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Marika - Soul Release

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El SolarBeam
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2015年2月16日 at 11:46:33

Artist: Marika
Title: Soul Release
Source: ハロー・レディ!
Tags: Hello Lady! Akatsuki Works Meis Clauson Angel Note eroge visual novel ts8zs UnitedWeSin
BPM: 188
Filesize: 6331kb
Play Time: 03:54
Difficulties Available:
  1. Insane (4.35 stars, 733 notes)
  2. Liberation (5.05 stars, 850 notes)
  3. Normal (2.25 stars, 386 notes)
  4. Ts8zs' Easy (1.72 stars, 246 notes)
  5. UWS's Hard (3.46 stars, 647 notes)
Download: Marika - Soul Release
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Changed the mp3 on 2015/01/31, please redownload

Easy by ts8zs
Normal by me
Hard by UnitedWeSin
Insane by me
Liberation by me (screw distance snap)

Thanks for everyone's support and feedback!
ts8zs
finished
osu file format v13

[General]
AudioFilename: Marika - Soul Release.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 187538
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1.2
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 8
TimelineZoom: 1.2

[Metadata]
Title:Soul Release
TitleUnicode:Soul Release
Artist:Marika
ArtistUnicode:Marika
Creator:El SolarBeam
Version:Ts8zs' Easy
Source:ハロー・レディ!
Tags:Hello Lady! Akatsuki Works Meis Clauson Angel Note eroge visual novel
BeatmapID:0
BeatmapSetID:-1

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:3
CircleSize:3
OverallDifficulty:3
ApproachRate:4
SliderMultiplier:0.799999999999999
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
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//Break Periods
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//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
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https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2148368
Topic Starter
El SolarBeam
yeah, I like the pattern. keep it on :D
(just don't make it too hard to read w)
ts8zs

El SolarBeam wrote:

yeah, I like the pattern. keep it on :D
(just don't make it too hard to read w)
hard to read? where ;w;
Topic Starter
El SolarBeam
the repeating slider part, well it's fine but don't overuse it :3
ts8zs

El SolarBeam wrote:

the repeating slider part, well it's fine but don't overuse it :3
01:06:262 (2) - ? I couldnt think a better way now ;w;
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Tags:Hello Lady! Akatsuki Works Meis Clauson Angel Note eroge visual novel
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304,288,177326,6,0,L|224:272,1,79.9999999999999,6|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
168,192,177964,2,0,P|128:256|136:312,2,120,2|0|10,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,160,179241,1,2,0:0:0:0:
184,96,179560,2,0,P|256:64|328:96,2,160,10|10|10,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
96,128,181156,6,0,P|88:88|104:48,1,79.9999999999999,2|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
184,96,181794,1,2,0:0:0:0:
168,192,182113,6,0,P|138:218|95:225,2,79.9999999999999,10|6|10,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
240,256,183070,2,0,P|271:229|352:232,1,120,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
312,320,183868,2,0,P|264:352|144:288,1,200,0|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
168,200,184985,6,0,B|160:152|184:120|184:120|176:80,2,120,2|0|10,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
264,176,186262,2,0,L|304:168,2,40,2|0|14,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
240,272,186900,2,0,L|279:285,2,40,2|2|14,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
144,296,187539,6,0,P|104:304|64:296,1,79.9999999999999,2|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
104,208,188177,2,0,B|72:176|78:130|78:130|51:100,2,120,2|0|10,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
176,144,189453,1,2,0:0:0:0:
232,64,189773,6,0,P|272:131|256:207,1,160,14|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
216,296,190730,2,0,P|256:304|296:296,1,79.9999999999999,2|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
384,264,191368,6,0,P|392:303|352:376,2,120,2|0|10,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
344,176,192645,2,0,P|304:184|264:176,1,79.9999999999999,6|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,88,193283,6,0,P|360:80|416:112,2,120,2|0|10,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,88,194560,2,0,P|152:80|96:112,2,120,2|0|10,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,168,195836,2,0,B|280:224|232:272|256:328,1,160,2|6,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
344,296,196794,2,0,P|384:304|424:296,2,79.9999999999999,10|2|10,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
376,208,197751,6,0,P|336:200|296:208,1,79.9999999999999,6|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,184,198389,2,0,P|209:243|245:290,2,120,2|0|10,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
280,120,199666,1,2,0:0:0:0:
376,104,199985,2,0,P|329:40|251:31,2,160,10|10|10,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
336,192,201581,6,0,P|376:200|416:192,1,79.9999999999999,2|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
376,104,202219,1,2,0:0:0:0:
280,120,202538,2,0,P|254:150|247:193,2,79.9999999999999,10|6|10,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
336,192,203495,6,0,P|320:248|264:280,1,120,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
232,368,204293,2,0,P|173:292|208:203,1,200,2|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,216,205410,6,0,B|312:168|288:136|288:136|296:96,2,120,2|0|10,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,200,206687,2,0,L|168:192,2,40,2|0|10,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
240,288,207325,2,0,L|201:301,2,40,2|2|10,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
328,320,207964,6,0,P|368:328|408:320,1,79.9999999999999,6|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
368,232,208602,2,0,B|400:200|394:154|394:154|421:124,2,120,2|0|10,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,160,209878,1,2,0:0:0:0:
248,80,210198,6,0,P|208:147|224:223,1,160,10|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
264,312,211155,2,0,P|224:320|184:312,1,79.9999999999999,2|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
96,272,211793,6,0,P|88:311|128:384,2,120,2|0|10,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
136,184,213070,2,0,P|176:192|216:184,1,79.9999999999999,6|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
176,96,213708,6,0,P|120:88|64:120,2,120,2|0|10,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
248,32,214985,2,0,P|304:24|360:56,2,120,2|4|10,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
288,120,216261,2,0,B|264:176|312:224|288:280,1,160,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
200,240,217219,2,0,P|160:248|120:240,2,79.9999999999999,10|2|14,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
160,152,218176,6,0,P|144:88|168:32,2,120,2|0|10,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
240,96,219453,2,0,L|280:88,3,40,2|0|10|0,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,184,220251,2,0,L|296:192,1,40,2|14,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
384,224,220729,6,0,P|392:168|352:112,1,120,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
296,192,221527,2,0,P|288:248|328:304,1,120,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
416,328,222324,1,10,0:0:0:0:
472,248,222644,2,0,P|479:208|480:168,1,79.9999999999999,2|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
464,72,223283,6,0,B|428:86|428:86|388:70|348:86,1,120,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
384,176,224080,2,0,B|345:191|305:175|305:175|269:190,1,120,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
184,152,224878,2,0,P|176:191|184:230,2,79.9999999999999,10|2|10,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
264,96,225835,6,0,P|224:64|152:64,1,120,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
77,116,226634,2,0,P|124:151|184:152,1,120,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
272,192,227431,1,10,0:0:0:0:
368,200,227750,2,0,P|360:152|336:120,1,79.9999999999999,2|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
272,56,228388,6,0,P|328:32|392:48,1,120,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
456,112,229186,2,0,P|402:136|343:125,1,120,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
248,152,229985,1,10,0:0:0:0:
166,106,230304,2,0,P|154:144|160:184,1,79.9999999999999,2|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,230942,12,0,234613,0:0:0:0:
Topic Starter
El SolarBeam
well, personally no offense about it, just let the modders check it /o/

i'll update it as soon as the internet supports

EDIT : so, here's left the hard diff w
Ciyus Miapah
Hi

[Insane]
00:05:811 (4,5) - try to increase distance in here
00:04:375 (4,5) - whistle
00:05:013 (1) - ^
00:05:332 (3) - ^ in slider tail
00:05:811 (4) - ^
00:05:970 (5) - ^ in slider tail
00:06:928 (3,4) - ^
00:07:566 (1) - ^ in slider head
00:08:205 (3,4) - ^
00:08:684 (7) - Clap
00:09:481 (3) - whistle
00:10:120 (1) - ^
00:10:439 (2) - ^ in slider tail
00:10:918 (3) - ^
00:11:077 (4) - ^ in slider tail
00:12:673 (1) - ^
00:12:832 (2) - ^
00:13:311 (4,5) - ^
00:16:343 (2,3) - ^ (for slider in head only)
00:19:056 (1) - ^ in slider head
00:21:449 (2) - ^
00:21:609 (3) - ^ slider head
00:23:763 (9) - delete clap
blah, so much notes who didnt hitsounding yet.... especially in intro, but i dont know what do you think

00:38:364 (5,6) - why you stack this?
01:04:375 (10,11,1) - seems this pattern unusual, but is up to you
02:26:795 (1) - confusing NC, please NC 02:26:396 (5) -
03:37:726 (7,8,9,10) - really confusing, dont directly antijump 1/2 pattern after do triplet. just stack 03:38:045 (10,1) -

almost FC it, i miss in that long stream after 1/1 slider, so confuse in there. the rest is very good, i like it xD. but still this map needs more hitsounding


[Hard]
Not Available yet, so put this map on WIP.

[Normal]
00:11:396 (1) - middle point in x0 y144, last point in x20 y260
01:27:992 (1) - fix blanket
01:35:652 (1) - out of bonds, please that slider hit my score number
01:38:843 (3) - fix blanket?
03:30:226 (1) - overlap in here

same like Insane, this map needs more Hitsounding too.
i cant find anything wrong in pattern or maybe anything, i FC this map and its okay.

[Easy]
im just look at this one http://puu.sh/cJbNQ/ba738d0f63.png (im still believe this, so the pattern in Easy is like normal i think)
and why so much 1/2 in here, there should be Easy+ in this map. but idk im just testplaying this still can FC it lol

okay, that's my mod. im really sorry for very short mod, because im seriously cant find some problem in your map (except add Hard diff). so goodluck with your map.
Topic Starter
El SolarBeam
waiting for hard diff before applying mod

とりあえずjust enjoy this 2 kudos first
Ciyus Miapah
why 2 kudos for short mod?? blame peppy pls
ts8zs

Fort wrote:

why 2 kudos for short mod?? blame peppy pls
mod a map didn't update and be modded for 7 days ;w;
Topic Starter
El SolarBeam
because I'm generous ok no lol

thanks for the explanation pal
Momochikun
hi :3

[General]
Remove all wide screen support on the diffs since you got no SB o.o
Better to keep this on the WIP state since it's still not completed yet

[Insane]
00:01:184 (1,2) - These sounds a bit too loud for me, i'd reduce the hitsound volume a bit ><
00:05:811 (4,5) - How about move them farther ? (3) and (4) now spaced just like a 3/4 rhythm for me, it would make the player a bit confused imo
00:13:630 (1) - You can hear a slightly cymbal crash here, how about a finish ? you can lower the volume a bit to create great effect
01:04:694 (1) - ^
00:14:269 (3) - I'd separate this into 1/2 slider and note to follow the vocal, somehow a bit rude to skip the first vocal of the song xD
00:35:811 (5,5) - Missing clap on these note
00:42:035 (1) - Add finish i guess ?
01:17:460 (4) - ^ 02:08:843 (1) - at start 01:26:715 (1) - at end
01:02:301 (2) - I can hear some highbeat sound at the downbeat, pretty awkward to see it skipped, i'd go for note and 1/2 o.o
01:12:354 (5) - Missing clap
01:29:109 (4,5) - Move them farther ? looks a bit cramped for me atm
01:31:822 - Stop plays awkwardly due the vocal being skipped, add a note here
02:21:290 (4,5,6,7) - Clap to this stream..
02:31:503 (9) - Missing finish orz.. you can clearly hear a cymbal crash there on the music
02:40:758 (1) - Is this really need to be double reverse ? lol i think you can make more creative pattern here since it was Insane
03:16:503 (1,3) - Finishes on them ?
03:25:120 (1) - How about CTRL G for softer transition between them ? don't forget to restack (7)
03:35:013 (7) - Missing clap
03:38:045 (10,1) - This would surely confusing since it spaced just as same like the previous triplet. People may think this was a duplet, pls move this farther

[Normal]
Hitsounds suggestion on Insane may applied on this diff to if you feel like it
00:16:822 (4,1,2,3,4) - This whole part feels boring due to that overuse of reverse slider, i think you can combine more 1/1 and 1/2 sliders to create attractive pattern here since it's Not an Easy diff o.o
01:33:737 (2) - CTRL H + J ? xD
01:41:715 (2) - I'd go for straight slider instead here for neater transition before and after this slider
02:08:843 (1) - Missing finish
02:42:035 (1) - 02:47:141 (1) - ^
Fine diff, on some place i think it can be more neater. Some of your flow is not very natural imo

[Easy]
00:03:258 (1) - It's not good to start an Easy diff with a 1/2 not which indentical with Normal diff, simplify this into a single note.
00:34:375 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1) - Too much 1/2 s !! pls mix some of them into 1/1 slider or so !
01:37:726 (5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1) - ^
01:06:290 (2,3) - This would surely confusing since you using more than 1 repeat point. Separate them at least? though 3/2 slider is better imo
02:10:119 (2,3) - ^
02:04:374 (1) - Should be a clap at the slider start instead of whistle
02:52:247 (1,1) - Unrankable stuffs, object is too close to the spinner. The minimum recovery time of Easy diff is 1 full measure ( 4 white tick )
03:50:970 (1) - End it just like the same as the other diffs ?
THe SV is pretty low which indicate the Easy diff, but i think you emphasize the drum a bit too much. 1/2 slider are overused here imo.
Your pattern itself is fit nicely for beginners, but your rhythm does not. Try simplify more of your rhythm by mixing 3/2 slider and 1/1 slider on some 1/2 drum beat just like 03:06:290 (2,3) - and 03:39:481 (2,3) -


Good luck :C
ts8zs

Momochikun wrote:

hi :3
hi

[Easy]
00:03:258 (1) - It's not good to start an Easy diff with a 1/2 not which indentical with Normal diff, simplify this into a single note. It is harder to catch in hidden
00:34:375 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1) - Too much 1/2 s !! pls mix some of them into 1/1 slider or so !
01:37:726 (5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1) - ^ thinking
01:06:290 (2,3) - This would surely confusing since you using more than 1 repeat point. Separate them at least? though 3/2 slider is better imo um...
02:10:119 (2,3) - ^
02:04:374 (1) - Should be a clap at the slider start instead of whistleI dont think so
02:52:247 (1,1) - Unrankable stuffs, object is too close to the spinner. The minimum recovery time of Easy diff is 1 full measure ( 4 white tick ) fixed
03:50:970 (1) - End it just like the same as the other diffs ? well I think end here is better,depends on creator
THe SV is pretty low which indicate the Easy diff, but i think you emphasize the drum a bit too much. 1/2 slider are overused here imo.
Your pattern itself is fit nicely for beginners, but your rhythm does not. Try simplify more of your rhythm by mixing 3/2 slider and 1/1 slider on some 1/2 drum beat just like 03:06:290 (2,3) - and 03:39:481 (2,3) - um I follow the vocal


Good luck :C
@creator
02:52:219 (1) - End at 02:55:411 -
03:50:943 (1) - End at 03:54:773 -
That's all
Topic Starter
El SolarBeam
haha well this situation is quite similar with our previous map

will consider after 30% hard diff part left done

EDIT : I think it's fine the way it is (since 2v1 /runs)
you can also keep your style, I don't mind :3
Topic Starter
El SolarBeam

Fort wrote:

Hi

[Insane]
00:05:811 (4,5) - try to increase distance in here
00:04:375 (4,5) - whistle
00:05:013 (1) - ^
00:05:332 (3) - ^ in slider tail
00:05:811 (4) - ^
00:05:970 (5) - ^ in slider tail
00:06:928 (3,4) - ^
00:07:566 (1) - ^ in slider head
00:08:205 (3,4) - ^
00:08:684 (7) - Clap
00:09:481 (3) - whistle
00:10:120 (1) - ^
00:10:439 (2) - ^ in slider tail
00:10:918 (3) - ^
00:11:077 (4) - ^ in slider tail
00:12:673 (1) - ^
00:12:832 (2) - ^
00:13:311 (4,5) - ^
00:16:343 (2,3) - ^ (for slider in head only)
00:19:056 (1) - ^ in slider head
00:21:449 (2) - ^
00:21:609 (3) - ^ slider head
00:23:763 (9) - delete clap
blah, so much notes who didnt hitsounding yet.... especially in intro, but i dont know what do you think (fixed my sense of humor hitsounding)

00:38:364 (5,6) - why you stack this? (well, it's not false at least)
01:04:375 (10,11,1) - seems this pattern unusual, but is up to you (no problem for the time being)
02:26:795 (1) - confusing NC, please NC 02:26:396 (5) - (fixed)
03:37:726 (7,8,9,10) - really confusing, dont directly antijump 1/2 pattern after do triplet. just stack 03:38:045 (10,1) - (fixed)

almost FC it, i miss in that long stream after 1/1 slider, so confuse in there. the rest is very good, i like it xD. but still this map needs more hitsounding


[Hard]
Not Available yet, so put this map on WIP. (available now so fixed)

[Normal]
00:11:396 (1) - middle point in x0 y144, last point in x20 y260 (fixed)
01:27:992 (1) - fix blanket (it's fine I suppose)
01:35:652 (1) - out of bonds, please that slider hit my score number (haha sorry about that, fixed)
01:38:843 (3) - fix blanket? (it's fine I suppose)
03:30:226 (1) - overlap in here (fixed)

same like Insane, this map needs more Hitsounding too.
i cant find anything wrong in pattern or maybe anything, i FC this map and its okay.

[Easy]
im just look at this one http://puu.sh/cJbNQ/ba738d0f63.png (im still believe this, so the pattern in Easy is like normal i think)
and why so much 1/2 in here, there should be Easy+ in this map. but idk im just testplaying this still can FC it lol

okay, that's my mod. im really sorry for very short mod, because im seriously cant find some problem in your map (except add Hard diff). so goodluck with your map.

Momochikun wrote:

hi :3 owo)/

[General]
Remove all wide screen support on the diffs since you got no SB o.o (fixed, too tired to make SB these day ww)
Better to keep this on the WIP state since it's still not completed yet (completed now)

[Insane]
00:01:184 (1,2) - These sounds a bit too loud for me, i'd reduce the hitsound volume a bit >< (I like the hitsound at the currrent volume though :o)
00:05:811 (4,5) - How about move them farther ? (3) and (4) now spaced just like a 3/4 rhythm for me, it would make the player a bit confused imo (ok, just a bit then)
00:13:630 (1) - You can hear a slightly cymbal crash here, how about a finish ? you can lower the volume a bit to create great effect (hm, the sound's kinda weak so I'll refrain)
01:04:694 (1) - ^
00:14:269 (3) - I'd separate this into 1/2 slider and note to follow the vocal, somehow a bit rude to skip the first vocal of the song xD (haha well, my forte is the instrument so it sounds unusual for me instead, not a bad idea though :3)
00:35:811 (5,5) - Missing clap on these note (fixed)
00:42:035 (1) - Add finish i guess ? (adding whistle instead, just say it's fixed)
01:17:460 (4) - ^ 02:08:843 (1) - at start 01:26:715 (1) - at end (fixed some)
01:02:301 (2) - I can hear some highbeat sound at the downbeat, pretty awkward to see it skipped, i'd go for note and 1/2 o.o (hm, I think this rhythm is easier to execute imo)
01:12:354 (5) - Missing clap (fixed)
01:29:109 (4,5) - Move them farther ? looks a bit cramped for me atm (I think it looks just nice though)
01:31:822 - Stop plays awkwardly due the vocal being skipped, add a note here (it's more awkwark to suddenly follow vocal I suppose)
02:21:290 (4,5,6,7) - Clap to this stream.. (fixed)
02:31:503 (9) - Missing finish orz.. you can clearly hear a cymbal crash there on the music (fixed)
02:40:758 (1) - Is this really need to be double reverse ? lol i think you can make more creative pattern here since it was Insane (well, no one disallow anyway xD at least it's better than making antijump imo)
03:16:503 (1,3) - Finishes on them ? (ok, nice idea)
03:25:120 (1) - How about CTRL G for softer transition between them ? don't forget to restack (7) (well, you just have to pull the mouse downward on this pattern so no problem imo)
03:35:013 (7) - Missing clap (fixed)
03:38:045 (10,1) - This would surely confusing since it spaced just as same like the previous triplet. People may think this was a duplet, pls move this farther
(fixed beforehand)

[Normal]
Hitsounds suggestion on Insane may applied on this diff to if you feel like it
00:16:822 (4,1,2,3,4) - This whole part feels boring due to that overuse of reverse slider, i think you can combine more 1/1 and 1/2 sliders to create attractive pattern here since it's Not an Easy diff o.o (let me consider later :3)
01:33:737 (2) - CTRL H + J ? xD (it's fine as is maybe ww)
01:41:715 (2) - I'd go for straight slider instead here for neater transition before and after this slider (I'll make it wavy instead, fixed annyway)
02:08:843 (1) - Missing finish (fixed)
02:42:035 (1) - 02:47:141 (1) - ^ (fixed)
Fine diff, on some place i think it can be more neater. Some of your flow is not very natural imo

Good luck :C
thanks for the mod~
Netamaru
[Insane]

01:00:545 (3,4,5) - stack slidernya beda sendiri disini, mungkin kalo di jadiin kaya ini
(cuma saran, mungkin situ punya ide yang lebih bagus lagi)
jadi lebih konsisten sama pattern nya

01:02:141 (1,2) - ^mungkin kalo saran di atas di terima, disini bisa jadi kaya ini

(sama kaya di atas, cuma masukan)

01:04:375 (10,11,1) - 1/4 note mungkin di rapatin, sama kaya di atas disini aja ngak konsisten sama pattern map nya, distance nya beda sendiri dari keseluruhan

[UWS's Hard]

02:28:949 (4) - kenapa ngak 3 beat aja disini? soalnya dari combo" sebelum nya itu 3 beat semua, terus disini tiba" 4 rasanya bakalan sering break karena kaget

03:27:035 (3,4,5) - stack nya buruk disini buat hard, saran saya mungkin dibuat 3 hit circle, lalu slider kaya ini


mungkin cuma segitu aja, dikit sih emang, saya masih ngak begitu ngerti sama mapping sebenernya tugas numpuk masih menunggu juga lol, dan juga maklum pake bahasa indonesia, grammar masih hancur

btw goodluck buat map nya /o/
THS
Quick mod stil practice
Insane

- replace 00:33:577 (3) - and 00:33:657 (4) - with a single slider
- 00:34:056 reduce the volume a bit?
- 01:27:673 (4,5,6,7,1) - end of the stream at 01:28:152 (2) -
- 01:48:577 add note?
- 02:31:582 (10) - ^
- 03:32:460 (8,9,10,11) - replace with 2 reverse sliders in 8.9 and 10.11?

Normal

- AR+0.5?

UWS's Hard

- AR+0.5? since this is quite high BPM so, i recommend AR8 instead of 7.5 xD
Topic Starter
El SolarBeam
thanks mas mas o7

fixed some
Asagi
yes yes yes
Winnie
Here as requested from my Modding Queue
Marika is Life and that this is a great song (How come I never find songs like these to map?) :) :) :) :) :)

[UWS's Hard]

00:08:364 (3) - Move 2 notches to the left for consistent spacing
00:08:843 (1,2,3,4,1) - Why note make them more consistent like this? the 1,2,3 slider have equal spacing and the 3,4 sliders have ends matching together http://puu.sh/d6Wni/b0c2b34500.jpg (My preference but this is your choice)
00:35:332 (4) - Move to the left 1 notch, it looks more appealing and isn't as spaced out to hit the next note, it's just a tiny adjustment but makes gameplay a lot better/smoother
00:42:992 (3) - Not sure about this note to get it to where you put it but can't tell if this is DS properly or not
00:46:503 (6) - Move down 2 notches for same reason
00:46:822 (1) - Move deeper into the previous slider, seems more appealing (My preference your choice) http://puu.sh/d6WBw/d1a5617778.jpg
00:55:120 (2) - Move a 1 notch to the left for better feels
01:03:896 (5) - Snap this properly
01:08:364 (3) - Not sure if this was intentional or not but it doesn't have to be spaced far, it feels the same with proper DS
01:13:471 (3) - Snap Properly
01:25:439 (1,2,3,4) - Reshape to something like this it's fixed with proper snapping already http://puu.sh/d6Ycu/578bf0aecf.jpg
01:29:109 (5) - Snap Properly
01:31:503 (4) - Move 1 to the left
01:34:694 (2) - 2-3 notches to the left based on how you see those spacing, want to keep them even
01:43:311 (1,2) - 2 notches to the left, reasoning behind this is that it's smoother to play and doesn't have to do just a tad more work to get over there to the next note but instead miss it. Think of it as a stream and how it is spaced evenly(depends on the song) but it helps to create movement that is natural and you follow one single path instead of adjusting it over and over again because of spacing
02:43:311 (1) - DS properly
Other than that it is a fenominal map, please don't take this mod too seriously. I was just moving and fixing things around where spaces looked clean and smooth, and did my best to achieve that. I do hope to see this get ranked in the near future because Marika is my waifu :) :) :)
Topic Starter
El SolarBeam
thanks a bunch, I'll let uws to check it later

it's always nice to hear someone waiting my maps to be ranked~
Yauxo


Hi there, coming from your request in our/my Modding Queue. Be so kind to take some minutes (or seconds, lets be honest) to answer to my mods. Dont be a dick and just "lol didnt changed stuffs hurr durr" without an explanation. If I told you something that was against your map, tell me why. This way mapper and modder both gain something.

Unrankable
Suggestion

Other than that, colours yellow to red indicate how important changes would be in my opinion
(copy paste end)

Phew, full spread 4 min, here we go

[General]
■ OD 7,5 for Hard is really damn difficult. There are Insanes with OD 7, so I'd h i g h l y recommend to lower it (5.5 - 6 maybe?)

[Insane]
■ 00:13:630 (1) - I think it'd actually be better if you replace this one with 2 shorter Sliders, where the 2nd would become the NC'd one. This would make more sense since the big white (strong beat) should be clickable. "Starting" a new beat/verse/whatever on a Sliderend is always ... meh

Similar cases
01:04:694 (1) -
01:37:886 (1) -
01:45:545 (1) -

00:19:535 (2) - How about unstacking these so that they act like 00:20:173 (4,5) - ?
■ 00:30:386 (5) - 296/288? I know it's supposed to be an overlap, but touching the next object like this looks rather ugly. People wont notice the overlap anyway
■ 00:33:657 (4,5) - fix spacing to 0.7 DS (0-7 -> 1.0 change)
00:53:045 (5) - How about this? Can be curved as well


■ 01:04:614 (11) - I really dislike the big spacing of this one. For most players, this wont be a big problem, but I could imagine that at least some less experienced players might get confused by this one. How about just placing these like you do with all the other streams? :v Even 1.0 would work better
■ 01:06:290 (1,2,3,4) - How about some increased spacing for these? The beats are pretty strong, so why not go a little crazy? I mean, even the normal circles have almost as much spacing :v
■ 01:30:226 (7,8) - At least make them not touch each other
■ 01:37:886 (1) - Give it some more spacing, 1.0 maybe. That way it'll be easier to see that this is >not< a 1/4 timing away from the Slider before, but 1/2 away.
■ 02:00:066 (6) - Stack properly
■ 02:40:758 (1) - Split this one up in two 1/1 Sliders maybe?
■ 03:34:215 (4) - The spacing makes it looks like this one would be 1/4 away, yet it's 1/2 away. Why isnt it spaced like 03:33:418 (2,3) - when it's basically the same thing?

■ There are some Blankets that could be improved here and there, but that's pretty minor. Fix some of them, if you feel fancy


[Hard]
■ See General
■ 00:29:907 (2,3) - I'd space these out. The stack feels weird to me. Actually. 00:29:588 (1) - is off - it feels really damn awkward. How about this? 6 is where the gap was, 7 is where the Slider started


■ 00:54:003 (3) - 291/78
■ 01:48:098 (1) - Not neccessarily a fan of this one since the sound starts off really quiet, but I guess it's still okay
■ 01:52:566 (2,3) - 02:02:779 (2,3) - unstack? Movement would support the song more imo
03:07:247 (5) - rotate by -51, then move to 380/72?

■ The only thing that kinda bugged me was the high amount of stacks. You built up alot of movement in this diff, so most of the stacks ruin it.


[Normal]
■ 00:16:503 (3) - to keep consistency, NC here. Also, I really dislike the long, almost boring section that's coming up. You use 3x 3 repeat Sliders, which are basically long 3/1 sections where nothing really happens. Maybe thing about a remap of this section with more normal 1/1 Sliders
■ 00:43:949 (4) - Similar thing with what we had in Insane. It'd be better if the very strong tick would be supported with a clickable object instead of a weak Sliderend. Remove repeat and insert Circle/Slider instead?
■ 02:31:184 (6) - ^
02:36:609 (6) - replace with one Circle and a Slider afterwards (so that it ends on 02:37:247 (1) - ). Similar reasons as ^
■ 03:02:141 (1) - replace with 2 Circle? Reason^

■ Some patterns are rather questionable in design, but Iam not the one to judge. My style differs alot from yours


[Easy]
■ 01:25:758 (2) - Overlap the tail properly
■ 01:34:375 (2,3,1) - Spacing jumps up and down here. keep it consistent
■ 01:38:683 (2) - y 226
■ 02:37:566 (2) - Overlap can be improvied (I think?)

■ Iam really not sure how BATs will handle the 1/2 usage like 00:34:375 (1) - and red-tick usage like 00:08:843 (1) - , since Easy diffs should be kept as simple as possible.
That aside, creative diff, I like it
Topic Starter
El SolarBeam

Yauxo wrote:

[Insane]
■ 00:13:630 (1) - I think it'd actually be better if you replace this one with 2 shorter Sliders, where the 2nd would become the NC'd one. This would make more sense since the big white (strong beat) should be clickable. "Starting" a new beat/verse/whatever on a Sliderend is always ... meh (fixed the 1st and 4th but not with the other two since it's at least the best way of emphasizing I can think of)

Similar cases
01:04:694 (1) -
01:37:886 (1) -
01:45:545 (1) -

00:19:535 (2) - How about unstacking these so that they act like 00:20:173 (4,5) - ? (sure)
■ 00:30:386 (5) - 296/288? I know it's supposed to be an overlap, but touching the next object like this looks rather ugly. People wont notice the overlap anyway (well as you said, ppl won't notice anyway)
■ 00:33:657 (4,5) - fix spacing to 0.7 DS (0-7 -> 1.0 change) (fixed, didn't notice before)
00:53:045 (5) - How about this? Can be curved as well (I think it's fine already, placing it parallel-wise is better imo)


■ 01:04:614 (11) - I really dislike the big spacing of this one. For most players, this wont be a big problem, but I could imagine that at least some less experienced players might get confused by this one. How about just placing these like you do with all the other streams? :v Even 1.0 would work better (well, it's intentional for notes not to touch each others as a normal stream does, just say it's a little experiment)
■ 01:06:290 (1,2,3,4) - How about some increased spacing for these? The beats are pretty strong, so why not go a little crazy? I mean, even the normal circles have almost as much spacing :v (hm yes you have a point, but I'll just put it as is and compensate the jump on 01:07:088 (1) )
■ 01:30:226 (7,8) - At least make them not touch each other (fixed)
■ 01:37:886 (1) - Give it some more spacing, 1.0 maybe. That way it'll be easier to see that this is >not< a 1/4 timing away from the Slider before, but 1/2 away. (fixed)
■ 02:00:066 (6) - Stack properly (lol fixed)
■ 02:40:758 (1) - Split this one up in two 1/1 Sliders maybe? (well what's wrong with the repeating long slider, I know ppl rarely use it in insane tho, but it's just a ridiculous excuse)
■ 03:34:215 (4) - The spacing makes it looks like this one would be 1/4 away, yet it's 1/2 away. Why isnt it spaced like 03:33:418 (2,3) - when it's basically the same thing? (fixed a little, anyway it's not like ppl will often mistaken it)

■ There are some Blankets that could be improved here and there, but that's pretty minor. Fix some of them, if you feel fancy


[Normal]
■ 00:16:503 (3) - to keep consistency, NC here. Also, I really dislike the long, almost boring section that's coming up. You use 3x 3 repeat Sliders, which are basically long 3/1 sections where nothing really happens. Maybe thing about a remap of this section with more normal 1/1 Sliders (it's a style difference imo, well I know I made something out of my style this time, but just let it be for the time being)
■ 00:43:949 (4) - Similar thing with what we had in Insane. It'd be better if the very strong tick would be supported with a clickable object instead of a weak Sliderend. Remove repeat and insert Circle/Slider instead? (fixed)
■ 02:31:184 (6) - ^
02:36:609 (6) - replace with one Circle and a Slider afterwards (so that it ends on 02:37:247 (1) - ). Similar reasons as ^
■ 03:02:141 (1) - replace with 2 Circle? Reason^ (fixed)

■ Some patterns are rather questionable in design, but Iam not the one to judge. My style differs alot from yours
thanks for the mod~
Rukaru
some suggestion from irc
13:02 El SolarBeam: bang adi, minta testplay dums o/
13:02 Rukaru: ok
13:03 *El SolarBeam is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/520698 Marika - Soul Release]
13:03 El SolarBeam: baru sadar ganti nama jadi susah nyarinya orz
13:03 Rukaru: oshit 5 star o.o
13:04 El SolarBeam: tapi bukan shitmap kok /o/
13:04 *Rukaru is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/520699 Marika - Soul Release]
13:07 Rukaru: ffuuuuu :O
13:07 Rukaru: I can't stream xD
13:08 El SolarBeam: rata" bermasalah sama stream ya xD
13:12 Rukaru: engga, emang aku aja yang ga bisa main stream. xD
13:13 El SolarBeam: owh kirain saya yg bikin streamnya jelek hue
13:13 El SolarBeam: pass /o/
13:14 Rukaru: engga lah, coba minta test play ke player pro
13:14 *Rukaru is playing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/520699 Marika - Soul Release [Normal]]
13:15 El SolarBeam: ok nanti saya coba~
13:19 Rukaru: hmm...
13:19 El SolarBeam: how2spin
13:19 Rukaru: move your hand in circular motion, works 24/7 xD
13:19 El SolarBeam: awkwk ikr
13:20 Rukaru: untuk normal diff...uh gimana ya? harusnya bisa lebih baik
13:20 Rukaru: soalnya ada ritme yang kurang konsisten
13:20 Rukaru: nah, itu yang membuat feel nya agak kurang
13:20 El SolarBeam: agak ngebut ya bikinnya hue
13:21 Rukaru: spacing nya o.o
13:21 Rukaru: ga masalah sih sebenarnya xD
13:22 Rukaru: ini misalnya 00:36:928 (1) -
13:23 El SolarBeam: normal kali ini kelewat simpel rasanya orz
13:23 Rukaru: harusnya note ini diganti pake 1/1
13:23 El SolarBeam: asalnya mau bikin easy tapi starnya kegedean
13:24 El SolarBeam: considering~
13:24 Rukaru: trus disini 00:37:566 (6) - yang pake 3/4 repeat slider
13:24 Rukaru: coba aja
13:25 Rukaru: dan... 00:39:481 (1,2,3,4) - lebih baik disamakan dengan ritme sebelumnya
13:26 El SolarBeam: hm 1/1
13:26 Rukaru: recommended to change this 00:59:907 (1,2,3) -
13:26 Rukaru: transisi dari slider 1 ke 2 itu gimana ya, rasanya kea dipaksa gitu
13:27 El SolarBeam: semuanya pilihan sulit orz..
13:27 Rukaru: cieh transisi katanya. xD
13:27 El SolarBeam: transisi omgomg
13:30 El SolarBeam: brb disuruh mandi
13:31 El SolarBeam: kalo ada yg aneh lagi bilang aja owo)/
13:31 Rukaru: ok
13:34 Rukaru: 01:30:545 (1,2,3) - should be like this (lihat timeline, abaikan patternnya. xD) https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2290297
13:35 Rukaru: 01:44:269 (2) - lebih baik jika disamakan ritme nya dengan 01:41:715 (2) -
13:36 Rukaru: 01:56:715 (2) - mending ubah jadi 2 notes. biar dapet feelnya di 01:57:354 (3,4) -
13:38 Rukaru: 02:06:928 (4) - gunakan slider 3/4 menimbang bahwa pada ritme sebelumnya kamu mengikuti suara gitar.
13:41 Rukaru: 02:45:226 (2) - pertimbangkan untuk mengubah slider ini ke 2/1 slider agar menghemat penggunaan 1/1 slider yang notabene terlalu banyak
13:41 Rukaru: 02:50:332 (2) - ini juga
13:42 Rukaru: 02:59:588 (1) - uh...dunno about this
13:43 Rukaru: gimana ya? kalo dihapus, terasa kosong. tapi kalo engga, ya...note ini membingungkan
13:46 Rukaru: 03:12:673 (1) - sepertinya lebih baik kalo diganti dengan 1 circle. trus tambah 2/3 slider disini 03:13:311 -
13:46 Rukaru: repeat slider ya ^
13:51 Rukaru: udah, itu aja
14:02 El SolarBeam: wogh dateng" udah banyak aja xD
14:02 El SolarBeam: makasih banyak bang
14:03 Rukaru: >bang. I feel old. :(
14:03 El SolarBeam: kan emang lebih tua dari saya hhe

kudosu pls xD
Saut
yo, as requested



  • [General]
  1. a consistent increase of the stars (CS,AR,OD,HD) would be cool - easy and normal are quite close to each other followed by a "huge" gap and than same goes with hard and insane.
  2. what about some sexy custom colors?
  3. more than 1/3 of the map is covered in kai time -could be a problem at ranking later on.


  • [Ts8zs' Easy]
  1. I would recommend to reduce the AR to 3
  2. 00:07:088 (2,3) - fix ds
  3. 00:08:843 (1,2) - ^ (should be between 1,17 and 1,23 - atleast at your map)
  4. 00:18:418 (3) - blanket - slightly rotate
  5. 00:19:056 (1) - ^
  6. 00:28:790 (4,1) - ^
  7. 00:32:620 (3,1) - ds
  8. 01:14:587 (4,2) - not perfectly stacked
  9. 01:24:162 (3) - ds
  10. 01:25:439 (1) - ^
  11. 01:29:268 (2) - ^
  12. 02:10:119 (2) - 2times reverse sliders are very hard for beginners particularly very short ones, because they cant spot them.
  13. 02:51:609 (3) - ^
  14. 02:35:652 (3,2) - stacking - oh btw you can move circles precisely by holding crtl+shift and then using the arrow keys (would also recommend a tiny grid)
  15. 02:46:184 - why do u leave this place blank? Would be confusing while playing
  16. 02:49:056 (4,2) - stacking - check all your stackings in this diff there are some more stacking issues (always a few coordinates)
Otherwise a pretty smooth diff - love the use of blankets


  • [Normal]
  1. 00:19:375 (2,4) - blankiniooo
  2. 00:32:141 (1,2,3,4) - perfect square would look pretty badass
  3. 00:59:907 (1,2) - http://prntscr.com/5bdw76 - little correction, looks better in my opinion :d (01:01:024 (2,3) - would also fit to this one then)
  4. 01:03:737 (5,6,1) - http://prntscr.com/5bdzzd what about this?
  5. 01:36:928 (4,1) - blanket
  6. 01:38:843 (3,1) - also check some of your stackings
  7. 02:36:928 (6) - whistle


  • [Insane]
  1. 00:05:013 (1,2) - ds of them is 1,37 so this 00:05:332 (3,4) - (slider end and (4)) should also have ~1,37 ds
  2. 01:00:545 (3,4,5) - this is beautiful
  3. 01:17:460 (4,5,6,7,8) - sounds badass with claps at 4 and 6
  4. 02:38:524 (3,4,5) - 4 should be 3 rotated by -120° and 5 should be 3 rotated by 120°
  5. 02:52:407 (1,1) - i dont get why u do dis

    im running out of time but the rest seems pretty fine to me

If I find some more time+motivation i will edit this post and add the hard diff mod (and maybe some more aspects at the insane diff)
I hope my mod was still somehow useful and good luck at ranking!

Saut
Topic Starter
El SolarBeam
well then, I'll reply to it max until next week, in case you're motivated to add something else~

anyway thanks!
Factorial
From NLMQ

[Easy]
02:52:247 (1) - Recovery time too short, a guide is 1 full measure

[Insane]
02:31:024 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Make slider?
03:19:375 (7) - Ctrl+G
03:12:992 (2) - ^

Well, that was a short mod. GL on map
ts8zs
=. =
osu file format v13

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192,280,168418,2,0,L|200:320,2,40,2|0|10,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
128,208,169056,2,0,P|127:168|142:131,1,79.9999999999999,2|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,56,169694,6,0,P|136:32|56:80,1,160,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
142,131,170652,2,0,P|214:155|294:107,1,160,10|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
352,48,171609,2,0,L|408:64,3,40,2|2|10|2,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,172247,12,2,175758,0:0:0:0:
304,288,177354,6,0,L|224:272,1,79.9999999999999,6|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
168,192,177992,2,0,P|128:256|136:312,2,120,2|0|10,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,160,179269,1,2,0:0:0:0:
184,96,179588,2,0,P|256:64|328:96,2,160,10|10|10,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
96,128,181184,6,0,P|88:88|104:48,1,79.9999999999999,2|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
184,96,181822,1,2,0:0:0:0:
168,192,182141,6,0,P|138:218|95:225,2,79.9999999999999,10|6|10,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
240,256,183098,2,0,P|271:229|352:232,1,120,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
312,320,183896,2,0,P|264:352|144:288,1,200,0|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
168,200,185013,6,0,B|160:152|184:120|184:120|176:80,2,120,2|0|10,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
264,176,186290,2,0,L|304:168,2,40,2|0|14,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
240,272,186928,2,0,L|279:285,2,40,2|2|14,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
144,296,187567,6,0,P|104:304|64:296,1,79.9999999999999,2|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
104,208,188205,2,0,B|72:176|78:130|78:130|51:100,2,120,2|0|10,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
176,144,189481,1,2,0:0:0:0:
232,64,189801,6,0,P|272:131|256:207,1,160,14|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
216,296,190758,2,0,P|256:304|296:296,1,79.9999999999999,2|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
384,264,191396,6,0,P|392:303|352:376,2,120,2|0|10,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
344,176,192673,2,0,P|304:184|264:176,1,79.9999999999999,6|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,88,193311,6,0,P|360:80|416:112,2,120,2|0|10,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,88,194588,2,0,P|152:80|96:112,2,120,2|0|10,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,168,195864,2,0,B|280:224|232:272|256:328,1,160,2|6,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
344,296,196822,2,0,P|384:304|424:296,2,79.9999999999999,10|2|10,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
376,208,197779,6,0,P|336:200|296:208,1,79.9999999999999,6|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,184,198417,2,0,P|209:243|245:290,2,120,2|0|10,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
280,120,199694,1,2,0:0:0:0:
376,104,200013,2,0,P|329:40|251:31,2,160,10|10|10,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
336,192,201609,6,0,P|376:200|416:192,1,79.9999999999999,2|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
376,104,202247,1,2,0:0:0:0:
280,120,202566,2,0,P|254:150|247:193,2,79.9999999999999,10|6|10,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
336,192,203524,6,0,P|320:248|264:280,1,120,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
232,368,204322,2,0,P|173:292|208:203,1,200,2|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,216,205438,6,0,B|312:168|288:136|288:136|296:96,2,120,2|0|10,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,200,206715,2,0,L|168:192,2,40,2|0|10,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
240,288,207353,2,0,L|201:301,2,40,2|2|10,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
328,320,207992,6,0,P|368:328|408:320,1,79.9999999999999,6|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
368,232,208630,2,0,B|400:200|394:154|394:154|421:124,2,120,2|0|10,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,160,209906,1,2,0:0:0:0:
248,80,210226,6,0,P|208:147|224:223,1,160,10|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
264,312,211183,2,0,P|224:320|184:312,1,79.9999999999999,2|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
96,272,211821,6,0,P|88:311|128:384,2,120,2|0|10,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
136,184,213098,2,0,P|176:192|216:184,1,79.9999999999999,6|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
176,96,213736,6,0,P|120:88|64:120,2,120,2|0|10,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
248,32,215013,2,0,P|304:24|360:56,2,120,2|4|10,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
288,120,216289,2,0,B|264:176|312:224|288:280,1,160,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
200,240,217247,2,0,P|160:248|120:240,2,79.9999999999999,10|2|14,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
160,152,218204,6,0,P|144:88|168:32,2,120,2|0|10,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
240,96,219481,2,0,L|280:88,3,40,2|0|10|0,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,184,220279,2,0,L|296:192,1,40,2|14,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
384,224,220758,6,0,P|392:168|352:112,1,120,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
296,192,221556,2,0,P|288:248|328:304,1,120,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
416,328,222354,1,10,0:0:0:0:
472,248,222672,2,0,P|479:208|480:168,1,79.9999999999999,2|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
464,72,223311,6,0,B|428:86|428:86|388:70|348:86,1,120,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
384,176,224109,2,0,B|345:191|305:175|305:175|269:190,1,120,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
184,152,224906,2,0,P|176:191|184:230,2,79.9999999999999,10|2|10,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
264,96,225864,6,0,P|224:64|152:64,1,120,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
77,116,226662,2,0,P|124:151|184:152,1,120,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
272,192,227459,1,10,0:0:0:0:
368,200,227778,2,0,P|360:152|336:120,1,79.9999999999999,2|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
272,56,228418,6,0,P|328:32|392:48,1,120,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
456,112,229215,2,0,P|402:136|343:125,1,120,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
248,152,230013,1,10,0:0:0:0:
166,106,230332,2,0,P|154:144|160:184,1,79.9999999999999,2|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,230970,12,0,234801,0:0:0:0:
Sky Trias
Hi! o/
Nice Mapset , and Nice Song ! :D

  • UWS's Hard
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  1. 00:29:588 (1) - Ctrl+G ? ;) flow will be better :D
  2. 00:43:949 (3) - ^
  3. 01:31:024 (3) - you sure about this ? player will miss this slider
  4. 01:37:168 - add note here .. 01:37:088 (1,2 ) - i think , player think this is 3 notes stream ..
  5. 01:57:832 (3) - Ctrl+G "i think" :) make flow better ..
some irc for Insane difficult
2014-12-03 18:50 El SolarBeam: hai sky trias o/
2014-12-03 18:50 El SolarBeam: boleh minta tolong tes map?
2014-12-03 18:50 Sky Trias: halo :)
2014-12-03 18:50 Sky Trias: ok :)
2014-12-03 18:51 Sky Trias: lagunya ??
2014-12-03 18:51 El SolarBeam: akhir" ini kekurangan testplayer haha
2014-12-03 18:51 El SolarBeam: ACTION is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/520698 Marika - Soul Release]
2014-12-03 18:51 Sky Trias: hahaha ok :)
2014-12-03 18:52 Sky Trias: ACTION is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/520698 Marika - Soul Release]
2014-12-03 18:56 El SolarBeam: gimana, kalo ada bagian yg nyesek bilang aja hhe
2014-12-03 18:57 Sky Trias: ok sip :)
2014-12-03 18:57 Sky Trias: modding nih ceritanya xD
2014-12-03 18:58 Sky Trias: ok nice :)
2014-12-03 18:59 El SolarBeam: butuh masukan aja sih, tapi kalo pengen mod juga boleh xD
2014-12-03 19:01 Sky Trias: 00:10:120 (1) - ga seharusnya di pas in sama 00:10:439 (2) -
2014-12-03 19:01 El SolarBeam: *buka catatan
2014-12-03 19:05 Sky Trias: ... test hitsoundnya ya
2014-12-03 19:06 El SolarBeam: ok
2014-12-03 19:08 Sky Trias: 00:13:630 (1) - whistle?
2014-12-03 19:09 El SolarBeam: hm, clap fits better imo
2014-12-03 19:09 Sky Trias: ehh ok :)
2014-12-03 19:10 Sky Trias: 01:09:801 (4) - finish ?
2014-12-03 19:12 Sky Trias: 00:31:822 (1) - whistle + 00:32:141 (2) - finish ?
2014-12-03 19:13 El SolarBeam: rasanya agak janggal sih nyimpen finish di tengah part lagu, tapi nanti saya pikir" :)
2014-12-03 19:14 Sky Trias: 01:29:907 (6) - ga jadiin slider aja ?
2014-12-03 19:14 Sky Trias: ok
2014-12-03 19:14 El SolarBeam: haha, itu namanya teknik anti-jump
2014-12-03 19:15 El SolarBeam: jadi ga selamanya perlu sama slider
2014-12-03 19:15 Sky Trias: ok .. agak ngestack sih kalo dilihat di edit xD
2014-12-03 19:16 El SolarBeam: iya sih, kalo di editor keliatannya kurang cantik x)
2014-12-03 19:16 El SolarBeam: tapi yg penting gameplay hhe
2014-12-03 19:18 Sky Trias: 03:16:662 (2,4) - ga di ctrl+g?
2014-12-03 19:19 Sky Trias: kayaknya sih flownya agak enak sedikit ..
2014-12-03 19:21 El SolarBeam: hm boleh juga, nanti saya coba edit sedikit
2014-12-03 19:21 El SolarBeam: nice catch xD
2014-12-03 19:21 Sky Trias: HP drain nya kurang tinggi tuh :) coba di jadiin 7 aja .. menurut saya :p
2014-12-03 19:22 Sky Trias: sebelumnya aku ga pernah irc ;-; gmana nih?
2014-12-03 19:23 El SolarBeam: hm, udah dicek option save chatlognya?
2014-12-03 19:23 Sky Trias: belum
2014-12-03 19:23 Sky Trias: sekarang udah
2014-12-03 19:24 El SolarBeam: wah ga ke-save sih kalo baru sekarang wkwk
2014-12-03 19:24 El SolarBeam: bentar saya upload notepad-nya
2014-12-03 19:24 Sky Trias: ok :3
2014-12-03 19:32 Sky Trias: err .. 00:50:971 (6) - ctrl+g?
2014-12-03 19:33 Sky Trias: 00:54:801 (1) - ini memang ngikutin 00:53:684 (2) - ?? kalo menurut saya sih lebih baik di ctrl+g .. :)
2014-12-03 19:34 El SolarBeam: itu sengaja sih, jadi flownya membentuk lingkaran~
2014-12-03 19:34 El SolarBeam: (coba aja ikutin notenya di gameplay)
2014-12-03 19:38 Sky Trias: btw ane mau makan dulu ;) mungkin segitu aja .. oh iya .. nanti tambahan buat hardnya aku tulis di post :)

owo)b Good Luck ! ;)
Shiranai
Helloooo
Not 14045 here~

[General]
Clear!

[Easy]
  1. I think you over use this slider http://puu.sh/dhTZi/27732d5986.jpg why not use 1/1 slider instead? sometimes I hear the rhythm not fit with the song e.g. 00:19:056 (1,2) - Well it's still playable though but since it's lowest diff maybe you can use simple rhythm
  2. 00:23:684 (5) - Add whistle on head? I hear drum sound begin to hit there
  3. 00:33:896 (2) - Delete clap on tail? it's better just use whistle
  4. 00:34:375 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1) - The hitsound not really fit with the song especialy drum sound, so I sugest: 00:34:854 (2) - Add clap on tail, 00:35:332 (3) - Swap the clap from head to tail, 00:35:811 (4) - Swap the clap from tail to head, 00:36:290 (5) - Swap the clap from tail to head, 00:37:407 (2) - Add clap on tail, 00:37:885 (3) - Swap clap from head to tail, 00:38:843 (5) - Add clap on head, 00:39:960 (2) - Add clap on tail, 00:40:439 (3) - Swap clap from head to tail, 00:40:918 (4) - Swap clap from tail to head, 00:41:396 (5) - Add clap. The one I sugest is based on drum sound and I think it'll sound better
  5. 01:25:758 (2) - Add clap and whistle on tail
  6. 01:27:513 (5) - 01:37:726 (5) - 01:32:619 (4) - Add clap on head?
  7. 01:38:204 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1) - And again the hitsound on that part very odd, I sugest 01:38:683 (2) - Add clap on tail, 01:39:162 (3) - Swap clap from head to tail, 01:39:641 (4) - Swap clap from tail to head, 01:40:119 (5) - Swap clap from tail to head, 01:41:237 (2) - Add clap on tail, 01:41:715 (3) - Swap clap from head to tail, 01:42:194 (4) - Swap clap from tail to head, 01:42:672 (5) - Add clap on head, 01:43:789 (2) - Add clap on tail, 01:44:268 (3) - Swap clap from head to tail, 01:44:747 (4) - Swap clap from tail to head, 01:45:225 (5) - Add clap
  8. 01:48:098 (5) - Delete clap? it's better without, since there's only bass sound there
  9. 02:10:917 (3) - Add clap on head
  10. Completely pull the break up to here 02:11:396 -
The rest looks fine but this kind of Easy is prety hard as the lowest diff, sorry just focus on hitsound that I think can be improved

[Normal]
  1. Set pake AR 5 aja kak, agak lebay kalo AR 6 apalagi slider speednya dan bpmnya lumayan tinggi
  2. 00:01:184 (1) - Kayanya lingkarannya kurang melingkar kak, yang bagian bawah khususnya
  3. 00:01:184 (1) - Add whistle and clap on tail
  4. 00:35:013 (3) - Add clap on reverse
  5. 00:36:928 (1,2,3) - Ritmenya bagusnya kaya gini kak http://puu.sh/diAYY/d6cc5f4445.jpg dengan hitsound (1) pake whistle, (2) kosong, (3) tambah clap di awal sama reverse, soalnya mengikuti ritme sebelumnya 00:34:056 (1,2,3,4) -
  6. 01:38:843 (3) - Add clap on reverse
  7. 02:00:864 (1,2) - Kak kalo dibuat blanket bagaimana? di kebawahin dikit gitu, lagian engga ngeganggu flownya kok. Ada beberapa yang kaya gitu lagi e.g. 02:41:396 (4,1) - , tp nanti dikirain nasi mod XD
  8. 02:06:928 (4) - Add clap on head, karena ritmenya sama kaya sebelumnya 02:04:375 (2,3) - Then add clap here on head 02:07:726 (5) - terlebih nadanya sama kaya bagian kiai selanjutnya 03:35:971 (1,2,3,4) -
  9. 02:20:652 (3) - Add finish on head? I hear finish faintly there
  10. 02:30:545 (5) - Add finish on tail, same reason
I'm not doing nasi mod there, just matter of opinion imo

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Your drain time is exceed mine, so I just mod two diff, but if I'll take a look on hard and Insane later :)
mana vayne
mod
17:55 *mana vayne is watching [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/520698 Marika - Soul Release [Insane]]
2014-12-06 17:56 mana vayne: mau ku gan
2014-12-06 17:56 mana vayne: ganti patternnya
2014-12-06 17:57 El SolarBeam: lol gapapa sih
2014-12-06 17:58 mana vayne: ada pattern mu susah di baca hue
2014-12-06 17:58 El SolarBeam: awkwk stream kah
2014-12-06 17:59 mana vayne: y sama jumpnya kwkwkw
2014-12-06 17:59 El SolarBeam: coba yg mana, barangkali jadi masukan
2014-12-06 18:01 mana vayne: sol kamu bisa gak suara tick rate disini di kecilin
2014-12-06 18:01 mana vayne: 00:01:184
2014-12-06 18:02 El SolarBeam: ooh, boleh
2014-12-06 18:03 El SolarBeam: *irc mod aja sekalian hhe
2014-12-06 18:04 mana vayne: lel jadi w mod nih
2014-12-06 18:04 El SolarBeam: lagi butuh sp nih wkwkw
2014-12-06 18:04 El SolarBeam: 1 diff juga gapapa deh
2014-12-06 18:06 mana vayne: y wes ntar dulu deh lagi mau maem
2014-12-06 18:07 El SolarBeam: woke /o/
2014-12-06 18:16 mana vayne: uda kamu tambahin kah nada suaranya
2014-12-06 18:17 mana vayne: kecilin tick ratenya
2014-12-06 18:18 El SolarBeam: sip
2014-12-06 18:19 mana vayne: 00:28:949 (5,6) - sejajar kayak gini http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2314950
2014-12-06 18:20 El SolarBeam: blanketnya jadi lepas sih, tapi saya pikir2 dulu
2014-12-06 18:22 mana vayne: ok deh
2014-12-06 18:29 mana vayne: oh yeah fik 00:35:811 (5,7) - napa gak dipass kan ma sllider
2014-12-06 18:29 mana vayne: 7 nya gak
2014-12-06 18:29 mana vayne: 00:37:407 (2) - sama ^
2014-12-06 18:30 El SolarBeam: oiya, yg itu sebenernya udah fixed, tapi belum diupdate
2014-12-06 18:30 El SolarBeam: nice catch btw
2014-12-06 18:30 mana vayne: ini juga leh
2014-12-06 18:31 mana vayne: 00:44:588 (1) - maju kan ke depan deh dikit ya atur streamnya sama kaya 8,9,10
2014-12-06 18:31 El SolarBeam: hm, disitu ada SV change jadi sengaja agak dipisah gan
2014-12-06 18:34 mana vayne: 01:41:237 (2) - pass kan slider deh (kalau mau )
2014-12-06 18:34 mana vayne: atau uda di fix ?
2014-12-06 18:35 El SolarBeam: lupa wkwk, tapi kayaknya udah
2014-12-06 18:47 mana vayne: 01:29:747 bagian ini emang di kosongin ye
2014-12-06 18:48 mana vayne: 01:29:747
2014-12-06 18:48 El SolarBeam: sengaja itu, buat pattern antijump
2014-12-06 18:49 mana vayne: fiq di 01:30:386 (8) - itu x sama y mu berapa ?
2014-12-06 18:50 El SolarBeam: x: 404 | y:124
2014-12-06 18:51 mana vayne: ganti deh jadi x: 404 y :136
2014-12-06 18:52 El SolarBeam: tapi jarak ke slidernya jadi ga konsisten?
2014-12-06 18:53 mana vayne: lihat lah
2014-12-06 18:53 mana vayne: kalau menurut ku sih konsisten tapi gak tahu kamu
2014-12-06 18:54 El SolarBeam: umkay
2014-12-06 18:54 mana vayne: btw stream yang masih berhambur di rapiin donk fiq
2014-12-06 18:55 mana vayne: inb4 bagian sini w bingun lol 01:36:928 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) -
2014-12-06 18:55 El SolarBeam: lol berhambur
2014-12-06 18:55 El SolarBeam: ok
2014-12-06 18:59 mana vayne: 00:33:258 (1,2,3,4,5) - bagian ini kamu sengaja dekat ma slider 1 (hijau) ?
2014-12-06 19:00 El SolarBeam: sengaja nempel, biar gampang ditangkep
2014-12-06 19:02 mana vayne: ok deh segitu aja yang bermasalah (kayaknya)
2014-12-06 19:03 El SolarBeam: wogh sip thanks o7
17:55 *mana vayne is watching [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/520698 Marika - Soul Release [Insane]]
2014-12-06 17:56 mana vayne: mau ku gan
2014-12-06 17:56 mana vayne: ganti patternnya
2014-12-06 17:57 El SolarBeam: lol gapapa sih
2014-12-06 17:58 mana vayne: ada pattern mu susah di baca hue
2014-12-06 17:58 El SolarBeam: awkwk stream kah
2014-12-06 17:59 mana vayne: y sama jumpnya kwkwkw
2014-12-06 17:59 El SolarBeam: coba yg mana, barangkali jadi masukan
2014-12-06 18:01 mana vayne: sol kamu bisa gak suara tick rate disini di kecilin
2014-12-06 18:01 mana vayne: 00:01:184
2014-12-06 18:02 El SolarBeam: ooh, boleh
2014-12-06 18:03 El SolarBeam: *irc mod aja sekalian hhe
2014-12-06 18:04 mana vayne: lel jadi w mod nih
2014-12-06 18:04 El SolarBeam: lagi butuh sp nih wkwkw
2014-12-06 18:04 El SolarBeam: 1 diff juga gapapa deh
2014-12-06 18:06 mana vayne: y wes ntar dulu deh lagi mau maem
2014-12-06 18:07 El SolarBeam: woke /o/
2014-12-06 18:16 mana vayne: uda kamu tambahin kah nada suaranya
2014-12-06 18:17 mana vayne: kecilin tick ratenya
2014-12-06 18:18 El SolarBeam: sip
2014-12-06 18:19 mana vayne: 00:28:949 (5,6) - sejajar kayak gini http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2314950
2014-12-06 18:20 El SolarBeam: blanketnya jadi lepas sih, tapi saya pikir2 dulu
2014-12-06 18:22 mana vayne: ok deh
2014-12-06 18:29 mana vayne: oh yeah fik 00:35:811 (5,7) - napa gak dipass kan ma sllider
2014-12-06 18:29 mana vayne: 7 nya gak
2014-12-06 18:29 mana vayne: 00:37:407 (2) - sama ^
2014-12-06 18:30 El SolarBeam: oiya, yg itu sebenernya udah fixed, tapi belum diupdate
2014-12-06 18:30 El SolarBeam: nice catch btw
2014-12-06 18:30 mana vayne: ini juga leh
2014-12-06 18:31 mana vayne: 00:44:588 (1) - maju kan ke depan deh dikit ya atur streamnya sama kaya 8,9,10
2014-12-06 18:31 El SolarBeam: hm, disitu ada SV change jadi sengaja agak dipisah gan
2014-12-06 18:34 mana vayne: 01:41:237 (2) - pass kan slider deh (kalau mau )
2014-12-06 18:34 mana vayne: atau uda di fix ?
2014-12-06 18:35 El SolarBeam: lupa wkwk, tapi kayaknya udah
2014-12-06 18:47 mana vayne: 01:29:747 bagian ini emang di kosongin ye
2014-12-06 18:48 mana vayne: 01:29:747
2014-12-06 18:48 El SolarBeam: sengaja itu, buat pattern antijump
2014-12-06 18:49 mana vayne: fiq di 01:30:386 (8) - itu x sama y mu berapa ?
2014-12-06 18:50 El SolarBeam: x: 404 | y:124
2014-12-06 18:51 mana vayne: ganti deh jadi x: 404 y :136
2014-12-06 18:52 El SolarBeam: tapi jarak ke slidernya jadi ga konsisten?
2014-12-06 18:53 mana vayne: lihat lah
2014-12-06 18:53 mana vayne: kalau menurut ku sih konsisten tapi gak tahu kamu
2014-12-06 18:54 El SolarBeam: umkay
2014-12-06 18:54 mana vayne: btw stream yang masih berhambur di rapiin donk fiq
2014-12-06 18:55 mana vayne: inb4 bagian sini w bingun lol 01:36:928 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) -
2014-12-06 18:55 El SolarBeam: lol berhambur
2014-12-06 18:55 El SolarBeam: ok
2014-12-06 18:59 mana vayne: 00:33:258 (1,2,3,4,5) - bagian ini kamu sengaja dekat ma slider 1 (hijau) ?
2014-12-06 19:00 El SolarBeam: sengaja nempel, biar gampang ditangkep
2014-12-06 19:02 mana vayne: ok deh segitu aja yang bermasalah (kayaknya)
2014-12-06 19:03 El SolarBeam: wogh sip thanks o7
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Topic Starter
El SolarBeam

Saut wrote:

yo, as requested



  • [General]
  1. a consistent increase of the stars (CS,AR,OD,HD) would be cool - easy and normal are quite close to each other followed by a "huge" gap and than same goes with hard and insane. (hm yes, I'll start thinking about it after someone give this bubble)
  2. what about some sexy custom colors? (fixed)
  3. more than 1/3 of the map is covered in kai time -could be a problem at ranking later on. (nah, I've just do what the music provides, no problem about it until now)


  • [Normal]
  1. 00:19:375 (2,4) - blankiniooo (fixed)
  2. 00:32:141 (1,2,3,4) - perfect square would look pretty badass (nope, I squared it with the previous slider, and besides it would ruin the blanket to the next slider)
  3. 00:59:907 (1,2) - http://prntscr.com/5bdw76 - little correction, looks better in my opinion :d (01:01:024 (2,3) - would also fit to this one then) (looks nice, but I still can't find way to manipulate the spacing)
  4. 01:03:737 (5,6,1) - http://prntscr.com/5bdzzd what about this? (nice!)
  5. 01:36:928 (4,1) - blanket (no, it doesn't meant to be)
  6. 01:38:843 (3,1) - also check some of your stackings (nah, it's fine and nobody will notice anyway)
  7. 02:36:928 (6) - whistle (well I'm sure I've added it)


  • [Insane]
  1. 00:05:013 (1,2) - ds of them is 1,37 so this 00:05:332 (3,4) - (slider end and (4)) should also have ~1,37 ds (nah, it's meant to emphasize the static tone of the music so it's intentionally have different DS)
  2. 01:00:545 (3,4,5) - this is beautiful (thanks~)
  3. 01:17:460 (4,5,6,7,8) - sounds badass with claps at 4 and 6 (fixed)
  4. 02:38:524 (3,4,5) - 4 should be 3 rotated by -120° and 5 should be 3 rotated by 120° (fixed with my own way)
  5. 02:52:407 (1,1) - i dont get why u do dis (and I don't get what's your point)

    im running out of time but the rest seems pretty fine to me

If I find some more time+motivation i will edit this post and add the hard diff mod (and maybe some more aspects at the insane diff)
I hope my mod was still somehow useful and good luck at ranking!

Saut

Neil Leo wrote:

From NLMQ

[Insane]
02:31:024 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Make slider? (I don't think it's necessary)
03:19:375 (7) - Ctrl+G (nope, it would break the flow)
03:12:992 (2) - ^

Well, that was a short mod. GL on map

Mako Sakata wrote:

Helloooo
Not 14045 here~ (awkwkw)

[Normal]
  1. Set pake AR 5 aja kak, agak lebay kalo AR 6 apalagi slider speednya dan bpmnya lumayan tinggi (sebenernya justru gara" BPMnya tinggi ARnya juga seharusnya ikut tinggi, ok 5.5 aja deh biar imbang)
  2. 00:01:184 (1) - Kayanya lingkarannya kurang melingkar kak, yang bagian bawah khususnya (iya kah, tapi gapapa gaakan terlalu keliatan sih hhe)
  3. 00:01:184 (1) - Add whistle and clap on tail (fixed)
  4. 00:35:013 (3) - Add clap on reverse (suaranya terlalu keras kak kalo pake clap)
  5. 00:36:928 (1,2,3) - Ritmenya bagusnya kaya gini kak http://puu.sh/diAYY/d6cc5f4445.jpg dengan hitsound (1) pake whistle, (2) kosong, (3) tambah clap di awal sama reverse, soalnya mengikuti ritme sebelumnya 00:34:056 (1,2,3,4) - (sip kak)
  6. 01:38:843 (3) - Add clap on reverse (sda)
  7. 02:00:864 (1,2) - Kak kalo dibuat blanket bagaimana? di kebawahin dikit gitu, lagian engga ngeganggu flownya kok. Ada beberapa yang kaya gitu lagi e.g. 02:41:396 (4,1) - , tp nanti dikirain nasi mod XD (ah ga masalah sih kak, emang sengaja itu hhe)
  8. 02:06:928 (4) - Add clap on head, karena ritmenya sama kaya sebelumnya 02:04:375 (2,3) - Then add clap here on head 02:07:726 (5) - terlebih nadanya sama kaya bagian kiai selanjutnya 03:35:971 (1,2,3,4) - (awkwk kelupaan, makasih kak)
  9. 02:20:652 (3) - Add finish on head? I hear finish faintly there (terlalu keras kak kalo dikasih finish)
  10. 02:30:545 (5) - Add finish on tail, same reason (sama)
I'm not doing nasi mod there, just matter of opinion imo (namanya nazi kak, bukan nasi hhe)

[]
Your drain time is exceed mine, so I just mod two diff, but if I'll take a look on hard and Insane later :)
thanks everyone for your helpful mods!
sorry I can't reply irc mods properly since it's too tiring to copy-paste it again, but I ensure you I've fixed some of them
Yumeno Himiko
lol pm req~

[General]
Personally, I think the gap between Easy and Normal diff is a bit small, consider to make Easy a bit easier 0.0

[Ts8zs's Easy]
00:07:088 (2,3) - blanket
00:10:758 (4,1) - blanket when you fixed the blanket -> 00:12:992 (3) - stack
00:23:205 (4,5) - patterns like this can be replaced by a long slider, to make the Easy diff a bit easier. The Easy diff now seems a bit hard.
00:34:375 (1,2,3,4) - ^
00:36:928 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - ^ really needs a change or it's hard for newbies to play
a recommended rhythm here:
SPOILER
the original pattern:
the modified pattern:
00:41:396 (5,1) - blanket
00:56:715 (3,1) - blanket
01:06:290 (2,3) - a confusing pattern, since it's hard for newbies to react on a reverse which reverses for more than one time.
01:07:566 (1,2) - blanket
01:17:779 (1) - why not remove this spin and leave a break? Since it's an Easy diff
01:33:098 (1,2,3,1) - keep the DS
01:38:204 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - same as what I said above
01:59:268 (2,3) - blanket
02:06:928 (3,4) - blanket
02:10:119 (2,3) - same stuff has been mentioned above
02:31:822 (1,3) - blanket
02:41:715 (4,1,2) - move slider one and two a little bit left to make it look cleaner
02:45:864 (3,4,5) - It's a reallyyyyyyyyy confusing stuff! fix it right now! There are instument sounds on 02:46:024 02:46:184 why not make a regular slider?
03:09:481 (3,1) - blanket
03:10:758 (2,1) - blanket
03:17:779 (1,2) - blanket
03:19:694 (3,4) - blanket
03:28:630 (2,3,1) - blanket
03:31:183 (2,1) - blanket
03:39:481 (2,3) - mentioned above
03:47:778 (4,1) - blanket

Overall it's a nice diff~ Sorry for so many nazis

[Normal]
00:05:013 (3) - move 3 a bit right like this, to make the flow more fluent
00:07:566 (3,4,1) - This pattern can be more symmetrical~
00:11:396 (1,2) - blanket
00:25:120 (3,4) - blanket
00:29:269 (1,2,3) - symmetrical?
00:39:481 (1,2,3) - This flow feels bad~~ Try a flow like this?
01:11:396 (3) - It's better moved left
01:12:035 (4) - why not blanket with 01:11:396 (3) - ?
01:13:949 (3) - yes move right plz ;w;
01:23:524 (2,3) - I admit this is not so goodlooking :o
01:26:077 (2,3) - blanket
01:31:822 (2,3) - This comes like a surprise =A= Consider place more patterns like this or just kill this pattern
01:37:886 (1) - moving right makes this pattern look better and also make full use of the space here
01:53:843 (2,3) - blanket
01:59:907 (4) - move it left
02:19:056 (1) - rotate about 10° 02:19:056 (1,1) - consider stack the tail
02:23:843 (4,3) - A stack
02:48:737 (4) - rotate a bit
02:57:354 (1,1) - delete them and leave a break there~
03:44:588 (3,4) - :o

Honestly, I think this diff needs more work qaq Ganbare~

[UWS's Hard]
00:13:949 (1) - I guess it's better for this slider to have a curve since the instument's volume is going down here~ A straight slider just feel a bit fast
00:24:801 (3) - What about placing it like this? I guess it feels better
00:47:779 (4,5) - having curves look better?
02:00:226 (2,1) - A stack?
03:22:566 (5,1) - place the slider better?

Nothing serious to say here~ A nice diff~

[Insane]
00:05:332 (3,4) - Increase the DS between them
00:15:864 (8) - ctrl + G will feel better, in this case you can refer to the pic, I think this flow is better, also stack 00:15:705 (7,1)
00:24:801 (3) - make it two circles with a jump
00:39:003 (7,9) - blanket
01:02:141 (1) - I guess this note is not looking so good
02:39:960 (3,4,5) - place this pattern better XD
02:39:162 (5,1) - stack

the patterns in the later part of this diff looks nice lol


That's all ~ Good Luck www :)
Topic Starter
El SolarBeam
wooh finally another full check \o/

I'll try remapping the normal since it's not going like I want to be nah, I feel high now

examination wrote:

lol pm req~

[General]
Personally, I think the gap between Easy and Normal diff is a bit small, consider to make Easy a bit easier 0.0 (made the normal harder instead)

[Normal]
Honestly, I think this diff needs more work qaq Ganbare~ (< maybe you just have to be this straightforward just like this from now on heheh)

[Insane]
00:05:332 (3,4) - Increase the DS between them (nah, it's intended to emphasize the static tone atm)
00:15:864 (8) - ctrl + G will feel better, in this case you can refer to the pic, I think this flow is better, also stack 00:15:705 (7,1) - (oh, nice idea I have to admit)
00:24:801 (3) - make it two circles with a jump (well it's not like it's a bad idea but both the head and the tail doesn't have that much tone different so doesn't suit that well imo)
00:39:003 (7,9) - blanket (tbh doesn't really hoping blanket mod on insane diff but fine, considering it as a hard work)
01:02:141 (1) - I guess this note is not looking so good (it's an interesting pattern to play at least)
02:39:960 (3,4,5) - place this pattern better XD (fixed, I suppose ww)
02:39:162 (5,1) - stack (fixed, lol though that's far)

the patterns in the later part of this diff looks nice lol (thanks~)


That's all ~ Good Luck www :)
thanks for the mod and sorry for my selfishness ww
RandF
From my queue~

[Normal]
  1. 00:34:056 (1,2) - swap NC. add NC at melody changing point
  2. 01:37:886 (1,2) - ^
  3. 01:47:779 (1,2) - ^
  4. 03:17:460 (1,2) - ^
  5. 00:55:918 (4,1) - avoid this overlapping
  6. 01:17:460 (5) - i prefer a circle not 1/2 slider
  7. 01:22:566 (1) - I prefer to delete
  8. 01:31:503 (3,4) - following vocal is better, imo. suggeion~
  9. 01:58:630 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - rhythm suggetion
  10. 02:06:928 (5,6) - a little hard to find rhythm. howa about this
  11. ?
[Insane]
  1. 00:13:630 (1,2) - swap NC
  2. 00:21:130- add a note
  3. 00:24:801 (3) - how about Ctrl+G?
  4. 00:32:779 (1) - mmm, this SV changing is not suitable for music, imo
  5. 00:34:056 (1,2) - swap NC
  6. 00:44:508 (10,1) - make DS short
  7. 01:04:375 (10,11,1) - ^ I prefer to overlap
  8. 01:31:822- add a note (I recommend to stack on the head of 01:31:981 (1) - )
  9. 01:37:886 (1,2) - swap NC
  10. 02:27:992 (9) - NC. combo per 8 is good looking
  11. 03:17:460 (1,2) - swap NC
[Ts8zs' Easy]
  1. 01:25:439 ~ 02:03:418- almost same pattern as 00:21:609 ~ 00:59:588- . that's so boring
  2. 02:57:354 ~ ^
  3. 02:46:343 (4) - hard to find rhythm for beginner. 1/1 pattern is better
  4. 02:52:247 (1) - end at 02:56:077
[UWS's Hard]
  1. 00:22:566 (3) - I prefer to stack on 00:21:928 (2) - like 00:19:375 (2,3,4,5) -
  2. 01:42:354- finish is on purpose?
  3. 02:17:141 (5) - I prefer to stack on the head of 02:17:301 (6) -
  4. 03:27:035 (3,4,5) - a little confusing because of continuous stack pattern at this part. so, why not avoid correct stack?
  5. 03:35:013 (5,2) - stack correctly
~Good Luck~
Topic Starter
El SolarBeam

RandomEffect wrote:

From my queue~ (まさか図星かww。ところでRandomEffect 久しぶりー)

[Normal]
  1. 00:34:056 (1,2) - swap NC. add NC at melody changing point(でもupbeat(white tick)に NCを使ってのほうがいいよ)
  2. 01:37:886 (1,2) - ^ (えと、実はどちでもいいよ、私そのNCパターンよく使う)
  3. 01:47:779 (1,2) - ^
  4. 03:17:460 (1,2) - ^
  5. 00:55:918 (4,1) - avoid this overlapping (まぁ、そうだね。直した)
  6. 01:17:460 (5) - i prefer a circle not 1/2 slider (え、でもcircleを使ったら格好わるくなるだと思う)
  7. 01:22:566 (1) - I prefer to delete (そのsliderを消えったらちょうど誤魔化すると難しくなるだと思う)
  8. 01:31:503 (3,4) - following vocal is better, imo. suggeion~ (まぁ、それはいいけど、sliderのほうが簡単にフォローできるだと思う)
  9. 01:58:630 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - rhythm suggetion (直した)
  10. 02:06:928 (5,6) - a little hard to find rhythm. howa about this? (どうかな、フォローすることはちょっと難しい)
[Insane]
  1. 00:13:630 (1,2) - swap NC (直した)
  2. 00:21:130- add a note (でもそこはbeatがないよ)
  3. 00:24:801 (3) - how about Ctrl+G? (DSは変になってから、それでいいさ)
  4. 00:32:779 (1) - mmm, this SV changing is not suitable for music, imo (私にとっていいけど、あとで考える)
  5. 00:34:056 (1,2) - swap NC (normalと同じ理解)
  6. 00:44:508 (10,1) - make DS short (それはSV changeがあるから)
  7. 01:04:375 (10,11,1) - ^ I prefer to overlap (いえ、そのパターンは面白いからww)
  8. 01:31:822- add a note (I recommend to stack on the head of 01:31:981 (1) - ) (でもdrumの音がないよ(私それをフォローするから))
  9. 01:37:886 (1,2) - swap NC (normalと同じ理解)
  10. 02:27:992 (9) - NC. combo per 8 is good looking (あ、そうだ。忘れてたw)
  11. 03:17:460 (1,2) - swap NC (normalと同じ理解)
~Good Luck~
modありがとうー
- Milhofo -
Hi, from my modding queue :)

!! - Very Important
!! - Important

[General]
  1. The easy and normal diffs are a bit hard for the difficulty they should be, I'd even consider them as normal and hard diffs, respectively.
  2. OD on Insane could be pushed to 8 imo
[Ts8zs' Easy]
  1. 02:45:864 (3) - this single note breaks consistency since you've been using sliders the rest of the song !!
  2. 02:46:343 (4) - is a bit too close to 02:47:141 (1)
  3. 02:47:141 (1,4) - that overlap could have been done better !!
  4. Nothing else, pretty good map, maybe just a bit too hard for an easy
[Normal]
  1. imo the spacing between notes should be lower, and the SV seems a bit too fast in some parts (for a normal diff) !!
  2. 01:00:226 (2) - move a bit to the left and down, eg x:264 y:64
  3. 01:05:013 (1,2) - this overlap is a bit ugly, maybe rotate 1
  4. 01:12:673 (1) - not sure if the tip is actually in time with the guitar (if that's what you are trying to achieve)
  5. 01:06:290 (4) - this could be matched with 03:39:481 (4,5) , the first one feels too long !!
  6. Overall I think the map could have been polished better here and there, the spacings variate a bit too much and some parts could have followed the vocals instead of the instrumental, but doesn't mean I didn't like it ^^
[UWS's Hard]
  1. 00:46:822 (1,3) - blanket?
  2. 00:57:035 (1) - you could pull this down to blanket 00:56:715 (8) like this:
  3. 02:00:226 (2,1) - bad overlap
  4. 02:02:141 (6,1) - possible blanket
  5. 02:04:854 (4,2) - ugly overlap
  6. 02:11:396 (1,3) - ^ rotating 3 just a bit would help
  7. nothing else, fun map
[Insane]
  1. you probably heard this a lot but I think a spinner fits better than 00:01:184 (1) xd
  2. 00:11:077 (4,3) - possible overlap
  3. I think 00:32:779 (1) should be further from 00:33:258 (1) , always missing the timing like this >.<
  4. 00:44:508 (10,1) - why are these so far apart? (comparing to the rest of the stream) !!
  5. 01:17:460 (4,5,6,7,8) - you make it so people that spin clockwise have a hard time (me ; ;)
  6. 01:44:428 (4,5) - blanket
  7. 02:04:375 (3,5) - these are not perfectly overlapped (how did I even notice this ?!)
  8. 02:31:104 (4) - this note isn't actually played by the drums, so the stream is too long !!
  9. nothing else, this is by far the best map of the set, so much fun it deserves a star :3
I wasn't thinking on modding every diff but I guess I got carried away lol, hope the mod helps somehow, the Insane diff was great gl on getting it ranked o/
Topic Starter
El SolarBeam

Milhofo wrote:

Hi, from my modding queue :)

!! - Very Important
!! - Important

[General]
  1. The easy and normal diffs are a bit hard for the difficulty they should be, I'd even consider them as normal and hard diffs, respectively. (it's fine though, most maps with >180BPM have this much of cruelty)
  2. OD on Insane could be pushed to 8 imo (haha pro, sure I'd consider since the insane has same OD with hard)
[Normal]
  1. imo the spacing between notes should be lower, and the SV seems a bit too fast in some parts (for a normal diff) !! (how come, I've made it to be single SV so there's no way it would be too fast in "some part")
  2. 01:00:226 (2) - move a bit to the left and down, eg x:264 y:64 (it would ruin the DS instead, since I'm using 1.2x DS there)
  3. 01:05:013 (1,2) - this overlap is a bit ugly, maybe rotate 1 (this kind of overlap is a common style, try to analyze more maps)
  4. 01:12:673 (1) - not sure if the tip is actually in time with the guitar (if that's what you are trying to achieve) (I'm trying to achieve the drum on the tip, along with guitar sound on the whole slider)
  5. 01:06:290 (4) - this could be matched with 03:39:481 (4,5) , the first one feels too long !! (it's the same in general thought, but let's consider later)
  6. Overall I think the map could have been polished better here and there, the spacings variate a bit too much and some parts could have followed the vocals instead of the instrumental, but doesn't mean I didn't like it ^^ (actually following the instrument gives the map more feels to it, don't worry I'm sure you'll understand later :3)
[Insane]
  1. you probably heard this a lot but I think a spinner fits better than 00:01:184 (1) xd (well, it's my own preference but thanks for the advice haha)
  2. 00:11:077 (4,3) - possible overlap (that's why I'm using AR9.2 so people wouldn't notice it in gameplay)
  3. I think 00:32:779 (1) should be further from 00:33:258 (1) , always missing the timing like this >.< (sure)
  4. 00:44:508 (10,1) - why are these so far apart? (comparing to the rest of the stream) !! (because of the SV change)
  5. 01:17:460 (4,5,6,7,8) - you make it so people that spin clockwise have a hard time (me ;; ) (haha you realized? ;) )
  6. 01:44:428 (4,5) - blanket (I think blanket isn't that necessary on the insane diff)
  7. 02:04:375 (3,5) - these are not perfectly overlapped (how did I even notice this ?!) (well, if you mean "stacked", then you're right)
  8. 02:31:104 (4) - this note isn't actually played by the drums, so the stream is too long !! (well I like it though, I'll consider if another mod asks me to change it)
  9. nothing else, this is by far the best map of the set, so much fun it deserves a star :3 (thanks a bunch~)
I wasn't thinking on modding every diff but I guess I got carried away lol, hope the mod helps somehow, the Insane diff was great gl on getting it ranked o/
thanks for the mod and star!
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