Orangestar - Asu no Yozora Shoukaihan

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Gelbana
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Friday, 16 January 2015 at 1:06:32 AM

Artist: Orangestar
Title: Asu no Yozora Shoukaihan
Tags: ia -ARIA ON THE PLANETES- vocaloid m.b. tsumetaku crn caren_sk iyasine
BPM: 185
Filesize: 6914kb
Play Time: 02:51
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (1.5 stars, 145 notes)
  2. Hard (3.46 stars, 450 notes)
  3. Insane (4.44 stars, 568 notes)
  4. iyasine_sk's Extra (5.67 stars, 897 notes)
  5. TmTk's Insane (5.07 stars, 632 notes)
  6. TmTk's Normal (2.1 stars, 274 notes)


Download: Orangestar - Asu no Yozora Shoukaihan
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Redownload after 13/01/2015
It's the little things.

SB inspired by PV (Please play with it at least once ;_;)

iyasine_sk's Extra - Collab done by iyasine and caren_sk
TmTk's Insane - Done by Tsumetaku
Insane - Done
Hard - Done by
TmTk's Normal - Done by Tsumetaku
Easy - Done
Vertify
[General]

Omnomnomnom.

[Insane]

  1. 00:02:338 (6,1) - Odd flow
  2. 00:07:365 (3) - Given the pause, I think this could be at a further distance from previous note given how you gave (1) some distance from 00:05:906 (3). Keep the flow ^^
  3. 00:07:690 (4,5) - Bit of messiness here is all; versus the notes that come after it [00:08:338 (1,2,3,4)] < all equally spaced. Just split the two notes away from each other (little bit?)
  4. 00:08:906 (4,1) - Why the little rabbit hop of extra distance in comparison with the previous notes? ^^ Make the jump bigger or keep the spacing the same from the previous combo (1, 2, 3, 4)
  5. 00:11:095 (8) - Same spacing as its combo > since it's a pause, lets make this a bit further away to imply.. that there is a pause lol.
  6. 00:11:744 (1) - Now this is no bunny hop ^^ (so maybe make that other one jump a bit as well that was previously mentioned).
  7. 00:11:744 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - This spacing between all of these are all different. Awkward flow.
  8. 00:15:474 (3,4,5) - space this the same distance as (1) and (2)?
  9. 00:20:338 (1) - Layer it over 00:19:203 (2) for neatness? Lol. - Up to you.
  10. R00:21:798 (1,2) - Since it's hard to say how far these two should be distanced (for it to make good sense) maybe we can stack the (1) on top of the (2)?
  11. 01:00:879 (1) - An extra bunny hop to get to its friend versus his other mates ^^ (make it closer to the (2))
  12. 01:00:879 (1) - New Combo
  13. 01:32:987 (3) - Pause - move this further away (atm looks like there is none when you compare it to your other pauses and jumps - just keeping it consistent)
  14. 01:38:338 (7,1) - Move the (1) a little further away as to equal the distance from the previous notes; no reason for it to be closer at that point
  15. 01:55:203 (1) - I think this could be a bit further (again pause and to keep your map consistent)
  16. 01:59:095 (1,2) - Aha! This looks much better doesn't it? (In reference to R lol). And again for consistent purposes (and neatness), I'd highly suggest stacking that 1 from what I previously mentioned.
  17. 02:12:068 (5) - Odd one out space wise. Make it equal to the rest [unless you change all of their positions (mind you, it's only a little bit, I'm just being anal okay lol)
  18. 02:19:852 (1) - Pause, too close - you know the deal (or you could essentially just make them all have no jumps, but pick one or the other). I anticipated a few jumps then the flow started getting a bit out of wack (for me) when you kept making jumps and then no jumps at the pauses (in which these are always the same duration) > so I don't see any reason as to make them all the same at these pauses.
  19. 02:40:447 (5,6) - These two could be position better for neatness and flow ^^ [maybe just move the (5) a little up]


Over and out! Good work!
Topic Starter
Gelbana
Thanks for the mod. :D

Vertify wrote:

[General]

Omnomnomnom.

[Insane]

  1. 00:02:338 (6,1) - Odd flow Fixed
  2. 00:07:365 (3) - Given the pause, I think this could be at a further distance from previous note given how you gave (1) some distance from 00:05:906 (3). Keep the flow ^^ Fixed
  3. 00:07:690 (4,5) - Bit of messiness here is all; versus the notes that come after it [00:08:338 (1,2,3,4)] < all equally spaced. Just split the two notes away from each other (little bit?) Fixed
  4. 00:08:906 (4,1) - Why the little rabbit hop of extra distance in comparison with the previous notes? ^^ Make the jump bigger or keep the spacing the same from the previous combo (1, 2, 3, 4) Fixed
  5. 00:11:095 (8) - Same spacing as its combo > since it's a pause, lets make this a bit further away to imply.. that there is a pause lol. Fixed
  6. 00:11:744 (1) - Now this is no bunny hop ^^ (so maybe make that other one jump a bit as well that was previously mentioned). Fixed
  7. 00:11:744 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - This spacing between all of these are all different. Awkward flow. Fixed
  8. 00:15:474 (3,4,5) - space this the same distance as (1) and (2)? Fixed
  9. 00:20:338 (1) - Layer it over 00:19:203 (2) for neatness? Lol. - Up to you. Fixed
  10. R00:21:798 (1,2) - Since it's hard to say how far these two should be distanced (for it to make good sense) maybe we can stack the (1) on top of the (2)? Fixed
  11. 01:00:879 (1) - An extra bunny hop to get to its friend versus his other mates ^^ (make it closer to the (2)) Changed to slider and re-mapped
  12. 01:00:879 (1) - New Combo ^
  13. 01:32:987 (3) - Pause - move this further away (atm looks like there is none when you compare it to your other pauses and jumps - just keeping it consistent) Fixed
  14. 01:38:338 (7,1) - Move the (1) a little further away as to equal the distance from the previous notes; no reason for it to be closer at that point Fixed
  15. 01:55:203 (1) - I think this could be a bit further (again pause and to keep your map consistent) Fixed
  16. 01:59:095 (1,2) - Aha! This looks much better doesn't it? (In reference to R lol). And again for consistent purposes (and neatness), I'd highly suggest stacking that 1 from what I previously mentioned. Fixed
  17. 02:12:068 (5) - Odd one out space wise. Make it equal to the rest [unless you change all of their positions (mind you, it's only a little bit, I'm just being anal okay lol) Fixed
  18. 02:19:852 (1) - Pause, too close - you know the deal (or you could essentially just make them all have no jumps, but pick one or the other). I anticipated a few jumps then the flow started getting a bit out of wack (for me) when you kept making jumps and then no jumps at the pauses (in which these are always the same duration) > so I don't see any reason as to make them all the same at these pauses. Changed differently
  19. 02:40:447 (5,6) - These two could be position better for neatness and flow ^^ [maybe just move the (5) a little up] Fixed

Over and out! Good work!
[Vincent]
weow this storyboard *_*
Tsumetaku
Orangestars :OOOOOOOOOOO
IA<3

Really like this song ;u;
and the wonderful storyboard,so excellent :D

want to make a Insane II or if you don't want IIver,i can do other diff...
Although I'm bad mapper.www
Archon
[Insane]

00:55:447 (3,4,5,6) - Feel like this shouldn't be here, or else placed away from previous slide. Perhaps extend onto previous slider into a reverse slider.

01:16:122 (5) - Opposite to above ^, it feels more comfortable with a small stack here in place of this reverse slider.

01:36:068 (5,6) - Turn this into a spaced stack? Flowing down onto upcoming notes.

02:31:365 (1,2,3,4,5) - Perhaps space this out more?

02:41:825 (5,6,7,8) - Only qualms about this is hidden stack behind slider. Perhaps space the stack out to allow for a more comfortable/accurate hit.

~~~ I hope this helps!! Great song, beautiful storyboard. Love the map, good luck with the mapping!
Topic Starter
Gelbana
Thanks for the mod. :)

[ Archon ] wrote:

[Insane]

00:55:447 (3,4,5,6) - Feel like this shouldn't be here, or else placed away from previous slide. Perhaps extend onto previous slider into a reverse slider. Fixed by complete change

01:16:122 (5) - Opposite to above ^, it feels more comfortable with a small stack here in place of this reverse slider. Fixed

01:36:068 (5,6) - Turn this into a spaced stack? Flowing down onto upcoming notes. Prefer keeping them apart due to change in music and staggered vocals.

02:31:365 (1,2,3,4,5) - Perhaps space this out more? Fixed


02:41:825 (5,6,7,8) - Only qualms about this is hidden stack behind slider. Perhaps space the stack out to allow for a more comfortable/accurate hit. Fixed


~~~ I hope this helps!! Great song, beautiful storyboard. Love the map, good luck with the mapping!Thanks
WillTai
[General]

Flows really well! The spacing is great for most of it and storyboard is a feast for the eyes :D

[Hard]

00:24:636 (1) - Replace circle with a 3 tick slider starting at the red tick just before 00:24:636 (1)

01:30:393 (4,5) - Reduce the spacing to make it consistent with 01:54:555 (7,8)

01:42:230 (4) - Move the circle slightly up so it's easier to read

01:49:365 (7,8) - Space the circles apart to make it consistent with 01:54:555 (7,8)

Awesome work! :D
Topic Starter
Gelbana
Thanks :D

WillTai wrote:

[General]

Flows really well! The spacing is great for most of it and storyboard is a feast for the eyes :D:D

[Hard]

00:24:636 (1) - Replace circle with a 3 tick slider starting at the red tick just before 00:24:636 (1) Instead of replace, added along with existing

01:30:393 (4,5) - Reduce the spacing to make it consistent with 01:54:555 (7,8) Fixed

01:42:230 (4) - Move the circle slightly up so it's easier to read Fixed

01:49:365 (7,8) - Space the circles apart to make it consistent with 01:54:555 (7,8) Fixed

Awesome work! :DThanks
CrazyErrorMan
Spinners
Error set #1
01:00:393 - Insane
01:00:717 - Hard
Error set #2
02:31:852 - Hard
02:32:014 - Insane
Error set #3
02:36:555 - Insane
02:36:717 - Hard
Tsumetaku
Ah Finally Finished my Insane... ;u; im so lazy
Sorry For let you waiting so long~
Normal is about 20% will finished next week (maybe)

Stars5.09 Orz
Link:http://puu.sh/d7szY/49de8419a9.osu

And Add this clap for me :3
http://puu.sh/d7sF8/67860c176a.rar

Also have some suggestion adjust here :)

Offset I think 1378(+12) is more correct

Add Redline on 01:16:459 - and 01:26:999 -
Cuz the downbeat switches between this part XD
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