00:57 Aqo: 1. 00:04:509 (3) - redesign this slider shape to match 00:05:337 (1) - better
00:58 Aqo: 2. 00:06:785 (1,2,1) - needs more spacing for pitch relevancy and visual reasons
00:58 Aqo: 3. 00:08:234 (1,2,3,4,1) - needs less spacing
00:58 Aqo: 4. 00:08:854 (2) - reverse this (ctrl+g)
00:59 Akali: uuu a mod
00:59 Akali: savelog for kudos
00:59 Aqo: 5. 00:09:992 (3) - replace this slider with two circles. you can just put the second circle on its slider end
01:00 Aqo: 6. 00:11:337 - add a circle on this timing. make your own judgement for the spacing
01:00 Aqo: 7. 00:11:440 (1,2) - make those round, not edgy
01:00 Aqo: 8. 00:11:958 (1) - this needs to be a lot more spaced away from the previous object. move the rest of the pattern with it accordingly to keep your blanketing there
01:00 Aqo: 9. 00:13:613 (1) - this needs to be a circle, not a slider
01:01 Akali: problem here
01:01 Akali: is it's like
01:01 Aqo: put another circle on its slider end
01:01 Akali: 7/12 or some shit
01:01 Aqo: I know
01:01 Akali: it's ok in mania
01:01 Akali: but hella hard to read on std
01:01 Aqo: it's not 7/12
01:01 Aqo: it's regular 1/6 timing
01:01 Akali: hm skalim had something funky here
01:01 Akali: i'm pretty sure
01:01 Akali: i took that part from him ;;
01:01 Aqo:
http://puu.sh/crX99/dc17de818f.jpg01:02 Aqo: ignore that funkyness, it's not that complex
01:02 Aqo: * 00:14:096 (1,1,1) - those can stay sliders
01:02 Aqo: 10. 00:16:923 (2) - redesign this slider shape. it doesn't look good
01:03 Aqo: 11. 00:17:337 (3) - this needs to be two circles
01:03 Aqo: 12. 00:17:647 (4,5,6) - this plays incorrectly. the spacing from 4's end to 5 should be the same as 5 to 6's start
01:04 Aqo: 13. the directions on 00:24:372 (1,2,3,4) - then 00:24:992 (1) - then 00:25:199 (1,2,3) -
01:04 Aqo: counterclockwise -> ccw again -> ccw again
01:05 Aqo: should be ccw -> cw -> ccw
01:05 Aqo: redesign just 00:24:992 (1) - with this in mind
01:06 Aqo: 15. 00:33:889 (1,2) - needs more spacing from 1 to 2. you can simply reverse 2
01:06 Aqo: 16. 00:34:613 (3) - also needs to be reversed
01:07 Aqo: 17. 00:38:958 (2) - this feels weird. need no object here
01:07 Aqo: like at all, no object on this timing
01:08 Akali: there is a ghost note
01:08 Aqo: 18. 00:40:923 (1,2,3) - need bigger spacing for slider 2, as in higher sv
01:08 Akali: it feels ok with the music for me
01:08 Aqo: 1 -> 2 is 3x ds
01:08 Aqo: 2's start -> 2's end is 1.3x
01:08 Aqo: 2's start to end should be at least 2x
01:09 Aqo: 19. 00:41:958 (2) - redesign this shape
01:10 Aqo: 20. 00:47:544 (3) - make this a circle -> 1/4-long slider instead of one 1/2 slider. make the SV higher so that you don't need to change the slider shape here at all, and just add a circle somewhere
01:11 Aqo: 21. 01:05:337 (2,3,4,5) - the directions on these aren't very good. fix their ovalness
01:11 Aqo: to be similar to 01:04:096 (1,2,3,4) - etc
01:11 Aqo: same for 01:06:165 (2,3,4,5) -
01:12 Aqo: 22. 01:10:716 - add a circle on this timing, it makes it feel a lot more intuitive and fits the music
01:13 Aqo: 23. 01:16:303 (3,4,1) - might want to redesign this part somehow to break the stream pattern for just this point and make 3 and 1 some some of a jump. you'll know why from the music
01:14 Aqo: 24. 01:21:475 (1) - this has 1.77x spacing from previous object, needs at least 2.8x to match the rest of the pattern from earlier
01:14 Aqo: this poses a problem with 01:21:475 (1,1,1) - design though
01:14 Aqo: can probably just ctrl+h those
01:15 Aqo: 25. 01:27:268 (5,6) - why suddenly corners. keep them oval like before
01:15 Aqo: 26. 01:28:509 (4) - make this two 1/4 sliders instead of one 1/2 slider (in different positions, new pattern somehow)
01:16 Aqo: 27. 01:29:958 - need a circle here. make the slider before it higher-sv and end earlier, put a circle, redesign 01:30:061 (2) - 's shape somehow
01:16 Aqo: at the very least make its bump align on top of 01:29:440 (1) -
01:17 Aqo: (i.e.
http://puu.sh/crYn5/9e47de3df7.jpg )
01:17 Aqo: 28. 01:33:889 (6,7) - again back to oval no need for edges on this sound
01:18 Aqo: 29. 01:49:923 (4) - redesign this shape
01:18 Aqo: that's it more or less
01:18 Aqo: all suggestions
01:18 Aqo: ignore everything you disagree with
01:18 Akali: ye i disagree with some ;;
01:19 Akali: but thanks
01:19 Akali: post in thread plox
01:19 Aqo: k
