Goose house - Hikaru nara -TV size-

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Mei

Flandre_ErMei wrote:

M4M here

[Easy]
00:37:811 (1,2,3,4) - 倒是没啥必要短链 单点就好这里节奏其实没用好应该用长滑条的,但是当时没想好,这里这个音貌似好像是压着鼓的我也不太确定

[Normal]
00:20:748 - 加nont,hrfl的时候这边坑了我 加note好接我跟的人声,不加

00:23:373 - ^

00:26:561 (2,3) - 搞折返,hrfl我这点了50,和后面5照应

00:37:811 (1,3) - 都延长1/4这样滑条和下一个note之间间隔就会变得很奇怪了,而且压蓝线本来就不科学

01:04:811 (1,2,3) - 差flow,

01:06:873 - 加个note?反正这里很不顺,总觉得少什么没感觉

01:15:311 (4) - 可删,Normal跟歌完全可以,这个多余先保留

01:24:311 (5,6) - blanket,其实我最讨厌说blanket的惹

[Hard]

00:06:498 (2,3) - blanket

00:08:936 (5,6) - 正确的节奏是把5删了6拉前,何况长白线在滑条中间有音没滑条点听后会让人很困感觉还好



00:10:811 (1,2,3,1) - 12你可以考虑单点+滑条,折返不好,参考后面31感觉没必要啊。。

00:13:248 (3,4,5) - flow好差 试试你这个滑条会和之前一个滑条凑在一起啊,ar低的情况下很难看得,不过还是改了一下

00:34:436 (2) - 我是觉得没必要蓝线结尾 就算你说拉长音,但在红线已经没惹感觉没事.-.为什么蓝线结尾我也不知道,改起来太麻烦了先保留

[Insane]
00:02:373 (3,1) - 叠好 这是叠好的啊不是手动移的,是他自己对齐的

00:03:311 (2,4) - same^

00:08:373 (3,1) - ^

00:07:061 (5) - 不喜欢这个折返,打起来不顺,拆滑条+单点,试试这个滑条会和00:08:373 (3) - 叠起来啊

00:36:217 (8) - 根本没音,有个chi的音啊,满明显的

01:19:436 (5,1,2,3,4) - 打了下 发现这边很突然地就跳走了,莫名,建议选中1234 ctrl+j感觉太近了

加油 :)
谢谢你的mod

Sellenite wrote:

哦草这也能写论文,fuel
哈哈等不及了吧
一拳打爆
pkk
I didn't forget to mod this! Will post it sometime today~~~
pkk
aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa

Easy
  1. 00:01:627 (2) - try curving it more to make it look nicer
  2. 00:46:440 (1) - move to 00:46:815 - (don't shorten spinner, make sure it ends on 00:48:690 - ) then add note at 00:46:440 - .
    This way spinner start matches the sound in the music

    coolcool


Normal
  1. 00:06:877 (5) - move to the right a bit so it lines up with the curve on the slider (~x 148 y 116)
  2. 00:20:565 (1,2,3,4) - try this rhythm instead

    ^00:21:315 - slider on downbeat also maps vocal, you can either keep 1/2 slider at 00:22:065 (4) - or use repeat slider.
  3. 00:37:815 (1,2,3) - try this rhythm instead:

    idk I just like this rhythm better without the gaps between the notes. Up to you though


Hard
  1. 00:23:190 (2,3) - I think it's ok to stack these two since there is a prolonged trumpet sound in the music at 00:23:190 -
  2. 00:30:127 (2) - take me for a ride in your new car
    idk try this shape for smoother curves:
  3. 00:30:690 (3,4,5) - , 00:46:440 (7,1) - etc, can be blanketed better if that was your intention
  4. 01:04:440 (4,1,2) - for better flow (and to make it look nicer), try rearranging like this:
  5. 01:15:690 - space here sounds empty, I feel that it's better to map it than to leave it silent for effect.

    ^repeat on 01:15:315 - and circle on white ticks
  6. 01:22:065 (1,3) - NC should be swapped so it stars on downbeat

    Normal diff needs to be polished a bit


JJburst's Insane
  1. 00:00:315 (1,2,3) - merry christmas \o/
  2. 00:05:940 (6) - consider stacking this on the tail of 00:05:377 (4) - , I think it flows better into 00:06:127 (7) - since you'll be able to go straight down into the curve instead of from the side at an awkward angle.
  3. 00:07:440 (11,1) - try stacking circle on tail for better flow
  4. 00:11:940 (5,6,1) - this back and forth motion is awkward to play imo, try ctrl+G on 00:12:315 (1) - , then stack 00:12:127 (6) - with head of 00:11:565 (4) -
  5. 00:21:315 (1) - try ctrl+j ctrl+g then stack 00:21:877 (2) - under the tail
    flows better imo
  6. 00:31:065 (3,4,1) - cool 'w'

    Nice diff


Insane
  1. 00:37:815 (1,3) - imo stacking these feels nicer to play since the current flow at 00:37:815 (1,2) - is kind of abrupt/sharp idk
  2. 01:02:377 (4,5) - compared to some of the other antijumps, the spacing on this one is a bit larger. I think it looks better if at least half the circle overlaps the slider
  3. 01:18:502 (2) - try moving it upwards more, maybe around ~x220 y156. I think it'll be more fun to play than having 01:18:315 (1,2,3) - in a straight line
  4. 01:19:440 (5) - you can try moving this downwards since 01:19:065 (4) - is going in a downwards direction. If you took the previous suggestion then you can stack 01:18:502 (2,5) -
  5. 01:28:065 - in the other diffs there is a 30% volume green line here, you might want to add that

    sexy stuff

Have fun mapping! 晚安~ zzzzzzzzzz
Topic Starter
Mei

pkk wrote:

aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa

Easy
  1. 00:01:627 (2) - try curving it more to make it look nicer
  2. 00:46:440 (1) - move to 00:46:815 - (don't shorten spinner, make sure it ends on 00:48:690 - ) then add note at 00:46:440 - .then i will get disaqual;ify since gap between spinner and note was too soon. but i moved it to 00:46:815
    This way spinner start matches the sound in the music

    coolcool


Normal
  1. 00:06:877 (5) - move to the right a bit so it lines up with the curve on the slider (~x 148 y 116)
  2. 00:20:565 (1,2,3,4) - try this rhythm insteadi followed vocal here and it sounds fine for me ;;

    ^00:21:315 - slider on downbeat also maps vocal, you can either keep 1/2 slider at 00:22:065 (4) - or use repeat slider.
  3. 00:37:815 (1,2,3) - try this rhythm instead:made some change based on this

    idk I just like this rhythm better without the gaps between the notes. Up to you though


Hard
  1. 00:23:190 (2,3) - I think it's ok to stack these two since there is a prolonged trumpet sound in the music at 00:23:190 - i want to follow the ds
  2. 00:30:127 (2) - take me for a ride in your new carthats almost same for me :?
    idk try this shape for smoother curves:
  3. 00:30:690 (3,4,5) - , 00:46:440 (7,1) - etc, can be blanketed better if that was your intention
  4. 01:04:440 (4,1,2) - for better flow (and to make it look nicer), try rearranging like this:
  5. 01:15:690 - space here sounds empty, I feel that it's better to map it than to leave it silent for effect. fixed by changinhg these to sliders

    ^repeat on 01:15:315 - and circle on white ticks
  6. 01:22:065 (1,3) - NC should be swapped so it stars on downbeatfollowed stanza and vocal, i think there is no problem here

    Normal diff needs to be polished a bit


JJburst's Insane
  1. 00:00:315 (1,2,3) - merry christmas \o/
  2. 00:05:940 (6) - consider stacking this on the tail of 00:05:377 (4) - , I think it flows better into 00:06:127 (7) - since you'll be able to go straight down into the curve instead of from the side at an awkward angle.
  3. 00:07:440 (11,1) - try stacking circle on tail for better flow
  4. 00:11:940 (5,6,1) - this back and forth motion is awkward to play imo, try ctrl+G on 00:12:315 (1) - , then stack 00:12:127 (6) - with head of 00:11:565 (4) -
  5. 00:21:315 (1) - try ctrl+j ctrl+g then stack 00:21:877 (2) - under the tail
    flows better imo
  6. 00:31:065 (3,4,1) - cool 'w'

    Nice diff


Insane
  1. 00:37:815 (1,3) - imo stacking these feels nicer to play since the current flow at 00:37:815 (1,2) - is kind of abrupt/sharp idk
  2. 01:02:377 (4,5) - compared to some of the other antijumps, the spacing on this one is a bit larger. I think it looks better if at least half the circle overlaps the slider
  3. 01:18:502 (2) - try moving it upwards more, maybe around ~x220 y156. I think it'll be more fun to play than having 01:18:315 (1,2,3) - in a straight line
  4. 01:19:440 (5) - you can try moving this downwards since 01:19:065 (4) - is going in a downwards direction. If you took the previous suggestion then you can stack 01:18:502 (2,5) - the note upoward the slider is fine now, imo downwards would be kind weird
  5. 01:28:065 - in the other diffs there is a 30% volume green line here, you might want to add that

    sexy stuff

Have fun mapping! 晚安~ zzzzzzzzzz
oithers fiiiiiiiiiixed >.< thank you pkkkkkk
Zweib
hi~

[Easy]
fine

[Normal]
00:24:877 (5) - add circle?
00:43:065 (5) - delete it and add circles at 00:42:877 (5) and 00:43:252 (6) ?
01:15:315 (4) - use a slider end at 01:16:440 ?

[Hard]
00:09:127 (6) - NC?
(I prefer you NC for each 4/1 while not according to the vocal)

[JJburstOwO]
missing 2 timing points in this diff (虽然不知道那两条红线有什么用
00:11:565 (4) - unpleasant stack and flow here, ctrl + g?
00:27:315 (5) - NC?

[Insane]
00:14:565 (3) - move right by 1 pixel
Kazuya
Hello, from My Mod queue. It's only ideas!

[Insane]

AR: change to 8, or 8,5. It's 160 BPM, AR9 is not better
OD: change to 7,5

00:03:127 (1) - Do I have a short slider? I prefer two circle. :/
00:04:440 (7) - If you don't put a stream (Because it can be here.), delete this 00:04:721 (8) - circle. Without stream, doesn't fit here. Even the distance is big (1.86), and so weird. Can be misleading. If you not delete a (00:04:721 (8) - ) circle, you can use the same distance. Example: http://puu.sh/cQPoX/3724b8b615.jpg
00:09:315 (1) - Perfect stack: x: 448, y: 217
00:09:315 (1,2) - Follow the trumpet. Move 1/1 slider here: 00:09:315 - and 1/2 slider here: 00:09:877 - . Thus better fit. Timeline example: http://puu.sh/cQPMN/2f255cb4cd.jpg
00:11:752 (1) - Please, delete this circle. There is no emphasized sound.
00:54:127 (6,1) - Move 00:54:315 (1) - 1/1 slider here: 00:54:127 - , and 00:54:127 (6) - circle here: 00:54:690 - Timeline: http://puu.sh/cSVob/6b6e5576d5.jpg Better follow the vocal. 1/1 slider fits better here: 00:54:127 -
01:00:127 (6,1) - Same as ^ Move 01:00:315 (1) - 1/2 slider here: 01:00:127 - and 01:00:127 (6) - circle here: 01:00:502 - Timeline: http://puu.sh/cSVvv/4572ccfbc8.jpg
01:06:127 (6,1) - Same as ^ Slider --> Circle (Vocal)
01:12:878 (4,5,6) - Same as ^ Timeline: http://puu.sh/cSVBp/2beafdb86f.jpg (Vocal)
01:26:752 (5) - Two circle is better fit the vocals.

[JJburst]

AR: change to 8

00:07:440 (11) - Better stack: x: 492 y: 58
00:24:315 (1) - One circle, and one 1/2 slider is better. Emphasizes the trumpet. Timeline: http://puu.sh/cSW18/7744b83e5f.jpg
00:24:877 (3,4) - Emphasizes the trumpet, and drum. Timeline: http://puu.sh/cSW5f/a8bad36c52.jpg
00:26:565 (3,4,5) - Please, follow the vocal. Timeline: http://puu.sh/cSW9U/4e346def18.jpg
00:32:190 (2) - This long slider is little weird. I think delete, and use this: http://puu.sh/cSWia/934acebb8c.jpg Fits the vocal and piano.
01:10:252 (4) - Stack: x: 239 y: 202

[Hard]


AR: Change to 7! and HP to 5!

00:15:127 (4) - Please,m follow the vocal! Change slider end here: 00:15:502 - Please don't cancel!
00:17:940 (2,3) - Same as Insane.... Better fits the vocal: http://puu.sh/cSWHs/b71817bf79.jpg
00:27:127 (4,1) - ^ Replace them. slider --> circle ... Timeline: http://puu.sh/cSWLw/80efe4ac4f.jpg
00:34:440 (2) - Here finish the slider: 00:34:627 - Here is the vocalist voice "fades". x'D
00:57:315 (5) - Two circle is better.
01:07:065 (8) - ^
01:11:940 (3,4) - Replace them. circle ---> slider Timeline: http://puu.sh/cSWZ2/09678aedcb.jpg Better fits the vocal.

[Normal]
OD, HP: Change to 3! It's little difficult normal.

00:19:065 (4) - This repeating 1/1 slider is not fit here. Follow the drums! Put 1/2 slider and add once repeat: 00:19:065 - , and put circle here: 00:19:815 - Timeline: http://puu.sh/cSXac/2d8bd758fd.jpg

Biggest problem: Various distance/jumps/little jumps is unrankable for normal! Fix it! Examples:

00:31:065 (5,1) - 1,60x
00:35:940 (3,4) - 1,40x
00:42:315 (4,5) - 1,60x
00:49:815 (2,3) - 1,44x

Correct any such errors! Please, fix it! Very important!

[Easy]

Same as normal. Various distance problem.

00:01:627 (2,1) - 1,28x
00:03:315 (1,2) - 1,34x
00:15:315 (2,3) - 1,26x
00:15:690 (3,4) - 1,35x

Correct any such errors! pls fix it! Very important!

Good Luck.
RandF
From my queue~

[General]
  1. hitsound volume is small all over. I suggest to increase
  2. 00:04:815- and 00:13:815- : these timingpoints are unnecessary, imo

[Easy]
  1. 00:03:315- finish
  2. 00:03:690- clap

[Normal]
  1. 00:03:690- clap
  2. 00:04:440- ^
  3. 00:18:315 (3) - start at 00:18:127
  4. 00:32:940 (3) - move upward a little for good flow
  5. 00:38:752 (3) - I prefer to delete
  6. 00:56:940 (3) - not good flow. why not straight slider?
  7. 01:04:815 (1,2,3) - flow suggetion
  8. 01:21:690- clap
  9. 01:21:315 (4) - awkward shape?

[Hard]
  1. 00:12:690 (2,3) - suggetion
  2. 00:27:877 (2,3,4) - not good flow
  3. 01:01:440 (9,1) - I prefer to increase DS. this part is suitable for jump pattern, imo

[Insane]
  1. 00:40:065 (3) - I prefer to rotate towart 00:40:440 (4) -
  2. 01:07:627 (6) - I prefer to stack on the head of 01:07:815 (1) -
  3. 01:14:752 (5,6) - exchange their position. anti-clockwise pattern is better flow at this part
  4. 01:18:690 (3,4) - Ctrl+G?

[JJburst's Insane]
  1. 00:06:127 (7) - NC
  2. 01:00:690 (1) - how about upward slider?


nice song! and good rhythm coordination <3
~☆
~Good Luck~
Topic Starter
Mei

Zweib wrote:

hi~

[Easy]
fine

[Normal]
00:24:877 (5) - add circle?
00:43:065 (5) - delete it and add circles at 00:42:877 (5) and 00:43:252 (6) ?
01:15:315 (4) - use a slider end at 01:16:440 ?没灵感啊 :(:(

[Hard]
00:09:127 (6) - NC?
(I prefer you NC for each 4/1 while not according to the vocal)

[JJburstOwO]
missing 2 timing points in this diff (虽然不知道那两条红线有什么用
00:11:565 (4) - unpleasant stack and flow here, ctrl + g?
00:27:315 (5) - NC?

[Insane]
00:14:565 (3) - move right by 1 pixel

Kazuya wrote:

Hello, from My Mod queue. It's only ideas!

[Insane]

AR: change to 8, or 8,5. It's 160 BPM, AR9 is not better
OD: change to 7,5

00:03:127 (1) - Do I have a short slider? I prefer two circle. :/ kick slider here is better for me :/
00:04:440 (7) - If you don't put a stream (Because it can be here.), delete this 00:04:721 (8) - circle. Without stream, doesn't fit here. Even the distance is big (1.86), and so weird. Can be misleading. If you not delete a (00:04:721 (8) - ) circle, you can use the same distance. Example: http://puu.sh/cQPoX/3724b8b615.jpg
00:09:315 (1) - Perfect stack: x: 448, y: 217
00:09:315 (1,2) - Follow the trumpet. Move 1/1 slider here: 00:09:315 - and 1/2 slider here: 00:09:877 - . Thus better fit. Timeline example: http://puu.sh/cQPMN/2f255cb4cd.jpg this make no differences in my point
00:11:752 (1) - Please, delete this circle. There is no emphasized sound.if you really tried delete it you will find the blank part gave a bad feedback
00:54:127 (6,1) - Move 00:54:315 (1) - 1/1 slider here: 00:54:127 - , and 00:54:127 (6) - circle here: 00:54:690 - Timeline: http://puu.sh/cSVob/6b6e5576d5.jpg Better follow the vocal. 1/1 slider fits better here: 00:54:127 - then i will miss a drum in00:54:315 so no
01:00:127 (6,1) - Same as ^ Move 01:00:315 (1) - 1/2 slider here: 01:00:127 - and 01:00:127 (6) - circle here: 01:00:502 - Timeline: http://puu.sh/cSVvv/4572ccfbc8.jpg slider end on a drum point is not a good idea for me.. sorry ;w;
01:06:127 (6,1) - Same as ^ Slider --> Circle (Vocal)
01:12:878 (4,5,6) - Same as ^ Timeline: http://puu.sh/cSVBp/2beafdb86f.jpg (Vocal)^
01:26:752 (5) - Two circle is better fit the vocals.i dont want to break the pattern there sorry ><


[Hard]


AR: Change to 7! and HP to 5!

00:15:127 (4) - Please,m follow the vocal! Change slider end here: 00:15:502 - Please don't cancel!???there is no vocal and drum
00:17:940 (2,3) - Same as Insane.... Better fits the vocal: http://puu.sh/cSWHs/b71817bf79.jpgno because i will miss some obivous drum
00:27:127 (4,1) - ^ Replace them. slider --> circle ... Timeline: http://puu.sh/cSWLw/80efe4ac4f.jpg^
00:34:440 (2) - Here finish the slider: 00:34:627 - Here is the vocalist voice "fades". x'Dumm i dont have such idea on how to place the new rhythm
00:57:315 (5) - Two circle is better.this is a easier diff so i use sliders to make it friendly to those newbies(and dt player)
01:07:065 (8) - ^
01:11:940 (3,4) - Replace them. circle ---> slider Timeline: http://puu.sh/cSWZ2/09678aedcb.jpg Better fits the vocal.

[Normal]
OD, HP: Change to 3! It's little difficult normal.

00:19:065 (4) - This repeating 1/1 slider is not fit here. Follow the drums! Put 1/2 slider and add once repeat: 00:19:065 - , and put circle here: 00:19:815 - Timeline: http://puu.sh/cSXac/2d8bd758fd.jpg

Biggest problem: Various distance/jumps/little jumps is unrankable for normal! Fix it! Examples:

00:31:065 (5,1) - 1,60x
00:35:940 (3,4) - 1,40x
00:42:315 (4,5) - 1,60x
00:49:815 (2,3) - 1,44x

Correct any such errors! Please, fix it! Very important!i fixed some of them,but rest are because blanket or symmetric or other reasons i keep mine ><same with easy. btw aimod didnot mentioned this so i think they are not that important

[Easy]

Same as normal. Various distance problem.

00:01:627 (2,1) - 1,28x
00:03:315 (1,2) - 1,34x
00:15:315 (2,3) - 1,26x
00:15:690 (3,4) - 1,35x

Correct any such errors! pls fix it! Very important!

Good Luck.

RandomEffect wrote:

From my queue~

[General]
  1. hitsound volume is small all over. I suggest to increase
  2. 00:04:815- and 00:13:815- : these timingpoints are unnecessary, imo

[Easy]
  1. 00:03:315- finish
  2. 00:03:690- clap

[Normal]
  1. 00:03:690- clap
  2. 00:04:440- ^
  3. 00:18:315 (3) - start at 00:18:127will miss a drum ;;
  4. 00:32:940 (3) - move upward a little for good flow
  5. 00:38:752 (3) - I prefer to delete
  6. 00:56:940 (3) - not good flow. why not straight slider?
  7. 01:04:815 (1,2,3) - flow suggetion
  8. 01:21:690- clap
  9. 01:21:315 (4) - awkward shape?ww i think this shape is fine

[Hard]
  1. 00:12:690 (2,3) - suggetionit is same so i am lazy with chaning it _(:зゝ∠)_
  2. 00:27:877 (2,3,4) - not good flow
  3. 01:01:440 (9,1) - I prefer to increase DS. this part is suitable for jump pattern, imo

[Insane]
  1. 00:40:065 (3) - I prefer to rotate towart 00:40:440 (4) -
  2. 01:07:627 (6) - I prefer to stack on the head of 01:07:815 (1) - this stack fits music
  3. 01:14:752 (5,6) - exchange their position. anti-clockwise pattern is better flow at this part
  4. 01:18:690 (3,4) - Ctrl+G?current one is fine



nice song! and good rhythm coordination <3
~☆
~Good Luck~
thank you guys for modding this ><
i didnot change the arodhp because i think it give a good spread now and bat also not point there are some problems there.
for the muti timing points it is for nightcore mod
about volume... i think it is fine now... maybe ask more guys and will change them later
Erina
Hey~~~ from my mod for voice queue~~~

Great map, song, and anime :) All of these are just ideas, apply what you see fit.

I began modding this a week ago, and then came back to check that half of my fixes were already fixed ;_; I should learn to mod faster >_<

[Insane]
00:03:877 (4,5) - Consider ctrl+g, currently its kinda hard to read, and it seems to fit better with the emphasis in the song (high/low notes alternation)
00:05:377 (3,4) - Consider ctrl+g, I think it's better flow.
00:23:565 (4) - Move to x:340 y:216, makes it symmetrical with the other notes in the pattern
00:32:752 (4) - Consider having this note stack with 00:32:565 (3) - , feels better with the hitsounds/music
00:43:815 (1,2,3) - I feel like these two large jumps were kind of uncalled for, seems kind of abrupt in a fairly calm part of the song. Consider moving 00:44:190 (2) - to x:248 y:288

[JJburstOwO]
00:04:252 (6,7) - This change in distance snap feels really weird :o
00:10:440 (4) - Consider ctrl+g, makes it more interesting
00:21:315 (1) - ehhh this slider looks weird to me...

[Hard]
A great portion of this diff is NC modding, change what you need/see fit.

00:09:127 (6) - Add NC here, keeps consistent with earlier lines
00:16:815 (5,1) - Switch NCs, i prefer NCs to go with the beat/measures of the music
00:19:065 (1) - Remove NC, add NC here 00:19:815 (3) - , remove NC here 00:21:315 (1) - .
This is to keep consistent with the rest of your NCs in this section, and it works better with the 4/4 time signature of the song.
00:24:502 (6) - Consider removing NC, it's up to you. I think this part works better as a full line.
00:57:315 (5) - Consider changing this into two notes rather than a slider - i think it would emphasis the drums in the back more. I noticed that you rejected the idea once, but I really think changing this would sound and play better :)
01:15:315 (4) - Add NC here, it sounds like the beginning of a new line (vocals end here)

[Normal]
00:56:940 (3,4) - Doesn't seem to fit with the music well, especially for a normal diff. Consider replacing slider with a single note.
01:12:690 (6,7) - Same as above, consider changing the rhythm to be like http://puu.sh/d3bAE/5f64f84466.jpg
01:21:315 (4) - I don't understand the reason behind the red ticks in this slider...I personally don't like it :P

[Easy]
00:15:690 (3) - I feel like a normally curved slider rather than a sharp-curved slider would look better here.
00:46:440 (5) - Consider adding a note here, this part just feels empty without one.
01:00:690 (4) - Consider giving this slider a curve: http://puu.sh/d3bYh/232986ab57.jpg

I hope you find this mod somewhat useful :)

Contact me later for more information about what to sing, and how to sing! :D
Topic Starter
Mei

Erina wrote:

Hey~~~ from my mod for voice queue~~~

Great map, song, and anime :) All of these are just ideas, apply what you see fit.

I began modding this a week ago, and then came back to check that half of my fixes were already fixed ;_; I should learn to mod faster >_<

[Insane]
00:03:877 (4,5) - Consider ctrl+g, currently its kinda hard to read, and it seems to fit better with the emphasis in the song (high/low notes alternation)umm i prefer current pattern, so no change ;;
00:05:377 (3,4) - Consider ctrl+g, I think it's better flow.
00:23:565 (4) - Move to x:340 y:216, makes it symmetrical with the other notes in the pattern
00:32:752 (4) - Consider having this note stack with 00:32:565 (3) - , feels better with the hitsounds/music
00:43:815 (1,2,3) - I feel like these two large jumps were kind of uncalled for, seems kind of abrupt in a fairly calm part of the song. Consider moving 00:44:190 (2) - to x:248 y:288i dont think the jump here is so that big. i prefer mine ;;


[Hard]
A great portion of this diff is NC modding, change what you need/see fit.

00:09:127 (6) - Add NC here, keeps consistent with earlier lines
00:16:815 (5,1) - Switch NCs, i prefer NCs to go with the beat/measures of the music
00:19:065 (1) - Remove NC, add NC here 00:19:815 (3) - , remove NC here 00:21:315 (1) - .
This is to keep consistent with the rest of your NCs in this section, and it works better with the 4/4 time signature of the song.
00:24:502 (6) - Consider removing NC, it's up to you. I think this part works better as a full line.
00:57:315 (5) - Consider changing this into two notes rather than a slider - i think it would emphasis the drums in the back more. I noticed that you rejected the idea once, but I really think changing this would sound and play better :)
01:15:315 (4) - Add NC here, it sounds like the beginning of a new line (vocals end here)

[Normal]
00:56:940 (3,4) - Doesn't seem to fit with the music well, especially for a normal diff. Consider replacing slider with a single note.ummm i think this fits vocal ;;
01:12:690 (6,7) - Same as above, consider changing the rhythm to be like http://puu.sh/d3bAE/5f64f84466.jpg
01:21:315 (4) - I don't understand the reason behind the red ticks in this slider...I personally don't like it :P

[Easy]
00:15:690 (3) - I feel like a normally curved slider rather than a sharp-curved slider would look better here.
00:46:440 (5) - Consider adding a note here, this part just feels empty without one.
01:00:690 (4) - Consider giving this slider a curve: http://puu.sh/d3bYh/232986ab57.jpg

I hope you find this mod somewhat useful :)

Contact me later for more information about what to sing, and how to sing! :D
thank you Erina >,< those not mentioned = fixed
Melt
真·随便看看

[Normal]
  • 00:00:315 (1) - 我觉得可以把这个sldier拉长到00:00:877然后删掉后面的circle
    00:08:940 (3) - 倾向于节奏往后放,然后3ctrl+g,再然后3、1稍微往上挪一点保持ds


[Hard]
  • 00:10:815 (1) - 感觉1可以再往右一点让1、2、3的间距“看上去”差不多
    00:38:002 (2,3) - 试试把这两个合成一个slider
    00:39:877 (3) - 还是觉得whistle声音稍微大了点


[JJburst's Insane]
  • 00:10:440 (4) - 感觉全曲就这一个sldier是这个造型,好违和
    01:22:815 (1,2,3,4) - 个人感觉错开要好看点,不过改的话后面一组4个也要调整位置,还是看个人喜好吧


其实我感觉好多地方都还可以改吧,看上去好多都不舒服,不过大概是个人作图习惯的问题,所以我就都不提啦\("▔□▔)/

gl~
Topic Starter
Mei

Melt wrote:

真·随便看看

[Normal]
  • 00:00:315 (1) - 我觉得可以把这个sldier拉长到00:00:877然后删掉后面的circle因为有ez所以这里想搞的密一点
    00:08:940 (3) - 倾向于节奏往后放,然后3ctrl+g,再然后3、1稍微往上挪一点保持ds


[Hard]
  • 00:10:815 (1) - 感觉1可以再往右一点让1、2、3的间距“看上去”差不多
    00:38:002 (2,3) - 试试把这两个合成一个slider
    00:39:877 (3) - 还是觉得whistle声音稍微大了点
谢谢妹贴
Sonnyc
[Easy]
00:06:315 (3) - Grid up

[Normal]
00:05:377 (3) - I personally feel ending at 00:05:752 will follow the strong beats better but keep if you prefer yours.
00:57:315 (4) - Mind giving a new combo since it feels distributed?
01:03:315 (5) - ^?
01:09:315 (4) - ^?

[Hard]
00:18:877 (2) - (352,72) constructs a smoother flow.
00:34:440 (2) - The extra beat of 00:34:721 feels really awkward. Giving a 25% volume reduction won't hurt, would it?
01:19:815 (1) - Is the clap in the reverse intended?
01:20:940 (1) - ^?

[JJburst's Insane]
00:06:877 (3) - The flow of (1,2,3) feels little weird personally. Mind setting (3) a ctrl+G?
Topic Starter
Mei

Sonnyc wrote:

[Easy]
00:06:315 (3) - Grid up

[Normal]
00:05:377 (3) - I personally feel ending at 00:05:752 will follow the strong beats better but keep if you prefer yours.
00:57:315 (4) - Mind giving a new combo since it feels distributed?no, because i do NC every 2 stanza and i want it keep consistency
01:03:315 (5) - ^?
01:09:315 (4) - ^?

[Hard]
00:18:877 (2) - (352,72) constructs a smoother flow.
00:34:440 (2) - The extra beat of 00:34:721 feels really awkward. Giving a 25% volume reduction won't hurt, would it?
01:19:815 (1) - Is the clap in the reverse intended?yes they are
01:20:940 (1) - ^?^

[JJburst's Insane]
00:06:877 (3) - The flow of (1,2,3) feels little weird personally. Mind setting (3) a ctrl+G?
others fixed ><
thank you for modding :):)
Sakaue Nachi
随便写写,神麻婆的图摸不动orz

[Hard]
00:08:752 (4) - 这个音比较突出,和前一个叠不太好感觉
01:04:815 (1,2,3) - 这里可以考虑三角跳什么的,叠着不太过瘾,我觉得hard还是需要点跳的,不过也不要多

[JJburst's Insane]
00:07:440 (5) - 叠在头flow好点
00:18:315 (1) - ctrl+g有意境一点
01:07:815 (1,2) - ^

[Insane]
00:39:315 (1) - 感觉ctrl+g好点
00:47:940 (4,5) - ^
00:51:690 (2,3,4) - 这里感觉跳合适点,叠一起不好
00:59:002 (2) - 这个跳大点啊 224,364 感觉差不多
Topic Starter
Mei

Sakaue Nachi wrote:

随便写写,神麻婆的图摸不动orz

[Hard]
00:08:752 (4) - 这个音比较突出,和前一个叠不太好感觉
01:04:815 (1,2,3) - 这里可以考虑三角跳什么的,叠着不太过瘾,我觉得hard还是需要点跳的,不过也不要多

[JJburst's Insane]
00:07:440 (5) - 叠在头flow好点
00:18:315 (1) - ctrl+g有意境一点
01:07:815 (1,2) - ^

[Insane]
00:39:315 (1) - 感觉ctrl+g好点感觉现在的好
00:47:940 (4,5) - ^
00:51:690 (2,3,4) - 这里感觉跳合适点,叠一起不好我感觉叠在一起跟贴合音乐
00:59:002 (2) - 这个跳大点啊 224,364 感觉差不多思考,这里是个梗啊
Frey
(」· ω·)」Mei女王!(/· ω·)/Mei女王ー (」· ω·)」Mei女王!(/· ω·)/Mei女王ー


[Easy]

整体打起来没问题,所以这里挑细节

· 00:17:565 (1) - 这里往上移到X488 y300的话,可以让1和2看起来更直,前后DS也一样了(请鞭挞我这强迫症)

· 00:18:690 (3) - 滑条尾巴上的白点,移动到x104 y308,让整个滑条稍微整齐点

· 00:16:815 (4) - 前后DS差距有0.06了,可以移动到x432 y132
· 00:31:815 (1) - 同上,可以微调下DS
· 01:05:940 (3) - 这里
· 01:25:815 (1) - 还有这里也是

[Normal]

同上,打起来完全没问题,这里只有DS上的小细节。

· 00:08:377 (2) - DS前后有点出入,可以移动到x416 y244

· 00:39:315 (4) - 移动到x264 y356

· 00:54:127 (4) - 移动到x376 y332

· 01:04:815 (1) - 移动到x236 y212

· 01:11:940 (4) - 移动到x80 y56

[Hard]

· 00:13:252 (3) - 加Whistle?

· 00:36:315 (1) - 滑条尾巴加Clap

· 00:52:065 (2) - 取消滑条开头的Clap

· 00:54:127 (6) - 滑条尾巴加Whistle

· 00:55:065 (8,9,10) - 我觉得这三个圆圈没必要叠起来,可以考虑展开像这样。
当然,8、9、10也可以换个顺序放,一样没问题。

· 01:03:315 (1) - 滑条尾巴加Clap,很明显需要

· 01:06:127 (6) - 滑条尾巴加Whistle

· 01:07:065 (8) - 滑条尾巴上的Clap略显多余,可以删掉

[JJburst's Insane]

应该没问题,继续加油!

[Insane]

· 00:04:252 (6) - 我觉得在不影响Flow的情况下,这里完全可以统一前后DS,放到x64 y272就好

· 00:12:315 (1) - 个人觉得这个Whistle蛮违和的,删?

· 01:03:502 (2) - 滑条的开头很明显需要加一个Clap

· 01:04:065 (4) - 可以加Clap

· 01:07:065 (4) - 这里滑条尾巴的Clap不明显,没必要这里自己创节奏

· 01:10:440 (5) - 同上,滑条尾巴上的Clap不明显



:) 祝武运昌隆
Topic Starter
Mei
to l4d:
除了hard的那个排列,其他都改了
Frey

Mei wrote:

to l4d:
除了hard的那个排列,其他都改了
用北酱一般的眼神盯着你。
wgjgame
为什么另一个insane 没有video?
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