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Moved to Pending~

hello~

Unrankable issues
Highly recommend to fix
Common sugestions

General
omg why can't I see the bitrate of the mp3 file = = I should confirm with some other guys checked with other programs http://puu.sh/geWUS/f94540d76d.png the bitrate should be 192 but I'm not sure if the current mp3 file is safe for rank discussed with QATs and it should be ok
the combo colors seem a bit too bright on this bg, try using the code below? (turned the colors darker)

[Colours]
Combo1 : 255,87,255
Combo2 : 17,255,255
Combo3 : 36,255,36
Combo4 : 255,112,43

Collab
00:18:740 - raise the volume to 30% from this point? cause as the music becomes louder, 00:19:213 (2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - become less audiable
00:43:780 (3) - this jump feels kinda big, maybe move it to around (196,368)?
00:48:622 (6) - change it into a 1/4 slider, or two circles? because I think the beat at 00:48:740 - is more important than 00:48:858 -
00:52:166 (6) - clap sounds better here
00:59:725 (1) - similar to above, better add clap here
01:03:504 - ^
01:09:173 (1) - the rhythm here seems wrong, I think there's no beat at 01:09:233 - , but rather at 01:09:351 - . I mean this 1/8 slider should better be moved to 01:09:292 - and a circle could be added at 01:09:173 - instead like
01:10:827 (5) - clap on head instead should fit the music better imo
01:16:969 (4) - clap sounds better than whistle here
01:17:559 (2,3) - maybe CTRL+G ?
01:20:276 - clap sounds better here
01:24:055 (2) - ^
01:31:969 - ^
01:53:229 (1,2) - spacing feels a bit too small, I misread it as 1/2 jump when testing. maybe use 1.5x spacing between 01:53:229 (1,2,3) -
02:10:236 - why a clap here? better remove it imo
02:18:740 (3) - it would fit the music better if it ends 1/4 beat earlier (or use two circles). then you can move the clap to 02:18:858 - and use whistle at 02:18:740 - instead
02:22:638 (5,6) - try to use clap instead for these two notes, it would sound much better!
02:26:418 (4,5) - ^
02:25:355 (1,2) - spacing seems quite small comparing to the other 1/2-beat spacing in this part such as 02:21:575 (1,2) - and else, maybe move 02:26:063 (2,3,4) - together to around (84,232)?
02:35:866 - might want to add a clap here for the drums
02:50:866 (1,2) - maybe it's only me, but I feel that these notes are kinda hard to read because they stick too close to each other, maybe move 02:50:866 (1) - lower to (8,260)?
03:07:166 (2) - I think clap sounds better than whistle here
03:33:622 (6) - ^
03:43:071 - why dragging the breaktime here? I don't think it's necessary
04:12:244 - I think clap would sound better at this point, and on 04:12:717 (4) -
04:19:803 (2) - ^
04:22:284 (5,1) - don't really like this stack, I'd rather prefer to move smoothly instead. consider something like the pic below?
04:24:173 (5,2) - maybe move them together to (364,380)? it feels a bit weird to me to stack 04:24:055 (4,5) - together
04:27:362 (2,1) - please try clap instead of whistle for them! it sounds much better than whistle spam
04:37:638 (1,2) - the spacing feels kinda small here. I'm afraid that players may think theere's only 1/4 beat between them, like 04:36:693 (4,5) - . maybe change 1 like the pic below?
04:55:591 (1,2) - same problem like 02:50:866 (1,2) - , maybe move 04:55:591 (1) - to (480,276)?
05:00:551 (1,2,1) - this jump feels too big and forced for this part, there's no such big jump even in the kiais, so please use a smaller jump here. try moving 05:00:906 (2) - to around (368,104)
05:05:630 (5,1) - same here. there's only 1/4 beat between 05:05:630 (5,1) - while the spacing inbetween is much bigger than the one between 05:05:984 (1,2) - where there's a 1/2-beat gap. try something like the pic below
05:13:544 (1,2,1) - wrong snap here. please redo the rhythm like this with 1/3 snap divisor and probably remove the drum hitsounds because they would sound out of place
05:22:992 (1,1,2,1) - same here, please resnap them on 1/3 snap divisor instead. I know that it doesn't fit exactly right but it should be more reasonable and consistent. Couldn't be sure about these, trying to confirm with QATs btw, why no NC on 05:23:937 (2) - ? it should have one to be consistent I think
05:25:591 (6) - it plays better if you move it to 05:25:709 - imo, same rhythm as 05:27:244 (4,5,6) -

that's all. call me back~

I will talk about the last part rhythm with me looking for QAT.
Thereafter, I write an answer of mod


I asked alacat-san last part rhythm

She wrote
05:13:544 (1,2) - should change 1/4
05:14:016 (1) - no problem
05:24:410 (1) - no problem

I obey this

Zero__wind wrote:

hello~

Unrankable issues
Highly recommend to fix
Common sugestions

General
omg why can't I see the bitrate of the mp3 file = = I should confirm with some other guys checked with other programs http://puu.sh/geWUS/f94540d76d.png the bitrate should be 192 but I'm not sure if the current mp3 file is safe for rank discussed with QATs and it should be ok :3
the combo colors seem a bit too bright on this bg, try using the code below? (turned the colors darker) I do not like it because it is too dark. but I thickened some colors

[Colours]
Combo1 : 255,87,255
Combo2 : 17,255,255
Combo3 : 36,255,36
Combo4 : 255,112,43

Collab
00:18:740 - raise the volume to 30% from this point? cause as the music becomes louder, 00:19:213 (2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - become less audiable nice idea changed

02:10:236 - why a clap here? better remove it imo ok removed
02:18:740 (3) - it would fit the music better if it ends 1/4 beat earlier (or use two circles). then you can move the clap to 02:18:858 - and use whistle at 02:18:740 - instead changed
02:22:638 (5,6) - try to use clap instead for these two notes, it would sound much better! ok!
02:26:418 (4,5) - ^ ^
02:25:355 (1,2) - spacing seems quite small comparing to the other 1/2-beat spacing in this part such as 02:21:575 (1,2) - and else, maybe move 02:26:063 (2,3,4) - together to around (84,232)? I understood it
02:35:866 - might want to add a clap here for the drums　nice
02:50:866 (1,2) - maybe it's only me, but I feel that these notes are kinda hard to read because they stick too close to each other, maybe move 02:50:866 (1) - lower to (8,260)? changed
03:07:166 (2) - I think clap sounds better than whistle here added
03:33:622 (6) - ^ ^
03:43:071 - why dragging the breaktime here? I don't think it's necessary mapped it

04:37:638 (1,2) - the spacing feels kinda small here. I'm afraid that players may think theere's only 1/4 beat between them, like 04:36:693 (4,5) - . maybe change 1 like the pic below? ok

sample

04:55:591 (1,2) - same problem like 02:50:866 (1,2) - , maybe move 04:55:591 (1) - to (480,276)? fixed
05:13:544 (1,2,1) - wrong snap here. please redo the rhythm like this with 1/3 snap divisor and probably remove the drum hitsounds because they would sound out of place I don't think 1/3 snap Rhythm. but 05:13:544 (1,2) - changed 1/4 snap Rhythm
05:22:992 (1,1,2,1) - same here, please resnap them on 1/3 snap divisor instead. I know that it doesn't fit exactly right but it should be more reasonable and consistent. Couldn't be sure about these, trying to confirm with QATs btw, why no NC on 05:23:937 (2) - ? it should have one to be consistent I think keep it. but added NC
05:25:591 (6) - it plays better if you move it to 05:25:709 - imo, same rhythm as 05:27:244 (4,5,6) - I don't think same rhythm. keep it

that's all. call me back~

Thank you Zero__wind

I wait for maaagic's correction.

Zero__wind wrote:

00:43:780 (3) - this jump feels kinda big, maybe move it to around (196,368)? no
00:48:622 (6) - change it into a 1/4 slider, or two circles? because I think the beat at 00:48:740 - is more important than 00:48:858 - fixed
00:52:166 (6) - clap sounds better here fixed
00:59:725 (1) - similar to above, better add clap here fixed
01:03:504 - ^ fixed
01:09:173 (1) - the rhythm here seems wrong, I think there's no beat at 01:09:233 - , but rather at 01:09:351 - . I mean this 1/8 slider should better be moved to 01:09:292 - and a circle could be added at 01:09:173 - instead like fixed
01:10:827 (5) - clap on head instead should fit the music better imo fixed
01:16:969 (4) - clap sounds better than whistle here fixed
01:17:559 (2,3) - maybe CTRL+G ? no
01:20:276 - clap sounds better here fixed
01:24:055 (2) - ^ fixed
01:31:969 - ^ fixed
01:53:229 (1,2) - spacing feels a bit too small, I misread it as 1/2 jump when testing. maybe use 1.5x spacing between 01:53:229 (1,2,3) - fixed
04:12:244 - I think clap would sound better at this point, and on 04:12:717 (4) - fixed
04:19:803 (2) - ^ fixed
04:22:284 (5,1) - don't really like this stack, I'd rather prefer to move smoothly instead. consider something like the pic below? fixed

sample

04:24:173 (5,2) - maybe move them together to (364,380)? it feels a bit weird to me to stack 04:24:055 (4,5) - together fixed
04:27:362 (2,1) - please try clap instead of whistle for them! it sounds much better than whistle spam fixed
05:00:551 (1,2,1) - this jump feels too big and forced for this part, there's no such big jump even in the kiais, so please use a smaller jump here. try moving 05:00:906 (2) - to around (368,104) fixed
05:05:630 (5,1) - same here. there's only 1/4 beat between 05:05:630 (5,1) - while the spacing inbetween is much bigger than the one between 05:05:984 (1,2) - where there's a 1/2-beat gap. try something like the pic below fixed

sample

Thank you!!!!!!!!!!

updated

recheck, no kd

03:42:835 - since you mapped this part, your namecard(storyboard) should remain here, till 04:03:622 -
03:50:394 (1,3) - consider shorten them by 1/4 beat. the jump is acceptable, but I'd say, not really good and intuitive in such a slow part. there are clear melody sounds at 03:50:866 - and 03:52:756 - so it won't be weird

nothing else, good job

Zero__wind wrote:

recheck, no kd

03:42:835 - since you mapped this part, your namecard(storyboard) should remain here, till 04:03:622 - I already fixed. Please try again redownload
03:50:394 (1,3) - consider shorten them by 1/4 beat. the jump is acceptable, but I'd say, not really good and intuitive in such a slow part. there are clear melody sounds at 03:50:866 - and 03:52:756 - so it won't be weird I see fixed

nothing else, good job

Thank you recheck Zero__wind

rui wrote:

03:42:835 - since you mapped this part, your namecard(storyboard) should remain here, till 04:03:622 - I already fixed. Please try again redownload

yeah it's because I didn't redownload last time lol, it's actually fine

Approved.

hope we won't have problem with the weird snaps, I've already asked several QATs after all = =

omedeto

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omedeto!!!

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omedesu!

おめでと

るいさんおめ!

Thank you everyone XD

みんなありがとうヽ(´∀｀*)ﾉ

Just for me personally, i really can't read the rhythms of this, or it's fact or i'm so bad.
Congratz anyways!

i think you can add a part at last:)
last part is good listening:33

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glad to see full ver of this get ranked