• [Normal]

1. 00:18:779 (4,5) - I feel the flow drastically changes to go downwards and it to me is not smooth something like this will keep it look nice and also have the
2. same result Example
3. 00:28:529 (1) - To me the end end just ruins the blanket, either make it a regular slider or move the note itself up but since it fits it fits so no change is needed here, just something to point out
4. 00:43:529 (3) - The way this note is formed I don't see it as serving a purpose for the next note; I changed it to something like this Example you can change it to feed your need or no change at all
5. 00:54:591 (4) - The white tick in the middle of the red and other white makes it seems like the slider is a bit distressed. Removing the white tick in the middle or something like this to form a hill shape that goes up then goes down for better visual Example
6. 01:00:779 (2) - Distance Snap properly
7. 01:09:404 (3) - Move up a little bit for a better blanket, and full distance snap
8. 01:13:529 (1) - Overlap kind of has a weird feel to it; I did something like this. Just reversed flipped the slider to roll with the vocals/music and just kept the pattern going. Example
9. 01:39:779 (4,5) - Same reason as before here, but for me to make it actually work would to make this note fatter 01:39:029 (3) - Example The reasoning behind is I want to portray to the audience that the note goes into a dive instead of a flat slider into a drop. This way it goes up then down instead of straight and downwards which messes with cursor play
10. 02:19:154 (4) - Distance Snap properly
11. 03:06:779 (2) - Remove whistle at end of slider and here as well 03:08:654 (3); It follows the pattern you have and end the hitsounding on a note that no volume comes out of and to add a whistle would be awkward
12. 03:53:841 (3) - Maybe move that slider to the left on a red tick and it on the white. It flows with the music better because that gap with no notes was throwing me off

• [Hard]

1. 02:26:279 (3) - Possible slidertick-clap here?
   This was a masterpiece of a hard difficulty. It's fun to play on DT but challenging enough if hidden is involved for hidden notes, but damn that was what I was looking for, CONSISTENT SPACING, Love you for that ♥‿♥

• [Insane]

1. 00:18:404 (2) - Move slider tail down a click for better visual
2. 00:24:310 (1) - Move note to here? The polarity is good but when stacked together doesn't seem so great anymore; something like this will do Example It also stacks with 00:25:060 (4) to follow your style of mapping
3. 00:28:904 (2) - Without the overlay I believe it would look better Example the next one works because any position that note is in doesn't feel the same
4. 00:45:404 (2) - Something like this? Example
5. 01:28:529 (1) - Slider would seem better without that extra red tick Example
6. 01:36:404 (2) - Feel the note placed at this location seems and feels better x264 y316 to follow same concept you had here 01:37:529 (1,2)
7. 03:08:841 (6) - Removing whistle at the end would sound better for same reason
8. 03:16:154 (4,5) - I don't know about how well those whistle can maintain the hitsound, removing them will keep it consistent with the rest of the beatmap

Kocari wrote:

Here as requested from modding queue and M4M

~General Overview~ I believe this map to be really good. I can see it ranked in the near future anytime soon with more BAT coming in. Not much there is to change, just my suggestions and different ways to consistently follow same patterns and result in a better play through. Hard was a force to be reckon with because it was soooo goood(I don't know how much more I can emphasize it) Estimated mod time ~45 minutes. I had a blast modding this map because Sana is awesome I hope to see this map progress in the near future. Thanks for your time

• [Normal]

1. 00:18:779 (4,5) - I feel the flow drastically changes to go downwards and it to me is not smooth something like this will keep it look nice and also have the
2. same result Example I agree, changed
3. 00:28:529 (1) - To me the end end just ruins the blanket, either make it a regular slider or move the note itself up but since it fits it fits so no change is needed here, just something to point out yeah, I have been questioning that slider. I couldn't decide if I liked it or not. I think it's time to remove that red anchor xD
4. 00:43:529 (3) - The way this note is formed I don't see it as serving a purpose for the next note; I changed it to something like this Example you can change it to feed your need or no change at all good idea!
5. 00:54:591 (4) - The white tick in the middle of the red and other white makes it seems like the slider is a bit distressed. Removing the white tick in the middle or something like this to form a hill shape that goes up then goes down for better visual Example Didn't do what you recommended, but I softened the curve
6. 01:00:779 (2) - Distance Snap properly I'm trying to stack these perfectly. I think the the DS is close enough
7. 01:09:404 (3) - Move up a little bit for a better blanket, and full distance snap ok
8. 01:13:529 (1) - Overlap kind of has a weird feel to it; I did something like this. Just reversed flipped the slider to roll with the vocals/music and just kept the pattern going. Example I'll keep what I have here
9. 01:39:779 (4,5) - Same reason as before here, but for me to make it actually work would to make this note fatter 01:39:029 (3) - Example The reasoning behind is I want to portray to the audience that the note goes into a dive instead of a flat slider into a drop. This way it goes up then down instead of straight and downwards which messes with cursor play added more curve to the slider
10. 02:19:154 (4) - Distance Snap properly ok
11. 03:06:779 (2) - Remove whistle at end of slider and here as well 03:08:654 (3); It follows the pattern you have and end the hitsounding on a note that no volume comes out of and to add a whistle would be awkward removed whistle on the end of slider three, but not the other one, so I stay consistent with the hitsound pattern
12. 03:53:841 (3) - Maybe move that slider to the left on a red tick and it on the white. It flows with the music better because that gap with no notes was throwing me off no change here, because I want that slider to start on that important beat.

• [Hard]

1. 02:26:279 (3) - Possible slidertick-clap here? The claps are on the red ticks, so no claps here
   This was a masterpiece of a hard difficulty. It's fun to play on DT but challenging enough if hidden is involved for hidden notes, but damn that was what I was looking for, CONSISTENT SPACING, Love you for that ♥‿♥ <3

• [Insane]

1. 00:18:404 (2) - Move slider tail down a click for better visual I want to keep them parallel
2. 00:24:310 (1) - Move note to here? The polarity is good but when stacked together doesn't seem so great anymore; something like this will do Example It also stacks with 00:25:060 (4) to follow your style of mapping Hmm, I would rather keep the distance snapping somewhat the same for these
3. 00:28:904 (2) - Without the overlay I believe it would look better Example the next one works because any position that note is in doesn't feel the same I kinda like how I have it, sorry
4. 00:45:404 (2) - Something like this? Example I moved it a little. Still hase a slight overlap
5. 01:28:529 (1) - Slider would seem better without that extra red tick Example didn't remove the red tick, but I softened some curves
6. 01:36:404 (2) - Feel the note placed at this location seems and feels better x264 y316 to follow same concept you had here 01:37:529 (1,2) kk, changed
7. 03:08:841 (6) - Removing whistle at the end would sound better for same reason I agree, removed
8. 03:16:154 (4,5) - I don't know about how well those whistle can maintain the hitsound, removing them will keep it consistent with the rest of the beatmap no change here

Tari wrote:

Will Check hehe.

Sonnyc wrote:

You can add 'Lovesickness' to the tags. added

Normal:

00:40:529 (4,1,3,1) - Comboes have been a mess. NC 00:40:529 - 00:43:529 and remove NC 00:42:029 - 00:45:029. fixed
01:40:529 - I think a Finish should be added here. added finish
02:07:529 (1,2) - Watch your spacing. fixed
02:13:529 (1,3) - You can stack these objects better. fixed
03:09:029 - Imo adding a whistle here will sound nice. i agree
03:21:029 - For all difficulties, I suggest the volume as 30%. The current hitsounds feel a little louder than the song. reduced to 30%
03:45:029 (1) - Making the combo consistent with the previous parts 01:27:029 (3) and 02:48:029 (3) will feel more organized. kk fixed
04:01:529 - For all difficulties, I suppose adding a Finish would be a nice ending for the map. hah yeah, idk why I didnt do that

Hard:

-- AR7 is enough to read things. Also the gap with [Normal] will be narrowed more. changed to ar7

01:17:841 - 01:18:591 (2) - Missing claps. added
02:06:591 (3) - Check your snapping. fixed
03:04:529 (4) - You must add a new combo to indicate the anti jump and sv change. added NC
03:15:779 (1,1) - This 1/4 jump doesn't fits the calm music here, nor is appropriate for [Hard]. Please shorten by 1/4, or maintain the distance. Oops this was an accident. Nice catch

Insane:

01:18:779 (3,4,5) - Making this triple stream's placement as 01:19:154 (6,7,8) will look more organized. unstacked them so they match
01:42:029 (1) - Finish doesn't sound nice here. I agree, removed finish
02:52:154 (4) - Reduce volume please. reduced to 45%
03:36:779 (3,4,5) - Same suggestion for 03:37:154 (6,7,8). did the same thing as above

Well the spread is quite wide, but I feel [Hard] is in the appropriate difficulty between [Normal] and [Insane]. So the spread is fine enough.
Whatever the lyrics mean, I love nurse. Call me back after fixing~ :D

Sonnyc wrote:

operation cwal

Tari wrote:

Someone needs to double-check the title since I'm uncertain of its Koiwazurai or not

From what I've heard it should of been that (according to iMage)

sheela901 wrote:

After running some tests (Japanese to Romaji), I think the title should be as it is. 恋 (which is Koi) is a noun, so I think the space should be placed after it. Same with Byoumei, but a little different. According to the "converter", that word forms a single noun. Unless I say something nonsense, correct me...

Saya wrote:

plz no unrank title is fine

Trust wrote:

Grats Joey! please rank more maps

ByBy_ChAn wrote:

Grats for your first ranked map ! \:D/

Thanks Guys!

1. Disqualified for difficulty gap between Hard and Insane
   It is too big from Hard diff to Insane about spacing. For example, You used Almost over x1.8 distance in Insane diff at the kiai time. You should consider adding a new difficulty of Hard/Insane or fixing a gap between Hard and Insane (Try to reduce spacings in Insane diff or make more jumps in Hard diff). Well, Both diffs is nice :>

1. Background images must be at a maximum of 1024x768 pixels for 4:3, 1366x768 pixels for 16:9. So you must change BG size.

1. OD -1. The rate is too hard for playing beginner since this difficulty is easiest.
2. 01:34:529 (1) - Too soon after a spinner. Please delete this slider and try to make new pattern of rhythm.
   
   SPOILER

   
3. 02:13:529 (1,3) - I don't agree this stack, It would confuse beginners. Fix this one, so it prevents the player from misreading.

1. 03:04:529 - Please turn up the volume about 30 or 40% I can't hear anything for playing.

1. 03:04:529 - Same.
2. 03:47:279 - Don't use silent volume. You should consider turning up the volume over 20%

alacat wrote:

1. Disqualified for difficulty gap between Hard and Insane
   It is too big from Hard diff to Insane about spacing. For example, You used Almost over x1.8 distance in Insane diff at the kiai time. You should consider adding a new difficulty of Hard/Insane or fixing a gap between Hard and Insane (Try to reduce spacings in Insane diff or make more jumps in Hard diff). Well, Both diffs is nice :>

alacat wrote:

Additional Modding

[General]

1. Background images must be at a maximum of 1024x768 pixels for 4:3, 1366x768 pixels for 16:9. So you must change BG size. Oops, I thought I took it from the ranked one but i guess not xD Fixed

[ Normal]

1. OD -1. The rate is too hard for playing beginner since this difficulty is easiest. ok, lowered to 3
2. 01:34:529 (1) - Too soon after a spinner. Please delete this slider and try to make new pattern of rhythm. shortened the spinner
   
   SPOILER

   
3. 02:13:529 (1,3) - I don't agree this stack, It would confuse beginners. Fix this one, so it prevents the player from misreading. kk fixed

[ Hard]

1. 03:04:529 - Please turn up the volume about 30 or 40% I can't hear anything for playing. increased to 35%

[ Insane]

1. 03:04:529 - Same. ^
2. 03:47:279 - Don't use silent volume. You should consider turning up the volume over 20% kk

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Then, I will ask JP staff about Romanised title. In my opinion, "Koi Wazurai" is fine. Because It's used Kanji/Katakana.

Infevo wrote:

I can't show any understanding for the disq.

1. Most players would only use one diff anyways. And it is not like you can only progress through 1 single map set from one mapper. So in that regard the gap is completely irrelevant.
2. It is ridiculous to reason around the difficullty gaps since many mappers get ranked releases with only single maps. Why should mappers be punished who bother to map more diffs?
3. I don't have any issues with the sound volume. None at all.
4. Several players asked sincerely not to unrank this because they liked it and for them everything was fine.
5. We have an extreme lack of Sana maps.

handsome wrote:

lol let's get this backed to ranked

rename Another to Insane, then Insane to a custom name maybe? Lovesick or something.

i'll mod this later.

1. 01:34:904 (1) - i think this one need a NC
2. There are so many triple beat in KIAI like 01:06:779 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - …… , so i think use some rhythm like this would be nice.Just a suggest,feel free to ignore this.
3. 03:38:466 (5) - stack with 03:37:529 (1) - slider head would be nice
4. 02:21:779 (4) - missing a clap on slider head

lightr wrote:

Hi Joey I'm back , very sorry for late .-.
Just a few things :

Another

1. 01:34:904 (1) - i think this one need a NC added
2. There are so many triple beat in KIAI like 01:06:779 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - …… , so i think use some rhythm like this would be nice.Just a suggest,feel free to ignore this. I added some, but didnt change all of them
3. 03:38:466 (5) - stack with 03:37:529 (1) - slider head would be nice I agree, the distance was kinda far anyway
4. 02:21:779 (4) - missing a clap on slider head I'm alternating claps here

nice mapset,good luck with rerank it :>

handsome wrote:

i'm too lazy to format this since it's one diff. anyway before things get out of hand: http://i.imgur.com/D8wmmsy.png
so here's timestamps for your clicking pleasure:
Hard: 02:37:435 / 03:34:435
Normal: 02:37:341 / 03:34:341 ahh, thanks for this, I think they are all consistent now

some small quality ammendments:
normal and hard: 01:57:029 - end break here by dragging good idea

greenline stuff:
normal: needless greenline 02:52:529 - oops, all those greenline had a purpose, I just forgot to change them >_< Fixed all
hard: needless greenline 03:49:529 -
insane: same 02:50:279 -

do note i might not 100% thorough so please check through your greenlines again~

main stuff in insane:
00:51:966 (5) - this didn't feel too comfortable to play, in my opinion. I actually like this combo a lot >_<
01:36:029 (1,3) - lol blanket fixed
01:45:685 (3,4) / 01:46:154 (6,7,8) / 04:00:591 (3) / 04:01:154 (5,6,7) - these are probably wrongly snapped, there are 1/6 notes starting from 01:46:091 - 04:01:091 - i think. be sure to correct this on Lovesick diff too, or clarify with a BAT. I think you are right about the 1/6 notes, but I am going to keep my 1/4 notes because I find them more enjoyable to play
03:04:154 (3,2) - nazi stuff fixed
03:10:529 - start the break here!! :p not consistent with other diffs~ ah, right
03:15:779 (1,2) - might be a little to excessive after break, imo. I don't think it's too bad. I lowered the distance though

everything else looks on point, good job with this. lovely patterns & sana <3.