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ramix57
Nice map))
dreamkiller_old
Не поверите, насколько я рад русскоязычной песне *.*
Жаль только не понравилась х_х
Наличие нормала.. тоже не поверите, насколько я рад xD
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IceBeam
Спасибо всем за звёзды

Дрима,это под настроение :3

у тебя большая радость,так что и понятно)
Card N'FoRcE
Hi.

- General:
  • Timing: i think BPM: 136,000; offset: 21860 is better. After fixing that remember to go to "Timing - Resnap All Notes" and recheck carefully that everything is ok.
    Remove the comas from the tags, use spaces between words: "rus provoda sadkangaroo"
    You may consider adding a Preview Time from "Timing - Set Current Position as Preview"
- Normal:
  • .Opinions:
    Some little inconsistencies, but everithing is readable
    .Suggestions:
    00:59:800 (2) - allign under 00:58:918 (1)?
- Hard:
  • .Opinions:
    Circle Size +1 or +2? They're so big now.
    .Suggestions:
    00:35:093 (4) - sounds weird. A Simple repetition of a 1/2 slider sounds better imho
    00:42:373 (3) - ^
    00:49:432 (5) - ? oh well, this is intentional, so that's your choice, i won't point them out anymore.
    01:01:786 (6) - allign better?
    01:13:037 (1) - cruel. It's a new combo but the spacing is really misreadable. move farther please
    01:17:890 (3) - allign? just place it again, it will be automatically alligned
    02:05:982 (5) - move farther or use a new combo.
    02:46:132 (7) - add a finish hitsounds at the end of the slider?
Not bad for a first map.
Ask for some more modding and then ask me for a recheck: we can consider protobubbling.

EDIT: also, if the map is completed, move it to Pending Beatmaps (you can do that when sumbitting, look at the top-right of the window)
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IceBeam
Hi there,CNF

Card N'FoRcE wrote:

  • You may consider adding a Preview Time from "Timing - Set Current Position as Preview"
I'll check for any other preview points,but so far it sounds good to me,but who knows,may be i'll find a better one.

Card N'FoRcE wrote:

  • Opinions:
    Circle Size +1 or +2? They're so big now.
Yeah,a bit =p It's +2,but i really wanted to make a relaxing map.I need some experience to do some quality nerding maps,so i think i won't change circle size.


And I am looking forward for some new diffs. or any other fixes,so it's a bit raw atm for moving to Pendings.

And thanks a lot for modding.I'll pm you for rechecking after fixing.
Segnaless
Тримай зiрку :3
Topic Starter
IceBeam

Segnaless wrote:

Тримай зiрку :3
Спасибо :3
[DBF]
Скажу только одно:

Для первой мапы, это очень хорошо, я обычно люблю придираться к чему-то, но это правда ок, я надеюсь тебе хватит терпения довести это до ранкеда, удачи.

Irc mod.
Topic Starter
IceBeam

[DBF] wrote:

Скажу только одно:

Для первой мапы, это очень хорошо, я обычно люблю придираться к чему-то, но это правда ок, я надеюсь тебе хватит терпения довести это до ранкеда, удачи.
Спасибо большое,и за звезду и за пост.
orioncomet
[General]
- If "Poholodalo" on your Source was from Album's name delete it and add to TAG
Recent rules
Album Title doesn't belong in "Source" field, and other tips
- Tag: russian || I know What does "rus" mean but add russian too maybe better? idk
- Delete "provoda" from Tag Because It was already on Artist, I don't know If It's Album's name or version or something else then fine
- If possible delete '.osb' file and full submit again, In fact It don't need but If you can
- Set a Preview po.. oh, I just see on above post

[Hard]
Where is the BG =o=
- Hitcircles SO big O_O..
- Overall difficulty +1 or 2?

Someone told me This's your first maps, And I just want to say It's not bad, Then Goodluck :3
Star ~
Topic Starter
IceBeam

orioncomet wrote:

[General]
- If "Poholodalo" on your Source was from Album's name delete it and add to TAG
Recent rules
Album Title doesn't belong in "Source" field, and other tips
- Tag: russian || I know What does "rus" mean but add russian too maybe better? idk
- Delete "provoda" from Tag Because It was already on Artist, I don't know If It's Album's name or version or something else then fine
- If possible delete '.osb' file and full submit again, In fact It don't need but If you can
- Set a Preview po.. oh, I just see on above post

[Hard]
Where is the BG =o=
- Hitcircles SO big O_O..
- Overall difficulty +1 or 2?

Someone told me This's your first maps, And I just want to say It's not bad, Then Goodluck :3
Star ~

Thanks for star and posting.Yes,ok,i'll change the source,and etc.

I really got big probs with BG.When I am trying to submit it with different BGs, the second one dissapears(depends on which diff. you are trying to submit).If someone can tell me how to fix this bug,please post or PM.
orioncomet
Add your BG in the folder/diff again, If you use different about BG on other diff When you uploadding, osu! will ask you like this



pass [No] If you don't want to delete them And Full submit again
Topic Starter
IceBeam

orioncomet wrote:

Add your BG in the folder/diff again, If you use different about BG on other diff When you uploadding, osu! will ask you like this

[attachment=0:564b5]bgbg.jpg[/attachment:564b5]

pass [No] If you don't want to delete them And Full submit again
yay,thanks! :lol: I've tried this before(i thought i did everything i could imagine to overcome this),but it didn't help actually.Idk why..anyway,now it's fixed.

~kudosu
Derfas13
Topic Starter
IceBeam

Derfas13 wrote:

HitSounds suggestion.

Nice work,Derf,thanks a lot!

~kudosu
Mafiamaster
[Overall things]
  1. You'll need an easier difficulty. Preferably below a 3.00 star rating.
  2. You need a "hitcircleoverlay.png" as well.
  3. Yeah, don't add your own name to the tags.
  4. What's with the "star.png"? That's only used for the song selection screen. Delete it.
[Normal]
  1. Don't be lazy. Map the whole song. You need an easier difficulty anyways.
[Hard]
  1. You have too many Kiai Time fountains placed throughout this map. The worst part is that they pop up randomly.
  2. 00:42:373 (3) - Snap this slider on 1/4 ticks instead of 1/6 ticks.
  3. 00:49:432 (5) - Same concept as above. ^
  4. 01:05:977 (1) - Mirror this horizontally with 4.
  5. 01:06:860 (3) - Mirror this horizontally with 2.
  6. 03:16:575 (1,2) - Move farther from 3 from the previous combo.
Topic Starter
IceBeam

Mafiamaster wrote:

[Overall things]
  1. You'll need an easier difficulty. Preferably below a 3.00 star rating.
  2. You need a "hitcircleoverlay.png" as well.
  3. Yeah, don't add your own name to the tags.
  4. What's with the "star.png"? That's only used for the song selection screen. Delete it.
[Normal]
  1. Don't be lazy. Map the whole song. You need an easier difficulty anyways.
[Hard]
  1. You have too many Kiai Time fountains placed throughout this map. The worst part is that they pop up randomly.
  2. 00:42:373 (3) - Snap this slider on 1/4 ticks instead of 1/6 ticks.
  3. 00:49:432 (5) - Same concept as above. ^
  4. 01:05:977 (1) - Mirror this horizontally with 4.
  5. 01:06:860 (3) - Mirror this horizontally with 2.
  6. 03:16:575 (1,2) - Move farther from 3 from the previous combo.
Thanks for starring and modding.Looking forward for a big job =.=

Kudosu~
Derfas13
Easy difficulty for you =)

Download: Provoda - Pro Kino (SadKangaroo) [Derfas13's Easy].osu
Topic Starter
IceBeam

Derfas13 wrote:

Easy difficulty for you =)

Thanks a lot :)
Mafiamaster
Wasn't there a [Normal]? It doesn't seem to be submitted.
Topic Starter
IceBeam

Mafiamaster wrote:

Wasn't there a [Normal]? It doesn't seem to be submitted.
Yes,it was,but i've deleted it.I think there aren't much difference between "Derfas13's Easy" and my "Hard".So,i've found making "Normal" difficulty quite pointless."Hard" is pretty relaxing,and there won't be much differences,i suppose.

So if you can accept it,this is the final variety.
Mafiamaster
[Easy]
I would consider Derfas' difficulty as a normal since there are a bit of spinners followed with sliders coming right after. Also the low OD makes it a bit hard.
If you had to make nearly all the difficulty settings to their lowest, then obviously the map difficulty must be too hard and should be toned down a bit.

What happened to mapping the whole song I mentioned previously?
A good place to stop if you really can't finish the whole map is at 02:21:865 where the vocals finally stop for a little bit.

[Other things]
"05.png" isn't needed for the SB. Just fade out "04.png" since the background is the same as "05.png"
Topic Starter
IceBeam

Mafiamaster wrote:

[Other things]
"05.png" isn't needed for the SB. Just fade out "04.png" since the background is the same as "05.png"
I can't agree,because it's used on 02:49:147 for fading.

About Derfas13's Easy- I'll contact him,thanks.
Louis Cyphre
БГ для твоей мапы:
Topic Starter
IceBeam

Louis Cyphre wrote:

БГ для твоей мапы:[attachment=0:f3753]BG D.jpg[/attachment:f3753]
nice bg,thanks
Mafiamaster
Bubbled~
Larto
Firstly, use the storyboarding in the .osu that I uploaded.

Hard:
01:42:157 - What's with this Kiai fountain?
01:58:481 - ^
02:05:541 (4,1) - Fix the spacing.
02:50:103 - Make the Kiai start here instead of at 02:51:868 - maybe
03:32:459 - Make the Kiai start here instead of at 03:34:224 - maybe

Easy:
01:00:793 (1) - Spinner way too short for an easy. Remove.
01:04:323 (1) - ^
01:07:853 (1) - ^
01:11:382 (1) - ^
01:14:912 (1) - ^
01:18:442 (1) - ^
01:21:971 (1) - ^
01:53:738 (1) - ^
01:57:268 (1) - ^
02:00:798 (1) - ^
02:04:328 (1) - ^
02:07:857 (1) - ^
02:11:387 (1) - ^
02:14:917 (1) - ^
02:18:446 (1) - ^

Download: Provoda - Pro Kino (SadKangaroo) [Hard].osu
Topic Starter
IceBeam

Larto wrote:

Firstly, use the storyboarding in the .osu that I uploaded.

Hard:
01:42:157 - What's with this Kiai fountain?
01:58:481 - ^
02:05:541 (4,1) - Fix the spacing.
02:50:103 - Make the Kiai start here instead of at 02:51:868 - maybe
03:32:459 - Make the Kiai start here instead of at 03:34:224 - maybe

Easy:
01:00:793 (1) - Spinner way too short for an easy. Remove.
01:04:323 (1) - ^
01:07:853 (1) - ^
01:11:382 (1) - ^
01:14:912 (1) - ^
01:18:442 (1) - ^
01:21:971 (1) - ^
01:53:738 (1) - ^
01:57:268 (1) - ^
02:00:798 (1) - ^
02:04:328 (1) - ^
02:07:857 (1) - ^
02:11:387 (1) - ^
02:14:917 (1) - ^
02:18:446 (1) - ^

Will be fixed soon,thanks.
Topic Starter
IceBeam

Larto wrote:

Firstly, use the storyboarding in the .osu that I uploaded. In your version there's some shaking and shifting with the last fading.It's almost invisible,but it was noticed through Editor in CtB mode.

Hard:
01:42:157, 01:58:481- What's with this Kiai fountain? I wanted to pick this moments out.I'd like to leave them, if it's possible.
02:05:541 (4,1) - Fix the spacing. There's a NC.I was putting these 2 hitcircles right to the center through all the map in similar moments.Wouldn't it be a lil bit weird to move them further?

02:50:103 - Make the Kiai start here instead of at 02:51:868 - maybe Stood.
03:32:459 - Make the Kiai start here instead of at 03:34:224 - maybe Stood.

Easy:
01:00:793 (1) - Spinner way too short for an easy. Remove. It's quite readable.Derfas13,as well as me,thinks that there's nothing better to put instead of it.We can rename it to Normal,if you like '~'
01:04:323 (1) - ^
01:07:853 (1) - ^
01:11:382 (1) - ^
01:14:912 (1) - ^
01:18:442 (1) - ^
01:21:971 (1) - ^
01:53:738 (1) - ^
01:57:268 (1) - ^
02:00:798 (1) - ^
02:04:328 (1) - ^
02:07:857 (1) - ^
02:11:387 (1) - ^
02:14:917 (1) - ^
02:18:446 (1) - ^
Andrea
[Derfas13's Easy]

Stack leniency all to the left is unrankable. Increase it at least by 1 or 2 ticks.

And... Sorry but I have to agree with Larto, remove all the spinners, they are too hard for a Easy/Normal difficulty.


[Hard]

Same here about stack leniency.


02:05:541 (4,1,2) - Too close.
03:46:577 (x) - Add a timing section here without kiai.


Good job for a first beatmap, I like it.
Topic Starter
IceBeam
Well,all fixed except Derfas13's spinners.

They're rankable,it's spinning over 4000-6000 points in Auto Mode.

I really don't want to change them,but if you say to change,so,I have no other way,I bet.

I know it's out of your bussiness,but can't you suggest something instead of it? Because we have no idea,actually.Just your opinion,please.
Andrea
All looks fine now except that spinners...

I just suggest to remove them and leave empty that parts...

Remember to adjust all the spacings as well and to remove unused green timing sections after this fix.
Topic Starter
IceBeam
Fixed.
Andrea
Alright then.

Bubbled~
Gens
Things.

  1. You have the same image on the "SB" folder and in the root folder, working as a BG. Since I see no need for it, delete one and use the same editing the .osu files.
  2. Add an approachcircle, even if it's the default.
  3. Countdown is enabled in one difficulty and disabled on the other. Intentional?
  4. Use BPM 136.00 and Offset 687.
[Hard]

00:35:093 (4) - Why use 1/3 snap here?

Overall improvement:
  1. You could reduce the use of the finish hitsound a bit, it seems like overtakes the song at times.
  2. Some sliders could look better with less waypoints. Screenshots to show what I mean:
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~ ~ ~

Reduced to a star for now. Call me back when you fix everything.
Topic Starter
IceBeam

Gens wrote:

Things.

  1. You have the same image on the "SB" folder and in the root folder, working as a BG. Since I see no need for it, delete one and use the same editing the .osu files.It's used in SBing.W/o it,after fading the pictrure shakes a little.And this one helps to do fading as more soft as it possible.
  2. Add an approachcircle, even if it's the default.Added.
  3. Countdown is enabled in one difficulty and disabled on the other. Intentional? Fixed.
  4. Use BPM 136.00 and Offset 687.Fixed.All notes and timing sections are fully resnaped on both difficulties.
[Hard]

00:35:093 (4) - Why use 1/3 snap here? Fixed.

Overall improvement:
  1. You could reduce the use of the finish hitsound a bit, it seems like overtakes the song at times.Removed some of them,but in general I'd like to keep them.
  2. Some sliders could look better with less waypoints. Screenshots to show what I mean:Fixed many of them.


-

~ ~ ~

Reduced to a star for now. Call me back when you fix everything.
Gens
[attachment=0:97c34]Provoda - Pro Kino (SadKangaroo) [Hard].osu[/attachment:97c34]

If you decide to use this, delete "05.jpg". I'm sure this won't cause the "shaking"...
Topic Starter
IceBeam
Changed to your one."05.jpg" file has been deleted from the song folder.Fully re-submitted.
Gens
=D
Starrodkirby86
Ahh, nice photos in [Hard]!
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