Vertify wrote:

[General]

Omnomnomnom.

[Insane]

1. 00:02:338 (6,1) - Odd flow Fixed
2. 00:07:365 (3) - Given the pause, I think this could be at a further distance from previous note given how you gave (1) some distance from 00:05:906 (3). Keep the flow ^^ Fixed
3. 00:07:690 (4,5) - Bit of messiness here is all; versus the notes that come after it [00:08:338 (1,2,3,4)] < all equally spaced. Just split the two notes away from each other (little bit?) Fixed
4. 00:08:906 (4,1) - Why the little rabbit hop of extra distance in comparison with the previous notes? ^^ Make the jump bigger or keep the spacing the same from the previous combo (1, 2, 3, 4) Fixed
5. 00:11:095 (8) - Same spacing as its combo > since it's a pause, lets make this a bit further away to imply.. that there is a pause lol. Fixed
6. 00:11:744 (1) - Now this is no bunny hop ^^ (so maybe make that other one jump a bit as well that was previously mentioned). Fixed
7. 00:11:744 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - This spacing between all of these are all different. Awkward flow. Fixed
8. 00:15:474 (3,4,5) - space this the same distance as (1) and (2)? Fixed
9. 00:20:338 (1) - Layer it over 00:19:203 (2) for neatness? Lol. - Up to you. Fixed
10. R00:21:798 (1,2) - Since it's hard to say how far these two should be distanced (for it to make good sense) maybe we can stack the (1) on top of the (2)? Fixed
11. 01:00:879 (1) - An extra bunny hop to get to its friend versus his other mates ^^ (make it closer to the (2)) Changed to slider and re-mapped
12. 01:00:879 (1) - New Combo ^
13. 01:32:987 (3) - Pause - move this further away (atm looks like there is none when you compare it to your other pauses and jumps - just keeping it consistent) Fixed
14. 01:38:338 (7,1) - Move the (1) a little further away as to equal the distance from the previous notes; no reason for it to be closer at that point Fixed
15. 01:55:203 (1) - I think this could be a bit further (again pause and to keep your map consistent) Fixed
16. 01:59:095 (1,2) - Aha! This looks much better doesn't it? (In reference to R lol). And again for consistent purposes (and neatness), I'd highly suggest stacking that 1 from what I previously mentioned. Fixed
17. 02:12:068 (5) - Odd one out space wise. Make it equal to the rest [unless you change all of their positions (mind you, it's only a little bit, I'm just being anal okay lol) Fixed
18. 02:19:852 (1) - Pause, too close - you know the deal (or you could essentially just make them all have no jumps, but pick one or the other). I anticipated a few jumps then the flow started getting a bit out of wack (for me) when you kept making jumps and then no jumps at the pauses (in which these are always the same duration) > so I don't see any reason as to make them all the same at these pauses. Changed differently
19. 02:40:447 (5,6) - These two could be position better for neatness and flow ^^ [maybe just move the (5) a little up] Fixed

Over and out! Good work!

[ Archon ] wrote:

[Insane]

00:55:447 (3,4,5,6) - Feel like this shouldn't be here, or else placed away from previous slide. Perhaps extend onto previous slider into a reverse slider. Fixed by complete change

01:16:122 (5) - Opposite to above ^, it feels more comfortable with a small stack here in place of this reverse slider. Fixed

01:36:068 (5,6) - Turn this into a spaced stack? Flowing down onto upcoming notes. Prefer keeping them apart due to change in music and staggered vocals.

02:31:365 (1,2,3,4,5) - Perhaps space this out more? Fixed


02:41:825 (5,6,7,8) - Only qualms about this is hidden stack behind slider. Perhaps space the stack out to allow for a more comfortable/accurate hit. Fixed


~~~ I hope this helps!! Great song, beautiful storyboard. Love the map, good luck with the mapping!Thanks

WillTai wrote:

[General]

Flows really well! The spacing is great for most of it and storyboard is a feast for the eyes

[Hard]

00:24:636 (1) - Replace circle with a 3 tick slider starting at the red tick just before 00:24:636 (1) Instead of replace, added along with existing

01:30:393 (4,5) - Reduce the spacing to make it consistent with 01:54:555 (7,8) Fixed

01:42:230 (4) - Move the circle slightly up so it's easier to read Fixed

01:49:365 (7,8) - Space the circles apart to make it consistent with 01:54:555 (7,8) Fixed

Awesome work! Thanks

caren_sk wrote:

hi

SB spell check~
lyrics

time - correct lyrics
missed lyrics(reason)


00:03:810 (4) - 敵を選んで戦う少年
→選んで（書体違い、変更してもしなくても可＝change style of typle,better than ） Not sure what font (I'm assuming this is what is meant by type) this should be changed to. Suggestions would be awesome.

00:07:053 (3) - 叶えたい未来も無くて
→未来も無くて（「も」が抜けてる＝add 「も」）Fixed

00:16:945 (3) - もう如何しようも無くなって叫ぶんだ
→しようも無くなって（う、くが抜けてる＝add「も」「く」） Fixed

00:23:594 (4) - 僕を置いて
→置く（漢字違い＝change style of type,same） See first type change comment

00:25:377 (4) - 月は沈み
→未（ひらがなでみ＝change 「み」）Fixed

00:50:350 (1) - なんて言わないから
→なんで（なんて=change「で」） Fixed

01:27:971 (5) - あれから世界は変わったって
→か（か、いらない＝delete「か」,,,世界は(か)変わった） Fixed

01:29:269 (10) - 本気で思ったって
→で（「で」ぬけてる＝add 「で」）Fixed

01:31:863 (21) - 期待したって変えようとしたって This was a complete disaster on my part . Re-done
→re-make

01:41:593 (49) - 世界は本当に綺麗だった
→は（「は」ぬけてる＝add「は」）Fixed

01:47:107 (1) - 思い出せるように仕舞ってるの
→仕舞ってるの　（memo,仕舞ってるという漢字はある） Fixed
→not change

02:04:296 (1) - Eh
→suggestion、delete 「Eh」 This works better, thanks
need karaoke,but SB

02:20:026 (1) - 僕ら一つだから
→ら（「ら」抜けている＝add「ら」）Fixed

02:26:674 (1) - 未来を少しでも
→て（「で」に変更＝change「で」）Fixed

add white BG ?
00:35:107 (3) - Prefer keeping this one as is due to the less intense chorus. Saved for the second chorus.
02:11:107 (1) - The aforementioned chorus. Added

black feed out
01:16:134 (7) - Personally like fading in white bg and abrupt black out bg due to the nature of the song at those points. Will keep as is for the time being
02:52:458 (1) - Not a fade but added a black bg.

good luck !!

Kaguya Hourain wrote:

Hello! Here from a queue that someone posted on Friday~

General

1. Skyyyyyyyyy arroooooooooow
2. Damn this will take a while
3. You might need a SB mod or two.
4. You sure you want countdown? Whoops

Easy

1. 00:50:675 (4,5) - Your blanket it very off here, recheck it. Fixed, well tried to.
2. 02:47:431 (1) - You should move the red anchor here a bit lower and to the right so that the sliderblanket becomes even everywhere. Fixed
3. I like the slidershapes here /o/ Pandas will surgically reattach severed limbs. Thanks

Hard

1. OD to 7 Fixed
2. 00:20:837 (5,6) - Those blankets need fixing yo Fixed, yeah I suck at them
3. 00:21:648 - Maybe add circle here? \o/ Good thinking
4. 00:35:432 (2,3) - Blanket Fixed
5. 01:05:594 (4,5) - This pattern happens a couple of times here and I don't really find this good to play, leads to some unfair breaks from my part. It would be better if you did a circle on 4 and started the 1/4 slider on the red tick. Fixed, and most other instances of such pattern also.
6. 01:46:783 (6) - Why not stack this on 2?Fixed
7. 01:46:945 (7,8) - Blanket Fixed
8. 02:00:729 (2,3) - This blanket looks pretty bad with the little lump upwards you have on the first slider, consider rotating the second slider -30 degrees. Fixed, -20
9. 02:05:269 (7,1,2) - Eh small overlaps increase spacing a little to avoid these. Fixed
10. 02:31:215 (3,4) - Same case as previously Fixed
11. 02:51:972 (3,4) - And again. Fixed

Insane

1. OD to 8 o/ Fixed
2. 00:08:350 (1,2) - Polarity states you should start this slider on the white tick since the vocal there is stronger AND there is a stronger musical note there.
3. 00:12:242 (3,4,5) - Polarity advises you should either start the slider on 3 or 5. Fixed, that was stupid
4. It is strongly adviseable that you do not map longer than what you have on the rest of your diffs. You should remove what you have mapped after the spinner of map more on the rest of the difficulties. The only dif that doesn't go after the second kiai is the extra. Will try figure something with lengths in the near future.

Welp that's almost all my input for the map. The Insanes were a bit meh though. If you want some more tips come find me in-game and we can talk them out

Greetings and good luck o/