TK from Ling Tosite Sigure - Unravel (TV Edit)

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Topic Starter
Floofle
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Saturday, January 31, 2015 at 9:56:41 AM

Artist: TK from Ling Tosite Sigure
Title: Unravel (TV Edit)
Source: 東京喰種-トーキョーグール-
Tags: tokyo ghoul opening anime
BPM: 135
Filesize: 22159kb
Play Time: 01:19
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (1.56 stars, 71 notes)
  2. Hard (3.14 stars, 189 notes)
  3. Hard+ (3.48 stars, 214 notes)
  4. KAT's Insane (3.87 stars, 244 notes)
  5. Normal (1.98 stars, 93 notes)
  6. RocketBlade's Demanding (3.15 stars, 197 notes)


Download: TK from Ling Tosite Sigure - Unravel (TV Edit)
Download: TK from Ling Tosite Sigure - Unravel (TV Edit) (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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As requested by Frostbite914

The preferred skin is Planckian - Fluorescence by Uroki. I highly recommend it, but
make sure the skin hitsounds are disabled in options.

Planckian - Fluorescence:
https://osu.ppy.sh/forum/t/168372



Thank you Hapiikat for your amazing insane diff!! :D
And thank you too RocketBlade for your awesome diff as well! As well as for putting up with my .osu coding noobiness xD

Progress:
[Easy] 100% Modding
[Normal] 100% Modding
[Hard] 100% Modding
[Hard+] 100% Modding
[RocketBlade's Demanding] 100% - By RocketBlade
[KAT's Insane] 100% - By Hapiikat

Thanks to all the modders!
IA42
[Hard]
- Reduce Beat snap divisor to 1/4
- Make AR to 8
- Disable widescreen support
Edit: change source from Tokyo Ghoul to 東京喰種-トーキョーグール-
Topic Starter
Floofle
Made the suggested changes, thanks IA42!
-Lgamer-
Hello

Normal diff:

Maybe circle size 3 to make it a bit easier, as well as a little lower AR.

00:08:319 (1,2,3) - I'd recommend using some space between beats. And do the same everywhere. A bit of space is needed :)
Like this:


00:27:375 (4) - This quick reverse slider are a bit unneeded in normal/easy. You should go check how this looks like in taiko. Its a bit too hard for normal and easy. so I'd recommend changing that.

00:54:208 (3) - Same here

00:55:431 (1,1) - Also these slower ones

01:05:208 (1,1) - Same here

01:19:431 (1,1) - And the last part here.

Now for hard:

-Also spacing like in the previous is needed.
-Beat snap divisor 1/4

00:27:375 (6) - Now idk if its still a good idea to use these. Maybe use triples instead of that



Thats all i can think of right now. :)
Topic Starter
Floofle
Thanks for the in-depth feedback -Lgamer-! It was reaally helpful; I'll get to the changes tonight. :)
Aerous
No kd please

Just a quick suggestion you should work on your spacing on hard
Fauxfyre
There is no message for skin preference on Insane.

The source field in the Osu files are different in Easy/Normal and Hard/Insane (one is English, the other Japanese).

AIMod says the video is too large for 16:9 and that kiai time is too short.

The General Rules say to not use timing sections to adjust sliders speeds so often, and it would make it easier just to make longer sliders rather than just slowing them down and speeding them up constantly.

The timing sections vary between difficulties, but are well timed anyways. I'm guessing these are just to change the speeds of the sliders.

Hitclap and hitnormal are two different file formats (not sure if this causes issues, but it's something I noticed) One is mp3 and the other is wav.

The rules say not to alter the title with things like having TV Edit in title, so you might want to change that.

I was able to do easy, but the distances between hits are too large for their speed on normal and higher, and it's too hard to move between them (I noticed it especially after the first break on Normal Difficulty).

This is my first mod btw, I hope I did this right :x
Topic Starter
Floofle

Shotoku64 wrote:

There is no message for skin preference on Insane.

The source field in the Osu files are different in Easy/Normal and Hard/Insane (one is English, the other Japanese).

Shotoku64 wrote:

The rules say not to alter the title with things like having TV Edit in title, so you might want to change that.

I was able to do easy, but the distances between hits are too large for their speed on normal and higher, and it's too hard to move between them (I noticed it especially after the first break on Normal Difficulty).
Got those fixed, thanks!

Shotoku64 wrote:

AIMod says the video is too large for 16:9 and that kiai time is too short.

The General Rules say to not use timing sections to adjust sliders speeds so often, and it would make it easier just to make longer sliders rather than just slowing them down and speeding them up constantly.

The timing sections vary between difficulties, but are well timed anyways. I'm guessing these are just to change the speeds of the sliders.

Hitclap and hitnormal are two different file formats (not sure if this causes issues, but it's something I noticed) One is mp3 and the other is wav.
Ah, yes. Widescreen support isn't fully functional yet, so I can't do much about the video right now. In regards to the kiai sections, the sections of the song which I need them in aren't 15 sections long unfortunately, so yes, AIMod won't like that xD

As for the sliders, I did actually use longer sliders at first. But to have them at such lengths kept pushing them out of the screen borders, so I just had to slow them down to maintain their length. Well, that, and it just didn't look too pretty aesthetically lol xD Oh and a great portion of the timing sections are used to change note volumes, which is also why they vary between difficulties (easy & normal don't have all the accented notes). And yeah I converted hitclap into an mp3 so I could raise its volume, but then didn't convert it back to prevent too much data loss. I might have to fix that lol.

Shotoku64 wrote:

This is my first mod btw, I hope I did this right
Yup you were really helpful, thanks! :) Just a tip for future mods, you can copy and paste actual notes onto the forum to be more specific with the feedback.

"When you find a hit circle or a slider that needs attention, select it. Now, go to the "Edit" tab and select "Copy" at the top (or Ctrl+C), and then to your post you started up, and paste (Ctrl+V) what you just copied there. Then, follow up with either what you think is wrong (Ex. "I would change this spacing because the music does not suggest a jump here), or simply that it doesn't seem right and you can't put your finger on it." https://osu.ppy.sh/wiki/Modding#Basic_modding_method

It'll look something like this:

00:42:097 (1) - Floofle this looks like crap

Anyways, thanks a bunch! :)
ProgressiveStar
What an exciting map! here just some suggestions,thank you!

Easy and Normal diff is great

Hard
00:09:875 (5) - this one,I think use a circle at 00:09:875 (5) - is better,and move your slider to 00:10:097 (6) -
then the circle and the slider head use finish sound
00:13:208 (5) - this one,add two circle at 00:13:208 (5) - and 00:13:431 (6) - and move your slider to 00:13:653 (7) -
then add the finish sound to circle 6 and slider head
00:24:764 (5) - delete this and add two circle on 00:24:653 - and 00:24:986 - then thinking about their distance,just a suggestion
add a circle here : 00:47:431 (4) -
add this : 01:07:653 (2) -
add this : 01:08:542 (4) -
And AR is too low...QAQ

Hard+
00:09:875 (5) - this one,I think use a circle at 00:09:875 (5) - is better,and move your slider to 00:10:097 (6) -
then the circle and the slider head use finish sound (OK,It's same to hard...)
00:13:208 (5) - this one,add two circle at 00:13:208 (5) - and 00:13:431 (6) - and move your slider to 00:13:653 (7) -
then add the finish sound to circle 6 and slider head (It's same to hard...)
00:16:764 - add a circle here,can be placed on 00:16:986 (6) - slider head
00:24:764 (5) - delete this and add two circle on 00:24:653 - and 00:24:986 - then thinking about their distance,just a suggestion
01:07:208 (5,6,7) - use two slider will be better? (same...)
And I think Hard+diff's AR is too low ,at least 7 or 8
from 00:55:875 (3) - to the end, really excited me,thank you!

KAT's Insane
00:39:208 (3,4) - why this two are overlaped?
from 00:41:875 (1) - to 00:48:986 (7) - the clap sound is strange
from 01:02:319 (5) - to 01:05:875 (8) - clap is also strange
01:13:653 (3) - add a circle here
Topic Starter
Floofle

ProgressiveStar wrote:

What an exciting map! here just some suggestions,thank you!
Easy and Normal diff is great

Hard
00:09:875 (5) - this one,I think use a circle at 00:09:875 (5) - is better,and move your slider to 00:10:097 (6) -
then the circle and the slider head use finish sound
00:13:208 (5) - this one,add two circle at 00:13:208 (5) - and 00:13:431 (6) - and move your slider to 00:13:653 (7) -
then add the finish sound to circle 6 and slider head
00:24:764 (5) - delete this and add two circle on 00:24:653 - and 00:24:986 - then thinking about their distance,just a suggestion
add a circle here : 00:47:431 (4) -
add this : 01:07:653 (2) -
add this : 01:08:542 (4) -
And AR is too low...QAQ

Hard+
00:09:875 (5) - this one,I think use a circle at 00:09:875 (5) - is better,and move your slider to 00:10:097 (6) -
then the circle and the slider head use finish sound (OK,It's same to hard...)
00:13:208 (5) - this one,add two circle at 00:13:208 (5) - and 00:13:431 (6) - and move your slider to 00:13:653 (7) -
then add the finish sound to circle 6 and slider head (It's same to hard...)
00:16:764 - add a circle here,can be placed on 00:16:986 (6) - slider head
00:24:764 (5) - delete this and add two circle on 00:24:653 - and 00:24:986 - then thinking about their distance,just a suggestion
01:07:208 (5,6,7) - use two slider will be better? (same...)
And I think Hard+diff's AR is too low ,at least 7 or 8
from 00:55:875 (3) - to the end, really excited me,thank you!

KAT's Insane
00:39:208 (3,4) - why this two are overlaped?
from 00:41:875 (1) - to 00:48:986 (7) - the clap sound is strange
from 01:02:319 (5) - to 01:05:875 (8) - clap is also strange
01:13:653 (3) - add a circle here

Thanks for the mod! I implemented most of your suggestions actually, it was helpful :)
[ Shamwow ]
since you modded my map, I'll (attempt) modding yours!! this is my first mod so if its not a great mod, that's why;;

Normal

00:15:431 (6,7) - the placement for 7 seems odd to me, maybe move it farther away from 6?

00:55:431 (1,2,3) - these look kind of weird to me, how they're all bunched up together in the corner; lining them up might look better

sorry this such a short mod, i couldn't really pinpoint anything else that stood out to me !! I really like this map overall, though! i hope my first mod was helpful enough, lol
Topic Starter
Floofle

-Dave Strider- wrote:

since you modded my map, I'll (attempt) modding yours!! this is my first mod so if its not a great mod, that's why;;

Normal

00:15:431 (6,7) - the placement for 7 seems odd to me, maybe move it farther away from 6? Delicious, changed.

00:55:431 (1,2,3) - these look kind of weird to me, how they're all bunched up together in the corner; lining them up might look better I intended it to mirror 00:53:653 (2,3,4), so it'll remain unchanged for now.

sorry this such a short mod, i couldn't really pinpoint anything else that stood out to me !! I really like this map overall, though! i hope my first mod was helpful enough, lol

I thank thee for your valiant efforts to mod my map anyways! While it may have been brief, your mod did actually account for a few changes in my map, so kudos to you, sir. Your actions go not unappreciated here :D
RocketBlade
Hey there, I'm a friend of Kat's. This beatmap looks interesting to me. So i'll like to make an Insane diff for you, do you need one?
Topic Starter
Floofle

RocketBlade wrote:

Hey there, I'm a friend of Kat's. This beatmap looks interesting to me. So i'll like to make an Insane diff for you, do you need one?
Oh, sorry I didn't see this sooner. Sure thing! If it's not any trouble to you, of course :)
RocketBlade
osu file format v13

[General]
AudioFilename: TK - Unravel.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 55115
Countdown: 1
SampleSet: Normal
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 1
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 0.7
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1

[Metadata]
Title:Unravel
TitleUnicode:Unravel
Artist:TK from Ling Tosite Sigure
ArtistUnicode:TK from Ling Tosite Sigure
Creator:RocketBlade
Version:Insane Test
Source:Floofle
Tags:
BeatmapID:0
BeatmapSetID:-1

[Difficulty]
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CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:7
ApproachRate:9
SliderMultiplier:1.4
SliderTickRate:1

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//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
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344,224,50115,6,0,P|328:184|304:160,1,70,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
288,160,50449,2,0,P|248:144|200:96,1,105,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
88,104,51004,5,0,0:0:0:0:
72,200,51226,1,8,0:0:0:0:
72,200,51337,2,0,P|88:240|136:280,1,105,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
232,304,51893,5,0,0:0:0:0:
320,256,52115,1,8,0:0:0:0:
320,256,52226,2,0,P|352:208|344:152,1,105,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,72,52782,5,4,0:0:0:0:
192,152,53004,2,0,L|160:168,1,35,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
200,256,53337,2,0,L|240:240,1,35,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,152,53671,5,0,0:0:0:0:
328,148,53782,1,0,0:0:0:0:
352,152,53893,1,0,0:0:0:0:
372,164,54004,1,0,0:0:0:0:
384,180,54115,1,8,0:0:0:0:
388,200,54226,1,0,0:0:0:0:
380,220,54337,1,0,0:0:0:0:
368,232,54449,1,0,0:0:0:0:
352,240,54560,1,4,0:0:0:0:
176,176,55004,6,0,P|200:132|224:104,1,70,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
300,76,55449,2,0,P|356:72|416:52,2,105,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
252,164,56337,6,0,P|176:160|116:128,2,125.999996154785,4|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
248,264,57226,2,0,P|320:260|380:240,2,125.999996154785,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
152,228,58115,6,0,P|128:184|124:108,1,125.999996154785
132,88,58560,1,8,0:0:0:0:
244,76,58782,1,0,0:0:0:0:
328,144,59004,1,0,0:0:0:0:
328,160,59115,1,0,0:0:0:0:
328,172,59226,1,0,0:0:0:0:
328,188,59337,1,0,0:0:0:0:
328,204,59449,2,0,B|328:248|328:248|296:272,1,83.9999974365235,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
196,204,59893,6,0,P|184:144|196:80,2,125.999996154785,4|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
260,276,60782,2,0,P|212:312|148:332,2,125.999996154785,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
288,188,61671,6,0,P|336:136|392:112,1,125.999996154785
408,112,62115,1,8,0:0:0:0:
400,208,62337,1,0,0:0:0:0:
352,292,62560,1,0,0:0:0:0:
260,320,62782,1,0,0:0:0:0:
260,320,62893,1,0,0:0:0:0:
260,320,63004,2,0,P|208:328|172:328,1,83.9999974365235,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
112,244,63449,6,0,P|92:176|104:96,2,125.999996154785,4|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
128,260,64337,1,0,0:0:0:0:
200,176,64560,2,0,L|184:136,2,41.9999987182618,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
308,200,65004,1,0,0:0:0:0:
416,176,65226,6,0,P|416:240|372:284,1,125.999996154785,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
296,332,65671,2,0,P|272:280|272:240,2,83.9999974365235,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
388,328,66337,1,0,0:0:0:0:
416,240,66560,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,66782,12,0,68337,0:0:0:0:
256,192,68560,5,0,0:0:0:0:
340,120,68782,2,0,P|312:84|280:60,2,83.9999974365235,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
340,224,69449,1,0,0:0:0:0:
284,308,69671,2,0,B|224:308|224:308|164:276,1,125.999996154785
152,264,70115,1,8,0:0:0:0:
120,172,70337,1,0,0:0:0:0:
228,112,70560,5,4,0:0:0:0:
320,128,70782,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,128,70893,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,128,71004,2,0,P|360:140|400:176,1,83.9999974365235,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
452,248,71449,1,0,0:0:0:0:
360,280,71671,1,0,0:0:0:0:
360,280,71782,1,0,0:0:0:0:
360,280,71893,2,0,P|304:264|272:240,1,83.9999974365235,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
160,244,72337,6,0,P|132:212|132:132,1,125.999996154785
144,116,72782,1,8,0:0:0:0:
228,72,73004,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,112,73226,1,0,0:0:0:0:
272,196,73449,1,0,0:0:0:0:
272,196,73560,1,0,0:0:0:0:
272,196,73671,2,0,L|324:268,1,83.9999974365235,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
416,200,74115,5,4,0:0:0:0:
400,96,74337,1,0,0:0:0:0:
400,96,74449,1,0,0:0:0:0:
400,96,74560,1,8,0:0:0:0:
292,128,74782,2,0,P|312:164|316:208,2,83.9999974365235,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
292,128,75337,1,0,0:0:0:0:
292,128,75449,1,8,0:0:0:0:
188,100,75671,1,0,0:0:0:0:
72,124,75893,6,0,P|68:176|100:244,1,125.999996154785
164,192,76337,2,0,P|188:228|228:248,1,83.9999974365235,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
328,244,76782,1,0,0:0:0:0:
340,228,76893,1,0,0:0:0:0:
352,212,77004,1,0,0:0:0:0:
352,192,77115,1,0,0:0:0:0:
352,172,77226,2,0,B|352:132|352:132|376:96,1,83.9999974365235,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
280,52,77671,6,0,P|236:68|172:120,1,125.999996154785,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
216,192,78115,2,0,P|176:220|128:236,2,83.9999974365235,8|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
296,140,78782,1,0,0:0:0:0:
352,220,79004,1,8,0:0:0:0:
268,272,79226,2,0,L|220:288,1,41.9999987182618
208,288,79449,6,0,P|156:264|120:200,1,125.999996154785,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
120,188,79893,1,8,0:0:0:0:
160,96,80115,2,0,P|120:80|88:76,2,70,2|2|6,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
Monstrata
[KAT's Insane]

00:13:893 (4,5) - move to 00:14:004 - if you are following the two feint hits.
00:17:004 (5,6) - consider moving circle to 00:16:782 - and slider to 00:17:004 -
00:21:449 (8,1) - make 00:21:449 (8) - into a slider and play it in with the next slider? seems like a wasted opportunity here
00:31:782 (1,2) - start with a slider at 00:31:893 (2) - and then the circle at 00:32:004 -
00:46:337 (3) - polish up this slider, its a bit awkward and unsymmetrical
00:49:226 (1,2) - make into a slider?
00:50:115 (1,2) - ^
01:19:449 (1) - polish up this slider too
01:21:226 - make the slider longer? or add a spinner to the end

[Hard+]

00:24:672 (5,7) - these two notes are on blue ticks, put them on white ticks
00:43:672 (4,1) - polish up this blanket curve
01:19:450 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - by this point (01:19:449 - ) the drums have already diminished, putting the streams at the end seem a bit out of place. consider putting them earlier in the song and continue the combo 01:17:672 (1,1,1,1) - in place of the streams

[Hard]
00:09:671 (5,6) - fix blanket
00:56:226 (6,1) - spacing from the stream to the slider isnt consistent with the rest of the stream
01:06:782 (8,1) - minor, but blanket could use a quick readjust, its slightly off
01:19:449 (1,2,3) - same as Hard+ the drumbeats have diminished by this point. maybe put the triplets in an earlier section
01:20:337 (1,2,3) - ^

[RocketBlade's Insane]

00:26:115 (1,2) - Make this one repeating slider? or start the stream earlier? There is no follow up after the first slider so the second repeat slider feels awkward.
01:05:004 (4,1) - fix blanket
01:17:671 (1) - shorten slider so it doesnt end on blue-tick
01:18:115 (2) - consider remapping to circles instead of repeat slider, the drums are strong during this section and it would play well into the following notes: (01:18:782 (3,4) -)

Insane shouldn't be easier than Hard

[Normal]

00:19:004 (1,2) - Make them full sliders, the repeat doesn't follow anything
00:35:004 (1,2,3) - if you pause at 00:35:449 - , the blanket sliders arent even
00:37:449 (2,3) - fix blanket
00:38:560 (1,2) - ^

[Easy]

00:08:115 - minor, consider starting with a slider here instead of a circle,
00:15:004 (2) - new combo
00:35:004 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - minor, but the overlaps might be difficult for a beginner to read, maybe consider another pattern
01:19:449 (1) - slider is a bit awkward, adjust it a bit, the points are not symmetrical
01:21:226 - spinner?



It seems a bit odd to have CS 4.5 on the Hard/Hard+ diff's and 4 on the Insanes, but that's nothing major. GL GETTING IT RANKED!!! This song is really addictive.
Topic Starter
Floofle

monstrata wrote:

[KAT's Insane]

00:13:893 (4,5) - move to 00:14:004 - if you are following the two feint hits.
00:17:004 (5,6) - consider moving circle to 00:16:782 - and slider to 00:17:004 -
00:21:449 (8,1) - make 00:21:449 (8) - into a slider and play it in with the next slider? seems like a wasted opportunity here
00:31:782 (1,2) - start with a slider at 00:31:893 (2) - and then the circle at 00:32:004 -
00:46:337 (3) - polish up this slider, its a bit awkward and unsymmetrical
00:49:226 (1,2) - make into a slider?
00:50:115 (1,2) - ^
01:19:449 (1) - polish up this slider too
01:21:226 - make the slider longer? or add a spinner to the end

[Hard+]

00:24:672 (5,7) - these two notes are on blue ticks, put them on white ticks
00:43:672 (4,1) - polish up this blanket curve
01:19:450 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - by this point (01:19:449 - ) the drums have already diminished, putting the streams at the end seem a bit out of place. consider putting them earlier in the song and continue the combo 01:17:672 (1,1,1,1) - in place of the streams

[Hard]
00:09:671 (5,6) - fix blanket
00:56:226 (6,1) - spacing from the stream to the slider isnt consistent with the rest of the stream
01:06:782 (8,1) - minor, but blanket could use a quick readjust, its slightly off
01:19:449 (1,2,3) - same as Hard+ the drumbeats have diminished by this point. maybe put the triplets in an earlier section
01:20:337 (1,2,3) - ^

[RocketBlade's Insane]

00:26:115 (1,2) - Make this one repeating slider? or start the stream earlier? There is no follow up after the first slider so the second repeat slider feels awkward.
01:05:004 (4,1) - fix blanket
01:17:671 (1) - shorten slider so it doesnt end on blue-tick
01:18:115 (2) - consider remapping to circles instead of repeat slider, the drums are strong during this section and it would play well into the following notes: (01:18:782 (3,4) -)

Insane shouldn't be easier than Hard

[Normal]

00:19:004 (1,2) - Make them full sliders, the repeat doesn't follow anything
00:35:004 (1,2,3) - if you pause at 00:35:449 - , the blanket sliders arent even
00:37:449 (2,3) - fix blanket
00:38:560 (1,2) - ^

[Easy]

00:08:115 - minor, consider starting with a slider here instead of a circle,
00:15:004 (2) - new combo
00:35:004 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - minor, but the overlaps might be difficult for a beginner to read, maybe consider another pattern
01:19:449 (1) - slider is a bit awkward, adjust it a bit, the points are not symmetrical
01:21:226 - spinner?



It seems a bit odd to have CS 4.5 on the Hard/Hard+ diff's and 4 on the Insanes, but that's nothing major. GL GETTING IT RANKED!!! This song is really addictive.

I thank thee sincerely. Especially since I kinda finished my mod late :?
Whale, it was nice working with ya! :)
zerfuth
Heyoo o/, random short mod

General

You could cut the part at the very very end, it's unecessary. (like the weird sound after the silence at the end of the song)

[Normal]

00:16:337 (7) - Just a question of looks but you could change the placement of this slider because it's like a bit stuck with the two others

00:43:449 (3) - This is too close to the previous circle, doesn't follow the beat pattern. Would move the rest of the white combo a bit to the right

00:55:449 (1,2,3) - It's a bit too low, isn't?
Topic Starter
Floofle

zerfuth wrote:

Heyoo o/, random short mod

General

You could cut the part at the very very end, it's unecessary. (like the weird sound after the silence at the end of the song)
Fixed!

[Normal]

00:16:337 (7) - Just a question of looks but you could change the placement of this slider because it's like a bit stuck with the two others
Fixed!

00:43:449 (3) - This is too close to the previous circle, doesn't follow the beat pattern. Would move the rest of the white combo a bit to the right
Fixed!

00:55:449 (1,2,3) - It's a bit too low, isn't?
Fixed!
Thanks for your mod!
'Twas short, but helpful :)
kristi71111
placeholder :3 will prob mod today or tommorow idk I'l see if I forget drop me a forum pm or poke me ingame :3
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