Sigma Ft Paloma Faith - Changing [Osu|Taiko] · forum

Hula

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Hula 2014-10-05T15:19:31+00:00

This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 01 July 2016 at 22:23:44

Artist: Sigma Ft Paloma Faith
Title: Changing
Tags: dnb d'n'b Drum and bass n uk top 40 pop Tess Collab -GN Ayu Nwolf Kurosanyan edm English British Life ComfyWolf Meme Voli Arphimigon
BPM: 171
Filesize: 5990kb
Play Time: 02:36
Difficulties Available:

Arphimigon's Really Hard (3.83 stars, 406 notes)
Ayu's Hard (2.78 stars, 286 notes)
-GN's Medium (1.98 stars, 191 notes)
HulaVoli's Easy (1.29 stars, 102 notes)
Kurosanyan's Oni (4.52 stars, 848 notes)
Nwolf's Muzukashii (2.83 stars, 462 notes)
Pinky (4.94 stars, 549 notes)
Tesla's Collab Insane (4.58 stars, 537 notes)
Voli's Insane (4.31 stars, 482 notes)

Download: Sigma Ft Paloma Faith - Changing
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Online offset should be good now.
Gero for president!

I'M BACK BOIS

Storyboard By

ComfyWolf!

REDOWNLOAD, NEW MP3 NOVEMBER 2015.
Make sure you're using Stable build. Stable (fallback) has issues with the SB. At least for me, 24/10/2015.

Hallo (Kuro's Oni is amazing fyi).
All heil the mighty y-axis for its bountiful harvests.
Taking Mods yo.
~~Reason for no easy in the mapset is that I think easies are pointlessly easy diffs and I have no interest in them.~~

Tesla by Hula (me!) and Tess - Tess' part is after the break.
HulaVoli's Super easy - First part - Voli, 2nd part mine.

gn's first ever gd, it's cute!

Cheers to SMIC for helping hitsound some parts Pinky

SPOILER

feel free to star my map, be part of something amazing.
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Last edited by Hula 2016-09-16T11:29:44+00:00, edited 188 times in total.

-GN

Champion Above Champions

734 posts

Joined June 2011

-GN 2014-10-29T12:11:58+00:00

aw yiss, first completed GD i've ever done. if you drop this set i'm gonna find you

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osu file format v13

[General]
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PreviewTime: 61804
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TitleUnicode:Changing Ft. Paloma Faith
Artist:Sigma
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Tags:dnb d'n'b Drum and bass n uk top 40 pop
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200,192,137067,2,0,B|135:211|138:171|73:191,1,130,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
28,243,137593,6,0,P|18:311|47:362,2,130,4|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
129,141,138646,2,0,P|139:73|110:22,2,130,2|4|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
165,280,139699,2,0,P|224:315|276:317,1,65,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
284,307,140049,1,2,0:0:0:0:
390,232,140400,6,0,P|442:204|517:208,2,130,4|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
248,210,141453,2,0,P|196:238|120:233,2,130,2|4|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
337,98,142506,1,0,0:0:0:0:
304,41,142681,2,0,P|226:6|159:20,1,130,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
126,41,143207,6,0,P|85:118|92:176,1,130,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
175,271,143909,1,0,0:0:0:0:
297,345,144260,2,0,P|338:268|331:210,1,130,2|4,0:0|0:3,0:0:0:0:
335,13,145137,6,0,P|271:19|196:86,1,130,0|0,0:0|0:3,0:0:0:0:
186,111,145663,1,2,0:0:0:0:
145,274,146014,2,0,P|39:312|52:195,1,260,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
196,200,147067,6,0,P|255:170|273:99,1,130,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
152,37,147769,1,8,0:0:0:0:
106,172,148120,1,0,0:0:0:0:
106,172,148295,2,0,P|116:251|158:287,1,130,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
217,308,148821,6,0,P|287:322|348:310,2,130,4|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
189,181,149874,2,0,P|166:121|125:71,2,130,2|4|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
77,271,150926,2,0,P|55:293|37:320,1,65,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
15,381,151277,1,2,0:0:0:0:
171,381,151628,6,0,P|217:310|222:258,1,130,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
137,134,152330,1,0,0:0:0:0:
21,238,152681,6,0,P|92:284|144:289,1,130,2|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
267,205,153383,1,0,0:0:0:0:
275,127,153558,6,0,P|255:61|205:13,1,130,0|0,3:3|0:0,3:2:0:0:
135,6,154085,1,0,3:0:0:0:
13,102,154435,1,4,3:3:0:0:
256,192,154479,12,4,157242,0:0:0:0:

Hula

581 posts

Joined January 2013

Topic Starter

Hula 2014-10-29T20:15:34+00:00

holy shit, this is your first ever gd? this is gonna be my first ever ranked set! IT'S A MAP OF FIRSTS

Nyxa

848 posts

Joined October 2013

Nyxa 2014-10-31T19:18:12+00:00

This is my first ever post with no meaningful content whatsoever.

Irreversible

osu! Alumni

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Joined December 2011

Irreversible 2014-11-03T22:38:16+00:00

good luck

Secretpipe

3,316 posts

Joined December 2012

Secretpipe 2014-11-04T06:12:12+00:00

That's gonna be massive brah

Sieg

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Joined February 2012

Sieg 2014-11-05T20:57:21+00:00

Hula wrote:
note - eventually i'll cut this mp3

sup brah
http://puu.sh/cEFP3/cd525bd3df.mp3

here your nice fade out
offset +51

Hula

581 posts

Joined January 2013

Topic Starter

Hula 2014-11-05T22:32:34+00:00

Sieg wrote:
Hula wrote:
note - eventually i'll cut this mp3
sup brah
http://puu.sh/cEFP3/cd525bd3df.mp3

here your nice fade out
offset +51

sup, cheers, I'll give you kds when it gives 1, cos i think it might give 2 right now? and the first big mod should get that :p

Nyxa

848 posts

Joined October 2013

Nyxa 2014-11-07T17:23:05+00:00

It gives 1 at the moment.

SuperMIC

420 posts

Joined July 2011

SuperMIC 2014-11-08T02:43:32+00:00

Helped re-hitsound Pinky difficulty with the integration of the Normal-hitset.

You go Hula :3

Akali

639 posts

Joined November 2012

Akali 2014-11-13T13:11:43+00:00

SPOILER

12:57 Akali: hi
12:57 Akali: some parts on tesla's insane
12:57 Hula: what up
12:57 Hula: i'm about to shower
12:57 Hula: k
12:57 Akali: look like he copy pasted them from your map
12:57 Akali: and shift+ ctrl + s
12:57 Akali: x0.8 lol
12:57 Hula: which part do you think
12:57 Hula: haha
12:57 Hula: cos everything before first break is mine btw
12:58 Akali: oh ok
12:58 Hula: and will resemble Pinky a bit
12:58 Akali: might explain
12:58 Hula: i didn't quite copyp paste it :p
12:58 Akali: on pinky there is some stuff that could be better
12:58 Akali: visually for sure
12:58 Akali: while playing the same
12:58 Hula: sure thing
12:58 Hula: like?
12:58 Akali: can irc mod
12:58 Hula: yes
12:58 Akali: for like 1h
12:58 Hula: that's what i'm hoping for
12:58 Hula: \o\
12:59 Hula: dayum
12:59 Akali: or less
12:59 Akali: gotta remove these nasty leaves
12:59 Hula: for however long's necessary
12:59 Hula:

i hope pinky aint that bad
12:59 Akali: it's fun
13:02 Akali: k
13:02 Hula: k, time to make it a Sexxtra
13:02 Akali: 00:25:699 (4) - maybe make it follow curve of 00:25:348 (3) -
13:03 Akali: this looks like fatman's dong
13:03 Hula: lol k
13:03 Akali: curved and following to bottom might be better
13:03 Hula: it's hard though

13:03 Hula: so curve the 4?
13:03 Akali: ye
13:03 Hula: k
13:03 Akali: 00:26:225 (5) - this idk hm
13:03 Akali: because vocal has secon sylable
13:04 Akali: on
13:04 Akali: 26576 red tick
13:04 Akali: but it works this way so w/e I guess
13:04 Akali: but you could always make it 1/1 slider
13:04 Hula: inorite, i wanted to start on the drums next
13:04 Hula: you think that works?
13:04 Akali: ye it's fine
13:04 Hula: k
13:05 Akali: just saying what I would do ;;
13:05 Hula: lemme construct a slider
13:05 Hula: hm
13:05 Hula: i'll change it to a slider for now
13:05 Hula: i might remove it
13:06 Akali: hmm that vocal "vibratto" starts on
13:06 Akali: the end of (4)
13:06 Akali: so might put click on that?
13:06 Hula: like a whistle?
13:06 Akali: no i mean
13:06 Hula: normal-hitnormal?
13:06 Akali: make player to click
13:06 Hula: ohh
13:06 Akali: so slider start
13:07 Akali: but it's you know
13:07 Hula: yeah that could work
13:07 Akali: one vocal eee how to call that
13:07 Akali: "wave"
13:07 Hula: yeah
13:07 Akali: so as it is plays just fine and fits the music too, just might be more impactful
13:07 Hula: i stuck it at 1.0 ds from the start for the (1) slider
13:08 Hula: actually, stacking it for now
13:08 Akali: i mean end of 00:25:699 (4) -
13:08 Hula: OHHH
13:08 Akali: could be start of slider, without making stuff 3/4
13:09 Akali: just how I feel it
13:09 Hula: (6) needs to be a circle though
13:10 Akali: I don't have 6 there
13:10 Akali: did I delete it ;;
13:10 Hula: not on the red tick?

13:10 Hula: there's a drum and vocal
13:10 Akali: oh 5
13:11 Hula: http://puu.sh/cOZGp/58d59c7597.jpg
13:11 Hula: this is what this pattern looks reight now
13:11 Hula: on the timeline
13:12 Akali: hm
13:13 Akali: maybe just stick with slider
13:13 Akali: just make it curved and directed to the bottom
13:13 Hula: okay
13:13 Hula: on my (6) ye
13:13 Akali: 00:30:611 (7) - this being 3/4 works but is not necessary
13:14 Hula: i like that though
13:14 Hula: what do you suggest
13:15 Akali: it's just that the distance to 1 is ambigous
13:15 Akali: and on the rest of the map it suggests 1/4
13:15 Akali: so maybe move 7 so end overlaps and makes it obvious
13:15 Hula: hm
13:16 Hula: thing is (3) stacks on the slider end
13:16 Hula: so won't it look messy if move the slider end?
13:16 Akali: ye that's the problem
13:16 Akali: so leave it this way if you don't want rearrange jumps
13:17 Hula: ye, i don't really want to unless they're offensive
13:17 Akali: 00:35:172 (1,2,4) -
13:17 Akali: these blow imo
13:18 Akali: it's like "Mom look I found ctrl+>
13:18 Hula: actually
13:18 Hula: ctrl H
13:18 Hula: no
13:18 Hula: ctrl g
13:18 Akali: it's the same on straight sliders ;;
13:18 Hula: k
13:19 Hula: i like the straightness of the sliders though
13:19 Hula: you don't?
13:19 Akali: I don't like them being located like that
13:20 Akali: making paraller lines
13:20 Hula: so you suggest just changing the angle?
13:20 Akali: ye or rearranging a bit
13:20 Akali: like
13:21 Akali: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2234539 done quick
13:22 Hula: hm
13:22 Hula: looks nice
13:23 Hula: yeah
13:23 Hula: that's awesome
13:23 Hula:

13:23 Akali: 00:39:909 (2) - again parallel
13:23 Akali: kinda 2013
13:23 Akali: 2012*
13:23 Akali: 2011
13:23 Hula: I LIKE THEM
13:23 Hula: ]can't i keep em?
13:24 Akali: hey you can ignore everything I say
13:24 Akali: it's not to make it more rankable right
13:24 Akali: because I have no clue
13:24 Hula: lol
13:24 Akali: just how it would be better imho
13:24 Hula: my biggest concern
13:24 Hula: is making it better to play
13:24 Akali: if you rotate 2 flow is more fun
13:24 Akali: like -30degrees
13:25 Hula: lemme see
13:25 Akali: 00:40:435 (3,4,1) - then you would have to rearrange this of course
13:25 Akali: rotate and move to the right
13:25 Hula: hm
13:25 Hula: i like the bit that follows it a lot
13:25 Hula: so i don't really wanna change it
13:26 Hula: is it offensively ugly?
13:26 Hula: if it is i will change it
13:26 Akali: no
13:26 Hula: <3
13:26 Akali: 00:43:944 (2) - don't like this too
13:26 Hula: ahhh
13:27 Hula: yeah, that was just placed in cos i didn't know what to do
13:27 Akali: http://puu.sh/cP0h9.jpg
13:28 Hula: http://puu.sh/cP0kr/ed8c782f45.jpg
13:28 Hula: decided on this
13:28 Hula: is this k?
13:28 Akali: ye, fits the vocal imo
13:29 Hula: \o/
13:29 Hula: i gotta fix these whistles man
13:29 Hula: they're so stupid haha
13:29 Akali: 00:50:611 (1,2,1) - this the same as before but you like it so qq
13:29 Hula: on the jumpy bit*
13:29 Akali: Idk, I have my skin's hitsounds
13:29 Hula: ye i do!
13:29 Hula: ahh
13:30 Akali: 00:53:418 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - squares, pls
13:30 Hula: i admit
13:30 Hula: i was being lazy
13:30 Akali: "first time mapping with gridsnap lets make jumps"
13:31 Hula: http://puu.sh/cP0qO/d1b5ad2cae.jpg
13:31 Hula: pentagon you know
13:31 Hula: :p
13:31 Akali: ye
13:31 Akali: after 9/11
13:31 Akali: 00:56:927 (3) - meh, looks random
13:32 Hula: i'm truly retarded at making buildups
13:32 Hula: huh
13:32 Hula: it's copy paste of (2)
13:32 Akali: ye
13:32 Hula: why does it look random?
13:32 Akali: idk just looks
13:33 Hula: k
13:33 Hula: i'll work on that
13:33 Akali: i would rearrange this like
13:34 Akali: http://puu.sh/cP0xT.jpg
13:34 Akali: and after that
13:34 Akali: 00:57:628 (1,2) - change these because for one thing
13:34 Akali: they have different curve than other sliders in the song
13:34 Hula: you'd flip it
13:34 Akali: basically
13:34 Akali: then make new 1/2 and place them accordingly
13:36 Hula: okay
13:36 Akali: 00:59:032 (1) - again lazy rotations
13:36 Akali: http://puu.sh/cP0EJ.jpg smth like this? think about it
13:37 Akali: 01:01:137 (3,4) - this has weird flow
13:37 Akali: but fits that who o ow
13:37 Hula: inroite
13:38 Akali: 01:03:242 (1,2,3) - i don't like when there is symmetry close to the axis
13:38 Akali: and it's not actually on the axis
13:38 Akali: but whatever
13:38 Hula: blame map boundary :/
13:39 Hula: actually
13:39 Hula: i can fix that easy
13:39 Akali: 01:04:646 (1,2,3,4) - idk about this
13:39 Akali: looks coco
13:40 Hula: but?
13:40 Akali: coconutmilk
13:40 Akali: just looks cheap, you can think of something better
13:40 Akali: 01:05:699 (5,6) - that will flow with this better
13:41 Hula: i actually really prided myself on that

13:41 Akali: sorry ;;
13:41 Hula: okay i will do
13:41 Hula: i think i even used it in my collab i liked it so much
13:41 Hula: haha
13:41 Hula: fml
13:41 Akali: 01:07:804 (3) - rotate these bad boys like 10 degrees
13:42 Akali: I mean one of them and then 2nd symmetrical
13:42 Hula: http://puu.sh/cP0RK/202ff320ff.jpg
13:42 Hula: more?
13:42 Akali: cool
13:42 Hula: exactly 10 degrees
13:42 Hula: haha
13:43 Akali: 01:08:506 (5,6) - after these horizontal sliders this would be better flow if it went other direction
13:43 Akali: but that would require ctrl+h whole map probably
13:43 Hula: what horizontal sliders
13:43 Hula:

13:43 Hula: wow no then
13:43 Hula: ahhh
13:43 Akali: the ones you rotated 10 degrees lol
13:43 Hula: ohh
13:44 Hula: yeah, i get what you mean
13:44 Hula: fuck.
13:44 Akali: 01:08:856 (1,2) - actually you could put these on the other side
13:44 Hula: oh
13:44 Hula: can I just Ctrl g then 3 and 4?
13:45 Akali: and still finish on that return slider
13:45 Hula: http://puu.sh/cP0Yt/8c67a2f8a3.jpg
13:45 Akali: that works too
13:45 Hula: ye
13:46 Hula: simpler solution :p
13:46 Hula: oh yeah i could've done what you said too
13:47 Akali: 01:10:611 (3) - this seems meh too
13:47 Akali: like 3 and 4 are fine just dont fit too well after that triangle
13:48 Hula: hm
13:48 Hula: yeah, i see what you mean
13:48 Akali: try to blanket it or smth
13:48 Hula: blanket the triangle with a straight slider?

13:48 Akali: no make it curved ob
13:48 Akali: obv
13:48 Akali: and try changing the order in the triangle too mb
13:49 Hula: http://puu.sh/cP18F/19c59ce804.jpg
13:49 Hula: does this too?
13:50 Hula: hm acutally that looks ugly
13:50 Akali: 01:12:014 (2) - kinda weird for them to face same direction after such big jump
13:51 Akali: but don't know how to change it without changing everything after
13:51 Akali: 01:13:067 (1) - I would use speed up on this section
13:51 Akali: there are additional strings or some shit, it goes hype
13:51 Hula: um
13:51 Hula: lazy ctrl g?
13:51 Akali: mb ;;
13:51 Hula: hm k
13:52 Hula: i'll do that in a bit
13:52 Hula: that'll take some time
13:52 Akali: 01:44:295 (4) - here we go again
13:52 Akali: it's better but still could be curved to bottom more
13:53 Hula: ight
13:53 Hula: same thing with that piano sound
13:53 Akali: 01:53:769 (1) - how hollow wings maps drums
13:53 Akali: straight line across the screen

13:54 Akali: I would curve 1 a bit
13:54 Akali: then make 2 different as well
13:54 Hula: whooooaahh
13:54 Hula: straight lines are cool
13:54 Akali: ye
13:54 Akali: just don't like it in this particular moment ;;
13:54 Hula: wow k
13:54 Akali: stream is cool
13:54 Akali: just the slider after it
13:54 Akali: or you can leave 1 just
13:54 Akali: make 2 different
13:54 Hula: okay
13:56 Akali: 02:02:541 (2) - this similar to what was before
13:56 Hula: wow i just made chinese
13:56 Hula: okay
13:56 Akali: 02:02:892 (3) - + this is a bit far to the left imo to make straight slider
13:57 Hula: huh
13:57 Hula: rotate it some?
13:57 Akali: http://puu.sh/cP1qT.jpg maybe put it here?
13:57 Akali: or rotate if you want keep the same idea
13:57 Hula: your picture plays nice
13:58 Akali: 02:06:751 (7,8,9,10,11,12) - top kek
13:58 Akali: but if you like these
13:58 Akali: can keep them
13:59 Hula: it's the only weird pattern i got
13:59 Hula: it looks like shit but i like it
14:00 Hula: cos it's shit
14:00 Hula: i'll redo them at soime point
14:01 Akali: 02:15:172 (2,3,4,5) - dun like this whole thing
14:01 Hula: hm
14:02 Akali: pretty tight flow
14:02 Akali: http://puu.sh/cP1Do.png
14:02 Akali: move 4-5 more to the bottom, rearrange 1/2?
14:02 Akali: (i didn't move 2 at all ye)
14:03 Hula: what's the objects in that imagfe?
14:03 Hula: cos it's now at 2:15
14:03 Akali: 02:16:225 (1) -
14:03 Akali: don't put that in that spot
14:03 Hula: oh right
14:03 Akali: just so it faces this direction mb
14:04 Akali: 02:17:979 (2) - again, maybe not horizontal
14:05 Akali: 02:21:839 (1,2) - these fuckers are ugly
14:05 Hula: WHOAH NOW
14:05 Hula: they're my babies
14:05 Hula: but i understand
14:06 Akali: 02:23:593 (3,4,5,6) - same pattern as before, keep if you like but I find this ugl
14:06 Akali: 02:27:453 (3,4,5) - this is mess
14:06 Hula: i like it
14:06 Hula: okay, agreed
14:06 Akali: make it regular
14:06 Akali: like
14:07 Akali: rotate (3) -15 and then -30
14:07 Akali: to make the sliders
14:08 Akali: http://puu.sh/cP1RD.jpg
14:08 Akali: 02:29:207 (3,4) - same storz
14:08 Akali: y
14:08 Akali: 02:30:260 (1,2) - same story
14:08 Hula: okay
14:08 Akali: 02:32:014 (3) - again sliders in this section could use speed up
14:08 Akali: and sum curves
14:09 Hula: ye
14:09 Hula: <3
14:09 Akali: 02:36:576 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - pretty tight for crescendo stream
14:09 Akali: could try to do sliderjumps too
14:09 Akali: insane has slider jumps
14:09 Hula: ye
14:09 *Akali is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/514824 Sigma - Changing Ft. Paloma Faith [Pinky]]
14:10 Hula: but that was tess' part
14:10 Hula: i wanted a tight stream
14:10 Hula: cos end of of map
14:10 Akali: make fuckers miss
14:11 Hula: nah m8
14:11 Hula: end of the map yo
14:11 Hula: they just fcd this map
14:11 Akali: no but honestly feels anticlimactic
14:11 Hula: hm okay.
14:11 Akali: use same snap as in stream before
14:11 Akali: should work

Sonnyc

7,753 posts

Joined June 2008

Sonnyc 2014-11-13T14:34:03+00:00

[Pinky]
00:42:190 (1,2) - It would be more nice for the players if you can make some more space between these sliders.
00:47:453 (6,7) - I believe there was some mistake here. Rhythm doesn't match, nor the spacing.
00:55:874 (5) - Mind giving a new combo? That way seems more sensible because there is a distance reduction along the volume reduction, which makes this stream seperated from the previous one.
01:19:032 - Break time nearly 20 seconds isn't recommended.
01:47:628 (4,5) - Keep distance please.
02:14:470 (5) - NC?

Hula

581 posts

Joined January 2013

Topic Starter

Hula 2014-11-13T16:14:22+00:00

Sonnyc wrote:
[Pinky]
00:42:190 (1,2) - It would be more nice for the players if you can make some more space between these sliders.
fixed
00:47:453 (6,7) - I believe there was some mistake here. Rhythm doesn't match, nor the spacing. I think there was a recalculate slider error, is this what you mean?
00:55:874 (5) - Mind giving a new combo? That way seems more sensible because there is a distance reduction along the volume reduction, which makes this stream seperated from the previous one. Woops! Did the same on the other stream later on as well
01:19:032 - Break time nearly 20 seconds isn't recommended. we're gonna have to live with it, not like it would add anything flavoursome to the map anyway
01:47:628 (4,5) - Keep distance please. woops, cheers!
02:14:470 (5) - NC? fixed

Thanks for the mini mod dude o/

Soinou

747 posts

Joined June 2012

Soinou 2014-11-13T22:12:28+00:00

Here, have some stars

Hula

581 posts

Joined January 2013

Topic Starter

Hula 2014-11-14T16:01:04+00:00

Soinou wrote:
Here, have some stars

FEED ME

Kurosanyan

2,642 posts

Joined November 2009

Kurosanyan 2014-11-14T16:15:29+00:00

[Nwolf's Muzukashii]
As I said, mod for Nwolf's Muzukashii (1 day late though)
As Lust said, the Muzukashii lacks notes and the gap between the 2 maps is a bit too big.
First I'll say what feels wrong to me in your map, then I'll make some suggestions to make it a bit more Muzukashii.

You really should put OD 4. Maybe HP 4 too, but I don't think this one is as much important.
00:22:541 (8,9,10) - There's drums at 00:22:892 - and 00:23:418 - and the next beat following those two drums is at 00:23:769 -
I would suggest :
and for the next pattern ( 00:25:348 (11,12,13) - ) :
Adding a note on the next one prepare the player to the fact that the real map is coming soon.
This or you could try to put the katsu on a white tick, but it doesn't really fit to the beat and to 00:28:155 (15,16,17,18,19) - neither.
01:13:067 (66,67,68,69,70,71,72,73,74,75,76,77,78,79,80,81,82,83,84,85,86,87,88) - This part is really weird because you switch between lots of things.
01:13:067 (66,67,68,69,70,71,72,73,74,75) - Is the OHOHOH OH thing that you followed on the whole kiai.
01:14:997 (76,77,78,79) - Is the female singer (and the end of the WOHOHO O is ignored).
01:15:874 (79,80) - Oh, it follows the melody.
01:16:576 (81) - Or is it the female singer? The drums?
01:16:751 (82,83,84,85,86,87,88) - Well I don't know anymore man.
You should find a way to make it more consistent. Actually the whole thing is following drums (there's drums everywhere anyway) but the way you mapped it, it's confusing. If you want to follow drums, add more notes and if you want to follow something else, move those notes.
Personally, I'd suggest to follow the hohoho ho until 01:15:874 - but there's probably others fine ways.
01:18:681 (88,1,1) - Put the same thing as in the Oni?
01:41:137 (8,9,10) - 01:43:944 (11,12,13) - Same suggestion as before.

To have more notes, first you need to... add more notes! Well, as an example, turning two 2 notes patterns (there's a lot of those) in a 5 notes one. Just avoid to make them too long. 5 1/2 notes is cool, 7 1/2 notes is a bit tricky but is fine, avoid going above this except for slow songs or easy patterns like 02:13:418 (120,121,122,123,124,125,126,127) - . Then you should try to add more ddd and kkk (but not too much) or even ddk and kkd.
I'll make some random suggestions of what you could add but feel free to do whatever you want:

00:36:049 (10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18,19) -
00:43:944 (40,41,42,43,44) -

I hope you'll be able to add more notes without making errors or a map too much repetitive/too hard, good luck.

[General]
It's Kurosanyan, not Kuronsanyan, fix the tags please.

Last edited by Kurosanyan 2014-11-14T22:34:29+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

Bl4ckk

110 posts

Joined August 2013

Bl4ckk 2014-11-14T17:10:45+00:00

Here I am for the M4M!
Let's start

General
Background: I can't understand it! Maybe use something more... Suited to the song?:P (Maybe something like a "Sigma" text)
02:37:277 - Maybe cut the mp3? 50 secs of nothing is just a waste of memory. I can do it for you, if you want, with a fade at the end.
Normal
Something general... Ar 3 is better for a normal, I guess.
This map has a lot of bad flow.. For example, here 00:42:892 -
Try to do something like.. This http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2238803
Try to fix the other bad points, like this 01:15:874 (1) -.
It's better if you put that circle here: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2238810
01:15:889 - This spinner, so closed to that circle, can confuse a newbie. He has no time to understand what's happening. It's not readable by a low-level player. Believe me.
01:45:348 - Try to do something symmetric to this 01:43:944 -
01:57:277 (2,1) - This overlap looks bad...
01:59:734 (4,1) - ^
02:13:418 - It's hard for a newbie to singletap 4 sequential notes. Maybe 1/2 reverse slider?
02:28:330 (4,1) - Try to avoid the overlap
02:33:418 (2,1) - ^
Looks bad in these points.
Hard
Something general... OD +0,5.
For the rest, I just found something bad for flow.
02:28:504 (3,1) - For example... If a player must jump to the first slider's end to the second slider's start, he won't do a circle for the jump, he'll just do a line with the cursor, so that's a big jump and it will probably slider-break the combo. I don't know if you understood me.

(PAINT PRO)
Find another way to make a good flow

Nothing more, 'cause I really like this hard. Well played.
Insane
00:38:506 - A triplet would be fine here.
01:04:821 (2) - Corrupts the spacing.. Just a little bit.. D:
01:06:400 (2) - This slow one confused me.
01:06:400 (2) - Triplet here if you want
01:45:260 (1) - Try to adapt it to the voice
Pinky
General: Try to nc adapting combos to the voice... For example, you can nc here: 01:54:470 (3) - or here 01:57:277 (4) - . Try to focus on New comboing too, 'cause that's kinda important. (Won't say you all the notes I think must have the nc)
01:03:242 - Bad flow here
01:06:049 (1) - Why is this a new combo?
02:28:681 (6,1) - WTH this jump.
02:32:014 (3,4) - ^ D: (Have just found other jumps like these, they're too big imo)
For the rest, nice simmetry and flow.

That's all.. The normal needs a lot of work imo
Hope I helped, waiting for ya, bb ^^

Hula

581 posts

Joined January 2013

Topic Starter

Hula 2014-11-14T19:11:59+00:00

Dasheroo wrote:
Here I am for the M4M!
Let's start
General
Background: I can't understand it! Maybe use something more... Suited to the song?:P (Maybe something like a "Sigma" text) I love this bg cos it's happy and the song's really happy 8)
02:37:277 - Maybe cut the mp3? 50 secs of nothing is just a waste of memory. I can do it for you, if you want, with a fade at the end. Not right now, I'm quite happy giving the entire song to people, despite me not mapping it entirely, I don't think it's too offensive to do that

Insane
00:38:506 - A triplet would be fine here. I can see this working, added one.
01:04:821 (2) - Corrupts the spacing.. Just a little bit.. D: I like this pattern
01:06:400 (2) - This slow one confused me. Woops, forgot to add a NC there to try indicate to the player it's a slower slider. Added a NC
01:06:400 (2) - Triplet here if you want Nah
01:45:260 (1) - Try to adapt it to the voice Tess, this is your bit :p

Pinky
General: Try to nc adapting combos to the voice... For example, you can nc here: 01:54:470 (3) - or here 01:57:277 (4) - . Try to focus on New comboing too, 'cause that's kinda important. (Won't say you all the notes I think must have the nc) If I get more comments on the NC issue front I will change it, but for now I'm quite happy with my scheme of NCing, it's simple yet effective - I have made a couple of changes though
01:03:242 - Bad flow here Can't really fix this right now without destroying everything else
01:06:049 (1) - Why is this a new combo? To indicate a SV change
02:28:681 (6,1) - WTH this jump. Reduced the spacing big, but basically the jump's there cos the song's getting more intense
02:32:014 (3,4) - ^ D: (Have just found other jumps like these, they're too big imo)
For the rest, nice simmetry and flow. These jumps are deliberate for it's the most intense part of the map, I might think about reducing them a bit.

That's all.. The normal needs a lot of work imo
Hope I helped, waiting for ya, bb ^^

I'll be modding or at least starting to mod your map tonight o/

hackSL

171 posts

Joined July 2010

hackSL 2014-11-14T22:06:28+00:00

m4m here. sorry for my BAD english and poor mod.
Tesla's Insane
00:23:242 (2) - 00:25:699 (4) - maybe better use 1.1 spacing? looks better
00:26:225 (5,1) - stack dis?
01:02:892 (5,6,7,8,1) - not sure, but i think better dont map under editor interface. drop litte down...
02:29:207 (2) - ^
01:52:014 (7,1) - stack?
01:15:918 (1) - move to blue tick
00:33:418 (5,1) - better stack dis or increase distance
00:32:365 (1,2) - i think that better (imho) http://puu.sh/cQS8d/0cee2ac0dd.jpg
00:54:821 (1,2) - ^

Pinky
00:32:365 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5) - not sure, but i think better dont map under editor interface. drop litte down... (blablabla...)
00:51:663 (3,4,5,6,1) - ^
01:02:541 (5) - ^
01:11:313 (5,6,7,8,1) - ^
02:09:734 (2) - ^
01:49:558 (1) - ^
02:26:751 (5) - ^
00:51:137 (2) - ^ but move up
01:50:962 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5) - ^
02:04:646 (7) - ^
01:11:313 (5,6,7,8,1) - move to blue tick

Mod about "^" haha, sorry...

Ayu's Hard
beautiful diff, nice work.

GN's Normal
Im not able to do normals so i cant say something...

Hula

581 posts

Joined January 2013

Topic Starter

Hula 2014-11-14T22:32:34+00:00

hackSL wrote:
m4m here. sorry for my BAD english and poor mod. That is okay, thanks for the mod
Tesla's Insane
00:23:242 (2) - 00:25:699 (4) - maybe better use 1.1 spacing? looks better Yeah, alright, gonna do this for the whole section where the circles touch
00:26:225 (5,1) - stack dis? Ye, that works
01:02:892 (5,6,7,8,1) - not sure, but i think better dont map under editor interface. drop litte down... it doesn't with new default skin
02:29:207 (2) - ^ ^
01:52:014 (7,1) - stack? Tess
01:15:918 (1) - move to blue tick Yeah, that would be nicer than having it stuck on a grey tick
00:33:418 (5,1) - better stack dis or increase distance I think it works alright as it is
00:32:365 (1,2) - i think that better (imho) http://puu.sh/cQS8d/0cee2ac0dd.jpg Maybe, but I don't want there to be a massive gap there, could be a future change, I will consider it.
00:54:821 (1,2) - ^
^

Pinky
00:32:365 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5) - not sure, but i think better dont map under editor interface. drop litte down... (blablabla...)
00:51:663 (3,4,5,6,1) - ^
01:02:541 (5) - ^
01:11:313 (5,6,7,8,1) - ^
02:09:734 (2) - ^
01:49:558 (1) - ^
02:26:751 (5) - ^
00:51:137 (2) - ^ but move up
01:50:962 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5) - ^
02:04:646 (7) - ^
01:11:313 (5,6,7,8,1) - move to blue tick fixed

Mod about "^" haha, sorry... all those ^ aren't necessary cos new default skin doesn't suffer from this

Ayu's Hard
beautiful diff, nice work. indeed it is 8'|

GN's Normal
Im not able to do normals so i cant say something...

Kaguya Hourain

514 posts

Joined October 2012

Kaguya Hourain 2014-11-14T23:47:54+00:00

Alright as promised, here we go

[

General]

Timing settings are okay.
Make sure tags don't conflict with the rest of the diffs, like AiMod suggests, fix some preview point snapping in the taiko difficulties and, finally, make sure all letterbox boxes are ticked or unticked.

[

-GN's Normal]

00:33:769 (1,3) - Man this blanket here could look better if the two sliders were not almost overlapping. Try spreading 3 out a little bit and move it backwards like shown in the image below. Make sure you readjust some of the spacing afterwards if you choose to follow this piece of advice.

Look at this o:

00:36:049 (6,1) - I see no reason why you wouldn't want to follow the sliderpath here and reversing the flow like you're doing here. Will ruin blanket, sure, but the result would be much more appealing in my eyes if you could pull off something like shown next up. If you decide not to follow this suggestion, I would at least suggest to make 1 a little more curvy for a better blanket with circle 4.

~More pretty box images~

00:40:260 (3) - Middle point at x:143 y:239 and endpoint at x:166 y:326 should make this blanket perfect.

00:44:295 (5) - Avoid this sort of slider, please. It's pretty hard to read, especially considering that this is the first difficulty in the set, you should give the 1/2 repeat spam a rest. For this here, I would just go with 2 sliders with 1/2 spacing.

00:45:699 (2,4) - As before, the circle internally overlaps with the slider, making the combination look ugly. Suggestion here is to do the same as above

00:47:979 (3,4) - This sort of spacing can be a little confusing for newcomers. Easiest solution here would be to rotate 4 clockwise enough so that it doesn't overlap with 3, making it also a bit more readable in that aspect. You could flip 3 horizontally on top of that for maximum Kreygasm. Ending result could look like this:

Cute pictureeeee

00:50:084 (3,4,5) - Here we have another overlap that could easily be avoided. Moving 4 a bit downwards so that the spacing will allow you to move 5 a bit to the left and readjusting the blanket without the overlap seems to be the better choice here. End result:

Clearly the end result

00:53:418 (1,2,1,2,3,4) - Having those basically muted is unintuitive and in my opinion silly. Doesn't serve for a buildup any better than it would be if you added some hitsounds to it.

00:58:506 (4) - Moving the midpoint to x:149 y:178 and the endpoint to x:111 y:217 in this slider should pretty up this blanket quite a lot.

01:00:084 (2) - Why not go for a double blanket here?! Make the slider's head blanket with the slider 4 I mentioned above and rotate this here slider 2 enough so that it blankets with 1! Wouldn't that be cool? Here like so:

Hello there!

01:05:699 (3) - Move this slider to x:275 y:299 and see the magic

01:09:734 (3,1) - This looks pretty neat, nice!

01:15:918 (1) - No point starting this 1/8 afterwards. Noone has enough reaction time at this level for 1/8 spacing. Would move it 1/4 apart instead.

01:29:909 - Not sure if you need this green line for anything. Remove it if you want.

01:41:137 (1,2,1) - Now this looks more like it! Nice!

01:45:348 (3,1) - Kaguya disapproves of this blanket and also of the copypasta that has taken place here. Just moving the middle point of slider 1 to x:259 y:221 makes the blanket lots more delicious.

01:53:242 (3) - These sliderpoints (along with others so far) have given me the impression that you have done a rush job to this. The imperfect blankets speak for themselves. Middlepoint at x:257 y:337 and endpoint at x:184 y:371 fix your blanket.

01:57:277 (2) - Same suggestion as previously, use 2 sliders.

02:02:892 (5) - Same as above actually!

02:03:593 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - Since you seem to have copypasted this entire section, I guess fixing the stuff from the previous section identical to it and copypasting them here again works.

02:13:418 (1,2,3,4) - You seem to have fixed the issue here as opposed to your previous section.

02:31:663 (1,1) - This combinations looks pretty bad-looking. Why don't you make orange blanket blue's sliderend? Flow could get improved as well! Like so:

:oooo

02:34:514 (1) - Same as previously, 1/4 spacing at least.

Endnote: I found so many spacing issues that mentioning them here could make me starve. The 1/2 spread across 0.8 and 1.1 in the DS is really not optimal for Normal difficulties, especially ones that are considered the easiest difficulty of the set. Some nice ideas here but they feel unrefined.

[

Ayu's Hard]

I suppose timing has changed and you haven't resnapped anything. Fix that issue.

00:55:699 (2,3,1) - This might be a little hard to read. I'm not really sure what could be done here to prevent that since I feel this fits the most. What I can think of only is removing the reverse from 02:13:416 (1) - this and making a 1/2 slider in place where the sliderend was at in the timeline so it should look like this:

oooo kawaii image

00:57:275 (4) - Curve this just a tiny little more for a better blanket with the circle. Moving the middle point down a few pixels should do the trick.

01:12:012 (2,5) - I find this overlap not so good-looking. Why not try a stack there?

01:29:909 - Same as the Normal diff, yo don't need this green line.

02:14:293 (2,3,1) - Same issue as the copypasted part of this.

This diff is really good, barely found anything!

[

Tesla's Insane]

00:26:225 (5,1) - I don't get the space created here. This can be mapped to vocals with 1/2 sliders.

00:27:804 (6) - Moving this to x:329 y:119 makes a better blanket.

00:44:295 (3,4,5,6) - Yeah as I told you before, I have huge issues with this. 1/4 with silenced sliderends is not good, especially on an Insane level difficulty. Making these 1/2 circles or making the sliderends at least audible would be better.

00:54:821 (1,2,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - These are barely audible. Increase volume at least a little bit. Flowbreak on the stream part is also a little too hard for Insane dificulty.

01:12:716 (5,6) - Not sure how I feel about these after seeing the stream before it. I assume you're looking for variety but sacrificing consistency for variety resulting in making the map harder is to be reconsidered.

01:44:821 (5,1) - Same as previously.

02:35:874 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - Yeah this is too much. Nerf this by a lot.

Endnote: Too much 1/4 in this. Too much indeed. The Hard difficulty has no 1/4 whatsoever and right afterwards we jump to 1/4 kicksliders. Pretty big space in difficulty if you ask me, it shows in the star rating as well. Nearly two whole stars difficulty gap is too much and quite frankly unrankable. As a final note I suggest that you remove plenty of 1/4 from this.

[

Pinky]

00:23:242 (2) - Bend this a little more, more curvy, more sexy, more blanket!

00:44:295 (3,4,5,6) - Not really sure for this difficulty, I guess we can let this slide since you consider this an X diff probably.

01:02:190 (3,5) - Blanket yo. x:225 y:43 best blanket.

01:29:909 - I don't know why this green line is even here anymore :/

01:47:628 (4,5) - Why don't you blanket this?

Endnote: This is a pretty good difficulty. It even has way less kicksliders than Insane, which proves that you can make something difficult out of this song without them. Nice ideas here.

Hula

581 posts

Joined January 2013

Topic Starter

Hula 2014-11-15T18:46:23+00:00

Kaguya Hourain wrote:
Alright as promised, here we go

[ General]

Timing settings are okay.
Make sure tags don't conflict with the rest of the diffs, like AiMod suggests, fix some preview point snapping in the taiko difficulties and, finally, make sure all letterbox boxes are ticked or unticked. How would I fix this for the taiko diffs

[ Tesla's Insane]

00:26:225 (5,1) - I don't get the space created here. This can be mapped to vocals with 1/2 sliders. Done this.

00:27:804 (6) - Moving this to x:329 y:119 makes a better blanket.

00:44:295 (3,4,5,6) - Yeah as I told you before, I have huge issues with this. 1/4 with silenced sliderends is not good, especially on an Insane level difficulty. Making these 1/2 circles or making the sliderends at least audible would be better. I increased slider end volume to 50%

00:54:821 (1,2,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - These are barely audible. Increase volume at least a little bit. Flowbreak on the stream part is also a little too hard for Insane dificulty. They're pretty darn audible, I've increased the volume a bit though since it's a stream and response when hitting a stream makes it easier to hit. Also by the flow breaking you mean the reduction in DS at the end of the stream? I think it's pretty neat and if anything would make it a bit easier.

01:12:716 (5,6) - Not sure how I feel about these after seeing the stream before it. I assume you're looking for variety but sacrificing consistency for variety resulting in making the map harder is to be reconsidered. These are mapped to a violin and they are on a point where 1/4 quintuples have been mapped on before in the stanza so is not a complete shock.

Endnote: Too much 1/4 in this. Too much indeed. The Hard difficulty has no 1/4 whatsoever and right afterwards we jump to 1/4 kicksliders. Pretty big space in difficulty if you ask me, it shows in the star rating as well. Nearly two whole stars difficulty gap is too much and quite frankly unrankable. As a final note I suggest that you remove plenty of 1/4 from this. I think I agree with this, I'll talk to Tess about reducing the difficulty of her section a bit, since there are 1/4 triples that could definitely be taken out without detriment to the map and maybe some decreased spacing to reduce dat star rating, also to work on a solution for the end.

[ Pinky]

00:23:242 (2) - Bend this a little more, more curvy, more sexy, more blanket! fixed

00:44:295 (3,4,5,6) - Not really sure for this difficulty, I guess we can let this slide since you consider this an X diff probably. I really like this regardless 8)

01:02:190 (3,5) - Blanket yo. x:225 y:43 best blanket. fixed blanket

01:29:909 - I don't know why this green line is even here anymore :/ Me neither

01:47:628 (4,5) - Why don't you blanket this? i think i moved it about lazily one time and never did it, fixed.

Endnote: This is a pretty good difficulty. It even has way less kicksliders than Insane, which proves that you can make something difficult out of this song without them. Nice ideas here. thanks

Thanks for the mod!

Dainesl

898 posts

Joined May 2012

Dainesl 2014-11-15T20:23:34+00:00

Yay I get to mod this

Nwolf's Muzukashii

This mod is mostly about consistency things and some nitpicks, nothing major here really, just a small mod :3

00:22:541 - I would like it if you added a couple more notes from here to 00:28:155 - as it's very very different from the Oni; and this section is extremely low density compared to the next one so...
00:44:997 (44) - Nitpick - quite a significant note here; consider adding a finish here? (sounds a bit better as a big kat instead of a big don as it's not exactly super super hard
01:09:558 (51,52,53) - sudden switch from vocal to instrumental mapping due to the middle note of this triplet, might want to reconsider this as it's extremely inconsistent with the rest of the Kiai (it's the only one). Also it's not monochrome so that makes it quite challenging; a further point to consider. If you don't get rid of 52 then at least make 53 a don to make the pattern more suitable (yet again inconsistent I know but playability is also something that is a bit more important; thus you take musical liberties).
01:14:646 (74) - consider removing this note for a more noticeable transition into different vocals; right now it seems like the transition is muddled since both types of vocals are in the same pattern. OH YEAH AND IT'S INCONSISTENT WITH 01:06:400 (39,40,41,42) - OK (just saying)
01:41:137 - same as first suggestion, whatever you do there, do here
01:54:120 (39,40,41,42,43) - Why are 5-plets like this here when they weren't at places like 00:35:523 (8,9,10,11) - which sound pretty much the same, mind you?
02:03:593 (79) - Nitpick - same as 00:44:997
02:24:821 (46) - same as 01:14:646, if you don't do it there at least do it here so that it's fully consistent with the previous kiai and the other transitional vocals get more emphasis I guess
02:28:155 (61,62,63) - same as 01:09:558
02:33:242 (86) - same as 01:14:646, if applied there apply here too.

Kurosanyan's Oni

first off the quiet parts' hitsounds are too loud; at least reduce them by 10% or something

secondly AIMod says there's a lot of unsnapped notes but it might be some sort of glitch or something, so get back to me click here

This mod is mostly about buildup and nice-sounding patterns (the second one being extremely subjective so take them with a grain of salt, do consider the buildup though, that could make the quality a bit higher!)

00:29:207 (29) - and 00:30:786 (41) - consider deleting these notes to create the effect of intense buildup while keeping the idea of a buildup due to spaces (also the section after it is louder and has more spaces; going from this to that is quite jarring to the song so at least put one or two spaces here too)
00:47:014 (17,18) - Perhaps swap these so that both this pattern and the one before it sound the same; this would be a nice effect imo!
00:52:628 (17,18) - see above.
00:54:997 (37,38,39,40,41,42,43,44) - Consider making this pattern slightly easier for a more effective buildup to the Kiai; going from easy non-chorus to hard chorus is always a fun emphasis tool :3
Between 01:46:751 (41) - and 01:49:558 (61) - perhaps get rid of two 1/4 patterns; this part of the song is really quiet so 4 1/4 patterns is too much imo
02:05:699 (19) - Nitpick - Maybe make this a don to be consistent with 2nd and 3rd suggestions
02:11:313 (19) - Nitpick - see above.
02:36:049 (56,57,58,59,60,61,62,63,64,65,66,67,68) - Why is the most difficult pattern at the end? Sure, it's not much harder than normal but could catch players off-guard so perhaps delete 67 just to be on the safe side.

Good luck for ranking! o/

Kurosanyan

2,642 posts

Joined November 2009

Kurosanyan 2014-11-15T20:56:49+00:00

Dainesl wrote:
first off the quiet parts' hitsounds are too loud; at least reduce them by 10% or something Fixed I guess

secondly AIMod says there's a lot of unsnapped notes but it might be some sort of glitch or something, so get back to me click here Yes it's a snap glitch. It's snapped correctly now.

00:29:207 (29) - and 00:30:786 (41) - consider deleting these notes to create the effect of intense buildup while keeping the idea of a buildup due to spaces (also the section after it is louder and has more spaces; going from this to that is quite jarring to the song so at least put one or two spaces here too) I know what you mean but breaks feel weird here. Probably because of the strong vocals.
00:47:014 (17,18) - Perhaps swap these so that both this pattern and the one before it sound the same; this would be a nice effect imo! The music change between those two patterns and I don't really like repeating a pattern if the music suggest me to do another one.
00:54:997 (37,38,39,40,41,42,43,44) - Consider making this pattern slightly easier for a more effective buildup to the Kiai; going from easy non-chorus to hard chorus is always a fun emphasis tool :3 I like it better the way it is and I don't think this song's chorus is worth an emphasis anyway. :c
Between 01:46:751 (41) - and 01:49:558 (61) - perhaps get rid of two 1/4 patterns; this part of the song is really quiet so 4 1/4 patterns is too much imo ... Okay then
02:05:699 (19) - Nitpick - Maybe make this a don to be consistent with 2nd and 3rd suggestions Well I didn't fix those and I like my dkkdk, so...
02:36:049 (56,57,58,59,60,61,62,63,64,65,66,67,68) - Why is the most difficult pattern at the end? Sure, it's not much harder than normal but could catch players off-guard so perhaps delete 67 just to be on the safe side. Imo it's not the hardest part. I have more trouble with the dkkdk personally. Also I think removing 67 would only make it harder.

Thanks

Aiceo

213 posts

Joined May 2014

Aiceo 2014-11-16T01:27:52+00:00

EAT MY STARS!

Arrival

1,418 posts

Joined June 2012

Arrival 2014-11-18T14:37:54+00:00

Okay gogo

[General]

Isn't the mapset lacking an Easy ??

You really should put CUSTOM HITSOUNDS. I can give you some if you don't find.

I'm REALLY annoyed by the fact any of the std diffs finish here 02:37:277 - . You should finish at 02:59:734 - ! This would make more sense.

[-GN's Normal]

I'm making this mod as if I mod an EASY NORMAL. Diffspread purposes.
CHECK YOUR DISTANCE SNAP : There are some spacing problems.

00:35:874 (5,6) - Not a big deal, but this kind of stack on easy is a bit hard to read. Consider this maybe. (It's the same with 00:49:909 (2) - etc..)
00:51:488 (5) - Better curve please.
00:56:225 (1) - Make it as a REAL POLYGON. (Compose -> Create Polygon circles)
01:18:681 - Wow this break seems kinda long. Consider mapping when the vocals start again.
01:57:277 (2) - Avoid the multiple repetitions. Change to one reverse.
02:32:716 (1) - Remove your NC

Pretty nice diff overall. Well done.

[Ayu's Hard]

Consider reducing your AR to 7.

00:32:365 (1) - I'm pretty sure you can stack the tail of your slider with the beginning of 00:31:663 (3) - .
01:18:681 - The break is imo too long, start mapps restart.

Nothing else to say, great diff !

[Tesla's Insane]

00:40:786 (1) - What about a curve on this slider ?
00:50:435 (6) - Consider placing this circle [url=00:50:435 (6) -]here[/url] to make a triangle. A bit better to play imo.
00:54:646 (8) - NAZI : Pt it so x=444
01:03:067 (7,8) - It's going a bit offscreen, be careful.
01:18:681 - The break is imo too long.
01:49:558 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - I really feel like this was put a bit randomly... Try making 2 squares or something with more sense.
02:25:699 (1) - Remove NC

Nice map !

[Pinky]

02:00:084 (1,4) - Stack them with 01:59:909 (3) -
02:36:576 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - This stream is a bit ugly, you could space it a bit more, or give it another shape :>

Maybe a bit overmapped, but it's definetly not bad !

[Nwolf's Muzukashii]

00:02:541 - I understand that for the purpose of the flow you didn't place a not here, but it really sounds weird without a kat. (Same here 00:08:155 - )
02:33:593 (88) - Place this don here : 02:33:769 -

Nice Muzu !

[Kurosanyan's Oni]

00:09:207 - Spinner ?
00:33:155 (61) - Transforme en k ? Je trouve qe ça va mieux en terme de sonorité.

Bien joué ! J'aime beaucoup. (Pour une fois

)

Good mapset overall, I hope you'll get that ranked soon ! I'll star it as soon as I have the kd, for sure !
Good luck Hula !

Last edited by Arrival 2014-11-19T00:02:58+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

Kurosanyan

2,642 posts

Joined November 2009

Kurosanyan 2014-11-18T16:16:30+00:00

Arrival wrote:
[General]

Isn't the mapset lacking an Easy ?? As long as a mapset has a map under 2 stars, it doesn't need something easier, so it's fine.

I'm REALLY annoyed by the fact any of the std diffs finish here 02:37:277 - . You should finish at 02:59:734 - ! This would make more sense. I'm okay with this if Hula wants to do it. I don't mind either way, both ends are fine to me.

[Kurosanyan's Oni]

00:09:207 - Spinner ? The "spinner" sound started way before that and it feels really awkward to me to start a spin at this point.
00:33:155 (61) - Transforme en k ? Je trouve qe ça va mieux en terme de sonorité. I don't really agree with the fact it sounds better and there's the fact it doesn't fit with the others pattern I did for this part (look where are the previous kats, it's a long structure).

Bien joué ! J'aime beaucoup. (Pour une fois ) modchickentechnonow

I'll star it as soon as I have the kd, for sure ! *Denies kudo*

Oui je te réponds en anglais, firetruck la baguette.

Nwolf

2,604 posts

Joined September 2012

Nwolf 2014-11-18T17:07:46+00:00

Kurosanyan wrote:
[Nwolf's Muzukashii]
As I said, mod for Nwolf's Muzukashii (1 day late though)
As Lust said, the Muzukashii lacks notes and the gap between the 2 maps is a bit too big. Spread does not matter if there's only two taiko diffs
First I'll say what feels wrong to me in your map, then I'll make some suggestions to make it a bit more Muzukashii.

You really should put OD 4. Maybe HP 4 too, but I don't think this one is as much important. OD 4 done
00:22:541 (8,9,10) - There's drums at 00:22:892 - and 00:23:418 - and the next beat following those two drums is at 00:23:769 -
I would suggest :
and for the next pattern ( 00:25:348 (11,12,13) - ) :
Adding a note on the next one prepare the player to the fact that the real map is coming soon.
This or you could try to put the katsu on a white tick, but it doesn't really fit to the beat and to 00:28:155 (15,16,17,18,19) - neither. changed it in a different way
01:13:067 (66,67,68,69,70,71,72,73,74,75,76,77,78,79,80,81,82,83,84,85,86,87,88) - This part is really weird because you switch between lots of things.
01:13:067 (66,67,68,69,70,71,72,73,74,75) - Is the OHOHOH OH thing that you followed on the whole kiai.
01:14:997 (76,77,78,79) - Is the female singer (and the end of the WOHOHO O is ignored).
01:15:874 (79,80) - Oh, it follows the melody.
01:16:576 (81) - Or is it the female singer? The drums?
01:16:751 (82,83,84,85,86,87,88) - Well I don't know anymore man.
You should find a way to make it more consistent. Actually the whole thing is following drums (there's drums everywhere anyway) but the way you mapped it, it's confusing. If you want to follow drums, add more notes and if you want to follow something else, move those notes.
Personally, I'd suggest to follow the hohoho ho until 01:15:874 - but there's probably others fine ways. only moved 01:14:997 (77) - by 1/2
01:18:681 (88,1,1) - Put the same thing as in the Oni? no
01:41:137 (8,9,10) - 01:43:944 (11,12,13) - Same suggestion as before. same change
To have more notes, first you need to... add more notes! Well, as an example, turning two 2 notes patterns (there's a lot of those) in a 5 notes one. Just avoid to make them too long. 5 1/2 notes is cool, 7 1/2 notes is a bit tricky but is fine, avoid going above this except for slow songs or easy patterns like 02:13:418 (120,121,122,123,124,125,126,127) - . Then you should try to add more ddd and kkk (but not too much) or even ddk and kkd.
I'll make some random suggestions of what you could add but feel free to do whatever you want:
00:36:049 (10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18,19) -
00:43:944 (40,41,42,43,44) -
Explained at the beginning of post why there's no change

I hope you'll be able to add more notes without making errors or a map too much repetitive/too hard, good luck.

Dainesl wrote:
Yay I get to mod this

Nwolf's Muzukashii

This mod is mostly about consistency things and some nitpicks, nothing major here really, just a small mod :3

00:22:541 - I would like it if you added a couple more notes from here to 00:28:155 - as it's very very different from the Oni; and this section is extremely low density compared to the next one so... done
00:44:997 (44) - Nitpick - quite a significant note here; consider adding a finish here? (sounds a bit better as a big kat instead of a big don as it's not exactly super super hard changed previous note to kat to emphasis don here more
01:09:558 (51,52,53) - sudden switch from vocal to instrumental mapping due to the middle note of this triplet, might want to reconsider this as it's extremely inconsistent with the rest of the Kiai (it's the only one). Also it's not monochrome so that makes it quite challenging; a further point to consider. If you don't get rid of 52 then at least make 53 a don to make the pattern more suitable (yet again inconsistent I know but playability is also something that is a bit more important; thus you take musical liberties). Consistent with other additions of 1/4 here
01:14:646 (74) - consider removing this note for a more noticeable transition into different vocals; right now it seems like the transition is muddled since both types of vocals are in the same pattern. OH YEAH AND IT'S INCONSISTENT WITH 01:06:400 (39,40,41,42) - OK (just saying) ye
01:54:120 (39,40,41,42,43) - Why are 5-plets like this here when they weren't at places like 00:35:523 (8,9,10,11) - which sound pretty much the same, mind you? Since song is incredibly repetitive, first section is kinda empty and repetition adds more notes so it becomes a bit harder this time (normal difficulty actually)
02:03:593 (79) - Nitpick - same as 00:44:997 changed
02:24:821 (46) - same as 01:14:646, if you don't do it there at least do it here so that it's fully consistent with the previous kiai and the other transitional vocals get more emphasis I guess ye
02:28:155 (61,62,63) - same as 01:09:558
02:33:242 (86) - same as 01:14:646, if applied there apply here too. yes

Aiceo wrote:
[Nwolf's Muzukashii]

00:02:541 - I understand that for the purpose of the flow you didn't place a not here, but it really sounds weird without a kat. (Same here 00:08:155 - ) might consider doing this, wanna have a break here tho
02:33:593 (88) - Place this don here : 02:33:769 - wut why

thx!

http://puu.sh/cVYwU/e86d9dd9f7.osu

-GN

Champion Above Champions

734 posts

Joined June 2011

-GN 2014-11-19T21:15:09+00:00

Dasheroo

Dasheroo wrote:
Normal
Something general... Ar 3 is better for a normal, I guess. i guess that works better
This map has a lot of bad flow.. For example, here 00:42:892 -
Try to do something like.. This http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2238803 i don't see the problem - the angle isn't too sharp
Try to fix the other bad points, like this 01:15:874 (1) -.
It's better if you put that circle here: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2238810 moved it elsewhere
01:15:889 - This spinner, so closed to that circle, can confuse a newbie. He has no time to understand what's happening. It's not readable by a low-level player. Believe me. a spinner does not require constant motion, and these spinners are lenient because of the low OD - this gap is perfectly fine
01:45:348 - Try to do something symmetric to this 01:43:944 - intended subversion
01:57:277 (2,1) - This overlap looks bad... literally unfixable if i'm gonna keep my current DS and motion. beginners don't enjoy stacks, either
01:59:734 (4,1) - ^ this part has been redone a bit
02:13:418 - It's hard for a newbie to singletap 4 sequential notes. Maybe 1/2 reverse slider? it's not a physical limit by any means, so it's fine to do it this way - the spacing here is lowered too
02:28:330 (4,1) - Try to avoid the overlap also unfixable
02:33:418 (2,1) - ^ also unfixable. these smaller gaps is not a problem
Looks bad in these points.

Kaguya Hourain

Kaguya Hourain wrote:
[ -GN's Normal]

00:33:769 (1,3) - Man this blanket here could look better if the two sliders were not almost overlapping. Try spreading 3 out a little bit and move it backwards like shown in the image below. Make sure you readjust some of the spacing afterwards if you choose to follow this piece of advice.
*snip* fixed

00:36:049 (6,1) - I see no reason why you wouldn't want to follow the sliderpath here and reversing the flow like you're doing here. Will ruin blanket, sure, but the result would be much more appealing in my eyes if you could pull off something like shown next up. If you decide not to follow this suggestion, I would at least suggest to make 1 a little more curvy for a better blanket with circle 4.
*snip* 90% sure this is the result of some retarded misplacement on my end - changed stuff from slider (5) to the next (3)

00:40:260 (3) - Middle point at x:143 y:239 and endpoint at x:166 y:326 should make this blanket perfect. ok

00:44:295 (5) - Avoid this sort of slider, please. It's pretty hard to read, especially considering that this is the first difficulty in the set, you should give the 1/2 repeat spam a rest. For this here, I would just go with 2 sliders with 1/2 spacing. very high pressure in this part, but okay

00:45:699 (2,4) - As before, the circle internally overlaps with the slider, making the combination look ugly. Suggestion here is to do the same as above fixed

00:47:979 (3,4) - This sort of spacing can be a little confusing for newcomers. Easiest solution here would be to rotate 4 clockwise enough so that it doesn't overlap with 3, making it also a bit more readable in that aspect. You could flip 3 horizontally on top of that for maximum Kreygasm. Ending result could look like this:
*snip* did some other changes to reduce beats

00:50:084 (3,4,5) - Here we have another overlap that could easily be avoided. Moving 4 a bit downwards so that the spacing will allow you to move 5 a bit to the left and readjusting the blanket without the overlap seems to be the better choice here. End result:
*snip* yeah

00:53:418 (1,2,1,2,3,4) - Having those basically muted is unintuitive and in my opinion silly. Doesn't serve for a buildup any better than it would be if you added some hitsounds to it. i blame hula's hitsounds

00:58:506 (4) - Moving the midpoint to x:149 y:178 and the endpoint to x:111 y:217 in this slider should pretty up this blanket quite a lot. easy fix

01:00:084 (2) - Why not go for a double blanket here?! Make the slider's head blanket with the slider 4 I mentioned above and rotate this here slider 2 enough so that it blankets with 1! Wouldn't that be cool? Here like so:
*snip* fair point

01:05:699 (3) - Move this slider to x:275 y:299 and see the magic x:276*

01:09:734 (3,1) - This looks pretty neat, nice! o-okay

01:15:918 (1) - No point starting this 1/8 afterwards. Noone has enough reaction time at this level for 1/8 spacing. Would move it 1/4 apart instead. you say this like a spinner requires input from the start

01:29:909 - Not sure if you need this green line for anything. Remove it if you want. i love that green line because it's my favorite one in the map, i named it Saft and everything ;_;

01:41:137 (1,2,1) - Now this looks more like it! Nice! lol

01:45:348 (3,1) - Kaguya disapproves of this blanket and also of the copypasta that has taken place here. Just moving the middle point of slider 1 to x:259 y:221 makes the blanket lots more delicious. another way of fixing this has taken place. copypasta will stay

01:53:242 (3) - These sliderpoints (along with others so far) have given me the impression that you have done a rush job to this. The imperfect blankets speak for themselves. Middlepoint at x:257 y:337 and endpoint at x:184 y:371 fix your blanket. :V

01:57:277 (2) - Same suggestion as previously, use 2 sliders. fixed

02:02:892 (5) - Same as above actually! v

02:03:593 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - Since you seem to have copypasted this entire section, I guess fixing the stuff from the previous section identical to it and copypasting them here again works. yes

02:13:418 (1,2,3,4) - You seem to have fixed the issue here as opposed to your previous section. i haven't touched the greenlines anywhere except for removing some 5% volume ones

02:31:663 (1,1) - This combinations looks pretty bad-looking. Why don't you make orange blanket blue's sliderend? Flow could get improved as well! Like so: *snip*

02:34:514 (1) - Same as previously, 1/4 spacing at least.

Endnote: I found so many spacing issues that mentioning them here could make me starve. The 1/2 spread across 0.8 and 1.1 in the DS is really not optimal for Normal difficulties, especially ones that are considered the easiest difficulty of the set. Some nice ideas here but they feel unrefined. the intention is to have increased spacing for increased gaps in the timeline, with certain subversions for special patterns for special bits of the music, like 02:31:663 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1) - and certain patterns in the kiais. if this is what you're pointing out, i'm not gonna fix them as it's a common design choice for low difficulty maps - if not, it's probably not intended. i've tried to fix all the occurrences of this i did not intend, but it's possible that some of them slipped under my radar.

good god, blankets

Arrival

Arrival wrote:
[-GN's Normal]

I'm making this mod as if I mod an EASY NORMAL. Diffspread purposes.
CHECK YOUR DISTANCE SNAP : There are some spacing problems. this was explained at the end of kaguya's mod

00:35:874 (5,6) - Not a big deal, but this kind of stack on easy is a bit hard to read. Consider this maybe. (It's the same with 00:49:909 (2) - etc..) i let these stay in the kiai, i think i fixed it everywhere else
00:51:488 (5) - Better curve please. ok
00:56:225 (1) - Make it as a REAL POLYGON. (Compose -> Create Polygon circles) aligned somewhat better
01:18:681 - Wow this break seems kinda long. Consider mapping when the vocals start again. i'll leave that decision to hula
01:57:277 (2) - Avoid the multiple repetitions. Change to one reverse. fixed in accordance with kaguya's mod
02:32:716 (1) - Remove your NC the final pattern in the map deserves this NC in my eyes

Pretty nice diff overall. Well done.! thank XD

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Hula

581 posts

Joined January 2013

Topic Starter

Hula 2014-11-20T00:15:51+00:00

Thanks for the mods

SPOILER

Arrival wrote:
Okay gogo

[General]

Isn't the mapset lacking an Easy ?? i h8 easies and their very existence so that's why :p

You really should put CUSTOM HITSOUNDS. I can give you some if you don't find. If you have a selection of hitsounds to offer, I will be more than happy to use them. Default hitsounds work though for me right now I think

I'm REALLY annoyed by the fact any of the std diffs finish here 02:37:277 - . You should finish at 02:59:734 - ! This would make more sense. well, in hindsight maybe, but my excuses are that I don't want to annoy the GDers by asking them to map more and it won't really add anything new to the map cos it's just a dumbed down version of what was previously going on in the song

[Pinky]

02:00:084 (1,4) - Stack them with 01:59:909 (3) - Right now no, since I like how this flows, but this is a p. good solution if other people suggest changes to it.
02:36:576 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - This stream is a bit ugly, you could space it a bit more, or give it another shape :> Fixed by changing shape a bit and adding more space

Maybe a bit overmapped, but it's definetly not bad ! oh boy, you know it

Good mapset overall, I hope you'll get that ranked soon ! I'll star it as soon as I have the kd, for sure !
Good luck Hula ! Thanks a lot man <3

Nyxa

848 posts

Joined October 2013

Nyxa 2014-11-21T14:11:36+00:00

Mods

Kaguya Hourain wrote:
Alright as promised, here we go

[ Tesla's Insane]

01:44:821 (5,1) - Same as previously. Except this isn't mapped after the vocals but after the drums. Sometimes less is more.

02:35:874 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - Yeah this is too much. Nerf this by a lot. No. I nerfed it by a little though.

Endnote: Too much 1/4 in this. Too much indeed. The Hard difficulty has no 1/4 whatsoever and right afterwards we jump to 1/4 kicksliders. Pretty big space in difficulty if you ask me, it shows in the star rating as well. Nearly two whole stars difficulty gap is too much and quite frankly unrankable. As a final note I suggest that you remove plenty of 1/4 from this. As said on IRC, the Hard's lack of 1/4 is an issue with the Hard, not with the Insane. Insanes have 1/4, they're difficult maps and are supposed to be challenging. This map did turn out harder than originally intended, yeah - that's why we changed the diffname from "Light Insane" to just "Insane". As an Insane, its difficulty is fine, and I don't think there's too much 1/4 at all. I wasn't happy with the spacing at the ending so I decreased it by a bit - but only just a bit. Low spaced circlestreams and 1/4 sliderstreams don't have too much of a difference in difficulty - if anything, my choice of sliderstreams here was to make things easier not harder. The only difference with the two types of streams is the origin of the difficulty - aim or tapping. In this case I opted for aim difficulty. Changed a quintuplet stream into a slider -> triple pattern though, for what it's worth.

Arrival wrote:
Okay gogo

[General]

Isn't the mapset lacking an Easy ?? It is.

You really should put CUSTOM HITSOUNDS. I can give you some if you don't find. Agreed.

I'm REALLY annoyed by the fact any of the std diffs finish here 02:37:277 - . You should finish at 02:59:734 - ! This would make more sense. The ending is fine as it is. Believe it or not, the std diffs finish at the start of the outro. Just because drums are still present doesn't mean that it's not the outro yet, and leaving the outro unmapped is a normal and common thing to do. That said, I wouldn't mind doing the additional mapping if Hula decided to map that section.

[Tesla's Insane]

01:18:681 - The break is imo too long. The break is a little long, yeah, but it's consistent throughout all diffs and I feel as though shortening it would detract from the map's quality rather than add to it. Maybe Hula should reconsider though if more people suggest.
01:49:558 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - I really feel like this was put a bit randomly... Try making 2 squares or something with more sense. These are ladder jumps. I have to agree that a more shaped pattern would work better here - that's what I originally wanted to do, but this 00:30:962 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - pattern would have to be changed as well for that, since I was only trying to be consistent with Hula here.
02:25:699 (1) - Remove NC Yes.

Nice map ! Thanks

Also did some self-modding and stuff. If anyone's wondering, the reason I placed 02:20:962 (3,4,5) - where it is now is to blanket the stacked triple in-game.

Code

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Rtyzen

511 posts

Joined March 2013

Rtyzen 2014-11-22T06:53:12+00:00

Hey there! Here from the SG Modding Team with Standard mods! Sorry it took a while orz

[Kiai]

You can try ending kiai 01:06:576 and 02:25:172 and restart it 01:07:453 and 02:26:049 respectively to emphasise the notes on 01:07:453 and 02:26:049

[-GN's Normal]

For normals, distance snap should be consistent as much as possible. Keeping on DS on and constant at all times is encouraged. Going from like 1.0 to 1.1 is ok but sometimes it goes down to 0.8 or up to 1.3
00:37:979 (3,4) - 1.9 DS wayy too far
00:44:997 (1) - Is this meant to be a normal finish?
01:08:506 (1) - NC move to 01:07:453 (3)
02:27:102 (1) - ^
01:09:734 (3,1) - This blanket seems very forced
01:46:751 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - This part at least should have claps IMO (01:47:102 + 01:47:628 + 01:48:506 + 01:49:032)
01:54:470 (5,6) - Even though it's not that important, the DS here is 0.6 when it doesn't need to be

[Ayu's Hard]

00:34:646 (3,2) - Why don't you blanket these 2? XD
01:06:576 (3) - You can NC this or move 01:06:049 (1) - 's NC to here. Looks better IMO
02:25:348 (3) - ^
01:12:014 (2,5) - stack?
I got nothing else, it's a good diff! ~

[Tesla's Insane]

00:25:699 (4) - I think replacing this with just a circle would be better since there's no sound on 00:25:874
00:40:523 and 00:40:699 - Add circles? to be consistent with 00:34:821 (6,7,8,9,1)
00:46:137 and 00:46:313 - ^ (can make a 5-note stream)
00:47:453 (6,1) - Probably should change this to be consistent with the previous parts as well
00:55:962 (6,7,8) - Should delete IMO
00:59:383 (3) - Move to x:260 y:292 looks better
01:05:348 (4) - Ctrl-G?
01:09:558 (4,5) - Flow here is kinda bad cuz the slider is pointing upwards :/
The first kiai uses significantly less 1/4 than the second kiai, should do something about that

[Pinky]

00:26:225 (6,1) - Flow here is quite bad especially since they are so close together in timing :/ What I suggest is you Ctrl-H Ctrl-J 00:26:225 (6) (or just Ctrl-> twice)
00:31:663 (5,6,7) - A proper triangle would look better
00:55:962 (2,3,4) - Should delete IMO
02:14:558 (2,3,4) - ^
01:04:997 (4) - Ctrl-G?
02:23:944 (4) - ^
01:15:874 (7) - Stack on the head on 2 to center it pls. And adjust 01:15:172 (3,4,5,6) - to be parallel again
02:37:277 (5) - NC

That's all from me, good luck with your map!

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Mint

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Mint 2014-11-22T20:24:19+00:00

Hello Hula!

WARNING: Will contain nazi stuff and also modded a bit before you updated it, so you might see things you already fixed, sorry!

General

* Ask someone to cut your mp3.
* Sorry, I don't mod Taiko ;_;

Normal

* Check DS in AIMod.
* Uhmm... nothing I guess?

Ayu's Hard

* 00:27:804 (3) - Very nazi, but try making the curve a bit more loose so the flow is smoother with (1).

* 00:47:277 (3) - It would sound better if you moved this a 1/2 tick earlier imo, so you can follow the vocals. You could fill the empty space you've left with a 1/2 note.
* 01:12:716 (5) - Is it on purpose that you didn't stack it on (2)?
* 01:29:909 - I don't think you need this green line here. There are no notes and you alreadu have a green line adfter this one that does the job.
* 01:52:365 (1) - Just a very minor thing I noticed, but you have 'slider art here' and the slider after this one is just a simple plain slider, however at an identical part of the song (00:33:769 (1,2,3) - ), it's the other way around. You could make the rhythm of these two parts and the usage of slider art consistent if you want, but that's up to you, since it's not a big problem or anything o/
* 02:00:786 (1) - I'd reverse the curve of the slider here. The flow would be consistent with something you had at 00:42:190 (1,2) - and it just flows much better imo.

* 02:11:663 (4) - Move it upwards until it's above (3) for a smoother flow? You already have a flowbreaking-jump after this slider, so it would be nice if you kept the flow for now.

* 02:22:892 (4) - Something similar to what I said above.

Tesla's Insane

Hula
* 00:35:523 (2,4) - Try adding some curves to these sliders so you can have a much smoother flow with (3,5)
* 00:47:628 - I don't really think it's necessary for you to have a reverse slider here, since you are now ignoring the strong beat that's on the repeat. You aren't following the vocals anyway the slider after this, so I recommend you to follow the instruments here instead. This way the rhythm here is more smoothly done and you won't ignore the strong bass sound.

* 01:15:874 (7) - Add either a NC here, or delete Tess' one at the end of the map for consistent NCs (you might want to apply this to all the other diffs as well)

Tess
* 01:45:172 - If you are following the piano as well, you should consider adding a note here, if you're not feel free to ignore o/
* 01:57:628 (6) - Move this note (together with the stream and slider) a bit to the right so you have a perfect diamond shape?
* 02:06:927 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2) - Nazi. But make this symmetrical? You are mostly using geometric shapes in this part, so would be nice if you used symmetry.

* 02:15:523 (4) - I'd move this more to the right for a better flow with (2), because that slider has a big curve.
* 02:24:646 (1) - Woah, this slowdown is really unexpected and hard to read, because you used the same slider shape ( 02:23:593 (2) - )as you had before, which can make it hard to read for some players. I recommend you to tweak this slider a bit so there's a slight curve in it. You many need to rework this pattern a bit to have it work out well.

Pinky

* 00:25:699 (4,1) - Is this intentional? If not, could you please stack them perfectly?
* 00:30:611 (7,1) - Watch out with this sudden spacing change. I recommend you to keep the DS from 1/4 rhythms in your map somewhat the same. Try to have a similar spacing as 00:25:348 (3,4) -
* 00:38:330 (2) - Move this a little bit to the right, so it's in the middle of (1,3) - the pattern would look neater imo.
* 00:59:383 (2,3) - (optional) Mirror the first slider? Looks nice this way, and it wont be too repetitive like you have now.

* 01:15:874 (1) - Put this in the centre (around 224/292) of (5,6) since you now have a nice symmetry pattern, so why not put this in the centre of those two?

It's even more awesome now. So have another star.

Every diff is really well done in this mapset, good job (pls map more ;_;)!

Good luck getting this mapset ranked :3

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-GN

Champion Above Champions

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-GN 2014-11-23T11:09:43+00:00

"GN" tag is redundant.

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Makoa

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Joined December 2013

Makoa 2014-12-11T06:33:28+00:00

Your best person ever hula. im big fan.

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