...
Monstrata wrote:
Don't map just for the nice patterns .
Yuii- wrote:
I actually agree somehow. so sad about that ;-;fieryrage wrote:
this map as it is is pretty unpolished
Before starting with anything else, I do not think this difficulty is anywhere ready to be ranked, as it contains gameplay elements that I find really doubtful and that need to be discussed more. While I see that random spacing is pretty much accepted nowadays, I consider this case as rather overdoing this way too much. And that's why there's one fact I still can't ignore: your consistency. Literally non-existent. There's no consistency at all in the whole map. Things feel so randomly placed that it's hard to "guess" where players should move their cursors in order to continue with a good transition.
Most patterns don't have a clear path at all. Most of triplets/streams are extremely unpolished. Just taking 02:41:705 (3) - as an example to generalize how this happens literally in the whole map. This even happens on straight streams, like 03:03:649 (3) - .
From inconsistencies to some awkward angles, this map might need some more work. Although, I gotta recognize you did a good work with some other patterns such as 03:01:420 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1,2) - that, even if they are actually hard to play, they are very challenging and fun.
As for hitsounds, sections like 01:32:620 (5) - and 01:35:363 (5) - could be moderated a little bit. Whistles are super loud there, even when there's no need to place a hitsound at all! Also, 04:01:763 - on this section, the amount of random whistles combined with how loud they are, it just sounds way too bad. sorry i insist my way of hitsounding.
Regarding some other patterns. Mostly separated into different sections. Will try to select some examples on each one:Your overall placement, and literally every single overlap makes your map look unpolished with little to no structure that it's forcing your map to stay away from the ranking beatmaps. Most of the objects are placed randomly, don’t fit music at all and are inconsistent.
- 00:30:906 (3,4,5) - So, I'm not so sure why you did this. Literally the only pattern that is so different from the others, the music is still the same.
- 00:37:763 (4,5,6,1) - In-game and in the editor, placement and structure looks really bad. You could try something like this for example. Your current flow doesn't play too good. You are forcing players to move to the top left and then you place a slider to the left. If you want something similar to what you have right now, you could copy-paste (5) to recreate the same sound to (6) (this will also make your pattern more polished) and then place things in a more "linear" way to make use of the slider leniency, clickerino.
- 00:47:020 (2) - Pretty sure that cymbal hitsound isn't intended. yes it is intended ^ ^, as you can see in another part
- 01:07:591 (5,1,2) - Not really agree with this linear flow being placed like that. What are you trying to achieve? Literally breaks with all the previous flow and emphasis you were building up.
- 01:36:735 (1,2) - Well, this could've been a blanket.
- 01:43:420 (4,6) - I would call this kinda edgy. Slidertail is barely visible once (4) is popped out.
- 01:47:706 (7,1) - Your NC is screwed here.
- 02:08:963 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - Blatant overmapping. You know what would be really, but like, really good? A spinner. And then, you could start a good build-up on 02:10:163 - ! i don't agree on this, i think the stream is better than a spinner, and i have way too much spinners in this map. there are just 2 super long ones just before this one, too repeated if I put a spinner here again.
- 02:39:134 (4,5) - Jump seems kinda random. If I were you, I would keep the consistency and replace this for a slider.
- 03:09:477 (2,3) - By taking a quick look at previous 1/4 patterns you did, like 02:37:420 (4,5,6) - as reference, this one could literally be considered as a 1/4 pattern as well. And something similar happens with 03:10:334 (6) - later on. This all comes to how you are mapping the song.
- 03:14:791 (1,1,1,1) - Great idea here, actually. Awesome work! Thank you
- 03:56:963 (5,6,1,2) - Transition from (6,1) is actually very, very bad. This is extremely counter-intuitive and judging by the amount of overlaps you are using in this section, I am calling this as unreadable. When you try patterns like this, you must ensure two things: first one being preachment of the change in the flow; second one would be assuring readability. If you, for example, move 03:56:963 (5,3) - like shown in this picture this would become something more comfortable to play.
- 04:39:134 (3) - I get your point of "let's actually map the ~a~ sound in the background with one slider!", but you are actually ignoring everything else... cause of that? On a 5* SR map? I bet you got kinda lazy there. Also, after that sudden slow-down caused by the slider, you have 04:42:563 - that section with super spaced notes that literally have no meaning whatsoever.
- 05:17:534 (1,2) - What are the odds of players not clicking these as a 1/4 right after they have passed through 05:12:049 (1,1) - ? Personally, I would think they are the same type of pattern. 05:23:020 (1,1) - Do you see how impossible to recognize some patterns are?
- 05:43:934 (3,4,1) - I just want to talk about the linear flow again. If you want to make patterns like this that involve linear movements, try to at least get the proper emphasis for them. The sudden slow-down from (4,1) kills the whole motion of the pattern.
- 06:15:477 (1,2,3,4,5) - Just pointing this out as the only wav-y stream in the whole map. Just me finding it extremely random.
- 06:17:877 (1) - I thought you were making sliders like this even slower! What happened? And also, 06:17:877 (1,1) - these should be spaced out, mostly consistency, that's what you've been doing throughout the whole map, right?
- 06:23:706 (1,2,3,4,5) - Hm...
Remember that the above listed examples are just examples for the mentioned issues so this generally applies to more than just these mentioned ones. This map needs further revision, and I feel like with some work, it could definitely be highly improved in terms of flow and playability though, and even some aesthetics. I suggest you to get a couple more of mods and discuss some dodgy patterns with high-ranked players and even some modders.
Good luck hehe
Thanks~Shiguri wrote:
i dont think the basskicks fit in the more chilled parts, like this one here 04:04:163 - and 04:06:906 -
the glocks (not sure if its really glocks or not, lets just call it glocks) have some smooth sound, while the kick is at a complete different pitch and doesnt fit to the atmosphere of the songfew other hitsounds where i think it doesnt really fiti don't know, i think they fit..(basically every kick in the chilled parts)
06:26:791 (1,1,1) -
and you should fix the storyboard-fixed, thank you~05:07:270 -
also, i dont really see why theres that red flashing light added here 05:51:134 - or the sv boost in general It's not flashing yet, it's fading in~06:52:334 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,1) - spacing pls???
dont even know if you will change anything, but i felt like giving opinions here
Avoid going over a 5.0x storyboard load to help prevent lag on older computers. Resizing some of your storyboard images may help with this.解决方法:在osb文件中的 //Storyboard Layer 0 (Background) 的下一行加上 Sprite,Background,TopLeft,"Epiphany.jpg",0,0 可以让背景的透明度变成0,减少1.33x的load,然后当前未用到的图层也可以通过F的指令隐藏,不必一直出现在场景中
[Events]
//Background and Video events
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
Sprite,Background,TopLeft,"Epiphany.jpg",0,0
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
十分感谢!另外好像是系统自动给了你kd,我也不知道为什么…examination wrote:
好图
本来想假装没看到的不过既然被dq下来了就说两句好了233
[Storyboard]
00:00:00 - 00:05:534; 05:50:449 - 06:29:534 以及最后的06:56:963 - 07:05:191 持续的sb load超过5.0xAvoid going over a 5.0x storyboard load to help prevent lag on older computers. Resizing some of your storyboard images may help with this.解决方法:在osb文件中的 //Storyboard Layer 0 (Background) 的下一行加上 Sprite,Background,TopLeft,"Epiphany.jpg",0,0 可以让背景的透明度变成0,减少1.33x的load,然后当前未用到的图层也可以通过F的指令隐藏,不必一直出现在场景中
上面的虚化背景最后应该是这样的code[Events]
//Background and Video events
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
Sprite,Background,TopLeft,"Epiphany.jpg",0,0
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
no kd
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"sb\white.png",236,332
F,0,394234,394334,0,1
P,0,394334,,A
M,0,394334,394376,236,332,247,330
M,0,394376,394419,247,330,258,327
M,0,394419,394462,258,327,268,324
M,0,394462,394505,268,324,279,319
M,0,394505,394548,279,319,289,314
M,0,394548,394591,289,314,298,308
M,0,394591,394634,298,308,306,300
M,0,394634,394676,306,300,313,291
M,0,394676,394719,313,291,320,283
M,0,394719,394762,320,283,331,281
M,0,394762,394805,331,281,342,280
M,0,394805,394848,342,280,354,280
M,0,394848,394891,354,280,365,281
M,0,394891,394934,365,281,376,284
M,0,394934,394976,376,284,387,287
M,0,394976,395019,387,287,397,291
F,0,395019,395119,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"sb\white.png",415,156
F,0,395091,395191,0,1
P,0,395191,,A
F,0,395191,395291,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"sb\white.png",517,245
F,0,395263,395363,0,1
P,0,395363,,A
M,0,395363,395405,517,245,514,267
M,0,395405,395448,514,267,518,289
M,0,395448,395491,518,289,528,309
M,0,395491,395534,528,309,543,326
F,0,395534,395634,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"sb\white.png",419,380
F,0,395520,395620,0,1
P,0,395620,,A
F,0,395620,395720,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"sb\white.png",419,380
F,0,395606,395706,0,1
P,0,395706,,A
M,0,395706,395748,419,380,413,358
M,0,395748,395791,413,358,408,336
M,0,395791,395834,408,336,403,314
M,0,395834,395877,403,314,398,292
F,0,395877,395977,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"sb\white.png",293,209
F,0,395949,396049,0,1
P,0,396049,,A
F,0,396049,396149,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"sb\white.png",416,156
F,0,396120,396220,0,1
P,0,396220,,A
F,0,396220,396320,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"sb\white.png",415,156
F,0,396206,396306,0,1
P,0,396306,,A
F,0,396306,396406,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"sb\white.png",415,156
F,0,396291,396391,0,1
P,0,396391,,A
F,0,396391,396491,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"sb\white.png",293,210
F,0,396463,396563,0,1
P,0,396563,,A
F,0,396563,396663,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"sb\white.png",277,343
F,0,396634,396734,0,1
P,0,396734,,A
F,0,396734,396834,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"sb\white.png",401,290
F,0,396806,396906,0,1
P,0,396906,,A
F,0,396906,397006,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"sb\white.png",520,244
F,0,396977,397077,0,1
P,0,397077,,A
M,0,397077,397119,520,244,522,221
M,0,397119,397162,522,221,521,199
M,0,397162,397205,521,199,516,177
M,0,397205,397248,516,177,508,156
F,0,397248,397348,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"sb\white.png",393,84
F,0,397320,397420,0,1
P,0,397420,,A
F,0,397420,397520,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"sb\white.png",363,94
F,0,397406,397506,0,1
P,0,397506,,A
F,0,397506,397606,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"sb\white.png",333,105
F,0,397491,397591,0,1
P,0,397591,,A
F,0,397591,397691,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"sb\white.png",303,115
F,0,397577,397677,0,1
P,0,397677,,A
F,0,397677,397777,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"sb\white.png",273,126
F,0,397663,397763,0,1
P,0,397763,,A
M,0,397763,397805,273,126,267,147
M,0,397805,397848,267,147,256,167
M,0,397848,397891,256,167,240,183
M,0,397891,397934,240,183,221,194
F,0,397934,398034,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"sb\white.png",437,230
F,0,398006,398106,0,1
P,0,398106,,A
M,0,398106,398148,437,230,415,222
M,0,398148,398191,415,222,393,220
M,0,398191,398234,393,220,371,223
M,0,398234,398277,371,223,350,232
F,0,398277,398377,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"sb\white.png",351,231
F,0,398263,398363,0,1
P,0,398363,,A
F,0,398363,398463,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"sb\white.png",351,231
F,0,398349,398449,0,1
P,0,398449,,A
F,0,398449,398549,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"sb\white.png",219,235
F,0,398520,398620,0,1
P,0,398620,,A
F,0,398620,398720,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"sb\white.png",153,117
F,0,398691,398791,0,1
P,0,398791,,A
F,0,398791,398891,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"sb\white.png",152,352
F,0,398863,398963,0,1
P,0,398963,,A
F,0,398963,399063,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"sb\white.png",152,352
F,0,398949,399049,0,1
P,0,399049,,A
F,0,399049,399149,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"sb\white.png",151,353
F,0,399034,399134,0,1
P,0,399134,,A
M,0,399134,399176,151,353,170,364
M,0,399176,399219,170,364,191,371
M,0,399219,399262,191,371,213,373
M,0,399262,399305,213,373,235,369
F,0,399305,399405,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"sb\white.png",352,231
F,0,399377,399477,0,1
P,0,399477,,A
M,0,399477,399519,352,231,353,208
M,0,399519,399562,353,208,350,186
M,0,399562,399605,350,186,341,165
M,0,399605,399648,341,165,327,148
F,0,399648,399748,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"sb\white.png",154,118
F,0,399720,399820,0,1
P,0,399820,,A
M,0,399820,399862,154,118,133,128
M,0,399862,399905,133,128,116,142
M,0,399905,399948,116,142,103,160
M,0,399948,399991,103,160,95,181
F,0,399991,400091,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"sb\white.png",219,235
F,0,400063,400163,0,1
P,0,400163,,A
F,0,400163,400263,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"sb\white.png",244,256
F,0,400149,400249,0,1
P,0,400249,,A
F,0,400249,400349,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"sb\white.png",268,276
F,0,400234,400334,0,1
P,0,400334,,A
F,0,400334,400434,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"sb\white.png",292,296
F,0,400320,400420,0,1
P,0,400420,,A
F,0,400420,400520,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"sb\white.png",316,316
F,0,400406,400506,0,1
P,0,400506,,A
F,0,400506,400606,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"sb\white.png",448,284
F,0,400577,400677,0,1
P,0,400677,,A
F,0,400677,400777,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"sb\white.png",520,168
F,0,400749,400849,0,1
P,0,400849,,A
F,0,400849,400949,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"sb\white.png",392,212
F,0,400920,401020,0,1
P,0,401020,,A
F,0,401020,401120,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"sb\white.png",392,212
F,0,401006,401106,0,1
P,0,401106,,A
F,0,401106,401206,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"sb\white.png",392,212
F,0,401091,401191,0,1
P,0,401191,,A
F,0,401191,401291,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"sb\white.png",316,316
F,0,401263,401363,0,1
P,0,401363,,A
F,0,401363,401463,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"sb\white.png",436,372
F,0,401434,401534,0,1
P,0,401534,,A
F,0,401534,401634,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"sb\white.png",568,344
F,0,401606,401706,0,1
P,0,401706,,A
F,0,401706,401806,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"sb\white.png",568,344
F,0,401691,401791,0,1
P,0,401791,,A
F,0,401791,401891,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"sb\white.png",568,344
F,0,401777,401877,0,1
P,0,401877,,A
F,0,401877,401977,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"sb\white.png",448,281
F,0,401949,402049,0,1
P,0,402049,,A
M,0,402049,402091,448,281,430,266
M,0,402091,402134,430,266,415,249
M,0,402134,402177,415,249,402,231
M,0,402177,402220,402,231,392,211
F,0,402220,402320,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"sb\white.png",308,120
F,0,402291,402391,0,1
P,0,402391,,A
F,0,402391,402491,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"sb\white.png",176,156
F,0,402463,402563,0,1
P,0,402563,,A
F,0,402563,402663,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"sb\white.png",308,120
F,0,402634,402734,0,1
P,0,402734,,A
F,0,402734,402834,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"sb\white.png",268,248
F,0,402806,402906,0,1
P,0,402906,,A
F,0,402906,403006,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"sb\white.png",296,240
F,0,402891,402991,0,1
P,0,402991,,A
F,0,402991,403091,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"sb\white.png",328,232
F,0,402977,403077,0,1
P,0,403077,,A
F,0,403077,403177,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"sb\white.png",360,224
F,0,403063,403163,0,1
P,0,403163,,A
F,0,403163,403263,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"sb\white.png",392,216
F,0,403149,403249,0,1
P,0,403249,,A
M,0,403249,403291,392,216,378,198
M,0,403291,403334,378,198,360,185
M,0,403334,403377,360,185,338,177
M,0,403377,403420,338,177,316,176
F,0,403420,403520,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"sb\white.png",316,312
F,0,403491,403591,0,1
P,0,403591,,A
M,0,403591,403633,316,312,334,324
M,0,403633,403676,334,324,353,336
M,0,403676,403719,353,336,372,348
M,0,403719,403762,372,348,391,360
F,0,403762,403862,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"sb\white.png",391,360
F,0,403749,403849,0,1
P,0,403849,,A
F,0,403849,403949,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"sb\white.png",391,360
F,0,403834,403934,0,1
P,0,403934,,A
F,0,403934,404034,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"sb\white.png",212,312
F,0,404006,404106,0,1
P,0,404106,,A
F,0,404106,404206,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"sb\white.png",304,344
F,0,404177,404277,0,1
P,0,404277,,A
F,0,404277,404377,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"sb\white.png",128,284
F,0,404349,404449,0,1
P,0,404449,,A
F,0,404449,404549,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"sb\white.png",128,284
F,0,404434,404534,0,1
P,0,404534,,A
F,0,404534,404634,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"sb\white.png",128,284
F,0,404520,404620,0,1
P,0,404620,,A
M,0,404620,404662,128,284,150,284
M,0,404662,404705,150,284,172,279
M,0,404705,404748,172,279,192,270
M,0,404748,404791,192,270,210,257
F,0,404791,404891,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"sb\white.png",300,152
F,0,404863,404963,0,1
P,0,404963,,A
M,0,404963,405005,300,152,277,150
M,0,405005,405048,277,150,255,153
M,0,405048,405091,255,153,234,161
M,0,405091,405134,234,161,215,174
F,0,405134,405234,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"sb\white.png",352,224
F,0,405206,405306,0,1
P,0,405306,,A
M,0,405306,405348,352,224,374,220
M,0,405348,405391,374,220,395,214
M,0,405391,405434,395,214,416,205
M,0,405434,405477,416,205,435,193
F,0,405477,405577,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"sb\white.png",442,67
F,0,405549,405649,0,1
P,0,405649,,A
F,0,405649,405749,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"sb\white.png",473,69
F,0,405635,405735,0,1
P,0,405735,,A
F,0,405735,405835,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"sb\white.png",503,79
F,0,405720,405820,0,1
P,0,405820,,A
F,0,405820,405920,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"sb\white.png",528,98
F,0,405806,405906,0,1
P,0,405906,,A
F,0,405906,406006,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"sb\white.png",548,122
F,0,405892,405992,0,1
P,0,405992,,A
F,0,405992,406092,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"sb\white.png",436,196
F,0,406063,406163,0,1
P,0,406163,,A
F,0,406163,406263,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"sb\white.png",560,152
F,0,406234,406334,0,1
P,0,406334,,A
F,0,406334,406434,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"sb\white.png",420,164
F,0,406406,406506,0,1
P,0,406506,,A
F,0,406506,406606,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"sb\white.png",420,164
F,0,406491,406591,0,1
P,0,406591,,A
F,0,406591,406691,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"sb\white.png",420,164
F,0,406577,406677,0,1
P,0,406677,,A
M,0,406677,406719,420,164,399,173
M,0,406719,406762,399,173,377,176
M,0,406762,406805,377,176,355,173
M,0,406805,406848,355,173,334,164
F,0,406848,406948,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"sb\white.png",244,96
F,0,406920,407020,0,1
P,0,407020,,A
M,0,407020,407062,244,96,221,98
M,0,407062,407105,221,98,200,106
M,0,407105,407148,200,106,181,118
M,0,407148,407191,181,118,166,134
F,0,407191,407291,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"sb\white.png",166,134
F,0,407177,407277,0,1
P,0,407277,,A
F,0,407277,407377,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"sb\white.png",166,134
F,0,407263,407363,0,1
P,0,407363,,A
F,0,407363,407463,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"sb\white.png",264,232
F,0,407434,407534,0,1
P,0,407534,,A
F,0,407534,407634,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"sb\white.png",244,96
F,0,407606,407706,0,1
P,0,407706,,A
F,0,407706,407806,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"sb\white.png",264,232
F,0,407777,407877,0,1
P,0,407877,,A
F,0,407877,407977,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"sb\white.png",420,164
F,0,407949,408049,0,1
P,0,408049,,A
M,0,408049,408091,420,164,399,173
M,0,408091,408134,399,173,377,176
M,0,408134,408177,377,176,355,173
M,0,408177,408220,355,173,334,164
F,0,408220,408320,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"sb\white.png",92,176
F,0,408291,408391,0,1
P,0,408391,,A
F,0,408391,408491,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"sb\white.png",120,188
F,0,408377,408477,0,1
P,0,408477,,A
F,0,408477,408577,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"sb\white.png",148,200
F,0,408463,408563,0,1
P,0,408563,,A
F,0,408563,408663,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"sb\white.png",176,212
F,0,408549,408649,0,1
P,0,408649,,A
F,0,408649,408749,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"sb\white.png",208,224
F,0,408634,408734,0,1
P,0,408734,,A
M,0,408734,408776,208,224,225,238
M,0,408776,408819,225,238,238,256
M,0,408819,408862,238,256,245,277
M,0,408862,408905,245,277,246,300
F,0,408905,409005,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"sb\white.png",288,420
F,0,408977,409077,0,1
P,0,409077,,A
M,0,409077,409119,288,420,309,412
M,0,409119,409162,309,412,327,399
M,0,409162,409205,327,399,342,383
M,0,409205,409248,342,383,352,363
F,0,409248,409348,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"sb\white.png",352,363
F,0,409234,409334,0,1
P,0,409334,,A
F,0,409334,409434,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"sb\white.png",352,363
F,0,409320,409420,0,1
P,0,409420,,A
F,0,409420,409520,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"sb\white.png",332,240
F,0,409491,409591,0,1
P,0,409591,,A
F,0,409591,409691,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"sb\white.png",208,224
F,0,409663,409763,0,1
P,0,409763,,A
F,0,409763,409863,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"sb\white.png",236,348
F,0,409834,409934,0,1
P,0,409934,,A
F,0,409934,410034,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"sb\white.png",236,348
F,0,409920,410020,0,1
P,0,410020,,A
F,0,410020,410120,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"sb\white.png",236,348
F,0,410006,410106,0,1
P,0,410106,,A
M,0,410106,410148,236,348,213,347
M,0,410148,410191,213,347,191,342
M,0,410191,410234,191,342,172,331
M,0,410234,410277,172,331,156,315
F,0,410277,410377,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"sb\white.png",145,114
F,0,410349,410449,0,1
P,0,410449,,A
M,0,410449,410491,145,114,144,136
M,0,410491,410534,144,136,138,158
M,0,410534,410577,138,158,129,178
M,0,410577,410620,129,178,115,196
F,0,410620,410720,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"sb\white.png",324,188
F,0,410691,410791,0,1
P,0,410791,,A
M,0,410791,410833,324,188,307,203
M,0,410833,410876,307,203,287,213
M,0,410876,410919,287,213,266,220
M,0,410919,410962,266,220,243,220
F,0,410962,411062,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"sb\white.png",376,92
F,0,411034,411134,0,1
P,0,411134,,A
F,0,411134,411234,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"sb\white.png",400,112
F,0,411120,411220,0,1
P,0,411220,,A
F,0,411220,411320,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"sb\white.png",416,140
F,0,411206,411306,0,1
P,0,411306,,A
F,0,411306,411406,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"sb\white.png",424,172
F,0,411291,411391,0,1
P,0,411391,,A
F,0,411391,411491,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"sb\white.png",424,204
F,0,411377,411477,0,1
P,0,411477,,A
M,0,411477,411519,424,204,421,226
M,0,411519,411562,421,226,413,247
M,0,411562,411605,413,247,399,264
M,0,411605,411648,399,264,381,278
F,0,411648,411748,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"sb\white.png",464,320
F,0,411720,411820,0,1
P,0,411820,,A
F,0,411820,411920,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"sb\white.png",222,235
F,0,411891,411991,0,1
P,0,411991,,A
F,0,411991,412091,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"sb\white.png",222,235
F,0,411977,412077,0,1
P,0,412077,,A
F,0,412077,412177,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"sb\white.png",222,235
F,0,412063,412163,0,1
P,0,412163,,A
F,0,412163,412263,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"sb\white.png",151,169
F,0,412234,412334,0,1
P,0,412334,,A
F,0,412334,412434,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"sb\white.png",245,146
F,0,412405,412505,0,1
P,0,412505,,A
F,0,412505,412605,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"sb\white.png",175,75
F,0,412576,412676,0,1
P,0,412676,,A
F,0,412676,412776,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"sb\white.png",128,258
F,0,412748,412848,0,1
P,0,412848,,A
F,0,412848,412948,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"sb\white.png",315,211
F,0,412919,413019,0,1
P,0,413019,,A
F,0,413019,413119,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"sb\white.png",175,75
F,0,413091,413191,0,1
P,0,413191,,A
F,0,413191,413291,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"sb\white.png",105,347
F,0,413263,413363,0,1
P,0,413363,,A
F,0,413363,413463,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"sb\white.png",385,277
F,0,413434,413534,0,1
P,0,413534,,A
F,0,413534,413634,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"sb\white.png",175,75
F,0,413605,413705,0,1
P,0,413705,,A
F,0,413705,413805,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"sb\white.png",76,431
F,0,413777,413877,0,1
P,0,413877,,A
F,0,413877,413977,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"sb\white.png",456,337
F,0,413949,414049,0,1
P,0,414049,,A
F,0,414049,414149,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"sb\lightblue.PNG",175,75
F,0,414120,414220,0,1
P,0,414220,,A
F,0,414220,415249,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"sb\darkblue.PNG",175,75
F,0,415491,415591,0,1
P,0,415591,,A
F,0,415591,416620,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"sb\gray.PNG",175,75
F,0,416877,416977,0,1
P,0,416977,,A
F,0,416977,418006,1,0
谢谢!!已替换examination wrote:
as requested by zzb
优化了下你的追踪代码
用下面代码替换你的62-329行codeSprite,Foreground,Centre,"sb\white.png",236,332
F,0,394234,394334,0,1
P,0,394334,,A
M,0,394334,394376,236,332,247,330
M,0,394376,394419,247,330,258,327
M,0,394419,394462,258,327,268,324
M,0,394462,394505,268,324,279,319
M,0,394505,394548,279,319,289,314
M,0,394548,394591,289,314,298,308
M,0,394591,394634,298,308,306,300
M,0,394634,394676,306,300,313,291
M,0,394676,394719,313,291,320,283
M,0,394719,394762,320,283,331,281
M,0,394762,394805,331,281,342,280
M,0,394805,394848,342,280,354,280
M,0,394848,394891,354,280,365,281
M,0,394891,394934,365,281,376,284
M,0,394934,394976,376,284,387,287
M,0,394976,395019,387,287,397,291
F,0,395019,395119,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"sb\white.png",415,156
F,0,395091,395191,0,1
P,0,395191,,A
F,0,395191,395291,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"sb\white.png",517,245
F,0,395263,395363,0,1
P,0,395363,,A
M,0,395363,395405,517,245,514,267
M,0,395405,395448,514,267,518,289
M,0,395448,395491,518,289,528,309
M,0,395491,395534,528,309,543,326
F,0,395534,395634,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"sb\white.png",419,380
F,0,395520,395620,0,1
P,0,395620,,A
F,0,395620,395720,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"sb\white.png",419,380
F,0,395606,395706,0,1
P,0,395706,,A
M,0,395706,395748,419,380,413,358
M,0,395748,395791,413,358,408,336
M,0,395791,395834,408,336,403,314
M,0,395834,395877,403,314,398,292
F,0,395877,395977,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"sb\white.png",293,209
F,0,395949,396049,0,1
P,0,396049,,A
F,0,396049,396149,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"sb\white.png",416,156
F,0,396120,396220,0,1
P,0,396220,,A
F,0,396220,396320,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"sb\white.png",415,156
F,0,396206,396306,0,1
P,0,396306,,A
F,0,396306,396406,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"sb\white.png",415,156
F,0,396291,396391,0,1
P,0,396391,,A
F,0,396391,396491,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"sb\white.png",293,210
F,0,396463,396563,0,1
P,0,396563,,A
F,0,396563,396663,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"sb\white.png",277,343
F,0,396634,396734,0,1
P,0,396734,,A
F,0,396734,396834,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"sb\white.png",401,290
F,0,396806,396906,0,1
P,0,396906,,A
F,0,396906,397006,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"sb\white.png",520,244
F,0,396977,397077,0,1
P,0,397077,,A
M,0,397077,397119,520,244,522,221
M,0,397119,397162,522,221,521,199
M,0,397162,397205,521,199,516,177
M,0,397205,397248,516,177,508,156
F,0,397248,397348,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"sb\white.png",393,84
F,0,397320,397420,0,1
P,0,397420,,A
F,0,397420,397520,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"sb\white.png",363,94
F,0,397406,397506,0,1
P,0,397506,,A
F,0,397506,397606,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"sb\white.png",333,105
F,0,397491,397591,0,1
P,0,397591,,A
F,0,397591,397691,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"sb\white.png",303,115
F,0,397577,397677,0,1
P,0,397677,,A
F,0,397677,397777,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"sb\white.png",273,126
F,0,397663,397763,0,1
P,0,397763,,A
M,0,397763,397805,273,126,267,147
M,0,397805,397848,267,147,256,167
M,0,397848,397891,256,167,240,183
M,0,397891,397934,240,183,221,194
F,0,397934,398034,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"sb\white.png",437,230
F,0,398006,398106,0,1
P,0,398106,,A
M,0,398106,398148,437,230,415,222
M,0,398148,398191,415,222,393,220
M,0,398191,398234,393,220,371,223
M,0,398234,398277,371,223,350,232
F,0,398277,398377,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"sb\white.png",351,231
F,0,398263,398363,0,1
P,0,398363,,A
F,0,398363,398463,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"sb\white.png",351,231
F,0,398349,398449,0,1
P,0,398449,,A
F,0,398449,398549,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"sb\white.png",219,235
F,0,398520,398620,0,1
P,0,398620,,A
F,0,398620,398720,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"sb\white.png",153,117
F,0,398691,398791,0,1
P,0,398791,,A
F,0,398791,398891,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"sb\white.png",152,352
F,0,398863,398963,0,1
P,0,398963,,A
F,0,398963,399063,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"sb\white.png",152,352
F,0,398949,399049,0,1
P,0,399049,,A
F,0,399049,399149,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"sb\white.png",151,353
F,0,399034,399134,0,1
P,0,399134,,A
M,0,399134,399176,151,353,170,364
M,0,399176,399219,170,364,191,371
M,0,399219,399262,191,371,213,373
M,0,399262,399305,213,373,235,369
F,0,399305,399405,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"sb\white.png",352,231
F,0,399377,399477,0,1
P,0,399477,,A
M,0,399477,399519,352,231,353,208
M,0,399519,399562,353,208,350,186
M,0,399562,399605,350,186,341,165
M,0,399605,399648,341,165,327,148
F,0,399648,399748,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"sb\white.png",154,118
F,0,399720,399820,0,1
P,0,399820,,A
M,0,399820,399862,154,118,133,128
M,0,399862,399905,133,128,116,142
M,0,399905,399948,116,142,103,160
M,0,399948,399991,103,160,95,181
F,0,399991,400091,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"sb\white.png",219,235
F,0,400063,400163,0,1
P,0,400163,,A
F,0,400163,400263,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"sb\white.png",244,256
F,0,400149,400249,0,1
P,0,400249,,A
F,0,400249,400349,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"sb\white.png",268,276
F,0,400234,400334,0,1
P,0,400334,,A
F,0,400334,400434,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"sb\white.png",292,296
F,0,400320,400420,0,1
P,0,400420,,A
F,0,400420,400520,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"sb\white.png",316,316
F,0,400406,400506,0,1
P,0,400506,,A
F,0,400506,400606,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"sb\white.png",448,284
F,0,400577,400677,0,1
P,0,400677,,A
F,0,400677,400777,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"sb\white.png",520,168
F,0,400749,400849,0,1
P,0,400849,,A
F,0,400849,400949,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"sb\white.png",392,212
F,0,400920,401020,0,1
P,0,401020,,A
F,0,401020,401120,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"sb\white.png",392,212
F,0,401006,401106,0,1
P,0,401106,,A
F,0,401106,401206,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"sb\white.png",392,212
F,0,401091,401191,0,1
P,0,401191,,A
F,0,401191,401291,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"sb\white.png",316,316
F,0,401263,401363,0,1
P,0,401363,,A
F,0,401363,401463,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"sb\white.png",436,372
F,0,401434,401534,0,1
P,0,401534,,A
F,0,401534,401634,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"sb\white.png",568,344
F,0,401606,401706,0,1
P,0,401706,,A
F,0,401706,401806,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"sb\white.png",568,344
F,0,401691,401791,0,1
P,0,401791,,A
F,0,401791,401891,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"sb\white.png",568,344
F,0,401777,401877,0,1
P,0,401877,,A
F,0,401877,401977,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"sb\white.png",448,281
F,0,401949,402049,0,1
P,0,402049,,A
M,0,402049,402091,448,281,430,266
M,0,402091,402134,430,266,415,249
M,0,402134,402177,415,249,402,231
M,0,402177,402220,402,231,392,211
F,0,402220,402320,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"sb\white.png",308,120
F,0,402291,402391,0,1
P,0,402391,,A
F,0,402391,402491,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"sb\white.png",176,156
F,0,402463,402563,0,1
P,0,402563,,A
F,0,402563,402663,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"sb\white.png",308,120
F,0,402634,402734,0,1
P,0,402734,,A
F,0,402734,402834,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"sb\white.png",268,248
F,0,402806,402906,0,1
P,0,402906,,A
F,0,402906,403006,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"sb\white.png",296,240
F,0,402891,402991,0,1
P,0,402991,,A
F,0,402991,403091,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"sb\white.png",328,232
F,0,402977,403077,0,1
P,0,403077,,A
F,0,403077,403177,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"sb\white.png",360,224
F,0,403063,403163,0,1
P,0,403163,,A
F,0,403163,403263,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"sb\white.png",392,216
F,0,403149,403249,0,1
P,0,403249,,A
M,0,403249,403291,392,216,378,198
M,0,403291,403334,378,198,360,185
M,0,403334,403377,360,185,338,177
M,0,403377,403420,338,177,316,176
F,0,403420,403520,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"sb\white.png",316,312
F,0,403491,403591,0,1
P,0,403591,,A
M,0,403591,403633,316,312,334,324
M,0,403633,403676,334,324,353,336
M,0,403676,403719,353,336,372,348
M,0,403719,403762,372,348,391,360
F,0,403762,403862,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"sb\white.png",391,360
F,0,403749,403849,0,1
P,0,403849,,A
F,0,403849,403949,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"sb\white.png",391,360
F,0,403834,403934,0,1
P,0,403934,,A
F,0,403934,404034,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"sb\white.png",212,312
F,0,404006,404106,0,1
P,0,404106,,A
F,0,404106,404206,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"sb\white.png",304,344
F,0,404177,404277,0,1
P,0,404277,,A
F,0,404277,404377,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"sb\white.png",128,284
F,0,404349,404449,0,1
P,0,404449,,A
F,0,404449,404549,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"sb\white.png",128,284
F,0,404434,404534,0,1
P,0,404534,,A
F,0,404534,404634,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"sb\white.png",128,284
F,0,404520,404620,0,1
P,0,404620,,A
M,0,404620,404662,128,284,150,284
M,0,404662,404705,150,284,172,279
M,0,404705,404748,172,279,192,270
M,0,404748,404791,192,270,210,257
F,0,404791,404891,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"sb\white.png",300,152
F,0,404863,404963,0,1
P,0,404963,,A
M,0,404963,405005,300,152,277,150
M,0,405005,405048,277,150,255,153
M,0,405048,405091,255,153,234,161
M,0,405091,405134,234,161,215,174
F,0,405134,405234,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"sb\white.png",352,224
F,0,405206,405306,0,1
P,0,405306,,A
M,0,405306,405348,352,224,374,220
M,0,405348,405391,374,220,395,214
M,0,405391,405434,395,214,416,205
M,0,405434,405477,416,205,435,193
F,0,405477,405577,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"sb\white.png",442,67
F,0,405549,405649,0,1
P,0,405649,,A
F,0,405649,405749,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"sb\white.png",473,69
F,0,405635,405735,0,1
P,0,405735,,A
F,0,405735,405835,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"sb\white.png",503,79
F,0,405720,405820,0,1
P,0,405820,,A
F,0,405820,405920,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"sb\white.png",528,98
F,0,405806,405906,0,1
P,0,405906,,A
F,0,405906,406006,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"sb\white.png",548,122
F,0,405892,405992,0,1
P,0,405992,,A
F,0,405992,406092,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"sb\white.png",436,196
F,0,406063,406163,0,1
P,0,406163,,A
F,0,406163,406263,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"sb\white.png",560,152
F,0,406234,406334,0,1
P,0,406334,,A
F,0,406334,406434,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"sb\white.png",420,164
F,0,406406,406506,0,1
P,0,406506,,A
F,0,406506,406606,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"sb\white.png",420,164
F,0,406491,406591,0,1
P,0,406591,,A
F,0,406591,406691,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"sb\white.png",420,164
F,0,406577,406677,0,1
P,0,406677,,A
M,0,406677,406719,420,164,399,173
M,0,406719,406762,399,173,377,176
M,0,406762,406805,377,176,355,173
M,0,406805,406848,355,173,334,164
F,0,406848,406948,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"sb\white.png",244,96
F,0,406920,407020,0,1
P,0,407020,,A
M,0,407020,407062,244,96,221,98
M,0,407062,407105,221,98,200,106
M,0,407105,407148,200,106,181,118
M,0,407148,407191,181,118,166,134
F,0,407191,407291,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"sb\white.png",166,134
F,0,407177,407277,0,1
P,0,407277,,A
F,0,407277,407377,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"sb\white.png",166,134
F,0,407263,407363,0,1
P,0,407363,,A
F,0,407363,407463,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"sb\white.png",264,232
F,0,407434,407534,0,1
P,0,407534,,A
F,0,407534,407634,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"sb\white.png",244,96
F,0,407606,407706,0,1
P,0,407706,,A
F,0,407706,407806,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"sb\white.png",264,232
F,0,407777,407877,0,1
P,0,407877,,A
F,0,407877,407977,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"sb\white.png",420,164
F,0,407949,408049,0,1
P,0,408049,,A
M,0,408049,408091,420,164,399,173
M,0,408091,408134,399,173,377,176
M,0,408134,408177,377,176,355,173
M,0,408177,408220,355,173,334,164
F,0,408220,408320,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"sb\white.png",92,176
F,0,408291,408391,0,1
P,0,408391,,A
F,0,408391,408491,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"sb\white.png",120,188
F,0,408377,408477,0,1
P,0,408477,,A
F,0,408477,408577,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"sb\white.png",148,200
F,0,408463,408563,0,1
P,0,408563,,A
F,0,408563,408663,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"sb\white.png",176,212
F,0,408549,408649,0,1
P,0,408649,,A
F,0,408649,408749,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"sb\white.png",208,224
F,0,408634,408734,0,1
P,0,408734,,A
M,0,408734,408776,208,224,225,238
M,0,408776,408819,225,238,238,256
M,0,408819,408862,238,256,245,277
M,0,408862,408905,245,277,246,300
F,0,408905,409005,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"sb\white.png",288,420
F,0,408977,409077,0,1
P,0,409077,,A
M,0,409077,409119,288,420,309,412
M,0,409119,409162,309,412,327,399
M,0,409162,409205,327,399,342,383
M,0,409205,409248,342,383,352,363
F,0,409248,409348,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"sb\white.png",352,363
F,0,409234,409334,0,1
P,0,409334,,A
F,0,409334,409434,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"sb\white.png",352,363
F,0,409320,409420,0,1
P,0,409420,,A
F,0,409420,409520,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"sb\white.png",332,240
F,0,409491,409591,0,1
P,0,409591,,A
F,0,409591,409691,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"sb\white.png",208,224
F,0,409663,409763,0,1
P,0,409763,,A
F,0,409763,409863,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"sb\white.png",236,348
F,0,409834,409934,0,1
P,0,409934,,A
F,0,409934,410034,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"sb\white.png",236,348
F,0,409920,410020,0,1
P,0,410020,,A
F,0,410020,410120,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"sb\white.png",236,348
F,0,410006,410106,0,1
P,0,410106,,A
M,0,410106,410148,236,348,213,347
M,0,410148,410191,213,347,191,342
M,0,410191,410234,191,342,172,331
M,0,410234,410277,172,331,156,315
F,0,410277,410377,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"sb\white.png",145,114
F,0,410349,410449,0,1
P,0,410449,,A
M,0,410449,410491,145,114,144,136
M,0,410491,410534,144,136,138,158
M,0,410534,410577,138,158,129,178
M,0,410577,410620,129,178,115,196
F,0,410620,410720,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"sb\white.png",324,188
F,0,410691,410791,0,1
P,0,410791,,A
M,0,410791,410833,324,188,307,203
M,0,410833,410876,307,203,287,213
M,0,410876,410919,287,213,266,220
M,0,410919,410962,266,220,243,220
F,0,410962,411062,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"sb\white.png",376,92
F,0,411034,411134,0,1
P,0,411134,,A
F,0,411134,411234,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"sb\white.png",400,112
F,0,411120,411220,0,1
P,0,411220,,A
F,0,411220,411320,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"sb\white.png",416,140
F,0,411206,411306,0,1
P,0,411306,,A
F,0,411306,411406,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"sb\white.png",424,172
F,0,411291,411391,0,1
P,0,411391,,A
F,0,411391,411491,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"sb\white.png",424,204
F,0,411377,411477,0,1
P,0,411477,,A
M,0,411477,411519,424,204,421,226
M,0,411519,411562,421,226,413,247
M,0,411562,411605,413,247,399,264
M,0,411605,411648,399,264,381,278
F,0,411648,411748,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"sb\white.png",464,320
F,0,411720,411820,0,1
P,0,411820,,A
F,0,411820,411920,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"sb\white.png",222,235
F,0,411891,411991,0,1
P,0,411991,,A
F,0,411991,412091,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"sb\white.png",222,235
F,0,411977,412077,0,1
P,0,412077,,A
F,0,412077,412177,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"sb\white.png",222,235
F,0,412063,412163,0,1
P,0,412163,,A
F,0,412163,412263,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"sb\white.png",151,169
F,0,412234,412334,0,1
P,0,412334,,A
F,0,412334,412434,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"sb\white.png",245,146
F,0,412405,412505,0,1
P,0,412505,,A
F,0,412505,412605,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"sb\white.png",175,75
F,0,412576,412676,0,1
P,0,412676,,A
F,0,412676,412776,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"sb\white.png",128,258
F,0,412748,412848,0,1
P,0,412848,,A
F,0,412848,412948,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"sb\white.png",315,211
F,0,412919,413019,0,1
P,0,413019,,A
F,0,413019,413119,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"sb\white.png",175,75
F,0,413091,413191,0,1
P,0,413191,,A
F,0,413191,413291,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"sb\white.png",105,347
F,0,413263,413363,0,1
P,0,413363,,A
F,0,413363,413463,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"sb\white.png",385,277
F,0,413434,413534,0,1
P,0,413534,,A
F,0,413534,413634,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"sb\white.png",175,75
F,0,413605,413705,0,1
P,0,413705,,A
F,0,413705,413805,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"sb\white.png",76,431
F,0,413777,413877,0,1
P,0,413877,,A
F,0,413877,413977,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"sb\white.png",456,337
F,0,413949,414049,0,1
P,0,414049,,A
F,0,414049,414149,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"sb\lightblue.PNG",175,75
F,0,414120,414220,0,1
P,0,414220,,A
F,0,414220,415249,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"sb\darkblue.PNG",175,75
F,0,415491,415591,0,1
P,0,415591,,A
F,0,415591,416620,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"sb\gray.PNG",175,75
F,0,416877,416977,0,1
P,0,416977,,A
F,0,416977,418006,1,0
but it had a reply=[Hula wrote:
I never got a mod reply or kds =[
I'm surprised a BN would rank it after my mod didn't have a reply to it
Barely a reply in my books.Karen wrote:
but it had a reply=[Hula wrote:
I never got a mod reply or kds =[
I'm surprised a BN would rank it after my mod didn't have a reply to it
and have your kds
谢谢!除了红字标出的,其余都改正了Kencho wrote:
- Black is Personal comments.
Bold Black is Highly recommended to fix.
Red is Unrankable that you should fix.[General]
- Processing error: Unsupported sourceStream format :
normal-hitclap7.wav- Usage of mp3 and ogg as hitsounds is not recommended (consider converting to .wav) :
normal-hitclap5.wav- 總結就是上面的兩個音效出了問題,我幫你弄好了,下載這個 : normal-hitclap5 和 normal-hitclap7 然後取代舊的音效就可以了
[E.T.]弄好了叫我
- 01:01:591 (1,2,3) - 沒疊好
- 01:09:134 (3,4,5) - ^
- 02:16:506 (1,1,2,3,4) - 這種雖然沒有什麼問題,但對我來說不太好打。在打圖角度來想,02:16:849 - 是重音所以放clickable的物件比較好,然後你後面跟了4個圓圈而且NC了,看上去就像是4連一樣所以不好打。我個人意見是改成像02:13:763 (4,1,2,3,4,5) - 這樣的,一個1/2滑條然後5個圓圈,這種才是最適合的,正好02:16:677 - 也是有音,用1/2滑條也適合。圖後面還有很多這種地方,如果要改的話是大工程,但改了圖肯定會更好打的。 这里是为了这个人声的变缓而故意的,音效也有特意强调,所以我保留了这个
- 01:05:191 (1,2) - 01:16:163 (1,2) - 01:21:649 (1,2) - 這些地方其實也像我上面說的,重音要clickable的物件,雖然你這裡用了折返滑條取代,但是折返通常是在白線開始的,藍線開始的很不好打,所以這類型的你要改成這樣
- 04:42:306 - 04:42:477 - 漏了跟鼓,你前面也有跟,這個怎麼不跟呢
- 04:45:220 - 04:45:391 - 04:50:534 - 04:50:706 - 04:53:277 - 04:53:449 - 這些都是,我是覺得跟一個不跟一個不太好,要不全部都跟,要不全部都不跟這樣,然後物件方面用一個固定的形式會比較好,現在這樣顯得太亂。 04:45:391 - 04:50:534 - 04:50:706 -没有改,因为想强调一下人声,其余人声不强烈的都改了
- 05:52:420 (1,2) - 故意沒疊好的?是的~
- 05:57:134 (1,2,3) - 開了堆疊效果的話應該向右一個像素,按ctrl+右方向鍵就可以了,然後記得05:57:649 (4) - 也要向右移一個像素
- 06:36:220 (6,7,8) - 沒疊好
- 06:38:963 (3,4,5) - 06:45:306 (7,6) - ^
of course :')RikiH_ wrote:
Would be cool if you add I took your memories to the tags, since lots of people like me can't remember the title :')
The differ name has been explained before:Stjpa wrote:
This map contains multiple unrankable things as having a diffname related to player names and unrelated names in the tags. Also in general, I see a big lack of quality because some random patterns you just use in the beginning for the vocals, some spacing issues and so on. I might mod it later if I find the motivation to.
Edit: modding rn
Thanks for your advice!Spork Lover wrote:
05:55:934 (1,1,2) - I don't really wanna ignore this pattern. You only use it this one time, and the strongest beat of the quad is on the white tick (while the kickslider's end is on that tick, making the 05:56:534 (2,3,4) - jump extremely hard to land, you're clicking the two least audible beats, and there's a 1/2 break between them, which looks like a 1/4 break because it's a kickslider. It's not really a healthy pattern in my eyes (I was in the middle of modding the map when it got qualified lel xd, and apart from some minor pattern things, this one really caught my eye, since it seemed really odd this late into the song) well i have to admit i did this because i think it's fun, and testplays didn't show any problem here ^ ^ i think it's alright
Also, there's a constant 5.66x load time in the "red flashy section" (05:51:134 - to 06:28:849 - ) of the storyboard, which shouldn't really be a problem, but still did some tiny spikes for me when playing through the song (People will disable the storyboard anyway on their 2nd attempt anyway xd) yes, and nothing really can be done to improve this ;_;
Don't give kd for this if it gets denied, and if it goes through clean, gratz, I like that you did a completely different take from Aiceo's version
Stjpa wrote:
[General]rain1214 didn't do this is 2 mins, it may seems easy to you but it's not like that. he did more that that. and i said important advice, this map is two years old. and those people in my tags are doing things more than giving a few mods...
- So the diffname "E.T." stands for "Echoy. Tatsh." basically. Diffnames related to player names aren't allowed since 2013 I think.
- As I can see, l1mi and Kite aren't supposed to be in the tags as they didn't provide anything useful (beside mods) to the map, why are they in the tags? Also, just because someone made the combo colours for your map you can't put them in the tags as it's something everyone can do in a few minutes. Tags are supposed to help people who are looking for a specific map, and I don't think someone will look for "rain1214" to find some neat combo colours. At that point the tags "I took your memories" is kind of questionable as well. Just because a single player here can find the map easier with that single line she says in the song you shouldn't put it there. Otherwise people can just put the whole lyrics of the song into the tags, right?
[E.T.]
- Already in the beginning you are changing your rhythms all the time without having an (audible enough) change in the music. For example 00:24:391 (2,3,1) - 00:25:934 (6,7,8) - here you are mapping the triplets / 5plets the music definitely provides but then again 00:21:991 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - in this section you completely ignore them and use 1/2 patterns even though the rhythms are focusing on the same beats. 00:21:991 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - fade in and to echo to the last part
- 00:41:191 (1,1) - I know it's just a personal thing, but these sliders are really ugly and boring. There are lot of clean and good looking sliders in plenty of maps, so consider using a different shape as those look like you haven't put any effort into them. .-. i think it's good.. yeah like you said, it's too personal
- 00:43:677 (1) - What is this mapped to? It doesn't have a sound on the red tick while also having an NC that doesn't make sense if you ask me. but it do have sound
- 00:49:591 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - Rhythm issue here as well. You are ignoring sounds on blue ticks and use a star pattern that even has decreasing spacing over time. If you really wanna emphasize vocals that bad, the spacing should increase rather than decrease. why increase... the vocal is literally fading away!
- 01:01:419 (5,1) - In my opinion, if you wanna do things like that, you should definitely take an acuter angle as they are way better to emphasize certain things rather than linear flow with different spacing that are horribly to play. hmm
- 01:03:134 (1,1,1,1,1) - From the playing perspective I don't really remember a single part where you emphasized vocals this way (except 01:11:363 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - obviously). it's emphaized because it's obvious. same here 03:14:791 (1,1,1,1,1) -
- 01:14:106 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - What is the spacing supposed to highlight here? There aren't any vocals and out of a sudden you go to big jumps and then to small jumps again. am i wrong?? there is vocal, like 04:59:020 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - ,even 05:42:906 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) -
- 01:27:820 - For this whole part I share the same opinion about the hitsounding than others. Hitsounds are supposed to help the player keeping a proper rhythm feeling for the map. That means, the hitsounds should at least fit a little bit to the song to maintain that. But in this case you are using some that don't have anything to do with the music itself.
- 01:48:563 (3,4,5) - Just for a comparison; 01:34:849 (3,4,5) - 01:37:592 (3,4,5) - the spacing difference between those is way too huge. Sure you can increase the spacing when it's the last pattern of a part or something, but this feels really odd and out of place considering that the music didn't change that extreme as your spacing.
- 02:01:934 (4,5) - Why that custom stack when it's always stacked later on?
- 02:08:105 (6,1,2,3) - The stream afterwards appears kinda out of a sudden because this pattern doesn't indicate that something harder is coming very soon because of the low spacing and not even sharp flow.
- 02:11:363 (3,4) - Why do you use an anti-jump at the end of a stream part? because it represents a large change in music
- 02:14:620 (1) - Isn't NC'd anywhere else in the music.
- 02:48:049 (1,2,3,4) - I really like the idea of the pattern you used, but I think rotating it a bit more to avoid the overlap here 02:47:534 (2,2) - would be neat.
- 02:49:420 (1,2,3,4,5) - Music not any less intense than before but way lower spacing?the kiai time ends here, i do think it's less intense
So this is what I literally got in like 10-15 minutes. The issues (at least I see them as issues) appear over and over in the map.
00:21:991 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - Looks like an excellent idea to me, helps the player get into the rythm and the music by just tapping to the beat should be simple enough.Stjpa wrote:
z