senya - Shinkai yori Ai o Komete

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-Mo-

-Nya- wrote:



Hey! M4M from my above queue I would appreciate a rating after you applied my mod (In my queue)
So, let's get started~

Please note: Everything in bold I highly suggest.
Everything in red is unrankable.

General:
  1. Even though this isn’t a requirement, I still highly suggest it. Use the japanese version for your source: 艦隊これくしょん And in case you don’t want to, then you have to remove “Kantai collection” from tags since it will already be in your source. Alright.
  2. You can also add these to the tags: “Korekushon” and “Combined Fleet”. Alright.
  3. Use a background image that’s 1366 X 768. Right now, your image has a rather weird resolution. I managed to fix the resolution of your current BG. Here it is: Using a background smaller than 1366x768 is not unrankable. The original image is 1249x800 so I cropped it myself to be in 16:9. I would rather use a smaller resolution than messily upscaling the image which ruins the quality.
  4. This mapset will be better if you also use soundfiles to silence those annoying sliderslide sound. Here they are: Done.
  5. Not a fan of the yellow combo colour btw. Use a colour like soft purple or soft green instead? I picked yellow so that it matched Suzuya's (right side) eyes in the background.
Easy:
  1. 00:01:300 (1) –Rather add a finish sound on the slider’s head instead of that whistle. So remove the whistle sound and add a finish instead.
  2. 00:04:300 (1) –Rather add a finish on this slider’s head as well. So remove the whistle. The intro to this song is noticably calmer than the rest of the song, which is why I chose to use whistles. The finish sounds too sharp for it to be suitable here I feel.
  3. 00:05:800 (1,2,3,4) –Weird placement for an Easy diff. Beginners may get confused when playing it, so I rather suggest a half-circle placement:Alright.
  4. 00:07:300 (1) –Remove the whistle from the slider’s head. You have already added a finish, so why add a whistle as well? Although it's barely noticable, I think it sounds better, although I'll probably change this if I get more feedback on it.
  5. 00:11:800 (1,1) -The reaction time between the spinner and the next note look pretty short which may be unrankable since it’s too hard for beginners. I suggest removing that spinner and rather mapping that section. (Of course, if you don’t want to map that area then you can always ask a BAT if that spinner is okay there. But right now, for me, the reaction time looks too short.) Took me long enough to remap this but I did it.
  6. 00:16:300 (1) –A finish will also sound really nice here in my opinion. So rather remove that whistle and add a finish instead. I don't agree with this one.
  7. 00:19:300 (1) -^ This one works.
  8. 00:22:300 (1) -^ I don't like this one.
  9. 00:25:300 (1) -^ This one works.
    I think you get the idea now about those finishes. Try to use different hitsounds on those beats than just whistles. I added some where I felt was appropriate.
  10. 00:23:800 (2) –Rather do this to the shape. It looks nicer and symmetric in my opinion. I think the current slider compliments the first slider better, which is what I was going for.
  11. 00:53:050 (2) –Won’t this look better? Just lower that slider till it looks like the above pic. Alright.
  12. 00:56:050 (2) –Same thing here. I think this looks better: Alright.
  13. 00:59:050 (2) -^ Changed.
  14. 00:59:800 (1,2,3,4) –I don’t like this placement. Try something like this instead: I just did a kind of half circle shape there. Changed.
  15. 01:08:800 (1,2,3,4) –Improve this half-circle shape (lol) Changed it in my own way.
  16. 01:29:800 (3) –Eep! Not a nice shape at all. Maybe a wave shape will look much better. Everyone seems to hate this slider. Changed.
  17. 01:44:800 –One should always try to place a single circle or the start of a slider on an important beat like this one. To emphasize those beats. Maybe try to do this:Alright.
  18. 02:01:300 (1) –Rather place this slider somewhere here to make that half circle shape look neater. Alright.
  19. 02:05:800 (3) –Weird slider and I’m not sure if it’s really allowed in an Easy diff. But you should then rather check-in with a BAT just to double-check it. Actually, I've just grown to dislike this slider myself, so that simplifies things.
  20. 02:08:800 (1,2,3,4) –Try a different placement here, like a halfcircle pattern like in my previous suggestions. Changed.
  21. 02:41:425 (4) –Not that great placement for flow purposes. Try this instead: Changed.
  22. 02:51:550 (2) –Hm, looks untidy in a way. Try this: Copy and paste 02:50:800 (1) –then Ctrl+H and then Ctrl+G. Changed in my own way.
  23. 03:00:550 (2) – Nazi. Just try and move that red square in the middle of the slider till it’s more in the middle of the slider to improve the symmetry. Fixed.
  24. 03:02:425 (4) –Make a half-circle shape with this circle. So place it here: Alright.
  25. 03:05:800 (1) –Place this slider here to complete the flower pattern shape:I intentionally arranged it this way so that the final part is symmetrical about the centre of the map.
Normal:
  1. 00:06:925 (5) –Nazi. Just move this circle till it forms a kind of triangle shape with 00:05:800 (3,4) Alright.
    Thus somewhere here: X:164 Y:172
  2. 00:54:550 (5,1) –Make a blanket here?Seems to work, though I placed it differently to keep flow.
  3. 01:04:300 (1,2) -I think your distance here is incorrect. You used 0.9X here when you should have been using 1.0X. Yeah that's a mistake. Fixed.
  4. 01:15:550 (1) –I’d say rather remove this new combo. You didn’t add any single combos earlier in the diff.
  5. 01:39:925 (5,2) –This overlap is probably not such a big deal, but it can still be avoided. Do this:Half did this. It still overlaps but not as much. I didn't rotate all the way lest I ruin the patterns after this combo.
  6. 02:18:550 (1) –Same here. Rather remove that new combo.
  7. 03:11:050 (1) -^Done these.
Hard:
  1. 00:03:175 (2) –I don’t like this flow. Rather do this: Changed.
  2. 00:06:925 (4) –What about this rhythm instead?Seems to work.
  3. 00:08:800 (1) –Rather do this for better flow? Ctrl+H that slider and then turn it 70 degrees anti-clockwise. I kept the same flow but made it a bezier curve instead.
  4. 00:11:800 (1,2,3,4,5) –Hm, I think a half-circle shape will help with better flow and play more nicely. I decided on a hexagon instead.
  5. 00:14:800 (1) –Remove new combo here. It doesn’t make sense imo that these two circles: 00:14:050 (1,2) –are a combo on their own. I left this since I changed something up; there aren't just two notes there now.
  6. 00:16:300 (1) –Rather place this circle here: X:168 Y:160 for better flow. Alright.
  7. 00:25:300 (1) –Rather change this single circle into a slider. It follows the rhythm better in my opinion. Changed in my own way.
  8. 00:37:300 (1) –Same thing here. A slider will work better. Changed.
  9. 01:04:300 (1) –Maybe this rhythm instead: The pause here: 01:04:487 –just feels a bit awkward. Changed.
  10. 01:40:300 (1) –Slider here instead. Changed.
  11. 02:06:925 (6) –Same as previous suggestions. Rather use this rhythm here: Changed.
  12. 02:13:300 (6) –New combo here for consistency. Fixed.
  13. I see you placed a few streams in the last kiai time. I think you should try to be more consistent with your other kiai times. Maybe place a few streams in the other two kiai as well, or don’t use streams in the last kiai; rather use patterns that you used in the first two kiai’s. You used just triples in your first two, but in your last one, you mostly used streams. So maybe also just use triples in your last one, or place a few streams in the first two kiai times. Either way, I think your kiai times should just be more consistent. I made the final kiai harder since the chorus is in a higher pitch compared to the other choruses.

Sorry, but I’m not that good at modding Insanes at all (Still learning), so I’ll rather leave it alone, before I confuse you.

Overall, it’s a very nice mapset. There’s still just a few more improvements that’s needed though to make this mapset perfect.
Good Luck!~ :D
Thanks for modding, this one helped a lot :)
-[ Asuna ]-
hello m4m from your Queue~
i dont think, i have a lot time, maybe i'll leave some diff since this is 3 minutes map

Easy

  1. 00:19:300 (1) - move it 1 grid to right, to make the symmetry more better
  2. 00:54:175 (2,3) - a bit hard for easy to clicking 4 circle at once, how about makin 00:54:175 (2) - into 1/2 slider reverse or just make 00:53:800 (1,2,3) - into 1/1 reverse as you do at the beginning part, it's quite fit in the song and more fun to played cuz the variation of pattern i guess
  3. 00:57:175 (2,3) - ^
  4. 01:00:175 (2,3) - ^, and the kiai part have same rhythm in a whole, okay maybe you can keep some part with 4 circle rather than change to 1/2 slider reverse, and i'll leave other kiai since the rhythm is same
  5. 02:02:050 (2) - you can make this blanket more perfect like previous
  6. 02:36:550 (2) - move it a bit down to x:145, it's almost touching
    pretty neat diff, gj~

Normal

  1. 00:38:425 (2) - move it 1 grid down for better blanket
  2. 02:13:300 (1) - stack properly ?
  3. 02:12:925 (6,1,2) - repair the symmetry by rotate 02:14:050 (2) - with selection center by 10 degree *pict
  4. 02:37:862 (4,5,1) - this flow is too uphill, try to stack the end of this slider 02:37:862 (4) - and move 02:38:425 (5) -
    Nice diff Gj~

Hard

  1. 00:03:175 (2,3) - its more better if you change this into 1/2 slider rather than 2 circle, there is no reason to make 2 circle imo
  2. 00:17:800 (1,2) - ctrl+g this one by one, its feels more fun to play for me
  3. 00:20:706 - add note here, feels triplet is sounds nice here
  4. 00:24:737 - during the second reverse it feels good with whistle there
  5. 00:26:050 (3,4) - change to 1/1 slider and add circle at the blank space, it's feel better like this
  6. 00:36:550 (3) - like as previous sounds good with whistle in the second reverse
  7. 00:57:175 (2) - move this into x300 y112 for better blanket and better triangle shape
  8. 01:39:550 (3) - same as previous part
  9. 01:43:300 (1) - x272 y164 for better triangle shape
  10. 01:44:425 (4,1) - try to move 01:44:425 (4) - into x388 y260 to make 01:44:800 (1) - stacking w/o mess the distance
  11. 02:48:175 (3) - ctrl+g will be more fun here
  12. 02:59:800 (1,2) -change this into 1/2 slider, i don't think it's good if after little stream and keep using an circle instead an slider, anyway its work well with slider instead

    Nice Hard diff~

ok just it i guess, since your map is 3 minutes drain time, and mine is 5 diff TV size
it's fair enough for me
hope this helped~
and Good luck with your map~
crabovan
My turn for m4m.

Catharsis

00:02:800 (1,2,3,4,5) - make whistles on all notes.
00:05:800 (1,2,3,4,5) - same^.
00:00:08:800 (1,2,3,4,5) - - same^, but don't place on slider end.
00:18:550 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - claps on all notes and make volume for this part 50%.
00:24:550 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - soft whistles on all notes and 50% volume.
00:25:675 (2,3,5,6) - - you can make nice star from this. http://puu.sh/fhkXr/67b647282a.jpg
00:30:550 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - claps with 50 volume.
00:36:362 (3,4,1,2,3,4) - listen this part, there are piano, you could place soft whistles there.
00:42:550 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - claps with 50 volume.
00:44:800 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - whistles on all notes.
00:57:737 (6,7,8,9,10,11,1) - claps with 50 volume.
01:03:737 (2,3,4,5,6,7,1) - I understand what this stream blanket 01:04:675 (3), but you can move this stream to something like this, IMO much better. http://puu.sh/fhlBd/6f9c647c96.jpg
01:05:800 (1,2,3,4,5) - whistles on all notes.
01:08:800 (1,2,3,4,5) - same^.
01:11:800 (1,2,3,4,5) - same.
01:14:987 (2,3,4,1) - same.
01:33:550 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - claps on all notes and 50% volume.
About hitsounds - just check same parts as I mentioted before, too lazy to check them all.. Same for other diffs.
01:54:550 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - this 1/3 is hard to play after 1/4, I prefer this notes in sliders.
02:10:300 (1) - move third slider square to x:104 y:252 for better blanket with 02:09:175 (3).

Hard

01:29:800 (1,2,3) - make better blanket from this.

I haven't found anything more.

My mod compared to your is nothing :cry:
Topic Starter
-Mo-

-[ Asuna ]- wrote:

hello m4m from your Queue~
i dont think, i have a lot time, maybe i'll leave some diff since this is 3 minutes map

Easy

  1. 00:19:300 (1) - move it 1 grid to right, to make the symmetry more better Done.
  2. 00:54:175 (2,3) - a bit hard for easy to clicking 4 circle at once, how about makin 00:54:175 (2) - into 1/2 slider reverse or just make 00:53:800 (1,2,3) - into 1/1 reverse as you do at the beginning part, it's quite fit in the song and more fun to played cuz the variation of pattern i guess
  3. 00:57:175 (2,3) - ^
  4. 01:00:175 (2,3) - ^, and the kiai part have same rhythm in a whole, okay maybe you can keep some part with 4 circle rather than change to 1/2 slider reverse, and i'll leave other kiai since the rhythm is same I think four circles should be fine for beginners. The rhythm is fairly clear. I think the basic rhythm is fine, though I will add some more variation if I get more comments about this.
  5. 02:02:050 (2) - you can make this blanket more perfect like previous Fixed.
  6. 02:36:550 (2) - move it a bit down to x:145, it's almost touching You mean move the y-coordinate; done.
    pretty neat diff, gj~

Normal

  1. 00:38:425 (2) - move it 1 grid down for better blanket Fixed.
  2. 02:13:300 (1) - stack properly ? You mean stack with 02:11:050 (3)? Not that it really matters, but I did that anyway.
  3. 02:12:925 (6,1,2) - repair the symmetry by rotate 02:14:050 (2) - with selection center by 10 degree *pict I don't like how it tilts in your example, so I adjusted the rotations myself.
  4. 02:37:862 (4,5,1) - this flow is too uphill, try to stack the end of this slider 02:37:862 (4) - and move 02:38:425 (5) - I don't really see a problem with this.
    Nice diff Gj~

Hard

  1. 00:03:175 (2,3) - its more better if you change this into 1/2 slider rather than 2 circle, there is no reason to make 2 circle imo The vocals sung here aren't held notes, so a slider isn't necessary. Have two 1/2 sliders after eachother seems kind of bland for this difficulty in my opinion.
  2. 00:17:800 (1,2) - ctrl+g this one by one, its feels more fun to play for me Alright.
  3. 00:20:706 - add note here, feels triplet is sounds nice here I was trying to avoid overusing triples for this difficulty, and I thought it best to not have one here.
  4. 00:24:737 - during the second reverse it feels good with whistle there Seems to work.
  5. 00:26:050 (3,4) - change to 1/1 slider and add circle at the blank space, it's feel better like this I decided on a 1/2 slider instead with two circles.
  6. 00:36:550 (3) - like as previous sounds good with whistle in the second reverse Done.
  7. 00:57:175 (2) - move this into x300 y112 for better blanket and better triangle shape It seems better where it is currently for me.
  8. 01:39:550 (3) - same as previous part Done.
  9. 01:43:300 (1) - x272 y164 for better triangle shape y=165 seems to work better, but fixed.
  10. 01:44:425 (4,1) - try to move 01:44:425 (4) - into x388 y260 to make 01:44:800 (1) - stacking w/o mess the distance Done.
  11. 02:48:175 (3) - ctrl+g will be more fun here Seems to work.
  12. 02:59:800 (1,2) -change this into 1/2 slider, i don't think it's good if after little stream and keep using an circle instead an slider, anyway its work well with slider instead Alright.

    Nice Hard diff~

hope this helped~
and Good luck with your map~

crabovan wrote:

My turn for m4m.

Catharsis

00:02:800 (1,2,3,4,5) - make whistles on all notes.
00:05:800 (1,2,3,4,5) - same^.
00:00:08:800 (1,2,3,4,5) - - same^, but don't place on slider end. I don't really like this. Too many whistles kind of make it sound off.
00:18:550 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - claps on all notes and make volume for this part 50%. This is overdoing it in my opinion.
00:24:550 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - soft whistles on all notes and 50% volume. I put whistles on some of the notes as per suggestions from the previous mod.
00:25:675 (2,3,5,6) - - you can make nice star from this. http://puu.sh/fhkXr/67b647282a.jpg This works.
00:30:550 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - claps with 50 volume. As before.
00:36:362 (3,4,1,2,3,4) - listen this part, there are piano, you could place soft whistles there. Half did this as before.
00:42:550 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - claps with 50 volume. As before.
00:44:800 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - whistles on all notes. Seems to works.
00:57:737 (6,7,8,9,10,11,1) - claps with 50 volume. As before.
01:03:737 (2,3,4,5,6,7,1) - I understand what this stream blanket 01:04:675 (3), but you can move this stream to something like this, IMO much better. http://puu.sh/fhlBd/6f9c647c96.jpg Done.
01:05:800 (1,2,3,4,5) - whistles on all notes.
01:08:800 (1,2,3,4,5) - same^.
01:11:800 (1,2,3,4,5) - same.
01:14:987 (2,3,4,1) - same. I think this is overdoing it.
01:33:550 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - claps on all notes and 50% volume. As before.
About hitsounds - just check same parts as I mentioted before, too lazy to check them all.. Same for other diffs.
01:54:550 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - this 1/3 is hard to play after 1/4, I prefer this notes in sliders. The slider before it is in 1/3, not 1/4, to help with the signature jump.
02:10:300 (1) - move third slider square to x:104 y:252 for better blanket with 02:09:175 (3). Your suggestion is quite off for it to be a blanket, plus it doesn't really matter given that these two notes are quite far apart.

Hard

01:29:800 (1,2,3) - make better blanket from this. Done.

I haven't found anything more.
Thanks for modding :)
Sgord1
Hello there. M4m..

Easy
Imho in the beginning use overuse hitsound volume. Redice it ~10-15%
00:19:300 (1) - Isn't it better if you make it shorter (end here 00:20:800) and add a note 00:21:175
00:25:300 (1,2) - Looks better if use use the same slider (and it would follow the music as well)
00:32:050 (3) - seems like red point is not necessary
01:09:550 (3) - Yes, note here is fine but I think it's better if u take 3 outside (you used convex polygon patterns before this one is not)
01:37:300 (1,2) - pls no. Part of slider (2) is not visible. I'm not sure whether it rankable
02:10:300 (1,2) - move it here (168;78) for the perfect symmetry
02:31:300 (1) - isn't it better to snap end of this slider?
02:49:300 (1,2,3,4) - this square is not perfect (1 and 2 are almost overlapping each other, 3 and 4, you can see a gap between them).
02:50:050 (3,4,1) - make it in a straight line
02:58:300 (1,1) - better blanket is availible


Normal
SV is the same as in Easy diff. However AR is 5. So it's more comfortably to play easy than normal. Imo you should either reduce SV on Easy or increase it on normal
00:09:925 (5,1) - spacing.
00:14:050 (1,2) - make 2 curvier and blanket
00:15:925 (3,1) - yes, new combo put here correctly. However it would look nicer if they are in the same combo. I have no idea how to fix it
00:27:925 (5,1) - above
00:54:550 (5) - it follows lyrics. And plays well. 00:56:800 (3,4) - Here you can't see slider which follows lyrics. That's why I recommend make it more repetative with this moment 00:54:550 (5) - sounds and plays better imo. There are several moments like this.
01:13:300 (1) - Ehh.. I can't read this moment (whether it follows music or lyrics)
01:49:487 (1) - This should start here 01:49:300
02:16:300 (1) - several lines above
02:31:300 (1) - ez diff
03:06:925 (2,4) - stack looks nicer, but the problem with spacing appears

Hard
00:06:550 (3,4) - spacing
00:16:487 fill this space with smth
00:24:550 (3) - not so intuitively because you added several repeats. Some can get confused (there were less repeats on sliders on such moments as this)
00:37:675 (2,3) - Isn't it better to blanket?
00:39:550 (2,3) - they look nicer when they're parallel
00:55:675 (3,4,5) - make them in a straight line
01:42:550 (2,3) - spacing
02:07:675 (2,3) - looks better when stacked
02:11:425 (5) - spacing

Catharsis
00:12:925 (6) - Eh.. This slider doesn't follow the rhythm and has too loud hitsounds
00:36:550 (1,2,3,4) - Do you really think that it's ok to put them so far away from each other?
00:37:300 (1) - if yes I would advise to put this away at least a bit
00:40:675 (2) - spacing
00:46:862 (4,1) - spacing.
00:51:550 (1) - eh.. It is hard to follow this rhythm. Timing is good however. (It repeats several times)
01:41:800 (1,2,3,4) - - pls keep same slider direction (away from the center)
01:50:050 (1) - spacing
01:05:050 (4,5) - spacing
02:47:987 (2) - spacing
02:48:737 (5,6) - spacing

Can't find any other problems.
Good luck. Nice song btw.
Topic Starter
-Mo-

physx1 wrote:

Hello there. M4m..

Easy
Imho in the beginning use overuse hitsound volume. Redice it ~10-15% Done.
00:19:300 (1) - Isn't it better if you make it shorter (end here 00:20:800) and add a note 00:21:175 This works.
00:25:300 (1,2) - Looks better if use use the same slider (and it would follow the music as well) Alright.
00:32:050 (3) - seems like red point is not necessary I'd say it is necessary for the shape I'm using here.
01:09:550 (3) - Yes, note here is fine but I think it's better if u take 3 outside (you used convex polygon patterns before this one is not) Alright.
01:37:300 (1,2) - pls no. Part of slider (2) is not visible. I'm not sure whether it rankable I'd say it's fine. The path of the slider is clearly readable.
02:10:300 (1,2) - move it here (168;78) for the perfect symmetry They're already symmertical; moving it there would put it out of symmetry.
02:31:300 (1) - isn't it better to snap end of this slider? It's snapped to a 1/3 purple tick, since the guitar riff is in compound.
02:49:300 (1,2,3,4) - this square is not perfect (1 and 2 are almost overlapping each other, 3 and 4, you can see a gap between them). Yeah that's a mistake. Good spot.
02:50:050 (3,4,1) - make it in a straight line Alright.
02:58:300 (1,1) - better blanket is availible The blanket looks fine to me.

Normal
SV is the same as in Easy diff. However AR is 5. So it's more comfortably to play easy than normal. Imo you should either reduce SV on Easy or increase it on normal I'd say it's fine as it is.
00:09:925 (5,1) - spacing. How the heck did that pass by me.
00:14:050 (1,2) - make 2 curvier and blanket It is blanket'd, and the shapes fine.
00:15:925 (3,1) - yes, new combo put here correctly. However it would look nicer if they are in the same combo. I have no idea how to fix it It's fine how it is.
00:27:925 (5,1) - above
00:54:550 (5) - it follows lyrics. And plays well. 00:56:800 (3,4) - Here you can't see slider which follows lyrics. That's why I recommend make it more repetative with this moment 00:54:550 (5) - sounds and plays better imo. There are several moments like this. As it is now it follows the vocals just fine. The repeats follow where there are more syllables, and the 1/1 slider covers where the lyrics have less sylables. I don't think this needs changing.
01:13:300 (1) - Ehh.. I can't read this moment (whether it follows music or lyrics) Changed.
01:49:487 (1) - This should start here 01:49:300 Well I can't move it to the white tick since the slider's there. I put it on the blue tick instead.
02:16:300 (1) - several lines above Changed.
02:31:300 (1) - ez diff As before.
03:06:925 (2,4) - stack looks nicer, but the problem with spacing appears Adjusted slightly, but it seems mostly fine.

Hard
00:06:550 (3,4) - spacing Nothing wrong with this. It's a Hard difficulty, and there's a change in timing anyway.
00:16:487 fill this space with smth There's a pause in the music, so this gap is fine.
00:24:550 (3) - not so intuitively because you added several repeats. Some can get confused (there were less repeats on sliders on such moments as this) This repeater stars in the middle of the measure. The other repeater started on the third beat of the measure. It should be readable, and I see nothing wrong with this.
00:37:675 (2,3) - Isn't it better to blanket? Alright.
00:39:550 (2,3) - they look nicer when they're parallel Changed as per above mod.
00:55:675 (3,4,5) - make them in a straight line I did the opposite.
01:42:550 (2,3) - spacing This is fine; it's Hard.
02:07:675 (2,3) - looks better when stacked I don't like this really.
02:11:425 (5) - spacing As before.

Catharsis
00:12:925 (6) - Eh.. This slider doesn't follow the rhythm and has too loud hitsounds Lowered volume as per before. I'll change this if I get more comments about it.
00:36:550 (1,2,3,4) - Do you really think that it's ok to put them so far away from each other? It's playable, and I think it's suitable as the music picks up mood during this part.
00:37:300 (1) - if yes I would advise to put this away at least a bit Alright.
00:40:675 (2) - spacing I think this is fine.
00:46:862 (4,1) - spacing. Nothing really wrong with this; it is Insane.
00:51:550 (1) - eh.. It is hard to follow this rhythm. Timing is good however. (It repeats several times) It should be fine; the repeater before it is in 1/3 to help with the signature switch.
01:41:800 (1,2,3,4) - - pls keep same slider direction (away from the center) It'll just be repetetive if they did the exact same thing as before.
01:50:050 (1) - spacing
01:05:050 (4,5) - spacing
02:47:987 (2) - spacing
02:48:737 (5,6) - spacing Nothing wrong with these. Spacing is less important in Insane as long as it's readable (as these are). Switching distance snap between a circle and a slider should be fine.

Can't find any other problems.
Good luck. Nice song btw.
Thanks for modding :)
dsco
m4m

Easy
00:11:800 (3,1) - a little bit more spacing to the right between to emphasize beat space
01:12:925 (4) - possibly remove, little rhythm there, better emphasis to end of part
03:08:425 (4) - same thing
Normal
01:39:550 (4) - change to 1/2 slider to flow more, like 00:36:550 (4,5)
02:11:050 (3,4) - insert note between
02:18:550 (5) and 03:11:050 (5) - possibly change from 01:15:550 (5) for variation / mixture
02:37:862 (4) - awkward rhythm not used elsewhere
Hard
00:17:425 (4,1) - somewhat awkward slider spacing
00:34:675 (2,3) - space to emphasize change in direction or invert the curve of the slider
01:42:550 (1,2,3) - move slider farther from 1, closer to 3
01:59:050 (4,5) - strange spacing, maybe switch 4 and 5
02:41:425 (6,7,8,9) - somewhat late to introduce streams, insert earlier or change to 1/2 reverse slider
02:58:300 (1,2,3,4,5) - change to star or maybe alter spacing / pattern. awkward to read and play
Catharsis
00:02:800 (3,1,2) - change spacing (either more between 1 and 2 or less to match 3,1), awkward, have to slow down / speed up in same direction. occurs much more, personally dont like.
00:03:925 (6) - possibly change spacing, looks like a continuation of jump, but AR is high so might not matter
00:17:050 (3,4,1,2) - too big of jumps
00:36:550 (1,2,3,4) - too big of jumps compared to others, increase spacing previous in the map?
00:46:112 (3,1) - space more to emphasis rhythm change
00:51:550 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - hard to sightread the rhythm, possibly use sliders first time or less spacing?
01:49:112 (3,1) - space more to emphasis rhythm change (possibly not needed because reoccurring rhythm)
02:22:862 (3,4,5) - awkward to play without previously knowing rhythm

my local offset needed to be-3 across each difficulty, offset might be a tad high? probably ok.
lots of kiai time.

i like it :) good map.
Topic Starter
-Mo-

reminixe wrote:

m4m

Easy
00:11:800 (3,1) - a little bit more spacing to the right between to emphasize beat space Not much I can do here without messing with consistency, but I did what I could.
01:12:925 (4) - possibly remove, little rhythm there, better emphasis to end of part
03:08:425 (4) - same thing I think these are fine. They cover the upbeat percussion.
Normal
01:39:550 (4) - change to 1/2 slider to flow more, like 00:36:550 (4,5) The piano isn't really distinct here, which is why I went again having the 1/2 slider combo.
02:11:050 (3,4) - insert note between I feel like that would make things a little too difficult for beginner players to play.
02:18:550 (5) and 03:11:050 (5) - possibly change from 01:15:550 (5) for variation / mixture I would only be using a similar sort of shape, so I might aswell keep it consistent, though I will change this if I get more comments about it.
02:37:862 (4) - awkward rhythm not used elsewhere Changed.
Hard
00:17:425 (4,1) - somewhat awkward slider spacing Intended to emphasize the downbeat, though I may change this.
00:34:675 (2,3) - space to emphasize change in direction or invert the curve of the slider Moved slightly.
01:42:550 (1,2,3) - move slider farther from 1, closer to 3 Changed in my own way.
01:59:050 (4,5) - strange spacing, maybe switch 4 and 5 That would just create the same problem in a different place (5-6). The spacing should be fine for a Hard, and this way is better for the flow.
02:41:425 (6,7,8,9) - somewhat late to introduce streams, insert earlier or change to 1/2 reverse slider I introduced streams since this is coming up to the final kiai of the song. I may change this though with more feedback.
02:58:300 (1,2,3,4,5) - change to star or maybe alter spacing / pattern. awkward to read and play Alright.
Catharsis
00:02:800 (3,1,2) - change spacing (either more between 1 and 2 or less to match 3,1), awkward, have to slow down / speed up in same direction. occurs much more, personally dont like. Your timestamp doesn't indicate the correct moment, but changed.
00:03:925 (6) - possibly change spacing, looks like a continuation of jump, but AR is high so might not matter This should be fine
00:17:050 (3,4,1,2) - too big of jumps I think these are fine; they are sliders, and it is readable.
00:36:550 (1,2,3,4) - too big of jumps compared to others, increase spacing previous in the map? Reduced, since more people have commeted on this.
00:46:112 (3,1) - space more to emphasis rhythm change These are spaced fine; they're closer than the previous combo since the timing is quicker.
00:51:550 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - hard to sightread the rhythm, possibly use sliders first time or less spacing? There is a 1/3 slider just before this part. Reducing the spacing wouldn't help since there was a 1/4 stream just before this, and would cause confusion.
01:49:112 (3,1) - space more to emphasis rhythm change (possibly not needed because reoccurring rhythm) Why space these further apart? As per before, the previous combo has a larger timing, whilst these have a smaller timing.
02:22:862 (3,4,5) - awkward to play without previously knowing rhythm The jump should indicate how the timing should go, although I may change this.

my local offset needed to be-3 across each difficulty, offset might be a tad high? probably ok. I'll look into this.
lots of kiai time. They make sense, and there's not much to do about reducing them.

i like it :) good map.
Thanks for modding :)
Muchaszewski
Hi.
I have looked at Catharsis
00:06:925 (6) - Shorten this one to bounce 2 times less, (00:07:206 that how long it should be)
Next one is ok because there is more instruments involved and it feels ok.
00:46:300 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - I dont like this part end every time where you paste it. For me here should be somehing else. But i dont have realy idea what ;/
It maybe have too long gap, try to change distance snap to 1.3 or 1. But dont know
00:52:487 (2) - Delete, it can make you lose the rythm (End every time you paste this pattern ofc)
02:38:800 (1,2) - I would add finish at the end of both
02:22:300 (1,2,3,4,5) - Fallowing main sound is NOT always the best idea, i would use here backgrount rythm for it

I found one reversed slider, but i pressed something and i lost that place ;/
Topic Starter
-Mo-

Muchaszewski wrote:

Hi.
I have looked at Catharsis
00:06:925 (6) - Shorten this one to bounce 2 times less, (00:07:206 that how long it should be) Shortening this means I would have to cover the downbeat with a circle, which I would rather not do since hitting a circle after a 1/8 repeater isn't very nice, and would not be very visible.
Next one is ok because there is more instruments involved and it feels ok.
00:46:300 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - I dont like this part end every time where you paste it. For me here should be somehing else. But i dont have realy idea what ;/
It maybe have too long gap, try to change distance snap to 1.3 or 1. But dont know Hm. It should be ifne for now, though I can change it up if more people comment on this.
00:52:487 (2) - Delete, it can make you lose the rythm (End every time you paste this pattern ofc) You're right about the rhythm, but having it blank isn't appropriate, so I replaced it with a slider.
02:38:800 (1,2) - I would add finish at the end of both It doesn't sound right to me in my opinion.
02:22:300 (1,2,3,4,5) - Fallowing main sound is NOT always the best idea, i would use here backgrount rythm for it I replaced 4 with a slider as per a previous mod. I would rather not ignore the main melody of this section in Insane, but I understand why you're telling me this.

I found one reversed slider, but i pressed something and i lost that place ;/
Thanks for modding :)
gracefu
General:
No comment...

Catharsis:

Triplets
There are a lot of triplets and streams, but since the song is actually relatively calm, usually the triplets aren't in the music and it feels like I'm spamming circles occasionally. The streams are usually fine because there's a lot of soft buildup drum rolls (don't know which drum...)

Didn't like:
00:32:237 - Here you have a triplet, but since the electric guitar is actually on 00:32:050 - it feels awkward to play (stressing an unstressed beat sucks)
01:35:425 - same as above
00:52:862 - I would personally use this rhythm
The previous rhythm puts the start of the triplet on an unstressed note, but emphasizes the slider, so all is good, but I feel like this way is better.

Liked:
00:20:800 - The triplets here only emphasize the kick, so there's no problem with these and they play reasonably naturally (it might be better if you emphasized the electric guitar, but that's personal preference)

Soft areas
When there aren't triplets and streams, then your slider rhythm could be improved in the soft areas.

Didn't like:
00:15:362 - Here senya holds a note, but you decided to place a lot of sliders and circles here, so what rhythm do you follow? It's easy to play, so readabilty isn't an issue, but it felt a little weird, probably because I have no idea what instrument you're following. I suggest following the electric guitar, but if you do that then the stresses change. There'd be a stress on 2 and 5, which means I would go with circle slider circle circle slider circle, so the sliders start on 2 and 5.
00:26:612 - Here it seems like you copy pasted the rhythm. Again, this makes it easy to play but feels awkward when the 6 is completely unstressed because of the vocal on 5. I would change the 5-6 to a slider.

Liked:
02:54:550 - The circle circle slider pattern fit this part really well.

Suggestions
These are purely suggestions:
00:40:862 - Try this rhythm? The 3/4 slider is to partition the current and the next combo because that has a different feel despite being the same rhythm. I notice you don't have any of these 1/4 slider slider gaps, so maybe you hate them :P
01:41:331 - I didn't notice this on the first play through, but here there's a piano part you could map if you wanted by adding a circle here (between 3 and 4)

Since Hard and below have a simpler rhythm, I didn't find any rhythm related things to say.

I think your placement and flow is spot on. Also your 1/3 parts are very well mapped (it's just hard so I miss) I like the song :P vgj!
Topic Starter
-Mo-

gracefu wrote:

General:
Catharsis:
Triplets
There are a lot of triplets and streams, but since the song is actually relatively calm, usually the triplets aren't in the music and it feels like I'm spamming circles occasionally. The streams are usually fine because there's a lot of soft buildup drum rolls (don't know which drum...) Hm, I seem to feel that this song isn't as calm as some people are making out to be.
Didn't like:
00:32:237 - Here you have a triplet, but since the electric guitar is actually on 00:32:050 - it feels awkward to play (stressing an unstressed beat sucks) Changed.
01:35:425 - same as above Changed.
00:52:862 - I would personally use this rhythm. The previous rhythm puts the start of the triplet on an unstressed note, but emphasizes the slider, so all is good, but I feel like this way is better. I decided no for this. The slider I have currently covers the vocals much better than the triple you are proposing I think.

Liked:
00:20:800 - The triplets here only emphasize the kick, so there's no problem with these and they play reasonably naturally (it might be better if you emphasized the electric guitar, but that's personal preference) Thanks. I'd rather stick to this.

Soft areas
When there aren't triplets and streams, then your slider rhythm could be improved in the soft areas.

Didn't like:
00:15:362 - Here senya holds a note, but you decided to place a lot of sliders and circles here, so what rhythm do you follow? It's easy to play, so readabilty isn't an issue, but it felt a little weird, probably because I have no idea what instrument you're following. I suggest following the electric guitar, but if you do that then the stresses change. There'd be a stress on 2 and 5, which means I would go with circle slider circle circle slider circle, so the sliders start on 2 and 5. I actually went for the piano here, with the slider at the start of the combo for the held vocals. Since it's playable, I'll leave this alone.
00:26:612 - Here it seems like you copy pasted the rhythm. Again, this makes it easy to play but feels awkward when the 6 is completely unstressed because of the vocal on 5. I would change the 5-6 to a slider. As above.

Liked:
02:54:550 - The circle circle slider pattern fit this part really well.

Suggestions
These are purely suggestions:
00:40:862 - Try this rhythm? The 3/4 slider is to partition the current and the next combo because that has a different feel despite being the same rhythm. I notice you don't have any of these 1/4 slider slider gaps, so maybe you hate them :PNah, I don't really hate them, I just didn't find anywhere appropriate to have them. Although this combo could do with one on the first slider. I did things my own way here.
01:41:331 - I didn't notice this on the first play through, but here there's a piano part you could map if you wanted by adding a circle here (between 3 and 4) This works.

Since Hard and below have a simpler rhythm, I didn't find any rhythm related things to say.

I think your placement and flow is spot on. Also your 1/3 parts are very well mapped (it's just hard so I miss) I like the song :P vgj!
Thanks for modding :)
Mod feedback: Please do highlight which notes you are referring to in your timestamps instead of just putting a timestamp in the middle of a combo, since it can be confusing what notes you are referring to. i.e.:
00:14:800 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Is better than
00:15:362 - This
Yohanes
Hi! come from your m4m queue p/3889160#p3889160
Super short mod, sorry for this
:P

[Catharsis]
- 00:07:487 - Add notes here
- 00:09:550 - How about change it into stream like this?
- 00:44:050 (2) - How about this?
- 02:34:300 - Insert break time here
- 02:41:987 - Add notes here
- 02:47:800 (1,2) - Move it a little bit up (maybe to 372|296)? This kinda hard to hit
- 03:04:300 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - This also hard to hit, change it into different pattern maybe?

[Hard]
- AR7.5 or AR8 maybe? AR7 is too low


I can't find anything wrong on Normal and Easy diff
Goodluck with your mapset.. :D
Amazing song, amazing map
Osu need more senya
Topic Starter
-Mo-

yaldo_27 wrote:

Hi! come from your m4m queue p/3889160#p3889160
Super short mod, sorry for this
:P

[Catharsis]
- 00:07:487 - Add notes here I've decided against this since the timing doesn't seem suitable after a 1/8 slider, and it doesn't seem to cover anything anyway.
- 00:09:550 - How about change it into stream like this? I can't say I like this, and I prefer the intro to the song to be less intense.
- 00:44:050 (2) - How about this? The aim of the current formation was to have the flow move downwards, so I'd rather keep it as it is.
- 02:34:300 - Insert break time here Alright.
- 02:41:987 - Add notes here As before.
- 02:47:800 (1,2) - Move it a little bit up (maybe to 372|296)? This kinda hard to hit
- 03:04:300 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - This also hard to hit, change it into different pattern maybe? "Hard to hit" doesn't seem like a good enough reason to change these in my opinion. It seems more like a player problem than a map problem (no offense).

[Hard]
- AR7.5 or AR8 maybe? AR7 is too low Alright

I can't find anything wrong on Normal and Easy diff
Goodluck with your mapset.. :D
Amazing song, amazing map
Osu need more senya
Thanks for modding :)
Euny


  • Easy

  1. it looks fine to me xD
  • Normal

  1. 00:24:925 (5,1) - i know it's fit for music. i recommend, just one slider.
  2. 01:39:925 (5) - how about move first slider's point to x75y163 for better overlap?
  3. 01:47:800 (3) - add finish at the slider's reverse arrow? it makes better tempo for your map.
  4. 02:36:550 (2,4) - you can avoid this overlap. try this?(if u want)
  • Hard

  1. 00:44:050 (2) - rotate this slider with -8 degrees and place this slider to x249y130 for better flow and avoid stack?
  2. 02:26:237 (3) - ctrl H for better flow?
  3. 02:55:300 (1,2) - fix blanket(little bit!)
  • Catharsis

  1. it looks fine to me too! and i can't mod insane well haha sorry<3


your sets are almost perfect!
GL<3
Ntasuto
Hello, coming from your M4M Q ~

General: Everything looks clear.

Easy
General:
1. Star diff is 1.57, osu ranking criteria state that 1.5 is the limit for easy.

00:18:550 (5,1) - slider(5) is not perfectly aligned with slider(1) head and tail , you can see it using a helping slider : http://puu.sh/g3DDT/62be2651f5.jpg
Fix it by rotating slider(1) a little bit.
00:22:300 (1,2) - fix blanket. this is not perfect: http://puu.sh/g3DMm/ae4bc722e3.jpg there is a tiny space :P
00:25:300 (1,2) - not identical. use copy paste
00:33:550 (4) - hmm not sure about the combo here. i would add a NC here and remove the NC at 00:34:300 (1)
00:40:300 (1,3) - fix blanket
00:44:800 (3,4) - the spacing between those two are not identical to the previous ones.00:43:300 (1,2,3) , talking about this spacing: http://puu.sh/g3E8a/1920450fda.jpg
00:52:300 (1,2) - mm the mirror here is off by 2 ° : http://puu.sh/g3EmT/8506a19238.jpg try fixing it. xD
00:58:300 (1,2) - same here. its off by a very tiny bit, the sliders seem to not be identical.
01:31:300 (1) - remove NC > 01:31:675 (2) - NC
01:34:300 (1) - just a congratz for managing to make it perfect , most people fail :)
01:36:550 (3) - NC > remove NC
01:37:300 (2,3) - blanket can be better. too close to (3) head.
02:38:800 (1,2,3) - slider (3) is not identical to slider (1) and (2) , you could rotate it by 1° anti-clockwise but it would be still slightly off. just copy paste one of the other sliders > rotate by 120° then make it a return slider and place it back
03:07:300 (1,2,3,4) - Not perfectly mirrored. Disable "grid snap" to fix it

Normal
General: -

00:16:300 (1) - remove NC >00:16:675 (2) - NC
00:18:925 (4) - NC > 00:19:675 (1) - remove NC > 00:21:550 (5) - NC > 00:22:300 (1) - remove NC
00:28:300 (1) - remove NC > 00:28:675 (2) - NC
00:30:925 (5) - NC > 00:31:674 (1) - remove NC > 00:33:550 (4) - NC
00:32:050 (2,3) - fix blanket
00:37:300 (1,2) - ^
00:54:550 (5,1) - ^
01:29:800 (3,4) - ^
01:31:300 (1) - remove NC > 01:31:675 (1) - NC > 01:33:925 (4) - NC > 01:34:675 (1) - remove NC > 01:36:550 (4) - NC > 01:37:300 (1) - remove NC
01:40:300 (1,2) - fix blanket
02:05:800 (3,4) - ^

Hard
General: -

00:16:300 (1) - remove NC > 00:16:675 (2) - NC
00:21:550 (6) - NC ( not sure about this :/
00:22:300 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - not perfectly mirrored. probably coz they are not aligned perfectly. use a helping slider to fix it
00:28:300 (1) - remove NC > 00:28:675 (2) - NC
00:33:550 (6) - NC , same as above not sure :/
00:48:550 (2) - NC
01:14:425 (4,1) - fix blanket
01:31:300 (1) - remove NC > 01:31:675 (6) - NC
01:43:300 (1) - the flow would be better here if this slider was curved the other way
01:46:300 (1,2,1,2) - Not perfectly flip mirrored, not sure if you tried to though.
01:49:300 (1,2,3,4) - try improving the alignment here to make them equally spaced.Flip 2 of the sliders from one side to another and check when they touch , so you understand what i mean.
01:51:550 (2) - NC
02:14:612 (3,1,2) - move these a bit to the left so the flow on 02:14:800 (1,2,3) - gets a bit better.
02:30:550 (2) - NC
02:42:925 (5,6) - these should be more on the left side of 02:42:550 (4) - so they flow better and have a smoother transition to 02:43:300 (1)
02:48:550 (4,5,6) - hmm using ctrl+G on 02:48:550 (4,5) would improve the flow by a lot here but it would create a 3.00ds jump , i cant get any way around your pattern for this. i guess keep it as it is, but if you think of something to improve the flow pls try. In case you leave it as it is align these perfectly. 02:48:175 (3,4,5) - they are not on the same X axis and also 02:47:800 (1,2,6) - these are not identically spaced. since you went for a mirror. keep the note's distance and location identical to slider(6) head and tail ;)

Something extra:
01:15:550 (5) - 02:18:550 (5) - 03:11:050 (5) - copy paste power. maybe think of something creating and shape each one differently.

Catharsis
General:-

00:01:300 (1,2) - these sound identical so having them mirrored would be better .
00:04:300 (1,2) - ^ i guess these also
00:07:300 - the beat here is a strong one and it needs a hit. I suggest shorten this 00:06:925 (6) - so its end @ 00:07:206 and put a slider @ 00:07:300 similar to 00:07:675 (1) . ( don't make it a jump though)
00:16:206 (7) - overmap. Remove it, there is no beat here
00:18:643 (4,6) - overmap. ^
00:21:081 (3) - ^
00:24:081 (3) - ^
00:24:643 (2) - ^
Well too many notes that don't have a beat to support them. Please check the map yourself and make sure you remove them. :)
00:21:175 (4) - ctrl+g for better flow and don't forget to stack on the new slider head.
00:28:300 (1) - remove NC > 00:28:675 (2) - NC
00:34:300 (1,2,3,4) - these looks that they just dropped randomly on the map, try placing them in a more appealing way
00:38:800 (1) - remove NC > 00:39:175 (2) - NC
01:31:300 (1) - remove NC > 01:31:675 (2) - NC
01:41:800 (1) - remove NC > 01:42:175 (2) - NC
There are many identical combo color patterns on the map that i suggest you change. Use my above suggestions as an example
02:41:800 - same as 00:07:300 -
02:47:050 (1,2,3,4) - since the volume here gets lower, in order to give some visual eff to the sound maybe slowly decrease their spacing. 1.00 > 0.80>0.60

That's from me. hope i helped.
GJ and gl with ranking your map.
Cya~
Topic Starter
-Mo-

Euny wrote:

  • Normal

  1. 00:24:925 (5,1) - i know it's fit for music. i recommend, just one slider. Alright.
  2. 01:39:925 (5) - how about move first slider's point to x75y163 for better overlap? Alright.
  3. 01:47:800 (3) - add finish at the slider's reverse arrow? it makes better tempo for your map. I used a whistle instead.
  4. 02:36:550 (2,4) - you can avoid this overlap. try this?(if u want)Alright.
  • Hard

  1. 00:44:050 (2) - rotate this slider with -8 degrees and place this slider to x249y130 for better flow and avoid stack? I can't see any stacks or anything wrong with its current position. Did you accidently nudge it?
  2. 02:26:237 (3) - ctrl H for better flow? Alright.
  3. 02:55:300 (1,2) - fix blanket(little bit!)Done what I can.


your sets are almost perfect!
GL<3

Ntasuto wrote:

Hello, coming from your M4M Q ~

General: Everything looks clear.

Easy
General:
1. Star diff is 1.57, osu ranking criteria state that 1.5 is the limit for easy. The stars don't agree with the difficulty, yes, but there's not much I can do about this. I don't believe this is unrankable.

00:18:550 (5,1) - slider(5) is not perfectly aligned with slider(1) head and tail , you can see it using a helping slider : http://puu.sh/g3DDT/62be2651f5.jpg
Fix it by rotating slider(1) a little bit. Fixed.
00:22:300 (1,2) - fix blanket. this is not perfect: http://puu.sh/g3DMm/ae4bc722e3.jpg there is a tiny space :PDone what I can.
00:25:300 (1,2) - not identical. use copy paste Fixed.
00:33:550 (4) - hmm not sure about the combo here. i would add a NC here and remove the NC at 00:34:300 (1) Alright.
00:40:300 (1,3) - fix blanket Did what I can.
00:44:800 (3,4) - the spacing between those two are not identical to the previous ones.00:43:300 (1,2,3) , talking about this spacing: http://puu.sh/g3E8a/1920450fda.jpg Fixed.
00:52:300 (1,2) - mm the mirror here is off by 2 ° : http://puu.sh/g3EmT/8506a19238.jpg try fixing it. xD So it is. Fixed.
00:58:300 (1,2) - same here. its off by a very tiny bit, the sliders seem to not be identical. Fixed.
01:31:300 (1) - remove NC > 01:31:675 (2) - NC I'd rather keep the NCs on downbeats. I understand why you're asking me to do this, but having a new combo on an upbeat, even if it's the start of the vocals, doesn't seem right to me.
01:34:300 (1) - just a congratz for managing to make it perfect , most people fail :)Thanks :P
01:36:550 (3) - NC > remove NC Alright.
01:37:300 (2,3) - blanket can be better. too close to (3) head. Done what I can.
02:38:800 (1,2,3) - slider (3) is not identical to slider (1) and (2) , you could rotate it by 1° anti-clockwise but it would be still slightly off. just copy paste one of the other sliders > rotate by 120° then make it a return slider and place it back Fixed.
03:07:300 (1,2,3,4) - Not perfectly mirrored. Disable "grid snap" to fix it Fixed.

Normal
General: -

00:16:300 (1) - remove NC >00:16:675 (2) - NC Downbeat NCs
00:18:925 (4) - NC > 00:19:675 (1) - remove NC > 00:21:550 (5) - NC > 00:22:300 (1) - remove NC Done, Done, Not done, Done
00:28:300 (1) - remove NC > 00:28:675 (2) - NC Downbeat NCs
00:30:925 (5) - NC > 00:31:674 (1) - remove NC > 00:33:550 (4) - NC Done, Done, Not done
00:32:050 (2,3) - fix blanket
00:37:300 (1,2) - ^
00:54:550 (5,1) - ^
01:29:800 (3,4) - ^ Fixed.
01:31:300 (1) - remove NC > 01:31:675 (1) - NC > 01:33:925 (4) - NC > 01:34:675 (1) - remove NC > 01:36:550 (4) - NC > 01:37:300 (1) - remove NC Not done, not done, done, done, not done, not done
01:40:300 (1,2) - fix blanket
02:05:800 (3,4) - ^ Fixed.

Hard
General: -

00:16:300 (1) - remove NC > 00:16:675 (2) - NC This one works because of the gap.
00:21:550 (6) - NC ( not sure about this :/ I had this as a NC before, and have been told to change it.
00:22:300 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - not perfectly mirrored. probably coz they are not aligned perfectly. use a helping slider to fix it Fixed.
00:28:300 (1) - remove NC > 00:28:675 (2) - NC Done.
00:33:550 (6) - NC , same as above not sure :/ As before.
00:48:550 (2) - NC This seems a bit unecessary.
01:14:425 (4,1) - fix blanket Fixed.
01:31:300 (1) - remove NC > 01:31:675 (6) - NC Done.
01:43:300 (1) - the flow would be better here if this slider was curved the other way Agreed; went and flipped the entire thing.
01:46:300 (1,2,1,2) - Not perfectly flip mirrored, not sure if you tried to though. I rotated rather than flipped, though it should have the same result. I moved things as per the above mod anyway.
01:49:300 (1,2,3,4) - try improving the alignment here to make them equally spaced.Flip 2 of the sliders from one side to another and check when they touch , so you understand what i mean. I just moved them down until the spacing was consistent.
01:51:550 (2) - NC As before.
02:14:612 (3,1,2) - move these a bit to the left so the flow on 02:14:800 (1,2,3) - gets a bit better. I went and moved some other stuff around too.
02:30:550 (2) - NC As before.
02:42:925 (5,6) - these should be more on the left side of 02:42:550 (4) - so they flow better and have a smoother transition to 02:43:300 (1) Honestly not sure why these are like this. Changed.
02:48:550 (4,5,6) - hmm using ctrl+G on 02:48:550 (4,5) would improve the flow by a lot here but it would create a 3.00ds jump , i cant get any way around your pattern for this. i guess keep it as it is, but if you think of something to improve the flow pls try. In case you leave it as it is align these perfectly. 02:48:175 (3,4,5) - they are not on the same X axis and also 02:47:800 (1,2,6) - these are not identically spaced. since you went for a mirror. keep the note's distance and location identical to slider(6) head and tail ;)I wanted to keep the anti-flow jumps; there was nothing wrong with them. I went and aligned things better as you suggested.

Something extra:
01:15:550 (5) - 02:18:550 (5) - 03:11:050 (5) - copy paste power. maybe think of something creating and shape each one differently. People seem to hate the consistency. I prefer it, but since you're not the first to comment on this, I've changed it up.

Catharsis
General:-

00:01:300 (1,2) - these sound identical so having them mirrored would be better . I prefer this sort of offset formation for the intro; I don't think mirroring these is important.
00:04:300 (1,2) - ^ i guess these also Not really important; these are fine.
00:07:300 - the beat here is a strong one and it needs a hit. I suggest shorten this 00:06:925 (6) - so its end @ 00:07:206 and put a slider @ 00:07:300 similar to 00:07:675 (1) . ( don't make it a jump though) You're not the first to comment on this, so I went and changed it.
00:16:206 (7) - overmap. Remove it, there is no beat here Alright.
00:18:643 (4,6) - overmap. ^ There's a drum roll that starts on the downbeat, this is fine.
00:21:081 (3) - ^ This one seems fine for the guitar.
00:24:081 (3) - ^ This one works with the percussion since it's on a red-offbeat polarity. It's also more player preperation for the incoming stream, which...
00:24:643 (2) - ^ ...is also fine to me since it mathes the piano.
Well too many notes that don't have a beat to support them. Please check the map yourself and make sure you remove them. :)
00:21:175 (4) - ctrl+g for better flow and don't forget to stack on the new slider head. I was going for a bit of anti-flow here for the triple
00:28:300 (1) - remove NC > 00:28:675 (2) - NC Downbeat NCs
00:34:300 (1,2,3,4) - these looks that they just dropped randomly on the map, try placing them in a more appealing way Changed, since you're not the first to comment on this.
00:38:800 (1) - remove NC > 00:39:175 (2) - NC
01:31:300 (1) - remove NC > 01:31:675 (2) - NC
01:41:800 (1) - remove NC > 01:42:175 (2) - NC Downbeat NCs
There are many identical combo color patterns on the map that i suggest you change. Use my above suggestions as an example
02:41:800 - same as 00:07:300 - Changed.
02:47:050 (1,2,3,4) - since the volume here gets lower, in order to give some visual eff to the sound maybe slowly decrease their spacing. 1.00 > 0.80>0.60 Since these are on red tick timing, I think that would cause more confusion in the reading, and is not worth it for the effect.

That's from me. hope i helped.
GJ and gl with ranking your map.
Cya~
Thanks for modding :)
Bakuenjin
First of all:

All your diffs are nearly 99% perfect and because of this, all the things I will mention in the texts below are only small things I would call cosmetics. So till now you have done an extremly great job and I can't wait to play it as a ranked map! :)

00:11:800 (3) - Maybe rotate it vertically because in my opinion it has a better flow. Like this: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2821822

00:19:300 (1) - You are always very creative with long sliders ( 00:14:800 (3) - or 00:22:300 (1,2) - ), why only a 'boring' semicircle?

00:38:050 (3) - The ending of this slider looks a bit strange, maybe rearrange it a little bit.

02:59:800 (1,2) - Try to use smooth sliders here because before and after these two, the sliders are smooth.

Spacing, Velocity, Difficulty etc. is fine. (will only write this once, because it fits for all your diffs)
01:47:800 (3) - This slider looks a bit boring. I know your intention of using the beginning of 01:47:050 (2) - and make the end longer but maybe try to make a slider like this (it is in your Easy diff): 03:05:800 (1) -

03:08:800 (1) - I would recomment to make the slider different. 03:05:800 (1) - has no hearable beat and 03:08:800 (1) - has on in the middle of the Slider. Don't know how to explain this, just ask me InGame, if you don't understand what I mean :o
00:28:675 (1,2,3) - This is a bit too monotonous, try something like this: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2822166

01:15:550 (5) - I know you are trying to visualize her voice with this slider, but the curved half looks a bit odd. Maybe rearrange it a bit. 02:18:550 (5) - This one looks better but honestly, I don't know why :x

02:56:050 (3) - Maybe make this slider like 02:50:050 (4) -
00:35:800 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - or 01:38:800 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - I just have to mention that this parts are so extremly awesome!!

00:51:550 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - and 01:54:550 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - Maybe the song itself uses 1/3 but I woudn't recomment using a stream there. It feels so unnatural to play this part that it looses all the flow. Use another slider instead.

You are really a great mapper with alot of skill and potential. I think even modding your map helped me become better in mapping since your style is really great and gave me alot of inspiration (don't worry, I will not copy it!!).
And yes, I really hope this mod will help at least a bit. If anything is unclear or you feel offended by something I wrote please just write me InGame and we can solve it. I don't want to cause any trouble!

Good luck! :)
Topic Starter
-Mo-

Bakuenjin wrote:

First of all:

All your diffs are nearly 99% perfect and because of this, all the things I will mention in the texts below are only small things I would call cosmetics. So till now you have done an extremly great job and I can't wait to play it as a ranked map! :)

Easy
00:11:800 (3) - Maybe rotate it vertically because in my opinion it has a better flow. Like this: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2821822 Not too bad of an idea, though it doesn't seem to work for what I want. I needed flow into the combo straight afterwards, and having this symmetrical formation seemed best.

00:19:300 (1) - You are always very creative with long sliders ( 00:14:800 (3) - or 00:22:300 (1,2) - ), why only a 'boring' semicircle? Yeah I understand why you'd be dissapointed at this. It wouldn't be worth it to change it now though, since I would have to rearrange all of the adjacent notes, and it's not completely boring; slider 5 just before it complements it quite snuggly. Not too much of an issue, but something I could improve next time for sure.

00:38:050 (3) - The ending of this slider looks a bit strange, maybe rearrange it a little bit. Changed.

02:59:800 (1,2) - Try to use smooth sliders here because before and after these two, the sliders are smooth. Changed.

Spacing, Velocity, Difficulty etc. is fine. (will only write this once, because it fits for all your diffs)

Normal01:47:800 (3) - This slider looks a bit boring. I know your intention of using the beginning of 01:47:050 (2) - and make the end longer but maybe try to make a slider like this (it is in your Easy diff): 03:05:800 (1) - That was what I had originally and was asked to change it. Instead of reverting, I added another slider point.

03:08:800 (1) - I would recomment to make the slider different. 03:05:800 (1) - has no hearable beat and 03:08:800 (1) - has on in the middle of the Slider. Don't know how to explain this, just ask me InGame, if you don't understand what I mean :oI think I understand what you mean. It should be fine, nothing really major.

Hard
00:28:675 (1,2,3) - This is a bit too monotonous, try something like this: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2822166 I like this.

01:15:550 (5) - I know you are trying to visualize her voice with this slider, but the curved half looks a bit odd. Maybe rearrange it a bit. Everyone hates this slider, haha. I tried changing it.

02:56:050 (3) - Maybe make this slider like 02:50:050 (4) - I tried it; I can't say I like it too much compared to what it is now.

Catharsis
00:35:800 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - or 01:38:800 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - I just have to mention that this parts are so extremly awesome!! Thanks :)

00:51:550 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - and 01:54:550 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - Maybe the song itself uses 1/3 but I woudn't recomment using a stream there. It feels so unnatural to play this part that it looses all the flow. Use another slider instead. I understand what you mean, but I feel that what it is currently is most natural for this. I'm reluctant to changing this.

Good luck! :)
Thank you for modding :)
EscapeReality
16:50 EscapeReality: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2846563
16:50 EscapeReality: testplay
16:51 EscapeReality: gave up on fc
16:51 EscapeReality: hard map for 4.37 :o
16:51 -Mo-: Hm
16:51 -Mo-: So I've been told
16:52 -Mo-: Anything wrong with it?
16:52 EscapeReality: the short sliders were especially problematic i thought, wouldn't suggest cutting them
16:52 EscapeReality: but every time i had to focus very particularly, kinda detracted from the otherwise smoothness of the map
16:52 EscapeReality: another thing
16:52 EscapeReality: the suddenly slowed down sliders
16:52 EscapeReality: uhh
16:53 EscapeReality: streams i mean
16:53 EscapeReality: were kind of sudden
16:53 -Mo-: Slowed down?
16:53 EscapeReality: otherwise liked the map, nice hitsounds, streams felt clean
16:53 -Mo-: So they're not spaced enough?
16:53 EscapeReality: no they just suddenly changed bpm
16:53 -Mo-: Oh
16:53 -Mo-: The 1/3 part
16:53 EscapeReality: i know they're intentional
16:53 EscapeReality: yeah
16:54 -Mo-: Hm
16:54 EscapeReality: but it's a nasty surprise for the reader
16:54 EscapeReality: i might suggest sliders instead
16:54 -Mo-: Well you're not the first person to comment on that
16:54 EscapeReality: 00:51:550 (1,2,3,1,2,3) -
16:54 -Mo-: I like it how it is, but I guess readability is an issue if so many people want me to change it
16:54 EscapeReality: you could use two reverse sliders instead
16:55 EscapeReality: yeah it fits the music
16:55 EscapeReality: just not nice for the reader
16:55 -Mo-: I don't like the idea of repeaters
16:55 -Mo-: I'll figure something out
16:56 *EscapeReality is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/422111 V.K - mirror night [Insane]]
16:56 EscapeReality: in this map
16:56 EscapeReality: 02:08:922 (1) -
16:56 EscapeReality: he does something like this where it changes to 1/3
16:56 EscapeReality: that's what i was thinking about
16:57 -Mo-: Sec, net being slow
17:00 EscapeReality: 01:39:550 (1,2,3,4) - sudden diff jump
17:01 -Mo-: The sliders themselves are fine, I might reduce the spacing
17:01 EscapeReality: yeah i meant the spacing is intense there
17:02 -Mo-: Also I was thinking of doing something like
17:02 *-Mo- is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/210078 Tamura Yukari feat. motsu from m.o.v.e - You & Me [Insane]]
17:02 -Mo-: 03:03:604 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) -
17:03 EscapeReality: ahh
17:04 EscapeReality: yes that could work'
17:04 EscapeReality: i would still recommend the reverse sliders
17:05 EscapeReality: since that woudl still require the player to tap in 1/3
17:06 -Mo-: I'll look into it
17:06 -Mo-: In my opinon
17:06 -Mo-: That part of that song is pretty fun to play
17:06 EscapeReality: ok
17:07 -Mo-: Brb about 5 mins, you can keep leaving mods if you want
17:07 EscapeReality: just players who don't know the song migh struggle with it
17:09 EscapeReality: 00:40:300 (1,2) - any reason you suddenly do this pattern here
17:10 EscapeReality: actually i take that back
17:10 EscapeReality: you do it consistently so that's fine
17:12 EscapeReality: 01:14:050 (4,5,6) - think you should start slider first here
17:12 EscapeReality: keep it consistent
17:13 EscapeReality: 00:23:800 (1) - would put a slider here to replace the 1 and 2
17:13 EscapeReality: this feel like a note of rest
17:17 EscapeReality: 02:11:050 (4,5,6,7) - same here
17:17 -Mo-: 01:14:050 (4,5,6) - Consistent with which part?
17:18 EscapeReality: consistent with the second verse
17:19 -Mo-: Circles make more sense for the vocals I feel
17:19 EscapeReality: 03:03:550 (4,5,6,7) - same here
17:20 EscapeReality: well she holds her note there, it feels like a static situation to me
17:20 -Mo-: Yeah, those make sense
17:20 EscapeReality: 03:03:550 (4) - here she holds the "yeeee" note
17:20 EscapeReality: feels like a slider woudl convey that better
17:21 -Mo-: Yeah I agree with that
17:22 EscapeReality: just imo
17:22 EscapeReality: i feel like you use streams a bit too much
17:22 EscapeReality: 00:30:550 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - like here
17:22 EscapeReality: 00:24:550 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - here it's appropriate to use one
17:22 EscapeReality: but using too many long streams kind of makes long streams feel less special when it truly deserves one
17:22 -Mo-: There's a drum roll on that first one
17:23 EscapeReality: i don't here anything on the blue ticks
17:23 EscapeReality: 00:30:643 (4) -
17:23 EscapeReality: doesn't mean you can't overmap
17:24 EscapeReality: it's just a style comment
17:24 EscapeReality: i would keep economy of style: only use what's necessary so the exciting parts can be more exciting
17:25 -Mo-: Personally I think it's fine
17:25 -Mo-: Also highlights the Finish on the next new combo
17:28 EscapeReality: fine
17:28 EscapeReality: that's all i think
17:29 -Mo-: Alright
17:33 EscapeReality: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2846675
17:33 EscapeReality: blegh broke on last stream
17:33 -Mo-: Sorry about that
17:33 -Mo-: OD7.5 too high?
17:33 EscapeReality: no it's fine
17:33 EscapeReality: some jumps could be larger definitely tho
17:34 EscapeReality: i feel they can be more "circular"
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