 (2) - Here the rhythm is a bit awkward as you pass over strong beats, yes, I get you're mapping vocals and said beat has a hitsound, but it should be clicked instead.

[

Normal]
00:20:164 (4) - 00:30:997 (4) - This music is almost the same here yet rhythm is different, although you probably wanted variety, if that's the case, add a hitsound in the start of 00:30:997 (4) - , it feels really empty.
00:48:997 - Start the kiai here, as the beat is stronger here.
01:18:997 (6) - Again, a hitsound should be in the beginning of this slider.

[

Hard]
I'm just annoyed by jumps like 00:03:664 (1,2,3) - , they make sense but they look a bit messy, maybe just my personal rant, so don't mind me too much.
00:59:645 (1,2) - A bit weird having to release in a strong vocal (01:00:153 - ), you should use a 1/1 slider + a circle here. Also, I don't think using extended sliders is a good idea in a Hard.
01:00:997 (1,2) - ^
01:04:997 (1,2) - ^
01:04:997 (1,3) - Similar here, but 1/2 slider would fit better here.
01:11:664 (1,3) - Would it be possible to avoid this overlap? Looks a bit ugly imo.
01:23:664 (1,2,3) - This one doesn't look bad, but would be nice to avoid.
This diff was really good, except by these details I pointed.

[

Taiko]
00:48:997 - I think kiai should start here.

That'd be all from my part I think. Good luck.

wcx19911123

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wcx19911123 2014-11-25T08:45:21+00:00

DakeDekaane

DakeDekaane wrote:
[ Easy]
This difficulty was really weird, and replying what I said about the sliderslide here (besides being used incorrectly), I don't blame you, song isn't made for a cheesy Easy, rhythm is fine, but there's still the hitsounding. Personally I feel weird you hitsounding almost for drums exclusively but mapping a mix of vocals and instrumentals, although hitsounding makes sense, it doesn't give a nice feeling while playing.
Specially in 00:59:136 (2,3,4,1,2,3) - where drums are stronger than vocals. Custom sliderslide is really disruptive as it is stronger than the notes where the player is supposed to hit, I'd suggest to do a rhythm based on drums here, that or change a bit the hitsounding.
I still don't know why following different tracks in the song with different stuffs(objects or hitsounds) is bad.. they fit the song and read/play easily. I might fix the file's volume and the rhythm of 00:59:984 (3,4,1) - later, but I really want to keep the rest

00:17:664 (3) - Considering you vocals are dominant here you could try beginning this 1/2 later, making it a 3/2 slider.
I think you are mentioning 00:17:497 (3) - this slider here, right? for that one, I'd like to follow the drum for the slider head
00:28:164 (3) - ^
same as before
00:37:664 (2) - Here the rhythm is a bit awkward as you pass over strong beats, yes, I get you're mapping vocals and said beat has a hitsound, but it should be clicked instead.
on the top of all, I'm following the heaviest beats here indeed, not those weaker ones(vocal here is stronger than the drums imo). in addition, this part is a bit more quiet than the next part(00:39:831 (1,2,3) - ), so I don't want to use complex rhythm here

[ Hard]
I'm just annoyed by jumps like 00:03:664 (1,2,3) - , they make sense but they look a bit messy, maybe just my personal rant, so don't mind me too much.
this kind of jumps are totally fine imo
00:59:645 (1,2) - A bit weird having to release in a strong vocal (01:00:153 - ), you should use a 1/1 slider + a circle here. Also, I don't think using extended sliders is a good idea in a Hard.
the reason is that there's a heavy beat(vocal) at 00:59:645 - but nothing at 00:59:814 - , and after these another heavy beat is coming at 00:59:984 - . if I use 1/2 beats instead, following nothing at 00:59:814 - is not that good; or if I use a 1/1 slider and a circle instead, then the slider end is following the heavy beat at 00:59:984 - , it's not good either(circles and sldier heads fit the heavy beats better than slider repeats or ends)
01:00:997 (1,2) - ^ same as before
01:04:997 (1,2) - ^ ^
01:04:997 (1,3) - Similar here, but 1/2 slider would fit better here. ^, 1/2 beats won't fit better, there's nothing at 01:05:163 -
01:11:664 (1,3) - Would it be possible to avoid this overlap? Looks a bit ugly imo.
01:23:664 (1,2,3) - This one doesn't look bad, but would be nice to avoid.
uh, the jump would be much larger if I avoid the overlapping with keeping the current flow, it's too hard to play imo
This diff was really good, except by these details I pointed.
thanks

updated all diffs
to stu00608: I fixed the barline stuffs that mentioned by Stefan at here

edit: got a part of mod from Konei to the Revolution diff

SPOILER

01:37 wcx19911123: hello o.o
01:39 Konei: hey there
01:39 wcx19911123: how are you o.o?
01:39 Konei: studying hard but I'm good, how about you?
01:40 wcx19911123: fine in overall, but a bit sleepy now :p
01:41 Konei: so how can I help ypu?
01:41 Konei: you*
01:41 wcx19911123: just want to see if you still remember my request, like about 3 weeks ago o.o
01:42 Konei: hm
01:42 wcx19911123: you said you need to clear tickets first at that time, so I wait for a long time till now
01:42 Konei: how about irc?
01:42 wcx19911123: oh, fine
01:42 Konei: im kinda exhausted
01:42 Konei: link me please
01:43 *wcx19911123 is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/527033 Uchida Maaya - Gimme! Revolution]
01:43 wcx19911123: this one
01:45 wcx19911123: there're some guest diffs in the set, so I think I need to take the mods down :p
01:46 Konei: hm?
01:47 wcx19911123: I mean I need to pass the mods to guest mappers if we did irc modding here. it's not a big deal anyway, no worry
01:48 *Konei is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/527033 Uchida Maaya - Gimme! Revolution [Revolution]]
01:49 Konei: 00:03:331 (4,5,6) - why is the spacing so low here even though the drums are that strong?
01:49 wcx19911123: isn't it a stack o.o?
01:50 Konei: i mean
01:50 Konei: 3 to 4 5 and 6
01:50 wcx19911123: ah, I got it, you want a jump between 3 and 4 right?
01:51 Konei: yeah kinda
01:51 Konei: 00:13:664 (2,4
01:51 Konei: 00:13:664 (2,3) - this rhythm doesnt make sense to me here
01:52 Konei: 00:15:414 (4,5) - weird spacing, would have thought of this as 1/2
01:52 wcx19911123: it's a slider following the fading sound of vocal
01:54 Konei: 00:34:997 (5,6) - NC since there's a slowdown?
01:55 Konei: 00:39:664 (4) - dont see why is this 1/4 I dont here any sound here
01:56 Konei: 00:56:997 (1) - why is this 3/4 instead of 1/1?
01:57 wcx19911123: 00:14:997 (3,4) - 00:34:997 (5,6) - fixed
01:58 Konei: 01:04:080 (2) - I would like that better if you removed this note, those drum notes will have a better emphasis
01:58 Konei: 01:05:414 (2) - also this note doesn't feel natural to me
02:00 wcx19911123: umm, the extra rhythms fit the song well imo..
02:01 Konei: 01:10:330 (1,2) - again, why is this 3/4?
02:01 Konei: eh, but why?
02:01 Konei: I dont get them
02:01 wcx19911123: slider head and circle fit the heavy beats much better than slider repeat or ends
02:01 wcx19911123: this is the main point why I did that
02:02 Konei: why not using 1/2, then?
02:03 wcx19911123: cuz there's nothng really need to follow at the middle of the 1/1 beats..
02:03 wcx19911123: in this kind of case, I usually use 4/3 slider + sth
02:04 Konei: 01:27:747 (1) - this spinner is far too short its just depressing so might want to replace it by a slowdown slider
02:05 wcx19911123: ok..
02:05 wcx19911123: would fix that
02:05 wcx19911123: (personally I still think spinner fit better orz
02:06 Konei: but i think its just too sudden and too short for such an exhausting map
02:07 Konei: I'll check the other difficulties later and post then
02:07 wcx19911123: k, thanks

fixed: 00:15:414 (4,5) - normalized spacing, 00:34:997 (5,6) - added NC, 01:27:747 (1) - changed spinner to slider; kept the rest stuffs, and updated the diff

Last edited by wcx19911123 2014-11-26T05:00:21+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

Stefan

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Stefan 2014-11-25T20:17:09+00:00

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smallboat

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smallboat 2014-11-30T12:45:53+00:00

Sorry late come,it still looks fine to me.

by Stefan

So,
Bubbled!

Shohei Ohtani

Shohei Ohtani 2014-11-30T19:32:42+00:00

Give me Revolution, or give me death.

qoot8123

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qoot8123 2014-12-01T02:27:14+00:00

CDFA wrote:
Give me Revolution, or give me death.

Hope it will not the latter one

xxdeathx

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xxdeathx 2014-12-01T02:33:03+00:00

CDFA wrote:
Give me Revolution, or give me death.

I'm here.

CDFGimme! Gimme! Gimme! Revolution

Shad0w1and

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Shad0w1and 2014-12-02T02:46:32+00:00

先留名等rank

sewe21

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sewe21 2014-12-02T16:56:59+00:00

Omg I'm trying to not play this until it gets ranked but it is so hard! I want it noow!!

Umi

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Umi 2014-12-05T01:20:12+00:00

placeholder~ ~~i'll edit this post tomorrow~~. Delayed cuz of trouble irl.

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xxdeathx

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xxdeathx 2014-12-05T09:24:11+00:00

you should add a gif to creator's words xD

Aka

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Aka 2014-12-11T23:20:26+00:00

okay, lets try

general

・that thingy about previewpoint i told u ingame
・having sliderslide hitsound on an active slidertick is pretty strange, mind adding soft-slidertick and use them eхactly for sliderticks? cause i saw youve been using that sliderslide to follow those music beats
・what about to align the diff settings by highering OD in mochi's normal to 4,0 and lowering to 6 in hard? so it will be 2,0 -> 4,0 -> 6,0 -> 7,0 -> 8,2
・the first timing poing feels slightly late, i can clearly hear it 00:09:830 (5) - 00:10:664 - 00:12:747 (6) - at such places

easy

・00:37:664 (2) - it felts kinda awkward to click on this slider, cause it started on the ending part of phrase and you keep holding the button during this moment while new one also appears, so this slider combines end of 1st and all 2nd vocal part, what is really feels pretty awkward. i tried to make something there to make this part more comfortable to play and got something like this:

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this way the 1st prase will end with one object and 2nd will start eхactly from the new one

mochi's

・00:08:997 (1,2) - i cant really understand why do you have circle there 00:09:831 (2) - if you ingored sound like that neхt. you have the same music part at the very end there 01:15:664 (3,4) - , rhythm which you did perfectly suits the beat, so could you use the same thing at the beginning as well? finishing slider on red tick, adding 1/2 slider after and deleting that circle which i mentioned above
・00:14:331 (4) - 00:40:997 (4) -

・00:20:164 (4) - that slider felt strange here cause the vocal part starts from the middle of slider and you were following mostly vocals with also miхed beats and actually were doing it pretty good untill this place and after this place. so, i tried to think over this place, how to make this part be more comfortable and come to something like this:

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try this out and tell me what do you think

hard

・00:05:997 - this slidertick is barely hearable due to loud vocals etc, i doubt you need this greenline to silence it D:
・00:36:831 (4) - this circle is really easy to misread as 1/4. i understand that slowdown part but this really may confuse players when to click and eхactly did the same with me. so, i'd recommend you to either space it so visually it would be clear for everyone or delete it, since you didnt place a circle 00:35:497 - there

kotone's

・00:29:831 (3,4) - the flow breaks there ;w; could you rotate it a bit to the right to make the movement be more slight?

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http://puu.sh/dqOqK/7328ea3aa9.jpg

・00:53:164 (1,2) - at least mark it with NC, cause the SV change combined with 1/4 jump like that is really uneхpected and lots of sliderbreaks will be there
・00:52:664 (5,6,7,8,9,10) - starting a stream on those controversial sounds is a kind of questionable things as for me, i can understand that you maybe tried to map every sound there but this part is weird to click.. though i have no suggestions, but you could make something similar to wcх's diff. didnt really enjoy playing a bit amount of 01:18:331 (1,2) - eхtended sliders like these too though

revolution

・00:08:081 (2) - any reason for a circle? while i was testplaying it, this part felt really uncomfortable for me and after looking in editor with 25% playback i actually hear nothing for what an object could stand for. yeah, i know that sometimes placing objects on a place where nothing actually works when placing it in the right time, but this is not that moment, as i feel

mm, all i could suggest is to remove that circle and move the slider a bit before. though you have more natural rhythm at the end.. 01:14:497 (1,2) -

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・and as in kotone's diff i didnt really enjoy playing 00:16:997 (1,2) - 00:19:664 (1,2) - 00:32:997 (1,2,3) - these places etc, also 00:34:997 (1,2,1) - this were reeeally forced and uneхpectable >_<
・01:13:831 (4) - you could highlight this ~~cute~~ part with nc, so it would be a hint to that 1/4 transition

oooooverall i dont feel like setting a heart icon there, maybe you could ask smallboat for a rebubb or someone else to push it further if they feel like it ;_;

wcx19911123

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wcx19911123 2014-12-12T15:37:28+00:00

Aka

Aka wrote:
general

・that thingy about previewpoint i told u ingame
fixed
・having sliderslide hitsound on an active slidertick is pretty strange, mind adding soft-slidertick and use them eхactly for sliderticks? cause i saw youve been using that sliderslide to follow those music beats
the both way work the same, but the tick sounds would be randomly and mess if I use higher tickrate.. so I'd like to keep the current stuffs
・what about to align the diff settings by highering OD in mochi's normal to 4,0 and lowering to 6 in hard? so it will be 2,0 -> 4,0 -> 6,0 -> 7,0 -> 8,2
OD 6.5 for Hard is fine imo.. I'll see whether mochi would change it
・the first timing poing feels slightly late, i can clearly hear it 00:09:830 (5) - 00:10:664 - 00:12:747 (6) - at such places
in fact the timing was checked by some members, and I finally added the second red section at that time. so I think the current timing should be fine cuz they did check the part you mentioned

easy

・00:37:664 (2) - it felts kinda awkward to click on this slider, cause it started on the ending part of phrase and you keep holding the button during this moment while new one also appears, so this slider combines end of 1st and all 2nd vocal part, what is really feels pretty awkward. i tried to make something there to make this part more comfortable to play and got something like this:
fixed in another way
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this way the 1st prase will end with one object and 2nd will start eхactly from the new one

hard

・00:05:997 - this slidertick is barely hearable due to loud vocals etc, i doubt you need this greenline to silence it D:
I can't hear anything but only the reverberation of the vocal at 00:05:997 - . I don't think it's good for a tick to follow the reverberation..
・00:36:831 (4) - this circle is really easy to misread as 1/4. i understand that slowdown part but this really may confuse players when to click and eхactly did the same with me. so, i'd recommend you to either space it so visually it would be clear for everyone or delete it, since you didnt place a circle 00:35:497 - there
fixed

revolution

・00:08:081 (2) - any reason for a circle? while i was testplaying it, this part felt really uncomfortable for me and after looking in editor with 25% playback i actually hear nothing for what an object could stand for. yeah, i know that sometimes placing objects on a place where nothing actually works when placing it in the right time, but this is not that moment, as i feel mm, all i could suggest is to remove that circle and move the slider a bit before. though you have more natural rhythm at the end.. 01:14:497 (1,2) -
actually the note is following nothing, but I don't think it is wired to play. conversely I think it fits the song as being a nice transition to nect part
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・and as in kotone's diff i didnt really enjoy playing 00:16:997 (1,2) - 00:19:664 (1,2) - 00:32:997 (1,2,3) - these places etc, also 00:34:997 (1,2,1) - this were reeeally forced and uneхpectable >_<
I think you're talkin about 3/4 sliders here. 3/4 are odd to play only when they don't follow the song well. but in this case, I think they are fine cuz they are not following nothing here
・01:13:831 (4) - you could highlight this ~~cute~~ part with nc, so it would be a hint to that 1/4 transition
uh.. don't see any difference after fixing

thanks for modding

updated my diffs

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Momochikun

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Momochikun 2014-12-14T11:43:49+00:00

Fixed stuffs except the last one, i find it more catchy just to follow the drum ><
Thanks

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Source:俺、ツインテールになります。
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wcx19911123

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wcx19911123 2014-12-15T14:26:34+00:00

Kotone is not free atm so she allowed me to reply. I fixed only 00:29:831 (3,4) - for her, the others seems are not that critical
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Aka

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Aka 2014-12-15T17:40:11+00:00

i tried to keep that mod "short" and mention only things which were really bothering me.. so i dont really see what to recheck there since all i wanted to change is already written above but it wasnt applied,though

so i am really not confident with doing something more there, since i dont feel like it, man ._.

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