ZHU - Faded · forum

emilia

893 posts

Joined October 2012

emilia 2014-11-11T10:22:15+00:00

For M4M at #modreq

[Hard]

00:20:706 (4,5,6,7) - Try circle flow?
00:30:786 (1,2) - Try symmetry
00:48:426 - Why break here? Add some things here.
00:56:586 - ^
01:12:786 (6,1,2) - Try fix blanket
01:31:986 (1,2,3) - Try symmetry + fix blanket
02:27:906 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - Try using Distance Snap here
02:43:986 (3,5) - Try ctrl g them individually
03:19:506 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - You can consider making this bigger

In my honest opinion, I think your map is great in terms of flow, everything leads into each other fine. The problem is that your patterns are too boring, there needs to be more variation. Your flow can also be changed as well. Your sliders are occasionally too flat to look aesthetically pleasing. Patterns like 01:14:706 (4,5) - , try to curve the sliders more so the pattern is more defined and not as loose. Patterns like 01:18:786 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - , are too repetitive. Certain flows like 01:24:306 (1,2) - , can be improved. As the song is rather dull, try having more upbeat patterns for this to work.

[Insane]
00:16:866 (1,2) - Blanket
00:46:146 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,3) - This part can be rather confusing at times, try using DS or stack notes together to prevent confusion
01:32:226 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 8 appears to be rather random, since the rest of the note are in a hexagon. Try stacking it onto 4
01:47:826 (2) - Centre?
02:07:506 (3) - There are stronger beats for you to follow here
02:27:906 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,1) - Again with the DS
02:48:066 (5) - Try ctrl g then shift 5 to original head

Your flow here is slightly worse compared to Hard, but that's fine in general. However, the same problem still exists with your DS and patterns. Your patterns aren't good enough, and your DS is very confusing. Try having better patterns, because some of your patterns are still very weird and uneven. Also, keep to the same pattern when it comes to similar rhythm/part of the song. Mindless jumps are also not recommended. There are also some occasional NC problems. 01:39:906 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - Such patterns are mindless + uneven. Same with this: 01:18:786 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - .

Overall, I find that your idea of flow is very good, but your general pattern application needs fixing.

Vone

83 posts

Joined September 2013

Topic Starter

Vone 2014-11-11T10:45:37+00:00

Thanks for cooperation Estellia- ! You can expect my mod soon!

meii18

3,577 posts

Joined October 2013

meii18 2014-11-14T17:34:12+00:00

Hi ! Here's my part of Normal diff:

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I talked with Doyak and he's agreed. I hope you like

it and sorry for late, I'm lazy and busy with school stuffs and my map .

Edit edit : Here's the new code ( the plan was changed ) :

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Vone

83 posts

Joined September 2013

Topic Starter

Vone 2014-11-16T09:32:03+00:00

That's really nice, ByBy! Thank you, and Doyak for cooperation!

Tenseki

803 posts

Joined November 2013

Tenseki 2014-11-29T10:21:36+00:00

m4m request on #modreqs

[General]
sorry to say that, patterns are so old..
i think you have to see the newer maps to practice patterns, more beautiful

BUT, hitsounds are good

[insane]

00:55:386 (6) - sounds strange, move to 00:55:266
00:19:266 (1,2,3,4,5) - change these. ex) add slider. you have to make a beautiful patterns is more approachable to rank!
00:21:426 (2,3,4,1) - ^
00:25:266 (2,3,4,5) - ^
00:27:426 (2,3,4,5) - ^
00:26:706 (7,1) - ctrl +g? and change places
00:47:466 (5) - change this, rhythm is more better

00:57:546 (6,7) - change shape

191,319,57546,1,0,0:0:0:0:
269,239,57666,2,0,L|263:148,1,70
247,58,58146,2,0,P|213:66|161:51,1,70

01:39:426 (8) - change shape

02:29:826 (1) - distance, i think it needs a large gap
02:30:546 (3) - add note
02:32:466 - ^
02:34:386 (3) - ^
02:35:226 (2) - add slider

[Hard]
"SV" is so fast for Hard user, i think. how to change a 1.2?
00:54:906 (8) - stack on slider
01:10:866 (7) - change more curvely

And most of slider need that
ex) 02:45:906 (4,3) - looks strange, more curvely

[ByBy's Normal]
Good!. i think it need not to fix. cuz i' dont know about normal criteria fully

[Doyak's Ez]
01:24:546 (3,4) - change shape. no drastic curve. it's not good for ez players
01:40:866 (4) - ^

All Done! good luck for a rank

Doyak

osu! Alumni

2,621 posts

Joined November 2012

Doyak 2014-11-30T10:55:38+00:00

I shoot a kudosu star here

Doyak

osu! Alumni

2,621 posts

Joined November 2012

Doyak 2014-11-30T11:04:45+00:00

Tenseki wrote:
[Doyak's Ez]
01:24:546 (3,4) - change shape. no drastic curve. it's not good for ez players
01:40:866 (4) - ^

다 고쳤습니다. 저 누군지 아시면 한국어로 하셨어도 되는데 ㅋㅋㅋㅋ

Vone

83 posts

Joined September 2013

Topic Starter

Vone 2014-11-30T14:02:58+00:00

Tenseki wrote:
m4m request on #modreqs

[General]
sorry to say that, patterns are so old.. I know, thats my mapping style!
i think you have to see the newer maps to practice patterns, more beautiful

BUT, hitsounds are good Thanks
[insane]

00:55:386 (6) - sounds strange, move to 00:55:266 Naah, it doesnt
00:19:266 (1,2,3,4,5) - change these. ex) add slider. you have to make a beautiful patterns is more approachable to rank! Changed!
00:21:426 (2,3,4,1) - ^ ^
00:25:266 (2,3,4,5) - ^ ^
00:27:426 (2,3,4,5) - ^ ^
00:26:706 (7,1) - ctrl +g? and change places No
00:47:466 (5) - change this, rhythm is more better It fits in the rhytm of the background melody
00:57:546 (6,7) - change shape Fixed
191,319,57546,1,0,0:0:0:0:
269,239,57666,2,0,L|263:148,1,70
247,58,58146,2,0,P|213:66|161:51,1,70
01:39:426 (8) - change shape Fixed
02:29:826 (1) - distance, i think it needs a large gap No, it doesnt
02:30:546 (3) - add note Fixed
02:32:466 - ^ ^
02:34:386 (3) - ^ ^
02:35:226 (2) - add slider No, it isnt ok

[Hard]
"SV" is so fast for Hard user, i think. how to change a 1.2? Cant change it without remaping all difficulty
00:54:906 (8) - stack on slider Fixed
01:10:866 (7) - change more curvely Fixed
And most of slider need that
ex) 02:45:906 (4,3) - looks strange, more curvely Fixed

[ByBy's Normal]
Good!. i think it need not to fix. cuz i' dont know about normal criteria fully

[Doyak's Ez]
01:24:546 (3,4) - change shape. no drastic curve. it's not good for ez players
01:40:866 (4) - ^

All Done! good luck for a rank

Thanks alot for the mod!

Vone

83 posts

Joined September 2013

Topic Starter

Vone 2014-11-30T14:03:32+00:00

Thanks Doyak!

seovince

seovince 2014-12-01T16:51:59+00:00

Hello hello... m4m from what we agreed on game chat hahaha

General

fill the GD creator in tags, Doyak and ByBy in this case.. also (optional) you can fill it with the album name too..

about the SV from all of the diff, each diff should be different.. i see Normal, Hard, Insane has the same SV.. it would be good if the Normal is 1.0x/1.1x, Hard 1.4x/Insane 1.6x <<<<those just the examples, you can variate them as you like but keep in mind that each diff shouldn't be far on to the another

Doyak's Easy

1. 00:34:626 (1) - you can change the shape like this, it gives a better flow for the next note

2. 00:38:466 (1) - this could gives a better flow too..
3. 01:16:386 (4) - i know you intend to give this circle a blanket, but it isn't tidy now.. move to x:408 y:104 for better blanket (y)
4. 01:16:866 (5) - i think this circle would be tidier if it's placed in x:440 y:180
5. 01:18:786 (1) - hmm.. do it like number 1 or 2 above maybe?
6. 01:37:506 - since this part is so dominant, put a circle might be better..
7. 01:45:186 - ^
8. 02:25:986 (4) - copy paste the shape from 02:24:066 (3) - and CTRL H & CTRL J it would be better i think

ByBy's Normal

The snapping is too far in my opinion, DS 1.0 is much better i think..

1. 00:23:106 - why this section suddenly slower than before? meanwhile this section's music is no different with the section before.. the solution might be slow down the before section, or faster this section into 1.0x..

2. 00:24:306 (2) - this note doesn't sound right, move it to 00:24:066 - and add another circle to 00:24:546 - would be better (don't forget to resnapping xD )
3. 00:39:666 (2) - same as above ^
4. 01:11:826 (4) - move it to 01:11:586 - and add circle in 01:12:546 - might be good i think (resnapping too~)

5. 01:21:426 (4) - how about move this to 01:21:426 (4) - and add circle in 01:22:146 - ? (don't forget to resnapping also)
6. 01:40:626 (5,1) - isn't these two far? they exceeded the DS

7. 01:45:186 - add circle here?
8. 02:06:306 - ^
9. 02:10:146 - ^

Hard

HP 6 and OD 6 are better i think

1. 00:19:026 (6) - i think this circle is unnecessary, so remove it maybe? xD
2. 00:25:266 (1) - change the shape into this is much better
3. 00:49:026 (5) - hmm.. enlong this slider until 00:49:266 - and move this slider 00:49:386 (6) - to 00:49:506 -

4. 00:53:346 (4) - to be consistent like the slider before this, move this to x:424 y:316 maybe

5. 00:54:906 (8) - hmm, unnecessary imo

6. 00:56:706 (3,4) - same as number 3 above?

Insane

1. 00:52:866 (3,4) - here the spacing isn't same as 00:51:906 (1,2) - try to fix it maybe?

2. 02:02:466 (4) - this one would give a better flow imo
3. 03:01:026 (2) - mirroring the 03:00:546 (1) - is better

4. 03:16:386 (2) - how about this?

Okayyy and that's my mod.. sorry if it's not really helpful.. nice hitsounding btw!! good luck~

Vone

83 posts

Joined September 2013

Topic Starter

Vone 2014-12-01T17:23:37+00:00

seovince wrote:
Hello hello... m4m from what we agreed on game chat hahaha

General
fill the GD creator in tags, Doyak and ByBy in this case.. also (optional) you can fill it with the album name too.. Yeah, fixed!
about the SV from all of the diff, each diff should be different.. i see Normal, Hard, Insane has the same SV.. it would be good if the Normal is 1.0x/1.1x, Hard 1.4x/Insane 1.6x <<<<those just the examples, you can variate them as you like but keep in mind that each diff shouldn't be far on to the another You are right, need to fix it!

Doyak's Easy
1. 00:34:626 (1) - you can change the shape like this, it gives a better flow for the next note
2. 00:38:466 (1) - this could gives a better flow too..
3. 01:16:386 (4) - i know you intend to give this circle a blanket, but it isn't tidy now.. move to x:408 y:104 for better blanket (y)
4. 01:16:866 (5) - i think this circle would be tidier if it's placed in x:440 y:180
5. 01:18:786 (1) - hmm.. do it like number 1 or 2 above maybe?
6. 01:37:506 - since this part is so dominant, put a circle might be better..
7. 01:45:186 - ^
8. 02:25:986 (4) - copy paste the shape from 02:24:066 (3) - and CTRL H & CTRL J it would be better i think

ByBy's Normal
The snapping is too far in my opinion, DS 1.0 is much better i think..

1. 00:23:106 - why this section suddenly slower than before? meanwhile this section's music is no different with the section before.. the solution might be slow down the before section, or faster this section into 1.0x..
2. 00:24:306 (2) - this note doesn't sound right, move it to 00:24:066 - and add another circle to 00:24:546 - would be better (don't forget to resnapping xD )
3. 00:39:666 (2) - same as above ^
4. 01:11:826 (4) - move it to 01:11:586 - and add circle in 01:12:546 - might be good i think (resnapping too~)
5. 01:21:426 (4) - how about move this to 01:21:426 (4) - and add circle in 01:22:146 - ? (don't forget to resnapping also)
6. 01:40:626 (5,1) - isn't these two far? they exceeded the DS
7. 01:45:186 - add circle here?
8. 02:06:306 - ^
9. 02:10:146 - ^

Hard
HP 6 and OD 6 are better i think Okay!

1. 00:19:026 (6) - i think this circle is unnecessary, so remove it maybe? xD No, I dont like this idea
2. 00:25:266 (1) - change the shape into this is much better Sure!
3. 00:49:026 (5) - hmm.. enlong this slider until 00:49:266 - and move this slider 00:49:386 (6) - to 00:49:506 - Thats nice idea!
4. 00:53:346 (4) - to be consistent like the slider before this, move this to x:424 y:316 maybe Nah
5. 00:54:906 (8) - hmm, unnecessary imo No
6. 00:56:706 (3,4) - same as number 3 above? Of course!

Insane
1. 00:52:866 (3,4) - here the spacing isn't same as 00:51:906 (1,2) - try to fix it maybe? Yes!
2. 02:02:466 (4) - this one would give a better flow imo Sure!
3. 03:01:026 (2) - mirroring the 03:00:546 (1) - is better Yes!
4. 03:16:386 (2) - how about this? Why not!

Okayyy and that's my mod.. sorry if it's not really helpful.. nice hitsounding btw!! good luck~

Thanks alot for a helpful mod!

Doyak

osu! Alumni

2,621 posts

Joined November 2012

Doyak 2014-12-01T17:54:51+00:00

seovince wrote:
Hello hello... m4m from what we agreed on game chat hahaha
Doyak's Easy
1. 00:34:626 (1) - you can change the shape like this, it gives a better flow for the next note fixed.
2. 00:38:466 (1) - this could gives a better flow too.. fixed.
3. 01:16:386 (4) - i know you intend to give this circle a blanket, but it isn't tidy now.. move to x:408 y:104 for better blanket (y) I don't know what you're trying to say by 'blanket', but anyway, your solution works well. fixed.
4. 01:16:866 (5) - i think this circle would be tidier if it's placed in x:440 y:180 same as above
5. 01:18:786 (1) - hmm.. do it like number 1 or 2 above maybe? fixed.
6. 01:37:506 - since this part is so dominant, put a circle might be better.. I don't agree. This is Easy diff, so it's good to give players time to rest sometimes. There's no vocal for those parts so they are less dominant. I guess it's fine to keep this.
7. 01:45:186 - ^ same as above
8. 02:25:986 (4) - copy paste the shape from 02:24:066 (3) - and CTRL H & CTRL J it would be better i think That was intentional, but I think your opinion is better. fixed.

meii18

3,577 posts

Joined October 2013

meii18 2014-12-01T19:41:38+00:00

ByBy_ChAn wrote:
seovince wrote:
ByBy's Normal
The snapping is too far in my opinion, DS 1.0 is much better i think.. fixed

1. 00:23:106 - why this section suddenly slower than before? meanwhile this section's music is no different with the section before.. the solution might be slow down the before section, or faster this section into 1.0x.. because it's 0.7 in timing point but I think is good no change
2. 00:24:306 (2) - this note doesn't sound right, move it to 00:24:066 - and add another circle to 00:24:546 - would be better (don't forget to resnapping xD ) moved and resnapped
3. 00:39:666 (2) - same as above ^ moved
4. 01:11:826 (4) - move it to 01:11:586 - and add circle in 01:12:546 - might be good i think (resnapping too~) moved
5. 01:21:426 (4) - how about move this to 01:21:426 (4) - and add circle in 01:22:146 - ? (don't forget to resnapping also) fixed
6. 01:40:626 (5,1) - isn't these two far? they exceeded the DS fixed
7. 01:45:186 - add circle here? added
8. 02:06:306 - ^added
9. 02:10:146 - ^added

Thanks for modding ! Here's my update :

SPOILER

osu file format v13

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Seikatu

333 posts

Joined January 2011

Seikatu 2014-12-02T16:19:35+00:00

Hello. M4M.

[General]
Your combo colors are quite similar.
Disable widescreen support and letterboxes

[Easy]
00:19:266 (1,2) - you can improve flow by moving (2) down
00:31:746 (2,3) - you can blanket them
00:41:826 (4,1) - too straight
01:07:266 (3) - try to decrease curve
01:14:946 (3) - you can blanket better
01:35:586 (2,3) - flow is too straight
02:08:226 (4,1) - ^
02:08:706 (1,2) - dat blanket lol
02:22:146 (2) - end this slider at 02:22:866 -
02:25:986 (4) - same
03:08:226 (3,4) - you can blanket better
03:10:146 (1,2) - ^

[Normal]
00:19:266 (1) - rotate by 5, and place at x:314, y:223
00:30:306 (4,1) - too far from each other
00:32:706 (1) - copy, paste and ctrl+h, instead of 00:33:666 (3) -
00:41:106 (3,4) - x:88, y:289
00:47:826 (3) - try to end this slider at 00:48:546 - , and add circle at 00:49:026 -
00:55:506 (3,4) - here too, it sounds strange in my opinion
01:12:546 - add circle
01:57:186 (1) - too far from previous object
02:43:266 (1) - ^, try to keep ds

[Hard]
00:15:426 (1,2) - try to avoid overlaps like this, they looks unnecesary here
00:18:066 (4,5) - ^
00:19:266 (1,2) -
00:25:746 (2) - make it straight to keep pattern consistency
00:57:666 (1,2,3,4) - place them in curve, to make good flow with 00:58:626 (5) -
01:00:306 (8,9) - blanket better
01:01:506 (1) - you can make something like this:

01:03:426 (1,2) - blanket better
01:12:786 (6,1) - ^
01:20:706 (1,2,3,4) - it's really far for hard

[Insane]
You hitsounds sounds like randomly placed. Sometimes you ignore snares, sometimes not. Quite strange.
00:58:626 (3) - sliders like this are not allowed by ranking criteria.

Slider anchors/nodes must not be used to manipulate slider speeds (whether they are normal nodes or red ones). Using extra nodes to make a slider "wiggle" is usually fine, but using so many that the slider gets scrunched up (which also makes the sliderball go crazy) or become a "hold slider" is abuse of the hitobject's intended use and is not allowed. AIMod (shortcut ctrl+shift+a) will also point out sliders that move in an "abnormal" way, so make sure to check that if you're unsure of a slider.

02:02:946 (5) - ^

That's all. GL

Vone

83 posts

Joined September 2013

Topic Starter

Vone 2014-12-02T19:32:06+00:00

Seikatu wrote:
[Hard]
00:15:426 (1,2) - try to avoid overlaps like this, they looks unnecesary here Fixed!
00:18:066 (4,5) - ^ ^
00:19:266 (1,2) - ^ ^
00:25:746 (2) - make it straight to keep pattern consistency Fixed!
00:57:666 (1,2,3,4) - place them in curve, to make good flow with 00:58:626 (5) - Fixed!
01:00:306 (8,9) - blanket better Fixed!
01:01:506 (1) - you can make something like this: Fixed!
01:03:426 (1,2) - blanket better Fixed!
01:12:786 (6,1) - ^ ^
01:20:706 (1,2,3,4) - it's really far for hard Yeah, you are right, changed!

[Insane]
You hitsounds sounds like randomly placed. Sometimes you ignore snares, sometimes not. Quite strange. I like them.
00:58:626 (3) - sliders like this are not allowed by ranking criteria. Uhm, yeah. Thanks! Fixed!
Slider anchors/nodes must not be used to manipulate slider speeds (whether they are normal nodes or red ones). Using extra nodes to make a slider "wiggle" is usually fine, but using so many that the slider gets scrunched up (which also makes the sliderball go crazy) or become a "hold slider" is abuse of the hitobject's intended use and is not allowed. AIMod (shortcut ctrl+shift+a) will also point out sliders that move in an "abnormal" way, so make sure to check that if you're unsure of a slider.
02:02:946 (5) - ^ ^

That's all. GL

Thanks for a mod!

No Pulse

88 posts

Joined November 2012

No Pulse 2014-12-02T19:47:17+00:00

M4M
[Ogólne]
Brak tagów: W tagach muszą się znaleźć przynajmniej nicki graczy którzy zrobili GD.
To, o czym mówiłem In-Game, mapa jest nużąca, i sprawia że chce się spać, potrzeba jej trochę innowacyjności, pobaw się tym
[Hard]
Zmiany SV: a tym bardziej tak duże, w hardach spotykane są raczej rzadko, sugeruję zmniejszyć zmiany SV do max 1,25, lub zlikwidować je zupełnie.

00:24:060 (5) - Ten circle wydaję mi się być niepotrzebny
00:54:900 (8) - Jeden tick do przodu
01:10:860 (7) - Brzydki jest ten slider :/ Pomajtaj nim jakoś żeby bardziej estetyczny był
01:20:700 (1) - 01:22:140 (4) - Jak na Harda, za duże te jumpy
02:02:940 (1) - Ten slider też trzeba dopracować, za dużo punktów. Masz tu link do tego jak mapować slidery
02:28:626 - brakuje mi tu circle'a
02:28:866 (5) - ten slider zamieniłbym na dwa circle, np. w ten sposób

Rozwiń

02:30:786 (3) - Jak wyżej
02:56:466 (1) - za duże jumpy jak na harda moim zdaniem, w ogóle od tego momentu robi się trochę za duży DS, polecam zmniejszyć odległość pomiędzy obiektami

Generalnie jak poziom hard trochę zbyt trudno tu jest, zmniejsz DS oraz zmiany SV, pobaw się trochę sliderami żeby nie były takie "sztywne" i będzie ok.

[Insane]
[Ogólne]
To że musisz pozbyć się trochę tych screen jumpów to już wiesz, jest ich zdecydowanie za dużo.
Slidery też już poprawiłeś
00:47:106 (4) - tutaj zmieniłbym slider na dwa circle, o w ten sposób:

Rozwiń

00:47:946 (1,2) - a te dwa circle zamieniłbym na slider

01:13:986 (4) - nie za dużo punktów na tym sliderze? Znów odsyłam do linku o mapowaniu sliderów
01:23:586 (5) - Jak wyżej
02:07:506 (3) - Jak wyżej
03:18:786 (3) - Jak wyżej
To wszystko z mojej strony, powodzenia w drodze do rankeda

Tenseki

803 posts

Joined November 2013

Tenseki 2014-12-02T23:27:27+00:00

Doyak wrote:
Tenseki wrote:
[Doyak's Ez]
01:24:546 (3,4) - change shape. no drastic curve. it's not good for ez players
01:40:866 (4) - ^
다 고쳤습니다. 저 누군지 아시면 한국어로 하셨어도 되는데 ㅋㅋㅋㅋ

뭐 그런거 있지 않겠습니까. 하루정도는 다른삶을 살아보려는게...(?)

sangu

120 posts

Joined June 2013

sangu 2014-12-03T21:36:47+00:00

Here's that mod I promised a really long time ago...

These are all on the insane diff

There are a lot of times where the notes don't feel like they line up to the music very well... (I have provided a few below)
Most of them feel like they are dragging

00:51:426 (6,1,2,3,4) - these sliders are off beat from the music...
00:59:346 (4,1,2,3) - These four notes do not line up with the vocals or the background beat
01:07:746 (3,4,5) - these sliders are dragging big time
02:12:066 (1,2,3,4) - this burst is mapped wrong, the background notes at this point has a beat that goes triple-one hit-triple not triple-4 note burst
02:56:706 (1,2) - if these two sliders are mapped to the vocals, they are off beat significantly, if they are mapped to the background notes, then these feel really awkward.... (I can't tell which you were going for)
03:11:826 (6,1,2) - same here
03:13:506 (1,2,3,4) - repeat burst as stated before 2nd note does not have a sound in music

Vone

83 posts

Joined September 2013

Topic Starter

Vone 2014-12-05T21:21:37+00:00

PulseOfSk8 wrote:
M4M
[Ogólne]
Brak tagów: W tagach muszą się znaleźć przynajmniej nicki graczy którzy zrobili GD. Zrobione!
To, o czym mówiłem In-Game, mapa jest nużąca, i sprawia że chce się spać, potrzeba jej trochę innowacyjności, pobaw się tym Jasne!
[Hard]
Zmiany SV: a tym bardziej tak duże, w hardach spotykane są raczej rzadko, sugeruję zmniejszyć zmiany SV do max 1,25, lub zlikwidować je zupełnie. Pomyślę nad tym!

00:24:060 (5) - Ten circle wydaję mi się być niepotrzebny Zostawię go, uzupełnia beat!
00:54:900 (8) - Jeden tick do przodu Oczywiście!
01:10:860 (7) - Brzydki jest ten slider :/ Pomajtaj nim jakoś żeby bardziej estetyczny był Masz rację. Zmieniłem go!
01:20:700 (1) - 01:22:140 (4) - Jak na Harda, za duże te jumpy
02:02:940 (1) - Ten slider też trzeba dopracować, za dużo punktów. Masz tu link do tego jak mapować slidery Dzięki wielkie!
02:28:626 - brakuje mi tu circle'a Zrobione!
02:28:866 (5) - ten slider zamieniłbym na dwa circle, np. w ten sposób OK!
Rozwiń
02:30:786 (3) - Jak wyżej OK!
02:56:466 (1) - za duże jumpy jak na harda moim zdaniem, w ogóle od tego momentu robi się trochę za duży DS, polecam zmniejszyć odległość pomiędzy obiektami Dobra, trochę pozmieniałem!

Generalnie jak poziom hard trochę zbyt trudno tu jest, zmniejsz DS oraz zmiany SV, pobaw się trochę sliderami żeby nie były takie "sztywne" i będzie ok. Jasne, postaram się nad tym w najbliższym czasie popracować!

[Insane]
[Ogólne]
To że musisz pozbyć się trochę tych screen jumpów to już wiesz, jest ich zdecydowanie za dużo. Wiem, zeskalowałem jumpy, które wydawały mi się za duże!
Slidery też już poprawiłeś Tak!
00:47:106 (4) - tutaj zmieniłbym slider na dwa circle, o w ten sposób: Niech tak będzie!
Rozwiń
00:47:946 (1,2) - a te dwa circle zamieniłbym na slider OK!
01:13:986 (4) - nie za dużo punktów na tym sliderze? Znów odsyłam do linku o mapowaniu sliderów Prawda, dzięki!
01:23:586 (5) - Jak wyżej ^
02:07:506 (3) - Jak wyżej ^
03:18:786 (3) - Jak wyżej ^
To wszystko z mojej strony, powodzenia w drodze do rankeda [color=#00BF00]Dzięki!
[/color]

Dziękuję bardzo za moda! Na prawdę mi pomogłeś!

meii18

3,577 posts

Joined October 2013

meii18 2014-12-05T21:21:52+00:00

ByBy_ChAn wrote:
Seikatu wrote:
[Normal]
00:19:266 (1) - rotate by 5, and place at x:314, y:223 rotated and moved
00:30:306 (4,1) - too far from each other I think is good if I placed at x:184 y:117
00:32:706 (1) - copy, paste and ctrl+h, instead of 00:33:666 (3) - maybe you want say to copy+paste from 00:32:706(1)- to recorrect 00:33:666(3) . fixed and please be more clearly
00:41:106 (3,4) - x:88, y:289 hmm. no I think is good . The DS must be consistency no change
00:47:826 (3) - try to end this slider at 00:48:546 - , and add circle at 00:49:026 - okay ! fixed and added a note
00:55:506 (3,4) - here too, it sounds strange in my opinion hmm. oops ! the slider is unsnapped ! fixed
01:12:546 - add circle It's not neccesary no change
01:57:186 (1) - too far from previous object fixed
02:43:266 (1) - ^, try to keep ds fixed

Thanks for modding ! Here's update

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Tags:The Nightday ByBy_ChAn Doyak
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Vone

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Topic Starter

Vone 2014-12-05T21:22:50+00:00

Vone wrote:
PulseOfSk8 wrote:
M4M
[Ogólne]
Brak tagów: W tagach muszą się znaleźć przynajmniej nicki graczy którzy zrobili GD. Zrobione!
To, o czym mówiłem In-Game, mapa jest nużąca, i sprawia że chce się spać, potrzeba jej trochę innowacyjności, pobaw się tym Jasne!
[Hard]
Zmiany SV: a tym bardziej tak duże, w hardach spotykane są raczej rzadko, sugeruję zmniejszyć zmiany SV do max 1,25, lub zlikwidować je zupełnie. Pomyślę nad tym!

00:24:060 (5) - Ten circle wydaję mi się być niepotrzebny Zostawię go, uzupełnia beat!
00:54:900 (8) - Jeden tick do przodu Oczywiście!
01:10:860 (7) - Brzydki jest ten slider :/ Pomajtaj nim jakoś żeby bardziej estetyczny był Masz rację. Zmieniłem go!
01:20:700 (1) - 01:22:140 (4) - Jak na Harda, za duże te jumpy
02:02:940 (1) - Ten slider też trzeba dopracować, za dużo punktów. Masz tu link do tego jak mapować slidery Dzięki wielkie!
02:28:626 - brakuje mi tu circle'a Zrobione!
02:28:866 (5) - ten slider zamieniłbym na dwa circle, np. w ten sposób OK!
Rozwiń
02:30:786 (3) - Jak wyżej OK!
02:56:466 (1) - za duże jumpy jak na harda moim zdaniem, w ogóle od tego momentu robi się trochę za duży DS, polecam zmniejszyć odległość pomiędzy obiektami Dobra, trochę pozmieniałem!

Generalnie jak poziom hard trochę zbyt trudno tu jest, zmniejsz DS oraz zmiany SV, pobaw się trochę sliderami żeby nie były takie "sztywne" i będzie ok. Jasne, postaram się nad tym w najbliższym czasie popracować!

[Insane]
[Ogólne]
To że musisz pozbyć się trochę tych screen jumpów to już wiesz, jest ich zdecydowanie za dużo. Wiem, zeskalowałem jumpy, które wydawały mi się za duże!
Slidery też już poprawiłeś Tak!
00:47:106 (4) - tutaj zmieniłbym slider na dwa circle, o w ten sposób: Niech tak będzie!
Rozwiń
00:47:946 (1,2) - a te dwa circle zamieniłbym na slider OK!
01:13:986 (4) - nie za dużo punktów na tym sliderze? Znów odsyłam do linku o mapowaniu sliderów Prawda, dzięki!
01:23:586 (5) - Jak wyżej ^
02:07:506 (3) - Jak wyżej ^
03:18:786 (3) - Jak wyżej ^
To wszystko z mojej strony, powodzenia w drodze do rankeda

Dziękuję bardzo za moda! Na prawdę mi pomogłeś!

Doyak

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Doyak 2014-12-06T08:44:45+00:00

Seikatu wrote:
Hello. M4M.

[Easy]
00:19:266 (1,2) - you can improve flow by moving (2) down
00:31:746 (2,3) - you can blanket them
00:41:826 (4,1) - too straight
01:07:266 (3) - try to decrease curve
01:14:946 (3) - you can blanket better
01:35:586 (2,3) - flow is too straight
02:08:226 (4,1) - ^
02:08:706 (1,2) - dat blanket lol
02:22:146 (2) - end this slider at 02:22:866 -
02:25:986 (4) - same
03:08:226 (3,4) - you can blanket better
03:10:146 (1,2) - ^

Actually I have never thought about blanket things, and didn't know even what blanket means. Now I see that making blankets is good for appearance, so I fixed all of them. Thanks for your mod

Doyak

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Doyak 2014-12-06T10:22:18+00:00

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Vone

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Topic Starter

Vone 2014-12-08T20:11:34+00:00

sanguisinvia wrote:
Here's that mod I promised a really long time ago...

These are all on the insane diff

There are a lot of times where the notes don't feel like they line up to the music very well... (I have provided a few below)
Most of them feel like they are dragging

00:51:426 (6,1,2,3,4) - these sliders are off beat from the music... Fixed!
00:59:346 (4,1,2,3) - These four notes do not line up with the vocals or the background beat It fills the beat
01:07:746 (3,4,5) - these sliders are dragging big time
02:12:066 (1,2,3,4) - this burst is mapped wrong, the background notes at this point has a beat that goes triple-one hit-triple not triple-4 note burst I know, thats why I wanted to fill the beat and put specific hitsounds on each notes
02:56:706 (1,2) - if these two sliders are mapped to the vocals, they are off beat significantly, if they are mapped to the background notes, then these feel really awkward.... (I can't tell which you were going for) I was mapping to a bass (listen up!)
03:11:826 (6,1,2) - same here ^
03:13:506 (1,2,3,4) - repeat burst as stated before 2nd note does not have a sound in music As i said!

Thanks alot for a mod!

Last edited by Vone 2014-12-08T20:12:22+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

Vone

83 posts

Joined September 2013

Topic Starter

Vone 2014-12-08T20:11:59+00:00

Doyak's and ByBy's mod updated!

Hot Loli

96 posts

Joined March 2013

Hot Loli 2015-01-05T10:18:37+00:00

This map should be ranked :3

meii18

3,577 posts

Joined October 2013

meii18 2015-01-13T19:34:37+00:00

MegaKAKER wrote:
This map should be ranked :3

Not yet 0w0/ this map needs a lot of mods to be ranked

Darkxell_mc

51 posts

Joined April 2014

Darkxell_mc 2015-01-24T20:10:26+00:00

Hi! Free mod ftw, you are awesome.

- General -

Kiai times and pauses should be the same in all difficulties.
It's not very important for pauses, but it's a bit weird to have an insane diff with two pauses and a normal on the same set with none. However it's probably a bit late now.
Maybe you should fix kiai times in easy and hard, the difficulty is not even changing during them in those diffs, so it's really not a problem for me.

That pic name does. No seriously, what's that? xD

Hum. Maybe you are using a skin. Sorry to be rude, but your combocoulours are really not fitting anything. I might not be the only one to say that, but please at least change the yellow and the green. Here is a bunch of possibilities, stuff i like.

Colours ideas

[ Colours ] // Deep blues (I can be funny sometimes)
Combo1 : 80,78,129
Combo2 : 0,0,113
Combo3 : 0,100,221
Combo4 : 90,175,175

[ Colours ] // Pinky pie (I should stop with those jokes)
Combo1 : 103,100,162
Combo2 : 190,190,190
Combo3 : 87,0,174
Combo4 : 213,74,209

[ Colours ] //Greyscale (This one you wont get it, i don't care.)
Combo1 : 53,53,53
Combo2 : 214,214,214
Combo3 : 125,125,125

- Easy -

00:34:146 (4) - I feel like this is weird for an easy diff, but now that i've heard it a couple of times, i can't really juge anymore.
I think finishing sliders on red ticks like 00:17:346 and everywhere else is a bit hard for an easy diff, but sliders end don't really matters. As long as you are letting the player to recover from it with 1.5 or 2.5 beats it's not a problem.

02:22:146 (2,3) - This is unsnapped. I guess you already know it, but i guess you shouldn't change anything either, for some reason it fit the song nicely even in easy ^^

Pauses are a bit long, that makes the map a bit long. At 02:35:586 there is probably nothing to do about it, but maybe adding some spinners would fix it?
Normally pauses should not exeed 15 sec.

Nice diff overall, Easy is as always fast to mod ^^'

- Normal -

01:29:826 - Isn't there a note missing here?

01:44:466 (4) - Hard to catch for a normal. And it's going to desorientate players to get (5).

Add at least a pause somewhere.

I don't really like your choices in terms of hitsounds, but i guess that's personal.

Nice diff overall ^^

- Hard -

01:17:346 - Insert break?

03:19:506 (1) - This jump is hell, right?

Very good note placement, awesome patterns, nice hitsounds... Really good diff overall.
I'm happy to mod this kind of things! ^^

- Insane -

02:42:786 (4) - Unsnapped to the beat by 1ms or 2. Seems like you forgot to open Ai mod ^^

Perfect diff? No really, everything's fine!

Vone

83 posts

Joined September 2013

Topic Starter

Vone 2015-02-02T16:17:58+00:00

Darkxell_mc wrote:
Hi! Free mod ftw, you are awesome. Thanks!

- General -

Kiai times and pauses should be the same in all difficulties.
It's not very important for pauses, but it's a bit weird to have an insane diff with two pauses and a normal on the same set with none. However it's probably a bit late now. Nah, I dont feel like that is really important
Maybe you should fix kiai times in easy and hard, the difficulty is not even changing during them in those diffs, so it's really not a problem for me.

That pic name does. No seriously, what's that? xD Doesnt matter XD

Hum. Maybe you are using a skin. Sorry to be rude, but your combocoulours are really not fitting anything. I might not be the only one to say that, but please at least change the yellow and the green. Here is a bunch of possibilities, stuff i like. My choice is blue! It fits well! Thanks!
Colours ideas
[ Colours ] // Deep blues (I can be funny sometimes)
Combo1 : 80,78,129
Combo2 : 0,0,113
Combo3 : 0,100,221
Combo4 : 90,175,175

[ Colours ] // Pinky pie (I should stop with those jokes)
Combo1 : 103,100,162
Combo2 : 190,190,190
Combo3 : 87,0,174
Combo4 : 213,74,209

[ Colours ] //Greyscale (This one you wont get it, i don't care.)
Combo1 : 53,53,53
Combo2 : 214,214,214
Combo3 : 125,125,125

- Hard -

01:17:346 - Insert break? Fixed!

03:19:506 (1) - This jump is hell, right? Oh, yes. Fixed!

Very good note placement, awesome patterns, nice hitsounds... Really good diff overall.
I'm happy to mod this kind of things! ^^ Thanks!

- Insane -

02:42:786 (4) - Unsnapped to the beat by 1ms or 2. Seems like you forgot to open Ai mod ^^ lol, I didnt see that... Thanks, it is fixed!

Perfect diff? No really, everything's fine! Thanks!

Thanks alot for a mod!

Doyak

osu! Alumni

2,621 posts

Joined November 2012

Doyak 2015-02-04T07:49:30+00:00

Darkxell_mc wrote:
Hi! Free mod ftw, you are awesome.

- General -

Kiai times and pauses should be the same in all difficulties.
It's not very important for pauses, but it's a bit weird to have an insane diff with two pauses and a normal on the same set with none. However it's probably a bit late now.
Maybe you should fix kiai times in easy and hard, the difficulty is not even changing during them in those diffs, so it's really not a problem for me.
Ranking criteria says, "If you have a guest difficulty from another mapper that uses different kiai, then it's fine as long as it still makes sense." But yeah, it's good to make them same, I'll consider changing mine, but I'll talk it with Vone first.

- Easy -

00:34:146 (4) - I feel like this is weird for an easy diff, but now that i've heard it a couple of times, i can't really juge anymore. I guess it's fine.
I think finishing sliders on red ticks like 00:17:346 and everywhere else is a bit hard for an easy diff, but sliders end don't really matters. As long as you are letting the player to recover from it with 1.5 or 2.5 beats it's not a problem. Like you said, slider end doesn't really matter. And even though it's Easy diff, it's still rhythm game, which should follow the music. Those beats are important.

02:22:146 (2,3) - This is unsnapped. I guess you already know it, but i guess you shouldn't change anything either, for some reason it fit the song nicely even in easy ^^ Yeah, those rhythms are very far from each other, so if I try to snap them perfectly, it'll only make those sliders go to the end of the screen.

Pauses are a bit long, that makes the map a bit long. At 02:35:586 there is probably nothing to do about it, but maybe adding some spinners would fix it?
Normally pauses should not exeed 15 sec. The BPM of this song is very low. Each of those breaks includes one 'block', so there's really nothing I can do with it, even if it's too long. If I halve them, it's like starting at the middle for no reason. Filling them with spinners seems unnecessary, it looks just useless.

Nice diff overall, Easy is as always fast to mod ^^'

So nothing changed. Thank you for mod though

meii18

3,577 posts

Joined October 2013

meii18 2015-02-20T16:52:27+00:00

No reply=Fixed

Darkxell_mc wrote:
Hi! Free mod ftw, you are awesome.

- Normal -

01:29:826 - Isn't there a note missing here?

01:44:466 (4) - Hard to catch for a normal. And it's going to desorientate players to get (5). no for me is quite good

Add at least a pause somewhere.

I don't really like your choices in terms of hitsounds, but i guess that's personal.

Nice diff overall ^^ Thanks :3

Also I changed some stuffs

Update

osu file format v14

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Countdown: 0
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StackLeniency: 0.7
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Source:
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Also I'll make a additional modding on hard and insane later :3

meii18

3,577 posts

Joined October 2013

meii18 2015-02-21T18:09:31+00:00

additional modding incoming

asdf - nazi or suggestion
asdf - unrankable issue

Hard

In general , pls use 1.3x DS cuz is too little for a hard diff
00:17:346(1,2,3)- For me this flow looks kinda weird . Try this instead : https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2807097
00:18:066(4,5)- The sliders are too close ! Why you not try this : https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2807099 ? It will improve the flow and the cursor movement
00:21:426(5)- Swap NC cuz new vocals
00:23:106(1,2,3,4,5,6)- 6 circles doesn't fit well the rhythm and instruments . Keep (1)- (2)- and (3)- , delete (5)- and (6)- and then at 00:23:826(4)- ( where is (4)- ) replace it with a 1/2 slider . Here's the example : https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2807110
00:29:106(1)- Move the end of the spinner to 00:30:306()- where's the downbeat
00:30:786(1,2)- The pattern looks weird in my opinion . This is much better : https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2807125
00:32:946(5)- Swap NC
00:34:626(1,2)- Pls try this : https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2807150 I don't like the current pattern and flow but from that pic the pattern will looks much better
00:38:466(7)- Swap NC and remove NC from next note for consistency with stanza
00:39:426(2)- Place the note to 115|274 to avoid the nazi blanket and make the previous slider curved well . It looks weird orz
00:40:866(1,2)- Place it to 204|89 to allign perfectly with the previous note
00:41:586(4,5,6)- Why you not make a triangle form : https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2807191 ? It will looks much better and the flow will be improved I guess
00:49:026(5,6)- Why (5)- is straighted and (6)- it's curved ? The pattern looks kinda weird . Try this : https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2807197
00:49:986(1,2,3,4)- In my opinion , the circles' placement looks weird imo . Place the notes like in this pic : https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2807209
00:53:586(5)- Swap NC cuz new vocals ~~
00:53:586(1)- The triangle is not so perfectly made . Try this one : https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2807224
00:59:346(6)- Swap NC

I think it's enough ~~ . Insane , it will be modded by neonat . I hope I helped you and ~~you can give me kd~~ no no KD ! I have already one D:

neonat

Beatmap Nominator

3,526 posts

Joined April 2012

neonat 2015-02-22T18:58:02+00:00

Nico Douga Livestream happened, as well as modding other maps. I should be back by next Saturday after work from Monday all the way to Friday to look at this song

Vone

83 posts

Joined September 2013

Topic Starter

Vone 2015-02-22T20:36:12+00:00

Okay then, neonat!

Vone

83 posts

Joined September 2013

Topic Starter

Vone 2015-02-23T19:21:02+00:00

Thanks for the mod, ByBy! Fixed almost all!

meii18

3,577 posts

Joined October 2013

meii18 2015-02-27T18:30:08+00:00

@Vone Add to the tags ''ByBy13'' pls cuz I was ByBy13 before

Vone

83 posts

Joined September 2013

Topic Starter

Vone 2015-02-28T08:39:58+00:00

Okay, will do!

neonat

Beatmap Nominator

3,526 posts

Joined April 2012

neonat 2015-02-28T17:12:01+00:00

General

Consider keeping kiai times constant, the kiai time in Easy differs from the rest

Easy

00:31:746 (2,3) - you can definitely make this look nicer by making a blanket
00:40:386 (3) - the shape isn't neat, at least honestly something like this:

SPOILER

01:14:946 (3,4) - blanket better
01:18:786 - 01:48:546 - lacks any hitsounds, please add them
02:22:146 (2,3) - too far apart, inconsistent with the spacing used in Easy

Hitsounds can make more impact
Structure can be much neater, but it doesn't break much flow at this speed, don't want to be too picky, at least until you get more experience in mapping

Normal

I really don't recommend the sv changes, any changes in the music to warrant such changes is not very obvious, and to have it in Normal just makes things more confusing

00:22:626 - unused green line
00:22:866 - ^
00:32:706 (1,2,1) - not a very good overlap
01:17:826 - there's no music here, why does the slider end here?
01:22:626 (1,2) - could make this straight
01:24:546 (5) - the curves aren't similar, making it look bad
01:42:786 (3,6) - at least stack their ends
02:31:746 (1) - sliders like these really look very bad, sticking out and just not fitting
02:33:666 (2) - make the curve better
02:58:626 (1) - ^
03:13:986 (1,2,3) - you overuse this slider-circle-slider pattern on the left side too much, it gets obvious, it gets boring this way

The slider shapes don't look neat, they can look much better
You should go through the difficulty once through again and fix them up
You really should not use the slider velocity changes at all here, they do nothing good and just confuses people, especially when spacing is kept constant throughout, which means they get closer and further apart when the velocity changes
There is no hitsounds at all. Please add them in

Hard

00:19:026 (6,3) - do not overlap them
00:20:706 (4,1) - too close to each other, not looking neat
00:23:586 (3,4) - hitsounds here and at 00:25:266 (1,2) differ, and so on so forth - please use a hitsound pattern more consistent, or makes more sense, because making it random will not do the difficulty any good, because the map would present itself as unstructured
00:36:786 (2,4) - stack better
00:37:506 (4,5,6) - straight line isn't too ideal a flow
00:47:826 (3,4) - blanket better
00:50:706 (4,1) - stack
01:06:306 (5,6) - points are excessive, they don't make much difference in the shape, and they are not necessary, use fewer points and make the slider shape neater
01:07:746 (1,2,3) - use the same shape
01:12:786 (6,1,2,3) - make the pattern more symmetrical
01:36:066 (7,8) - use a similar shape, and 01:36:066 (7,9) - don't overlap
01:49:506 (1,2) - use a similar shape for them
01:51:186 (6,1,2) - bad movement, having the slider facing straight down is just bad, as the rest are moving sideways
01:53:346 (1,2) - at least angle them such that they look more matching as a pattern, things look all over the place right now, and this isn't the first time I am seeing this in the map
02:27:906 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - pattern looks bad, and 02:28:866 (5,6) needs to be stacked
02:29:226 (7,8,1) - use constant spacing to differentiate them, they are different in timing
02:30:786 (3,4) - stack
02:31:386 (6,1) - same thing about spacing
02:33:306 (5,1) - ^
02:45:906 (4) - at least make each curved section similar
03:00:546 (7) - NC
03:18:546 (6,7) - why reduce spacing here, no reason to use a spacing different from 03:18:066 (4,5,6)
03:20:226 (3) - too far away, reduce the spacing
03:20:466 (4) - ^

Honestly speaking, this difficulty looks very unpolished, the structure isn't there and the map looks messy. Sliders need to look neater, and should not be angled randomly from each other if there are consecutive sliders. It doesn't flow well all the time, and that is partially affected by how to place the sliders as well. Hitsounds don't sound consistent, get more advice on that from others as well

I'll stop here, Insane seems to suffer from the same unpolished look as the other difficulties

I would advice that you re-look everything and try and remake this mapset as you gain more experience, because things don't look like the finished product right now.

Good Luck

Doyak

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Joined November 2012

Doyak 2015-03-07T13:59:19+00:00

neonat wrote:
General

Consider keeping kiai times constant, the kiai time in Easy differs from the rest I'll reconsider it, but I definitely saw on the ranking criteria that I can make it different because it's a guest diff.

Easy

00:31:746 (2,3) - you can definitely make this look nicer by making a blanket Does this look better for now?
00:40:386 (3) - the shape isn't neat, at least honestly something like this: Fixed differently.
SPOILER
01:14:946 (3,4) - blanket better I hope this is better.
01:18:786 - 01:48:546 - lacks any hitsounds, please add them I thought that part doesn't require special hitsounds, so I just made it all normal. Do you have any specific suggestion? Please teach me.
02:22:146 (2,3) - too far apart, inconsistent with the spacing used in Easy I know, but they're 2.5-beats-far from each other, and 0.90x and 1.06x isn't very big difference, so is that really that important?

Hitsounds can make more impact
Structure can be much neater, but it doesn't break much flow at this speed, don't want to be too picky, at least until you get more experience in mapping

fixed version

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riffy

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riffy 2015-03-13T14:52:46+00:00

Doyak wrote:
Consider keeping kiai times constant, the kiai time in Easy differs from the rest I'll reconsider it, but I definitely saw on the ranking criteria that I can make it different because it's a guest diff.

You actually can, if that's reasonable.

Just stopping buy to say that I might not be able to mod it properly. Sorry. :c

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