23:15 EscapeReality: 00:07:158 (6) - a circle seems too strong here, since it's the end of a note, would consider removing it
23:16 EscapeReality: 00:08:672 (2) - i would start the spinner here
23:16 EscapeReality: the extra note seems kinda too separative
23:17 EscapeReality: 00:14:097 (4) - here i would put something more exciting, the section seems most intense here
23:17 EscapeReality: a long slider feel like it's glossing over it
23:17 EscapeReality: 00:10:619 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - would use a faster sv here compared to before since there's the bass coming in
23:17 EscapeReality: 00:16:188 (1,2) - and even more here
23:20 EscapeReality: 00:20:846 (8) - would put nc here instead
23:20 EscapeReality: since you use the long reverse slider on her "stable" notes i would just use new combo to highlight that
23:21 EscapeReality: 00:28:526 (7) - same here
23:22 EscapeReality: 00:30:566 (1,2,1,2,3) - feels too slow-paced here
23:25 EscapeReality: 00:39:686 (3) - nc here?
23:25 EscapeReality: 00:37:286 (4) - and here?
23:27 EscapeReality: 00:47:366 (4) - and here
23:28 EscapeReality: 00:49:766 (2) - nc here instead?
23:32 EscapeReality: 01:16:526 (6) - nc here instead
23:34 EscapeReality: 01:28:286 (2) - this slider feels awkward
23:40 EscapeReality: maybe try a rhythm like this
23:40 EscapeReality: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2129199
23:41 EscapeReality: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2129204
23:41 EscapeReality: or this
23:42 EscapeReality: 01:32:246 (6) - you can try a nc here and remove the one after
23:42 EscapeReality: and nc here
23:44 EscapeReality: 01:33:806 (3) -
23:44 EscapeReality: 801:35:366 (8,1,2) - jump's getting wide here for no apparent reason
23:45 EscapeReality: 01:36:806 (7,8,9,1) - and here, these are really hard to double tap
23:45 EscapeReality: which was completely doable until here
23:46 EscapeReality: 01:45:566 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - same here these jumps are a bit too crazy
23:48 EscapeReality: 01:48:326 (6) - why sudden break after this
23:48 EscapeReality: since it's the kiai i think you should keep it continuous no matter what
23:49 EscapeReality: and there were parts before where the vocals suggested a break but you mapped it anyway so i would do it to keep it consistent
23:52 EscapeReality: 02:01:960 (3) - this note isn't snapped
23:53 EscapeReality: 02:13:617 (1) - extend this slider to cover up the empty space afterwards
23:53 EscapeReality: it feels prematurely cut short and the break is way too long after
23:53 EscapeReality: 02:13:617 (1) - why no note here
23:55 EscapeReality: 02:35:254 (1) - this note feels a bit too early
23:55 EscapeReality: i would check the tps here
23:56 EscapeReality: 02:35:951 (1) - this one sounds especially early if listened at 25%
23:56 EscapeReality: well i guess if you're mapping the heavy part of the note
23:56 EscapeReality: at 100% it plays ok imo
00:05 EscapeReality: 02:49:662 (1,2) - i would replace these with fast reverse sliders
00:09 EscapeReality: were there any changes from this to the other besides the slow part
00:10 EscapeReality: 02:13:617 (1) - would just move the spinner here
00:10 EscapeReality: the slider's also unsnapped
00:10 Axarious: the sliders are snapped in 1/3 and 1/6 timing
00:11 EscapeReality: i don't feel that the whole section warrants swing timing
00:11 EscapeReality: the end of that slider just feels kind of clashy with the music
00:12 Axarious: http://puu.sh/cah1w/c84911949d.png
00:14 EscapeReality: i understand that the section is in 1/3 timing, but right there it doesn't feel right
00:15 EscapeReality: anyways i would just move the spinner onto 02:13:617 (1) -
00:16 EscapeReality: 02:48:822 (3) - try a rhythm like this?
00:17 EscapeReality: 02:52:182 (1) - would replace this with two sliders, first on the white tick, second on the red
00:17 EscapeReality: or a slider and a circle
00:18 EscapeReality: 02:53:982 (6) - would take this out
00:21 EscapeReality: and reduce distances on the last kiai as well, i think the difficulty spikes too much
23:16 EscapeReality: 00:08:672 (2) - i would start the spinner here
23:16 EscapeReality: the extra note seems kinda too separative
23:17 EscapeReality: 00:14:097 (4) - here i would put something more exciting, the section seems most intense here
23:17 EscapeReality: a long slider feel like it's glossing over it
23:17 EscapeReality: 00:10:619 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - would use a faster sv here compared to before since there's the bass coming in
23:17 EscapeReality: 00:16:188 (1,2) - and even more here
23:20 EscapeReality: 00:20:846 (8) - would put nc here instead
23:20 EscapeReality: since you use the long reverse slider on her "stable" notes i would just use new combo to highlight that
23:21 EscapeReality: 00:28:526 (7) - same here
23:22 EscapeReality: 00:30:566 (1,2,1,2,3) - feels too slow-paced here
23:25 EscapeReality: 00:39:686 (3) - nc here?
23:25 EscapeReality: 00:37:286 (4) - and here?
23:27 EscapeReality: 00:47:366 (4) - and here
23:28 EscapeReality: 00:49:766 (2) - nc here instead?
23:32 EscapeReality: 01:16:526 (6) - nc here instead
23:34 EscapeReality: 01:28:286 (2) - this slider feels awkward
23:40 EscapeReality: maybe try a rhythm like this
23:40 EscapeReality: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2129199
23:41 EscapeReality: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2129204
23:41 EscapeReality: or this
23:42 EscapeReality: 01:32:246 (6) - you can try a nc here and remove the one after
23:42 EscapeReality: and nc here
23:44 EscapeReality: 01:33:806 (3) -
23:44 EscapeReality: 801:35:366 (8,1,2) - jump's getting wide here for no apparent reason
23:45 EscapeReality: 01:36:806 (7,8,9,1) - and here, these are really hard to double tap
23:45 EscapeReality: which was completely doable until here
23:46 EscapeReality: 01:45:566 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - same here these jumps are a bit too crazy
23:48 EscapeReality: 01:48:326 (6) - why sudden break after this
23:48 EscapeReality: since it's the kiai i think you should keep it continuous no matter what
23:49 EscapeReality: and there were parts before where the vocals suggested a break but you mapped it anyway so i would do it to keep it consistent
23:52 EscapeReality: 02:01:960 (3) - this note isn't snapped
23:53 EscapeReality: 02:13:617 (1) - extend this slider to cover up the empty space afterwards
23:53 EscapeReality: it feels prematurely cut short and the break is way too long after
23:53 EscapeReality: 02:13:617 (1) - why no note here
23:55 EscapeReality: 02:35:254 (1) - this note feels a bit too early
23:55 EscapeReality: i would check the tps here
23:56 EscapeReality: 02:35:951 (1) - this one sounds especially early if listened at 25%
23:56 EscapeReality: well i guess if you're mapping the heavy part of the note
23:56 EscapeReality: at 100% it plays ok imo
00:05 EscapeReality: 02:49:662 (1,2) - i would replace these with fast reverse sliders
00:09 EscapeReality: were there any changes from this to the other besides the slow part
00:10 EscapeReality: 02:13:617 (1) - would just move the spinner here
00:10 EscapeReality: the slider's also unsnapped
00:10 Axarious: the sliders are snapped in 1/3 and 1/6 timing
00:11 EscapeReality: i don't feel that the whole section warrants swing timing
00:11 EscapeReality: the end of that slider just feels kind of clashy with the music
00:12 Axarious: http://puu.sh/cah1w/c84911949d.png
00:14 EscapeReality: i understand that the section is in 1/3 timing, but right there it doesn't feel right
00:15 EscapeReality: anyways i would just move the spinner onto 02:13:617 (1) -
00:16 EscapeReality: 02:48:822 (3) - try a rhythm like this?
00:17 EscapeReality: 02:52:182 (1) - would replace this with two sliders, first on the white tick, second on the red
00:17 EscapeReality: or a slider and a circle
00:18 EscapeReality: 02:53:982 (6) - would take this out
00:21 EscapeReality: and reduce distances on the last kiai as well, i think the difficulty spikes too much