OMG thanks for star >~</
Xinely wrote:
as per reqdont kudosu first since this is WIP, or i will be lazy pig
General
- BG has big size here because png format, try use .jpg to reduce it instead i surely hope kp isnt serious about using this bg into ranked lol, i think she will change (this one probably just a troll)
Hard
- 00:02:888 (4) - maybe make a curve which same with 00:03:221 (1) - to give smoother flow? http://puu.sh/ct9OJ.jpg i like the way it looks atm :/
- 00:07:554 (3) - just my taste but imo the flow can be smoother if you make the curve on slider a little bit down here (it kinda point to slider's head) http://puu.sh/cta0z.jpg imo flow breaks gives nice emphasis too also as above lol ^
- 00:10:388 (3,1) - maybe the placement kinda hard to read here because you give a jump after 1/4 slider repeats which it maybe make a little bit confuse for average player, i would say to use normal spacing to next circle, well just my taste after all i fixed this another way, i have a jump but i made the slider flow into it better so hopefully itll be easier.
- 00:11:221 (1) - also finish because cymbal sound yep :>
- 00:16:888 (2) - just nazi but try make the curve on this slider a little bit upward? so the flow and design look better here http://puu.sh/ctavz.jpg as above
- 00:22:388 (2) - maybe you forgot to add whistle on tail to emphasize the music and consistency with 00:23:888 - ? yes fixed both
- 00:27:721 (2) - ^
- 00:27:721 (2) - make the slider a little bit to downward again, so it has consistency shape with 00:28:221 (4) - and make both flow and design better http://puu.sh/ctaQC.jpg uh as above ;w;
- 00:29:721 (4) - try move the circle to bottom side (around 192,304) here? according the curve on previous slider, it should be on downward imo i like how this looks, zig-zag motions are more fun to play rather than linear imo
- 00:34:554 (4) - just my taste but i did quite much jumps on previous parts so better to keep the normal spacing for this slider by ctrl+G imo, also flow feels better with that too for me the 3 vocals sound quite strong to me though :/ also the jump isnt too big cuz slider leniency
- 00:36:888 (2) - same as above (not the jump ofc, just point out the flow) ^
- 00:39:054 (1) - try add finish here because "pssh" sound and emphasize the vocal? yes
- 00:41:721 (1) - add finish on head, it has cymbal sound here (but not really loud as 00:40:554 - ) yep
- 00:46:888 (4) - im sure the flow can improved here, maybe with move the tail to 264,104 (altho imo this is not best way to fix aaa) eh i think htis is fine owo
- 00:50:221 (2) - replace the finish with clap sound? i only hear drum sound here yeah :>
- 01:00:888 (2) - it looks a little bit bad for me when the other sliders 01:01:221 (3,4,1) - have jump but not for this slider, perhaps ctrl+G that slider? hm i like it though lol i think it looks fine
- 01:02:388 (3) - hmm maybe try drum finish? i feel drum finish fits with the music a lot here, well just my taste :3 ahh drum finish doesn't sound as good to me ;w;
- 01:09:888 (1) - add finish on head to emphasize "psssh" sound + vocal? yep
- 01:23:888 (3) - hmm a little bit weird for me, try to use 1/3 slider repeat instead? just my taste >< i will think about it, but atm this is exactly a 1/1 gap so it may not be too bad? idk though. the music itself is kinda lol.. weird.
ty for mod
will recheck ;w;?
Good Luck ~
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OMG THANKS mod >~</ xinely san <3Xinely wrote:
as per reqdont kudosu first since this is WIP, or i will be lazy pig- will do :3
General
- BG has big size here because png format, try use .jpg to reduce it instead
Normal
- 00:05:554 - unnecessary greenlne since it has same volume with previous line
- 00:11:221 (1) - finish on head to emphasize the cymbal background music
- 00:11:054 (6) - how about use sampleset drum and change the clap become whistle here? imo the drumwhistle emphasized nicely with the background music
- 00:16:388 (5) - imo this circle feels empty when it hasnt a hitsound and at that time has trumpet sound here, how about add whistle? altho the whistle is custom hitsound here but it heard nicely here
- 00:28:888 (4) - what a nazi but kinda bothering me, the blanket could improve again here by move to 220,252 /runs
- 00:32:388 (5,1) - i would suggest to stack these objects since the flow from the circle to slider quite sharp here so they are kinda hard to catch for me
- 00:35:221 (1) - if possible please avoid the overlap between this slider and 00:33:888 (3) - (i can see it when testplay altho in short time). i would suggest to move 00:35:221 (1) - to 152,276
- 00:39:054 (3) - add finish on head, cymbal sound here ~
- 00:41:721 (3) - same as above
- 00:41:721 (3) - add finish on head since i hear something like cymbal sound here?
- 00:42:554 (4) - how about try whistle on head and clap (sampleset auto) in tail to keep the consistency of hitsound? imo clap on head doesnt fit with the background music
- 00:49:888 (4) - just add whistle on head and make the hitsound only clap on tail (since the music is drum) to keep the consistency
- 00:52:221 (3) - the background music has trumpet sound too here so add finish on head just like 2 previous sliders?
- 01:09:888 (1) - if you add finish on 01:08:554 - because that "psssh" sound, you should at in this time too since it has same sound + emphasize the vocal
- 01:11:221 (4) - maybe add finish on tail to emphasize the pitch of trumpet sound here? the sound is strong so whistle cant emphasize it imo
- 01:16:554 (2) - i know you use drum in additions because the drum sound here but imo drum finish cant emphasize the music at all, better to use louder sound like soft finish imo
- Placements are fine so hitsounds mod here lol
- all fix :3 + blanket, except additions drum, place issue :3
Extra- fixed
- 01:21:221 (4) - NC here because the snap changed to 1/3 - fixed
- 01:23:888 (3) - ^ - fixed :3
- 00:22:554 - basically same thing what i pointed out in Insane - i don't know why did you pointed out this, i think it's mapper's idea :3 when do place rhythm like that :3
- 00:25:888 (1) - i expect a quite huge jump for this circle coz it has loud music (piano sound) here, how about 240,200? - changed other place :3
- 00:27:888 - basically same thing what i pointed out in Insane - same as ^^
- 00:30:388 (2) - actually i prefer to do jump on next slider to emphasize the trumpet and vocal rather than jump in this circle since it only has weak sound here, how about move the circle to 364,268? - yea right, but i don't want change this ; ^ ; and seem it's not big problem
- 00:45:888 (1) - hmm try like xchippy with map 1/4 slider jumps here? since the diff is extra so you can map this song as hard as you can, kinda weird for me when extra only map 1/1 rhythm while the Insane diff mapped 1/4 jumps - OMG GOOD IDEA!
- 00:56:221 (5) - hmm imo the design a little bit messy for me, i prefer to stack this circle with 00:55:721 (3) - so 00:55:888 (4,5,1) - look more beautiful in design, also they have better flow too for me
- 00:55:888 (4,1) - and nazi thing, you can do more blanket here
- 00:58:638 (3,4) - hmm i know this is extra but imo the triplet is hard to catch because the spacing here, how about use 1,0x spacing? - fixed :3
- 01:28:329 - 01:28:416 - map these times with circles to make triplet? the Insane uses double circles so imo better to have harder thing than Insane diff here by triplet o3o - fixed YAAAAA
- fix the hitsounds from Normal diff that i have pointed out, just too lazy to write it again here
Good Luck ~
mangocurry wrote:
[xChippy's Insane][/notice]
[*Timing/composition/flow]
*00:00:555 –to 00:02:888 – map out this part, since it’s done so in other difficulties. I might be paranoid, cuz I keep seeing BATs saying this in other maps, XD Should be fine tho leaving this but I'll see
*01:10:388 –add a note here? I understand that this part has no significant sound, but for the sake of flow. Other difficulties do have a note here, and they didn’t feel awkward during test-play. okie
*01:21:221 (1,2,3,4,5) – I found this part odd. Try to use a simpler rhythm like: http://puu.sh/cmaYR.jpg that follows the violin in the music. (Is it acceptable to use 1/12 in a regular insane? Sorry, I’m practically new to mapping) Aight tried something else here
* 01:25:221 (1) – change the end to 01:28:138 - kinda hard interval so nope
[*Aesthetics/ patterns]
*00:11:721 (2,4) –stack? But I’m guessing that you don’t use stacking as much as other mappers do (which makes your mapping style unique, whee!). Ignore this if that’s true! Yes your spot on!
[*hit-sounds]
Goot~
Xinely wrote:
as per req
Insane
- Hard has AR 7,5 here so the AR spread a little bit high for me, how about use 8,7 instead here? Uuuh 7,5~9 seems actually perfect imo as most AR spreads are 7-9 lol
- 00:16:388 (9) - after a triplet imo the jump shouldnt be too far since this song has high bpm here, how about reduce it around 208,88? Changed a bit but should be fine tho
- 00:22:554 - i would say to make this time since the musics of "dub dub" become main background music for this part, but that's up to you ~
- 00:27:888 - ^ I personally prefer to follow the vocal here so nope ><
- 00:32:054 (2) - personally i feel the 1/4 jump from this slider to circles feels hard, try to reduce the spacing by move this slider to 84,64? alright
- 00:43:721 (2,3,4,5,6) - i know this part is calm but 1/4 jumps like this feel hard imo, especially when the extra diff only use 1/2 rhythms , maybe reduce the spacings or make 1/2 rhythms instead I disagree tho :/ Those are very easy to play due to the leniency, the distance is only big in numbers, but whilst playing it feels like nothing
- 00:45:888 (1,2,3,4) - if you agree with above, do for this one too ^
- 00:51:721 (2) - imo the overlap isn't really good to see here also you can make smoother flow for (2) slider, https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2181166 something like this did something else
- 00:53:304 - hmm i can't hear any song here. i guess this one is overmapped uuuh maybe you got the wrong time idk? here is the pretty loud start from the violin
- 00:58:804 (6) - hmm just my taste but when the stream (4 circles) and 3 of them have whistle and the last circle hasnt hitsound, that's weird for me, i prefer to add whistle too for this circle done
- 01:21:277 (2) - as i hear from drum musics, i can't hear anything in 1/6, better to remove it, also this is only Insane diff so 1/6 triplet is totally hard imo done
- 01:24:110 (6) - just my taste but i feel clap sound fits the best here rather than sampleset normal done
Good Luck ~
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92,53,75221,6,0,B|94:129|94:129|102:146|102:146|106:229,2,170,6|4|4,0:0|0:3|0:3,0:0:0:0:
92,53,77221,5,8,0:0:0:0:
120,268,77554,1,0,3:0:0:0:
156,289,77638,1,0,3:0:0:0:
197,297,77721,1,0,1:0:0:0:
237,284,77804,1,0,1:0:0:0:
273,261,77888,6,0,P|312:245|377:243,1,85,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
407,125,78221,2,0,P|377:92|356:41,1,85,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
196,82,78554,2,0,P|201:135|183:190,1,85,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
66,124,78888,1,0,1:0:0:0:
66,124,79054,1,0,0:0:0:0:
31,327,79221,6,0,P|99:268|194:302,2,170,6|8|4,0:0|0:0|0:3,0:0:0:0:
221,341,80054,2,0,L|325:330,1,85,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
221,195,80388,6,0,L|117:182,2,85,2|2|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
317,64,80888,2,0,L|307:153,1,85,0|4,0:0|0:3,0:0:0:0:
319,261,81221,5,8,0:0:0:0:
319,261,81332,2,0,L|375:255,1,56.6666666666667,4|0,0:3|0:0,0:0:0:0:
211,202,81554,2,0,L|139:198,1,56.6666666666667,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,340,81777,1,2,0:0:0:0:
503,212,81888,6,0,P|425:192|375:255,1,170,6|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
375,255,82304,1,0,0:0:0:0:
375,255,82388,1,8,0:0:0:0:
292,172,82554,1,2,0:0:0:0:
161,289,82721,2,0,L|72:294,1,85,8|8,0:0|0:3,0:0:0:0:
264,200,83054,5,4,0:3:0:0:
292,172,83138,1,4,0:3:0:0:
321,142,83221,2,0,L|512:129,1,170,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,52,83721,1,4,0:3:0:0:
246,212,83888,2,0,L|140:209,1,85,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
128,196,84110,2,0,L|133:255,1,56.6666666666667,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,352,84388,5,0,0:0:0:0:
256,352,84471,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,352,84554,1,6,0:0:0:0:
256,52,84888,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,328,85054,1,6,0:0:0:0:
256,192,85226,12,8,88157,0:0:0:0:
256,192,88416,5,2,0:0:0:0:
256,192,88502,1,2,0:0:0:0:
all fix :3Xinely wrote:
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Normal
- 00:42:554 (4) - nazi but move to 360,72 for better blanket, same with 00:44:221 (2) -
- 01:11:221 (4) - is it fixed too? i wrote "01:11:221 (4) - maybe add finish on tail to emphasize the pitch of trumpet sound here? the sound is strong so whistle cant emphasize it imo" and you replied "all fix"
i think so xinely is steal slider tail's finish even check ex diff :3
Extra
- 00:43:221 (1,2,3,4) - the rhythms still can improve if you map the crystal sounds at 1/4 here, i guess something like http://puu.sh/czdns.jpg
- 00:50:221 (3) - use clap on head instead of finish sound? the music is clearly drum only here
koreapenguin: you can fix all hitsound suggestions if there are more!Xinely wrote:
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Easy
- 00:11:221 (1) - Irre wrote fix all hitsounds, i suggested to add finish here and the hitsound now is whistle only. aa is irre forgot to add? uhm.. seems fixed by itself? xD
- 00:36:221 (2,3) - hmm better to avoid 1/2 now imo, since the song has quite high bpm too. hmm if you want to keep map the redtick imo rhythm like http://puu.sh/czbqP.jpg would be fine that is actually a really good idea. fixed
- 00:40:554 (1,2,3) - same explanation as above, http://puu.sh/czbyT.jpg i don't want to fix this tho.. i think it gives really good emphasis
- 01:00:221 (2,3) - aa just fix it if you agree with above fixed too!
- 01:11:221 (2) - is it fixed? since i suggested to add finish on repeat before fixed? it was here for me
Irreversible wrote:
koreapenguin: you can fix all hitsound suggestions if there are more! - oki :3
http://puu.sh/czo0V.txt
FINALY DONE!Xinely wrote:
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Normal diff : 00:42:554 (4,2) - perhaps stack them? since you stacked them together before (i see this like forget to stack them after fix the blanket)
Yes wwwwKibbleru wrote:
oh jeez u were serious about using this background!?!?!
And it better not unrank a third time >.<Xinely wrote:
i guess we're fine now to move this forward
Bubbled~ (ノ>∨<)ノ
@Next BAT : dont rank this map for 1 week, wcx version got requalified today https://osu.ppy.sh/s/218098
Kibbleru wrote:
oh jeez u were serious about using this background!?!?!
You're slow pkk <3pkk wrote:
oh I was going to mod this but looks like it's bubbled /me runs
here you can have ticket: [~($5)~]
2014-11-13 13:02 smallboat: 01:08:471 (4) - but this I guess this just the overmap :3
2014-11-13 13:02 smallboat: compare with ex and ins
2014-11-13 13:03 koreapenguin: yea right, there is have no sound
2014-11-13 13:06 smallboat: yes remove it o/
2014-11-13 13:07 smallboat: 01:22:304 (2) - same ins
2014-11-13 13:07 koreapenguin: yea
2014-11-13 13:25 koreapenguin: then just del them?
2014-11-13 13:25 smallboat: yes o/
2014-11-13 13:27 koreapenguin: done :3
2014-11-13 13:32 smallboat: ACTION is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/521750 AKINO with bless4 - EXTRA MAGIC HOUR [Extra Magic Hour]]
2014-11-13 13:32 smallboat: 01:20:137 (6) - remove this?
2014-11-13 13:33 smallboat: this voice not so obviously I think o.o
2014-11-13 13:33 koreapenguin: yea even that
2014-11-13 13:33 koreapenguin: oki :3 del
2014-11-13 13:34 smallboat: o.o now check Easy to Hard
2014-11-13 13:34 smallboat: ACTION is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/519635 AKINO with bless4 - EXTRA MAGIC HOUR [Irre's Easy]]
2014-11-13 13:34 smallboat: 01:12:554 (1,2,3,4) - This rhythm seems weird,because these point didn't place the drum or vocal,suggest replace this rhythm : http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2233757
2014-11-13 13:34 smallboat: 01:25:054 (1) - Forgot add spinner? Another diff has been added spinner here.
2014-11-13 13:37 koreapenguin: fixed :3
2014-11-13 13:38 smallboat: ACTION is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/521752 AKINO with bless4 - EXTRA MAGIC HOUR [Normal]]
2014-11-13 13:38 smallboat: 00:11:054 (6) - Feel this note is not necessary,I didn't listen any drum and vocal here,remove it?
2014-11-13 13:38 smallboat: 00:23:888 (5) - Stack better?
2014-11-13 13:38 smallboat: 00:45:888 (1) - Same as above
2014-11-13 13:38 smallboat: 00:48:221 (5) - ^
2014-11-13 13:38 smallboat: ACTION is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/521751 AKINO with bless4 - EXTRA MAGIC HOUR [Kibbleru's Hard]]
2014-11-13 13:38 smallboat: Just one
2014-11-13 13:38 smallboat: 01:09:888 (1) - Missed a finish?
2014-11-13 13:41 koreapenguin: oki fixed all
2014-11-13 13:42 smallboat: okay nothing to say
2014-11-13 13:42 koreapenguin: then now update it?!
2014-11-13 13:42 smallboat: sure o.o
Lanturn wrote:
I think it's cute.
Congrats!