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Snowy Heart
Hi,Nardo~我来mod拉~ No kd 我先mod 了三个~后两个要稍等!不好意思哈~
音乐好评!

开始mod~
K,k=Big and small blue
D, d=Big and small red

General:OK

Kantan:
00:29:514 (44,46) - change to k?
00:32:304 (48,50) - change to d?
00:42:246 - add d?
01:33:700 (151,153) - same as 44,46
01:36:490 (155,157) - same as 48,50
01:46:432 - add d?
02:28:293 - add d?follow 248,249 250,251?
02:36:490 (259,261) - change to K?

Futsuu:
00:22:537 - add d?
02:28:293 - add k?
02:28:642 - ^

Jik"s Muzukashii:
00:01:781 (4) - change to k?
00:04:571 (14) - ^
00:26:549 (78,80) - change to k d
00:27:246 (82,83) - change to k
00:58:816 (239) - change to k?
01:30:560 (74,84) - change to this?http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2202953
02:03:002 (238) - change to k?
And can Jik's mod this map?https://osu.ppy.sh/b/490632&m=1

NC‘’s Oni
00:55:677 (303) - change to k?
01:07:711 (376) - change to k?
01:59:252 (680) - change to d? or 01:59:165 (679) - change to k?
02:57:159 (1033) - change to d?
And can NC's mod this map?https://osu.ppy.sh/b/490632&m=1

Oni
00:24:804 (101) - change to k?
00:27:072 - add d?
00:44:339 (202) - change to K?
01:10:153 (359) - change to D?
01:58:816 (622,623,624) - same as 625 626 627?
02:14:339 (723) - change to D?
02:28:816 (787) - change to K?
03:12:770 (1033,1034) - change to D K?
Icing_wind
Very good this map :oops:
I like this song ;)
Taiko Mod
[General]

D (Big don)
d (don)
K (Big kat)
k (kat)

[Kantan]

00:10:502 (12) - change to d

good

[Futsuu]

01:29:339 (215,216,217) - ddk

02:38:932 (397) - change to k

[Jik's Muzukashii]

00:08:932 (10) - delete

00:08:235 (6,7,8,9) - dkdd

00:09:107 (1) - change to d

00:19:572 (48,49,50,51,52) - dkdd k

00:37:363 (137) - change to k

02:01:083 (228) - change to d

[NC's Oni]

00:20:270 (98,99,100) - ddk

00:44:688 (238,239) - change to DK

00:59:950 (328) - change to d

01:49:921 (622,623) - change to d

[Oni]

good
好图好图
Topic Starter
Nardoxyribonucleic

Snowy Heart wrote:

Hi,Nardo~我来mod拉~ No kd 我先mod 了三个~后两个要稍等!不好意思哈~
音乐好评!

开始mod~
K,k=Big and small blue
D, d=Big and small red

General:OK

Kantan:
00:29:514 (44,46) - change to k?d would be easier because of the fewer switching of colours.
00:32:304 (48,50) - change to d?similar to ^ , k would be better.
00:42:246 - add d?I prefer a longer break after the big note at 00:41:549 (61) -
01:33:700 (151,153) - same as 44,46 same as above
01:36:490 (155,157) - same as 48,50 same as above
01:46:432 - add d?same as 00:42:246 -
02:28:293 - add d?follow 248,249 250,251? ^
02:36:490 (259,261) - change to K? no change because of the similar vocal pitch.

Futsuu:
00:22:537 - add d? fixed
02:28:293 - add k? A break here could serve as a buffer for the next patterns starting from 02:28:816 to 02:33:002 -
02:28:642 - ^ ^

Oni
00:24:804 (101) - change to k? retained for pattern consistency as 00:19:223 (76) -
00:27:072 - add d? The current spacing could result in a better flow imo.
00:44:339 (202) - change to K? D could suit the music and mark the end of the extended vocal.
01:10:153 (359) - change to D? I think d would be enough since the sound is not so loud.
01:58:816 (622,623,624) - same as 625 626 627? 01:59:165 (625) - has a prominent snare sound while 01:58:816 (622) - does not have.
02:14:339 (723) - change to D? same as 01:10:153 (359) -
02:28:816 (787) - change to K? D would be fine since the vocal pitch becomes lower.
03:12:770 (1033,1034) - change to D K? Umm... A bit overemphasized if I change this.
Thanks for your mod~ :)

Icing_wind wrote:

Very good this map :oops:
I like this song ;)
Taiko Mod
[General]

D (Big don)
d (don)
K (Big kat)
k (kat)

[Kantan]

00:10:502 (12) - change to d I followed the snare there.

good

[Futsuu]

01:29:339 (215,216,217) - ddk Again, k k d could follow the snares nicely.

02:38:932 (397) - change to k Nope, the vocal pitch is the same as 02:38:758 (397,399) -

[Oni]

good
好图好图
Thanks for your mod and comment~ :)
-xNaCLx-
Snowy Heaty

Snowy Heart wrote:

Hi,Nardo~我来mod拉~ No kd 我先mod 了三个~后两个要稍等!不好意思哈~
音乐好评!

开始mod~
K,k=Big and small blue
D, d=Big and small red

General:OK

NC‘’s Oni
00:55:677 (303) - change to k? //i personally love d more.
01:07:711 (376) - change to k? //no notable sound, imo d would be better
01:59:252 (680) - change to d? or 01:59:165 (679) - change to k? //umm.. not sure if i wanted to change that.
02:57:159 (1033) - change to d? //i kept this pattern in the whole song, and the reason for that is to avoid repeating pattern.
And can NC's mod this map?https://osu.ppy.sh/b/490632&m=1 may take a look at it if i am free :)
Icing_wind

Icing_wind wrote:

Very good this map :oops:
I like this song ;)
[General]

D (Big don)
d (don)
K (Big kat)
k (kat)

[NC's Oni]

00:20:270 (98,99,100) - ddk //98 expresses a different feeling with 97 so i would keep this kkd.

00:44:688 (238,239) - change to DK //but they're not hard at all, only vocal.

00:59:950 (328) - change to d //kkd would fit imo

01:49:921 (622,623) - change to d //i used this k()k k k pattern in the whole song..

good
好图好图

thanks for mod :)
rew0825
Hi from my mod requeue :)

[ Kantan]
  1. 01:31:432 (148,149) - ctrl+g

[ Futsuu]
  1. 00:48:874 (115,116) - ctrl+g
  2. 01:00:037 (146,147) - ctrl+g
  3. 01:53:060 (280,281) - ctrl+g
  4. 02:04:223 (313,314) - ctrl+g
  5. 02:50:270 (434,435) - ctrl+g

[ Jik's Muzukashii]
  1. 00:07:014 (2,3) - ctrl+g , 00:07:537 (4,5) - k k
  2. 00:08:932 (10) - Delete
  3. 00:09:456 (11) - d
  4. 00:09:717 (12) - Delete
  5. 00:11:723 (20) - Delete
  6. 00:14:514 (30) - Delete
  7. 00:26:025 (71) - Delete
  8. 00:26:549 (73) - k
  9. 00:26:723 (74) - Delete
  10. 00:27:421 (77) - k
  11. 00:27:595 (78) - Delete
  12. 00:29:165 (85) - Delete
  13. 00:30:560 (92) - Delete
  14. 00:31:432 (95) - k
  15. 00:31:956 (98) - Delete
  16. 00:33:177 (104) - d
  17. 00:33:351 (105) - Delete
  18. 00:34:746 (111) - Delete
  19. 00:36:142 (118) - Delete
  20. 00:38:932 (132) - Delete
  21. 00:46:258 (161) - k
  22. 00:46:956 (178) - Delete
  23. 00:47:653 (181) - k
  24. 00:49:921 (191) - move to 00:49:746
  25. 00:50:706 (194) - Delete , 00:50:967 (195,196,197) - kkk
  26. 00:54:281 (212) - k
  27. 00:54:630 (214) - Delete
  28. 00:57:072 (227) - Delete
  29. 00:58:467 (233) - Delete
  30. 01:01:084 (244) - move to 01:00:909
  31. 01:01:868 (247) - Delete , 01:02:130 (248,249,250) - kkk
  32. 01:13:118 (10) - Delete
  33. 01:13:903 (12) - Delete
  34. 01:15:909 (20) - Delete
  35. 01:18:700 (30) - Delete
  36. 01:30:211 (68) - Delete
  37. 01:30:735 (70) - k , 01:30:909 (71) - Delete
  38. 01:31:607 (74) - k
  39. 01:31:781 (75) - Delete
  40. 01:33:351 (82) - Delete
  41. 01:34:746 (89) - Delete
  42. 01:36:142 (96) - Delete
  43. 01:37:537 (103) - Delete
  44. 01:38:932 (109) - Delete
  45. 01:40:328 (116) - Delete
  46. 01:43:118 (130) - Delete
  47. 01:51:490 (165) - Delete
  48. 01:54:892 (179) - Delete , 01:55:153 (180,181,182) - kkk
  49. 01:58:467 (197) - Delete
  50. 01:59:165 (200) - Delete
  51. 02:01:258 (211) - Delete
  52. 02:02:653 (217) - Delete
  53. 02:06:054 (231) - Delete
  54. 02:06:316 (232,233,234) - kkk
  55. 02:15:909 (280) - Delete
  56. 02:16:607 (283) - Delete
  57. 02:18:700 (294) - Delete
  58. 02:21:491 (309) - Delete
  59. 02:22:188 (312) - Delete
  60. 02:23:932 (321) - Delete
  61. 02:26:025 (332) - Delete
  62. 02:44:863 (399) - Delete
  63. 02:45:909 (404) - move to 02:46:084
  64. 02:48:700 (417) - Delete
  65. 02:51:316 (428) - move to 02:51:142
  66. 02:52:101 (431) - Delete , 02:52:363 (432,433,434) - kkk
  67. 03:03:351 (10) - Delete
  68. 03:04:136 (12) - Delete
  69. 03:06:142 (20) - Delete
  70. 03:11:549 (38,39,40,41,42) - kkkkk

Oni , NC's Oni I can skip? , I'm think it's Good :)

Good luck :)
Topic Starter
Nardoxyribonucleic

rew0825 wrote:

Hi from my mod requeue :)

[ Kantan]
  1. 01:31:432 (148,149) - ctrl+g fixed

[ Futsuu]
  1. 00:48:874 (115,116) - ctrl+g I followed the snare there.
  2. 01:00:037 (146,147) - ctrl+g ^
  3. 01:53:060 (280,281) - ctrl+g ^
  4. 02:04:223 (313,314) - ctrl+g ^
  5. 02:50:270 (434,435) - ctrl+g ^

Oni , NC's Oni I can skip? , I'm think it's Good :)

Good luck :)
Thanks for your mod~ :)
tina71129
嗨~ 因為貪玩所以延誤了幾天www 接下來的mod可能是非人類的mod(啥##
Kantan
00:38:758 (58) - 我覺得K或許不錯?
00:52:363 (79,80) - d k
01:42:944 (165) - ^ 00:38:758 (58) -

Futsuu
00:38:584 (93) - ^Kantan
01:32:479 (226) - 移動到 01:32:479 (226) -
01:42:770 (255) - K?

Jik's Muzukashii
00:06:665 (1) - D <我建議更改
00:51:316 (200) - D
00:56:897 (229) - K
01:02:479 (257) - D
02:52:712 (466) - D

NC's Oni
02:00:996 (691) - 刪除
02:06:665 (727) - D?
02:47:043 (958) - 刪除

Oni
00:28:293 (118) - 移動到 00:28:293 (118) -

非常棒的map 加油! 祝好運^^
Topic Starter
Nardoxyribonucleic

-Eternal Love- wrote:

嗨~ 因為貪玩所以延誤了幾天www 接下來的mod可能是非人類的mod(啥##
Kantan
00:38:758 (58) - 我覺得K或許不錯? k would be enough since stressed sound is absent.
00:52:363 (79,80) - d k k d could follow both the snare sound and the decreasing vocal pitch.
01:42:944 (165) - ^ 00:38:758 (58) - same as 00:38:758 (58) -

Futsuu
00:38:584 (93) - ^Kantan same as Kantan
01:32:479 (226) - 移動到 01:32:479 (226) - I think the current placement of the note could follow the stretched vocal in a way better.
01:42:770 (255) - K? same as Kantan

Oni
00:28:293 (118) - 移動到 00:28:293 (118) - The current position would result in a smoother flow imo.

非常棒的map 加油! 祝好運^^
Thanks for your mod~ :)
Hanjamon
Hi~ here mod request from my queue

  • d=Don
    D=Big Don
    k=Katsu
    K=Big Katsu
[General]

  • All seems fine
[Kantan]

  • 00:18:177 (21) - delete this note? (D (without k) d) i think is good, more easy and actually are a lot of x x x 1/1 patterns ;w;
    00:23:758 (32) - delete this note? ^ same reason
    01:22:363 (126) - delete this note? ^ same reason
    01:27:944 (137) - delete this note? ^ same reason
    02:20:967 (228) - delete this note? ^ same reason, i think a little break is good

    For the rest i can't find nothing bad :3
[Futsuu]

  • 03:11:897 (485,486) - control+g? (k d) 03:11:897 (485) - is a high sound but 03:12:246 (486) - is a low sound, sounds better imo
[Jik's Muzukashii]

  • You mapped this Muzu so hard, let's see

    00:26:374 (77) - delete this note, this pattern is so long
    00:27:246 (81,83) - control+g these notes, sounds better
    00:30:560 (99) - delete this note, is more easier
    00:33:351 (113) - delete this note, ^ same reason, also, change 00:33:700 (114) - to d, sounds better
    00:36:142 (127) - delete this note, ^ same reason, also, change 00:36:316 (127) - to k, sounds better
    00:39:281 (143) - delete this note, this pattern is so long and hard for a muzu imo
    00:51:054 (193) - delete this note (ddd d d d) ddd ddd doesn't fit at least for me and is a bit hard imo, also, change 00:50:967 (192) - to k? sounds better
    00:54:281 (208) - delete this note, same as before, this pattern is long and hard for a muzu imo
    00:55:328 (213) - delete this note, ^ same reason
    00:58:816 (231) - change to k? sounds better imo
    01:02:217 (247) - delete this note, same reason as before and change 01:02:130 (246) - to k?
    01:06:578 (268,272) - delete these notes or change triplets to ddd, ddk is hard for a muzu...
    01:31:258 (78) - delete this note, this pattern is long for a muzu
    01:34:746 (96) - delete this note, same reason as before
    01:36:142 (103) - delete this note, same reason as before
    01:37:537 (110) - delete this note, same reason as before
    01:40:328 (124) - delete this note, same reason as before
    01:43:467 (140) - delete this note, same reason as before
    01:55:240 (191) - delete this note, same as before, ddd ddd doesn't fit at least for me, also change 01:55:153 (190) - to k?
    01:58:467 (206) - delete this note, same as before, this pattern is long and hard for a muzu
    01:59:514 (211) - delete this note, same as before
    02:06:403 (245) - delete this note (lololol delete mod), same as before, also, change 02:06:316 (244) - to k?
    02:10:764 (266,270) - same as before, delete these notes or change to ddd triplet
    02:15:909 (289) - delete this note, this pattern is so long
    02:18:700 (304) - delete this note, same reason ^
    02:20:618 (313) - change to d (ddd), please, don't use kdd in a Muzu, also, delete 02:21:491 (319) - this pattern is so long
    02:23:409 (328) - change to d (ddd), ^ same reason
    02:25:677 (342) - delete this note, i see this a bit hard for a muzu
    02:40:851 (391,394) - control+g these notes (d k ddd) sounds better and is more easy
    02:44:514 (409) - delete this note, same reason as before
    02:52:450 (447) - delete this note and change 02:52:363 (446) - to k, same reason as before
    03:11:810 (44) - orz, delete this note, ddddk is hard for a Muzu imo

    I feel like drunk after suggest lot of things (? let's see if i can still suggesting something in the other diffs xD
[Oni]

  • 01:54:020 (593) - move to 01:53:845 - ? i think sounds better
    02:41:287 (847,848) - control+g? (ddkkd) sounds good imo
[NewComboNC's Oni]

  • 00:22:363 (113,114) - control+g? (k d) i think sounds good
    01:23:932 (464,465) - control+g? (d k) sounds better imo
    02:54:107 (1010,1011,1012,1013,1014,1015) - this sounds a bit weird for me, move 02:54:194 (1011) - to 02:54:020 - and 02:54:543 (1014) - to 02:54:368 - ? (kdd kkd)
This is all, good luck ^^ accidentally, i was close to lost all the mod xD
Topic Starter
Nardoxyribonucleic

Hanjamon wrote:

Hi~ here mod request from my queue

  • d=Don
    D=Big Don
    k=Katsu
    K=Big Katsu
[General]

  • All seems fine
[Kantan]

  • 00:18:177 (21) - delete this note? (D (without k) d) i think is good, more easy and actually are a lot of x x x 1/1 patterns ;w; fixed
    00:23:758 (32) - delete this note? ^ same reason ^
    01:22:363 (126) - delete this note? ^ same reason ^
    01:27:944 (137) - delete this note? ^ same reason Since the music becomes a bit different after 01:27:595 - , retained to make a contrast to 01:22:363 -
    02:20:967 (228) - delete this note? ^ same reason, i think a little break is good fixed

    For the rest i can't find nothing bad :3
[Futsuu]

  • 03:11:897 (485,486) - control+g? (k d) 03:11:897 (485) - is a high sound but 03:12:246 (486) - is a low sound, sounds better imo In fact, 03:12:246 (486) - has a higher pitch than 03:11:897 (485) - . So d k could fit better imo.
[Oni]

  • 01:54:020 (593) - move to 01:53:845 - ? i think sounds better The current pattern could result in a better flow since the placement of 1/4 is less consecutive.
    02:41:287 (847,848) - control+g? (ddkkd) sounds good imo I think ddkdk could work as well since the vocal pitch at 02:41:374 (848) - is slightly higher than that at 02:41:200 (846) -
This is all, good luck ^^ accidentally, i was close to lost all the mod xD lol
Thanks for your mod Hanjamon~ :)
KUURAhoshi
Hello, i'm sorry..
I can't mod this beatmap, because of school task, and exam..

Star for you..
Topic Starter
Nardoxyribonucleic

Kazamastar11 wrote:

Hello, i'm sorry..
I can't mod this beatmap, because of school task, and exam..

Star for you..
I see... Thanks for the star then~ ;)
- Love1yV1ruS -
Mod from modding queue ;)

General: 老实说谱子非常不错 几乎不需要改进什么东西 ;) 非常的Friendly。。 (所以已射星)

给我的感觉(错觉)就是 MUZU和ONI差不多难- - (虽然星的数目上看不出来 但是最好能把 ONI弄得密集点 MUZU松散一点。。)

Guest Muzu: 00:09:717 (13,14). 03:04:136 (13,14) and 01:13:903 (13,14) No need to be set like this in muzu diff. May fill it to ddk?

Guest Oni: 00:20:270 (98,99,100) - no vocal or special melody here. So change kkd to k d?
01:21:490 (450,451) - dont know why it is kk. Why not kkk?
02:54:456 (1013) - d to k

Oni01:53:932 (592,593,594) - may be a little bit strange. Change it from kdk to d D?
Awesome in general, it would be better with more 1/4s probably? Anyway its my private opinion...

Enjoy~
- Love1yV1ruS -
不小心发了两次 不知道怎么删除 :(
-xNaCLx-
-Eternal Love-

-Eternal Love- wrote:

嗨~ 因為貪玩所以延誤了幾天www 接下來的mod可能是非人類的mod(啥##

02:00:996 (691) - 刪除 - i dont see problem on keeping this and imo is better
02:06:665 (727) - D? - i uesd d throughout the whole map :(
02:47:043 (958) - 刪除 - ^

非常棒的map 加油! 祝好運^^
Hanjamon

Hanjamon wrote:

Hi~ here mod request from my queue

  • d=Don
    D=Big Don
    k=Katsu
    K=Big Katsu
[NewComboNC's Oni]

  • 00:22:363 (113,114) - control+g? (k d) i think sounds good - the pitch goes up suddenly at 114, so no.
    01:23:932 (464,465) - control+g? (d k) sounds better imo - i map according to the pitch so no again
    02:54:107 (1010,1011,1012,1013,1014,1015) - this sounds a bit weird for me, move 02:54:194 (1011) - to 02:54:020 - and 02:54:543 (1014) - to 02:54:368 - ? (kdd kkd) - i prefer the one now more
This is all, good luck ^^ accidentally, i was close to lost all the mod xD
- Love1yV1ruS -

- Love1yV1ruS - wrote:

Mod from modding queue ;)

Guest Oni: 00:20:270 (98,99,100) - no vocal or special melody here. So change kkd to k d? - but its a long note at 98, kkd would fit better.
01:21:490 (450,451) - dont know why it is kk. Why not kkk? - listen carefully.
02:54:456 (1013) - d to k - i prefer ddk dkd

Enjoy~
thanks for mod :)
Topic Starter
Nardoxyribonucleic

- Love1yV1ruS - wrote:

Mod from modding queue ;)

General: 老实说谱子非常不错 几乎不需要改进什么东西 ;) 非常的Friendly。。 (所以已射星)

给我的感觉(错觉)就是 MUZU和ONI差不多难- - (虽然星的数目上看不出来 但是最好能把 ONI弄得密集点 MUZU松散一点。。)

Oni01:53:932 (592,593,594) - may be a little bit strange. Change it from kdk to d D? The triplet could accompany the guitar well imo.
Awesome in general, it would be better with more 1/4s probably? Anyway its my private opinion... I will consider this again after Jikson comes back to check the mods.

Enjoy~
Thanks for your mod and star~ :)
Grimbow
Hi! From mod queue o/

d - Small don
D - Big don
k - Small kat
K - Big kat

Black means something that I think needs changed
Orange is just a suggestion

[Kantan]

00:43:642 - Add a k here, I think it maps the buildup nicely
01:42:944 (162) - Change this to a K to help emphasize the vocals here
01:47:828 - Add a k here for the same reason as the first suggestion

Really nice Kantan! :D

[Futsuu]

00:28:293 (70) - Change this to a d, the drums are lower here

Muzukashii and Oni look alright to me!

[NC's Oni]

00:49:921 (268) - There are no vocals here, you might want to delete this note if you are closely following the vocals here
01:01:084 (335) - ^
01:54:107 (650) - ^
02:05:270 (720) - ^

Overall I couldn't find much wrong with the map! Sorry for the late reply too :cry: :cry: Have a star for a really fun map! (∩`-´)⊃━.*・。゚
Topic Starter
Nardoxyribonucleic

Grimbow wrote:

Hi! From mod queue o/

d - Small don
D - Big don
k - Small kat
K - Big kat

Black means something that I think needs changed
Orange is just a suggestion

[Kantan]

00:43:642 - Add a k here, I think it maps the buildup nicely It's a good idea. But I would like to keep mine here to make a better difficulty spread with Futsuu.
01:42:944 (162) - Change this to a K to help emphasize the vocals here As the vocal has similar strength as 00:38:758 (56) - , it'd be better to use k for consistency.
01:47:828 - Add a k here for the same reason as the first suggestion same as above

Really nice Kantan! :D

[Futsuu]

00:28:293 (70) - Change this to a d, the drums are lower here fixed

Muzukashii and Oni look alright to me!

Overall I couldn't find much wrong with the map! Sorry for the late reply too :cry: :cry: Have a star for a really fun map! (∩`-´)⊃━.*・。゚
Thanks for your mod and star~ :)
Arcubin
NM mod :3

[General]
nothing particular :3 just in my case the BG is cracked ._. consider to resize the BG (tho it'salready meet the BG req)

[Kantan]
00:19:921 (24) - k sound better but it won't make the sense of lower sound
00:20:618 (25,26) - ctrl + g
00:53:235 (79) - k
01:22:014 - my mod in this part is same as above (the kiai is included)
02:35:967 - just opinion to make a fountain effect here :3 it's your decision to use it or not
02:43:467 (265) - k
02:53:758 (284,285) - ctrl+g

[Futsuu]
00:47:130 (110,111) - ctrl+g
00:58:293 (141,142) - ^
01:01:607 (150) - i think k will follow the vocal better (if it's what you supposing to do)
01:25:502 (205,206) - ctrl+g
01:26:897 (209) - d?
01:29:339 (216) - d.. i deeply suggest this :3
01:34:921 (232,233) - ctrl+g
01:52:188 (277,278,279) - i suggest to do this :3 some variations on your beats... https://puu.sh/dHNja.jpg
01:53:758 (282,283) - ctrl+g... second part of this kiai's mod is same from the first part of same kiai (i'm lazy typing much)
02:38:758 (397,398,399) - this pattern kinda confusing maybe... just pointing this out

[Jik's Muzukashi]
00:08:758 (9,10) - triplets potent... just pointing doesn't need to do this
00:11:723 (22,24) - delete
00:22:885 (62,63) - d for (62) and k for (63)
00:23:409 (64) - D
00:26:025 (75) - delete?
00:26:897 (80,81) - ctrl+g
00:32:304 (109) - k
00:33:177 (114,115,116,117) - how's about this :arrow: https://puu.sh/dHOO5.jpg
00:43:118 (161,162,163) - i think it will be easier if all of this pattern is D ._. well just suggestion
00:47:653 (182) - k
00:48:177 (184,185) - ctrl+g sound better imo
00:48:525 (186) - d
00:48:874 (188) - k
00:50:618 (194,195,196,197,198,199) - this part doesn't have any sense of double triplets :> considering change this
00:51:316 (200) - D
00:54:979 (218,219) - it's gonna be very fun if you do triplets here :D
00:56:025 (225) - K
well middle part of the song's mod is same as above (lazy typing)
02:10:676 (275,276,277,279,280,281) - -w- just pointing... ddk or kkd pattern (or else) still not pleased on muzu diff -w- consider change
02:33:351 (383,384,385) - same problem as 00:43:118 (161,162,163) -
02:41:374 - add k here 'w' you maybe want to change the previous pattern
02:41:549 (411) - D... third kiai mod is the same as first kiai mods
03:01:084 - ending mods is the same with opening mods

i still can't pass Oni on taiko ;w; i'm sorry
Topic Starter
Nardoxyribonucleic

azintairin710 wrote:

NM mod :3

[General]
nothing particular :3 just in my case the BG is cracked ._. consider to resize the BG (tho it'salready meet the BG req) The BG is already 1024x768, which is a 4:3 equivalent.

[Kantan]
00:19:921 (24) - k sound better but it won't make the sense of lower sound No change since the vocal is not high-pitched.
00:20:618 (25,26) - ctrl + g d k could follow the snare well.
00:53:235 (79) - k Retained since the vocal pitch goes down.
01:22:014 - my mod in this part is same as above (the kiai is included) ^
02:35:967 - just opinion to make a fountain effect here :3 it's your decision to use it or not The real kiai starts at 02:41:549 - , so I prefer not making such an effect there.
02:43:467 (265) - k same as 00:53:235 (79) -
02:53:758 (284,285) - ctrl+g Remain unchanged for snare consistency.

[Futsuu]
00:47:130 (110,111) - ctrl+g k d could follow the drop in vocal pitch well.
00:58:293 (141,142) - ^ ^
01:01:607 (150) - i think k will follow the vocal better (if it's what you supposing to do) The vocal pitch at 01:01:781 (151) - is higher, so d could fit.
01:25:502 (205,206) - ctrl+g fixed
01:26:897 (209) - d? Retained since the vocal pitch is relatively high.
01:29:339 (216) - d.. i deeply suggest this :3 k could follow the snare there.
01:34:921 (232,233) - ctrl+g I prefer keeping it the same as 01:33:525 (228,229) - since the vocal pattern is similar.
01:52:188 (277,278,279) - i suggest to do this :3 some variations on your beats... https://puu.sh/dHNja.jpg I prefer a rise of don at 01:52:188 - compared to the first kiai.
01:53:758 (282,283) - ctrl+g... second part of this kiai's mod is same from the first part of same kiai (i'm lazy typing much) I followed the increase in vocal pitch there.
02:38:758 (397,398,399) - this pattern kinda confusing maybe... just pointing this out I used more dons in this part intentionally for the guitar.

i still can't pass Oni on taiko ;w; i'm sorry
Thanks for your mod~ :)
Jikson[m9]
sorry for being afk
did quite a lot of changes, mainly simplyfying the map
thanks a lot for the mods

http://puu.sh/e6Jih/4d6f29441d.osu
Topic Starter
Nardoxyribonucleic

Jikson[m9] wrote:

sorry for being afk
did quite a lot of changes, mainly simplyfying the map
thanks a lot for the mods

http://puu.sh/e6Jih/4d6f29441d.osu
Updated~
[CSGA]Ar3sgice
02:15:037 - 02:24:804 - 建议把这段塞满二分拍然后在那几个地方放大饼
Topic Starter
Nardoxyribonucleic

[CSGA]Ar3sgice wrote:

02:15:037 - 02:24:804 - 建议把这段塞满二分拍然后在那几个地方放大饼
Oni我有用類似作法 lol
ikin5050
NC's ONI

The only thing i can say is that this needs a break somewhere in between :P

ONI

02:26:200 -> 02:35:795 add a break here
I'd say that seeing as this is oni this calls for some longer patterns as well, try and add some 7 patterns and some 5 patters instead of all the 3 patterns

Rest of the diffs look fine to me, i'm sorry for this sort of bad mod but this has already been modded quite a bit and i can't find anything that might need changing
Topic Starter
Nardoxyribonucleic

ikin5050 wrote:

ONI

02:26:200 -> 02:35:795 add a break here There are enough breaks in this session.
I'd say that seeing as this is oni this calls for some longer patterns as well, try and add some 7 patterns and some 5 patters instead of all the 3 patterns I would prefer an Oni with simpler patterns.

Rest of the diffs look fine to me, i'm sorry for this sort of bad mod but this has already been modded quite a bit and i can't find anything that might need changing
Thanks for the mod and opinion~
Gemu-
Hi Nardoxyribonucleic, from Game's Queue~

d
k
D (Big d)
K (Big k)

[Kantan]

00:18:525 - Change to k? for the pattern.
00:24:107 - ^
00:53:235 - Change to k?
01:04:397 - ^
01:22:711 - Change to k for the pattern.
01:57:421 - ^
02:08:584 - ^
02:17:130 - Change to d? is better.
02:19:921 - ^

[Futsuu]

01:50:444 - Change to d for kd dk.
01:51:665 - Change to k?
02:01:607 - Change to d for kd dk.
02:02:828 - Change to k?

[Jik's Muzukashii]

00:13:293 - Change to k? is better
00:16:956 - ^
01:12:072 - Change to k for the pattern.
01:17:479 - Change to k for the rhythm.
01:21:142 - ^
03:02:304 - Change to k?

[NC's Oni]

00:14:339 - Change to k? is better.
01:14:339 - ^
01:18:525 - Change to k.
01:35:531 - Change tu k because this part 01:34:136 - And this are equal, Have the same pattern and rhythm
01:37:014 - Change to d.

[Oni]

02:25:851 - Change to k, is more convenient.
03:12:770 - Change to k.


Great Beatmap!, I hope my mod has been helpful, good luck~
Topic Starter
Nardoxyribonucleic

game rock wrote:

Hi Nardoxyribonucleic, from Game's Queue~

d
k
D (Big d)
K (Big k)

[Kantan]

00:18:525 - Change to k? for the pattern. d would be better since snare is absent and the pitch of the vocal is relatively low compared to 00:18:351 - .
00:24:107 - ^ ^
00:53:235 - Change to k? d could fit the drop in vocal there.
01:04:397 - ^ ^
01:22:711 - Change to k for the pattern. Retained for pattern consistency as 00:18:525 -
01:57:421 - ^ same as 00:53:235 -
02:08:584 - ^ ^
02:17:130 - Change to d? is better. I followed the guitar there.
02:19:921 - ^ ^

[Futsuu]

01:50:444 - Change to d for kd dk. k would be better since it has the same vocal pitch as 01:50:270 (270) -
01:51:665 - Change to k? d could reflect the pitch difference compared to 01:50:270 (270,271) -
02:01:607 - Change to d for kd dk. same as 01:50:444 -
02:02:828 - Change to k? same as 01:51:665 -

[Oni]

02:25:851 - Change to k, is more convenient. I prefer d here as there is no high-pitched sound.
03:12:770 - Change to k. d would be better for the progressively increasing pitch across 03:12:770 (1033,1034,1035) -

Great Beatmap!, I hope my mod has been helpful, good luck~
Thanks for your mod and comment~ :)
-xNaCLx-
Grimbow

Grimbow wrote:

Hi! From mod queue o/

[NC's Oni]

00:49:921 (268) - There are no vocals here, you might want to delete this note if you are closely following the vocals here
01:01:084 (335) - ^
01:54:107 (650) - ^
02:05:270 (720) - ^ //nah.. cuz these beats are so important

Overall I couldn't find much wrong with the map! Sorry for the late reply too :cry: :cry: Have a star for a really fun map! (∩`-´)⊃━.*・。゚
game rock

game rock wrote:

Hi Nardoxyribonucleic, from Game's Queue~
[NC's Oni]

00:14:339 - Change to k? is better. //nope, like i used d here 00:08:758 (40) -
01:14:339 - ^ //no significant sound here.
01:18:525 - Change to k. //^
01:35:531 - Change tu k because this part 01:34:136 - And this are equal, Have the same pattern and rhythm /its actually another set already. 01:34:049 - this is equal to 01:32:653 - this, but not that. and so i want to have some variation
01:37:014 - Change to d. //for the significantly different pitch - no.

Great Beatmap!, I hope my mod has been helpful, good luck~

thanks for mod :)
qoot8123
[ Kantan]


Notes
  1. 00:56:025 (84) - 建議刪掉,或是把它移到00:56:549 - ,我個人覺得3/2的pattern後面如果沒有接note在00:56:549 - 這裏的話打起來有點彆扭
  2. 02:00:211 (190) - ^
  3. 02:46:258 (270) - ^


[ Futsuu]

General
:idea: 建議sv改成1.4
:idea: 01:49:921 - ~ 02:15:037 - 這一段感覺有一點難,建議簡化一下,最後的kiai也是

Notes
  1. 00:18:177 (39) - 這個Note我覺得可以刪掉,雖然你是跟vocal和beat,但是這裡如果有個break感覺會跟00:20:618 (46,47,48,49,50,51,52,53,54) - 有不錯的效果
  2. 00:23:758 (56) - ^
  3. 00:27:944 (69) - 移到00:28:642 - 跟接下來的pattern做搭配,而且也跟vocal比較搭
  4. 01:32:130 (225) - ^
  5. 02:25:851 (372) - 感覺這個note可以刪掉


[ Jik's Muzukashii]

General
:idea: 00:17:828 - ~ 00:40:153 - 這裡note的密度太高了,必須有3/2或2/1的break
:idea: kiai的部分也要簡化一下,有些1/2的pattern用太長了,舉例來說: 00:45:735 - ~00:49:921 - 有兩種選擇eg.1 eg.2,其他段也是有類似的問題


[ NC's Oni]


Notes
  1. 01:21:665 - 這裡加個d會比較好



[ Oni]

Notes
  1. 00:22:537 (91,93) - 建議把這兩個note調換,打起來會比較順暢
  2. 01:23:060 (419,420,421,422,423,424,425,426,427) - 感覺note有點放太多了

Muzu感覺有點危險,break盡量放多一點
-xNaCLx-

qoot8123 wrote:

[ NC's Oni]


Notes
  1. 01:21:665 - 這裡加個d會比較好 - fixed and with changing 01:21:490 (450,451) - into k for the sound difference and also add note on 01:21:839 - for the same sound as above
Jikson[m9]

qoot8123 wrote:

[ Kantan]

[ Jik's Muzukashii]

General
:idea: 00:17:828 - ~ 00:40:153 - 這裡note的密度太高了,必須有3/2或2/1的break
:idea: kiai的部分也要簡化一下,有些1/2的pattern用太長了,舉例來說: 00:45:735 - ~00:49:921 - 有兩種選擇eg.1 eg.2,其他段也是有類似的問題

Muzu感覺有點危險,break盡量放多一點

done
http://puu.sh/fORCr/20c39c32cf.osu
Topic Starter
Nardoxyribonucleic

qoot8123 wrote:

[ Kantan]


Notes
  1. 00:56:025 (84) - 建議刪掉,或是把它移到00:56:549 - ,我個人覺得3/2的pattern後面如果沒有接note在00:56:549 - 這裏的話打起來有點彆扭 刪了
  2. 02:00:211 (190) - ^ ^
  3. 02:46:258 (270) - ^ ^


[ Futsuu]

General
:idea: 建議sv改成1.4 fixed
:idea: 01:49:921 - ~ 02:15:037 - 這一段感覺有一點難,建議簡化一下,最後的kiai也是 改了這一段. 最後的kiai沒有改, 可以營造難度漸進的感覺

Notes
  1. 00:18:177 (39) - 這個Note我覺得可以刪掉,雖然你是跟vocal和beat,但是這裡如果有個break感覺會跟00:20:618 (46,47,48,49,50,51,52,53,54) - 有不錯的效果 好吧
  2. 00:23:758 (56) - ^ ^
  3. 00:27:944 (69) - 移到00:28:642 - 跟接下來的pattern做搭配,而且也跟vocal比較搭 改了
  4. 01:32:130 (225) - ^ ^
  5. 02:25:851 (372) - 感覺這個note可以刪掉 現在聽起來感覺這note沒那麼必要, 刪了


[ Oni]

Notes
  1. 00:22:537 (91,93) - 建議把這兩個note調換,打起來會比較順暢 感覺這裡不跟00:22:886 - 的鼓聲會有點奇怪, 所以還是放d k 比較好
  2. 01:23:060 (419,420,421,422,423,424,425,426,427) - 感覺note有點放太多了 改了

Muzu感覺有點危險,break盡量放多一點
Thanks for your mod qoot~ :)
All updated~
qoot8123

Jikson[m9] wrote:

qoot8123 wrote:

[ Kantan]

[ Jik's Muzukashii]

General
:idea: 00:17:828 - ~ 00:40:153 - 這裡note的密度太高了,必須有3/2或2/1的break
:idea: kiai的部分也要簡化一下,有些1/2的pattern用太長了,舉例來說: 00:45:735 - ~00:49:921 - 有兩種選擇eg.1 eg.2,其他段也是有類似的問題

Muzu感覺有點危險,break盡量放多一點

done
http://puu.sh/fORCr/20c39c32cf.osu

感覺break還是有些不夠,建議先從安靜的段落開始下手,像是00:01:084 - ~00:06:665 - ,你可以改成這樣,還有00:50:270 (171) - 三連音前面的note也建議刪掉,最後有些沒有必要的NOTE也要刪掉,像是01:10:502 (262,263,264) -

kiai的部分break少還沒關係,但是非kiai部分盡量要有
Topic Starter
Nardoxyribonucleic
Jik's Muzukashii updated~
qoot8123
Muzu :

00:08:932 (10) - 刪掉這個note,難度跟oni有點相似

00:14:514 (30) - ^

01:13:118 (10) - ^

01:18:700 (30) - ^

03:03:351 (10) - ^

03:08:933 (31) - ^

00:17:828 - ~ 00:28:118 - 密度跟oni非常接近,不過因為futsuu也偏難,所以2/1break在這一段就不用用太多,可是一定要簡化

01:22:014 - ~ 01:32:304 - ^

00:28:990 - ~ 00:44:339 - 跟futsuu 和oni比較一下,這一段的密度跟oni也很接近

01:33:177 - ~ 01:48:525 - ^(注意一下這一段的futsuu有變難)

02:15:037 - ~ 02:34:572 - 一樣要簡化

03:11:549 (39,40,41,42,43) - 5連在muzu還是不要有比較好
Topic Starter
Nardoxyribonucleic

qoot8123 wrote:

Muzu :

00:08:932 (10) - 刪掉這個note,難度跟oni有點相似

00:14:514 (30) - ^

01:13:118 (10) - ^

01:18:700 (30) - ^

03:03:351 (10) - ^

03:08:933 (31) - ^

00:17:828 - ~ 00:28:118 - 密度跟oni非常接近,不過因為futsuu也偏難,所以2/1break在這一段就不用用太多,可是一定要簡化

01:22:014 - ~ 01:32:304 - ^

00:28:990 - ~ 00:44:339 - 跟futsuu 和oni比較一下,這一段的密度跟oni也很接近

01:33:177 - ~ 01:48:525 - ^(注意一下這一段的futsuu有變難)

02:15:037 - ~ 02:34:572 - 一樣要簡化

03:11:549 (39,40,41,42,43) - 5連在muzu還是不要有比較好
All fixed upon Jikson's request.
qoot8123
after rechecking, the muzu has more break now, although the easier diffs are a bit dense, but the spread is good now

Bubbled!
meii18
@Next nominator: The same song is in qualified status . Don't qualify this mapset till' ZZHBOY's map will be moved to ranked section
PatZar

ByBy_ChAn wrote:

@Next nominator: The same song is in qualified status . Don't qualify this mapset till' ZZHBOY's map will be moved to ranked section
you are one of us now son.

[Oni]
01:07:188 (342,343,344) - kkd , seems more fit with rhythm song imo. also 01:07:188 (342,343) - are high pitch.
01:08:235 (350) - kat, if am i not wrong, the sound pitch is high so D kdk would be nice when playing.
01:54:456 (594,596) - ctrl + g. 01:54:456 (594) - there is have no any sound. and 01:54:717 (596) - sound pitch more high.
02:36:316 (824) - as D. it would be more reflect the next 02:37:363 (826,827,828,829) - .
03:12:770 (1032) - kat, seems the pitch is high

[NC's Oni]
01:48:351 (616) - change this as d the sound is more fit, if you keep this seems like overemphasis imo.
i like the rhythm you made!

[Jik's Muzu]
00:22:886 (55) - d ples, the sound is similar with 00:22:711 (54) - .
00:43:816 (135) - delete pls `-`, i know those are fit with rhythm, but please take a bit breaks too.
00:45:299 (139) - delete, muzukashii have no allowed about oox xxo etc.
01:37:363 (94) - delete this. and 01:37:537 (94) - move 1/2 backward.
01:40:502 (107) - delete this or 01:39:979 (104) - delete this
01:48:002 (134) - delete if you delete this too 00:43:816 (135) -
01:49:485 (140) - delete if you delete 00:45:299 (139) -
02:18:700 (266) - delete, give more free spaces.
02:20:008 (271) - delete.
02:25:677 (299) - delete.
02:34:049 (327) - delete.
02:41:113 (348) - delete.
what i mentioned above are unnecessary beat and triplets issues

kantan futsuu are fine for me.
call me back
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