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Natteke desu

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Natteke desu 2014-10-10T16:34:10+00:00

This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 7 ноября 2014 г. at 0:46:51

Artist: Crash-TM
Title: Untan Goose
Tags: Anime K-ON! けいおん! mad ryuu aka damnae Mutsuhiko Izumi Nico Nico Douga snow jubeat
BPM: 200
Filesize: 13382kb
Play Time: 01:34
Difficulties Available:

Aka's Normal (2,24 stars, 186 notes)
Damnae's Another (4,48 stars, 367 notes)
Extra (5,47 stars, 557 notes)
Hyper (3,57 stars, 275 notes)
ryuu's Beginner (1,41 stars, 96 notes)

Download: Crash-TM - Untan Goose
Download: Crash-TM - Untan Goose (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Beginner by ryuu
Normal by Aka
Another by Damnae
Blame themagila
rest in puni-puni

Last edited by Natteke desu 2014-11-06T21:47:29+00:00, edited 34 times in total.

Kyubey

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Kyubey 2014-10-11T12:59:35+00:00

што

TicClick

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TicClick 2014-10-12T16:19:59+00:00

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пожалуйста, протестируй и найди кого-то, кто протестирует, я, как всегда не уверен
к слову, я когда-то ненавидел подобные вещи на Hyper'ах из-за их абсолютно несбалансированной сложности 01:09:182 (4,5) -

340

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340 2014-10-12T16:56:19+00:00

пуни-пунииииииииии

расшифровка того, что же всё это означает

порядковый номер секции) оффсет, получившийся у меня (пруф - )

2) 12337 (00:13:835 - )
5) 60338 (01:02:432 - )

ryuu

802 posts

Joined February 2011

ryuu 2014-10-20T18:17:34+00:00

hiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii ~
всё ниже написанное является моим мнением и может игнорироваться

генерал

добавить snow в теги? или там. snow goose. я хз. но как-то же должно искаться

чья-то изя

00:07:536 (2) - более симметричным?
00:33:637 (4,5,6) - .i.
00:57:932 (1) - сделай с ним что-нибудь. он какой-то не ок
00:51:932 (1,2,3) - ♥
01:10:682 (2) - пониже?

какие тебе еешечка сделал охуенные хс!

ака'c нормал

00:00:336 (1,2,4) - ну лично мне кароч не нравится как они все выглядят. может 1 и 4 сделать лицом друг к другу? ну типа. овал. а 2 сделать прямым?
00:17:587 (2,4) - ну их можно сделать лицом друг к другу? ;_;
00:21:937 (1) - посильнее выгнуть? а то я играю. и фиг пойми, что за форма
00:41:582 (2) - ^
00:52:532 (6) - ^
00:56:732 (4) - ^
00:27:937 (2) - ровнее бланкет?
01:17:132 (1) - софт?

хард

00:03:636 (4) - чууууууууууууть-чууууууууууууууть выгнуть в противоположную сторону? ну или ктрлj кароч
00:37:537 (5) - правее чутка?
00:52:682 - здесь не должно быть бита? просто. дальше. нет такого же ничего в этом месте

damnae's another

too cool for me :<

пуни-пуни

00:15:787 (1,2,3,4) - вот он!
00:23:437 (2) - ты сделал просто ктрлh? а можно ещё ктрлj и ктрлg?
00:45:032 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - какие же они охуенные на 50%

удачки нам вам всем

чья-то изя

00:07:536 (2) - более симметричным? к
00:33:637 (4,5,6) - .i. дада
00:57:932 (1) - сделай с ним что-нибудь. он какой-то не ок поменяла
00:51:932 (1,2,3) - ♥ я знаю ♥
01:10:682 (2) - пониже? пониже

какие тебе еешечка сделал охуенные хс! а то! еешечка классный! спасибо ему!

спасибо за мод, киса :3

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Saoji

825 posts

Joined February 2013

Saoji 2014-10-20T20:08:18+00:00

[Puni-puni]

00:04:611 (2,3,4,5) - this is hard to read cause (2) is on blue tick. So it's ok to guess it but the problem is a triple right after it, it's a pain to hit properly Also, I suggest you to delete 00:04:911 (4) and add a note 00:05:061 here (so the stream starts earlier)
00:07:536 (1,2) - What about a finish on the beginning of those sliders? (especially the first one)
00:10:611 (1,2) - as I already told you this is really hard to read, for me. I don't know if it's because (1) is on a blue tick or if the "double" is not expected, or if I'm just bad, but please do something. It totally breaks the flow of the next stream which is amazing to do but already pretty hard by itself.
01:31:532 (1,2,3) - It's perfect here.
00:16:837 (8) - so you map 1/4 when it's hard but not when it's easy? lol Reduce the slider by one tick, so it will follow the funny vocal
00:36:262 - I think you can add a note here, honestly i wasnt sure if 00:36:187 (7,1) - was mapped 1/4 by listening the music
00:37:537 (1) - MAYBE add a whistle as you did 00:35:137 (1) -here ? Also, I'm not sure about that, but if you put drum sampleset it feels there's more impact. Same goes for the beginning of those sliders 00:42:332 (1,2,3,4) (and other parts like this) But I'm not sure, just saying x)
00:58:082 (2,8) - I think it would be cool if you put drums instead as you did for the other stacked notes
01:09:632 (2) - that's really straight. Nothing wrong with it, but you could ctrl+h. The music seem to amplify here. and by doing a pattern like this: http://puu.sh/cjPBq/770b49bbda.jpg it would follow this idea
01:17:282 (2,4) - same remark
01:18:332 (1) - spinspin, what about a reverse slider which reverse for ages? http://puu.sh/cjROo/8b62fb2c57.jpg I don't like spin e.e
01:34:982 (1,2) - maybe replace with a 1/4 slider. 01:34:532 (1,2) - the cursor goes fast here, according to the music. so I don't see why it wouldnt go fast 01:34:982 (1,2) here as well. Why not, but it would be funnier to play i think.

[Hyper]

00:07:536 (1) - add a finish on the beginning
00:11:061 (4) - I would remove, it feels a bit odd to me that you're following the melody while the slider just before clearly doesnt follow it, also it would make more impact on the new stenza ( 00:11:136 (1) )
00:37:537 (5) - whistle? same reason as your extra
00:42:332 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - add drum if you liked the idea. same goes for the other parts like this~
00:58:082 (2) - I would add the drum on the beginning too, I dont know why you didnt actually. (oh, just noticed I did the same remark on your extra, means I have my beliefs LOL)

[Damnae]
I love your stacks.

[Aka's normal]
It's a cool diff. Just the rating... lol The density is quite big though.
There's one thing I can say which would reduce the star rating (probably not down to 2.25 but still). At the end you often used 01:02:138 (4,5) - this pattern, just remove the last note and add a reverse on most of them, you can reach 2.30 pretty easily by doing it

It's a hard technique. I guess.
After that I don't really know, the diff is pretty cool...

o/

Last edited by Saoji 2014-10-20T22:41:19+00:00, edited 3 times in total.

Aka

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Joined January 2012

Aka 2014-10-20T22:02:59+00:00

@рюю особо разницы не вижу, но чуть более выгнула слойдры, которые ты там указала и софт на спиннер, да. а насчет тел лицом друг к другу - нет, им еще нет 18 и они не созрели для таких штук о:

отдала .осу элвису

LOL PLEASE HELP ME NERFING MY DIFF TO 2.25 STARS PLEASE TT_TT

Saoji

825 posts

Joined February 2013

Saoji 2014-10-20T22:40:15+00:00

Aka wrote:
@рюю особо разницы не вижу, но чуть более выгнула слойдры, которые ты там указала и софт на спиннер, да. а насчет тел лицом друг к другу - нет, им еще нет 18 и они не созрели для таких штук о:

отдала .осу элвису

LOL PLEASE HELP ME NERFING MY DIFF TO 2.25 STARS PLEASE TT_TT

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*edited previous post*

Natteke desu

2,487 posts

Joined August 2012

Topic Starter

Natteke desu 2014-10-21T13:12:02+00:00

Рюша : Почти все поправил для своих дифф, кроме гипера, не совсем понял что ты имела в виду в первом моменте, а нота... Честно, она как-то перегружает
Yales: Done almost all, except drums, moreover i deleted all of them, because somewhat i found them unfitting
AKA: ЧЕКНИ ТАЙМИНГ НА СВОЕЙ ДИФФЕ ПОЖАЛУЙСТА АИМОД РУГАЕТСЯ (я посмотрел, но вроде все впорядке, кроме точки, которая вылезла непонято почему)

Aka

1,777 posts

Joined January 2012

Aka 2014-10-21T15:28:38+00:00

http://puu.sh/ckQb9/5c94890e7d.osu

@Yales, thank you, but i already found the thing which was increasing the star thing: those 4 1/1 circles i used multiple times. now replaced most of them with sliders and its 2.23 now \w/

Akiyama Mizuki

2,710 posts

Joined March 2009

Akiyama Mizuki 2014-10-22T11:21:51+00:00

Artist should be Crash-TM

Koalazy

466 posts

Joined March 2010

Koalazy 2014-10-22T11:37:44+00:00

Hihi- long time no see niconicodouga in osu..T_T

[Puni-Puni]
00:04:611 (2,3,4,5,1) - the beat here follows this↓

Image

00:09:936 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5) - it's kinda hard to play this properly to me...and the beat here follows this↓

Image

00:15:637 (2,1) - hard to read this, and in order to fit the music, i recommend to remove00:15:787 (1) -
01:27:932 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - still fun to play, but the music goes like this↓

Image

01:29:132 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - same as above

[Damnae's Another]
00:12:712 - add note? to make it similar with 00:15:037 (3,4,5) - since the music goes the same
00:13:912 - ^
00:17:512 - ^
00:18:712 - ^
01:35:057 (2) - maybe a better blanket?

[Hyper]
00:11:061 (3,1) - i wonder if this pattern is too difficult for hyper..
01:11:132 (1,1,1,1) - similar music with 00:42:332 (1,2,3,4) - consider make it consistent with NCs or no NCs

[Aka's Normal]
01:03:638 - miss finish?
01:04:838 (5) - ^
01:07:832 (2) - ^
01:16:832 - i think finish fits better than a clap

[ryuu's beginner]
no hitsound...?
01:26:732 (3,4,1) - i think this pattern looks better

Image

that's all!
Really fun map, I love this

Star~

ryuu

802 posts

Joined February 2011

ryuu 2014-10-22T11:57:54+00:00

Koalazy wrote:
[ryuu's beginner]
no hitsound...? -- it's bug
01:26:732 (3,4,1) - i think this pattern looks better reupload image, please
Image

Koalazy

466 posts

Joined March 2010

Koalazy 2014-10-22T13:26:46+00:00

ryuu wrote:
Koalazy wrote:
[ryuu's beginner]
no hitsound...? -- it's bug
01:26:732 (3,4,1) - i think this pattern looks better reupload image, please
Image

i can still see the image...here's the link i've uploaded to puush

Image

Aka

1,777 posts

Joined January 2012

Aka 2014-10-22T13:46:18+00:00

http://puu.sh/cm3f7/0cd467a1d2.osu
all fixed thanks

ryuu

802 posts

Joined February 2011

ryuu 2014-10-22T14:24:39+00:00

so
changed
i think
D:
thanks

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alacat

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Joined May 2011

alacat 2014-10-23T18:02:58+00:00

untan

tomhet65

137 posts

Joined November 2012

tomhet65 2014-10-23T20:13:33+00:00

Яй пришел. Вы слишком хорошо мапаете, а я слишком плохо модю, потому пост небольшой.

Puni-Puni

Я не модил таких сложностей еще, потому, да вот с ходу
00:04:836 (3,4,5) - мне не нравится как тут стрим начинается после такого интервала, но как бы с другой стороны, это же фича а не баг. В общем, хотелось бы понерфить так http://puu.sh/cnzns/a18cf87915.jpg
00:25:537 (1,2,3,4) - А тут напротив - хотелось бы более лютого джампа.
00:36:037 (5,6,7) - Возможно, поближе к слайдеру.
00:48:332 (1,2,3,4) - Какое-то легкое оно после всего остального, а музыка требует пота, может там 2х репит сделать?
00:50:132 (3) - "Тубудутубудутубуду" в музыке заканчивается тут, а не тактом позже.
01:27:782 (8,1,2,3) - У меня в кашу сливается, после такого, попробуй отцепить так http://puu.sh/cnAzw/2c6ea31ad4.jpg, мне понравилось как играется.

Damnae's Another

No kiai.
00:14:437 (5) - This is a too difficult jump for this part, i think.
00:47:132 (1) - Same, very sudden spacing.
00:48:332 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Just my noob's opinion. This is more difficult than same part in EE's diff. You make a perfect insane but this pattern is hard to read like HW's extra, this make a map unfcable for many players, it's not what you want to play in 4.5 another.

Hyper
00:17:587 (2) - Кривовата, хвост выровняй.
00:19:537 (1,2) - Мое обессивно-компульсивное расстройство бушует от непараллельности.
00:44:732 (1,2,3,4) - Я хочу прыгать, как обычно, но эти штуки не разрешают! Почему бы там не оставить такие же джампы как 00:42:332 (1,2,3,4) - ?
01:08:732 (1,2,3,4,5) - Сложная штука же, с таким-то аппроачем, квадрат пройти, а потом на слайдер еще. Я поколдовал и http://puu.sh/cnDQM/cc388530b3.jpg так вроде попроще, хотя стакнутая 01:08:882 (2) - тоже не очень. Что-то там надо упростить.
01:24:107 (4,5,6) - Хоть это и при ближайшем рассмотрении тройка, играется как мини стрим, единственный в мапе, по-моему и вещь для игроков заковырчатая, потому может пусть он будет где-нибудь на киае (или не будет), а тут кикслайдер (если я правильно понял этот термин).

Как обычно, не знаю к чему нужно придираться в нормалах, разве что:

Aka's Normal
00:54:932 (5) - Этот интервал звучит довольно чужеродно, может сократить его до единички? я понимаю что там он как бы выделяет эти, хм, звуки, но если сократить до более понятного, ничего не теряется.

ryuu's Beginner
00:39:937 (5) - Форма сама по себе не очень, кроме того там ничем не поддержтвается, потому не в тему http://puu.sh/cnFjd/9f670e9e7d.jpg обычный уголок лучше же.

Веселая мапа, добра всем \о/

ryuu

802 posts

Joined February 2011

ryuu 2014-10-23T20:48:27+00:00

окей

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Shadren

Featured Artist

531 posts

Joined March 2011

Shadren 2014-10-24T07:24:22+00:00

Жeneral

Явно вижу отклонение оффсета видео и аудио дорожек. Попробуй у видео поставить -220, кажется, так лучше

рyuu's Beginner

CS - 2,5?
00:36:037 (1,2,3) - придать немного наклона против часовой?
00:57:932 (1,2) - blanket

Aka's Normal

Может переназвать в Aka's Standart для сочетания с другими диффами?
00:09:936 (4,5) - blanket?
00:27:937 (2,3) - ^
01:19:532 - продлить спиннер до сюда?

Хyper

00:36:037 (2,3,4) - может заменить на ревёрс слайдер? Просто когда до этого момента проходишь такой жесткий момент, начиная от 00:33:937 - а потом успокаиваешься на слайдере 00:35:137 - то ты явно не ожидаешь триплет, вот поэтому
01:00:338 - продлить до сюда?
01:24:107 (4,5,6) - Вот тут тоже не знаю. После паузы как-то слишком внезапно

Damnae's Another

What about HP + 1?
00:36:037 (3) - replace slider on notes?
00:48:332 - strange moment, maybe change it on stream?
00:52:982 (6) - replace it on 1/4 slider
00:58:832 (4) - ctrl-g?
01:02:288 and 01:02:438 - I think, it's better to place here circles
01:03:488 and 01:03:638 - ^
01:05:882 and 01:06:032 - ^
01:07:082 and 01:07:232 - ^
01:09:482 and 01:09:632 - ^
01:14:657 (5) - I think there is not need this circle, empty sound
01:32:207 - you skip sound

Пuni-Пuni

00:04:611 - попробуй этот момент застримить, либо слайдером одним
00:06:786 - NC?
00:09:936 (1,2,3) - попробуй расстояние между ними сделать одинаковое
00:13:237 (2) - рекомендую заменить на 1/2 слайдер
00:14:437 (2) - ^
00:18:037 (2) - ^
00:19:237 (2) - ^
00:19:687 (2,3,4,5) - попроюуй заменить 2,3,4 на слайдер, и поставить круг между этим слайдером и 5 (и ещё можно эту 5 заменить на слайдер)
Как-то так
01:33:932 (1) - тут круг не нужен, имо

Sry for my useless mod, I'm better modding technical part of beatmap, but there it good. Я бы дал звезду, так как понравились диффы, но:

Aka

1,777 posts

Joined January 2012

Aka 2014-10-24T17:17:44+00:00

tomhet65 wrote:
Aka's Normal
00:54:932 (5) - Этот интервал звучит довольно чужеродно, может сократить его до единички? я понимаю что там он как бы выделяет эти, хм, звуки, но если сократить до более понятного, ничего не теряется.не вижу ничего, что теряется, если честно. мне нравится, как он выделяет момент перехода от одной части к другой. мне не нравится, как играется 1/1

Shadren wrote:
Aka's Normal
Может переназвать в Aka's Standart для сочетания с другими диффами? достопочтенный элвис говорит, то стандарт это неправильно и должно быть как есть, вот так
00:09:936 (4,5) - blanket? 5 уже в середине 4, чем тебе не бланкет? я не хочу сильно завернутые слайдеры
00:27:937 (2,3) - ^ а этот кривой, да ✔
01:19:532 - продлить спиннер до сюда? я слышу, что звут заканчивается как раз на синем, нен

http://puu.sh/coRe4/99015a7d4c.osu

Damnae

Elite Storyboarder

640 posts

Joined July 2011

Damnae 2014-10-24T17:51:24+00:00

diff

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thanks

Sonnyc

7,753 posts

Joined June 2008

Sonnyc 2014-10-25T04:29:22+00:00

ryuu's Beginner:

00:09:936 (4) - The reverse arror is close to the previous object, and I doubt if beginners can be confused because of that. Also because of the appearance of a 3/2 rhythm, I suggest an NC.
00:53:132 (2) - Mind removing the overlap with the head and the end? I don't think it's a nice idea to make things doubtful for the easiest difficulty. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2168172
01:34:532 (3) - There was a short pause of the music right before this, and imo new comboeing this would make a better ending.

Rhythm selection feels somewhat complicated, but nevermind~~

Aka's Normal:

00:02:436 (6) - Curious if the missing whistle at the head was an intended variation or a mistake.
00:29:137 (3) - Whistles were kinda overused. Mind deleting at the head of this?
00:55:982 (2) - Mind placing at (280,120)? I think it will make the flow smoother.
01:03:938 (3) - Whatever variation you've wanted, the head of this slider is the only place which is missing a normal-whistle of the untan part (01:00:338 ~ 01:09:782)

Hyper:

00:38:437 (1) - Just a comment; since the stanza starts from 00:38:737, rather starting the 90 angle rotation pattern from there would have been more effective.
01:32:807 (1) - Mind reducing 1/4?

Damnae's Another:

00:01:161 - Mind adding a note according to the song?
00:14:437 (5) - This jump is way too much. Reduce spacing please...
00:46:982 (5,1) - This one too. Notes previously were going on with a short spacing, and the suddenly a massive jump. It's too stressful..
01:33:932 (5) - Remove this note please. It's overmapped.

Puni-Puni:

00:01:086 (6,7,8,9,10) - You know the blanket can be improved with (5).
00:03:486 (6,7) - The jump is awkwardly too far. I doubt if this plays nice.
00:05:586 (7,1,6,1) - Personally I feel the combo doesn't match the song, but as far it looks nice, it may be fine...
00:10:161 (2) - Distance can be improved. It currently differs noticably.
00:26:437 (1) - According to the song, the new combo should've been added at (2), but since it suits the pattern, it's up to you.
00:30:187 (6) - Again, this jump feels little sudden.
01:08:132 (3) - Maybe you were matching this 1/4 reverse to the background music, but this rhythm conflicts hardly with the lyrics. I think just placing 2 1/2 notes will suit better.
01:33:932 (1) - I feel the music ends at 01:33:857, and this note makes a redundant sound...

ryuu

802 posts

Joined February 2011

ryuu 2014-10-25T08:16:13+00:00

all fixed from shadren and sonnyc's mods
thank u, guys

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Natteke desu

2,487 posts

Joined August 2012

Topic Starter

Natteke desu 2014-10-25T18:11:46+00:00

Koalazy wrote:
Hihi- long time no see niconicodouga in osu..T_T

[Puni-Puni]
00:04:611 (2,3,4,5,1) - the beat here follows this↓
changed in other way
Image
00:09:936 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5) - it's kinda hard to play this properly to me...and the beat here follows this↓
it was like that at first but Yales and me found that a bit too hard to catch, anyway, i'll change whole beginning of the stream
Image
00:15:637 (2,1) - hard to read this, and in order to fit the music, i recommend to remove00:15:787 (1) -
i wanted to make it more intense, but yes it should be removed
01:27:932 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - still fun to play, but the music goes like this↓
Image
01:29:132 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - same as above
it's not a big problem, moreover, i think that current rhythms more playable

[Hyper]
00:11:061 (3,1) - i wonder if this pattern is too difficult for hyper..
huum, i don't think that it's too difficult
01:11:132 (1,1,1,1) - similar music with 00:42:332 (1,2,3,4) - consider make it consistent with NCs or no NCs
added NCs!

that's all!
Really fun map, I love this
Star~

Thank you and sorry that i didn't come with mod yet, i'll do it asap

tomhet65 wrote:
Яй пришел. Вы слишком хорошо мапаете, а я слишком плохо модю, потому пост небольшой.

Puni-Puni

Я не модил таких сложностей еще, потому, да вот с ходу
00:04:836 (3,4,5) - мне не нравится как тут стрим начинается после такого интервала, но как бы с другой стороны, это же фича а не баг. В общем, хотелось бы понерфить так http://puu.sh/cnzns/a18cf87915.jpg
ну не знаю, не знаю, мне и так нравится
00:25:537 (1,2,3,4) - А тут напротив - хотелось бы более лютого джампа.
А вот это да, это мы любим
00:36:037 (5,6,7) - Возможно, поближе к слайдеру.
да там и так довольно близко, это же трипл, а не 1/4 джамп
00:48:332 (1,2,3,4) - Какое-то легкое оно после всего остального, а музыка требует пота, может там 2х репит сделать?
Такие репиты не заиграют, да и вообще, задумано сделать тут место где можно отдохнуть хоть немного, потому что дальше начинается еще больший пот
00:50:132 (3) - "Тубудутубудутубуду" в музыке заканчивается тут, а не тактом позже.
О, отлично поймал, молодец
01:27:782 (8,1,2,3) - У меня в кашу сливается, после такого, попробуй отцепить так http://puu.sh/cnAzw/2c6ea31ad4.jpg, мне понравилось как играется.
По музыке тут гораздо более подходят серклы, так что нет

Hyper
00:17:587 (2) - Кривовата, хвост выровняй.
да
00:19:537 (1,2) - Мое обессивно-компульсивное расстройство бушует от непараллельности.
и это
00:44:732 (1,2,3,4) - Я хочу прыгать, как обычно, но эти штуки не разрешают! Почему бы там не оставить такие же джампы как 00:42:332 (1,2,3,4) - ?
01:08:732 (1,2,3,4,5) - Сложная штука же, с таким-то аппроачем, квадрат пройти, а потом на слайдер еще. Я поколдовал и http://puu.sh/cnDQM/cc388530b3.jpg так вроде попроще, хотя стакнутая 01:08:882 (2) - тоже не очень. Что-то там надо упростить.
Для всего этого нет, потому что это фичи, а на счет квадрата, ну не знаю, вполне нормально как по мне, ЗАТО Я ЕГО ПОДРАВНЯЛ
01:24:107 (4,5,6) - Хоть это и при ближайшем рассмотрении тройка, играется как мини стрим, единственный в мапе, по-моему и вещь для игроков заковырчатая, потому может пусть он будет где-нибудь на киае (или не будет), а тут кикслайдер (если я правильно понял этот термин).
Да ладно тебе, там все отлично подходит, звуки есть, да и играется не так уж сложно, плюс я выделяю этот "вокал" таким образом
Веселая мапа, добра всем \о/

Спасибо большое!

Shadren wrote:
Жeneral
Явно вижу отклонение оффсета видео и аудио дорожек. Попробуй у видео поставить -220, кажется, так лучше
Не совсем уверен, но пока поставил

Хyper
00:36:037 (2,3,4) - может заменить на ревёрс слайдер? Просто когда до этого момента проходишь такой жесткий момент, начиная от 00:33:937 - а потом успокаиваешься на слайдере 00:35:137 - то ты явно не ожидаешь триплет, вот поэтому
01:00:338 - продлить до сюда?
01:24:107 (4,5,6) - Вот тут тоже не знаю. После паузы как-то слишком внезапно
Для первого нет, потому что это не так уж и сложно, да и потом, отлично выделяет эти визги. Для второго, ну там это, так и есть, а на счет последнего уже говорил
Пuni-Пuni
00:04:611 - попробуй этот момент застримить, либо слайдером одним
00:06:786 - NC?
00:09:936 (1,2,3) - попробуй расстояние между ними сделать одинаковое
00:13:237 (2) - рекомендую заменить на 1/2 слайдер
00:14:437 (2) - ^
00:18:037 (2) - ^
00:19:237 (2) - ^
00:19:687 (2,3,4,5) - попроюуй заменить 2,3,4 на слайдер, и поставить круг между этим слайдером и 5 (и ещё можно эту 5 заменить на слайдер)
Как-то так
01:33:932 (1) - тут круг не нужен, имо
Удалил серкл, поставил нк и выровнял спейсинг, остальное вроде как все подходит
Sry for my useless mod, I'm better modding technical part of beatmap, but there it good. Я бы дал звезду, так как понравились диффы, но:

Спасибо за мод!

Sonnyc wrote:
Hyper:

00:38:437 (1) - Just a comment; since the stanza starts from 00:38:737, rather starting the 90 angle rotation pattern from there would have been more effective.
Somewhat don't works for me
01:32:807 (1) - Mind reducing 1/4?
No, because it haves strong beat which should be mapped in my opinion
Puni-Puni:

00:01:086 (6,7,8,9,10) - You know the blanket can be improved with (5).
sure
00:03:486 (6,7) - The jump is awkwardly too far. I doubt if this plays nice.
nerfed it
00:05:586 (7,1,6,1) - Personally I feel the combo doesn't match the song, but as far it looks nice, it may be fine...
deleted that nc
00:10:161 (2) - Distance can be improved. It currently differs noticably.
yup
00:26:437 (1) - According to the song, the new combo should've been added at (2), but since it suits the pattern, it's up to you.
Did it because of sv changes
00:30:187 (6) - Again, this jump feels little sudden.
Leaving it, because it giving great emphasize for vocal parts
01:08:132 (3) - Maybe you were matching this 1/4 reverse to the background music, but this rhythm conflicts hardly with the lyrics. I think just placing 2 1/2 notes will suit better.
Ummm, maaybeee, but i still wanna go with music here, can't even say why it's more about feelings lol
01:33:932 (1) - I feel the music ends at 01:33:857, and this note makes a redundant sound...
Yes for first one, but no for second, i found that fine, moreover, as far as i can hear it haves sound for that note

Thank you, i'll mod your map soon!

Moway

1,143 posts

Joined January 2012

Moway 2014-10-26T22:52:53+00:00

Hi, super fast mod.

[ryuu's Beginner]

00:14:737 (3,4,1) - I'd advise unstacking these, mostly because there is some polarity switching here, so it can be a bit confusing for beginners.
00:26:437 (1,2) - I think this polarity switch could probably be avoided, and the rhythm can be improved to make use of some more emphasis. Try this, I think that it works better and fixes this polarity issue.
00:30:037 (5,6) - Unstack these on your beginner diff
00:36:037 (1,2) - unstack these also
00:53:132 (2) - move the endpoint so that the head and end don't overlap
01:02:738 (5) - NC here I think
01:03:938 (1) - remove NC here
01:05:132 (2) - and NC here
Not much to say here.

[Aka's Normal]

00:12:337 (1,2,3) - I feel like this rhythm is pushing the boundaries of a Normal diff a little too much. I prefer the repeat sliders that you use (ex. 00:14:737 (7,8) - ), which I think fit this type of difficulty better.
00:38:737 (5) - NC here
01:23:732 (6,7,1,2,3) - probably a bit too much 1/2 rhythms here for the Normal diff, I'd suggest removing 01:24:182 (7).
01:29:132 (1) - remove NC here
01:30:332 (4) - add the NC here
01:30:332 (4,5,6,7,8) - maybe too much 1/2
Diff plays well, although I wonder if the use of 1/2 in this diff, particularly with 1/2 sliders and circles, is too much for a Normal diff.

[Hyper]

00:42:332 (1,1,1,1,1) - I feel like the comboing here is distracting and unnecessary. I would just make these one combo instead.
00:44:732 (1,1,1,1,1) - same with these, also these and 00:42:332 (1,1,1,1,1) - should be hitsounded consistently.
00:47:132 (1,1,1,1,1) - ^, also I think a equally spaced triangle for these looks cleaner
01:08:732 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - This pattern is kind of difficult compared to the rest of the diff, I would suggest making 01:09:032 (3,4) - into a slider instead
01:11:132 (1,1,1,1) - same as before, NCing here is kind of excessive
01:13:532 (1,1,1,1) - ^
01:15:932 (1,1,1,2) - ^
01:28:532 (2) - I'd prefer if this were two 1/2 sliders and a circle instead because I think having a higher object density fits this kiai, and would be more consistent with 01:29:732 (3,4) and 01:30:932 (3,4).
Nice diff, although this does seem significantly harder than the Normal, so there might be some difficulty curve issue here.

[Damnae's Another]

00:13:687 (2,3) - I would stack these for consistency, since you seem to stack those two finish circles in other similar parts
00:22:087 (2,3,4) - I think moving these to (77,208) makes this look cleaner, looks a bit goofy with 00:22:537 (1) right now, or you could also move 00:22:537 (1) a bit further away so that it doesn't mess with this stack.
00:25:537 (1) - I'm not really sure what the purpose of this speed up is, so I would remove it. The music doesn't really justify it, and it is inconsistent with 00:35:137 (1).

[Puni-Puni]

00:12:261 - seems odd to leave off this one note from the stream, probably could just add a repeat to the previous slider
00:25:537 (1,2,3,4,5) - I think this would look cleaner as a perfectly spaced star
00:48:332 (1,2,3,4) - all of the unmapped blue ticks on here should probably be mapped, a repeat on all of those repeat sliders works fine to me.
00:54:932 (1,2) - I don't hear any 1/3 here, to me it sounds like 1/4 in both the instruments and the vocals
00:59:657 - Here I don't like the space between the streams because there is a very clear sound here, which probably should be mapped.
01:18:407 (1) - this spinner feels kind of out of place on the hardest diff. I feel like you should just finish off the stream.
01:34:532 (4) - NC here since there's a gap

Sorry I wasn't more thorough, song is hard to listen to.

Nice mapping though, best of luck.

ryuu

802 posts

Joined February 2011

ryuu 2014-10-26T23:16:19+00:00

fixed all, exept my ball slider: current distance between start and end is maximum that i can allow.
(mb elvis don't update my diff, so that's why u think my past overlap is too hard to read for begginers :<)
and thanks for ur mod ~

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Aka

1,777 posts

Joined January 2012

Aka 2014-10-27T22:01:38+00:00

Moway wrote:
[Aka's Normal]
00:12:337 (1,2,3) - I feel like this rhythm is pushing the boundaries of a Normal diff a little too much. I prefer the repeat sliders that you use (ex. 00:14:737 (7,8) - ), which I think fit this type of difficulty better. if more people say its too much, i'll change it u.u
00:38:737 (5) - NC here ✔
01:23:732 (6,7,1,2,3) - probably a bit too much 1/2 rhythms here for the Normal diff, I'd suggest removing 01:24:182 (7). meh, 1/2 suits there better than 1/1, i'd better just replace 1st object as a slider
01:29:132 (1) - remove NC here ✔
01:30:332 (4) - add the NC here ✔
01:30:332 (4,5,6,7,8) - maybe too much 1/2 tried to make it as simple as i could |:
Diff plays well, although I wonder if the use of 1/2 in this diff, particularly with 1/2 sliders and circles, is too much for a Normal diff.

Sonnyc wrote:
Aka's Normal:

00:02:436 (6) - Curious if the missing whistle at the head was an intended variation or a mistake. ✔ lol added
00:29:137 (3) - Whistles were kinda overused. Mind deleting at the head of this? eeeew, actually i copied the hitsounds from another diff, well, fixed ._. ✔
00:55:982 (2) - Mind placing at (280,120)? I think it will make the flow smoother. O: okay✔
01:03:938 (3) - Whatever variation you've wanted, the head of this slider is the only place which is missing a normal-whistle of the untan part (01:00:338 ~ 01:09:782) it was already fixed with previous mod and ELVIS HAVENT UPDATED THE DIFFS YET.

thank you! uwu

Last edited by Aka 2014-10-28T17:30:56+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

Natteke desu

2,487 posts

Joined August 2012

Topic Starter

Natteke desu 2014-10-28T17:28:30+00:00

BUTIUPDATEDITPLEZ

Moway wrote:
Hi, super fast mod.

[Hyper]
00:42:332 (1,1,1,1,1) - I feel like the comboing here is distracting and unnecessary. I would just make these one combo instead.
00:44:732 (1,1,1,1,1) - same with these, also these and 00:42:332 (1,1,1,1,1) - should be hitsounded consistently.
00:47:132 (1,1,1,1,1) - ^, also I think a equally spaced triangle for these looks cleaner
01:08:732 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - This pattern is kind of difficult compared to the rest of the diff, I would suggest making 01:09:032 (3,4) - into a slider instead
01:11:132 (1,1,1,1) - same as before, NCing here is kind of excessive
01:13:532 (1,1,1,1) - ^
01:15:932 (1,1,1,2) - ^
01:28:532 (2) - I'd prefer if this were two 1/2 sliders and a circle instead because I think having a higher object density fits this kiai, and would be more consistent with 01:29:732 (3,4) and 01:30:932 (3,4).
Nice diff, although this does seem significantly harder than the Normal, so there might be some difficulty curve issue here.
Fixed only last one from here, because i used NCs for these vocals things (also i want keep it for consistency with Puni-Puni, also about pattern it fits immo, because music growns here and i think that it should be emphazised, for example with complicated rhythms

[Puni-Puni]
00:12:261 - seems odd to leave off this one note from the stream, probably could just add a repeat to the previous slider
fixed!
00:25:537 (1,2,3,4,5) - I think this would look cleaner as a perfectly spaced star
tried to fix it as well
00:48:332 (1,2,3,4) - all of the unmapped blue ticks on here should probably be mapped, a repeat on all of those repeat sliders works fine to me.
*sighs* yes, it should be, okay
00:54:932 (1,2) - I don't hear any 1/3 here, to me it sounds like 1/4 in both the instruments and the vocals
whoops forgot to fix it, thank you
00:59:657 - Here I don't like the space between the streams because there is a very clear sound here, which probably should be mapped.
yes it is
01:18:407 (1) - this spinner feels kind of out of place on the hardest diff. I feel like you should just finish off the stream.
i don't want to make it supasupahard and moreover, i found that this spinner pretty nicely fits with the instruments
01:34:532 (4) - NC here since there's a gap
yup

Sorry I wasn't more thorough, song is hard to listen to. Nice mapping though, best of luck.

Thank you for mod, it was really helpfull!
also i think that gap is fine, but yes it should be checked twice
UPDATED IT
UPD: TWICE

Damnae

Elite Storyboarder

640 posts

Joined July 2011

Damnae 2014-10-28T18:23:20+00:00

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OverallDifficulty:7
ApproachRate:9
SliderMultiplier:1.55
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
Video,0,"please.avi"
0,0,"Kill me.jpg",0,0
//Break Periods
2,79732,81332
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
3,100,0,0,0

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Combo2 : 173,255,95
Combo3 : 17,254,176
Combo4 : 255,88,100

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thanks!

"UPD: THRICE" pls

Rakuen

1,654 posts

Joined March 2013

Rakuen 2014-10-31T18:21:01+00:00

( =`･ω･´) Rakuen's Modding Queue (NM/M4M)

Default = Normal mods
Opt. = Optional / Minor / Nazi
Blue = Strongly recommended
Red = Unrankable issue

[General]
:3
K-ON~

[ryuu's Beginner]

00:02:736 (3) - Minor blanket (tail)
00:03:936 (4) - NC here for consistency with the set later on 01:25:532 (1) -
00:08:136 - Clap is a bit random, nowhere else have clap, suggest to remove
01:24:332 (3) - Suggest to make it same shape like 01:23:132 (2) - but another direction (opt. puush not working...):
Image

[Aka's Normal]

Diff name: Normal > Standard? To follow other diffs maybe
00:08:136 - Clap is a bit random, nowhere else have clap, suggest to remove. OR make it Normal clap, same like 00:16:237 - (opt.)
00:08:436 - ^ Also, maybe make it Normal set for constant hitsound (opt.)
00:55:982 (2) - Inconsistency DS (0.7x)

[Hyper]

00:00:936 (3) - Suggest to make this 1.3x snapped to head of 00:00:636 (2) -
00:20:737 (1,1,1,2) - Prefer these notes combined to 1 combo, NC here imo isn't needed 0.0 (opt.)
00:30:787 (2) - Maybe make this snapped nearer to 1.3x
00:31:687 (1) - Inconsistency DS
01:28:532 (2,3) - Different hitsound with 01:29:432 (3,4) - , ignore if it's on purpose

[Damnae's Another]
Can't find anything here 0.0

[Puni-Puni]

00:45:032 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Not sure either what music you're following, just to inform that bg music and vocal I heard is on 1/4, 1/6 tail looks not needed (maybe can silence them)
00:49:832 (5) - NC here instead of 00:49:982 (1) - for vocal. If agree, maybe add 1 more at 00:50:132 (5) -
00:54:182 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - From slower playback and a test, stream (vocal) seems to start 00:54:032 - . Consider to make it either there or 00:54:332 -

Nice mapset!
~(=^･ω･^)/｡･:*:･ﾟ★，｡･:*:･ﾟ☆

ryuu

802 posts

Joined February 2011

ryuu 2014-10-31T21:01:13+00:00

Rakuen wrote:
[ryuu's Beginner]
00:02:736 (3) - Minor blanket (tail) fixed
00:03:936 (4) - NC here for consistency with the set later on 01:25:532 (1) - ^
00:08:136 - Clap is a bit random, nowhere else have clap, suggest to remove ^
01:24:332 (3) - Suggest to make it same shape like 01:23:132 (2) - but another direction (opt. puush not working...): don't want see 3 sliders with same shape
Image

thank u :3

SPOILER

osu file format v13

[General]
AudioFilename: Goose [HQ].mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 81332
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Normal
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 0.9
BeatDivisor: 2
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1.9

[Metadata]
Title:Untan Goose
TitleUnicode:うんたん Goose
Artist:Crash-TM
ArtistUnicode:Crash-TM
Creator:EvilElvis
Version:ryuu's Beginner
Source:K-ON!
Tags:ryuu aka damnae Nico Nico Douga snow
BeatmapID:518070
BeatmapSetID:221414

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:2
CircleSize:2.5
OverallDifficulty:2
ApproachRate:2
SliderMultiplier:0.8
SliderTickRate:1

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//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
3,100,163,162,255

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