1. 00:06:591 (2) - This one is actually a cymbal,, i'd replace the whistle with finish but with a bit reduced volume o.o
2. 00:24:381 (1) - Stack this on 00:22:812 (6) - for better flow maybe ? current transition seems didn't really comfortable to play imo i think its fine
3. 00:28:567 (1) - Change additions to normal instead ? Soft-finish didn't fit enough to emphasize the one that played on the bgm.
   From 00:28:567 - until 00:49:323 - personally i feel the clap is a bit too loud considering that the bgm just provided a drum that has low volume.. i'd reduce all the greenline on this section into 50% instead for softer gameplay, just imo tho
4. 00:38:335 (1) - Feels a bit spammed, how about removing the NC here since it's looks like on the same pattern with 00:37:637 (1) - ? no thanks, will keep
5. 00:45:835 (3) - The whistle here were more appropriate if you replace it to (2) instead imo.
6. 00:49:498 (1,3,4) - Add some whistles here maybe ? like on the start of the sliders to emphasize the violin
7. 00:59:788 (2) - Rotate 5~10 degree would create better flow here, try it :3
8. 01:02:230 (2,3) - A bit nazi.. but you could improve this blanket to create neater circular flow. nah, it's fine
9. 01:40:254 - This stop plays awkwardly.. i'd add note here to emphasize the piano instead,
10. 02:10:254 (1) - Separate this into 1/2 slider with note maybe so you wouldn't skip the piano on the downbeat ? following vocal
11. 02:29:265 (1,1) - Same as before
12. 03:23:509 (4) - Shouldn't this be placed on 390,39 or similiar ? orz that's not the flow i'm going for but adjusted a bit
13. 03:27:259 (1) - Whistle for spinner ? no thanks
14. 04:26:126 (2,3,4,5) - Are you sure this is 1/4 ? it's more like 1/6 or similiar imo.. be sure to recheck this not hearing a clear rhythm here, i think it's fine
15. 04:36:940 (1) - Finish maybe no thanks

1. Removed the unused osb file in folder. (I can’t find the place where you use soft-clap2 and softslide2, check it by yourself) clap2 and slide2 are used at 03:49:498 -

1. 00:31:881 (3) –I feel uncomfortable when playing this, maybe it’s caused by the “sudden shift” between soundtracks. seems you don’t follow the vocals at 00:29:788 (4,1) –00:32:579 (5,1,2,3,4) – using white tick sliders all the way, so that vocal slider feels bad( Also I personally don’t like tickhitsound cuz it brings a bad feeling when playing) 00:43:044 (3) -00:45:835 (3) -same i don't find them too bad personally, just a style choice
2. 00:44:963 (5,6) –Ctrl+G on them? Seems a jump fits here would like to keep for the flow style i use in the map
3. 00:48:102 (1,2) –They are too close somehow, how about moveing 00:48:451 (2) –to (425,178)? i think it's fine
4. 00:51:416 (2,3,4) –try this? http://puu.sh/c6CYg/e16b9e8692.jpg, it fits vocal better imo will consider, but for now i like the current flow
5. 01:05:893 (4,5,1) – this angle is not that good to hit imo, try moving 01:06:067 (5) –to(201,192) again just the style choice, i think it plays fine
6. 01:10:777 -01:11:474 –need a clap to follow the main drums in music.
7. 02:07:288 (4) –move to (113,324) for better looking? They are too close(I don’t mean the ds, I mean the distance of objects.), try to make it more tidy.
8. 02:21:591 (1,2) –just a suggestion: move (1) to(121,215), move (2) to (50,333) flow will be better. http://puu.sh/c6DkE/877afba0fb.jpg
9. 02:23:509 (3,4,1) –uncomfortable too, maybe one reason is the “vocal-slider” like the first stuff, and 02:23:509 (3,4) –the spacing is too large. You follow vocal but use large spacing at drums, it’s not a good way imo. Try moving 02:24:033 (4) - to(151,188)?
10. 03:27:259 (1) –whistle on the spinner? no thanks
11. 04:03:800 (1) –I highly recommend you follow piano here, making it more consistent with04:05:370 (3) - 04:06:765 (3) –and others. Sudden shift between soundtrack is not recommended. Like http://puu.sh/c6DMk/15f5109256.jpg it's done this way to emphasize the map being slow here
12. 05:03:451 (1) –bend it in the other direction? Flow will be better. Like http://puu.sh/c6DRr/7635021335.jpg

19:32 Tari: 02:04:847 (1) - needs to be changed to circles
19:32 Tari: ....
19:33 Tari: actually nvm
19:33 Tari: u can keep sliders
19:33 Tari: they work fine with both
19:33 captin1: yea
19:34 Tari: woooow
19:34 Tari: your actually really consistent in this map
19:35 captin1: yeah i was a stickler for that stuff
19:35 Tari: 02:19:498 (3,4,5) - needs to be filled up imo...
19:35 Tari: why did you leave that part empty?
19:35 captin1: what do you mean?
19:36 Tari: 03:04:847 (1) - needs to be changed to purple combo color
19:36 Tari: I mean
19:36 Tari: you might as well add notes
19:36 Tari: inbetween 3 4 and 5
19:36 Tari: to fill up the gaps
19:36 Tari: people will mindlessly spam click that part
19:36 Tari: cause of that fifth slider there.
19:36 Tari: and because of the stack.
19:37 captin1: i'm not feelin 1/8 stream at 172 lol
19:37 Tari: o.O
19:37 Tari: 03:04:847 (1) - also this is intentoonal?
19:37 Tari: has totally different combo color start
19:37 Tari: than the first kiai
19:37 Tari: failed color hax?
19:37 Tari: o.O
19:37 captin1: wasn't doing color hax
19:38 captin1: probably got switched two later by 02:25:602 -
19:38 Tari: oh idk
19:38 Tari: its just different 
19:38 Tari: cause right after that blue slowdown slider
19:38 Tari: I see a purple note
19:38 captin1: there's two different shades of blue
19:39 Tari: well
19:39 Tari: jst remove new combo at 01:34:847 (3) - 
19:39 Tari: it will fix all the combo colors after
19:39 captin1: not quite lol, it's two off
19:40 Tari: ahhh
19:40 Tari: nvm
19:40 Tari: you don't have to change that
19:40 Tari: just strange to me
19:41 captin1: yeah i get what you mean, just not that big of a deal since i wasn't stressing perfect combo coloring lol
19:41 captin1: if i was, the first kiai would start on pink anyways
19:41 Tari: 03:48:451 (5) - this is confusing
19:41 Tari: o.O
19:42 Tari: I thought this was 1/4 jump
19:42 Tari: just the way you designed it
19:42 captin1: lol eh, ar9 is easy to read so don't think it needs any changing, don't think any testplayers messed that up
19:44 Tari: 04:26:126 (2) - if your going to do sv changes
19:44 Tari: that increase for each slider
19:44 Tari: you need to add a new combo
19:44 captin1: okie
19:45 captin1: also i think i'm gonna adjust the svs a little bit to make the jumps between each slider equal
19:45 captin1: so i guess just that one down to .9 lol
19:46 Tari: sure
19:47 Tari: map looks fine
19:47 Tari: besides that
19:47 captin1: \o\
19:48 Tari: 03:08:684 (4) - maybe this needs to get ctrl+h
19:48 Tari: cause the way you designed sliders at
19:48 Tari: 01:16:707 (3,4) - 
19:48 Tari: will match better with it.
19:48 Tari: but
19:48 Tari: thats too consistent
19:48 Tari: and I don't want to go into detail
19:48 captin1: ctrl+h and j i think
19:49 Tari: with all those little things
19:49 captin1: nah i like that
19:50 captin1: movin 1 after tho to make it a bit less jarring of a transition
19:51 captin1: anything else?
19:51 Tari: 01:28:567 (1,2,3) - http://puu.sh/ce2oh.jpg thx
19:52 captin1: messes up distance to 4 :V
19:52 Tari: ...
19:52 Tari: Lolz
19:52 captin1: lel
19:52 Tari: surely DS does not matter here.
19:52 Tari: but your choice
19:53 Tari: when I look at this map
19:53 Tari: I just look at the overall movement of notes
19:53 Tari: 4 needs to be emphasized more anyway
19:54 captin1: i kinda like the pattern there anyways, like boxish