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Drop - Granat

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Kaguya Hourain
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Kaguya Hourain
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Κυριακή, 16 Νοεμβρίου 2014 at 21:47:46

Artist: Drop
Title: Granat
Tags: Yuzu- Kyshiro Irreversible seifuu meigetsu ryuu to honoo no monogatari dragon and flame 竜と炎の物語清風明月
BPM: 180,96
Filesize: 2489kb
Play Time: 00:42
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (1,52 stars, 40 notes)
  2. Hard (3,48 stars, 134 notes)
  3. Irre's Extra (4,42 stars, 108 notes)
  4. Kyshiro's Insane (3,98 stars, 157 notes)
  5. Natural Gem (4,99 stars, 180 notes)
  6. Normal (2,15 stars, 80 notes)
  7. Yuzu's Insane (4,23 stars, 151 notes)
Download: Drop - Granat
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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SPOILER



I decided to make this my first ranked map to prove a certain point. What that point is, you have to figure out yourself :3

Thanks to Yuzu-, Kyshiro and Irreversible for the diffs ♥

Thanks to all the modders, and the people that were involved in the ranking process! Love you all ♥
Last edited by Kaguya Hourain , edited 41 times in total.
Maruyu
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Maruyu
yuzu's insane is a piece of crap

kthxbai
Kaguya Hourain
514 posts
Joined October 2012
Topic Starter
Kaguya Hourain
Bad mod no kds
riffy
osu! Alumni
8,060 posts
Joined December 2010
riffy
Yo, as requested.

[General]
  1. Try to get a 1366x768 background, as it is the recommended size for the backgrounds.
  2. Please, disable the letterboxes (you have no breaks), countdown (it does not appear, anyway) and Widescreen Support (as it is SB-only feature).
  3. Consider fading the bright-green combo colour, this is too bright and does not really match with the BG. Besides, the colour is too agressive for players' eyes.
  4. Your tags are inconsistent. This is an unrankable issue.
  5. The hitsounds seem to be too loud. Please, tune them down a bit, sometimes it is hard to hear the actual music because the hitsounds are too agressive.
[Easy]
  1. The song itself is quite relaxing and having 3 different slider velocities is too much. Beginners will be confsed + it feels sorta exaggerated for a simple diff like this.
  2. I highly suggest you to drop OD by 1 tick as there're polarity changes (3/2s) + your OD is too high for the easiest diff. As well as this, don't forget to reduce your HP to keep the spread more balanced.
  3. 00:13:543 (3) - Consider removing this circle to stress the instruments and make your rhythm a bit easier.
  4. 00:32:111 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - the 3/2s here sound quite off the music and break polarity. Moreover, they are too hard to play with OD3. I hardly recommend you to keep using 1/1 (2/1) rhythm at this part, just like you did it before.

    I do not agree with your 3/2s and the diff settings are too high. ]
[Normal]
  1. 00:03:596 (4,5) - try to avoid such spacing changes, they can be misrread as 1/4s.
    Note: 00:27:469 (4,5) - 00:31:448 (4,5) - the same.
  2. 00:14:869 - i see your intention, but I feel like the beat here really should be mapped because leaving it empty sounds unnatural. Try an 1/2 slider with a repeat? Example
  3. 00:30:784 (2,1) - minor - the blanket here can be improved. Not a big deal, but you might want to fix it. :) Same happens to 00:34:100 (1,3), by the way.

    The diff is fine.
[Hard]
  1. 00:03:596 (2,3,4) - I highly suggest you to replace these 1/3s with a slider as this sudden rhhythm switch feels really confusing to play and it is too hard to read. Same applies for the rest of 1/3s in the diff.
  2. 00:04:922 (4) - having tail of the slider on the downbeat is not a good idea as the downbeat remain unstressed in this case. Example.
    Note: 00:10:062 (3) - same thing happens here. Try to pay more attention to this kind of rhythm, they sound really unnatural to me.
  3. 00:32:608 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,2,1,1) - try to use new combos less. This is abuse of new combos, as they give some extra HP, it makes this part unbalanced and boring. <oreover, it does not look good, if you ask me.

    The combos feel abused and your rhythm feels weird in some parts, otherwise it is okay.
[Kyshiro's Insane]
  1. 00:01:938 (3) - there is a beat on the red tick, so, finishing the slider there would make much more sense. Same happens with 00:06:249 (1) - if you really want to keep them, you can just use STR 2 and mute the tails, but I still recommend to finish the sliders on the red ticks.
  2. 00:39:737 (5,1) - just saying, that the jump here feels exaggerated. Music goes really slow here, so, I'd rather have an antijump.

    Good stuff, I like it.
[Yuzuzuzu's Zuzune]

  • Suggestedd a few changes via IRC:
  1. A couple of NCs
  2. Suggested changing a pattern in one part, where it was a bit tricky

    That is a nice diff.
[Natural Gem]
  1. 00:04:922 (4,1) - just like in the Hard diff, the same thing about the unstressed downbeats.
  2. 00:17:025 (4,1) - minor - the transition could get slightly better here. Here is an example of what I have on my mind.

    I feel unsure about the last part as it is a true killer for players with poor aim, but I liked it and it seems really well-fitting, guess, we can let it go.
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Best of luck!
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Kaguya Hourain
514 posts
Joined October 2012
Topic Starter
Kaguya Hourain
Awesome
Maruyu
742 posts
Joined July 2013
Maruyu
bakari will post logs afterwards I guess
osu file format v13

[General]
AudioFilename: Drop - Granat.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 281
Countdown: 1
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 1
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 0.7
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 8
TimelineZoom: 1

[Metadata]
Title:Granat
TitleUnicode:Granat
Artist:Drop
ArtistUnicode:Drop
Creator:Kaguya Hourain
Version:Yuzu's Insane
Source:
Tags:Yuzu-
BeatmapID:514518
BeatmapSetID:219763

[Difficulty]
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CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:7
ApproachRate:9
SliderMultiplier:1.7
SliderTickRate:1

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Kaguya Hourain
514 posts
Joined October 2012
Topic Starter
Kaguya Hourain
Okay
Kaguya Hourain
514 posts
Joined October 2012
Topic Starter
Kaguya Hourain

-Bakari- wrote:

Yo, as requested. Hello :D

[General]
  1. Try to get a 1366x768 background, as it is the recommended size for the backgrounds. :arrow: Will try doing something about it.
  2. Please, disable the letterboxes (you have no breaks), countdown (it does not appear, anyway) and Widescreen Support (as it is SB-only feature). :arrow: All fixed.
  3. Consider fading the bright-green combo colour, this is too bright and does not really match with the BG. Besides, the colour is too agressive for players' eyes. :arrow: Ok
  4. Your tags are inconsistent. This is an unrankable issue. :arrow: Didn't notice lol :D
  5. The hitsounds seem to be too loud. Please, tune them down a bit, sometimes it is hard to hear the actual music because the hitsounds are too agressive. :arrow: Lowering everything by 20%
[Easy]
  1. The song itself is quite relaxing and having 3 different slider velocities is too much. Beginners will be confsed + it feels sorta exaggerated for a simple diff like this. :arrow: To be honest I totally forgot about the SV changes, fixed :P
  2. I highly suggest you to drop OD by 1 tick as there're polarity changes (3/2s) + your OD is too high for the easiest diff. As well as this, don't forget to reduce your HP to keep the spread more balanced. :arrow: Fixed.
  3. 00:13:543 (3) - Consider removing this circle to stress the instruments and make your rhythm a bit easier. :arrow: This circle is part of a very long sequence or patterns. I don't think I'll remove it.
  4. 00:32:111 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - the 3/2s here sound quite off the music and break polarity. Moreover, they are too hard to play with OD3. I hardly recommend you to keep using 1/1 (2/1) rhythm at this part, just like you did it before. :arrow: Agreed. Removed completely.

    I do not agree with your 3/2s and the diff settings are too high. ]
[Normal]
  1. 00:03:596 (4,5) - try to avoid such spacing changes, they can be misrread as 1/4s. :arrow: Not sure what to do there then.
    Note: 00:27:469 (4,5) - 00:31:448 (4,5) - the same. :arrow: Also not sure.
  2. 00:14:869 - i see your intention, but I feel like the beat here really should be mapped because leaving it empty sounds unnatural. Try an 1/2 slider with a repeat? Example :arrow: All the beats are of the same importance in that sequence. Either I skip all of them or I do 4 reverse 1/2 sliders, which would make the map a little bit too hard.
  3. 00:30:784 (2,1) - minor - the blanket here can be improved. Not a big deal, but you might want to fix it. :) Same happens to 00:34:100 (1,3), by the way. :arrow: IMPERFECT BLANKET ON MY MAP! *shoots self* The second one is not allowed to be blanketed perfectly by DS, fixed somehow though.

    The diff is fine.
[Hard]
  1. 00:03:596 (2,3,4) - I highly suggest you to replace these 1/3s with a slider as this sudden rhhythm switch feels really confusing to play and it is too hard to read. Same applies for the rest of 1/3s in the diff. :arrow: Okay.
  2. 00:04:922 (4) - having tail of the slider on the downbeat is not a good idea as the downbeat remain unstressed in this case. Example. :arrow: Thing is, the beat at the end of the slider is of lower importance than the one in the beginning of the slider, it's also less significant than the same beat in the previous section/pattern. That's why the slider is there. Same as in Natural Gem.
    Note: 00:10:062 (3) - same thing happens here. Try to pay more attention to this kind of rhythm, they sound really unnatural to me. :arrow: Red ticks sound more than the whites here.
  3. 00:32:608 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,2,1,1) - try to use new combos less. This is abuse of new combos, as they give some extra HP, it makes this part unbalanced and boring. <oreover, it does not look good, if you ask me. :arrow: More NC = more total HP drain. It's fine.

    The combos feel abused and your rhythm feels weird in some parts, otherwise it is okay.
[Natural Gem]
  1. 00:04:922 (4,1) - just like in the Hard diff, the same thing about the unstressed downbeats. :arrow: Read on same part of Hard.
  2. 00:17:025 (4,1) - minor - the transition could get slightly better here. Here is an example of what I have on my mind. :arrow: Uhhh, that is a star pattern :D

    I feel unsure about the last part as it is a true killer for players with poor aim, but I liked it and it seems really well-fitting, guess, we can let it go.
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Best of luck! :arrow: Thanks :D
Cool mod, thank you :D
Nozhomi
Global Moderator
4,568 posts
Joined May 2013
Nozhomi
Heyo Kaguya. Request in game (on Skype). I guess some of this is already fix by Bakari I guess, but well...

- General :
  1. Tags conflict (AiMod).
  2. I ask Desperate-kun about BG. It's ok but can be improve -> http://puu.sh/c06kq/8936612178.jpg chose if you want to take this one or keep your.
- Natural Gem :
  1. 00:10:725 (2,1) - Bad blanket.
- Kyshiro's Insane :
  1. 00:07:575 (2,5) - You down volume too much imo, feel strange in play. Would go for 60% / 85% instead of 40% / 70%.
  2. 00:35:095 (1,2,3) - Maybe use same DS than similar rhythmic part of your diff (1.30x) ?
- Yuzu's (baka) Insane :
  1. 00:03:265 (6) - Finish it on red tic. If you finish on the blue tic slider is off rhythm and link with 1/3 stream is unnatural.
- Hard :
  1. OD6 maybe ? It fit better for a Hard.
  2. 00:08:735 (2,3) - these circle are off beat imo. I would just go for something like this.
    SPOILER
    It's maybe a little easy but fit better for me.
  3. 00:20:672 (2,3) - ^
- Normal :
  1. For every part like 00:03:596 (4,5,1) - You use a different DS from the rest of the diff. Imo it's harder to read with this DS than with 1.50x or 1.20x, so pls consider it.
  2. 00:32:111 (1,3) - try to blanket them maybe ?
  3. 00:34:100 (1,3) - ^
- Easy :
  1. Nothing :)

Poor mod...but pro mapset. No big mistake imo.
Good luck go rank, this Granat is more fun than other rank mapset :D
Mukyu~
Kaguya Hourain
514 posts
Joined October 2012
Topic Starter
Kaguya Hourain

Nozhomi wrote:

Heyo Kaguya. Request in game (on Skype). I guess some of this is already fix by Bakari I guess, but well...

- General :
  1. Tags conflict (AiMod). :arrow: Fixed
  2. I ask Desperate-kun about BG. It's ok but can be improve -> http://puu.sh/c06kq/8936612178.jpg chose if you want to take this one or keep your. :arrow: Oh god thanks!
- Natural Gem :
  1. 00:10:725 (2,1) - Bad blanket. :arrow: Holy shit that was so bad, fixed.
- Hard :
  1. OD6 maybe ? It fit better for a Hard. :arrow: AR = OD so no
  2. 00:08:735 (2,3) - these circle are off beat imo. I would just go for something like this.
    SPOILER
    It's maybe a little easy but fit better for me. :arrow: Music includes these beats. Keeping those unless it bugs more people.
  3. 00:20:672 (2,3) - ^ :arrow: Same
- Normal :
  1. For every part like 00:03:596 (4,5,1) - You use a different DS from the rest of the diff. Imo it's harder to read with this DS than with 1.50x or 1.20x, so pls consider it. :arrow: I'll see if other mods suggest the same thing
  2. 00:32:111 (1,3) - try to blanket them maybe ? :arrow: Yep, fixed
  3. 00:34:100 (1,3) - ^ :arrow: Fixed
- Easy :
  1. Nothing :)

Poor mod...but pro mapset. No big mistake imo.
Good luck go rank, this Granat is more fun than other rank mapset :D
Mukyu~
Thanks for the praises, also for the background and for the mod. ♥
Maruyu
742 posts
Joined July 2013
Maruyu

Nozhomi wrote:

Heyo Kaguya. Request in game (on Skype). I guess some of this is already fix by Bakari I guess, but well...

- Yuzu's (baka) Insane :
  1. 00:03:265 (6) - Finish it on red tic. If you finish on the blue tic slider is off rhythm and link with 1/3 stream is unnatural. It's actually following a beat on the blue tick, and it fits to me, so no change~

Poor mod...but pro mapset. No big mistake imo.
Good luck go rank, this Granat is more fun than other rank mapset :D
Mukyu~
Did some changes thanks to pkk, code away~

co-ed
osu file format v13

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Bonzi
213 posts
Joined January 2012
Bonzi
Behold my great incredible mod of the gods! Nah, just a poor mod cuz i can't do it properly ._.
few suggestions

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[Easy]
  1. Nothing found
[Normal]
  1. very minor: 00:00:281 (1,2,3,4) - uhg, i find the pattern's aesthetic bad, i know you can do something better
  2. 00:03:596 (4,5) - 00:27:469 (4,5) - 00:31:448 (4,5) - Aren't these too difficult for a Normal?
[Hard]
  1. 00:00:281 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - How about changing or repositioning them? they are not that intuitive.
  2. 00:21:003 (3,1) - blanketing would make this look better, imo.
  3. 00:08:735 (2,3,1) - it feels a bit offbeat, dunno why
  4. 00:27:469 (2,3,4,5) - 00:31:448 (2,3,4,5) - i'm not sure about these, you did a different thing on 00:03:596 (2,3) - , so i guess it's better to have consistency?
[Kyshiro's Insane]
  1. Great Diff.
[Yuzu's Insane]
  1. 00:22:164 (1) - How about adding a clap at the slider's end? You did it on 00:22:661 (1,2,1,2) - , so why not there?
[Natural Gem]
  1. 00:11:056 (3,4,1) - WUT
Good Luck \:D/
Maruyu
742 posts
Joined July 2013
Maruyu

ThEBonzi wrote:

Behold my great incredible mod of the gods! Nah, just a poor mod cuz i can't do it properly ._.
few suggestions

[Yuzu's Insane]
  1. 00:22:164 (1) - How about adding a clap at the slider's end? You did it on 00:22:661 (1,2,1,2) - , so why not there?
Good Luck \:D/
Fixed.
Kaguya Hourain
514 posts
Joined October 2012
Topic Starter
Kaguya Hourain

ThEBonzi wrote:

Behold my great incredible mod of the gods! Nah, just a poor mod cuz i can't do it properly ._.
few suggestions

[General]
  1. Nothing found
[Easy]
  1. Nothing found
[Normal]
  1. very minor: 00:00:281 (1,2,3,4) - uhg, i find the pattern's aesthetic bad, i know you can do something better :arrow: Idk what to do there, I also find it a bit bad tbh :/
  2. 00:03:596 (4,5) - 00:27:469 (4,5) - 00:31:448 (4,5) - Aren't these too difficult for a Normal? :arrow: Not sure, really.
[Hard]
  1. 00:00:281 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - How about changing or repositioning them? they are not that intuitive. :arrow: B-but, triangles and stacks and steady forward positioning :/
  2. 00:21:003 (3,1) - blanketing would make this look better, imo. :arrow: Would be too steep of a curve if I blanketed, resulting in a lot of sliderbreaks.
  3. 00:08:735 (2,3,1) - it feels a bit offbeat, dunno why :arrow: It's in the music duuuuuuuuuude :>
  4. 00:27:469 (2,3,4,5) - 00:31:448 (2,3,4,5) - i'm not sure about these, you did a different thing on 00:03:596 (2,3) - , so i guess it's better to have consistency? :arrow: Oh yeah, forgot to change those, brb fix.
[Kyshiro's Insane]
  1. Great Diff.
[Yuzu's Insane]
  1. 00:22:164 (1) - How about adding a clap at the slider's end? You did it on 00:22:661 (1,2,1,2) - , so why not there? :arrow: Fixed.
[Natural Gem]
  1. 00:11:056 (3,4,1) - WUT
Good Luck \:D/
Thanks so much dude. :D
Kyshiro
Elite Mapper
1,642 posts
Joined January 2011
Kyshiro
Fixed everything,

@Bakari, i silenced the ends and went for STR2, I have a thing with extensions, might be bad but i like them lol

Thanks guys

Diff: http://puu.sh/c0rjB/abf44894dd.txt
Kaguya Hourain
514 posts
Joined October 2012
Topic Starter
Kaguya Hourain
Aight thanks guys!

EDIT: WHOOOP 2 PAGES IN ONE DAY ALREADY SO AWESOME!
AlexaBM
755 posts
Joined March 2013
AlexaBM
Hi~ as requested bu YuzuPirate
[Easy]
  1. 00:02:270 (1) - Maybe delete the middle point? This slider breaks the flow, IMO.
  2. 00:21:169 (3) - Maybe something like this?
[Normal]
  1. 00:03:596 (4,5) - I think this is a bit hard for the Normal diff. Maybe make this way?
  2. 00:15:698 (4,1) - You can make this blanket better.
  3. 00:27:469 (4,5) - Like above.
  4. 00:31:448 (4,5) - ^
[Hard]
  1. 00:07:243 (1) - I don't see any reasons to add a NC here. Remove it, please.
  2. 00:14:704 (1) and 00:15:698 (1) - ^
  3. I fully agree with -Bakari- :
    00:32:608 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,2,1,1) - try to use new combos less. This is abuse of new combos, as they give some extra HP, it makes this part unbalanced and boring. <oreover, it does not look good, if you ask me.
    This moment isn't even hard to give an extra HP! It looks weird and not interesting to play. Leave NCs only at the downbeats for example, but not at every object, orz
[Kyshiro's Insane]
  1. 00:42:058 (4) - Add a NC here?
pro map, pro mod, LOL

[YuzuPirate's Insane]
  1. 00:11:885 (6,1) - I don't really like that flow here, maybe something like this?
  2. 00:12:880 (3) - Flow thing again. Maybe delete the middle point? or idk
  3. 00:17:853 (7) - ctrl+g this plsplspls
  4. 00:42:058 (6) - NC?
That's all I found. Good luck~
Maruyu
742 posts
Joined July 2013
Maruyu

AlexaBM wrote:

Hi~ as requested bu YuzuPirate

[YuzuPirate's Insane]
  1. 00:11:885 (6,1) - I don't really like that flow here, maybe something like this?
  2. 00:12:880 (3) - Flow thing again. Maybe delete the middle point? or idk This and the above are intended, it should play well and gives that "swinging motion" I'm looking for here, and I personally think it fits the song.
  3. 00:17:853 (7) - ctrl+g this plsplspls YarrHarrHarr
  4. 00:42:058 (6) - NC? YarrHarrHarr qez wai not
That's all I found. Good luck~ Thank yeh, matey I'm a terrible pirate, please don't hit me. ;~;
Heads up, KaguHou
osu file format v13

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Kaguya Hourain
514 posts
Joined October 2012
Topic Starter
Kaguya Hourain

AlexaBM wrote:

Hi~ as requested bu YuzuPirate
[Easy]
  1. 00:02:270 (1) - Maybe delete the middle point? This slider breaks the flow, IMO. :arrow: Na it's fine
  2. 00:21:169 (3) - Maybe something like this? :arrow: Interesting idea. Guess I'll go like that.
[Normal]
  1. 00:03:596 (4,5) - I think this is a bit hard for the Normal diff. Maybe make this way? :arrow: Ahhh yes. That part. Everyone keeps complaining about it. Guess it's time to change. Your idea seems to be the best fit for these parts. Done with a twist.
  2. 00:15:698 (4,1) - You can make this blanket better. :arrow: Fixed
  3. 00:27:469 (4,5) - Like above. :arrow: Done
  4. 00:31:448 (4,5) - ^ :arrow: Done
[Hard]
  1. 00:07:243 (1) - I don't see any reasons to add a NC here. Remove it, please. :arrow: New music phrase.
  2. 00:14:704 (1) and 00:15:698 (1) - ^ :arrow: Was trying to keep consistency with the NCs of Natural Gem but I guess these can go away.
  3. I fully agree with -Bakari- :
    00:32:608 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,2,1,1) - try to use new combos less. This is abuse of new combos, as they give some extra HP, it makes this part unbalanced and boring. <oreover, it does not look good, if you ask me.
    This moment isn't even hard to give an extra HP! It looks weird and not interesting to play. Leave NCs only at the downbeats for example, but not at every object, orz :arrow: Oh well. I will say it again. More NC = Higher drain anyway. But I suppose it does look ugly. Did NC every 2 sliders.
[Kyshiro's Insane]
  1. 00:42:058 (4) - Add a NC here? :arrow: Fixed it for him
pro map, pro mod, LOL

That's all I found. Good luck~
Thank you~ :D

Waiting for one more diff apparently, so I will request that no further mods be done until the diff is here.

MODDING STAGE CONTINUES!
Tician
215 posts
Joined March 2013
Tician
OK I try my luck, don't laugh about me pls D:

General
Yuzu's Diff using a countdown - remove the countdown
Same with the letterbox - just... AiMod^^
Timing - OK

Easy
00:00:281 (1,2) - ctrl+h is not exactly the same (hope it's not only me cause I don't know why I can't use the normal skin in editor =(
00:08:238 (1) - move the middle point of the slider 2 (tiny) grids to the bottom for better blanket
00:14:206 (1,2) - Let them both end on a white tick, you don't need to use the red once in the easy diff especially with that high BPM
00:22:164 (1) - End of this is not fitting to any sound, end on one of the white ticks

Normal
Check AiMod cause of DS problems
00:08:238 (1,2,3,4,1,2) - Nice work but I would say the circles over each othe rin the middle are too confusing for beginners
00:14:206 (1,2,3,4) - when paying this it felts off, I know it isn't :x
00:23:324 just my opinion but it's not neccessary to use any hitobject here would use just circles 00:23:158 and 00:23:490 to get the 3 sounds of the instrument playing this
00:24:153 (1,2,3,4) - this sounds better for me https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2154989
00:28:132 (1,2) - same

Hard
00:00:281 (1,2) - I would not pair them, just keep them as 1 and 3
00:01:275 (1,2) - same... and like all the others D:
00:25:645 (2) - delete, maybe make the slider longer instead
00:27:137 (1,2,3) - this is damn hard (u used that several times), don't do it pls
00:22:164 (1,2) - would only make a long slider
00:32:111 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - too much... use the same rhythm but other objects after the half of them
00:40:068 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Use the "create polygon circle" Button... this is just ugly :x

Kyshiros Insane
What happened? Why are there so many unsnapped Beats??
00:01:109 (5) - not neccessary if you want to keep it why not make a tripple up to 00:01:275 (1) - instead?
00:03:707 (2) - <-- unsnapped - make a 1/4 slider with a repeating arrow to get the sound in the middle (and SNAP IT to the 1/4 BSD)
00:31:448 (2) - but I don't get the problem of this is fits =/

Yuzus Insane
00:02:933 (5) - The flow goes to the top not to the left - hope so :D
00:03:265 (6) - make it shorter to the red line - fits more to the music
00:05:254 (4) - something that's not looking like... well let's not say it.... would be better :P

Irres Extra
00:03:707 (2) - not snapped - let it begin 00:03:762 and snap it to the 1/4 BSD - should fit
00:08:570 (2) - strg g?
00:20:257 (1) - due to the music and the sound I would say let it end 00:21:998
00:27:469 (1) - snap - same here there is a sound on the red line https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2155081
00:31:558 (1) - same
00:34:432 (2) - strg g?
00:40:151 (1) - end when the song ends^^

Natural Gem
00:00:281 (1,2) - same as in any other diff, I would not pair these, go 1 and 3
00:22:164 (1,2) - change the position in the timing line and change the circle so it sits between the 2 slider
00:23:324 (2) - would delete it
00:24:153 (1,2) - not exactly - copy the first slider, paste it and rotate it by 45° and use it as 2nd slider
00:25:645 (2) - a bit strange a circle with no sound in the music

GL with the map!
Kaguya Hourain
514 posts
Joined October 2012
Topic Starter
Kaguya Hourain

Tician wrote:

OK I try my luck, don't laugh about me pls D: :arrow: Hi! :D

Easy
00:00:281 (1,2) - ctrl+h is not exactly the same (hope it's not only me cause I don't know why I can't use the normal skin in editor =( :arrow: Yeah you're right, fixed as well as possible.
00:08:238 (1) - move the middle point of the slider 2 (tiny) grids to the bottom for better blanket :arrow: The blanket is ok.
00:14:206 (1,2) - Let them both end on a white tick, you don't need to use the red once in the easy diff especially with that high BPM :arrow: Rhythm gets more interesting, besides the red point shows more emphasis and sounds nicer. 2/1 is boring :P
00:22:164 (1) - End of this is not fitting to any sound, end on one of the white ticks :arrow: It fits to the clap that is exist behind the hitsound.

Normal
Check AiMod cause of DS problems :arrow: Never check AiMod for DS issues.
00:08:238 (1,2,3,4,1,2) - Nice work but I would say the circles over each othe rin the middle are too confusing for beginners :arrow: They are not because the do not even show being stacked at any point in time during play mode.
00:14:206 (1,2,3,4) - when paying this it felts off, I know it isn't :x :arrow: :P
00:23:324 just my opinion but it's not neccessary to use any hitobject here would use just circles 00:23:158 and 00:23:490 to get the 3 sounds of the instrument playing this :arrow: Clap too important to ignore.
00:24:153 (1,2,3,4) - this sounds better for me https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2154989 :arrow: Hm, maybe, let me get more mods for this.
00:28:132 (1,2) - same :arrow: ^

Hard
00:00:281 (1,2) - I would not pair them, just keep them as 1 and 3 :arrow: You mean stack?
00:01:275 (1,2) - same... and like all the others D: :arrow: Not changing any of these. Map needs a theme and this is the one.
00:25:645 (2) - delete, maybe make the slider longer instead :arrow: There is clearly a sound there to map this circle to.
00:27:137 (1,2,3) - this is damn hard (u used that several times), don't do it pls :arrow: It's pretty slow I don't see why not.
00:22:164 (1,2) - would only make a long slider :arrow: Clap starts on slider so that stays.
00:32:111 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - too much... use the same rhythm but other objects after the half of them :arrow: other objects???
00:40:068 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Use the "create polygon circle" Button... this is just ugly :x :arrow: I think this was created using polygon circle.

Natural Gem
00:00:281 (1,2) - same as in any other diff, I would not pair these, go 1 and 3 :arrow: Again, theme of the map.
00:22:164 (1,2) - change the position in the timing line and change the circle so it sits between the 2 slider :arrow: That is rhythmically wrong.
00:23:324 (2) - would delete it :arrow: Why? :?:
00:24:153 (1,2) - not exactly - copy the first slider, paste it and rotate it by 45° and use it as 2nd slider :arrow: Wasn't going for symmetry here, would look ugly.
00:25:645 (2) - a bit strange a circle with no sound in the music :arrow: Listen better.

GL with the map! :arrow: Thanks~
Fixed the rest of the diffs as per request.
Last edited by Kaguya Hourain , edited 3 times in total.
Irreversible
osu! Alumni
4,315 posts
Joined December 2011
Irreversible
Can you fix the spinners for me?

Discussed with Tician ingame, no other fixes. But thanks a lot for the mod!
Maeglwn
Maeglwn
idk if you wanted the mod now or later so I'm just gonna wait
Maruyu
742 posts
Joined July 2013
Maruyu

Tician wrote:

OK I try my luck, don't laugh about me pls D:

General
Yuzu's Diff using a countdown - remove the countdown
Same with the letterbox - just... AiMod^^ I'll have kaguya do that~

Yuzus Insane
00:02:933 (5) - The flow goes to the top not to the left - hope so :D well it's intended, and should be fine, so keeping it
00:03:265 (6) - make it shorter to the red line - fits more to the music That makes no sense since there's no beat or sound on the red line, but the sound that I'm following disappears on that blue tick
00:05:254 (4) - something that's not looking like... well let's not say it.... would be better :P I like it :3 Keeping it~
No changes, but still thank you for the mod!
Maeglwn
Maeglwn
eh

[General]
don't think there's anything notable

[Easy]
nothing

[Normal]
  1. ai mod says this diff is an insane, like I know ai mod isn't exactly correct most of the time.. but you know, insane =/= normal :P it's possible that this is too difficult as a normal
  2. 00:16:859 (2,3,4) - really weird flow here. consider just making 4 follow 3, remember that this is a normal diff
[Natural Gem]
  1. 00:04:591 (2,3,4) - SUPPPERRR awkward flow here. especially since the slider is so fast. you're going into a downwards motion and then immediately to the right. I'd flip 3 over to the other side of 1 so the downwards motion throws you into the slider and not away from it
  2. 00:16:196 (1,2,3) - spacing here is kinda icky. the way the spacing suddenly goes downwards and then back up for 3 and 4 is really awkward. maybe just make these all have the same distance?
  3. 00:17:688 (2,3,4) - same issue as above
  4. 00:32:111 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,3) - way too many triangles idk even how to explain how much I hate this but I do, MORE DIVERSITY AJSDFJ this part is really unfun to play
[Hard]
  1. 00:18:511 (1,2) - unsnapped objects here, unrankable obviously so fix
  2. 00:34:100 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - same thing as in natural gem, this is really hard to read and unfun to play. maybe like.. space them out more in different places or something. bleh
  3. 00:41:726 (6,1) - lol, why not just put these on the y axis
[Irre's Extra]
nope cs7 is only allowed on my map

[Yuzu's Insane]
  1. 00:03:596 (1) - overmapped
  2. yea there's like nothing wrong with this diff I really like it
[Kyshiro's Insane]
  1. 00:00:281 (1,2,3,4,5) - this looks like a literal nightmare to read, so much flow and stuff that just makes no sense and it's just hurting my brain and agh idk I don't like it. guess maybe it's just me
  2. 00:07:575 (2,3,4,5) - make it a little bit less linear for fun factor maybe. zig zags and stuff
  3. yea I really like this diff too, not much wrong here
good set yo
Kaguya Hourain
514 posts
Joined October 2012
Topic Starter
Kaguya Hourain

Maeglwn wrote:

eh

[General]
don't think there's anything notable

[Easy]
nothing

[Normal]
  1. ai mod says this diff is an insane, like I know ai mod isn't exactly correct most of the time.. but you know, insane =/= normal :P it's possible that this is too difficult as a normal :arrow: Look at the star rating it's fine idk why AiMod is being a bastard.
  2. 00:16:859 (2,3,4) - really weird flow here. consider just making 4 follow 3, remember that this is a normal diff :arrow: Should be fine let's wait for more mods.
[Natural Gem]
  1. 00:04:591 (2,3,4) - SUPPPERRR awkward flow here. especially since the slider is so fast. you're going into a downwards motion and then immediately to the right. I'd flip 3 over to the other side of 1 so the downwards motion throws you into the slider and not away from it :arrow: I dunno, it's easily readable and this doesn't really require flowy motion here.
  2. 00:16:196 (1,2,3) - spacing here is kinda icky. the way the spacing suddenly goes downwards and then back up for 3 and 4 is really awkward. maybe just make these all have the same distance? :arrow: This whole section forms a pentagram there. Went for shapes a lot I guess.
  3. 00:17:688 (2,3,4) - same issue as above :arrow: ^
  4. 00:32:111 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,3) - way too many triangles idk even how to explain how much I hate this but I do, MORE DIVERSITY AJSDFJ this part is really unfun to play :arrow: Triangles fit the best this part is not changing. Other people have found this really fun though BibleThump.
[Hard]
  1. 00:18:511 (1,2) - unsnapped objects here, unrankable obviously so fix :arrow: Wow I missed that, fixed. Thanks.
  2. 00:34:100 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - same thing as in natural gem, this is really hard to read and unfun to play. maybe like.. space them out more in different places or something. bleh :arrow: Remapping this part completely at some time.
  3. 00:41:726 (6,1) - lol, why not just put these on the y axis :arrow: Final note is in the center to give a feel of finality.
good set yo
Thanks for the mod man :D
Waiting on Guests.
Maruyu
742 posts
Joined July 2013
Maruyu

Maeglwn wrote:

eh

[Yuzu's Insane]
  1. 00:03:596 (1) - overmapped It's... actually not! xD If you listen closely, it's a drum hit :3
  2. yea there's like nothing wrong with this diff I really like it Thank you! <3
No changes :p
Kyshiro
Elite Mapper
1,642 posts
Joined January 2011
Kyshiro

Maeglwn wrote:

[Kyshiro's Insane]
  1. 00:00:281 (1,2,3,4,5) - this looks like a literal nightmare to read, so much flow and stuff that just makes no sense and it's just hurting my brain and agh idk I don't like it. guess maybe it's just me guess it's just you then lolol, it even makes sense according to the music, lower spacing at less strong beats
  2. 00:07:575 (2,3,4,5) - make it a little bit less linear for fun factor maybe. zig zags and stuff kind of the style i used for this diff :c would ruin it
  3. yea I really like this diff too, not much wrong here
thankssss
Okoratu
Nomination Assessment Team / Elite Nominator
4,912 posts
Joined May 2012
Okoratu
General

  1. ok, here I am
  2. you added ryuu to honou no monogatari to tags but not 竜と炎の物語 which is the kanji for that and also featured right above their album title here
  3. same goes for seifuu no meigetsu and 清風明月
  4. they also provide a 400x80 banner here
  5. Does Audioleadin do anything? I mean the song starts at 00:00:281 - idk if this is an issue.

Natural Gem

  1. HP 6.5 would be easily possible imo
  2. 00:11:885 (3) - the way this flows doesn't really complement the movement that 00:11:222 (1,2) - create that well so I'd advise you to curve it
    Example
  3. 00:23:490 (1) - because there's a sound on 00:23:656 - which might be considerably weaker than 00:23:490 - , this might not really be an issue i just think it captures the instrument better than just 2 circles with an 1/1 break between them
  4. 00:31:116 (1,2,3,4,5) - i found the way 00:26:806 (3,1,2) - read was way easier than this, considering that the whole rest afterwards is full circles this one can completely frustrate you if you're trying to FC it if this 1/3 stream before a full 1/2 part is hard to read.
    The song is 45 seconds, what do

Irre's Extra
Was zum teufel heisst Irreversible eigentlich:

ah, ok - ok


  1. Du solltest wirklich drueber nachdenken die AR auf deiner Diff hier zu erhoehen, ich erklaer mal kurz wieso:
    Erklaerung, subjektiv
    Das Hier ist die groesse eines Approachcircles CS7AR9:

    Das hier ist zum vergleich die von CS4AR9:

    Das verhaeltnis is bei beiden 1.25x zwischen CS und Approachcircle, aber weil der Circle in CS7 so verdammt klein ist kommt mir der Approachcircle immer etwas langsamer vor als auf CS 4 und es spielt sich - , da das verhaeltnis von Approachcircle und Sliderlaenge anders zu sein scheint besser wenn die AR auch bei 9.3 um den dreh waere,
    ausserdem hast du die "Extra" mit 4.44 stars, was ich auch schon irgendwo grenzwertig finde, das einzige was diese map als extra qualifizieren koennte waere halt wirklich nur CS7 und nichts weiter
  2. Entfern mal Green lines wie 00:07:575 - oder willst du mir jetzt erzaehlen dass du in diesem einen slider den slidertick leiser machst weil du kannst
  3. 00:08:072 - ich find 40% audo arg grenzwertig leise, 50% tun's eigentlich genauso gut fuer nen circle
  4. 00:12:217 (5) - ich glaub du hast hier nen NC vergessen - siehe 00:10:227 (1,2) - , 00:09:233 (1,2) -
  5. 00:18:185 (4,1) - Deine NCs wtf
  6. 00:24:153 - wenn du deine diff wirklich extra nennen willst solltest du vielleicht
    1. 00:20:257 (1,1) - nicht einfach 2 spinner ueber jede menge zeug legen (obwohl ich find die spinner passen ganz gut)
    2. bis 00:27:469 - nicht so wenig objects verwenden, weil das lied an sich ist 45 Sekunden und du machst 10 sekunden davon sachen, die man in einer normal oder Hard machen koennte - und nennst es dann extra ... weil CS7?
  7. 00:30:121 (4) - wenn du die combo so kurz halten willst wie in 00:25:148 (1,2,3,4) - , solltest du vielleicht hier sinnvoller weise NCn
  8. 00:35:758 (3,1) - das hier stackt ingame anders als alles andere, ich weiss nicht wieso, aber es scheint was anderes zu tun als 00:31:116 (7,1) - , 00:03:265 (1,2) - , 00:04:259 (1,2) - , 00:05:254 (1,2) - , 00:09:233 (1,2) - .....?
  9. 00:25:479 - sinnvoll etc - dasselbe gilt fuer andere copypasta lines ._.
  10. 00:39:239 (2) - koenntest diesen circle etwas nach oben bewegen, damit er insgesamt etwas mittiger in deinem Dreieck da erscheint:
    Beispiel
Eigentlich mag ich die diff ja, aber wieso musst du die Extra nennen.......?

Yuzu-'s Insane

  2. 00:14:206 (1,5) - I don't think these 2 1/1 sliders do the sounds on the red ticks there any justice, you could probably do something else star-pattern-y without ignoring 00:14:372 - and 00:15:367 - , if you can and want to, please do.
  3. 00:23:490 (3) - said the same thing about Natural gem, an 1/2 slider would / could be cool here imo
  4. 00:23:158 (1,2,3) - also i think a triangle pattern could be way better here than a somehow forced looking stack thing, as it would support the sounds in each object better if you had a back forth movement similarly to 00:21:666 (5,6,7) - there
  5. 00:34:100 (1,2,3,4,5) - i would pretty much appreciate if you scaled this pattern up a bit because things like 00:35:426 (2,3,4,5) - use much higher spacing, so stuff like that would be less sudden if the spacing in this one pattern was bigger than 00:32:608 (1,2,3) - and smaller than the aforementioned pattern - ... does that make sense?
  6. 00:38:245 (2,3) - i again don't think that the sliders do the loud whistle sound-things that much justice, you started the thing with something like 00:32:111 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2) - , so why not end it with something like that
  7. 00:42:058 (1) - could stack it with 00:40:731 (3) - to highlight the end of the map

Kyshiro's Insane

  1. idk how to mod this
  2. 00:33:934 (4,1,2,3,4,5) - please, all your patterns like 00:32:277 (2,3,4,5,6,1) - look like you made them geometrical shapes and stuff but this one is oddly off just to stack stuff which kinda destroys the spacing between 00:33:934 (4,1) - ....

Hard

  1. ......
  2. 00:00:281 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - due to ar 7 this stuff is pretty much hard to read if you don't have control over your fingers and know Hard Players are not all that good at that stuff
  3. 00:04:259 (1,2) - same^
  4. 00:04:922 (4,1) - ok even i panickingly hit that one extremely early because it jsut stacks at the sliderend and is visible for so long
  5. 00:08:901 - why did you skip this???
  6. 00:24:153 - i don't get the SV change to something smaller than 1, because imo the part like 00:32:111 (1) - is more intense than the beginning which uses SV 1.0x if at all you could probably have the beginning be 0.8x and the end 1.0x
  7. 00:32:111 - this part is a whole lot copy paste, which might end up looking a bit lazy compared to like.... all the insanes

Normal

  1. ...
  2. 00:19:511 - is this green line necessary???, same goes for 00:25:479 - , 00:26:474 - ,
  3. 00:25:811 (4,1) - if you move 00:26:143 (1,2) - a bit up the transition could be a bit better here

Easy

  1. .
  2. 00:08:238 (1) - it kind of annoys me that this one isn't parallel to the previous slider
  3. 00:30:121 (4) - if you moved it a bit to the left the transition could be better here
  4. 00:34:100 (1) - this one is a bit REALLY close to the HP bar on the default skin

I think out of all diffs the hard needs most work |:, ppl stealing hitsounds should at least remove unnecessary green lines

Gl with your map!
Maruyu
742 posts
Joined July 2013
Maruyu

Okoratu wrote:

Yuzu-'s Insane

  2. 00:14:206 (1,5) - I don't think these 2 1/1 sliders do the sounds on the red ticks there any justice, you could probably do something else star-pattern-y without ignoring 00:14:372 - and 00:15:367 - , if you can and want to, please do. At first I didn't even hear these sounds, but I'm going to keep the 1/1 sliders. It gives a feeling of pause, maybe even "suspence" between the jumps and it follows the violin very well.
  3. 00:23:490 (3) - said the same thing about Natural gem, an 1/2 slider would / could be cool here imo I really don't see the reasoning for this, I hear nothing on the red tick. Besides, the 1/1 gap fits very well with the instrument playing in the background.
  4. 00:23:158 (1,2,3) - also i think a triangle pattern could be way better here than a somehow forced looking stack thing, as it would support the sounds in each object better if you had a back forth movement similarly to 00:21:666 (5,6,7) - there 00:23:158 (1,2,3) - These fit better here, since I'm following the instrument on the song that's increasing in volume and pitch at the same time.
  5. 00:34:100 (1,2,3,4,5) - i would pretty much appreciate if you scaled this pattern up a bit because things like 00:35:426 (2,3,4,5) - use much higher spacing, so stuff like that would be less sudden if the spacing in this one pattern was bigger than 00:32:608 (1,2,3) - and smaller than the aforementioned pattern - ... does that make sense? While it does make sense, if you notice closely 00:34:100 (1,2,3,4,5) - and 00:32:111 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - are very close in terms of spacing. These have a certain whistle hitsounding every 1/1 measure. 00:33:105 (1,2,3,4) - and 00:35:095 (1,2,3,4,5) - , however, use one additional whistle that I feel that fits best and adds more hype into the spacing which translates into increased spacing. That's my reasoning, we can discuss this for a better solution however if you feel like it.
  6. 00:38:245 (2,3) - i again don't think that the sliders do the loud whistle sound-things that much justice, you started the thing with something like 00:32:111 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2) - , so why not end it with something like that The pitch at this section is dropping, it isn't bouncing around like the part where the triangles are mapped, and sliders map this perfectly imo. 00:38:908 (4,1,2) - These however, are circles, because mapping the downbeat with a slider tail would look bad, and the pitch goes back up again with 00:39:239 (2).
  7. 00:42:058 (1) - could stack it with 00:40:731 (3) - to highlight the end of the map Did something different, stacked it with 00:41:063 (4) - since the pitch increase is fairly large and allows for the movement.

Gl with your map!
Thank you immensely for your input <3

Heads up, Kaguya~
osu file format v13

[General]
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AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 281
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1.2
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 8
TimelineZoom: 1

[Metadata]
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TitleUnicode:Granat
Artist:Drop
ArtistUnicode:Drop
Creator:Kaguya Hourain
Version:Yuzu's Insane
Source:
Tags:Yuzu- Kyshiro Irreversible seifuu meigetsu  ryuu to honou no monogatari dragon and flame
BeatmapID:514518
BeatmapSetID:219763

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:7
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:7
ApproachRate:9
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//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
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Kaguya Hourain
514 posts
Joined October 2012
Topic Starter
Kaguya Hourain

Okoratu wrote:

General

  1. ok, here I am :arrow: HI! o/
  2. you added ryuu to honou no monogatari to tags but not 竜と炎の物語 which is the kanji for that and also featured right above their album title here
  3. same goes for seifuu no meigetsu and 清風明月 :arrow: I was pretty sure I added them lol. Adding now thx.
  4. they also provide a 400x80 banner here
  5. Does Audioleadin do anything? I mean the song starts at 00:00:281 - idk if this is an issue. :arrow: I think it gets autofixed when the mapset gets qualified? Gotta ask someone about it though.

Natural Gem

  1. HP 6.5 would be easily possible imo :arrow: Sure.
  2. 00:11:885 (3) - the way this flows doesn't really complement the movement that 00:11:222 (1,2) - create that well so I'd advise you to curve it :arrow: To be honest I like that curve but it indeed doesn't flow well. Fixed another way.
    Example
  3. 00:23:490 (1) - because there's a sound on 00:23:656 - which might be considerably weaker than 00:23:490 - , this might not really be an issue i just think it captures the instrument better than just 2 circles with an 1/1 break between them :arrow: The sounds in the red lines don't really need to be mapped with sliderends, would have to silence them and I hate doing that :/
  4. 00:31:116 (1,2,3,4,5) - i found the way 00:26:806 (3,1,2) - read was way easier than this, considering that the whole rest afterwards is full circles this one can completely frustrate you if you're trying to FC it if this 1/3 stream before a full 1/2 part is hard to read. :arrow: Done!
    The song is 45 seconds, what do

Hard

  1. ......
  2. 00:00:281 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - due to ar 7 this stuff is pretty much hard to read if you don't have control over your fingers and know Hard Players are not all that good at that stuff :arrow: Raised AR to 7,5. I really want these in here.
  3. 00:04:259 (1,2) - same^ :arrow: ^
  4. 00:04:922 (4,1) - ok even i panickingly hit that one extremely early because it jsut stacks at the sliderend and is visible for so long :arrow: Yeah you're right, fixed.
  5. 00:08:901 - why did you skip this??? :arrow: Fixed.
  6. 00:24:153 - i don't get the SV change to something smaller than 1, because imo the part like 00:32:111 (1) - is more intense than the beginning which uses SV 1.0x if at all you could probably have the beginning be 0.8x and the end 1.0x :arrow: I think they're okay though. Start is really powerful and plays the most instruments.
  7. 00:32:111 - this part is a whole lot copy paste, which might end up looking a bit lazy compared to like.... all the insanes :arrow: This is what fits most what am I supposed to do. Didn't copypaste it though!

Normal

  1. ...
  2. 00:19:511 - is this green line necessary???, same goes for 00:25:479 - , 00:26:474 - :arrow: Green lines are there for the ticks.
  3. 00:25:811 (4,1) - if you move 00:26:143 (1,2) - a bit up the transition could be a bit better here :arrow: Should be fine the way it is :/

Easy

  1. .
  2. 00:08:238 (1) - it kind of annoys me that this one isn't parallel to the previous slider :arrow: Not sure if I fixed it...
  3. 00:30:121 (4) - if you moved it a bit to the left the transition could be better here :arrow: Done
  4. 00:34:100 (1) - this one is a bit REALLY close to the HP bar on the default skin :arrow: Remapped those sliders because I hated them.

I think out of all diffs the hard needs most work |:, ppl stealing hitsounds should at least remove unnecessary green lines

Gl with your map!
Great mod, thanks man.
Waiting on Guests.

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Maruyu
742 posts
Joined July 2013
Maruyu
Felt like the last part was a bit weird, I remapped it. jk i only wanted it on 4,20


code
osu file format v13

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Artist:Drop
ArtistUnicode:Drop
Creator:Kaguya Hourain
Version:Yuzu's Insane
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Tags:Yuzu- Kyshiro Irreversible seifuu meigetsu  ryuu to honou no monogatari dragon and flame 竜と炎の物語清風明月
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Kaguya Hourain
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your image was a bit blurry, so I found a higher quality version then cropped and downscaled it appropriately.
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