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Vone

Joined September 2013

Topic Starter

Vone 2014-10-25T18:06:23+00:00

Doyak wrote:
You're very good at making good patterns for Insane. but as I told you before, this contains screen jumps too many. You could make 'some' parts have large jumps, but there are too many.

This is not because those jumps are 'hard'(It IS hard though), but screen jumps make the map too extreme (I want a English word for 막장 in Korean).

Also, it would be better to use smaller grid size. Some notes are placed very stragely in terms of distance.

00:15:426 (1,2,3) - Distance feels a bit strange. FIXED

00:18:306 (5) - Considering the beat, this should be the new combo, not the next one. FIXED

00:18:306 (5,1) - only those two have smaller distance. Or maybe you could start jump section from those two. FIXED

00:21:426 (2,3,4,1) - Strange distances. If you were trying to gradually increase the distance, combo 1 should be farther. FIXED

00:27:906 (4,5,6) - Distance. FIXED

01:57:066 (6,1) - Wow that is way too big for a 1/4 jump. (Even bigger than that of The Big Black) FIXED

Everything else, it's generally good. Especially I like how you make those complicated sliders. But still, too many extreme jumps. That's the only big issue I can find from your map.

Thanks for mod, It was really good, I didnt see all these distance snap issues. All fixed, I will leave jumps, but thanks for suggestion. Thanks!

Maeglwn

Maeglwn 2014-10-25T18:34:45+00:00

alright, so while I'm not doing anything I guess I'll post about shit on here

before I say anything, this is ABSOLUTELY INCREDIBLE for a new mapper and I applaud you, I wish I was this good when I started out

but obviously there's always things that can be improved upon and if anything I want you set these out to you for future maps or this map or whatever

[Distance Snap and why it's literally the greatest thing you'll ever use]

so, for the MOST part, this map is pretty well.. at least, close to distance snapped well. but there's obviously a few little gaps in the snapping that need to be addressed before aynthing else. it might actually just be because of the grid and if it is I apologize in advance (but I'll get to the grid in a second)

so, starting off, it's most noticeable like.. here.

these obviously are not all spaced 1.2 or 1.3 or whatever

generally, you want your entire map except for parts where sliders are faster and slower or kiais or some shit to be on the same kind of distance snap. so say for this part we'll just like stick with 1.3 for the entire time and make it into a beautiful little curve looking thing

it turns into that. super pretty, etc

keeping distance snap generally the same throughout will help make this map extended from like.. just good, to great. you want that. you don't want all of your notes scattered between 1.1 and 1.3

[Grid]

actually I'm not really going to say much here, you should just always keep your grid on the tiniest level always. idk if you mapped using the grid this time around, and some popular mappers don't, but I personally think it's the greatest thing ever for keeping symmetry

so right now, you have this

hit g a few times, and you get this

suddenly mapping becomes 10x more easy

[Jumps and when to use them and when not to put them everywhere]

so the second issue that I saw mainly with this map was the placement of jumps, mainly during like the first kiai (or at least what I looked through)

so starting off here, this is just the 2 sliders but I'm going to talk about this entire section here

this entire thing slowly gains distance snap and you rotate it and stuff etc, it's a really cool part.. but the issue being is that there's not really a whole lot in the music to attribute the jumps to

generally for stuff like this you want to use it for build up sections like right before kiais and stuff (idk if this song even has any serious build up sections or not but if it does, yea)

kinda the same idea here too

in this part there's just like.. the basic after chorus kinda feel and there's jumps again. jumps are more of a thing that happens whenever there's something sudden that happens or when transitioning into a new measure/combo. there's a lot of jumps in this map that don't really attribute a whole lot to that, so look through and ask yourself on each of them whether or not there's an audio cue that would deserve a jump. if not, consider making it just a regular part of the song instead

that's probably all I got for right now, I'm half asleep so

good luck to you dude. remember the best thing you can do right now is keep practicing, try not to worry about ranking anything at the moment. worry about getting your skills up to the point where ranking stuff is a breeze because of how good of a mapper you are, not because you want to push it into ranking like most people do

Tarrasky

1,203 posts

Joined March 2014

Tarrasky 2014-10-25T19:03:16+00:00

Insane

General: I think sounds good u add new different hitsounds and collorcombos, is only if u luke
To make shortstream or stream like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2170677 i recommend u remove the gridsnap
In Insane not is recommend u put fulljumps, look, this part of the music is really slow, and u put a really long jumps, u can difficult the map w/ shortjumsp 00:22:146 (1,2,3,4) -
I think u have a little difficult to make jumps, i recommend u press Ctrl + Shift + D and enjoy
This kind of slider is really exaggerated, i think u can make this more easy and aesthetic more beatiful https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2170699
I recommend u use the simetria in this kind of slider 01:03:186 (7,8) -
01:04:386 (2,3) - /\ same
01:18:786 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - overmap
01:24:306 (1,2,3,4,5) - crtl shitf D
why 01:26:466 is really slow and 01:31:266 have so many fulljumps, and the sounds same simmilar
I think u can do more flow in your map, this simple parts have not a hard flow, but not is aesthetic perfect 01:36:066 (1,2) -
REMEMBER, not is only distance w do a map hard, look this slider 1,40, why? u can put a slide more faster and make a not overmap good map

The map sounds great, nice job and good luck ^^

Vone

83 posts

Joined September 2013

Topic Starter

Vone 2014-10-25T19:09:51+00:00

THANKS MAEGLWN!

Nvirjskly

64 posts

Joined October 2013

Nvirjskly 2014-10-25T19:27:59+00:00

Hi Vone! I hope you learn some English from my post! I'm not that good of a mapper, but I hope that we learn from each other!

[General]
Maybe rename the background image? That filename looks quite scary.

I have set my Universal Offset, so I don't know if this is right, but Offset to 15416? You should ask someone about this.

Make your grid smaller (or turn off grid snap,) as many of your notes are spaced to the grid, and look uneven in the earlier parts of the song.

I really like the song!

[Insane]
Try OD8? The song is highly regular and fits really well into a constant rhythm, therefore with the low BPM it has, it might need higher OD to be challenging. My first play I got 96%, which was mostly from missing jumps, and not from 100s on notes.

00:17:586 (2,3,4,5,1) - I don't really like this pattern, as I fell it does not fit with the music.

Generally most of this part feels forced until 00:30:546

Consider the following:

00:19:026 (3,1,2) - Instead of there being three jumps here, how about using the music and doing a star pattern at 00:19:026 (3,1,2,3,4)

Extrapolating from this, we can categorise this part into two categories: Category 1, patterns of music such as 00:23:106 (1,2,3,4) - which would feel really good with jumps. Category 2, pattern with music such as 00:16:866 (1,2,3,4,5) - which fits with the calming theme of the music. We can therefore do something like:

Category 1 type music involves more jumps/patterns AS AN EXAMPLE, whilst category 2 would involve calmer patterns that AS AN EXAMPLE at least until the music kicks in at 00:30:786

00:28:376 (6) - This is one of the few parts of the song, you end a slider on the first beat, which just feels off, maybe consider making it part of the spinner?

Maybe make the part 00:46:146 to 01:01:506 play a bit similar to the part 02:27:906 to 02:34:986 ?

00:47:946 (1,2) - I don't think this double maps to the music.

01:07:026 (2) and 01:13:986 (4) just don't feel like they belong in the song.

01:18:786 (1) - 01:26:466 (1) I really like this part, it builds up the jumps and flows the jumps with the music.

The part at 02:02:946 (1) which is really well done, but maybe make parts like 02:07:506 (3) similar? It felt like you introduced a great pattern to the player, and then you replace it with ugly looking sliders. Same thing at 02:34:986 and 02:42:066 (1) ?

01:29:346 (3,4,5,6) - In my opinion squares are a fun pattern, but maybe you should use them more than once, if you are going to use them, and rotate them a bit so that they look as part of the pattern AS AN EXAMPLE

01:56:826 (4,5,6) - Try this as a triplet like you have at 02:11:586 (1,2,3)? This I feel like is a personal preference, what you have is fine, but I just like triplets more haha.

Again, 02:27:906 to 02:34:986 is really well done in my opinion.

From here on out, you are suing mostly the patterns you used previously, so I will focus more on specifics.

02:58:146 (3,4) - This part is a bit much. The jump is really hard

03:05:346 (5,6,7,8) - Similar here. I like the jumps themselves, but their intensity just seems too much.

03:18:786 (7) - Again with the slider here, I like the fact that you are playing around with sliders, but this one I just don't like.

03:19:506 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - Good strong finish!

Overall it feels like you tried a bunch of different things whilst mapping this song, so I hope you learn what works for you and you define your style! I'm really happy that you are not mapping anime, and chose a really good song to map! I would really like to see this song get ranked.

Vone

83 posts

Joined September 2013

Topic Starter

Vone 2014-10-26T09:41:46+00:00

Tarrasky wrote:
Insane
General: I think sounds good u add new different hitsounds and collorcombos, is only if u luke I DONT WANT TO CHANGE MY HISTOUNDS AND COLLORCOMBOS!
To make shortstream or stream like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2170677 i recommend u remove the gridsnap I DID IT WITH CTRL + SHIFT + D!
In Insane not is recommend u put fulljumps, look, this part of the music is really slow, and u put a really long jumps, u can difficult the map w/ shortjumsp 00:22:146 (1,2,3,4) - I WANTED TO MAKE IT LIKE THIS, IT IS OK, BUT THANKS FOR SUGGESTION!
I think u have a little difficult to make jumps, i recommend u press Ctrl + Shift + D and enjoy THANKS ALOT!
This kind of slider is really exaggerated, i think u can make this more easy and aesthetic more beatiful https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2170699 FIXED!
I recommend u use the simetria in this kind of slider 01:03:186 (7,8) - I TRIED TO FIX THIS A LITTLE BIT!
01:04:386 (2,3) - /\ same YEAH ^
01:18:786 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - overmap I DONT THINK SO, I LEFT IT, BECAUSE I LIKE THIS PART
01:24:306 (1,2,3,4,5) - crtl shitf D THANKS
why 01:26:466 is really slow and 01:31:266 have so many fulljumps, and the sounds same simmilar I WANTED IT TO LOOK LIKE THIS, BUT THANKS
I think u can do more flow in your map, this simple parts have not a hard flow, but not is aesthetic perfect 01:36:066 (1,2) - TRIED TO FIX!
REMEMBER, not is only distance w do a map hard, look this slider 1,40, why? u can put a slide more faster and make a not overmap good map THANKS!

The map sounds great, nice job and good luck ^^
THANKS FOR MOD! I APPRECIATE IT!

Vone

83 posts

Joined September 2013

Topic Starter

Vone 2014-10-26T10:13:12+00:00

Nvirjskly wrote:
Hi Vone! I hope you learn some English from my post! I'm not that good of a mapper, but I hope that we learn from each other!

[General]
Maybe rename the background image? That filename looks quite scary. I dont know does it matter?

I have set my Universal Offset, so I don't know if this is right, but Offset to 15416? You should ask someone about this. Now I left it like it was, I will ask for some kind mods, but thanks!

Make your grid smaller (or turn off grid snap,) as many of your notes are spaced to the grid, and look uneven in the earlier parts of the song. I did it!

I really like the song! Yeah, me too, that's why I decided to map it!

[Insane]
Try OD8? The song is highly regular and fits really well into a constant rhythm, therefore with the low BPM it has, it might need higher OD to be challenging. My first play I got 96%, which was mostly from missing jumps, and not from 100s on notes. Yeah, you are right, changed!

00:17:586 (2,3,4,5,1) - I don't really like this pattern, as I fell it does not fit with the music. Maybe it doesnt fit well, but I made it specially, because I dont wanted to make this part boring

Generally most of this part feels forced until 00:30:546 ^

Consider the following:

00:19:026 (3,1,2) - Instead of there being three jumps here, how about using the music and doing a star pattern at 00:19:026 (3,1,2,3,4) I did star pattern there!

Extrapolating from this, we can categorise this part into two categories: Category 1, patterns of music such as 00:23:106 (1,2,3,4) - which would feel really good with jumps. Category 2, pattern with music such as 00:16:866 (1,2,3,4,5) - which fits with the calming theme of the music. We can therefore do something like:

Category 1 type music involves more jumps/patterns AS AN EXAMPLE, whilst category 2 would involve calmer patterns that AS AN EXAMPLE at least until the music kicks in at 00:30:786 Thanks for suggestion!

00:28:376 (6) - This is one of the few parts of the song, you end a slider on the first beat, which just feels off, maybe consider making it part of the spinner? I wanted to do this, because I did it like this man's voice just on spinner.

Maybe make the part 00:46:146 to 01:01:506 play a bit similar to the part 02:27:906 to 02:34:986 ? I dont want to patterns look similiar

00:47:946 (1,2) - I don't think this double maps to the music. If you will listen wisely, you will hear 2 sounds, thats why I inserted 2 circles there

01:07:026 (2) and 01:13:986 (4) just don't feel like they belong in the song. Vocal line!

01:18:786 (1) - 01:26:466 (1) I really like this part, it builds up the jumps and flows the jumps with the music. Yeah, I like it too!

The part at 02:02:946 (1) which is really well done, but maybe make parts like 02:07:506 (3) similar? It felt like you introduced a great pattern to the player, and then you replace it with ugly looking sliders. Same thing at 02:34:986 and 02:42:066 (1) ? Yeah, I know the slow down was a good idea, but I made it only for the one reason - aesthetic. Because as you can hear, the music is like slowly going a little bit down, and afterwards there is a small break, so thats why I made it like this, but I like the suggestion!

01:29:346 (3,4,5,6) - In my opinion squares are a fun pattern, but maybe you should use them more than once, if you are going to use them, and rotate them a bit so that they look as part of the pattern AS AN EXAMPLE I just decided to not use square patterns so!

01:56:826 (4,5,6) - Try this as a triplet like you have at 02:11:586 (1,2,3)? This I feel like is a personal preference, what you have is fine, but I just like triplets more haha. Yeah, I was thinking about it, but when I was mapping it, I did it, because I dont want to make a short break (you know, between notes) so I did it in one shortstream.

Again, 02:27:906 to 02:34:986 is really well done in my opinion. Thanks!

From here on out, you are suing mostly the patterns you used previously, so I will focus more on specifics.

02:58:146 (3,4) - This part is a bit much. The jump is really hard I agree! Changed it!

03:05:346 (5,6,7,8) - Similar here. I like the jumps themselves, but their intensity just seems too much. Changed!

03:18:786 (7) - Again with the slider here, I like the fact that you are playing around with sliders, but this one I just don't like. I made all these strange sliders for his vocal line to make it cool!

03:19:506 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - Good strong finish! Thanks!

Overall it feels like you tried a bunch of different things whilst mapping this song, so I hope you learn what works for you and you define your style! I'm really happy that you are not mapping anime, and chose a really good song to map! I would really like to see this song get ranked. Thanks alot for mod!

Tuxxy_old

204 posts

Joined May 2013

Tuxxy_old 2014-11-01T18:57:03+00:00

m4m requested

The map itself seems to be alright, just some issues here and there?
Insane combos

00:16:866 no NC
00:17:586 NC
00:18:306 no NC
00:19:266 NC
00:20:706 no NC
00:21:426 NC
00:22:146 no NC
00:24:546 no NC
00:25:266 NC
00:32:946 NC, make next note not NC
00:51:426 no NC
00:51:906 NC
00:59:586 NC
01:00:306 no NC
01:03:666 NC
01:04:146 no NC
01:06:306 no NC
01:16:146 no NC
01:24:546 no NC
01:25:506 You can choose whether this is a new combo or not
01:30:306 NC
01:31:266 no NC
01:32:226 NC
01:32:706 no NC
01:36:066 NC
01:37:026 no NC
01:38:226 NC
01:38:946 no NC
01:40:386 no NC
01:41:346 no NC
01:43:506 no NC, next note should be NC
01:55:986 no NC
01:58:866 no NC, next note should be NC
02:00:306 no NC
02:01:026 NC
02:01:746 no NC
02:39:186 note after should be NC, not this
02:42:066 no NC
02:56:706 NC
02:57:666 no NC
02:58:626 NC
02:59:106 no NC
03:01:506 no NC
03:02:466 NC
03:11:346 no NC
03:12:306 no NC
03:15:906 NC
03:16:866 no NC
03:17:826 NC
03:19:506 note after this should be NC, not this

Notes:

00:22:266 This jump is WAY too long, consider making it shorter.
00:28:386 Make the slider 1/2 as long for preperation.
01:07:026 this slider is pretty ugly, try changing it

01:13:986 ^
01:21:666 I can see where you are coming from on this, but it seems too far.
01:25:986 move 3 to x368 y272
01:45:426 jump is too far from both before and after.
01:48:306 it makes more sense to place it where 2 was
01:53:106 (4,6) too far, try placing both where 2 was
02:07:506 ugly slider

02:27:906 to 02:34:986 these could use sounds
02:42:066 ugly slider
03:06:066 put this where 4 is?
03:18:786 hopefully you know where I am coming from now

Vone

83 posts

Joined September 2013

Topic Starter

Vone 2014-11-01T19:22:38+00:00

Thanks for mod Tuxxy! applied some of your mod!

Halfslashed

Global Moderator

425 posts

Joined July 2014

Halfslashed 2014-11-05T01:53:38+00:00

Ello!
[General]
I really think you should map more of this song. The song ends at 03:39:906, whereas you stopped at 03:21:666. The other thing is that you should cut the mp3 after 03:39:906, as there is no noise.
[Insane]
00:26:226 (6,7) - Increase the amount of space between these notes to prevent overlap
00:28:986 (1) - Start the spinner on 00:29:106 instead, while keeping the ending the same
00:59:586 (5) - NC
01:03:186 (7) - NC
01:04:386 (1) - Remove NC
01:05:346 (3) - NC
01:16:866 (7) - NC
01:21:666 (3,4) - These jumps are a bit much. Try this: http://puu.sh/cDGND/7c63e2332f.jpg
01:26:466 (1) - I think you should make this slider symmetrical to 01:26:946 (2)
01:28:386 (1,2) - Symmetry would make this a bit nicer as well.
01:31:266 (1) - Remove NC
01:32:226 (5) - NC
01:36:066 (5) - NC
01:37:026 (1) - Remove NC
01:38:706 (4,1) - Fix your blanket
01:40:386 (1) - Remove NC
01:40:866 (1) - Remove NC
01:41:346 (1) - Remove NC
01:43:506 (1) - Remove NC
01:43:746 (2) - NC
01:58:866 (1) - Remove NC
01:59:106 (2) - NC
02:01:026 (4) - NC
02:01:746 (1) - Remove NC
02:12:066 (1,2,3,4) - Shift these notes up. Maybe something like this? http://puu.sh/cDHdl/2a190a371d.jpg
02:31:386 (5,1) - Space these sliders out so that they don't overlap
02:33:306 (5,1) - ^
02:35:586 (1,2,3,4) - Decide whether or not you want to make the curve of slider placement more prominent or make these sliders symmetrical. Curve: http://puu.sh/cDHz8/48b142e659.jpg 02:36:546 (3,4) - Symmetrical: http://puu.sh/cDHpN/831728a477.jpg http://puu.sh/cDHrp/e0b3dc56ee.jpg
02:37:506 (5) - NC
02:39:186 (1,2) - Remove NC on 1, put NC on 2.
02:41:346 (8) - NC
02:56:706 (7) - NC
02:57:666 (1) - Remove NC
03:01:506 (1) - Remove NC
03:08:226 (7) - NC
03:10:386 (1,2,3,4) - Fix the symmetry of this square.
03:11:346 (1) - Remove NC
03:12:306 (3) - NC
03:15:906 (7) - NC
03:16:866 (1) - Remove NC
03:19:506 (1) - Remove NC
03:19:746 (2) - NC

Really good map, good luck with your other diffs!

Vone

83 posts

Joined September 2013

Topic Starter

Vone 2014-11-05T16:44:54+00:00

Thanks Halfslashed! Applied most of your mod! Really helpful!

meii18

3,577 posts

Joined October 2013

meii18 2014-11-08T21:44:43+00:00

My mod :

~Hard~

00:36:793(2)- Place it on x:140 y:241

00:47:391(3)- ^ on x:140 y:308 like this :

SPOILER

00:48:899- and 00:49:389- : Add 2 notes and place the second note on x:436 y:96 like this:

SPOILER

00:50:932(5,6)- Looks horrible ! Make the first slider(5) curve and 2nd slider(6) move on x:100 y:180 like this:

SPOILER

00:54:906(8)- Place it on x:164 y:96

01:13:746(2)- ^ on x:160 y:196

01:13:978(3)- ^ on x:84 y:120

01:01:026- Add a note

01:02:946(4)- Place it on x:140 y:120

01:03:186- ^ on x:232 y:72

01:03:426- ^ on x:316 y:120

01:51:161(6)- Remove the note

01:55:063(6)- ^

01:55:266(7)- NC

01:58:907(6)- Remove it

02:06:539(6)- ^

02:09:443(6)-^

~Insane~

Nothing to say ! Good Job !!!!

I hope it will be very helpful and I will finish the Normal GD soon!

Vone

83 posts

Joined September 2013

Topic Starter

Vone 2014-11-08T22:16:00+00:00

Thanks ByBy_ChAn! Applied most of your mod, thanks for cooperation, and thanks for normal gd! I really appreciate it!

emilia

893 posts

Joined October 2012

emilia 2014-11-11T10:22:15+00:00

For M4M at #modreq

[Hard]

00:20:706 (4,5,6,7) - Try circle flow?
00:30:786 (1,2) - Try symmetry
00:48:426 - Why break here? Add some things here.
00:56:586 - ^
01:12:786 (6,1,2) - Try fix blanket
01:31:986 (1,2,3) - Try symmetry + fix blanket
02:27:906 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - Try using Distance Snap here
02:43:986 (3,5) - Try ctrl g them individually
03:19:506 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - You can consider making this bigger

In my honest opinion, I think your map is great in terms of flow, everything leads into each other fine. The problem is that your patterns are too boring, there needs to be more variation. Your flow can also be changed as well. Your sliders are occasionally too flat to look aesthetically pleasing. Patterns like 01:14:706 (4,5) - , try to curve the sliders more so the pattern is more defined and not as loose. Patterns like 01:18:786 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - , are too repetitive. Certain flows like 01:24:306 (1,2) - , can be improved. As the song is rather dull, try having more upbeat patterns for this to work.

[Insane]
00:16:866 (1,2) - Blanket
00:46:146 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,3) - This part can be rather confusing at times, try using DS or stack notes together to prevent confusion
01:32:226 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 8 appears to be rather random, since the rest of the note are in a hexagon. Try stacking it onto 4
01:47:826 (2) - Centre?
02:07:506 (3) - There are stronger beats for you to follow here
02:27:906 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,1) - Again with the DS
02:48:066 (5) - Try ctrl g then shift 5 to original head

Your flow here is slightly worse compared to Hard, but that's fine in general. However, the same problem still exists with your DS and patterns. Your patterns aren't good enough, and your DS is very confusing. Try having better patterns, because some of your patterns are still very weird and uneven. Also, keep to the same pattern when it comes to similar rhythm/part of the song. Mindless jumps are also not recommended. There are also some occasional NC problems. 01:39:906 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - Such patterns are mindless + uneven. Same with this: 01:18:786 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - .

Overall, I find that your idea of flow is very good, but your general pattern application needs fixing.

Vone

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Topic Starter

Vone 2014-11-11T10:45:37+00:00

Thanks for cooperation Estellia- ! You can expect my mod soon!

meii18

3,577 posts

Joined October 2013

meii18 2014-11-14T17:34:12+00:00

Hi ! Here's my part of Normal diff:

SPOILER

osu file format v13

[General]
AudioFilename: ZHU - Faded.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 78786
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Normal
StackLeniency: 0.7
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I talked with Doyak and he's agreed. I hope you like

it and sorry for late, I'm lazy and busy with school stuffs and my map .

Edit edit : Here's the new code ( the plan was changed ) :

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83,232,73986,2,0,P|23:185|16:160,1,77.0000023498536,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
0,101,74466,1,0,0:0:0:0:
184,107,74946,2,0,B|270:106|270:106|293:80|293:80|357:79,2,154.000004699707,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
0,115,76386,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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89,143,78786,6,0,B|157:155|199:102|199:102|270:102,1,195.999994018555,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
377,152,80226,1,0,0:0:0:0:
410,200,80466,2,0,P|436:246|430:297,1,97.9999970092774,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
317,312,81426,2,0,P|219:318|206:311,1,97.9999970092774,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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219,108,84066,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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223,309,86226,6,0,B|130:292|106:342|106:342|29:342,1,195.999994018555
49,165,87906,1,0,0:0:0:0:
97,131,88146,2,0,P|172:119|206:136,1,97.9999970092774
303,158,89106,1,0,0:0:0:0:
336,291,90306,6,0,L|270:313,1,48.9999985046387
232,320,90786,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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129,117,91746,1,0,0:0:0:0:
245,100,92226,2,0,B|308:82|359:124|359:124|399:106,2,146.999995513916,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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205,306,95106,2,0,B|261:285|304:333|304:333|374:294,1,154.000004699707,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
472,223,96066,2,0,P|484:132|481:126,1,77.0000023498536,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
408,107,96546,1,0,0:0:0:0:
223,110,97026,2,0,P|144:112|136:115,1,77.0000023498536,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
59,140,97506,1,0,0:0:0:0:
62,319,97986,6,0,B|119:271|180:296|180:296|235:265,2,154.000004699707,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
1,153,99426,1,0,0:0:0:0:
178,102,99906,2,0,L|253:79,1,77.0000023498536,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
343,73,100386,1,0,0:0:0:0:
415,130,100626,2,0,P|466:212|465:217,2,77.0000023498536,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
137,93,101586,6,0,B|83:126|28:81|28:81|2:142,1,154.000004699707
18,298,102546,2,0,B|32:330|32:330|87:285|141:318,1,154.000004699707
368,305,103746,2,0,P|442:254|445:243,2,77.0000023498536,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
278,330,104466,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,105786,12,0,109026,0:0:0:0:
115,279,109506,6,0,B|192:263|235:308|235:308|334:261,1,231.000007049561
441,119,110706,1,0,0:0:0:0:
165,90,111426,2,0,P|92:69|80:70,1,77.0000023498536,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
72,159,111906,1,0,0:0:0:0:
103,303,112386,2,0,P|167:331|179:332,2,77.0000023498536,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
247,107,113346,6,0,B|355:86|355:86|419:123|380:208,1,231.000007049561,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
278,340,114546,1,0,0:0:0:0:
49,314,115266,2,0,P|-19:252|20:198,2,154.000004699707,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
232,335,116706,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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161,284,118626,1,0,0:0:0:0:
24,159,119106,2,0,L|-2:83,1,77.0000023498536,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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271,56,120066,2,0,L|375:55,1,77.0000023498536
440,57,120546,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,121026,12,0,122466,0:0:0:0:
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367,292,124866,6,0,B|299:355|259:319|259:319|204:339,1,154.000004699707
44,325,125826,1,0,0:0:0:0:
70,165,126786,2,0,B|43:103|-10:101|-10:101|9:23,2,154.000004699707,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
212,318,128226,1,0,0:0:0:0:
409,243,128706,6,0,B|493:235|465:165|465:165|465:102,1,154.000004699707
301,111,129666,1,0,0:0:0:0:
56,150,130626,2,0,L|23:227,1,77.0000023498536,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
0,302,131106,1,0,0:0:0:0:
184,307,131586,2,0,L|274:307,1,77.0000023498536
353,305,132066,1,0,0:0:0:0:
439,164,132546,6,0,B|374:134|390:68|390:68|325:66,1,154.000004699707
169,72,133506,2,0,B|133:73|133:73|149:139|84:169,1,154.000004699707
122,271,134466,2,0,B|185:253|212:323|212:323|274:324,2,154.000004699707,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
30,274,135906,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,136386,12,0,139746,0:0:0:0:
145,292,140226,6,0,B|213:240|304:308|304:308|415:213,1,308.000009399414,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
507,149,141666,1,0,0:0:0:0:
297,125,142146,2,0,P|211:106|139:142,2,154.000004699707,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
355,284,143586,1,0,0:0:0:0:
130,289,144066,6,0,B|73:274|15:307|15:307|-20:251,1,154.000004699707
3,93,145026,2,0,B|60:108|118:75|118:75|171:119,1,154.000004699707
308,182,145986,2,0,L|372:230,1,77.0000023498536
440,287,146466,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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86,308,147426,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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66,304,149826,2,0,B|121:269|167:291|167:291|200:259,1,146.999995513916,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
271,161,151026,1,0,0:0:0:0:
425,154,151746,6,0,B|472:180|452:249|452:249|455:336,1,195.999994018555,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
219,327,153666,2,0,B|140:277|86:313|86:313|52:267,1,195.999994018555,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,112,155586,6,0,P|300:96|380:132,1,154.000004699707,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
244,264,156546,2,0,P|128:276|76:244,1,154.000004699707,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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24,112,158946,1,0,0:0:0:0:
128,264,159426,6,0,B|208:240|216:328|216:328|268:328,2,154.000004699707,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
24,112,160866,1,0,0:0:0:0:
212,112,161346,2,0,B|288:140|332:68|332:68|376:64,2,154.000004699707,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
24,112,162786,1,0,0:0:0:0:
184,208,163266,6,0,B|264:216|276:324|276:324|380:280|380:280|440:292,1,308.000009399414
360,116,165186,2,0,B|272:112|232:40|232:40|136:40|104:144,1,308.000009399414,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
52,248,167106,6,0,B|128:220|116:356|200:316,1,154.000004699707
356,320,168066,2,0,B|411:352|399:216|475:244,1,154.000004699707
388,140,169026,2,0,P|232:80|92:160,1,308.000009399414,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
64,260,170946,6,0,B|128:208|184:368|344:220,1,308.000009399414,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
440,100,172386,1,0,0:0:0:0:
248,96,172866,2,0,B|196:160|136:104|92:152,2,154.000004699707,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
440,100,174306,1,0,0:0:0:0:
336,252,174786,6,0,B|252:268|260:336|260:336|204:340,2,154.000004699707,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
440,100,176226,1,0,0:0:0:0:
248,104,176706,2,0,B|164:120|160:44|160:44|100:44,2,154.000004699707,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
440,100,178146,1,0,0:0:0:0:
336,252,178626,6,0,B|264:348|168:260|168:260|52:260,1,308.000009399414,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
112,104,180066,1,0,0:0:0:0:
244,92,180546,2,0,P|324:68|388:96,2,154.000004699707,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
112,104,181986,1,0,0:0:0:0:
84,240,182466,6,0,B|140:320|140:320|224:320,1,154.000004699707,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
315,320,183426,2,0,B|372:320|372:320|428:240,1,154.000004699707,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
328,128,184386,2,0,P|208:116|160:156,2,154.000004699707,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
460,256,185826,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,304,186306,6,0,B|196:352|132:316|132:316|96:240,1,175,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
108,136,187266,2,0,B|125:98|125:98|189:62|249:110,1,175,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
384,152,188226,2,0,B|372:252|456:240|456:240|456:312,2,175,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
192,148,189666,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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392,224,193506,1,0,0:0:0:0:
196,296,193986,6,0,B|144:356|60:324|60:324|56:260,1,175,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
52,104,194946,2,0,B|53:78|53:78|137:46|189:106,1,175,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
344,176,195906,2,0,B|384:208|456:160|456:160|456:252,2,175,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
160,136,197346,1,0,0:0:0:0:
80,304,197826,6,0,P|212:320|244:296,1,175,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
372,204,198786,2,0,B|400:124|468:132|468:132|472:48,1,175
256,192,199746,12,0,201186,0:0:0:0:
256,192,201666,5,6,1:0:0:0:

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Vone

83 posts

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Topic Starter

Vone 2014-11-16T09:32:03+00:00

That's really nice, ByBy! Thank you, and Doyak for cooperation!

Tenseki

803 posts

Joined November 2013

Tenseki 2014-11-29T10:21:36+00:00

m4m request on #modreqs

[General]
sorry to say that, patterns are so old..
i think you have to see the newer maps to practice patterns, more beautiful

BUT, hitsounds are good

[insane]

00:55:386 (6) - sounds strange, move to 00:55:266
00:19:266 (1,2,3,4,5) - change these. ex) add slider. you have to make a beautiful patterns is more approachable to rank!
00:21:426 (2,3,4,1) - ^
00:25:266 (2,3,4,5) - ^
00:27:426 (2,3,4,5) - ^
00:26:706 (7,1) - ctrl +g? and change places
00:47:466 (5) - change this, rhythm is more better

00:57:546 (6,7) - change shape

191,319,57546,1,0,0:0:0:0:
269,239,57666,2,0,L|263:148,1,70
247,58,58146,2,0,P|213:66|161:51,1,70

01:39:426 (8) - change shape

02:29:826 (1) - distance, i think it needs a large gap
02:30:546 (3) - add note
02:32:466 - ^
02:34:386 (3) - ^
02:35:226 (2) - add slider

[Hard]
"SV" is so fast for Hard user, i think. how to change a 1.2?
00:54:906 (8) - stack on slider
01:10:866 (7) - change more curvely

And most of slider need that
ex) 02:45:906 (4,3) - looks strange, more curvely

[ByBy's Normal]
Good!. i think it need not to fix. cuz i' dont know about normal criteria fully

[Doyak's Ez]
01:24:546 (3,4) - change shape. no drastic curve. it's not good for ez players
01:40:866 (4) - ^

All Done! good luck for a rank

Doyak

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Doyak 2014-11-30T10:55:38+00:00

I shoot a kudosu star here

Doyak

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Joined November 2012

Doyak 2014-11-30T11:04:45+00:00

Tenseki wrote:
[Doyak's Ez]
01:24:546 (3,4) - change shape. no drastic curve. it's not good for ez players
01:40:866 (4) - ^

다 고쳤습니다. 저 누군지 아시면 한국어로 하셨어도 되는데 ㅋㅋㅋㅋ

Vone

83 posts

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Topic Starter

Vone 2014-11-30T14:02:58+00:00

Tenseki wrote:
m4m request on #modreqs

[General]
sorry to say that, patterns are so old.. I know, thats my mapping style!
i think you have to see the newer maps to practice patterns, more beautiful

BUT, hitsounds are good Thanks
[insane]

00:55:386 (6) - sounds strange, move to 00:55:266 Naah, it doesnt
00:19:266 (1,2,3,4,5) - change these. ex) add slider. you have to make a beautiful patterns is more approachable to rank! Changed!
00:21:426 (2,3,4,1) - ^ ^
00:25:266 (2,3,4,5) - ^ ^
00:27:426 (2,3,4,5) - ^ ^
00:26:706 (7,1) - ctrl +g? and change places No
00:47:466 (5) - change this, rhythm is more better It fits in the rhytm of the background melody
00:57:546 (6,7) - change shape Fixed
191,319,57546,1,0,0:0:0:0:
269,239,57666,2,0,L|263:148,1,70
247,58,58146,2,0,P|213:66|161:51,1,70
01:39:426 (8) - change shape Fixed
02:29:826 (1) - distance, i think it needs a large gap No, it doesnt
02:30:546 (3) - add note Fixed
02:32:466 - ^ ^
02:34:386 (3) - ^ ^
02:35:226 (2) - add slider No, it isnt ok

[Hard]
"SV" is so fast for Hard user, i think. how to change a 1.2? Cant change it without remaping all difficulty
00:54:906 (8) - stack on slider Fixed
01:10:866 (7) - change more curvely Fixed
And most of slider need that
ex) 02:45:906 (4,3) - looks strange, more curvely Fixed

[ByBy's Normal]
Good!. i think it need not to fix. cuz i' dont know about normal criteria fully

[Doyak's Ez]
01:24:546 (3,4) - change shape. no drastic curve. it's not good for ez players
01:40:866 (4) - ^

All Done! good luck for a rank

Thanks alot for the mod!

Vone

83 posts

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Topic Starter

Vone 2014-11-30T14:03:32+00:00

Thanks Doyak!

seovince

seovince 2014-12-01T16:51:59+00:00

Hello hello... m4m from what we agreed on game chat hahaha

General

fill the GD creator in tags, Doyak and ByBy in this case.. also (optional) you can fill it with the album name too..

about the SV from all of the diff, each diff should be different.. i see Normal, Hard, Insane has the same SV.. it would be good if the Normal is 1.0x/1.1x, Hard 1.4x/Insane 1.6x <<<<those just the examples, you can variate them as you like but keep in mind that each diff shouldn't be far on to the another

Doyak's Easy

1. 00:34:626 (1) - you can change the shape like this, it gives a better flow for the next note

2. 00:38:466 (1) - this could gives a better flow too..
3. 01:16:386 (4) - i know you intend to give this circle a blanket, but it isn't tidy now.. move to x:408 y:104 for better blanket (y)
4. 01:16:866 (5) - i think this circle would be tidier if it's placed in x:440 y:180
5. 01:18:786 (1) - hmm.. do it like number 1 or 2 above maybe?
6. 01:37:506 - since this part is so dominant, put a circle might be better..
7. 01:45:186 - ^
8. 02:25:986 (4) - copy paste the shape from 02:24:066 (3) - and CTRL H & CTRL J it would be better i think

ByBy's Normal

The snapping is too far in my opinion, DS 1.0 is much better i think..

1. 00:23:106 - why this section suddenly slower than before? meanwhile this section's music is no different with the section before.. the solution might be slow down the before section, or faster this section into 1.0x..

2. 00:24:306 (2) - this note doesn't sound right, move it to 00:24:066 - and add another circle to 00:24:546 - would be better (don't forget to resnapping xD )
3. 00:39:666 (2) - same as above ^
4. 01:11:826 (4) - move it to 01:11:586 - and add circle in 01:12:546 - might be good i think (resnapping too~)

5. 01:21:426 (4) - how about move this to 01:21:426 (4) - and add circle in 01:22:146 - ? (don't forget to resnapping also)
6. 01:40:626 (5,1) - isn't these two far? they exceeded the DS

7. 01:45:186 - add circle here?
8. 02:06:306 - ^
9. 02:10:146 - ^

Hard

HP 6 and OD 6 are better i think

1. 00:19:026 (6) - i think this circle is unnecessary, so remove it maybe? xD
2. 00:25:266 (1) - change the shape into this is much better
3. 00:49:026 (5) - hmm.. enlong this slider until 00:49:266 - and move this slider 00:49:386 (6) - to 00:49:506 -

4. 00:53:346 (4) - to be consistent like the slider before this, move this to x:424 y:316 maybe

5. 00:54:906 (8) - hmm, unnecessary imo

6. 00:56:706 (3,4) - same as number 3 above?

Insane

1. 00:52:866 (3,4) - here the spacing isn't same as 00:51:906 (1,2) - try to fix it maybe?

2. 02:02:466 (4) - this one would give a better flow imo
3. 03:01:026 (2) - mirroring the 03:00:546 (1) - is better

4. 03:16:386 (2) - how about this?

Okayyy and that's my mod.. sorry if it's not really helpful.. nice hitsounding btw!! good luck~

Vone

83 posts

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Topic Starter

Vone 2014-12-01T17:23:37+00:00

seovince wrote:
Hello hello... m4m from what we agreed on game chat hahaha

General
fill the GD creator in tags, Doyak and ByBy in this case.. also (optional) you can fill it with the album name too.. Yeah, fixed!
about the SV from all of the diff, each diff should be different.. i see Normal, Hard, Insane has the same SV.. it would be good if the Normal is 1.0x/1.1x, Hard 1.4x/Insane 1.6x <<<<those just the examples, you can variate them as you like but keep in mind that each diff shouldn't be far on to the another You are right, need to fix it!

Doyak's Easy
1. 00:34:626 (1) - you can change the shape like this, it gives a better flow for the next note
2. 00:38:466 (1) - this could gives a better flow too..
3. 01:16:386 (4) - i know you intend to give this circle a blanket, but it isn't tidy now.. move to x:408 y:104 for better blanket (y)
4. 01:16:866 (5) - i think this circle would be tidier if it's placed in x:440 y:180
5. 01:18:786 (1) - hmm.. do it like number 1 or 2 above maybe?
6. 01:37:506 - since this part is so dominant, put a circle might be better..
7. 01:45:186 - ^
8. 02:25:986 (4) - copy paste the shape from 02:24:066 (3) - and CTRL H & CTRL J it would be better i think

ByBy's Normal
The snapping is too far in my opinion, DS 1.0 is much better i think..

1. 00:23:106 - why this section suddenly slower than before? meanwhile this section's music is no different with the section before.. the solution might be slow down the before section, or faster this section into 1.0x..
2. 00:24:306 (2) - this note doesn't sound right, move it to 00:24:066 - and add another circle to 00:24:546 - would be better (don't forget to resnapping xD )
3. 00:39:666 (2) - same as above ^
4. 01:11:826 (4) - move it to 01:11:586 - and add circle in 01:12:546 - might be good i think (resnapping too~)
5. 01:21:426 (4) - how about move this to 01:21:426 (4) - and add circle in 01:22:146 - ? (don't forget to resnapping also)
6. 01:40:626 (5,1) - isn't these two far? they exceeded the DS
7. 01:45:186 - add circle here?
8. 02:06:306 - ^
9. 02:10:146 - ^

Hard
HP 6 and OD 6 are better i think Okay!

1. 00:19:026 (6) - i think this circle is unnecessary, so remove it maybe? xD No, I dont like this idea
2. 00:25:266 (1) - change the shape into this is much better Sure!
3. 00:49:026 (5) - hmm.. enlong this slider until 00:49:266 - and move this slider 00:49:386 (6) - to 00:49:506 - Thats nice idea!
4. 00:53:346 (4) - to be consistent like the slider before this, move this to x:424 y:316 maybe Nah
5. 00:54:906 (8) - hmm, unnecessary imo No
6. 00:56:706 (3,4) - same as number 3 above? Of course!

Insane
1. 00:52:866 (3,4) - here the spacing isn't same as 00:51:906 (1,2) - try to fix it maybe? Yes!
2. 02:02:466 (4) - this one would give a better flow imo Sure!
3. 03:01:026 (2) - mirroring the 03:00:546 (1) - is better Yes!
4. 03:16:386 (2) - how about this? Why not!

Okayyy and that's my mod.. sorry if it's not really helpful.. nice hitsounding btw!! good luck~

Thanks alot for a helpful mod!

Doyak

osu! Alumni

2,621 posts

Joined November 2012

Doyak 2014-12-01T17:54:51+00:00

seovince wrote:
Hello hello... m4m from what we agreed on game chat hahaha
Doyak's Easy
1. 00:34:626 (1) - you can change the shape like this, it gives a better flow for the next note fixed.
2. 00:38:466 (1) - this could gives a better flow too.. fixed.
3. 01:16:386 (4) - i know you intend to give this circle a blanket, but it isn't tidy now.. move to x:408 y:104 for better blanket (y) I don't know what you're trying to say by 'blanket', but anyway, your solution works well. fixed.
4. 01:16:866 (5) - i think this circle would be tidier if it's placed in x:440 y:180 same as above
5. 01:18:786 (1) - hmm.. do it like number 1 or 2 above maybe? fixed.
6. 01:37:506 - since this part is so dominant, put a circle might be better.. I don't agree. This is Easy diff, so it's good to give players time to rest sometimes. There's no vocal for those parts so they are less dominant. I guess it's fine to keep this.
7. 01:45:186 - ^ same as above
8. 02:25:986 (4) - copy paste the shape from 02:24:066 (3) - and CTRL H & CTRL J it would be better i think That was intentional, but I think your opinion is better. fixed.

meii18

3,577 posts

Joined October 2013

meii18 2014-12-01T19:41:38+00:00

ByBy_ChAn wrote:
seovince wrote:
ByBy's Normal
The snapping is too far in my opinion, DS 1.0 is much better i think.. fixed

1. 00:23:106 - why this section suddenly slower than before? meanwhile this section's music is no different with the section before.. the solution might be slow down the before section, or faster this section into 1.0x.. because it's 0.7 in timing point but I think is good no change
2. 00:24:306 (2) - this note doesn't sound right, move it to 00:24:066 - and add another circle to 00:24:546 - would be better (don't forget to resnapping xD ) moved and resnapped
3. 00:39:666 (2) - same as above ^ moved
4. 01:11:826 (4) - move it to 01:11:586 - and add circle in 01:12:546 - might be good i think (resnapping too~) moved
5. 01:21:426 (4) - how about move this to 01:21:426 (4) - and add circle in 01:22:146 - ? (don't forget to resnapping also) fixed
6. 01:40:626 (5,1) - isn't these two far? they exceeded the DS fixed
7. 01:45:186 - add circle here? added
8. 02:06:306 - ^added
9. 02:10:146 - ^added

Thanks for modding ! Here's my update :

SPOILER

osu file format v13

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Seikatu

333 posts

Joined January 2011

Seikatu 2014-12-02T16:19:35+00:00

Hello. M4M.

[General]
Your combo colors are quite similar.
Disable widescreen support and letterboxes

[Easy]
00:19:266 (1,2) - you can improve flow by moving (2) down
00:31:746 (2,3) - you can blanket them
00:41:826 (4,1) - too straight
01:07:266 (3) - try to decrease curve
01:14:946 (3) - you can blanket better
01:35:586 (2,3) - flow is too straight
02:08:226 (4,1) - ^
02:08:706 (1,2) - dat blanket lol
02:22:146 (2) - end this slider at 02:22:866 -
02:25:986 (4) - same
03:08:226 (3,4) - you can blanket better
03:10:146 (1,2) - ^

[Normal]
00:19:266 (1) - rotate by 5, and place at x:314, y:223
00:30:306 (4,1) - too far from each other
00:32:706 (1) - copy, paste and ctrl+h, instead of 00:33:666 (3) -
00:41:106 (3,4) - x:88, y:289
00:47:826 (3) - try to end this slider at 00:48:546 - , and add circle at 00:49:026 -
00:55:506 (3,4) - here too, it sounds strange in my opinion
01:12:546 - add circle
01:57:186 (1) - too far from previous object
02:43:266 (1) - ^, try to keep ds

[Hard]
00:15:426 (1,2) - try to avoid overlaps like this, they looks unnecesary here
00:18:066 (4,5) - ^
00:19:266 (1,2) -
00:25:746 (2) - make it straight to keep pattern consistency
00:57:666 (1,2,3,4) - place them in curve, to make good flow with 00:58:626 (5) -
01:00:306 (8,9) - blanket better
01:01:506 (1) - you can make something like this:

01:03:426 (1,2) - blanket better
01:12:786 (6,1) - ^
01:20:706 (1,2,3,4) - it's really far for hard

[Insane]
You hitsounds sounds like randomly placed. Sometimes you ignore snares, sometimes not. Quite strange.
00:58:626 (3) - sliders like this are not allowed by ranking criteria.

Slider anchors/nodes must not be used to manipulate slider speeds (whether they are normal nodes or red ones). Using extra nodes to make a slider "wiggle" is usually fine, but using so many that the slider gets scrunched up (which also makes the sliderball go crazy) or become a "hold slider" is abuse of the hitobject's intended use and is not allowed. AIMod (shortcut ctrl+shift+a) will also point out sliders that move in an "abnormal" way, so make sure to check that if you're unsure of a slider.

02:02:946 (5) - ^

That's all. GL

Vone

83 posts

Joined September 2013

Topic Starter

Vone 2014-12-02T19:32:06+00:00

Seikatu wrote:
[Hard]
00:15:426 (1,2) - try to avoid overlaps like this, they looks unnecesary here Fixed!
00:18:066 (4,5) - ^ ^
00:19:266 (1,2) - ^ ^
00:25:746 (2) - make it straight to keep pattern consistency Fixed!
00:57:666 (1,2,3,4) - place them in curve, to make good flow with 00:58:626 (5) - Fixed!
01:00:306 (8,9) - blanket better Fixed!
01:01:506 (1) - you can make something like this: Fixed!
01:03:426 (1,2) - blanket better Fixed!
01:12:786 (6,1) - ^ ^
01:20:706 (1,2,3,4) - it's really far for hard Yeah, you are right, changed!

[Insane]
You hitsounds sounds like randomly placed. Sometimes you ignore snares, sometimes not. Quite strange. I like them.
00:58:626 (3) - sliders like this are not allowed by ranking criteria. Uhm, yeah. Thanks! Fixed!
Slider anchors/nodes must not be used to manipulate slider speeds (whether they are normal nodes or red ones). Using extra nodes to make a slider "wiggle" is usually fine, but using so many that the slider gets scrunched up (which also makes the sliderball go crazy) or become a "hold slider" is abuse of the hitobject's intended use and is not allowed. AIMod (shortcut ctrl+shift+a) will also point out sliders that move in an "abnormal" way, so make sure to check that if you're unsure of a slider.
02:02:946 (5) - ^ ^

That's all. GL

Thanks for a mod!

No Pulse

88 posts

Joined November 2012

No Pulse 2014-12-02T19:47:17+00:00

M4M
[Ogólne]
Brak tagów: W tagach muszą się znaleźć przynajmniej nicki graczy którzy zrobili GD.
To, o czym mówiłem In-Game, mapa jest nużąca, i sprawia że chce się spać, potrzeba jej trochę innowacyjności, pobaw się tym
[Hard]
Zmiany SV: a tym bardziej tak duże, w hardach spotykane są raczej rzadko, sugeruję zmniejszyć zmiany SV do max 1,25, lub zlikwidować je zupełnie.

00:24:060 (5) - Ten circle wydaję mi się być niepotrzebny
00:54:900 (8) - Jeden tick do przodu
01:10:860 (7) - Brzydki jest ten slider :/ Pomajtaj nim jakoś żeby bardziej estetyczny był
01:20:700 (1) - 01:22:140 (4) - Jak na Harda, za duże te jumpy
02:02:940 (1) - Ten slider też trzeba dopracować, za dużo punktów. Masz tu link do tego jak mapować slidery
02:28:626 - brakuje mi tu circle'a
02:28:866 (5) - ten slider zamieniłbym na dwa circle, np. w ten sposób

Rozwiń

02:30:786 (3) - Jak wyżej
02:56:466 (1) - za duże jumpy jak na harda moim zdaniem, w ogóle od tego momentu robi się trochę za duży DS, polecam zmniejszyć odległość pomiędzy obiektami

Generalnie jak poziom hard trochę zbyt trudno tu jest, zmniejsz DS oraz zmiany SV, pobaw się trochę sliderami żeby nie były takie "sztywne" i będzie ok.

[Insane]
[Ogólne]
To że musisz pozbyć się trochę tych screen jumpów to już wiesz, jest ich zdecydowanie za dużo.
Slidery też już poprawiłeś
00:47:106 (4) - tutaj zmieniłbym slider na dwa circle, o w ten sposób:

Rozwiń

00:47:946 (1,2) - a te dwa circle zamieniłbym na slider

01:13:986 (4) - nie za dużo punktów na tym sliderze? Znów odsyłam do linku o mapowaniu sliderów
01:23:586 (5) - Jak wyżej
02:07:506 (3) - Jak wyżej
03:18:786 (3) - Jak wyżej
To wszystko z mojej strony, powodzenia w drodze do rankeda

Tenseki

803 posts

Joined November 2013

Tenseki 2014-12-02T23:27:27+00:00

Doyak wrote:
Tenseki wrote:
[Doyak's Ez]
01:24:546 (3,4) - change shape. no drastic curve. it's not good for ez players
01:40:866 (4) - ^
다 고쳤습니다. 저 누군지 아시면 한국어로 하셨어도 되는데 ㅋㅋㅋㅋ

뭐 그런거 있지 않겠습니까. 하루정도는 다른삶을 살아보려는게...(?)

sangu

120 posts

Joined June 2013

sangu 2014-12-03T21:36:47+00:00

Here's that mod I promised a really long time ago...

These are all on the insane diff

There are a lot of times where the notes don't feel like they line up to the music very well... (I have provided a few below)
Most of them feel like they are dragging

00:51:426 (6,1,2,3,4) - these sliders are off beat from the music...
00:59:346 (4,1,2,3) - These four notes do not line up with the vocals or the background beat
01:07:746 (3,4,5) - these sliders are dragging big time
02:12:066 (1,2,3,4) - this burst is mapped wrong, the background notes at this point has a beat that goes triple-one hit-triple not triple-4 note burst
02:56:706 (1,2) - if these two sliders are mapped to the vocals, they are off beat significantly, if they are mapped to the background notes, then these feel really awkward.... (I can't tell which you were going for)
03:11:826 (6,1,2) - same here
03:13:506 (1,2,3,4) - repeat burst as stated before 2nd note does not have a sound in music

Vone

83 posts

Joined September 2013

Topic Starter

Vone 2014-12-05T21:21:37+00:00

PulseOfSk8 wrote:
M4M
[Ogólne]
Brak tagów: W tagach muszą się znaleźć przynajmniej nicki graczy którzy zrobili GD. Zrobione!
To, o czym mówiłem In-Game, mapa jest nużąca, i sprawia że chce się spać, potrzeba jej trochę innowacyjności, pobaw się tym Jasne!
[Hard]
Zmiany SV: a tym bardziej tak duże, w hardach spotykane są raczej rzadko, sugeruję zmniejszyć zmiany SV do max 1,25, lub zlikwidować je zupełnie. Pomyślę nad tym!

00:24:060 (5) - Ten circle wydaję mi się być niepotrzebny Zostawię go, uzupełnia beat!
00:54:900 (8) - Jeden tick do przodu Oczywiście!
01:10:860 (7) - Brzydki jest ten slider :/ Pomajtaj nim jakoś żeby bardziej estetyczny był Masz rację. Zmieniłem go!
01:20:700 (1) - 01:22:140 (4) - Jak na Harda, za duże te jumpy
02:02:940 (1) - Ten slider też trzeba dopracować, za dużo punktów. Masz tu link do tego jak mapować slidery Dzięki wielkie!
02:28:626 - brakuje mi tu circle'a Zrobione!
02:28:866 (5) - ten slider zamieniłbym na dwa circle, np. w ten sposób OK!
Rozwiń
02:30:786 (3) - Jak wyżej OK!
02:56:466 (1) - za duże jumpy jak na harda moim zdaniem, w ogóle od tego momentu robi się trochę za duży DS, polecam zmniejszyć odległość pomiędzy obiektami Dobra, trochę pozmieniałem!

Generalnie jak poziom hard trochę zbyt trudno tu jest, zmniejsz DS oraz zmiany SV, pobaw się trochę sliderami żeby nie były takie "sztywne" i będzie ok. Jasne, postaram się nad tym w najbliższym czasie popracować!

[Insane]
[Ogólne]
To że musisz pozbyć się trochę tych screen jumpów to już wiesz, jest ich zdecydowanie za dużo. Wiem, zeskalowałem jumpy, które wydawały mi się za duże!
Slidery też już poprawiłeś Tak!
00:47:106 (4) - tutaj zmieniłbym slider na dwa circle, o w ten sposób: Niech tak będzie!
Rozwiń
00:47:946 (1,2) - a te dwa circle zamieniłbym na slider OK!
01:13:986 (4) - nie za dużo punktów na tym sliderze? Znów odsyłam do linku o mapowaniu sliderów Prawda, dzięki!
01:23:586 (5) - Jak wyżej ^
02:07:506 (3) - Jak wyżej ^
03:18:786 (3) - Jak wyżej ^
To wszystko z mojej strony, powodzenia w drodze do rankeda [color=#00BF00]Dzięki!
[/color]

Dziękuję bardzo za moda! Na prawdę mi pomogłeś!

meii18

3,577 posts

Joined October 2013

meii18 2014-12-05T21:21:52+00:00

ByBy_ChAn wrote:
Seikatu wrote:
[Normal]
00:19:266 (1) - rotate by 5, and place at x:314, y:223 rotated and moved
00:30:306 (4,1) - too far from each other I think is good if I placed at x:184 y:117
00:32:706 (1) - copy, paste and ctrl+h, instead of 00:33:666 (3) - maybe you want say to copy+paste from 00:32:706(1)- to recorrect 00:33:666(3) . fixed and please be more clearly
00:41:106 (3,4) - x:88, y:289 hmm. no I think is good . The DS must be consistency no change
00:47:826 (3) - try to end this slider at 00:48:546 - , and add circle at 00:49:026 - okay ! fixed and added a note
00:55:506 (3,4) - here too, it sounds strange in my opinion hmm. oops ! the slider is unsnapped ! fixed
01:12:546 - add circle It's not neccesary no change
01:57:186 (1) - too far from previous object fixed
02:43:266 (1) - ^, try to keep ds fixed

Thanks for modding ! Here's update

:

SPOILER

osu file format v13

[General]
AudioFilename: ZHU - Faded.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 78786
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Normal
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 1
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 2.300005

[Metadata]
Title:Faded
TitleUnicode:Faded
Artist:ZHU
ArtistUnicode:ZHU
Creator:Vone
Version:ByBy's Normal
Source:
Tags:The Nightday ByBy_ChAn Doyak
BeatmapID:540573
BeatmapSetID:224483

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:2.4
CircleSize:3
OverallDifficulty:3
ApproachRate:3
SliderMultiplier:1.4
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
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//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
3,100,163,162,255

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Vone

83 posts

Joined September 2013

Topic Starter

Vone 2014-12-05T21:22:50+00:00

Vone wrote:
PulseOfSk8 wrote:
M4M
[Ogólne]
Brak tagów: W tagach muszą się znaleźć przynajmniej nicki graczy którzy zrobili GD. Zrobione!
To, o czym mówiłem In-Game, mapa jest nużąca, i sprawia że chce się spać, potrzeba jej trochę innowacyjności, pobaw się tym Jasne!
[Hard]
Zmiany SV: a tym bardziej tak duże, w hardach spotykane są raczej rzadko, sugeruję zmniejszyć zmiany SV do max 1,25, lub zlikwidować je zupełnie. Pomyślę nad tym!

00:24:060 (5) - Ten circle wydaję mi się być niepotrzebny Zostawię go, uzupełnia beat!
00:54:900 (8) - Jeden tick do przodu Oczywiście!
01:10:860 (7) - Brzydki jest ten slider :/ Pomajtaj nim jakoś żeby bardziej estetyczny był Masz rację. Zmieniłem go!
01:20:700 (1) - 01:22:140 (4) - Jak na Harda, za duże te jumpy
02:02:940 (1) - Ten slider też trzeba dopracować, za dużo punktów. Masz tu link do tego jak mapować slidery Dzięki wielkie!
02:28:626 - brakuje mi tu circle'a Zrobione!
02:28:866 (5) - ten slider zamieniłbym na dwa circle, np. w ten sposób OK!
Rozwiń
02:30:786 (3) - Jak wyżej OK!
02:56:466 (1) - za duże jumpy jak na harda moim zdaniem, w ogóle od tego momentu robi się trochę za duży DS, polecam zmniejszyć odległość pomiędzy obiektami Dobra, trochę pozmieniałem!

Generalnie jak poziom hard trochę zbyt trudno tu jest, zmniejsz DS oraz zmiany SV, pobaw się trochę sliderami żeby nie były takie "sztywne" i będzie ok. Jasne, postaram się nad tym w najbliższym czasie popracować!

[Insane]
[Ogólne]
To że musisz pozbyć się trochę tych screen jumpów to już wiesz, jest ich zdecydowanie za dużo. Wiem, zeskalowałem jumpy, które wydawały mi się za duże!
Slidery też już poprawiłeś Tak!
00:47:106 (4) - tutaj zmieniłbym slider na dwa circle, o w ten sposób: Niech tak będzie!
Rozwiń
00:47:946 (1,2) - a te dwa circle zamieniłbym na slider OK!
01:13:986 (4) - nie za dużo punktów na tym sliderze? Znów odsyłam do linku o mapowaniu sliderów Prawda, dzięki!
01:23:586 (5) - Jak wyżej ^
02:07:506 (3) - Jak wyżej ^
03:18:786 (3) - Jak wyżej ^
To wszystko z mojej strony, powodzenia w drodze do rankeda

Dziękuję bardzo za moda! Na prawdę mi pomogłeś!

Doyak

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2,621 posts

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Doyak 2014-12-06T08:44:45+00:00

Seikatu wrote:
Hello. M4M.

[Easy]
00:19:266 (1,2) - you can improve flow by moving (2) down
00:31:746 (2,3) - you can blanket them
00:41:826 (4,1) - too straight
01:07:266 (3) - try to decrease curve
01:14:946 (3) - you can blanket better
01:35:586 (2,3) - flow is too straight
02:08:226 (4,1) - ^
02:08:706 (1,2) - dat blanket lol
02:22:146 (2) - end this slider at 02:22:866 -
02:25:986 (4) - same
03:08:226 (3,4) - you can blanket better
03:10:146 (1,2) - ^

Actually I have never thought about blanket things, and didn't know even what blanket means. Now I see that making blankets is good for appearance, so I fixed all of them. Thanks for your mod

Doyak

osu! Alumni

2,621 posts

Joined November 2012

Doyak 2014-12-06T10:22:18+00:00

SPOILER

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Vone

83 posts

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Topic Starter

Vone 2014-12-08T20:11:34+00:00

sanguisinvia wrote:
Here's that mod I promised a really long time ago...

These are all on the insane diff

There are a lot of times where the notes don't feel like they line up to the music very well... (I have provided a few below)
Most of them feel like they are dragging

00:51:426 (6,1,2,3,4) - these sliders are off beat from the music... Fixed!
00:59:346 (4,1,2,3) - These four notes do not line up with the vocals or the background beat It fills the beat
01:07:746 (3,4,5) - these sliders are dragging big time
02:12:066 (1,2,3,4) - this burst is mapped wrong, the background notes at this point has a beat that goes triple-one hit-triple not triple-4 note burst I know, thats why I wanted to fill the beat and put specific hitsounds on each notes
02:56:706 (1,2) - if these two sliders are mapped to the vocals, they are off beat significantly, if they are mapped to the background notes, then these feel really awkward.... (I can't tell which you were going for) I was mapping to a bass (listen up!)
03:11:826 (6,1,2) - same here ^
03:13:506 (1,2,3,4) - repeat burst as stated before 2nd note does not have a sound in music As i said!

Thanks alot for a mod!

Last edited by Vone 2014-12-08T20:12:22+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

Vone

83 posts

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Topic Starter

Vone 2014-12-08T20:11:59+00:00

Doyak's and ByBy's mod updated!

Hot Loli

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Joined March 2013

Hot Loli 2015-01-05T10:18:37+00:00

This map should be ranked :3

meii18

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Joined October 2013

meii18 2015-01-13T19:34:37+00:00

MegaKAKER wrote:
This map should be ranked :3

Not yet 0w0/ this map needs a lot of mods to be ranked

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