1. http://puu.sh/cHwpJ/4edcf63c1a.png
2. 00:35:226 (1) - Podrías conciderar aquí hacer en haya algo qué golpear en 00:35:579 - dado que ahí comienza el grito.
3. 00:40:873 (1) - por qué no hacer un jump sencillo con este?
4. Casi que todos los triples son overmap xD y es chistoso que por ejemplo, en 00:52:079 (6) - si el triple estuviera es en 00:51:902 - va mejor con la música. Igual en 00:54:902 (6) - .
   Casualmente en 00:56:138 (4) - hiciste el triple tal que concuerda con el patrón que te acabo de decir.
   Es decir, el triple no va para terminar en el comienzo del compas, sinó en el pedaso anterior a este:
   
   
   En muchos está bien puesto, pero en otros no. Por favor corregelos.
5. 00:46:696 - aquí va un golpe lo bastante fuente como para ignorarlo, imo.
6. 00:52:343 - ^
7. 01:02:932 - ^
8. 01:14:226 - ^
9. 01:09:108 (1) - podrías conciderar acelerar este slider a 1.1x, y aumentarle es espaciado a 01:09:991 (3) - y a 01:10:167 (4,5,6) -
10. 01:26:049 (1) - Bueno, quizás podrías conciderar algo como esto:
    
    

1. 00:29:402 (3) - No siento cómodo el flow aquí. Por favor, muevelos un poco para que quede más suave:
   
   
2. 00:51:814 (3) - stack
3. 00:52:873 (3) - es un poco brusco el flow aquí. (Nota el intento de blanket cuadrado xD)
   
   
4. 01:03:108 (5,6) - En estos el flow tampoco lo siento tan cómodo como me gustaría. Pienso que lo ideal sería hacer stack de los dos sobre 01:01:343 (2) - , de forma que quede un jump a 2.1, lo cual pienso que es aceptable para un Hard.
   
   
5. 01:09:108 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3) - Ctrl+H pls. Ya sabes... todo está en el mismo sentido de movimiento ( xDD ), y esta es la sección perfecta para cambiar de orientación
6. 01:15:991 (5) - No siento el flow comodo aquí, pls, subelo un poco:
   
   
7. 01:30:285 (1) - Aquí un jump quedaría muy bien. podrías espaciarlo a 1.5x.

1. 00:23:932 (1,2,3,4) - Por que el comienzo es tan aburrido D:
2. 01:18:991 (3,4) - La inclinación de estos no me parece la adecuada, mejor así:
   
   

ErunamoJAZZ wrote:

[Insane]

1. http://puu.sh/cHwpJ/4edcf63c1a.png -> http://puu.sh/cIs0V/cc5898c651.png
2. 00:35:226 (1) - Podrías conciderar aquí hacer en haya algo qué golpear en 00:35:579 - dado que ahí comienza el grito. prefiero dejarlo así
3. 00:40:873 (1) - por qué no hacer un jump sencillo con este? miraré de hacer un pequeño jump xD
4. Casi que todos los triples son overmap xD y es chistoso que por ejemplo, en 00:52:079 (6) - si el triple estuviera es en 00:51:902 - va mejor con la música. Igual en 00:54:902 (6) - .
   Casualmente en 00:56:138 (4) - hiciste el triple tal que concuerda con el patrón que te acabo de decir.
   Es decir, el triple no va para terminar en el comienzo del compas, sinó en el pedaso anterior a este:
   
   
   En muchos está bien puesto, pero en otros no. Por favor corregelos.
5. 00:46:696 - aquí va un golpe lo bastante fuente como para ignorarlo, imo. no es tan fuerte xD
6. 00:52:343 - ^ ^
7. 01:02:932 - ^ ^
8. 01:14:226 - ^ ^
9. 01:09:108 (1) - podrías conciderar acelerar este slider a 1.1x, y aumentarle es espaciado a 01:09:991 (3) - y a 01:10:167 (4,5,6) - para nada, no veo por qué acelerar ESE slider justo AHÍ xD
10. 01:26:049 (1) - Bueno, quizás podrías conciderar algo como esto: los cambios respecto a ese ritmo... no sé, prefiero dejarlos así xD
    
    

No hablé de nada nazi, pero sí debes darle una checkeada a los stacks (ya sabes como soy con eso xD)

[Hard]

1. 00:29:402 (3) - No siento cómodo el flow aquí. Por favor, muevelos un poco para que quede más suave: fixed
   
   
2. 00:51:814 (3) - stack buena xD
3. 00:52:873 (3) - es un poco brusco el flow aquí. (Nota el intento de blanket cuadrado xD) blanket? ugu? lo hice por simetría owo
   
   
4. 01:03:108 (5,6) - En estos el flow tampoco lo siento tan cómodo como me gustaría. Pienso que lo ideal sería hacer stack de los dos sobre 01:01:343 (2) - , de forma que quede un jump a 2.1, lo cual pienso que es aceptable para un Hard. nah me parece exagerado
   
   
5. 01:09:108 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3) - Ctrl+H pls. Ya sabes... todo está en el mismo sentido de movimiento ( xDD ), y esta es la sección perfecta para cambiar de orientación y esto del final qué? http://puu.sh/cJG2K/fa507befda.jpg ese flow se rompe ;_; es buena idea pero no encaja aquí...
6. 01:15:991 (5) - No siento el flow comodo aquí, pls, subelo un poco: sure
   
   
7. 01:30:285 (1) - Aquí un jump quedaría muy bien. podrías espaciarlo a 1.5x. supongo

[normal]

1. 00:23:932 (1,2,3,4) - Por que el comienzo es tan aburrido D: no lo es xD piensa que es el comienzo (?
2. 01:18:991 (3,4) - La inclinación de estos no me parece la adecuada, mejor así: maldito nazi
   
   

[Easy Box]
01:21:814 (2) - pls, delete it and copy/paste->Ctrl+H to 01:22:520 (3) - ... looks more clean:

Good Luck!

Kazuya wrote:

Hi. Random mod. It's only ideas!

[Insane]

00:28:520 (2) - Move here: x: 224, y: 40? Looks better when you move up. I prefer actual little jump because it's pretty calm =w=

Good symmetry:
00:34:167 (2) - move here: x: 102, y: 267.
00:34:520 (3) - x: 364, y: 312
00:34:873 (4) - x: 410, y: 117
00:49:255 (6) - Delete circle. There is no clearly audible sound.
00:52:079 (6) - ^ not here, play with 25% playback rate and listen better
00:54:902 (6) - ^
00:54:814 (5,1) - x: 432 y: 168. Perfect stack. o.o they are perfectly stacked
00:56:138 (4) - Delete circle. Same as 00:49:255 (6) -
00:56:226 (5) - Stack here: 00:56:402 (1) - (move circle: x: 124 y: 88
00:57:726 (5) - Delete circle. Same as 00:49:255 (6) - not here, same reason as before
01:01:785 (5) - ^ not sure about this, as long as it fits I think it's ok
01:01:873 (5) - Move circle here: x: 454 y: 131
01:10:255 (5) - Delete circle. Same as 00:49:255 (6) - and move 01:10:343 (5) - circle here: x: 219 y: 82 same as before
01:11:843 (8) - Same as 00:49:255 (6) - Delete circle. there is no emphasized sound.
01:13:079 (5) - ^ not here, same as before
01:15:638 (4,5,6,7,8) - Don't use stream! Not clearly heard beat/sound...
01:17:226 (4,5,6,7) - ^
01:17:579 (1,2,3,4) - Please, fix the symmetry. I didn't use symmetry here
01:23:138 (5) - Same as 00:49:255 (6) -
01:24:373 (4) - Same as 00:49:255 (6) - 01:24:461 (5) - = stack circle here: x: 320 y: 324

everything not mentioned means fixed

[Hard]

AR: Change to 7. nah, since the bpm is a bit high I prefer something between 7 and 8

01:10:520 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Hmm hmm. Use this: http://puu.sh/cT6eg/1da50f7cfe.jpg thanks but I prefer actual pattern

Okay, Good.

[Normal]

00:35:226 (1) - Better blanket? Move 3rd white ticjk here: x: 129 y: 150 orz fixed
01:29:579 (2) - CTRL - G, and move slider here: x: 367 y: 179. it's nice but I prefer to avoid that stack ><

[Easy]

x'D

01:22:520 (3) - Blanket fix! 2rd white tick: x: 180 y: 43


Ok, Really good Mapset. :3 Only the insane left something to be desired.

1. Uncheck widescreen support.
2. All CC is quite similar, it would be good to have some variety.

1. 00:29:932 (1) - Should start from 00:29:579 () like 00:23:932 (1) It's more rhythm-wise to start from background music not lyrics here.
2. ^ Also applies to:
   00:35:579 (1) // 00:41:226 (1) -
3. 00:32:049 (3,4) - Maybe flow this? http://puu.sh/d7sU9/fed3710d6e.jpg
4. 00:46:520 (1) - This slider shape will be confusing for the very beginning players (Easy difficulty is supposed to be played by them) because it doesn't have visible clear path. More suitable for normal and higher.
5. 00:45:814 (2,1) - This overlap is also arguable for easiest difficulty.
6. 01:30:285 (1) - 1.3 sec. spinner may be not enough for easy, though I'm not sure, better to ask QAT member about before pushing this to qualify.

1. 00:40:873 (1) - Place this with more 00:39:461 (2) interaction like http://puu.sh/d7tr5/27b6f6a721.jpg No point in stacking with 00:38:049 (1) - because AR is rather low.
2. 01:03:461 (1) - Maybe curve this, such long straight slider looks not so good http://puu.sh/d7txD/18f57a7129.jpg noting bad tho.

1. 01:11:226 (3,4,5,6,1) - More rounded flow can work better here. http://puu.sh/d7tRL/afc486176a.jpg

1. 01:29:755 (6,7,8,1) - Think about reducing this jumps, atm it's quite a big difficulty spike considering that this happens in the very end of the map this won't be appreciated by players even with so low darning time. Example: http://puu.sh/d7ubw/397738c528.jpg

1. Make more complicated hitsound pattern in kiai, preferably including some soft-hitnormals instead of normals on not strong beats, reduce volume level in kiais and get at least one good hitsound mod. Then call me back.

12:51 *Inyuschan pokes
12:51 Inyuschan: I need you to apply something in Gavin G map o3o
12:51 ProfessionalBox: Heey
12:51 ProfessionalBox: sure
12:51 Inyuschan: 01:07:696 (1,2,3) - Kenterz suggest to change the two circles by a slider
12:52 Inyuschan: because the vocals, but adding 4 circles only maybe it's too hard for an easy
12:52 Inyuschan: so two sliders maybe o3o
12:53 ProfessionalBox: well sure why not
12:53 Inyuschan: just change it and give me the code, I was afraid to changing it instead of you
12:53 Inyuschan: >.<
12:53 Inyuschan: then I waited for you o3o
12:54 ProfessionalBox: Ill do that for you
12:54 ProfessionalBox: and thank you for waiting
12:54 ProfessionalBox: I really appreciate that
12:54 Inyuschan: nya :3
12:55 ProfessionalBox: Sent you a forum pm
12:56 Inyuschan: yay c:

Anyway, for the next BAT: take care of I have to update what @Sonnyc said and new Easy code, so poke me when you checked / modded other stuff.

1. Preview point isn't snapped in ALL diff. Consider to put it at 00:46:520 -

1. I found a placement issue but it already has been fixed via IRC with Box~ Otherwise it's perfect!

1. 00:23:932 (1,2) - The beginning sounds a bit weird. I'd love to see an aligned pattern like : you can rotate them by -22 degrees and see the result !
2. 00:26:755 (1) - Same here. I guess you could try to rotate that slider to make it toward 00:28:167 (2) -. Also , you can try to polish that pattern cause the flow is really decent here.
3. 00:40:873 (1) - you missed a good blanket over there >~<
4. 00:46:520 (1,3) - This pattern is bothering me a bit cause you missed some important sounds and some kick are passive
5. 00:48:991 (4,1) - The pattern could be a lot neater right ?
6. 00:53:579 (3) - I can't see why you decided to put a sliderwave ? Why didn't you continue 00:52:167 (1) - ? In my opinion you can do it in this way but I'm not sure cause I rushed XD :
   
7. 00:54:638 (4,1) - Same here , it could be a lot neater!
8. 00:57:461 (4) - This object is breaking the rhtyhm imo. I'd suggest you to delete this slider and add a circle at 00:57:285 - and one at 00:57:461 - . It better fills the timeline !
9. 00:59:579 (4,5,1) - Come on , do you think that that transition is really neat and flawless ? In my opinion , this is not rankable for flow reason actually ! ><
10. 01:01:343 (2) - Here, you used to add some symmetry for esthetic but you didn't well followed the rhythm here
11. 01:07:696 (1,2,3,4,1) - You miss a star shaped pattern maybe ?
12. 01:11:932 (1,2,3) - Triangle ?
13. 01:14:755 (1,2,3) - Rhythm issue here too ! The first part of 01:14:755 (1) - ( between 01:14:755 - and 01:15:461 - ) is really following the rhythm but after that , I can't understand the rhythm. Consider to listen carefully the song with 01:16:873 (3) - and you'll see !
14. 01:17:932 (1) - Blanket missed though.
15. 01:20:226 (5) - A bit hard for a Normal maybe ?
16. 01:22:873 (4,1) - Esthetic strikes again ;~;
17. 01:29:579 (2) - In my opinion , you could reverse it but I'd suggest you to CTRL+G this it'll be a looooot better :p

1. • Same CS as Insane ? There's a problem LOL. Maybe put 3.6/3.8 ?
2. 00:30:285 (2) - CTRL+H + CTRL+G would be better for a nice symmetrical !
3. 00:44:226 (2,3) - I wouldn't recommand a stack like this because it's not good for cursor movement and the player want move the cursor instead of letting it on a stack imo.
4. 00:44:755 - You missed an important beat here I guess.
5. 01:06:285 (1,2) - Not gonna critic shapes here but you could gave them a neater look!
6. 01:30:373 (1) - Spinner is starting a bit earlier. Maybe consider to start it on a red tick : 01:30:461 -

1. 00:23:932 (1,2,3,4) - Can't see a linearity here and feels like you added some random circles.
2. 00:35:226 (1,3) - you missed a cool symmetry pattern out there xD
3. 01:01:696 (4,5,6) - I don't feel like it's in the rhythm but well , it's up to you !
4. 01:10:167 (4,5,6) - Same thing as above~
5. 01:12:991 (4,5,6) - Same thing as above~
6. 01:15:638 (4,5,6) - Same thing as above~
7. 01:20:226 (8) - I guess you could stack it on 01:20:049 (7) - it'd be better and there's an overlap with 01:19:167 (2) -

Secretpipe wrote:

Again , sorry for the delay!

[General]

1. Preview point isn't snapped in ALL diff. Consider to put it at 00:46:520 - It's snapped, in a blue tick but it is :/ It's fine.

[Box's Easy]

1. I found a placement issue but it already has been fixed via IRC with Box~ Otherwise it's perfect!

[Normal]

1. 00:23:932 (1,2) - The beginning sounds a bit weird. I'd love to see an aligned pattern like : you can rotate them by -22 degrees and see the result ! B-But the next blanket :c I don't see any problem here.
2. 00:26:755 (1) - Same here. I guess you could try to rotate that slider to make it toward 00:28:167 (2) -. Also , you can try to polish that pattern cause the flow is really decent here. I don't really understand here o.o But pattern is fine.
3. 00:40:873 (1) - you missed a good blanket over there >~< It wasn't my intention :3u
4. 00:46:520 (1,3) - This pattern is bothering me a bit cause you missed some important sounds and some kick are passive Hm, fixed.
5. 00:48:991 (4,1) - The pattern could be a lot neater right ? Probably, but I prefer to keep the current one.
6. 00:53:579 (3) - I can't see why you decided to put a sliderwave ? Why didn't you continue 00:52:167 (1) - ? In my opinion you can do it in this way but I'm not sure cause I rushed XD : Fixed.
   
7. 00:54:638 (4,1) - Same here , it could be a lot neater! Same as before, I prefer actual pattern o3o
8. 00:57:461 (4) - This object is breaking the rhtyhm imo. I'd suggest you to delete this slider and add a circle at 00:57:285 - and one at 00:57:461 - . It better fills the timeline ! Well, I don't really agree, I see more important the music I'm following actually.
9. 00:59:579 (4,5,1) - Come on , do you think that that transition is really neat and flawless ? In my opinion , this is not rankable for flow reason actually ! >< Did something different.
10. 01:01:343 (2) - Here, you used to add some symmetry for esthetic but you didn't well followed the rhythm here It's ok here, maybe not all the rhythm but it follows well enough.
11. 01:07:696 (1,2,3,4,1) - You miss a star shaped pattern maybe ? It wasn't my intention but I'll take care about it next time o3o
12. 01:11:932 (1,2,3) - Triangle ? Sure.
13. 01:14:755 (1,2,3) - Rhythm issue here too ! The first part of 01:14:755 (1) - ( between 01:14:755 - and 01:15:461 - ) is really following the rhythm but after that , I can't understand the rhythm. Consider to listen carefully the song with 01:16:873 (3) - and you'll see ! Uh, I've tried.
14. 01:17:932 (1) - Blanket missed though.
15. 01:20:226 (5) - A bit hard for a Normal maybe ? Nah, I think not this ><
16. 01:22:873 (4,1) - Esthetic strikes again ;~; Well, I've fixed it a bit.
17. 01:29:579 (2) - In my opinion , you could reverse it but I'd suggest you to CTRL+G this it'll be a looooot better :p k

[Hard]

1. • Same CS as Insane ? There's a problem LOL. Maybe put 3.6/3.8 ? Yep.
2. 00:30:285 (2) - CTRL+H + CTRL+G would be better for a nice symmetrical ! wtf
3. 00:44:226 (2,3) - I wouldn't recommand a stack like this because it's not good for cursor movement and the player want move the cursor instead of letting it on a stack imo. Cursor movement? uh should be fine
4. 00:44:755 - You missed an important beat here I guess. Since I added one note in Insane I wanted more variety o3o
5. 01:06:285 (1,2) - Not gonna critic shapes here but you could gave them a neater look! I don't really know something better ><
6. 01:30:373 (1) - Spinner is starting a bit earlier. Maybe consider to start it on a red tick : 01:30:461 - k

[Insane]

1. 00:23:932 (1,2,3,4) - Can't see a linearity here and feels like you added some random circles. 00:24:285 (2,4) - symmetry, that's it, I could improve it though
2. 00:35:226 (1,3) - you missed a cool symmetry pattern out there xD 00:35:755 (2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - here is the symmetry
3. 01:01:696 (4,5,6) - I don't feel like it's in the rhythm but well , it's up to you ! As long as it fits is ok. And same to the others.
4. 01:10:167 (4,5,6) - Same thing as above~
5. 01:12:991 (4,5,6) - Same thing as above~
6. 01:15:638 (4,5,6) - Same thing as above~
7. 01:20:226 (8) - I guess you could stack it on 01:20:049 (7) - it'd be better and there's an overlap with 01:19:167 (2) - Maybe, but... not really sure, also the overlap is not a big problem for me.

The Normal is a bit bothering me cause of rhythm issues and placement issues cause some pattern could be a lot better. Except that , the mapset is nice overall . Fix this and find 1/2 mod on Normal and call me afterwards!

Inyuschan wrote:

I'd rank/bubble DnB maps if I ever become a BAT xD

Inyuschan wrote:

I'd rank/bubble DnB maps if I ever become a BAT xD

Inyuschan wrote:

Yay, DnB family :'D