- Racoon - wrote:

Hello~ From My Queue~

d = Don
k = Kat
D = Big Don
K = Big Kat
( ) = Reason

Kantan

00:07:945 k ? (Melody)
00:27:600 ^
00:34:151 D ? (Beat)
01:25:984 ^

sorry.all keep.

Futsuu

00:11:220 , 00:11:393 Add Note ? (00:08:289 = Same Rhythm) keep
00:29:151 k ? (00:28:117) keep
00:36:105(91,92) Remove ? (This rhythm is hard to Futsuu) 92 delete
00:38:864(98,99) ^ 99 delete
01:15:180(181,182) ^ 182 delete
01:17:938(188,189) ^ 189 delete

Musukashii

00:43:462 d ? (00:40:703, 00:46:220) keep

Good Luck~

Lunaris Filia wrote:

Hi~

Kantan

00:15:876 (17) - k keep
00:20:358 (24) - k fixed
00:21:393 (25) - k fixed
00:26:910 (33) - k keep
00:30:358 (39,40,41,42,43,44) - How about D k k d k d? changed D k k d k k
00:35:186 (47) - k fixed

Futsuu

00:15:876 (32) - same as Kantan keep
00:20:358 (45) - same as Kantan fixed
00:21:393 (48,49) - k d fixed
00:26:910 (64) - same as Kantan keep
00:31:393 (77) - k fixed
00:31:910 (79) - d fixed
00:32:427 (80,81) - k d keep
00:35:186 (88) - k fixed
01:11:501 (171) - k fixed
01:32:019 (214) - d fixed
01:33:053 (216) - k fixed

Muzukashii

00:13:807 (35,36,37,38,39,40,41) - K dd dk dk? changed D dd dk dk
00:15:876 (42) - same as Kantan keep
00:16:565 (44,45,46,47,48,49,50) - K dd dk dd? changed D dd dk dd
00:21:393 (60) - same as Kantan fixed
00:24:841 (71,72,73,74,75,76,77) - K dd dk dk? changed D dd dk dk
00:26:910 (78) - k keep
00:52:524 (169) - k fixed
01:06:745 (212,213,214,215,216) - How about kdkkk d? fixed

Oni

00:13:807 (44,45,46,47,48,49,50,51,52) - K ddd d k ddk? changed D ddd d k ddk
00:15:876 (53) - same as Kantan keep
00:16:565 (55,56,57,58,59,60,61,62,63) - K ddd d k ddd? changed D ddd d k ddd
00:21:393 (75) - same as Kantan fixed
00:24:841 (90,91,92,93,94,95,96,97,98) - K ddd d k ddk? changed D ddd d k ddk
00:26:910 (99) - same as Kantan keep
01:07:654 (276) - d keep.why d?

I generally mod according to main sound.
Fix or not is your decision
I wish you make your map ranked! Go!

Nofool wrote:

Hi Charlotte, mod requested via pm.
I hope it'll be usefull :c

General : Maybe you could ask someone to help you about the main bpm time signature, i mean there are a lot of important notes that are not on the big white lines, especially noticable in the Kantan.
Im not saying the bpm is wrong, just the big white lines positioning, just an esthetics problem so it's not that important.

[Oni]
mmm i'm not really a fan of that style as i would've mapped it totaly differently bu np.
The diff is really airy while there are a lot of beats x_x that's not a problem but i think there are some moments that could sounds better with more notes.
- 00:05:531 maybe add something ? that break feels a bit weird while playing imo.
- 00:09:324 ^.
Not sure if these 1/3 are really or for this part but well x_x if you keep them :
- 00:38:462 add k ? fits the melody (as you mostly follow it if im right), it looks like you put nothing there on purpose but i don't really see why x_x.
- 00:41:220 ^.
- 00:43:979 ^.
- 00:49:873 from here, there are some notes that sounds a bit out of rhythm, they are not but it sounds so because there are too isolated imo :
- 00:52:316 add d here and also at 00:52:733 - ? that k sounds weird alone.
- 00:54:839 do something similar to 00:57:888 - ? i mean use ddddd d d instead of k d d ? ^ same reason.
- 01:04:169 add d here ? better getting a d here if you follow the melody (even if you want a break here, the bpm is slow enough).
But well i got a big changes suggestion for this part. Just change the break and add notes to follow the melody well :
- 01:06:593 add d.
- 01:07:957 try something like that ?
cursor is at 01:08:654 -.
- 01:12:364 add d.
- 01:13:398 (302) del.
- 01:14:777 add d.
If you did the changes and think that there are not enough break, you can also remove 01:10:295 (286) and 01:13:053 (300) -. keep.
- 01:17:536 refer to 00:38:462 -.
- 01:23:053 ^.
- 01:26:329 (386,387,388) mm was a bit weird to play (i know what you follow but it sounds not high enough i think), maybe use the normal rhythm could be better, idk what to suggest tho. changed d d d→dd dd dd
- 01:29:260 (392,393,394) ^. ^
- 01:38:053 add d ?
- 01:40:812 ^.

All fixed

[Muzukashii]
- move 00:05:876 (12) to 00:05:531 - ? or do what i suggested for the oni ?
- 00:38:462 refer to the Oni.
- 00:41:220 ^.
- 00:43:979 ^.
- 00:52:316 refer to the Oni.
- 00:53:571 do something similar to 00:56:777 (180,181,182,183,184,185) - ? more or less as i suggested in the Oni.
- del 01:13:053 (142,144) and then add d at 01:13:743 and at 01:14:088 - ? Try it, it should fits more the melody and be a bit more consistent (shorter patterns).
- 01:17:536 refer to the Oni, same for the rest of the kiai.
- 01:26:329 (301,302,303) like for the Oni ;_; feels a bit weird to me, maybe add d at 01:26:329 and at 01:27:364 - ? sounds good i think if you wanna keep that xx/xy style, you can also do something similar on The Oni at least. same as Oni

All fixed

[Futsuu]
Maybe try these changes on your kiais (this example is for the first one, different timings for the second obviously):
- 00:37:255 (93,94,92) why not ddk in 1/3 ? sorry.i don't know; ;
- 00:40:014 ^. + del 00:40:703 (100) -. ^
- 00:42:772 ^. + del 00:43:462 (106) + add k at 00:43:979 -. ^
- 00:45:531 ^. + del 00:46:220 (111) -. ^
- 00:52:316 refer to the Oni. fixed
- 00:53:571 add d here and at 00:53:994 and then del the one you had between both ? easier to read/fits more drums. fixed
- 00:55:623 ^. fixed

[Kantan]
- 00:52:524 (76) move to 00:52:316 - ? easier to read.
- 00:53:571 add d here and at 00:53:994 and then remove 00:53:782 (78) and 00:54:416 (79) - ? easier to read again as it is a kantan.
- 00:55:819 refer to - 00:52:524 (76) -.
- add d at 01:26:674 -, - 01:27:364 -, - 01:28:053 and then del 01:27:019 (138) - ? i think that's easier again, just following the main rhythm.
- 01:29:433 ^ do something similar (i mean something like xxx x x xxx instead of xxx x xxx).
- 01:32:191 ^.
- 01:34:950 ^.

All fixed
_ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _

Good luck'

1. 01:03:109 - The second kiai seems to fit more if it starts here.
2. An Ura Oni seems fitting for this song, especially considering the way your Oni is currently mapped. I recommend you really think about this if you like the way your Oni is mapped!

1. 00:02:082 (1,2,3) - The third note sounds better as a don finisher. (1,2) as kat finishers sounds a lot better, like O O O
2. 00:04:151 (8,9) - You could map in between these notes with kats in 1/6. It sounds better with the music.
3. 00:08:289 (22) - This section to 00:35:876 - is undermapped...there's lots of stuff to map to if you want to make the Oni more interesting.
4. 00:08:807 - Add two dons here for a ooo
5. 00:09:151 - Same as above, or just one don here for a o o o
6. 00:09:669 - This kind of density is good, you should try it for other sections of the song too.
7. 00:11:738 - This area is not so dense but it feels like it should be.
8. 00:13:807 - It's a bit inconsistent here. Try mapping the big finishes more similarly, like 00:14:669 (50,51) - or 00:15:186 (52,53,54). There's just a lot of different stuff going on.
9. 00:35:876 (136) - I don't think I'm hearing wrong, but most of your kiai is mapped in 1/6, which doesn't really follow the music. Parts like 00:37:945 (138,139,140,141,142) - and 00:46:479 (193,194,195,196,197) - are mapped fine since they are in 1/4. If you want to follow the big finishes in the song, it's in 1/3.
10. 00:55:035 - A note here would sound nice. 00:55:427 - and 00:55:623 - as well since it follows your pattern.
11. 00:55:819 (222) - This is following the melody of the song. Try moving this to 00:56:015. It sounds better with what you're trying to follow in the music.
12. 00:56:407 (223) - Previous 3 suggestions above apply here as well and the following sections similar to it.
13. 01:03:109 (244) - to 01:14:777 (312) - this is mapped really well! You should use this section as a guide to mapping the other parts.
14. 01:14:950 (313) - Same suggestion as the previous kiai.
15. 01:38:398 (429,430,431,432,433,434,435,436,437,438,439) - For a section that's less dense than the rest of the map, this is really unfitting. Try to remove some notes so it's consistent with the rest of this section. If you want to make the end more dense like this, try adding more notes starting at 01:37:019 (424).

1. 00:02:427 (2,3) - These sound better as finishers.
2. 00:15:876 (42) - Definitely sounds better as a kat. Like 00:18:634 (51) and 00:21:393 (60).
3. 00:20:358 (57) - ^
4. 00:23:117 (66) - ^
5. 00:24:238 (70,71) - Remove these? It sounds better without.
6. 00:26:910 (80) - Sounds much better as a kat.
7. 00:32:427 (98,99) - Reverse these two so it's consistent with other sections. They also sound better reversed.
8. 00:35:186 (107) - Again, kat is more fitting.
9. 00:42:082 (138,139) - Reverse so it's consistent. Applies to 00:42:772 (141,142) - as well.
10. 00:43:462 (144) - Change to don for consistency. It also plays and sounds better.
11. 00:46:565 (159) - You could add two dons after this note for a triplet ooo. It's very fitting.
12. 00:55:623 - A note here and at 00:56:015 is more consistent with your patterns. Remove 00:55:819 (184) - as well since it follows a different beat than the rest of the section.
13. 00:57:888 (191) - Add notes here like the previous section for better consistency.
14. 01:01:078 - Add a note here as well like previous sections. Each speedup should follow the same pattern.
15. 01:23:915 (299) - This should be a don.
16. 01:24:605 (302,303,304) - All reversed. Should be a o o o for consistency.
17. 01:25:381 (306) - Kat for consistency.
18. 01:25:553 (307) - Remove? This is difficult for a muzu. A better pattern would be a 5-plet don stream. Change 01:25:639 (308) - to a don, and add notes in between to 01:25:984 (309).
19. 01:27:881 - Adding a note here would help make this section more playable. Make sure the two notes here are the same colour, like o o or o o
20. 01:30:812 - Add a note here so the following note isn't too hard to predict.
21. 01:38:484 (345) - Remove this. The triple don feels unfitting here.
22. Quite clean. Just needs a little more polishing.

1. 00:02:772 - A really strong sound. I see why you didn't include a note but I don't know if this should go ignored.
2. 00:11:048 (21) - For consistency, try making this a o o o
3. 00:35:876 (90,91,92) - If anything, I think this kind of pattern (following 1/3 then last note snapped in 1/4) is far too difficult to read in a futsuu. The gap between the last two notes is a transition between different beats, something that should be avoided. Even if it may feel boring, consistency is extremely important in easier difficulties. Use simplified versions like 00:37:255 (93,94,95).
4. 00:38:634 (96,97,98) - ^ The above applies to all beats like this.
5. 00:51:899 (123,124,125,126) - To be consistent with the previous section, this should be o o o__ o Basically, move (124,125) left two ticks.
6. 00:55:623 (134,135) - Move these left two ticks for consistency reasons.
7. 00:56:962 - Add a note here so it's consistent with the previous sections, and make sure the 3 notes here are the same colour (eg: o o o) Every two bars from 00:53:149 (127) - should be consistent, until 01:01:897 (151).
8. 01:14:950 (186,187,188) - My previous suggestions for the kiai still apply here.
9. Try to keep your mapping consistent for each section that's repeated so it's easier for players to understand the map.

1. 00:02:772 - Again as suggested before in the futsuu, I don't think this should go ignored. Just make this a don finisher and the previous note as well so it's easy to play (O O O).
2. 00:03:807 (3) - to 00:08:289 - I highly suggest moving all the notes in this section onto the big white ticks. Not only is the sound the strongest on these ticks, but it's a perfect lead in to the following pattern.
3. 00:30:876 (40) - I would remove this. I don't think the increase in difficulty is necessary; the variation is enough. 00:31:910 (41) - as well.
4. 00:51:899 (73) - Remove.
5. 00:58:234 - Add a note for consistency. 00:59:602 - and 01:02:200 - as well.
6. 01:37:364 (158) - Remove for consistency.

Xakyrie wrote:

Hi Charlotte, here's your mod request via forum PM. I'll try to simplify as much as possible for you.

[General]

1. 01:03:109 - The second kiai seems to fit more if it starts here. fixed
2. An Ura Oni seems fitting for this song, especially considering the way your Oni is currently mapped. I recommend you really think about this if you like the way your Oni is mapped!

[Oni]

1. 00:02:082 (1,2,3) - The third note sounds better as a don finisher. (1,2) as kat finishers sounds a lot better, like O O O
2. 00:04:151 (8,9) - You could map in between these notes with kats in 1/6. It sounds better with the music.
3. 00:08:289 (22) - This section to 00:35:876 - is undermapped...there's lots of stuff to map to if you want to make the Oni more interesting.
4. 00:08:807 - Add two dons here for a ooo
5. 00:09:151 - Same as above, or just one don here for a o o o
6. 00:09:669 - This kind of density is good, you should try it for other sections of the song too.
7. 00:11:738 - This area is not so dense but it feels like it should be.
8. 00:13:807 - It's a bit inconsistent here. Try mapping the big finishes more similarly, like 00:14:669 (50,51) - or 00:15:186 (52,53,54). There's just a lot of different stuff going on.
9. 00:35:876 (136) - I don't think I'm hearing wrong, but most of your kiai is mapped in 1/6, which doesn't really follow the music. Parts like 00:37:945 (138,139,140,141,142) - and 00:46:479 (193,194,195,196,197) - are mapped fine since they are in 1/4. If you want to follow the big finishes in the song, it's in 1/3.
10. 00:55:035 - A note here would sound nice. 00:55:427 - and 00:55:623 - as well since it follows your pattern.
11. 00:55:819 (222) - This is following the melody of the song. Try moving this to 00:56:015. It sounds better with what you're trying to follow in the music.
12. 00:56:407 (223) - Previous 3 suggestions above apply here as well and the following sections similar to it.
13. 01:03:109 (244) - to 01:14:777 (312) - this is mapped really well! You should use this section as a guide to mapping the other parts.
14. 01:14:950 (313) - Same suggestion as the previous kiai.
15. 01:38:398 (429,430,431,432,433,434,435,436,437,438,439) - For a section that's less dense than the rest of the map, this is really unfitting. Try to remove some notes so it's consistent with the rest of this section. If you want to make the end more dense like this, try adding more notes starting at 01:37:019 (424).
    
    Almost fixed.kiai time is 1/3→changed 1/4.Oni→changed Inner Oni.

[Muzukashii]

1. 00:02:427 (2,3) - These sound better as finishers.
2. 00:15:876 (42) - Definitely sounds better as a kat. Like 00:18:634 (51) and 00:21:393 (60).
3. 00:20:358 (57) - ^
4. 00:23:117 (66) - ^
5. 00:24:238 (70,71) - Remove these? It sounds better without.
6. 00:26:910 (80) - Sounds much better as a kat.
7. 00:32:427 (98,99) - Reverse these two so it's consistent with other sections. They also sound better reversed.
8. 00:35:186 (107) - Again, kat is more fitting.
9. 00:42:082 (138,139) - Reverse so it's consistent. Applies to 00:42:772 (141,142) - as well.
10. 00:43:462 (144) - Change to don for consistency. It also plays and sounds better.
11. 00:46:565 (159) - You could add two dons after this note for a triplet ooo. It's very fitting.
12. 00:55:623 - A note here and at 00:56:015 is more consistent with your patterns. Remove 00:55:819 (184) - as well since it follows a different beat than the rest of the section.
13. 00:57:888 (191) - Add notes here like the previous section for better consistency.
14. 01:01:078 - Add a note here as well like previous sections. Each speedup should follow the same pattern.
15. 01:23:915 (299) - This should be a don.
16. 01:24:605 (302,303,304) - All reversed. Should be a o o o for consistency.
17. 01:25:381 (306) - Kat for consistency.
18. 01:25:553 (307) - Remove? This is difficult for a muzu. A better pattern would be a 5-plet don stream. Change 01:25:639 (308) - to a don, and add notes in between to 01:25:984 (309).
19. 01:27:881 - Adding a note here would help make this section more playable. Make sure the two notes here are the same colour, like o o or o o
20. 01:30:812 - Add a note here so the following note isn't too hard to predict.
21. 01:38:484 (345) - Remove this. The triple don feels unfitting here.
22. Quite clean. Just needs a little more polishing.
    
    All fixed

[Futsuu]

1. 00:02:772 - A really strong sound. I see why you didn't include a note but I don't know if this should go ignored.
2. 00:11:048 (21) - For consistency, try making this a o o o
3. 00:35:876 (90,91,92) - If anything, I think this kind of pattern (following 1/3 then last note snapped in 1/4) is far too difficult to read in a futsuu. The gap between the last two notes is a transition between different beats, something that should be avoided. Even if it may feel boring, consistency is extremely important in easier difficulties. Use simplified versions like 00:37:255 (93,94,95).
4. 00:38:634 (96,97,98) - ^ The above applies to all beats like this.
5. 00:51:899 (123,124,125,126) - To be consistent with the previous section, this should be o o o__ o Basically, move (124,125) left two ticks.
6. 00:55:623 (134,135) - Move these left two ticks for consistency reasons.
7. 00:56:962 - Add a note here so it's consistent with the previous sections, and make sure the 3 notes here are the same colour (eg: o o o) Every two bars from 00:53:149 (127) - should be consistent, until 01:01:897 (151).
8. 01:14:950 (186,187,188) - My previous suggestions for the kiai still apply here.
9. Try to keep your mapping consistent for each section that's repeated so it's easier for players to understand the map.
   
   All fixed

[Kantan]

1. 00:02:772 - Again as suggested before in the futsuu, I don't think this should go ignored. Just make this a don finisher and the previous note as well so it's easy to play (O O O).
2. 00:03:807 (3) - to 00:08:289 - I highly suggest moving all the notes in this section onto the big white ticks. Not only is the sound the strongest on these ticks, but it's a perfect lead in to the following pattern.
3. 00:30:876 (40) - I would remove this. I don't think the increase in difficulty is necessary; the variation is enough. 00:31:910 (41) - as well.
4. 00:51:899 (73) - Remove.
5. 00:58:234 - Add a note for consistency. 00:59:602 - and 01:02:200 - as well.
6. 01:37:364 (158) - Remove for consistency.
   
   Almost fixed

You should try to review your Oni. I think you could definitely make it much more enjoyable, and there's so much you can do with this song!

neonat wrote:

Futsuu

00:03:634 (6) - I suggest you remove this and add notes to 00:04:151 and 00:04:324 - the drum cymbals are too strong to ignore at the start of the song, you should map to them fixed
00:15:876 (35,36) - change to kat? Or at least the first one? To highlight the how 00:15:876 (35) is higher pitch overall to 00:16:565 (37) - Either make it similar to 00:24:151 (59,60) or 00:21:393 (51,52) keep
00:58:581 (146) - sounds better as kat keep
01:34:777 (231,232) - d k instead k d because it's the same music pattern as 01:32:019 (225,226) fixed

Where is Oni ?.? GD.wip

Inner Oni

00:11:565 - I feel there should be a note here to lead in to 00:11:738 (46) fixed
00:30:014 (161) - change to kat like 00:32:772 (178) because unlike all the rest before this, the pitch goes down. So since only these 2 share that kind of pitch change, they should be similar fixed
00:58:581 (331) - should be k like 00:55:623 (319) fixed

These are what concerned me the most, good luck

Sala- wrote:

Hi there, here is your requested mod.

[Kantan]

|00:22:082 (28) - should be a D (00:13:807 (16) - , 00:16:565 (20) - , etc.) fixed
|00:32:772 (43) - d for consistency, you used following colours in previous triples: d d d, k d d, k d d, k k d. fixed
|00:35:531 (47) - k, same reason as above. fixed
|01:14:950 (119) - D to make the pattern's end similar to 00:35:186 (46,47,48) - . fixed
|01:37:364 (159) - feels pretty redundant, consider deleting it (would be an overmapped pattern otherwise) fixed

[Futsuu]

|00:22:082 (54) - I think I start to understand what you did there. But somehow I don't approve of it. ._. (if you fixed the problem in Kantan, fix it here and probably in every other difficulty.) fixed
|00:32:427 (84,85,86,92,93,94) - Also the same as in the Kantan, make those and 00:21:393 (52,53,54,60,61,62) - similar please. fixed
|00:57:147 (144,146) - swap these colours.
|01:07:351 (172) - k (consistent to 01:04:321 (162,163,164,165,166) - ) fixed
|01:20:467 (203) - D (00:41:048 (105,106,107) - ) fixed

[Muzukashii]

|00:22:082 - See, here you have a D instead of a d. Should be consistent in all diffs. fixed
|00:28:634 (86) and 00:34:151 (104) - I think a k fits better here. fixed

[Inner Oni]

* Great Kiai idea!

|00:42:341 (255,256,257,258) - This pattern doesn't exactly fit, it differs from all others. It was also not used in the 3rd kiai. Better use one of the previous/later patterns.) kdkd→changed kdkk
|00:55:819 (324) - extremely confusing and should be put just to fulfill the double-pattern. just delete this. fixed
|01:01:570 to 01:02:806 - is really low in objects for an Inner Oni. You might want to fill this part up like the rest of the song's section. add note.

Oni will be, as said per PM, collabed by Stefan and me.

Good luck!

rew0825 wrote:

Hi from my mod request

[ Kantan]

1. 00:32:772 (44) - d and 00:33:117 (45) - K
2. 01:12:191 (112) - D
3. 01:14:605 (117,118) - ctrl+g
4. 01:25:639 (136,137) - ctrl+g
5. 01:33:915 (146,147) - ctrl+g

[ Futsuu]

1. 00:03:117 (4) - Delete
2. 00:04:151 (6) - k , 00:04:324 (7) - Delete and 00:04:496 (7) - move to 00:04:841
3. 00:07:255 (13) - move to 00:06:910
4. 01:04:472 (161) - move to 01:04:775
5. 01:14:950 (188,189,190) - k k d

[ Muzukashii]

1. 00:05:186 (11) - k
2. 00:38:031 (119) - Delete
3. 00:38:462 (120) - Delete
4. 00:40:789 (130) - Delete
5. 00:41:220 (131) - Delete
6. 00:43:548 (141) - Delete
7. 00:43:979 (142) - Delete
8. 00:46:307 (152) - Delete
9. 01:17:536 (264) - Delete
10. 01:20:295 (276) - Delete
11. 01:23:053 (288) - Delete
12. 01:26:501 (304,306,308) - k k k

Good luck

xtrem3x wrote:

Request via .... PM or form? .-.

_____________________________________________________

General:

all diffs with same kiai time pls .-.

don = d
kat = k
Big Don = D
Big Kat = K

_____________________________________________________

Kantan:

Good .-.

_____________________________________________________

Futsuu:

01:14:950 (191) - change to D fixed
01:25:984 (214) - ^ fixed

01:39:088 (245) - change to k fixed

_____________________________________________________

Muzukashii:

01:26:501 (314,316,318) - change to k fixed

_____________________________________________________

Sala-fan's Oni:

00:05:186 - change to k (?)

00:07:255 (1,1,1) - k d k
00:10:358 (1,1,1) - k d k

00:49:498 - change to k

01:28:398 (1,1) - k d

01:39:088 (1,1,1) - same k d k

01:42:537 - change to D

_____________________________________________________

Inner Oni:

00:16:220 - change to k fixed
00:17:082 - ^ fixed
00:18:979 - ^ fixed
00:26:651 (139,140,141, 142) - ddkk fixed

01:30:295 to 01:31:157 - add 2 or 3 notes .-. okay,add note.

01:41:674 - k fixed

_____________________________________________________

LNP- wrote:

Sala-fan's oni

> 00:02:427 (1) - K
> 00:35:617 (51) - k
> 00:55:035 - add d
> 00:55:427 (29) - k No, I will use consistent kdkdk-patterns.
> 00:58:061 (39) - k ^
> 01:01:078 (52) - k ^
> 01:25:726 (185) - k

LNP- wrote:

Hi~

Mod as your requested

d= don
k= kat
D= big don
K= big kat

Kantan

> 00:02:082 (1,2,3) - d D d changed d D K
> 01:13:915 (116,117) - d k keep

Futsuu

> 00:02:082 (1) - d fixed
> 01:15:295 (192) - delete keep

Muzukashii

> 00:02:082 (1) - d fixed
> 00:32:772 (99) - k keep
> 00:38:289 (120,121,122,123,124,125,126,127,128,129,130,131,132) - keep

> 01:10:984 (241) - d keep

Sala-fan's oni

> 00:02:427 (1) - K
> 00:35:617 (51) - k
> 00:55:035 - add d
> 00:55:427 (29) - k
> 00:58:061 (39) - k
> 01:01:078 (52) - k
> 01:25:726 (185) - k

Inner Oni

> 00:02:082 (1,2,3,4) - d K D d changed d D K d
> 00:11:220 (43,44) - k k keep
> 00:14:324 (55) - k ^
> 00:20:531 (97) - k ^
> 00:24:496 (125) - D ^
> 00:25:358 (129) - k ^
> 00:27:255 (143) - k ^
> 01:04:775 (367) - k fixed

Good Luck

Ilikecheese wrote:

Inner Oni

The kiai aside, the rest of the map was a tad to easy for me so I thought it could use some notes

00:11:824 - add k
00:12:082 - change k
00:12:255 (51,52,53,54,55,56,57) - dddkkkk
00:12:945 (58,59,60) - kdk
00:13:289 - add d
00:24:324 (123,124) - change to k
00:24:669 - add k
00:47:275 - add d
00:48:007 - ^
00:56:015 - add k
00:56:211 - delete note
01:01:078 - add d
01:01:242 - change to k
01:40:036 - add d
01:40:122 - change to k
01:40:295 - add d
01:40:381 - ^
01:40:553 - add k
01:40:639 - ^
01:40:726 - ^
01:40:984 - ^

Almost fixed

Sala-fan's Oni
This map was pretty even and flowed well, boring, but i'd rather not start adding notes to this map.
01:25:810 (186) - overlapped don, delete.

00:36:105 - here you have 1/3s but it should be 1/4. re-snap pl0x.

Muzukashii
00:03:634 (6) - move this to 00:04:324 add 1/3 note.
00:36:105 - same as Oni, should be 1/4 keep
01:05:987 (220) - delete keep
01:10:812 - I was thinking that here, you should delete some of these short streams, its not kiai and furthermore its a muzukashii. keep
01:14:950 - again with the 1/3 ~ to 1/4 snapped notes keep

xtrem3x wrote:

Sala-fan's Oni:

00:05:186 - change to k (?) I see nothing which sounds higher to add k here.

00:07:255 (1,1,1) - k d k There is a higher beat on 00:07:600 (1) where k is good.
00:10:358 (1,1,1) - k d k Wouldn't fit much imo

01:28:398 (1,1) - k d Following the terrible piano play here

01:39:088 (1,1,1) - same k d k Won't change since I didn't in the first as well.

01:42:537 - change to D Why? I already used on 00:13:807 (1) K.

LNP- wrote:

Sala-fan's oni

> 00:02:427 (1) - K I guess to have a bit consistency with the Inner Oni Difficulty would be good. Added.
> 00:35:617 (51) - k Sala-, that's your part.
> 01:25:726 (185) - k d is fine here.

Sayaka- wrote:

[PuzzleMaster-NutritiousGuy's Oni *runs*]
u wot

1. 01:41:415 - add a d here? I think the sound in the back is lound enough to be mapped I like the transision ooo o o ooo more.

Sala- wrote:

Fixed everything, even Stefan's stupid mistake. And I wonder why I always miss..

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Sayaka- wrote:

Hi! Here is the mod you requested via PM!

[General]

01:07:957 - to 01:09:433 - I would recommend to add some sv changes to have this slowdown in a more progressive way, would fit the song better imo (except in Oni diff, they are already here)

[Kantan]

1. 00:10:358 (10) - delete? It'll give a little break and the k in the next pattern is emphasized fixed
2. 00:55:231 (79,80) - change these to k? it'll make a reverse pattern with 00:53:149 (75,76,77) - fixed
3. 00:57:888 (84,85) - how about k k d (1/1)? reverse pattern + to keep rhythm consistency sorry.1/1-triplet is long.keep

[Futsuu]

2. 00:14:151 (32) - I don't think it's needed, remove? like this the transition is better between Kantan and Futsuu
3. 00:15:186 (35) - ^
4. 00:16:910 (40) - ^
5. 00:17:945 (43) - ^
6. 00:19:669 (48) - ^
7. 00:20:703 (51) - ^
8. 00:22:427 (56) - ^
9. 00:23:462 (59) - ^
10. 00:25:186 (64) - ^
11. 00:26:220 (67) - ^
    etc... until 00:35:876 (95) -
12. 01:03:109 (158,159,160) - ddd? it's easier + sounds good too
13. 01:04:321 (163,164,165) - kkk? easier imo keep.
14. 01:06:745 (170,171,172) - ^
    
    Almost fixed

[Muzukashii]

• Everything seems fine! *throws a star*

[PuzzleMaster-NutritiousGuy's Oni *runs*]

1. 00:30:358 (28) - change to D? like this the next k is emphasized since the pitch is pretty high
2. 00:33:117 (40) - d? same reason as above
3. 01:41:415 - add a d here? I think the sound in the back is lound enough to be mapped

[Inner Oni]

1. 00:20:703 (107,108,109,110,111,112,113,114) - ddk kkddk would flow better imo fixed
2. 00:24:496 (134) - change to d? fixed
   I really like the Kiai, it's really fun to play! Thank you

That's all! Good luck!

Genocide wrote:

hi from PM request

Inner
01:38:915 (577,579) - ctrl + g changed 01:38:398 (574,575,576,577,578,579,580) - ddkkddd
01:39:605 and 01:39:691 - don keep

[Sala-fan's Oni]
00:10:358 (1,1) - kk
00:17:945 (1,1) - how about kd? 00:18:117 (1) - drum
00:32:600 - d? because 00:35:358 (49) -

no comment =w=b

nothing i can be mentioned

the map set good already =w=b
good luck!

• [Kantan]

1. 00:02:427 (2,3) - consider changing it to K d ? This could fit the strong snare sound at 00:02:427 (2) -
2. 00:23:117 (28) - k would be better since the sound is similar to 00:20:358 (24) -
3. 00:34:151 (44) - same as ^
4. 01:20:467 (127) - I think you may have missed the finish here ?
5. 01:25:984 (137) - ^

• [Futsuu]

1. 00:02:427 (2,3) - same as Kantan
2. 00:03:807 - The current pattern sounds strange to me because it is a bit unnatural. You may try this: (cursor at 00:04:151 - )
3. 00:23:634 (52) - maybe d as you did at 00:34:669 (76) - ? It would be more consistent imo.
4. From 00:35:876 to 00:41:393 - , I think you need to make this part similar to the 2nd part of this kiai in terms of note density for the sake of a better flow. Here is a suggestion: (cursor at 00:38:634 - )
5. 01:02:200 - adding d here could make it more coherent to 00:59:602 (132) -
6. 01:12:881 (168) - d would be better since the music is the same as 01:10:122 (162) -
7. From 01:14:950 to 01:20:467 - same as the part from 00:35:876 to 00:41:393 -
8. 01:32:019 (209,210) - d k could follow the pitch of the music better.
9. 01:34:777 (215,216) - ^

• [Muzukashii]

1. 00:02:427 (2,3) - K k would be better for the strong snare at 00:02:427 (2) -
2. 00:09:669 (26,27,28,29,30,31) - ddd kkd would be nice if you want to follow the background musical pitch.
3. 00:11:220 and 00:11:393 - you may add d for better consistency.
4. 00:52:316 (178) - k could fit the pitch of the music there.
5. From 01:12:191 to 01:14:605 - , I would propose a shorter pattern like this: (cursor at 01:12:191 - )
6. 01:14:950 (264) - I think you may have missed the finish here ?
7. 01:20:467 (290) - ^
8. 01:22:651 (300) - move to 01:22:622 (300) - . The note is wrongly snapped.
9. 01:25:984 (317) - same as 01:14:950 (264) -
10. 01:30:639 - add d and change 01:30:812 (334) - to follow the background music ?
11. 01:35:295 (346) - k would be better since the sound is similar to 01:32:536 (339) -

• [Sala-fan's Oni]

1. 00:10:358 (1) - k would be better if you want to follow the pitch of the background music.
2. 00:16:220 (1) - consider changing this note to D ? It has the lowest pitch among 00:15:876 (1,1,1) -
3. 01:04:548 - consider adding a don here ? A ddk triplet could suit the music there while increasing the difficulty by a bit.
4. 01:06:139 (81,82,83) - I think kkd could fit the stressed sound at 01:06:139 - in a way better.
5. 01:06:972 - same as 01:04:548 -
6. 01:39:088 (1) - same as 00:10:358 (1) -

• [Inner Oni]

1. 00:02:427 (2,3) - same as Muzukashii
2. 00:06:220 (16,17,18,19,20,21) - ddk ddd and add k at 00:07:772 - ? Again, this could follow the pitch of the music nicely.
3. 00:08:548 - consider adding a don here for the hit-hat sound ?
4. 00:15:531 (73,74,75,76,77) - ddkdk could follow the relatively high-pitched music at 00:15:876 (77) -
5. 00:21:738 (115) - k would be better for pattern consistency as 00:16:220 (78,97) -
6. 00:27:255 (153) - ^
7. 00:28:634 (161) - k could follow the relatively high-pitched sound there.
8. 00:35:531 (208) - same as 00:21:738 (115) -
9. 00:52:316 (322) - same as Muzukashii
10. 01:00:586 (354) - maybe k here for pattern consistency ?
11. 01:04:548 - consider adding d here for a harder pattern which fits the music ?
12. 01:30:812 (551) - same as Muzukashii
13. 01:32:019 (555,559) - you may swap these notes to d k as 01:33:053 - has a higher pitch.
14. 01:34:777 (564,565) - similar to ^ , d k would be better imo.

Nardoxyribonucleic wrote:

Hi, here comes a taiko mod as requested.

• [Kantan]

1. 00:02:427 (2,3) - consider changing it to K d ? This could fit the strong snare sound at 00:02:427 (2) -
2. 00:23:117 (28) - k would be better since the sound is similar to 00:20:358 (24) -
3. 00:34:151 (44) - same as ^
4. 01:20:467 (127) - I think you may have missed the finish here ?
5. 01:25:984 (137) - ^
   
   All fixed

• [Futsuu]

1. 00:02:427 (2,3) - same as Kantan
2. 00:03:807 - The current pattern sounds strange to me because it is a bit unnatural. You may try this: (cursor at 00:04:151 - )
3. 00:23:634 (52) - maybe d as you did at 00:34:669 (76) - ? It would be more consistent imo.
4. From 00:35:876 to 00:41:393 - , I think you need to make this part similar to the 2nd part of this kiai in terms of note density for the sake of a better flow. Here is a suggestion: (cursor at 00:38:634 - )
5. 01:02:200 - adding d here could make it more coherent to 00:59:602 (132) -
6. 01:12:881 (168) - d would be better since the music is the same as 01:10:122 (162) -
7. From 01:14:950 to 01:20:467 - same as the part from 00:35:876 to 00:41:393 -
8. 01:32:019 (209,210) - d k could follow the pitch of the music better.
9. 01:34:777 (215,216) - ^
   
   All fixed

• [Muzukashii]

1. 00:02:427 (2,3) - K k would be better for the strong snare at 00:02:427 (2) -
2. 00:09:669 (26,27,28,29,30,31) - ddd kkd would be nice if you want to follow the background musical pitch.
3. 00:11:220 and 00:11:393 - you may add d for better consistency.
4. 00:52:316 (178) - k could fit the pitch of the music there.
5. From 01:12:191 to 01:14:605 - , I would propose a shorter pattern like this: (cursor at 01:12:191 - )
6. 01:14:950 (264) - I think you may have missed the finish here ?
7. 01:20:467 (290) - ^
8. 01:22:651 (300) - move to 01:22:622 (300) - . The note is wrongly snapped.
9. 01:25:984 (317) - same as 01:14:950 (264) -
10. 01:30:639 - add d and change 01:30:812 (334) - to follow the background music ?
11. 01:35:295 (346) - k would be better since the sound is similar to 01:32:536 (339) -
    
    Almost fixed

• [Sala-fan's Oni]

1. 00:10:358 (1) - k would be better if you want to follow the pitch of the background music.
2. 00:16:220 (1) - consider changing this note to D ? It has the lowest pitch among 00:15:876 (1,1,1) -
3. 01:04:548 - consider adding a don here ? A ddk triplet could suit the music there while increasing the difficulty by a bit.
4. 01:06:139 (81,82,83) - I think kkd could fit the stressed sound at 01:06:139 - in a way better.
5. 01:06:972 - same as 01:04:548 -
6. 01:39:088 (1) - same as 00:10:358 (1) -

• [Inner Oni]

1. 00:02:427 (2,3) - same as Muzukashii
2. 00:06:220 (16,17,18,19,20,21) - ddk ddd and add k at 00:07:772 - ? Again, this could follow the pitch of the music nicely.
3. 00:08:548 - consider adding a don here for the hit-hat sound ?
4. 00:15:531 (73,74,75,76,77) - ddkdk could follow the relatively high-pitched music at 00:15:876 (77) -
5. 00:21:738 (115) - k would be better for pattern consistency as 00:16:220 (78,97) -
6. 00:27:255 (153) - ^
7. 00:28:634 (161) - k could follow the relatively high-pitched sound there.
8. 00:35:531 (208) - same as 00:21:738 (115) -
9. 00:52:316 (322) - same as Muzukashii
10. 01:00:586 (354) - maybe k here for pattern consistency ?
11. 01:04:548 - consider adding d here for a harder pattern which fits the music ?
12. 01:30:812 (551) - same as Muzukashii
13. 01:32:019 (555,559) - you may swap these notes to d k as 01:33:053 - has a higher pitch.
14. 01:34:777 (564,565) - similar to ^ , d k would be better imo.
    
    Almost fixed
    

That's all and good luck~

Neku okazaki wrote:

Hi o/, mod request via pm

[Kantan]
00:15:876 (17,18) - kk Is better in my opinion
00:26:910 (33) - k to continue with pattern
00:40:014 (53) - Unsnaped
00:59:602 (86) - Delete, because this part have high bpm, this make the part more easy for a kantan
01:01:242 (89) - Move to 01:01:570 - ^
01:02:200 (91) - Delete to make this part more easy, only if you do that^
01:04:321 (94) - Make d, is better for this part in my opinion
01:04:624 (95) - Delete to make it more easy
01:07:654 (101) - ^
01:11:157 (106) - Have a sound more hight than 01:10:812 (105) - , change it to k
01:14:260 (112) - Delete, isnt necessary for a kantan
01:14:950 (118) - Unsnaped
01:19:777 (125) - Unsnaped
01:21:847 (129) - Unsnaped
01:37:019 (152) - Have an high sound, change to k

This is really hard for a kantan, because put a lot of objects in the part where the bpm changes.

Almost fixed

[Futsuu]
00:35:876 (78,79) - This have the same sound, do k
00:40:013 (85) - Unsnaped
01:04:472 (146) - Change to k, to make it more easy, like the kantan
01:04:927 (148) - If you like, you can put a d in this part
01:19:778 (181) - Unsnaped
01:21:847 (186) - Unsnaped
01:26:501 (195,197) - Move 1/2 to 01:27:019 (196) - , is better imo
01:29:260 (201,203) - ^
01:39:949 (228) - Unsnaped

Almost fixed

I see good the rest :O, take my star :'D

bbj0920 wrote:

hi from pm request

General : Artist should be 増田順一
find another information for title, this may be also japanese　All diff changed.

Kantan

SPOILER

01:00:914 (88,89) - k - To keep consistency with 00:54:839 (77,78,79) - keep
01:37:019 (155) - D - there's crash fixed

Futsuu

SPOILER

00:04:496 (7) - k - because of background sound fixed

Muzukashii

SPOILER

00:04:496 (11) - Same as Futsuu fixed
00:31:393 (99,101) - reverse - pitch is lower later fixed

Oni

SPOILER

00:04:151 (1,1,1) - 1/3 dddk like Muzukashii would work
01:34:088 - There definitely is a sound, so add a note

Inner Oni

SPOILER

00:04:496 (11) - fixed
01:37:019 (572) - D - there's crash fixed

Seems okayish

Julie wrote:

[Kantan]
00:59:602 - add d?

[Futsuu]
01:06:442 - add k?

[Muzukashii]
00:04:151 (8,9,10,11) - really hard for muzukashii, not because is 1/3...but....aaaaaa dddk xD, make it at least dddd or kkkk, I don't think I ever seen dddk in muzukashii xD
00:36:105 (114,115,116,117,118,119,120,121) ,
00:38:864 (127,128,129,130,131,132,133,134) ,
00:41:220 (138,139,140,141,142,143,144) and 00:43:002 (146) - I don't know why this is 1/3 while you did 1/4 on your other mapset, mostly inner oni you didn't have a choice but to map this part more then the muzukashii. And buy hearing it, 1/3 is kinda off xD. Should be snap like that So like those not snap on white tick, move it on the next tick.
00:38:031 (123) - this should be here 00:38:117 and 00:43:548 (149) - should be 00:43:634
01:14:950 (266) to 01:25:065 (313) - same reason as the 1st thing point out in muzukashii xD (I'm suprise no one point that out lolol, it look weird but is on the sound your trying to map, try testing it, is easier to aim accuracy even though it white blue red white...white blue red white, because of the song sound :3)

All fixed.changed many Kiai time

[Inner Oni]
00:11:134 (44) - delete no sound and 00:11:220 (44,45,46) - ddk
00:20:358 (107) - k
00:19:324 (100) , 00:22:082 (118) , 00:30:358 (175) and 00:33:117 (192) - K so is less repetitif and doesn't have the same pitch like example 00:27:600 (156)
00:48:007 - no note? is the same as 00:46:910 (308,309,310,311), is not really as close as this new timing 00:48:373 (311) , and not having a note there feel like losing rhythm xD
00:56:015 (337) and 00:58:928 (349) - k
01:07:048 (397) - d
01:10:295 (414) and 01:13:053 (429) - delete like you add no note here 01:07:503
01:20:036 (484) - move to 01:19:950 ?
01:20:726 (489) - move to 01:20:639

Almost fixed

Woah this look amazing
good job \o/

Shiki_nyan wrote:

Here comes a mod from quest +w+

kantan

High quality kantan diff..I think it's a good map!

futsuu

01:12:881 (169) - move to 01:12:708 - keep
add a note at 01:12:708 (169) - keep
High quality too! good map!

muzukashii

I can't find any note need to be fixed..good map.. Muzukashii diff should be make like that.

Sala-fan'Oni

00:07:169 - add a d plz
00:53:149 (22) - I think it should be a D
good map too.

Inner oni

I think you are ready to rank.

Good maps.