Hey! M4M.
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At first, if you're going for approval, drain time needs to be 5min+, otherwise you'll need a full spread. On the map itself, I think I'll have a lot to say! I think you'll also need quite a big amount of mods to fix everything. I'll focus on rhythm mostly. (I might be a little harsh, but it's mostly sarcastic)00:21:300 (1,2,3,4,5) - There's no distinct notes here, I'd consider making this into a spinner.
00:22:200 (1,2) - Consider something else, right now it isn't really fitting to the music. Example below.
00:26:962 (3) - If you want this note to be a single so bad, make it into a yellow to white short slider, that fits better with the music hitsound-wise
00:33:600 (1,1) - Fast sliders don't really fit here.
00:36:000 (3) - This jump is way too harsh and doesn't map to the music at all
00:43:875 (1) - Starting this on the blue tick is very unintuitive because of polarity. I'd start this slider on the white tick to make it more intuitive.
00:44:400 (3,4,5) - This triple is overmapped
00:45:000 (8,9,10) - ^
00:47:475 (4) - Delete this note, once again an overmap
00:48:600 (1) - I feel like this anti-jump is very unfitting. Consider rotating it 90 degrees and placing it so it makes sense
00:52:800 (1,2) - This could have been a blanket.
00:56:850 (1,2,3) - This is undermapped. Consider changing this in a fast (1/16) repeat
00:57:900 (3) - The jump of this note doesn't map to anything in the music, consider changing this
00:58:575 (5,6) - These two notes are overmapped
01:05:775 (3,4) - ^
01:06:450 (4,5,6) - This should be a repeat
01:15:600 (1,2,3) - This is literally satan, airman does it, and I also think airman is satan.
01:22:200 (2,3) - See beginning of the map
01:31:800 (3,4) - ^
01:49:200 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,1) - Holy mother of overmap
01:54:600 (1,2) - This is undermapped
02:32:550 (7,8,9) - ^
02:40:200 (1,2,3,4) - This entire combo is undermapped
02:42:150 (2,3,4) - Undermapped
02:47:700 (4,5,6,7,1) - An overmapped stream
02:51:900 (9,10,11) - Undermap
03:06:600 (1,2) - Control G both these sliders individually, it'd play better I feel
03:15:600 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1) - Overmap. You know the drill by now.
03:17:250 (1,2) - Once again, quite a big overmap
03:19:050 (1,2,3) - Those big empty spaces don't warrant the music that's playing in the background.
03:21:000 (1,2) - Once again, a heavy undermap
03:43:800 (5,6,7) - The spacing here is quite low.
03:49:500 (2,3,4) - That undermap thing again
03:57:450 (1,2,3,4) - The undermap here is unfitting I feel
03:59:325 (2,3) - Undermap, you know the drill
04:18:450 (1,2,3) - Undermap
You bring some interesting ideas, but this map needs A LOT of work in the refinement department. I might recheck it later once you got about 10 more mods maybe.