74483,714.285714285714,4,2,1,40,1,0
75197,731.707317073171,4,2,1,40,1,8
75928,681.818181818182,4,2,1,40,1,8
76660,731.707317073171,4,2,1,40,1,8
77391,731.707317073171,4,2,1,40,1,8
80337,731.707317073171,4,2,1,40,1,0

Natsu wrote:

1. 00:49:971 ignoring beats like this make me T-T, idk a 1/2 repeat slider can work a lot better there. Sorry, but there is not a beat, it's just a guitar, that's different, but nevertheless, I do not see any reason of why should I make this part whole just 1/2 without diversity. Also take in consideration I mapped the snare drum with 1/2 sliders and kept 1/1 on most parts which contained just guitar or almost inaudible snare, so it is emphasized only by the slider tick.
2. 00:56:922 (1) - same as above (in this kiai time rhythm is a lot better than in the beggining, but still some double check can be nice) This one was actually out of the way I was mapping these, so yup, fixed.
3. 00:59:849 (1) - similar as above, vocals and music are the same in 00:59:849 (1) - 01:01:313 (4) - but mapped in a different way, :l I like the 1/2 slider. Already talked above this above
4. 01:02:776 (1) - 1/2 repeat slider ? ^
5. 02:25:642 is weird that you are ignoring this 1/4 beat, but mapping all the others, doesn't feel nice when playing. Eh, why did I ignore this beat? There is not a beat and additionally, if you meant voice (which is still not a beat), it is out of the time a bit, so mapping it makes the map just worse.
6. 02:26:191 ignoring the strong beat, but mapping all the weak ones? (every beat has vocals and music, so I don't see why you are ignoring one o.o) Again, there is no beat, there is just voice, which is again out of the timing, because it's just a singer, and this singer did not hit the song accurately, while, the volume is on the level of song's guitar, so you might have noticed guitar is mapped here, what's totally okay, no matter how loud the voice is, it is not supposed to be mapped, maybe I could hit it accurate with using 1/8 or 1/16 snap, but no, I do not want to bring these to the map when I never used them.
7. 02:50:337 (4,5) - really weird stack, kinda break the flow of this map, idk a 1/4 repeat slider can fit really nice here. I think it is okay, the song song is calm in this part so breaking flow is not a deal, considering the stack was made because the piano note was exactly the same on these two circles.
8. 04:10:642 (2) - following vocals here, but ignoring them in 04:11:373 - T-T Changed, but I followed the guitar anyway.

Wafu wrote:

Please, take in consideration diversity is not the thing that actually makes the map worse nor it is unrankable. The map was not meant to be insane or extra, so there is no reason to map every single note, when you map them with slider tick, or when it is out of the music a bit or it is not so loud, you do not have to map it completely. I am sorry, but you probably won't be satisfied with amount of things I fixed, you probably include too much of your style to the mod, that's probably also why would it be annoying for me to fix everything. Thanks for your understanding and obviously for your mod.

Natsu wrote:

ah, 02:26:191 - listen careful pls.

Wafu wrote:

Natsu wrote:

ah, 02:26:191 - listen careful pls.

Oh, I am sorry, this one was my mistake. I modded the previous note twice.
Actually I did not mean it offensively, I meant, I felt following that guitar in some part was okay with slidertick. I'll recheck it today if I won't change my mind

Natsu wrote:

that's ok, also please reply to mods XD, maybe you can get like 1 or 2 more mods? then we will see

TicClick wrote:

Add this:

74483,714.285714285714,4,2,1,40,1,0
75197,731.707317073171,4,2,1,40,1,8
75928,681.818181818182,4,2,1,40,1,8
76660,731.707317073171,4,2,1,40,1,8
77391,731.707317073171,4,2,1,40,1,8
80337,731.707317073171,4,2,1,40,1,0

- Added.


01:19:953 (5) is not worth fixing because it's gonna throw players off, given the fact that they expect all three objects (slider's tail and the notes that follow) have the same time interval between them. - Sure

Yuthuil wrote:

M4M from PM

Bpm 82 or halved? If 82 then try AR 7 or at least 7.8 - 82. AR7

00:07:898 (2,5) - stack? - Fixed, then improved.
00:11:191 (3) - This doesn't really follow vocal or instruments - Improved.
00:24:727 (1,2) - Try cloning 2 of one then doing ctrl j + h - Fixed.
00:28:386 (2) - Doesn't follow vocal or instrument, there's a beat on the blue tick - Fixed.
00:40:825 (4) - ^- Fixed.
00:59:849 (1,2) - attempt a proper blanket with grid size precise - Fixed.
01:41:556 (2,3) - plays awkwardly and looks kind of awkward, try making 2 a straight slider - Nope. I like it like it is.

ohad1881 wrote:

01:26:191- 1,2,3 u should do distance snap BTW those 3 - It is.
02:11:922-1,2,3 same with these- its just seem nicer in the eye - Fixed.
04:24:727- u should the distance snap like 6 and 7 - Fixed.
well the map is realy good i have been surprise!
gj!

1. 00:29:849 (4) - This could do with being a single note, not a repeat slider.
2. 00:52:349 (3,4) - These can just be stacked underneath the sliderend (00:52:532 (4) Is out of place also).
3. 00:57:654 (3) - Out of place.
4. 01:10:825 (7,8,9) - Consider two sliders or a repeat slider here.
5. 01:19:220 (3) - Remove 01:19:769 (4,5) and make it a repeat slider perhaps.
6. 02:00:215 (4) - Turn this into a triple instead.
7. 02:07:166 - Replace the spinner start with a note here. Start the spinner at 02:07:532 instead.
8. 02:45:032 - I think there really should be a note here, you have mapped the first piano note but not the second.
9. 02:53:080 - Add a note here.
10. 03:01:312 (3) - This goes slightly outside of the playfield, consider moving.
11. 03:04:239 (5) - Make this a one beat reverse slider.
12. 03:04:971 (6) - You could try doing the same here, or leave it a normal slider.
13. 03:24:544 - I think you could add a note here.
14. 03:47:776 (3,4,5) - I think you could have a bit more fun with this, as opposed to leaving it a solitary triple.
15. 04:00:946 (5) - Remove the note and start the spinner here?
16. 05:19:605 (5) - This is the last slider of the map, and could definitely be more beautiful than a simple straight slider, for example: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2941729

Kuki wrote:

From ✞Kuki and Moph's Modding Q✞

[Collab]

1. 00:29:849 (4) - This could do with being a single note, not a repeat slider. - Fixed.
2. 02:00:215 (4) - Turn this into a triple instead. - I'm leaving like it is.
3. 02:07:166 - Replace the spinner start with a note here. Start the spinner at 02:07:532 instead. - I'm following the main vocal here. So not fixed.
4. 03:24:544 - I think you could add a note here. - Added.
5. 03:47:776 (3,4,5) - I think you could have a bit more fun with this, as opposed to leaving it a solitary triple. - Leaving like it is.
6. 04:00:946 (5) - Remove the note and start the spinner here? - Why? It fits imo.
7. 05:19:605 (5) - This is the last slider of the map, and could definitely be more beautiful than a simple straight slider, for example: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2941729 - Fixed.

Sieg wrote:

congrats :3

VINXIS wrote:

sik


tho u cud say u collabed with Wafu in the desc. btw zzz

Euny wrote:

♥Pjecoo♥


congra!!!!