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HHHxMMxST - Oboro [OsuMania]

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Arzenvald
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 03 Desember 2014 at 9:09:13

Artist: HHHxMMxST
Title: Oboro
Tags: sakura luminance ryu* ryu☆ pop'n music 20 fantasia mayumi morinaga starving trancer dai jubeat saucer moimoi senya rhytmin DanceEvolution ARCADE plus FASCINATION ファッシネイション REFLEC BEAT colette -Spring- ミライダガッキ FutureTomTom Ver.2 Eternalie medicine melancholy touhou
BPM: 149
Filesize: 10177kb
Play Time: 03:24
Difficulties Available:
  1. Etlie's Normal - 4Key (1,93 stars, 698 notes)
  2. Hard - 4Key (3,1 stars, 1654 notes)
  3. Insanity - 4Key (4,29 stars, 2259 notes)
Download: HHHxMMxST - Oboro
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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set
4K Mapset :
// Featuring Guest Diff : Etlie's Normal by Eternalie // 10 mod
// Hard // 11 mods
// Insanity // 10 mods
lyrics
朧 「HHH×MM×ST」
Composer/Arr.: Ryu☆, Starving Trancer
Lyrics: Dai
Vocal: Mayumi Morinaga
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追いかけても 追いかけても するり指をぬける 水のよう
あなただけに あなただけに 見つめられて漂う 星の影
夢でもつかまえて

流れる雲に思う 行き先ないこの心
いつか見た 日の明日 青い通り雨

色づいた花びら揺らす ぬくもりも激しささえも
せつなさの裏側だけを 残していくだけの刹那

かなうのなら かなうのなら 駆け出してゆきたい 風の中
あなただけを あなただけを 見つめたなら羽ばたく 蝶のように
夢ならみせないで

星のない夜に密か 巡る季節を忘れて
いつかくる 日の朝を 隠す涙色

絡む指艶めく吐息 昇りつめ堕ちゆく心
ひと時のぬくもりさえも 忘れられずにまた孤独

追いかけたら 追いかけたら ふわり消えてしまう 月の影
わたしだけに わたしだけに 触れられたら煌く 星のように
嘘なら抱きしめて

届くのなら 届くのなら 明日さえ要らない 戻らない
離れてても 離れてても 心焦がす炎は あなただけ

追いかけても 追いかけても するり指をぬける 水のよう
わたしだけが わたしだけが 時を止めた闇から 手を伸ばす

かなうのなら かなうのなら 駆け出してゆきたい 風の中
あなただけに あなただけに こころ巡らすはるか 朧月

嘘でも抱きしめて
夢なら醒めないで

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Oikake te mo oikake te mo su ruri yubi o nukeru mizu no yō
anata dake ni anata dake ni mitsumerare te tadayou hoshi no kage
yume de mo tsukamae te

nagareru kumo ni omou yukisaki nai kono kokoro
itsuka mi ta hi no ashita aoi tōriame

irodui ta hanabira yurasu nukumori mo hageshi sa sae mo
setsuna sa no uragawa dake o nokoshi te iku dake no setsuna

kanau no nara kanau no nara kakedashi te yuki tai kaze no naka
anata dake o anata dake o mitsume ta nara habataku chō no yō ni
yume nara mise nai de

hoshi no nai yoru ni hisoka meguru kisetsu o wasure te
itsuka kuru hi no asa o kakusu namida shoku

karamu yubi tsuya meku toiki nobori tsume ochiyuku kokoro
hito ji no nukumori sae mo wasure rare zu ni mata kodoku

oikake tara oikake tara fuwari kie te shimau tsuki no kage
watashi dake ni watashi dake ni furerare tara kirameku hoshi no yō ni
uso nara dakishime te

todoku no nara todoku no nara ashita sae ira nai modora nai
hanarete te mo hanarete te mo kokoro kogasu honoo wa anata dake

oikake te mo oikake te mo su ruri yubi o nukeru mizu no yō
watashi dake ga watashi dake ga toki o tome ta yami kara te o nobasu

kanau no nara kanau no nara kakedashi te yuki tai kaze no naka
anata dake ni anata dake ni kokoro megurasu haruka oborozuki

uso de mo dakishime te
yume nara same nai de
Takane6
1st :D
<3 <3 <3 <3 <3
Hellgert
HI owo

[Insane]
00:36:886 and 00:36:953 - add note
00:37:289 , 00:37:356 , 00:37:423 - ^
00:38:732 - ^
01:21:987 , 01:22:054 , 01:22:390 , 01:22:457 , 01:22:524 - ^
02:58:866 - move to 02:58:967
02:59:168 - add LN to 02:59:269
02:59:569 - add note

[Hard]
01:41:148 - move to 2

[Etile's Normal]
00:00:058 - 00:19:906 - try not add long LN in this section plus a double,it will bit to surprise some newbie,put instead note
00:58:161 - move to 3
00:58:363 - add note
Topic Starter
Arzenvald

Xleonq wrote:

HI owo

[Insane]
00:36:886 and 00:36:953 - add note // oh nice catch, added.. on 00:36:920 (36920|1) -
00:37:289 , 00:37:356 , 00:37:423 - ^ // keep empty, not audible.. x_x
00:38:732 - ^ // done, additional notes added to keep consistency
01:21:987 // done // 01:22:054 , 01:22:390 , 01:22:457 , 01:22:524 - ^ // the rest keep empty, not audible.. x_x
02:58:866 - move to 02:58:967 // rearranged
02:59:168 - add LN to 02:59:269 // yup, ^ done
02:59:569 - add note

[Hard]
01:41:148 - move to 2 // ^^; silly me, that circle not supposed to be placed there.. removed..

[Etile's Normal]
i will fix this for eter.. :3
00:00:058 - 00:19:906 - try not add long LN in this section plus a double,it will bit to surprise some newbie,put instead note // keep.. :3
00:58:161 - move to 3 // done
00:58:363 - add note // done
aww nice catch.. xD thanks xleonq..
Ginshu
M4M :v

Dont Open pls ;w;
06:39 ExUsagi: ;w; bisa mod / m4m gk?
06:39 LNP-: bisa
06:40 ExUsagi: owo
06:40 *ExUsagi is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/511087 HHHxMMxST - Oboro [Etlie's NM]]
06:40 ExUsagi: m4m or nm? :3
06:40 LNP-: ok , tpi mau selesain ini dulu , nanggung
06:40 *LNP- is editing xi - Garyou Tensei [7K EZ]
06:40 ExUsagi: ok
06:40 ExUsagi: =w=)b
06:40 ExUsagi: pro tip : save as new diffculty dari 4K, dan ubah jadi 7K
06:41 LNP-: ('-')b
06:41 LNP-: emank begitu :v
06:41 ExUsagi: \ :v / lazy mappers rules
06:42 LNP-: :v /
06:42 LNP-: cuman 7K dibuat agak berseni =w=)b
06:45 ExUsagi: =w=)b
07:12 LNP-: =w=)7
07:12 LNP-: irc mod ya ?
07:12 ExUsagi: `-`
07:12 ExUsagi: boleh.. :3
07:12 LNP-: ok
07:13 ExUsagi: kalo gw dc, post di thread aja
07:13 LNP-: ok
07:14 LNP-: 00:26:651 - - 00:26:953 -
07:14 LNP-: cocok begini http://puu.sh/bSGfe/a436d08519.png
07:15 ExUsagi: diff ape tuh?
07:15 *LNP- is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/511089 HHHxMMxST - Oboro [Insane]]
07:15 LNP-: 00:28:262 - - 00:28:564 - ini juga sama
07:16 ExUsagi: bentar oy
07:16 ExUsagi: oh
07:16 ExUsagi: <3
07:17 ExUsagi: k k done
07:17 LNP-: 00:20:712 - - 00:07:020 - gk ikut suara piano ?
07:17 LNP-: eh kebalik ;v
07:18 ExUsagi: mulai dari situ, bikin 'transisi'
07:18 ExUsagi: atau pergeseran
07:18 LNP-: oh ok
07:19 ExUsagi: lu udah update to pending version kan? `-`
07:19 LNP-: udah
07:19 ExUsagi: x3 k k
07:19 LNP-: 00:43:665 - part ini sering bikin miss o3o
07:20 ExUsagi: `-` tapi udah pas sama pitchnya.. :"<
07:20 LNP-: iyasih o3o
07:20 LNP-: 00:56:148 - - 00:56:551 - tambah 1/4
07:21 ExUsagi: hmm
07:21 ExUsagi: ikutin suara 'dum dum dum' aja deh
07:21 LNP-: ok
07:22 LNP-: 01:03:396 - dilihat susah , tpi dimainkan so EZ :v /
07:22 ExUsagi: EMANG
07:22 ExUsagi: AWKAKWKAWKWAWKAWk
07:23 ExUsagi: LNnya jahat ya.. :v
07:23 LNP-: susah dapet 300 rainbow jadinya :v
07:23 ExUsagi: '-' emang sih
07:23 ExUsagi: tapi seru.. xD
07:23 LNP-: awkwkwakwa
07:23 LNP-: 01:11:853 - - 01:12:255 - 1/4
07:24 ExUsagi: ok
07:25 LNP-: 01:14:067 (74067|1,74168|2) - cocok nya note biasa aja
07:25 ExUsagi: nanti buat yg EtLie, kalo bisa pm si eternalie ya
07:25 ExUsagi: ooh hampir lupa
07:25 LNP-: gk bisa mod normal ;<
07:25 ExUsagi: :"<
07:26 ExUsagi: anything else?
07:26 LNP-: sabar
07:26 LNP-: upload push
07:27 ExUsagi: awkwkkwkwkwk.. :v
07:27 LNP-: 01:14:873 - - 01:15:477 -
07:27 LNP-: meowmeow http://puu.sh/bSH4U/22f1202051.png
07:29 LNP-: aaa
07:30 LNP-: aaaaaaaaaaa
07:30 ExUsagi: haduh
07:30 ExUsagi: retype.. :v
07:30 LNP-: yang pussh tadi masuk ?
07:30 ExUsagi: kagak
07:30 LNP-: hue
07:31 ExUsagi: pencet arrow atas
07:31 LNP-: 01:14:873 - - 01:15:477 -
07:31 ExUsagi: tombol up
07:31 LNP-: MEOW ! http://puu.sh/bSH4U/22f1202051.png
07:31 ExUsagi: lol sengaja kosong
07:31 ExUsagi: itu mah suara echo
07:32 LNP-: ok
07:32 ExUsagi: buat break time pula.. `-`
07:32 LNP-: hue
07:32 LNP-: 02:14:973 - yakin begini ?
07:33 ExUsagi: `-` insane
07:33 ExUsagi: 17va versi 4K :v
07:33 LNP-: :v
07:33 LNP-: ok
07:34 LNP-: 02:24:537 - suara piano / suara bass nya ==a?
07:34 ExUsagi: bass
07:34 LNP-: 02:24:437 - kalo bass 1/8 mulai dari sini
07:37 LNP-: o.o
07:37 ExUsagi: hooo... 1/6, 02:24:470 (144470|3) -
07:38 ExUsagi: cek lebih teliti deh, 5 suara bass
07:38 ExUsagi: http://puu.sh/bSHMT.png
07:38 LNP-: yo wes 5 bass
07:38 ExUsagi: x3
07:38 ExUsagi: thanks udah notice sebelah situ
07:38 LNP-: ok
07:38 ExUsagi: bisa gaswat kalo gk ke check
07:39 LNP-: 02:24:739 - nanggung nih o3o
07:39 LNP-: kasih 1/4 aja
07:39 ExUsagi: sengaja... :"<
07:39 LNP-: ok
07:39 ExUsagi: biar di isi sama si erene
07:39 LNP-: hue
07:39 LNP-: Insane = COMPLETE !
07:40 ExUsagi: xD
07:40 ExUsagi: yay
07:40 ExUsagi: <3
07:40 *LNP- is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/511088 HHHxMMxST - Oboro [Hard]]
07:40 ExUsagi: `-` lu biasa tidur jam berape?
07:40 LNP-: jam 2
07:40 ExUsagi: D:
07:40 LNP-: ntar lagi mau off , nonton kartun jepun dulu
07:40 ExUsagi: gile, gw sejam / setengah jam lagi udah disuruh tidur.. hue
07:40 LNP-: ;v
07:41 LNP-: 00:28:262 - mau bikin sama kayak insane tadi ?
07:42 LNP-: 00:26:651 - ini juga
07:42 ExUsagi: jgn, buat ngebedain hard ama insane
07:42 LNP-: ok
07:42 LNP-: 00:26:752 (26752|1) - pindah ke 1
07:42 LNP-: kemudian
07:43 LNP-: 00:26:953 (26953|2) - pindah ke 3
07:43 ExUsagi: `-`
07:43 ExUsagi: yg mana yg dipindahin ke 3?
07:43 LNP-: oh udh kugeser duluan :v
07:43 ExUsagi: kyknya keep aja deh sebelah situ
07:43 ExUsagi: :v
07:44 LNP-: 00:26:953 (26953|3) -
07:44 LNP-: pindah ke 3
07:44 ExUsagi: hoo
07:44 ExUsagi: yup keep
07:44 ExUsagi: :3
07:44 LNP-: suara bass cocoknya note nya bersebelahan , kayak 12 23 34
07:45 ExUsagi: ho
07:45 ExUsagi: tapi kesannya berulang, apalagi di verse sebelum chorus.. :"<
07:46 LNP-: jangan pake bahasa orang kantor plis , mudeng pala ane :v
07:46 ExUsagi: =w=
07:46 LNP-: 00:33:698 - add note
07:46 ExUsagi: kden... '-'
07:47 LNP-: 00:36:920 - add note
07:47 ExUsagi: yg pertama ok, yg ke 2belah situ fokus ke piano
07:48 ExUsagi: 00:40:141 added,, :v
07:48 ExUsagi: 00:40:141 -
07:48 LNP-: ok
07:48 LNP-: 00:40:141 - add note
07:48 LNP-: eh udh
07:48 LNP-: :v
07:48 LNP-: 00:46:584 - add note
07:49 ExUsagi: :v added woy
07:49 LNP-: 00:46:886 - - 00:47:289 - ikutin piano aja
07:49 ExUsagi: wkwkwkwkwk
07:49 ExUsagi: oh sebelas situ sengaja
07:49 ExUsagi: `-` cuma nge emphasize 1/2 beat
07:49 LNP-: 11 =/=sebelah
07:49 LNP-: ok
07:49 ExUsagi: yg kata gw verse sebelum chorus
07:50 LNP-: 00:55:343 - tambah note satu lagi , suaranya GEDE!
07:51 LNP-: 00:56:551 - ini juga GEDE!
07:51 ExUsagi: semuanya jadi 3 3
07:51 ExUsagi: :v
07:51 LNP-: :v
07:52 LNP-: 01:15:477 - tambah 1 note
07:52 ExUsagi: 01:11:450 (71450|1,71450|2) - perlu jadi 3 3?
07:52 LNP-: gk
07:52 LNP-: yg tadi aja
07:52 ExUsagi: lol over use
07:53 LNP-: 01:12:255 (72255|2,72255|1,72457|2,72457|3,72658|2,72658|1,72859|0,72859|1) - ctrl + H ?
07:53 ExUsagi: udah cucok
07:53 LNP-: hue
07:53 ExUsagi: ikutin pitch suara vocal.. :v
07:54 LNP-: 01:15:477 - udh ditambah 1 note ?
07:54 LNP-: nyaaaann
07:54 ExUsagi: o
07:54 LNP-: 01:18:799 - add note
07:54 LNP-: 01:25:242 - add note
07:56 LNP-: (/´;Д;`)/
07:57 LNP-: 01:24:739 - add note
07:57 LNP-: why
07:57 LNP-: you
07:57 LNP-: OFF !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
07:58 LNP-: (~´;ω;`)~
07:58 ExUsagi: ;w;
07:58 LNP-: 01:24:739 - add nyote
07:59 ExUsagi: done
07:59 LNP-: 01:25:242 - add nyote di 1
07:59 ExUsagi: bisa rusak dah barang elektronik diruma gw.. ;w;
07:59 LNP-: :v
08:00 ExUsagi: oh sengaja gk pake 1/4
08:00 ExUsagi: ada LN
08:00 LNP-: ok
08:00 LNP-: 01:31:685 - add nyote
08:01 ExUsagi: =w= 1/2 only
08:01 LNP-: 01:38:128 - add nyote
08:01 LNP-: hue
08:01 ExUsagi: u know, verse b4 choru
08:01 LNP-: no
08:01 ExUsagi: *chorus.. :v
08:01 LNP-: males buka google
08:01 ExUsagi: awkwkwkwk
08:01 LNP-: :v
08:02 ExUsagi: maksudnya, sebelum bagian reff, sebelum masuk ke kiai
08:02 LNP-: kiai = tokoh agama ?
08:03 ExUsagi: =-=
08:03 LNP-: :v
08:03 LNP-: 02:24:437 - sama juga dengan insane
08:04 ExUsagi: baru selese di perbaiki.. :v
08:05 LNP-: o3o
08:05 LNP-: 02:51:316 - 2 note aja
08:06 LNP-: 02:51:920 (171920|2,171920|0) - pindah ke 02:52:020 -
08:06 LNP-: eh
08:07 LNP-: 02:52:121 (172121|3,172121|1) - ini yang pindah ke 02:52:020 -
08:07 LNP-: again (´;Д;`)
08:07 *LNP- karaoke
08:08 LNP-: aku punya kakek, seorang pelaut , punya senjata dibawah perut ,
08:09 LNP-: bisa menegang , dan bisa mengerut ,
08:09 LNP-: sekali tembak rebbit jdi gendut (∩ ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)⊃━☆゚. * ・ 。゚
08:13 LNP-: hai
08:13 LNP-: http://puu.sh/bSJU6/de8ba5aa8b.jpg
08:14 LNP-: ok cukup sampai disini saja perjumpaan kita pada malam hari ini
08:15 ExUsagi: TwT
08:15 ExUsagi: nm?
08:15 LNP-: m4m garyou tensei
08:15 LNP-: :v
08:15 LNP-: yg 7K
08:15 ExUsagi: ok
08:15 ExUsagi: x3
08:15 LNP-: /savelog
08:16 LNP-: ok

For NM, i mod later o3o
Aii-
Hello :3 Mod request via pm~

[Normal]

00:58:564 - add 1 note
01:05:007 - ^
01:08:229 - ^

01:21:920 (81920|2,82021|1,82121|0) - Cntrl + G

01:45:275 (105275|1) - move to col 1

01:46:886 (106886|1) - move to col 1

01:51:718 (111718|1) - move to col 1

02:00:980 (120980|0,121182|1) - how about change to normal note ?

02:15:477 (135477|2,135477|3) - maybe u just use 1 note .. make a same like before part o_o *Consistent

[Hard]

01:29:168 (89168|2) - move to col 1 ?

02:02:994 (122994|0) - move to col 3

02:03:296 (123296|2) - move to col 2 , or Delete o_o

02:07:222 (127222|2) - move to col 1

02:07:423 - add note to col 3

02:07:826 - add note

02:45:275 - add note plz ..

03:24:739 (204739|3) - move to col 2

[Insane]
xxx

nice map beb :3
Topic Starter
Arzenvald

Aii- wrote:

Hello :3 Mod request via pm~

[Hard]

01:29:168 (89168|2) - move to col 1 ?

02:02:994 (122994|0) - move to col 3

02:03:296 (123296|2) - move to col 2 , or Delete o_o // lel that note.. moved to 02:03:396 (123396|1) -

02:07:222 (127222|2) - move to col 1

02:07:423 - add note to col 3 // keep, will maintain 2 notes on LNs part

02:07:826 - add note

02:45:275 - add note plz ..

03:24:739 (204739|3) - move to col 2 // keep.. >w<

[Insane]
xxx

nice map beb :3 // thanks beb.. >w< ahuehuehuehue
no reply means <3 thanks aii-nyan.. \(>w<)/
Ryu Sei
Aaaa oboro!! GL usa!
Oya ada slot buat diff kagak?
Topic Starter
Arzenvald

Ryu Sei wrote:

Aaaa oboro!! GL usa!
Oya ada slot buat diff kagak?
;w; y u alwaiz usa meh.. `-` kyknya udah penuh deh... gw mau bikin diffnya gak banyak banyak.. hue
Fubukicat
Ai sir

Aii- wrote:

Hello :3 Mod request via pm~

[Normal]

00:58:564 - add 1 note hmm not feeling it right
01:05:007 - ^ same as above
01:08:229 - ^ same as above

01:21:920 (81920|2,82021|1,82121|0) - Cntrl + G OK

01:45:275 (105275|1) - move to col 1 OK

01:46:886 (106886|1) - move to col 1 OK

01:51:718 (111718|1) - move to col 1 OK

02:00:980 (120980|0,121182|1) - how about change to normal note ? Sure

02:15:477 (135477|2,135477|3) - maybe u just use 1 note .. make a same like before part o_o *Consistent Ok :V
Ryu Sei
Checking metadata only. No kudosu if that doesn't helps, cheers. actually I want to mod this but... ah I can't :/
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Use × instead on the title section. It should be HHH×MM×ST

Tags: replace all w/ "sakura luminance ryu* ryu☆ pop'n music 20 fantasia mayumi morinaga starving trancer dai jubeat saucer moimoi senya Eternalie"
Topic Starter
Arzenvald

Ryu Sei wrote:

Checking metadata only. No kudosu if that doesn't helps, cheers. actually I want to mod this but... ah I can't :/
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Use × instead on the title section. It should be HHH×MM×ST

Tags: replace all w/ "sakura luminance ryu* ryu☆ pop'n music 20 fantasia mayumi morinaga starving trancer dai jubeat saucer moimoi senya Eternalie"
tags fixed, kalo title, x nya sengaja ngikutin dari map yg udah ranked, plus gw takut kalo pake karakter Unicode, pencariannya malah nambah susah... >w< thanks ryuw..

EDIT 24/11
i forgot that i can use romanised artist.. and use both unicode and non unicode.. orz
ok applied! thanks a lot ryu!
Ryu Sei
Karena saya dapet dari RemyWiki kalau title artis emang harusnya HHH×MM×ST

Tapi uty, terserah :) kenapa artis dan titel selalu tertukar aaaaa
ExVeemon
Excellent work on the Insane diff Usagi, enjoyed the LN's a lot. Easy to read too, which is good as well~
Topic Starter
Arzenvald

MasterSonic10 wrote:

Excellent work on the Insane diff Usagi, enjoyed the LN's a lot. Easy to read too, which is good as well~
lel thanks, i should quote your words on your signature in this map.. :v

MasterSonic10 wrote:

"I feel like we need more harder/super hard 4K LN maps... :^)"
Mysticalia
Mod request~

Mod~
[BPM/Offset/Timing/Setup]
  1. Seems fine~
[Etlie's Normal]
  1. 00:11:853 - Add note for drum (stronger sound, refer to 00:07:020 / 00:13:463)?
  2. 00:58:564 - Add note to emphasise cymbal / start of kiai? (refer to 02:40:041)
  3. 01:14:671 - Sounds somewhat "incomplete" without a note here - add one?
  4. 03:02:591 - Pattern break? (make one of the notes here into an LN ending at 03:04:202)
  5. 03:19:504 - Missing note / pattern break - add one?
[Hard]
  1. 00:46:484 (46484|1,46484|0,46685|0,46685|2,46886|1,46886|3,47088|2,47088|3) - Ctrl-H for some balance?
  2. 00:48:094 (48094|2,48094|1,48296|2,48296|0,48497|0,48497|1,48698|2,48698|3) - ^
  3. 00:58:463 - Missing note? (refer to 01:00:074)
  4. 00:58:866 / 01:00:477 / 01:05:309 / 01:06:920 - move a note from the blue line to emphasise the next white line (drum) instead? Seems to happen in the second and third kiais as well - possibly deliberate?
  5. (01:11:450 to 01:12:859) / (01:56:953 to 01:58:161) / (02:12:658 to 02:14:067) - make into triples? (refer to 00:55:343 / (01:40:443 to 01:42:849) - same instruments?)
  6. 02:09:034 - Missing guitar LN? (guitar does two 1/2 notes here)
  7. 02:25:141 - Really fun to play but the music is kinda fading away at this point - delete at least one?
  8. 02:59:369 / 03:05:812 - Add a note for cymbal? (Refer to 03:02:591 / 03:09:034)
  9. 03:00:980 - Not actually a cymbal in the background - take off the cymbal hitsounding? (optional)
[Insane]
  1. 00:25:745 - Maybe a double-single-triple here to emphasise the sound at 00:25:947? (00:25:947 is the same as 00:25:141 / 00:23:531 I think?)
  2. 00:37:524 - Not sure if deliberate or wrong emphasis (same point as HD mode - weird emphasis on blue line? 00:37:423 and 00:37:524 sound the same)
  3. 00:58:463 - Maybe this will link patterns better?
  4. 01:22:725 to 01:25:947 - I have a feeling that this pattern overflowed into the next phrase because of how you used 3 LNs in a row? (since this phrase is basically 8 beats, lasting for the vocal line (which starts 1.5 beats into the phrase) "itsuka kuru hi no / asa mo" (slash indicates midpoint of phrase), with the next phrase being "kakusu namida... etc etc"). Your current pattern has the first LN on the third beat of the phrase, so your LN is emphasising the 3rd, 4th, 5th, then 7th, 8th and 9th/1st beat, making it "overflow" - maybe:
    1. Either move the LNs one beat earlier so it's emphasising 2nd/3rd/4th and 6th/7th/8th beats of the phrase (recommended, as this would have the additional side-effect of emphasising the vocal too)?
    2. Or alternatively just emphasise 3rd and 4th / 7th and 8th beats of the phrase (not really recommended, taking into account the difficulty of the map (doing this would probably make this section a bit too easy for insane standards))
  5. 01:42:658 - Try this? (the gaps in the triple notes follows pitch, also the note at 01:42:960 might link with the rest of the pattern better)
  6. Again quite a few weird emphases on 1/4 lines... timing resnap error or deliberate? (e.g. 02:00:074 / 02:03:296 / 02:45:175 / 01:02:088 etc)
  7. (01:59:772 to 02:12:658) - A few weird emphases here I think? (strong white beats with only one note while the previous blue line has two notes - e.g. 02:03:296 / 02:06:517 / 02:08:128 - I'm not sure if the guitar is playing a (3/4)-(3/4)-(1/2) rhythm there. The normal notes between (02:09:739 and 02:10:242) also feel a bit strange - Maybe a note pattern similar to this might be emphasising the music more accurately? (optional - may destroy mapping style :S)
  8. 02:01:786 - Missing note? (refer to 02:02:591)
  9. 02:25:141 - Same point as HD (fading music)
  10. 02:51:014 - Missing note / pattern break? (maybe deliberate - but I don't hear anything different in the music)?
  11. 02:51:416 - Maybe make this into a normal note since I think the the... whatever that is that's playing the 1/4 LNs... doesn't start until 02:51:517?
  12. 02:58:161 - Delete one? (Sounds the same as 02:57:759 / 02:58:564)
  13. 02:58:262 - Missing a 1/4 note LN? (pattern break - maybe the fault of the triple note at 02:58:161 above)?
  14. 03:02:591 - Consistency break (refer to 02:59:369) - same instruments but 02:59:369 is a triple because of the LN - so maybe delete one from 03:02:591? (optional - since this is the last point in the whole song where that sort of thing happens I think?)
  15. 03:24:739 - Make into an LN ending at 03:24:940? I think the piano still plays at that point.
This song is so upbeat and catchy, really liked it~ :)

Good luck! :D
Kawawa
hello!
i suggest u r song :) 7K INSANE, or other LV apply.

just it's timing change. (timing setup / panel)

01:00:387 - BPMx0.75 -> BPM x0.10

01:00:687 - BPM x1.1Kial -> BPM x1.0 Kial

01:19:887 -> 01:20:037 - and, BPM x1.1 Kial -> BPM x1.0
REDYUMiKA
...Focused ;)
Topic Starter
Arzenvald

Mysticalia wrote:

Mod request~

Mod~
[BPM/Offset/Timing/Setup]
  1. Seems fine~
[Etlie's Normal]
  1. 00:11:853 - Add note for drum (stronger sound, refer to 00:07:020 / 00:13:463)?
  2. 00:58:564 - Add note to emphasise cymbal / start of kiai? (refer to 02:40:041)
  3. 01:14:671 - Sounds somewhat "incomplete" without a note here - add one?
  4. 03:02:591 - Pattern break? (make one of the notes here into an LN ending at 03:04:202)
  5. 03:19:504 - Missing note / pattern break - add one?
[Hard]
  1. 00:46:484 (46484|1,46484|0,46685|0,46685|2,46886|1,46886|3,47088|2,47088|3) - Ctrl-H for some balance? // keep not flipped, nice idea though.. :3
  2. 00:48:094 (48094|2,48094|1,48296|2,48296|0,48497|0,48497|1,48698|2,48698|3) - ^
  3. 00:58:463 - Missing note? (refer to 01:00:074) // keep..
  4. 00:58:866 / 01:00:477 / 01:05:309 / 01:06:920 - move a note from the blue line to emphasise the next white line (drum) instead? Seems to happen in the second and kiais as well - possibly deliberate? // i see, my bad.. >< but it's actually follow the synth sound, and supposed for vice versa on this beat 00:58:564 (58564|0,58866|0,59168|0,59369|1) - 10010010 10101010 10010010 10101010
  5. (01:11:450 to 01:12:859) / (01:56:953 to 01:58:161) / (02:12:658 to 02:14:067) - make into triples? (refer to 00:55:343 / (01:40:443 to 01:42:849) - same instruments?) // oh, i think those part will be fitting for some 1/4 stream, and triplets because there's an emphasize before kiai.. will consider to add later.. xD
  6. 02:09:034 - Missing guitar LN? (guitar does two 1/2 notes here) orz i forget.. done..
  7. 02:25:141 - Really fun to play but the music is kinda fading away at this point - delete at least one? // ok
  8. 02:59:369 / 03:05:812 - Add a note for cymbal? (Refer to 03:02:591 / 03:09:034) // done... >< sorry i forget (and keep the LN part not added with additional notes..)
  9. 03:00:980 - Not actually a cymbal in the background - take off the cymbal hitsounding? (optional) // oh right.. done.. :D (applied for another diffs too)
[Insane]
  1. 00:25:745 - Maybe a double-single-triple here to emphasise the sound at 00:25:947? (00:25:947 is the same as 00:25:141 / 00:23:531 I think?) // nice idea.. all done in opening part..
  2. 00:37:524 - Not sure if deliberate or wrong emphasis (same point as HD mode - weird emphasis on blue line? 00:37:423 and 00:37:524 sound the same) // vice versa thing... idk.. will consider to change if that's a really matter thing to change.. :3
  3. 00:58:463 - Maybe this will link patterns better? // puush error 522, ppy y u do diz.. (2) website is offline.. will see this later
  4. 01:22:725 to 01:25:947 - I have a feeling that this pattern overflowed into the next phrase because of how you used 3 LNs in a row? (since this phrase is basically 8 beats, lasting for the vocal line (which starts 1.5 beats into the phrase) "itsuka kuru hi no / asa mo" (slash indicates midpoint of phrase), with the next phrase being "kakusu namida... etc etc"). Your current pattern has the first LN on the third beat of the phrase, so your LN is emphasising the 3rd, 4th, 5th, then 7th, 8th and 9th/1st beat, making it "overflow" - maybe:
    1. Either move the LNs one beat earlier so it's emphasising 2nd/3rd/4th and 6th/7th/8th beats of the phrase (recommended, as this would have the additional side-effect of emphasising the vocal too)?
    2. Or alternatively just emphasise 3rd and 4th / 7th and 8th beats of the phrase (not really recommended, taking into account the difficulty of the map (doing this would probably make this section a bit too easy for insane standards))
    // actually, i want to map it as you suggested above, but i realized many peoples already got pissed off with those LNs on kiai parts, that's why i choose to follow 6 strongest piano sounds on 2nd verse, to make it feels not too repetitive as 1st verse.. reason : vice versa things again.. ^^;
  5. 01:42:658 - Try this? (the gaps in the triple notes follows pitch, also the note at 01:42:960 might link with the rest of the pattern better) // website is offline.. will see this later
  6. Again quite a few weird emphases on 1/4 lines... timing resnap error or deliberate? (e.g. 02:00:074 / 02:03:296 / 02:45:175 / 01:02:088 etc) // ^^; my bad.. hehehe.. but i wll keep it that way
  7. (01:59:772 to 02:12:658) - A few weird emphases here I think? (strong white beats with only one note while the previous blue line has two notes - e.g. 02:03:296 / 02:06:517 / 02:08:128 - I'm not sure if the guitar is playing a (3/4)-(3/4)-(1/2) rhythm there. The normal notes between <02:09:739 and 02:10:242> also feel a bit strange - Maybe a note pattern similar to this might be emphasising the music more accurately? (optional - may destroy mapping style :S) // hoo vice versa things again... also, adapting stepmania LN usage, i crop some LNs, replace them with notes, and make it a bit more simpler on that part..
  8. 02:01:786 - Missing note? (refer to 02:02:591) // :O nice catch, thanks.. :D
  9. 02:25:141 - Same point as HD (fading music etc etc) // lel i think i will keep
  10. 02:51:014 - Missing note / pattern break? (maybe deliberate - but I don't hear anything different in the music)? // ok, done.. :3
  11. 02:51:416 - Maybe make this into a normal note since I think the the... whatever that is that's playing the 1/4 LNs... doesn't start until 02:51:517? // remapped, will keep LN starts from here 02:51:316 (171316|1) -
  12. 02:58:161 - Delete one? (Sounds the same as 02:57:759 / 02:58:564) // done
  13. 02:58:262 - Missing a 1/4 note LN (pattern break - maybe the fault of the triple note at 02:58:161 above)? // keep
  14. 03:02:591 - Consistency break (refer to 02:59:369) - same instruments but 02:59:369 is a triple because of the LN - so maybe delete one from 03:02:591? (optional - since this is the last point in the whole song where that sort of thing happens I think?) // keep, yea, the last point in the whole song that supposed to be hardest, vice versa.. >w<
  15. 03:24:739 - Make into an LN ending at 03:24:940? I think the piano still plays at that point. // oh ok.. :D
This song is so upbeat and catchy, really liked it~ :) // i know, right? >w<

Good luck! :D
thank you so much, mystica.. many things to be reconsidered later, since yea, it's a worth shot to use all your mods.. >w<

KawaEE wrote:

hello!
i suggest u r song :) 7K INSANE, or other LV apply. // i won't make 7K mapset for this one.. :(

just it's timing change. (timing setup / panel)

01:00:387 - BPMx0.75 -> BPM x0.10

01:00:687 - BPM x1.1Kial -> BPM x1.0 Kial

01:19:887 -> 01:20:037 - and, BPM x1.1 Kial -> BPM x1.0 // i want to make this map clean from any speed changes, especially on full streamy parts, it's not allowed..
though it's quiet fun to play.. will consider to add some SV later.. ^^;

REDYUMiKA wrote:

...Focused ;)
hocus.. focus... >;3
Fubukicat

Mysticalia wrote:

Mod request~

Mod~
[BPM/Offset/Timing/Setup]
  1. Seems fine~
[Etlie's Normal]
  1. 00:11:853 - Add note for drum (stronger sound, refer to 00:07:020 / 00:13:463)? Nope I don't see Louder sound at all I mapped one more note for drums and here it hasn't so i'll not add here
  2. 00:58:564 - Add note to emphasise cymbal / start of kiai? (refer to 02:40:041) Nope there is Imo too much notes already and it would only breaks newcomer , I want to make this diff Feelingfull so Adding less while keeping the Fun to da maximum :D
  3. 01:14:671 - Sounds somewhat "incomplete" without a note here - add one? Nope I don't feel this great at all , I don't feel sounds here and a LN would break my vision of it , but yup dat could be a great idea indeed
  4. 03:02:591 - Pattern break? (make one of the notes here into an LN ending at 03:04:202) Nope there is too much density here imo add would only break the flow of new comer (imo) xD
  5. 03:19:504 - Missing note / pattern break - add one?
OK added :D/d thank you


This song is so upbeat and catchy, really liked it~ :)

Good luck! :D
Thank you for Mod Really aprreciate it >w<b
Kawawa
hello :)

suggest.

INSANE
01:14:269 - Long note delete, after note 2add
02:09:638 - note 1add

good song good beat :)

good luck
Topic Starter
Arzenvald

KawaEE wrote:

hello :)

suggest.

INSANE
01:14:269 - Long note delete, after note 2add // keep
02:09:638 - note 1add // might unecessarry, and break the flow..

good song good beat :)

good luck
>< thanks for paying your attention to my map.. fully appreciated
Lirai
Hi Here's mod for your chart ~

[Insane]
00:32:994 (32994|0) - Move to 2
00:33:396 (33396|3) - Move to 3
^ it just fun to play, nothing else

00:50:108 - Add to 1, Triple seems good here

01:08:631 - Add Note

01:09:839 - Add to 1

01:39:034 (99034|1,99235|2,99638|2,99839|1) - Ctrl + H, umm ya, kliatan agak readable sih

01:58:161 - Add to 2

02:06:316 - Add to |3|4|

02:07:926 - Add to 3

02:09:638 - Add Note

02:38:430 - Add to 2
[Hard]
00:24:135 (24135|0) - Move this to 3, Hand Balance

00:35:611 (35611|1,35611|0) - Ctrl+H, Hand Balance

00:42:054 (42054|2) - Move to 1, Hand wawwawa

00:50:108 - Add to 3

02:02:591 - Soft-HitClap 60%

02:51:316 (171316|1) - Move to 1, Jacknya gk masalah

Nice Map

Good Luck <3
Un-known_old
Here is it my mod..

kolom : |1|2|3|4|

Insane
00:37:155 (37155|2) - apus
00:37:088 (37088|3) - pindah ke 00:37:121 -
00:46:685 - add note
00:47:088 - ^
01:12:356 (72356|0,72557|0,72759|3,72960|3) - apus
01:12:255 (72255|2,72255|1,72457|3,72457|2,72658|1,72658|2,72859|0,72859|1) - jadiin 3 notes
02:11:047 (131047|2,131148|3,131249|2,131349|3,131450|2,131551|3,131651|2) - apus
02:11:047 (131047|1,131047|0,131249|1,131249|0,131450|1,131450|0,131651|1,131651|0) - jadiin 3 notes
03:00:980 - add 1 note


Hard
01:03:698 (63698|0) - apus
01:10:645 (70645|3,70645|2) - move to 01:10:645 (70645|2,70645|3) -

Good luck.. Hope it ranked 8-) 8-)

Don't forget to mod my map too --> t/246379
Topic Starter
Arzenvald

Un-known wrote:

Here is it my mod..

kolom : |1|2|3|4|

Insane
00:37:155 (37155|2) - apus // ada suara piano.. o.o
00:37:088 (37088|3) - pindah ke 00:37:121 - // ^ sama
00:46:685 - add note // dipikirkan lagi.. ==a
00:47:088 - ^ // dipikirkan lagi.. ==a
01:12:356 (72356|0,72557|0,72759|3,72960|3) - apus // done.. xixixi silly me..
01:12:255 (72255|2,72255|1,72457|3,72457|2,72658|1,72658|2,72859|0,72859|1) - jadiin 3 notes // done
02:11:047 (131047|2,131148|3,131249|2,131349|3,131450|2,131551|3,131651|2) - apus // keep
02:11:047 (131047|1,131047|0,131249|1,131249|0,131450|1,131450|0,131651|1,131651|0) - jadiin 3 notes // keep
03:00:980 - add 1 note // lol evil, ok! >:D


Hard
01:03:698 (63698|0) - apus // lel ada suara synth, keep
01:10:645 (70645|3,70645|2) - move to 01:10:645 (70645|2,70645|3) - // move kemana mas? o_o

Good luck.. Hope it ranked 8-) 8-)

Don't forget to mod my map too --> t/246379 // okkie.. <3 mephisto

DE-CADE wrote:

Hi Here's mod for your chart ~

[Insane]
00:32:994 (32994|0) - Move to 2 // done, applied for Hard diff too
00:33:396 (33396|3) - Move to 3 // ^
^ it just fun to play, nothing else

00:50:108 - Add to 1, Triple seems good here // indeed, but keep.. (jack tangan kiri itu susah.. T-T)

01:08:631 - Add Note // lel keep

01:09:839 - Add to 1 // lel keep

01:39:034 (99034|1,99235|2,99638|2,99839|1) - Ctrl + H, umm ya, kliatan agak readable sih // ok

01:58:161 - Add to 2 // done

02:06:316 - Add to |3|4| // hmm... dipikir pikir lagi... ==a

02:07:926 - Add to 3 // keep

02:09:638 - Add Note // ^ keep, vice versa, ngasih spacing yg berbeda, kalo biasanya 1/2, ini 3/4.. :3

02:38:430 - Add to 2 // done
[Hard]
00:24:135 (24135|0) - Move this to 3, Hand Balance

00:35:611 (35611|1,35611|0) - Ctrl+H, Hand Balance // 00:35:410 (35410|2,35410|0) - aja deng.. ^^;

00:42:054 (42054|2) - Move to 1, Hand wawwawa // lel done

00:50:108 - Add to 3 // :O done.. thanks

02:02:591 - Soft-HitClap 60% // weh gw ketauan.. *runs*

02:51:316 (171316|1) - Move to 1, Jacknya gk masalah // oiya nih, klimaks.. xD

Nice Map

Good Luck <3
thanks guys! :D both mods is so helping.. ( T_T where's mods for NM )
Zan-
m4m m4m m4m m4m m4m

irc
21:07 Zan -: udah fix blm mapnya, sini gue mod
21:07 *ExUsagi is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/511088 HHHxMMxST - Oboro [Hard]]
21:07 ExUsagi: udah kok, udah banyak yg mod
21:08 Zan -: okeokeokeokeokeoekokeoke
21:08 ExUsagi: >w<
21:46 Zan -: irc mod yuk entar
21:46 ExUsagi: boleh
21:46 ExUsagi: gw update dulu ni mod
21:46 ExUsagi: *map
21:47 ExUsagi: eh tapi takut gw disuruh tidur duluan.. =-=
21:47 Zan -: siap siap, entaran tapi multi dolo :v
21:47 Zan -: halah udah gede
21:47 ExUsagi: =-=
21:47 ExUsagi: gw gak bisa protes
21:47 ExUsagi: protes dikit, internet melayang
21:47 Zan -: ..................
21:48 ExUsagi: T-T
21:48 Zan -: lagunya enak
21:48 ExUsagi: boleh lah, tapi bentar
21:48 ExUsagi: emang
21:48 ExUsagi: <3
21:50 Zan -: bang bang mulai yuk
21:50 Zan -: irc
21:50 Zan -: mod
21:50 ExUsagi: ok
21:50 ExUsagi: NM di post aja ya
21:51 Zan -: updatein dulu
21:51 ExUsagi: udah update
21:51 ExUsagi: `-`
21:51 ExUsagi: coba gih
21:51 Zan -: maksudnya gua update
21:51 Zan -: wekek
21:51 ExUsagi: .-.
21:51 *Zan - is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/511087 HHHxMMxST - Oboro [Etlie's Normal]]
21:51 Zan -: eh ini ngapain
21:51 Zan -: bukan diff lu
21:51 ExUsagi: saatnya bikin banner sambil irc (/*w*)/
21:51 ExUsagi: makanya
21:51 ExUsagi: :v
21:51 ExUsagi: NM di post aja
21:51 Zan -: huuh
21:52 ExUsagi: :v
21:52 Zan -: 00:01:786 - sama 00:01:987 - gak double-note aja?
21:52 Zan -: tambah di 4 1
21:52 ExUsagi: diff ape?
21:52 *Zan - is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/511088 HHHxMMxST - Oboro [Hard]]
21:52 Zan -: oiya
21:52 ExUsagi: :
21:52 ExUsagi: :v
21:53 ExUsagi: ada suara pianonya gk...? ><
21:53 Zan -: gimana?
21:53 ExUsagi: oh sengaja 1 1 semua
21:53 Zan -: oh oke
21:53 ExUsagi: pengen nekanin keysound baru buatan gw.. ~~~~~~~~~~~~`\ :v \
21:53 Zan -: F7H.wav kok gua double klik ga ada suara..........
21:54 ExUsagi: redownload
21:54 ExUsagi: keysoundnya baru ditambahin kemaren
21:54 ExUsagi: `-`
21:54 Zan -: hanjrit, mod pattern aja deh
21:54 ExUsagi: akwkwkwk
21:54 Zan -: 00:04:403 (4403|0) - jadi hold gimana? `~`)
21:55 Zan -: eh nggak deng jangan
21:55 ExUsagi: o.o
21:55 ExUsagi: tadinya mau pake LN, tapi pitchnya sama.. ._.
21:55 Zan -: 00:23:329 (23329|0) - move ke 3?
21:56 Zan -: ya gue salah denger tadi :v
21:56 ExUsagi: keep untuk
21:56 ExUsagi: lha kok bisa? :v
21:57 Zan -: headset buluk, kabel ke geser dikit suara ngawur
21:57 ExUsagi: `-`
21:57 Zan -: 00:22:121 (22121|0) - move ke 3?
21:57 ExUsagi: i know how that feel
21:58 ExUsagi: keep.. >w<
21:58 Zan -: 00:27:960 - ini triple gara2 cymbal yak?
21:59 ExUsagi: yup
21:59 Zan -: 00:31:987 (31987|2,32188|2) - geser ke 4, duaduanya
21:59 ExUsagi: ok
21:59 Zan -: biar lebih challanging
21:59 Zan -: ah gimana sih tulisannya
22:00 ExUsagi: challenging
22:00 ExUsagi: chingchallenging.. :v
22:00 Zan -: anjrit wkwk :v
22:01 Zan -: 00:37:020 - http://puu.sh/bXEVo/0ad5ef58d9.png?
22:03 ExUsagi: 4 piano
22:03 ExUsagi: ow
22:03 ExUsagi: gw liat lagi
22:03 ExUsagi: boleh
22:03 ExUsagi: lel
22:03 Zan -: 00:38:430 (38430|1,38631|2) - ctrl+G
22:03 Zan -: cocok banget
22:04 ExUsagi: done
22:04 Zan -: 00:39:839 (39839|0) - move 3
22:05 ExUsagi: keep
22:05 Zan -: oiya btw, selesain mod yg luckman's mx di map gue, spy mau ngecek
22:06 ExUsagi: udah kok
22:06 Zan -: 00:41:651 - http://puu.sh/bXFce/63006fc890.jpg
22:07 ExUsagi: jadi 13 24 13 aja
22:08 Zan -: 00:44:269 - serem, double note terus2an
22:09 ExUsagi: namanya juga hard
22:09 ExUsagi: sm style
22:09 Zan -: 00:57:255 - SUARANYA LUCU
22:09 ExUsagi: lol
22:09 ExUsagi: emang
22:09 Zan -: KAYA SUARA TENGGELEM DI KOLAM RENANG
22:09 ExUsagi: DUN
22:09 Zan -: HAHAHAH
22:09 ExUsagi: awkawkakwawkk
22:09 ExUsagi: akwkawkwkw staph
22:10 Zan -: 00:58:866 - di sini double note? padahal di 00:58:967 - dia lebih kenceng ada suara hentakan
22:10 ExUsagi: vice versa
22:10 Zan -: apa itu aku cupu
22:11 ExUsagi: jadi ngambil setiap 3/4 beat
22:11 ExUsagi: `-`
22:11 ExUsagi: kagak
22:11 ExUsagi: gw terlalu realis
22:11 *ExUsagi runs
22:12 Zan -: 01:26:953 - jadi 2 4 gimana?
22:12 ExUsagi: done
22:13 ExUsagi: btw thanks nih, jadi modders pertama yg ngebahas PR
22:13 ExUsagi: modders yg lain keliatannya ragu ragu
22:14 Zan -: kebiasaan gua, utamakan PR
22:14 ExUsagi: lel
22:14 Zan -: 01:49:302 (109302|0) - awkward gimana gitu ngeliat hold ini ngejomblo di 1 wakakakak
22:14 ExUsagi: jomblo
22:14 ExUsagi: ...
22:14 Zan -: sendirian....
22:14 ExUsagi: sakitnya tuh disini..
22:15 *ExUsagi nunjuk kokoro
22:15 ExUsagi: blame previous stairs
22:15 Zan -: dasar jomblo
22:15 ExUsagi: ;-;
22:15 Zan -: 02:02:591 - add note? eh tapi nanti jadi ribet patternnya hmmmmmmmmm
22:15 *ExUsagi slowly walks out
22:15 ExUsagi: pencet Tab
22:15 ExUsagi: lihat kejutannya
22:15 Zan -: baru tau bisa kaya gitu
22:16 Zan -: gimana cara
22:16 ExUsagi: lol
22:16 ExUsagi: tanya luckman
22:16 Zan -: nood parah gue soal sounding
22:16 Zan -: noob
22:16 ExUsagi: .-.
22:16 Zan -: 02:07:423 - add more note?
22:16 Zan -: eh gausah deh ngerusak pola
22:16 ExUsagi: don
22:16 ExUsagi: kagak
22:17 ExUsagi: 02:09:034 (129034|2) - tinggal tambah disini
22:17 Zan -: kalo gitu d sini juga 02:08:229 -
22:17 ExUsagi: :v
22:17 ExUsagi: salah sasaran
22:17 Zan -: ini juga 02:09:034 -
22:17 ExUsagi: 02:10:645 (130645|2) -
22:18 Zan -: 02:09:839 - aku mendengar suara hentakan
22:19 ExUsagi: ok added sample
22:20 ExUsagi: yg tab tu
22:21 Zan -: hard dun
22:22 ExUsagi: <3
22:22 *Zan - is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/511089 HHHxMMxST - Oboro [Insane]]
22:22 Zan -: http://puu.sh/bXG5P/2c8fa84e1f.png
22:22 Zan -: *mual tiba2
22:22 ExUsagi: O_o
22:22 ExUsagi: kuatkan dirimu nak
22:24 Zan -: 01:03:396 - keliatannya ribet padahal mah gampang
22:24 Zan -: sama semua pencetannya
22:24 ExUsagi: anjrit dc
22:24 ExUsagi: awkwkwkwk
22:24 ExUsagi: salahkan SM style
22:25 ExUsagi: copy paste everywhere.. ~~~~~~~`\ :v \
22:25 ExUsagi: tapi kelebihannya map 4K gitu, gak keliatan copy paste kalo bisa ngakalin copasnya
22:25 ExUsagi: beda kalo 7K, di copas, trus di ubek ubek gimana, tetep keliatan copas.. orz
22:25 Zan -: 01:18:497 (78497|2) - move ke 1
22:26 Zan -: ca[ek tangan kanan mulu yg main
22:26 Zan -: capek
22:26 ExUsagi: 01:18:296 (78296|1) - ini juga ke `
22:26 Zan -: hmm terserah sih bisa juga
22:26 Zan -: 01:21:718 (81718|2) - move ke 2, biar tangan kiri ada mencet
22:26 ExUsagi: besok lebaran ya?
22:27 ExUsagi: ;w;
22:27 Zan -: hooh
22:27 ExUsagi: done
22:27 ExUsagi: ;w;
22:27 ExUsagi: kambing
22:27 Zan -: elu
22:27 ExUsagi: O_O
22:27 ExUsagi: wat
22:30 Zan -: dah gitu doang insanenya
22:31 ExUsagi: @_@
22:31 ExUsagi: u wot m8
22:31 Zan -: wat
22:31 ExUsagi: kk now mod NM
22:31 *ExUsagi runs
22:31 Zan -: kuo kyouka?
22:32 ExUsagi: =-=
22:32 ExUsagi: maksud gw Ok Ok
22:32 Zan -: :v

Etlie's Normal
[Etlie's Normal]
00:23:128 - add note
01:04:604 (64604|3) - remove
01:05:007 - add note
02:05:812 (125812|2,126014|0) - ctrl+G
02:07:826 (127826|1) - move to 3
02:36:819 - follow previous notes, so add more note
02:38:229 (158229|2) - move to 1
02:57:759 - add note
03:18:698 (198698|0) - remove, not necessary (following previous pattern)
03:19:504 (199504|0) - ^
03:20:309 (200309|1) - ^
03:21:920 (201920|2) - ^
03:22:725 (202725|0) - ^
03:23:531 (203531|1) - ^
03:24:940 - feeling missing something :v

gud luk! #350
Fubukicat

Zan - wrote:

m4m m4m m4m m4m m4m

Etlie's Normal
[Etlie's Normal]
00:23:128 - add note No I think it'll only confuse the player by too much density
01:04:604 (64604|3) - remove OK
01:05:007 - add note Nope Cause I should add note for every part having this thema so It'll not fit the diff at all imo
02:05:812 (125812|2,126014|0) - ctrl+G OK
02:07:826 (127826|1) - move to 3 OK
02:36:819 - follow previous notes, so add more note OK added note on 1 cause previous sound is not the same , well thx for pointing it
02:38:229 (158229|2) - move to 1 OK
02:57:759 - add note No I think Like previously for the same issue it would cause confusion for the newcomer since they were just played 1/2 beats and suddenly get some pressure cause of a double notes , but still noting it may change
03:18:698 (198698|0) - remove, not necessary (following previous pattern) I added Notes like last patterns instead
03:19:504 (199504|0) - ^ ^
03:20:309 (200309|1) - ^ ^
03:21:920 (201920|2) - ^ ^
03:22:725 (202725|0) - ^ ^
03:23:531 (203531|1) - ^ ^
03:24:940 - feeling missing something :v Added An LN on 3 make it a little complexe but seems fine at all :D thx

gud luk! #350
Thank you for Mod =)
Evening
Hi, very honest mod here, i might rage and shit

and note that THERE IS NO SARCARSM HERE

[General]

Personally, I'm not a fan of maps with lower than 7.5 HP, it's really hard to die.
I'm pretty sure you are capable of doing a simple SB here, it will look cooler

[Insane]

Somewhat a unique way of naming, idk how to feel about that but it fits the theme of the music, please don't change to some Lv. 19749274 shit, it doesn't fit this, it feels like some SDVX crap

First things first, really nice hitsounding, i love it.

00:29:369 (29369|2) - idk why you would need a note here though, it feels unneeded, oh, and shorten this LN if you have done that 00:29:168 (29168|1) - .
This helps to emphasize the clap here, in which i highly think that this is rather nice in the music

00:29:571 - You could use a 0.9-0.95x SV here, it doesn't affect the gameplay much but it gives a nice visual slowdown effect if you get what i mean
00:31:182 - ^ Revert to 1.0 here

00:37:020 (37020|2,37088|3,37155|2,37222|1) - Hmm, a brave patterning here, i like it, you gave enough time for players to notice the 1/6s also, nice execution

00:43:262 - I like this pattern here, it's a tad bit overwhelming though imo, considering the diff spike here

00:50:309 (50309|0,50309|1,50410|3,50410|2,50510|3,50510|1,50510|0) - I would recommend to Ctrl + H this, since even though it's split with 00:50:108 (50108|3,50108|2) - players might hit the next 2 notes too early thinking that it is constant 1/4s

01:11:047 (71047|2,71047|3,71148|0,71148|1,71249|2,71349|0,71349|3) - I cringed and i wanna kill myself when you mapped like this, even though you want to make some challenge here by changing the LNs here, it's really too overwhelming and players might just alternate 12 34 12 34 all the way and lose combo here, please do make this 12 34 12 34 consistent, it plays much better and it's more fun imo
01:14:269 (74269|0,74369|1,74470|2,74571|3) - wow please don't do this, end the LN at a specific sound, I really hate this weird LN ending mechanism in mania, make it easier to get 300g and people would be more happy
01:13:463 (73463|2,73564|1,73665|0) - Same here, i would suggest to make these 1/4 long only, I really don't like these extending LN mapping, just because it looks nice and it fits the music doesn't mean that players would like this.
01:15:477 (75477|1) - Make this 1/2 long pls, having the LN there makes the playing of the hammers 01:16:182 (76182|0,76282|0) - 100% more awkward, prioritise making the map more enjoyable instead of making it more correct
01:56:349 (116349|2,116450|1,116450|0) - Sometimes i really want to go and kill someone.
01:58:564 (118564|0,118665|2,118765|1) - I'm abit serious
02:02:188 (122188|0,122390|2,122390|3,122490|2,122591|0,122591|1,122692|0,122792|3,122792|1) - omg copy pasta, jk i would prefer if you switch up some hammers here and there in this pattern so that it doesn't look the same as previous
02:15:880 - where piano
02:25:443 (145443|2,145846|2,146249|2,146651|2) - wow please, remove this asap, it's really hard to time these notes right to get 300g, you are mapping to non-important sound effects imo
02:27:457 (147457|2,147557|1,147658|2,147759|1,147859|2,147960|0,148061|3,148161|0,148262|3) - Please don't alternating hand straight off the bat, use a more calming pattern, then slowly build up the momentum by using more intense patterns
02:39:739 (159739|2,159839|1,159940|3) - I would suggest to just remove these, it creates a break for the player to prepare themselves for the more intense section
03:12:255 - I would suggest to remove the blue line notes here, it's way too intense for the breakdown of the music

Otherwise, really creative 4K map, even though you introduced different elements that most maps don't have, you managed to make it interesting and nice to play, good work here

[Hard]

00:23:128 (23128|0,23329|0) - I would suggest to keep hammers on 1/2 here consistent, thus you might want to hammer 00:24:739 (24739|1,24940|0) - and you can fix most of this thing here

00:29:168 (29168|1,29369|2) - Same as insane you don't need the LN end here and the note, it helps to emphasize the clap
00:44:067 - I'm not sure about hammering all the way, I myself would prefer the "Insane" diff mapping style here, if people can't hammer well, they would be using all of their stamina here trying to get chords, probably try to not hammer all the way here, hammer only on certain sounds will make it much more confortable instead of spamming hammers
01:13:866 (73866|2,73933|1,74000|0) - Why is this snapping different from insane?

This section is rather weird :
01:31:383 (91383|3,91383|0,91584|1,91584|2) - idk why but there's no hammer at some points which makes the intensity of the map rather inconsistent, similarly, I would suggest to not hammer all the way here might want to recheck the map for these kind of inconsistencies

02:15:880 - Same as Insane piano pls

02:25:443 (145443|2,145846|2,146249|2,146651|2) - Same as insane, this is really unneeded, keep the chart clean

02:39:135 - Why not just add a note here and remove the LN here, it follows the vocals

Overally, it looks okay, i don't really like the fact that some hammers are inconsistent and they may be too intense for Hard if used continuously

[Etlie's Normal]

01:42:859 (102859|2) - I would suggest to 1/2 the length here, it will make the emphasis of the clap greater
01:53:631 (113631|1,113732|3,113933|0,114034|2,114235|1,114336|0,114437|2,114537|3) - wow ok this is going to be cancer for Normal players, I would 100% prefer if you would just 1/4 everything here instead of doublets
02:22:322 (142322|1) - Change this to a LN since you are mapping this synth together with 02:22:624 (142624|0,142926|1,143531|2) -
02:37:121 (157121|1,157222|0,157423|1,157524|2,157725|1,157826|2,157926|1,158027|2) - Similarly, this will be really hard to read for Normal players due to the 1/4 patterning here 02:37:121 (157121|1) - I would suggest to move this down by 1/4 so as to reduce the 1/4, the other notes idk, try to come up with a rhythm that is more simple
02:50:007 (170007|1) - Move this down by 1/4, same problem as ^
02:50:510 - Add here too, so as to solve ^
03:02:893 (182893|0) - Move down 1/4 same thing ^
03:09:034 - Add another note here? Since there's a finisher here, it would be good if it's more notes than the rest 03:09:839 (189839|2,189839|3) - . OR you can just remove one note each from the rest.
Fubukicat

lZenxl wrote:

Hi, very honest mod here, i might rage and shit

and note that THERE IS NO SARCARSM HERE


[Etlie's Normal]

01:42:859 (102859|2) - I would suggest to 1/2 the length here, it will make the emphasis of the clap greater
01:53:631 (113631|1,113732|3,113933|0,114034|2,114235|1,114336|0,114437|2,114537|3) - wow ok this is going to be cancer for Normal players, I would 100% prefer if you would just 1/4 everything here instead of doublets
02:22:322 (142322|1) - Change this to a LN since you are mapping this synth together with 02:22:624 (142624|0,142926|1,143531|2) -
02:37:121 (157121|1,157222|0,157423|1,157524|2,157725|1,157826|2,157926|1,158027|2) - Similarly, this will be really hard to read for Normal players due to the 1/4 patterning here 02:37:121 (157121|1) - I would suggest to move this down by 1/4 so as to reduce the 1/4, the other notes idk, try to come up with a rhythm that is more simple
02:50:007 (170007|1) - Move this down by 1/4, same problem as ^
02:50:510 - Add here too, so as to solve ^
03:02:893 (182893|0) - Move down 1/4 same thing ^
03:09:034 - Add another note here? Since there's a finisher here, it would be good if it's more notes than the rest 03:09:839 (189839|2,189839|3) - . OR you can just remove one note each from the rest.
HAI Zen'pai or Zen-chan or the other one ;w; Thx for mod >w<b Applied all since welp I have nothing to disagree so thanks again :3/
Topic Starter
Arzenvald

lZenxl wrote:

Hi, very honest mod here, i might rage and shit

and note that THERE IS NO SARCARSM HERE // i love you your mods.. <3

[General]

Personally, I'm not a fan of maps with lower than 7.5 HP, it's really hard to die. // lol indeed, hp 8 is somehow easy tho..
I'm pretty sure you are capable of doing a simple SB here, it will look cooler // will manage to make the SB later.. `-`

[Insane]

Somewhat a unique way of naming, idk how to feel about that but it fits the theme of the music, please don't change to some Lv. 19749274 shit, it doesn't fit this, it feels like some SDVX crap // i wont, it's not gonna be relevant at all (because i really have no idea how to compute the Lv.xx naming.. haha

First things first, really nice hitsounding, i love it.

00:29:369 (29369|2) - idk why you would need a note here though, it feels unneeded, oh, and shorten this LN if you have done that 00:29:168 (29168|1) -
This helps to emphasize the clap here, in which i highly think that this is rather nice in the music // removed, and yea, done.

00:29:571 - You could use a 0.9-0.95x SV here, it doesn't affect the gameplay much but it gives a nice visual slowdown effect if you get what i mean
00:31:182 - ^ Revert to 1.0 here // done

00:37:020 (37020|2,37088|3,37155|2,37222|1) - Hmm, a brave patterning here, i like it, you gave enough time for players to notice the 1/6s also, nice execution // lewd thanks

00:43:262 - I like this pattern here, it's a tad bit overwhelming though imo, considering the diff spike here // aiae v2.0 :v not overkill though... will consider to change if that's really matter

00:50:309 (50309|0,50309|1,50410|3,50410|2,50510|3,50510|1,50510|0) - I would recommend to Ctrl + H this, since even though it's split with 00:50:108 (50108|3,50108|2) - players might hit the next 2 notes too early thinking that it is constant 1/4s // done.. :3

01:11:047 (71047|2,71047|3,71148|0,71148|1,71249|2,71349|0,71349|3) - I cringed and i wanna kill myself when you mapped like this, even though you want to make some challenge here by changing the LNs here, it's really too overwhelming and players might just alternate 12 34 12 34 all the way and lose combo here, please do make this 12 34 12 34 consistent, it plays much better and it's more fun imo // ahahaha.. xD thanks for mention this one dude.. we need more modders who really seek 'how pattern affect the gameplay' instead the technical and boring technical.. (no sarcasm, just blunt)

01:14:269 (74269|0,74369|1,74470|2,74571|3) - wow please don't do this, end the LN at a specific sound, I really hate this weird LN ending mechanism in mania, make it easier to get 300g and people would be more happy // don't worry, i know people will try more harder & retry to get 300g, but i saw MasterSanic10 300g this part.. :3 will consider later if this really matter

01:13:463 (73463|2,73564|1,73665|0) - Same here, i would suggest to make these 1/4 long only, I really don't like these extending LN mapping, just because it looks nice and it fits the music doesn't mean that players would like this. // hmm.. i got the point... but since it's 'Insane', i shouldn't give player 'Hard' destiny.. :3 will consider to change later..

01:15:477 (75477|1) - Make this 1/2 long pls, having the LN there makes the playing of the hammers 01:16:182 (76182|0,76282|0) - 100% more awkward, prioritise making the map more enjoyable instead of making it more correct // shorten to 1/1, and removed the jack.. geez thanks for mention this one..

01:56:349 (116349|2,116450|1,116450|0) - Sometimes i really want to go and kill someone. // awkawkawkawkwkwk.. vice versa dude, move your brain.. :v (fixed)
01:58:564 (118564|0,118665|2,118765|1) - I'm abit serious // please don't kill me.. :v
02:02:188 (122188|0,122390|2,122390|3,122490|2,122591|0,122591|1,122692|0,122792|3,122792|1) - omg copy pasta, jk i would prefer if you switch up some hammers here and there in this pattern so that it doesn't look the same as previous // hammer done, pattern rearranged done
02:15:880 - where piano // mmm.. no piano, indeed.. .-. consider to remove this later if it's really matter

02:25:443 (145443|2,145846|2,146249|2,146651|2) - wow please, remove this asap, it's really hard to time these notes right to get 300g, you are mapping to non-important sound effects imo // lol sure thing, though i will lost the taste of 'failing 300g' /me runs
02:27:457 (147457|2,147557|1,147658|2,147759|1,147859|2,147960|0,148061|3,148161|0,148262|3) - Please don't alternating hand straight off the bat, use a more calming pattern, then slowly build up the momentum by using more intense patterns // yea, i was considered about that at the first time map this part..

02:39:739 (159739|2,159839|1,159940|3) - I would suggest to just remove these, it creates a break for the player to prepare themselves for the more intense section // filled by last mod suggestion, and removed agan.. :v ahahahaha.. xD

03:12:255 - I would suggest to remove the blue line notes here, it's way too intense for the breakdown of the music // -,- please zenx.. no change.. :v

Otherwise, really creative 4K map, even though you introduced different elements that most maps don't have, you managed to make it interesting and nice to play, good work here // <3 thanks

[Hard]

00:23:128 (23128|0,23329|0) - I would suggest to keep hammers on 1/2 here consistent, thus you might want to hammer 00:24:739 (24739|1,24940|0) - and you can fix most of this thing here // ok i feel it feels more neat than before

00:29:168 (29168|1,29369|2) - Same as insane you don't need the LN end here and the note, it helps to emphasize the clap
00:44:067 - I'm not sure about hammering all the way, I myself would prefer the "Insane" diff mapping style here, if people can't hammer well, they would be using all of their stamina here trying to get chords, probably try to not hammer all the way here, hammer only on certain sounds will make it much more confortable instead of spamming hammers // hmm... you got the point.. reducing some part won't hurt.. x3
01:13:866 (73866|2,73933|1,74000|0) - Why is this snapping different from insane? // oh i haven't fix that.. orz silly me

This section is rather weird :
01:31:383 (91383|3,91383|0,91584|1,91584|2) - idk why but there's no hammer at some points which makes the intensity of the map rather inconsistent, similarly, I would suggest to not hammer all the way here might want to recheck the map for these kind of inconsistencies // lel will do

02:15:880 - Same as Insane piano pls // no change.. .-. it's for cymba, and piano solo opening

02:25:443 (145443|2,145846|2,146249|2,146651|2) - Same as insane, this is really unneeded, keep the chart clean

02:39:135 - Why not just add a note here and remove the LN here, it follows the vocals // hmm.. nice idea

Overally, it looks okay, i don't really like the fact that some hammers are inconsistent and they may be too intense for Hard if used continuously // ^^; i know, hehehe... thanks

[Etlie's Normal]

01:42:859 (102859|2) - I would suggest to 1/2 the length here, it will make the emphasis of the clap greater
01:53:631 (113631|1,113732|3,113933|0,114034|2,114235|1,114336|0,114437|2,114537|3) - wow ok this is going to be cancer for Normal players, I would 100% prefer if you would just 1/4 everything here instead of doublets
02:22:322 (142322|1) - Change this to a LN since you are mapping this synth together with 02:22:624 (142624|0,142926|1,143531|2) -
02:37:121 (157121|1,157222|0,157423|1,157524|2,157725|1,157826|2,157926|1,158027|2) - Similarly, this will be really hard to read for Normal players due to the 1/4 patterning here 02:37:121 (157121|1) - I would suggest to move this down by 1/4 so as to reduce the 1/4, the other notes idk, try to come up with a rhythm that is more simple
02:50:007 (170007|1) - Move this down by 1/4, same problem as ^
02:50:510 - Add here too, so as to solve ^
03:02:893 (182893|0) - Move down 1/4 same thing ^
03:09:034 - Add another note here? Since there's a finisher here, it would be good if it's more notes than the rest 03:09:839 (189839|2,189839|3) - . OR you can just remove one note each from the rest.
thanks zenpai.. <3
Ichigaki
Just request from ExUsagi from #osumania 'w'

[Etlie's Normal]
  1. 01:03:396 (63396|0,63396|1,63799|2,63799|3,64202|1,64202|0) - Just give it one-note. It same with 01:02:188 (62188|1,62591|3,62994|2) - , but they have piano (?)
  2. 01:09:638 (69638|1) - If you give a note here, you must add a note in 01:09:235 - because it's follow up the vocal instead. Maybe remove it you don't want follow the vocal
  3. 01:27:155 - and 01:27:960 - Add a note to follow your last pattern (i mean the main beat)
  4. 01:48:497 (108497|2,108497|0,108900|0,108900|3,109302|1,109302|3) - Same with my first mod
  5. 01:59:772 - 02:14:269 - If you follow the 'melody' (whatever its name), i'd be better if you follow it all the way, but up to you
  6. 02:22:322 (142322|1) - Change to 3/4 LN. It has same sound that you follow on 02:22:624 (142624|0,142926|1) -
  7. 02:50:510 - There's a drum beat here. Try to rearrange the pattern maybe.
  8. 02:52:725 (172725|2,172926|1) - Move 1 column left to make better pattern, i guess
  9. 03:04:202 - 03:05:812 - Just not suitable for normal. Try to remap those part
  10. 03:24:336 (204336|0,204739|1,204940|2) - Better if you're change it to normal note
Sorry if it's bad :)
Fubukicat

ichia7x wrote:

Just request from ExUsagi from #osumania 'w'

[Etlie's Normal]
  1. 01:03:396 (63396|0,63396|1,63799|2,63799|3,64202|1,64202|0) - Just give it one-note. It same with 01:02:188 (62188|1,62591|3,62994|2) - , but they have piano (?)
  2. 01:09:638 (69638|1) - If you give a note here, you must add a note in 01:09:235 - because it's follow up the vocal instead. Maybe remove it you don't want follow the vocal okay removed
  3. 01:27:155 - and 01:27:960 - Add a note to follow your last pattern (i mean the main beat)
  4. 01:48:497 (108497|2,108497|0,108900|0,108900|3,109302|1,109302|3) - Same with my first mod
  5. 01:59:772 - 02:14:269 - If you follow the 'melody' (whatever its name), i'd be better if you follow it all the way, but up to you
  6. 02:22:322 (142322|1) - Change to 3/4 LN. It has same sound that you follow on 02:22:624 (142624|0,142926|1) -
  7. 02:50:510 - There's a drum beat here. Try to rearrange the pattern maybe.
  8. 02:52:725 (172725|2,172926|1) - Move 1 column left to make better pattern, i guess
  9. 03:04:202 - 03:05:812 - Just not suitable for normal. Try to remap those part Changed to 1/2 them reverse stair 1/4
  10. 03:24:336 (204336|0,204739|1,204940|2) - Better if you're change it to normal note
Sorry if it's bad :)

Thx for mod Ichia :3/ no awnser mean I can't complain so it's ok :DD
Don't worry a mod can't be bad :p i know it i'm the worst modder ever xD
Topic Starter
Arzenvald

Eternalie wrote:

ichia7x wrote:

Just request from ExUsagi from #osumania 'w'

[Etlie's Normal]
  1. 01:03:396 (63396|0,63396|1,63799|2,63799|3,64202|1,64202|0) - Just give it one-note. It same with 01:02:188 (62188|1,62591|3,62994|2) - , but they have piano (?)
  2. 01:09:638 (69638|1) - If you give a note here, you must add a note in 01:09:235 - because it's follow up the vocal instead. Maybe remove it you don't want follow the vocal okay removed
  3. 01:27:155 - and 01:27:960 - Add a note to follow your last pattern (i mean the main beat)
  4. 01:48:497 (108497|2,108497|0,108900|0,108900|3,109302|1,109302|3) - Same with my first mod
  5. 01:59:772 - 02:14:269 - If you follow the 'melody' (whatever its name), i'd be better if you follow it all the way, but up to you
  6. 02:22:322 (142322|1) - Change to 3/4 LN. It has same sound that you follow on 02:22:624 (142624|0,142926|1) -
  7. 02:50:510 - There's a drum beat here. Try to rearrange the pattern maybe.
  8. 02:52:725 (172725|2,172926|1) - Move 1 column left to make better pattern, i guess
  9. 03:04:202 - 03:05:812 - Just not suitable for normal. Try to remap those part Changed to 1/2 them reverse stair 1/4
  10. 03:24:336 (204336|0,204739|1,204940|2) - Better if you're change it to normal note
Sorry if it's bad :)

Thx for mod Ichia :3/ no awnser mean I can't complain so it's ok :DD
Don't worry a mod can't be bad :p i know it i'm the worst modder ever xD

thanks guys! ok, this map is ready now.. =_=
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