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Suzuki Konomi - CHOIR JAIL (TV Size) [OsuMania]

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Blizs
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Mysticalia
Random mod because I kinda like the song~

Mod~
Columns - 0/1/2/3


[AImod / BPM / Offset / Timing / Setup:]
  1. HP8 / OD8 on EZ? Don't torture the beginners please XD - HP6 / OD7 is probably enough.
  2. Take off the "4K" from the difficulties unless you plan to add in a different key later.
  3. AIMod - File missing (MX difficulty)
  4. OMG YOUR VIDEO <3
[EZ]
  1. 00:10:871 - End the LN at 00:13:192? (Pattern break since your LNs have lasted for 7 beats so far)
  2. 00:23:136 / 00:23:799 - Add a note to the end of the LNs? (Since you end your LNs with a normal note in this section, so it feels a bit weird not having one)
  3. 01:12:860 - LN is kinda imbalanced - make this into a normal note and make 01:13:192 into an LN (ending at 01:13:523) instead?
[Burger's 4K HD]
  1. 00:00:264 / 01:19:822 - Add one for drum-ish sound?
  2. Start of every LN from 00:16:175 to 00:18:330 - Drum-ish sound as well as guitar - add one?
  3. 00:34:739 - Yes - it is fun to play, but I'm not sure if the stream lasts for this long. This is different from the stream at 00:37:391 because you can actually hear the drums doing a stream at that point. Also, the cymbal here could use some extra emphasis too?
  4. 01:11:866 - Start of new vocal phrase - so your LN seems to be "overflowing"- change to normal note?
  5. 01:16:341 - Double might be overdoing it since I don't hear much of a sound here (but yeah, something's here though) - delete one?
[4K MX]
  1. No kiai?
  2. 00:13:192 - Change the LN to a normal note since I think the LN here is following vocal, but then suddenly switches to guitar?
  3. 00:15:015 - Delete one? (refer to 00:14:518 / 00:13:523 where the pattern is (single note -> single note+LN)
  4. 00:34:076 - Add one? (Same sound as 00:33:910)
  5. 00:49:234 to 00:50:319 - Maybe use LNs to follow the vocal so it sorta balances 00:46:672 to 00:47:677 - so make the LN at 00:49:234 / 00:49:656 into two?
  6. 00:48:661 - Add one (refer to 00:47:335)
  7. 01:03:081 - Move this LN to 01:02:915? Your pattern kinda gets imbalanced because of this (switch to following vocal feels a bit random?)
  8. 01:05:567 - Add one (same sound as 01:04:241 / 01:04:904)?
  9. 01:06:893 / 01:09:545 - These sound the same as 01:07:556 / 01:08:219 etc - delete one?
  10. 01:09:877 - No cymbal here - delete one?
  11. 01:10:208 - Pattern break? (move to 01:09:877 so your pattern repeats 6 times instead of 5 (since this music is based on phrases of 3 or 4 beats so you want something which is a multiple of 2, 3 or 4 when you're repeating patterns (depending on the section ofc))
  12. 01:12:860 to 01:14:518: I feel your LNs are a bit mistimed and can probably fit the music better if you:
    1. Make the LNs at 01:12:860 and 01:14:186 into normal notes, then
    2. Make 01:13:855 (73855|0) into an LN until 01:14:186 (might have to move some notes at 01:14:186)?
    3. Reasoning - so the LNs follow vocal better, which is what you seem to be trying to do for this section. (the "e" in "kanata e" is held for 3 beats which is represented by the three linking LNs, while "ta" isn't really as emphasised (as represented by the normal note instead of an LN)). Same reasoning for 01:14:186 - the LN represents the more emphasised vocal part). This also gives some sense of balance to this section. (I need to phrase this better... this explanation sounds kinda confusing :S)
    4. 01:15:512 - Make the LN into a normal note? (section ends at 01:15:844 so technically this should still be following vocal - but again it's not as emphasised as some of the other vocal parts in this section so maybe a normal note would be enough)
    5. 01:17:501 - Delete one? Not much in the music here.
    6. 01:19:822 - I'm not sure if using double LNs here is good since the music ends really abruptly. I feel that it'll suit the mood of the music better to just have a triple here instead of two LNs and a normal note?

Good luck~
Topic Starter
Blizs

Mysticalia wrote:

Random mod because I kinda like the song~

Mod~
Columns - 0/1/2/3


[AImod / BPM / Offset / Timing / Setup:]
  1. HP8 / OD8 on EZ? Don't torture the beginners please XD - HP6 / OD7 is probably enough.
  2. Take off the "4K" from the difficulties unless you plan to add in a different key later.
  3. AIMod - File missing (MX difficulty)
  4. OMG YOUR VIDEO <3
[EZ]
  1. 00:10:871 - End the LN at 00:13:192? (Pattern break since your LNs have lasted for 7 beats so far)
  2. 00:23:136 / 00:23:799 - Add a note to the end of the LNs? (Since you end your LNs with a normal note in this section, so it feels a bit weird not having one)
  3. 01:12:860 - LN is kinda imbalanced - make this into a normal note and make 01:13:192 into an LN (ending at 01:13:523) instead?
[Burger's 4K HD]
  1. 00:00:264 / 01:19:822 - Add one for drum-ish sound?
  2. Start of every LN from 00:16:175 to 00:18:330 - Drum-ish sound as well as guitar - add one?
  3. 00:34:739 - Yes - it is fun to play, but I'm not sure if the stream lasts for this long. This is different from the stream at 00:37:391 because you can actually hear the drums doing a stream at that point. Also, the cymbal here could use some extra emphasis too?
  4. 01:11:866 - Start of new vocal phrase - so your LN seems to be "overflowing"- change to normal note?
  5. 01:16:341 - Double might be overdoing it since I don't hear much of a sound here (but yeah, something's here though) - delete one?
[4K MX]
  1. No kiai?
  2. 00:13:192 - Change the LN to a normal note since I think the LN here is following vocal, but then suddenly switches to guitar?
  3. 00:15:015 - Delete one? (refer to 00:14:518 / 00:13:523 where the pattern is (single note -> single note+LN)
  4. 00:34:076 - Add one? (Same sound as 00:33:910)
  5. 00:49:234 to 00:50:319 - Maybe use LNs to follow the vocal so it sorta balances 00:46:672 to 00:47:677 - so make the LN at 00:49:234 / 00:49:656 into two?
  6. 00:48:661 - Add one (refer to 00:47:335)
  7. 01:03:081 - Move this LN to 01:02:915? Your pattern kinda gets imbalanced because of this (switch to following vocal feels a bit random?)
  8. 01:05:567 - Add one (same sound as 01:04:241 / 01:04:904)?
  9. 01:06:893 / 01:09:545 - These sound the same as 01:07:556 / 01:08:219 etc - delete one?
  10. 01:09:877 - No cymbal here - delete one?
  11. 01:10:208 - Pattern break? (move to 01:09:877 so your pattern repeats 6 times instead of 5 (since this music is based on phrases of 3 or 4 beats so you want something which is a multiple of 2, 3 or 4 when you're repeating patterns (depending on the section ofc))
  12. 01:12:860 to 01:14:518: I feel your LNs are a bit mistimed and can probably fit the music better if you:
    1. Make the LNs at 01:12:860 and 01:14:186 into normal notes, then
    2. Make 01:13:855 (73855|0) into an LN until 01:14:186 (might have to move some notes at 01:14:186)?
    3. Reasoning - so the LNs follow vocal better, which is what you seem to be trying to do for this section. (the "e" in "kanata e" is held for 3 beats which is represented by the three linking LNs, while "ta" isn't really as emphasised (as represented by the normal note instead of an LN)). Same reasoning for 01:14:186 - the LN represents the more emphasised vocal part). This also gives some sense of balance to this section. (I need to phrase this better... this explanation sounds kinda confusing :S)
    4. 01:15:512 - Make the LN into a normal note? (section ends at 01:15:844 so technically this should still be following vocal - but again it's not as emphasised as some of the other vocal parts in this section so maybe a normal note would be enough)
    5. 01:17:501 - Delete one? Not much in the music here.
    6. 01:19:822 - I'm not sure if using double LNs here is good since the music ends really abruptly. I feel that it'll suit the mood of the music better to just have a triple here instead of two LNs and a normal note?

Good luck~
Thanks for your mod
that's help me
here take my kudos
and sorry for late answer :D
if something wrong about my change with your mod you can post again :v

Note*
I won't take off the 4K from every diff because I wait for 7K GD or I'll create 2 7K diffs :3
my english is bad so Please don't kill me T.T
Kawawa
hello :)
I think..

4K MX
00:32:418 - note 1add
00:35:567 - 1add
00:35:899 - 1add
00:36:396 - 1add
00:37:059 - 1add
00:37:722 - 1add
00:38:219 - 1add
00:38:551 - ^same
00:39:048 - ^
00:39:711 - ^
00:40:382 - ^
00:40:871 - ^
00:41:203 - ^
00:41:700 - ^
00:42:363 - ^
00:43:026 - ^
00:43:523 - ^
00:43:855 - ^
00:44:352 - ^
00:44:683 - ^
00:50:982 - ^
00:51:479 - ^
00:51:810 - ^
00:52:142 - ^
00:52:473 - ^
00:52:639 - ^

Good luck :)
Topic Starter
Blizs

KawaEE wrote:

hello :)
I think..

4K MX
00:32:418 - note 1add
00:35:567 - 1add
00:35:899 - 1add
00:36:396 - 1add
00:37:059 - 1add
00:37:722 - 1add
00:38:219 - 1add
00:38:551 - ^same
00:39:048 - ^
00:39:711 - ^
00:40:382 - ^
00:40:871 - ^
00:41:203 - ^
00:41:700 - ^
00:42:363 - ^
00:43:026 - ^
00:43:523 - ^
00:43:855 - ^
00:44:352 - ^
00:44:683 - ^
00:50:982 - ^
00:51:479 - ^
00:51:810 - ^
00:52:142 - ^
00:52:473 - ^
00:52:639 - ^

Good luck :)
Okay, Mod Accepted ~~~~
:3
aftter I change with your Mod and listen to the song....
I
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Something :D :v
Fatfan Kolek
Heeey, I recommend to flip the background horizontal for the sake of style! :3
Look: http://puu.sh/cbCvw/c5b276372f.jpg

The girl is at the moment completely covered. :<
I hope you understand this and good luck with this mapset! o/
Topic Starter
Blizs

Fatfan Kolek wrote:

Heeey, I recommend to flip the background horizontal for the sake of style! :3
Look: http://puu.sh/cbCvw/c5b276372f.jpg

The girl is at the moment completely covered. :<
I hope you understand this and good luck with this mapset! o/
yeah I see....
In the lobby we can't see her
but, try to play it...
if I flip horizontal, we can't see her
what should I do T.T
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