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Touyama Nao, Hanazawa Kana, Komatsu Mikako, Asumi Kana - Sou

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Andrea
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This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on domenica 19 ottobre 2014 at 21:35:56

Artist: Touyama Nao, Hanazawa Kana, Komatsu Mikako, Asumi Kana
Title: Souzou Diary
Source: ニセコイ
Tags: Nisekoi Fake False Love TV Size osuplayer111 Momochikun Gero Umi Ending Chitoge Kirisaki Kosaki Onodera Seishirou Tsugumi Marika Tachibana
BPM: 181
Filesize: 20622kb
Play Time: 01:27
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (1,48 stars, 108 notes)
  2. Gero's Normal (1,93 stars, 105 notes)
  3. Insane (4,03 stars, 285 notes)
  4. Mochi's Hard (3,26 stars, 223 notes)
  5. Umi's Hard (3,17 stars, 234 notes)
Download: Touyama Nao, Hanazawa Kana, Komatsu Mikako, Asumi Kana - Souzou Diary
Download: Touyama Nao, Hanazawa Kana, Komatsu Mikako, Asumi Kana - Souzou Diary (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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My 207th Beatmap.

Nisekoi Last ED <3

Special Thanks to Umi for the Video ^^

Mapset:

Insane - Done.
Mochi's Hard - Done.
Umi's Hard - Done.
Gero's Normal - Done.
Easy - Done.
Last edited by Andrea , edited 27 times in total.
BeatofIke
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BeatofIke
Hype owo
Akiyama Mizuki
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Akiyama Mizuki
o_o
Nyukai
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Nyukai
You never ask me for GD :(
Luna-
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Luna-
Taking 2nd insane(?)
Andrea
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Andrea
Thanks everyone for supporting xD

Waiting for Umi and this should be good to go!
Natsu
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Natsu


gl baka
Nyukai
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Nyukai
You could add an Easy =w=
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Andrea
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Andrea
I'll probably make a Easy myself, we will see.

Anyways, added a new video! Thanks Umi~

EDIT: Added Easy difficulty, now only Umi's Hard to go again!
Umi
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Umi
done =w=/ sorry for delay honey

http://puu.sh/c3GXA/6ce43d5af6.zip

Ps: plz adjust the offset in each difficulty diff cuz i mapped the part before the redline.
Andrea
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Andrea
Don't worry Darling and thanks for your diff :3

Everything updated and ready for mods now ><
Kodora
Kodora
This song >w<
Good luck with rank!
Rtyzen
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Rtyzen
Heyy there~ for M4M

These are just suggestions, feel free to ignore some of them

[General]
  2. uhh - All diffs have this except Umi's Hard.

[Easy]
  1. 00:12:810 - Circle here
  2. 00:20:932 - Circle here
  3. 00:43:472 (1,2) - Ctrl-G(the rhythm)
  4. 00:44:799 - Circle here(?)
  5. 00:54:081 - Circle here
  6. 01:25:739 - Circle here, start the spinner a tick later

[Gero's Normal]
  1. 00:06:345 (1,2) - Rhythm sounds weird
  2. 00:05:682 (3) - IMO sounds better with just a circle here 00:06:015 -
  3. 01:19:936 (3) - ^
  4. 00:10:821 (3,4) - Might be better(easier) with a 1/2 slider
  5. 00:27:727 (2) - Should delete. seems abit too fast

[Mochi's Hard]
  1. 00:40:987 (2) - Clap on head move to 00:40:821 (1) (?)
  2. 01:00:544 (1) - Shorten by 1 blue tick and move 01:01:041 (2) to 01:00:877
  3. Nothing much else ~

[Umi's Hard]
  1. Doesn't have video on it?
  2. 00:39:164 - Circle here
  3. Nothing else ~

[Insane]
  1. 00:18:776 (1) - Delete and put a circle here 00:18:943
  2. 00:20:765 (7,1) - Blanket
  3. 00:39:495 (4,5,6) - Change to reverse 1/2 then 1/2
  4. 00:40:323 (7) - Change to circle then 1/2 slider
  5. 00:46:125 to 00:47:617 - Use 5 1/2 sliders
  6. 01:00:544 (1,2,1,2) - Probably want to space the second 1,2 slightly closer
  7. 01:03:693 (6,1) - Blanket
  8. 01:13:970 (3,4,5,6) - IMO the jump is too big for relatively nothing in the music to suit

That's all from me. Mostly rhythm suggestions but that's what I can do best orz :( and almost no HS because I'm pretty bad at that

Good luck!
Andrea
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Andrea
Thanks for checking, fixed all the unsnapped stuff and blankets.

About video I'll see with Umi, but I'm sure it's okay to go!
Gero
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Gero

Rtyzen wrote:

[Gero's Normal]
  1. 00:06:345 (1,2) - Rhythm sounds weird why? it follows the instrumental so it's okay.
  2. 00:05:682 (3) - IMO sounds better with just a circle here 00:06:015 - I don't think so... sorry.
  3. 01:19:936 (3) - ^ ^
  4. 00:10:821 (3,4) - Might be better(easier) with a 1/2 slider maybe but not.
  5. 00:27:727 (2) - Should delete. seems abit too fast I prefer to keep it because isn't hard imo.

Good luck!
Thanks!
Gamu
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Gamu
Hello~ Andrea :3

There is a problem in the Metadata. So, I write about it~ヾ(*´∀｀*)ﾉ
Artist: 東山奈央, 花澤香菜, 小松未可子, 阿澄佳奈
Romanised Artist: Touyama Nao, Hanazawa Kana, Komatsu Mikako, Asumi Kana
Title: 想像ダイアリー
Romanised Title: Souzou Diary
Source: ニセコイ
About source, I recommend Japanese title.


Good luck~ :)
Kodora
Kodora

Rtyzen wrote:

Wow, this AIMod warning seems outdated, rule about video dimersions was changed like 8 months ago.

See this: p/2895355
Mint
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Mint
Hi :D

i'm new to mapping and modding pls reply if you can so i can improve ;_;

:idea: General


* Use Gamu's Metadata
* Delete 'nisekoi' from tags? Already in source.

:arrow: Testplay


* Easy (+DT,HR) - Score ~ Replay
* Gero's Normal (+DT) - Score ~ Replay
* Mochi's Hard - Score ~ Replay
* Umi's Hard - Score ~ Replay
* Insane - Score ~ Replay

Easy


* 00:17:286 (2,3) - Same as Mochi's diff, not perfectly symmetrical on purpose?
* 00:20:932 - Add a note? So you can repeat the rhythm you have at 00:16:954 (1,2) -
* 00:35:518 (1) - NC this - there's a finish here, consider removing the previous NC.
* 01:15:960 (3,4,5,1) - Move this pattern a little bit down, (4) is overlapped by the HP bar.

Nice easy!

Gero's Normal


* 00:10:821 (3,4) - You're diff is nice and space-ish, only this stack doesn't really work for me. I'd turn it into a slider like 00:12:645 (2) - or space it a little like 01:00:379 (2,3) -
* 00:40:821 (4) - NC here, your NC pattern is every 2 large white ticks.
* 00:51:429 (2) - NC because of KIAI start?
* 01:18:280 (2) - NC, music changes.

Overall, nice diff and cool sliders!

Mochi's Hard


* 00:08:998 (1,2) - Make this perfectly symmetrical? (this is prob just your style by looking at the rest of your diff)
* 00:11:319 (4,1) - - ^
* 00:30:544 - Delete green line, previous timing point was exactly the same.
* 00:32:866 (1,2,3) - This is very hard to read and play - I don't suggest breaking the flow like this immediately after a 3/4 slider.
* 00:46:124 - Delete green line, previous timing point was exactly the same.
* 01:01:705 (1,2) - Swap NC like Umi's Hard, there's clearly a strong beat on (2)
* 01:12:810 (1,2,3) - Since this is (imo) the easier one of the two hard diffs, I don't recommend using raw triplets, even though it's not a very fast song. Maybe a reverse slider like 01:11:153 (4) - ?
* 01:14:633 & 01:14:964 - Delete green lines.

Interesting how you mapped this hard, I like the rhythm!


Umi's Hard


* 00:03:694 (1,2,3) - I'd move this pattern a little more to the right - because then 00:04:357 (3,1) - would look nicer? And you could also avoid the overlap from 00:05:518 (2)
* 00:05:518 (2) - Blanket better with 00:06:015 (4) - ?
* 00:38:169 - Delete green line, no purpose here.
* 01:16:788 (2) - Put at x312,y324 - so there's 1.31x DS for both previous and next.
* 01:25:407 (2,3) - I'd reverse these. (3) is quite far from the spinner center now - wouldn't hurt to CTRL+G it, right?

I really like the flow in this diff, good job!

Insane


* 00:03:031 (1,2,3) - After 2 retries I was able to play this, but this spacing here is a little weird.
* 00:05:020 (1,2,3,4,1) - Very nazi. But I'd move (1,2,3,4) one grid to the left or (1, blue) one grid to the right, so the sliders look a little bit nicer.
* 00:08:998 (1,2) - Space this out?
* 00:24:910 (3) - Shouldn't the NC start here? The vocals are stronger here and there's a piano/xylophone sound here that indicates it.
* 00:50:435 (1) - Just a personal preference, but I'd curve it to make the slowdown more obvious.
* 00:59:551 (2) - NC here? And delete previous one?
* 01:03:694 (6,1) - Fix this blanket? I prefer this:
* 01:06:015 (1) - pls more people should put kicksliders when it's actually in the song like you do, and not just very random like a lot of other maps :roll:
* 01:11:982 (2,3,4,5) - There should be a NC somewhere here, since the SV changed after (1)
* 01:17:949 (1) - Only object in this diff that touches the HP bar - try to move it down a little?

Really Andrea-style, love it.

Good luck! :)
Andrea
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Andrea
@Gamu: Thanks a lot for the detailed artist, title and source! I really needed that. Fixed it all.

@Kodora: Thanks for your support and input. <3

@appleeaterx: Thanks for the unexpected mod! I really appreciated it. Fixed everything except the HP Bar things, I think they're okay.

Updated ^^
Amasuro
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Amasuro
Heyyo, M4M here

[Easy]
  1. 00:19:606 (1,2) - Doesn't make sense to me that these notes are perfectly vertical when every slider around it is curved
Nothing else that hasn't been mentioned already. Though, I noticed you didn't take the suggestions to put notes on 00:20:932 - and 00:54:081 -. Note sure if you just didn't update yet or didn't take the suggestions, but if you didn't take them, I'd just like to say that adding both those notes would be my suggestion too.

[Gero's Normal]
Them sliders, though

  1. 00:22:258 (1,2) - Weird flow. I'd prefer 00:23:584 (2) - to be Ctrl-G'ed
  2. 00:30:214 (1,2) - If you intended to blanket this on the approach circle of 00:31:540 (2) - , then it needs some fixing
  3. 00:35:518 (1,2) - Nothing wrong with what you have now, but you could also consider blanketing the two
  4. 01:03:363 (3,1) - Dislike the overlap on these two
  5. 01:23:252 (1,2) - Another potential blanket here if you want

[Mochi's Hard]
  1. 00:06:346 (1,2,3) - Maybe make these into a perfect triangle?
  2. 00:08:667 (3) - Ctrl-G?
  3. 00:24:247 (6,7) - About the rhythm here...maybe try this?
    SPOILER
  4. 00:32:866 (1,2) - Same suggestion as previous mod. I suggest deleting (2) and extending (1) all the way to where (2) was as I found this incredibly hard to play
  5. 00:32:866 (1) - Was this slider intended to curve slightly like that?
  6. 00:33:529 (4,5) - Make these two notes into a slider?
  7. 00:43:971 (2) - Blanket this note on the tail of 00:43:473 (1) - or the head of 00:44:799 (4) - ? Or maybe both :P
  8. 01:07:672 (1,2) - Fix blanket
  9. 01:11:153 (4,1) - Weird placement

[Umi's Hard]
  1. 00:01:042 (1) - Remove NC?
  2. 01:09:661 (5,1) - If you intended to blanket (1) on the tail of (5), it needs fixing

[Insane]
  1. 00:29:716 (1,2,3,4) - I don't feel like the four sliders here fit the rhythm very well. Maybe try this?
    SPOILER
  2. 00:36:346 (2,3) - The jump right here makes no sense to me
  3. 00:39:330 - Add a note here?
  4. 00:43:473 (1,2) - Blanket (1) on the approach circle of (2)? Don't forget to change 00:42:976 (6) - if you do this!
  5. 01:23:750 (3,4) - I know you're just preserving symmetry, but this jump feels way to big for this part
  6. 01:25:407 (2) - Change this slider to a single beat instead?
Good luck :D

Not like you need it or anything :P
xxdeathx
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xxdeathx
Hey Andrea! Finally get to mod one of your maps~

[General]
  1. Another title for Nisekoi is False Love so add that to tags
[Easy]
Fine diff. There are some 3/2 polarity issues like 00:11:650 (1,2) - but there's no good way to resolve them in an easy.

[Normal]
  1. 00:06:346 (1,2) - I would avoid clapping in the middle ticks because the claps should be on the second white ticks like 00:06:678. Since you are ignoring them you should ignore the claps altogether instead of trying to put them nearby. These too at the end 01:20:600 (1,2) -
  2. 01:09:993 (1) - A 2 beat repeat slider would be nice so it can cover the vocal at 01:10:656
[Umi's Hard]
  1. 00:30:214 (1) - Move end point to 300, 272 for perfect blanket.
  2. 00:36:181 (3) - I suggest 1/2 repeat slider here to
[Momochikun's Hard]
  1. 00:19:606 (1) - Use this to blanket so it looks neater. Move middle point to 148, 148.
  2. 00:33:363 (3) - Don't need jump here, since this section is already pretty hard to play. (5 circles in a row, and stacks make it hard to read).
  3. 00:34:026 - Shouldn't ignore this vocal. You can make 00:33:860 (6) - a 1/2 slider.
  4. 00:36:678 (1,2) - Blanket this too for neatness?
  5. 00:39:330 (4,5) - I think the 1/2 repeat slider is best if it starts on 00:39:496 because those 3 vocals are equivalent.
  6. 00:42:976 - Why ignore strong vocal here orz
  7. 00:51:098 (2) - Put a keypress on 00:51:429 because it's the downbeat of a new section and a very strong vocal.
  8. 00:55:076 (1) - move middle point to 244, 100 for better blanket.
  9. 01:14:136 (2) - Delete this circle is best, so the much stronger notes around it are emphasized by comparison.
[Insane]
  1. 00:03:197 (2,1,1) - The spacing/timing here can get really confusing. I think the best choice is to swap NC at 00:03:529 (3,1) - so that 1/1 notes and 1/2 notes are in their own combo.
  2. 00:20:766 (7,1) - Your blanket's a bit off. Move the middle slider point closer and the end point further away.
  3. 00:29:716 (1,2,3,4) - The strong vocals are on the white ticks/downbeat, like 00:30:214, so it's best to emphasize them with a circle or slider head rather than a weak slider end. Recommended rhythm:
  4. 00:31:540 (1,2) - Same thing as above - it feels awkward to not have keypresses on 00:31:871 and 00:32:203 which are white ticks and vocals.
  5. 00:32:700 (5,1) - How come your maps don't blanket when there are good opportunities to? Also 00:43:473 (1,2) -
    SPOILER
  6. 00:33:694 (2,3,4) - You can organize the circles to flow a bit better and have a jump at 00:33:860 (3,4) - to fit the vocals.
    SPOILER
  7. 00:59:054 (1,2) - I really like to have sliders start on vocals, especially if they're white ticks.
  8. 01:03:363 (5,6) - Shouldn't these two be parallel to stay consistent with 01:02:037 (1,2) - ?
  9. 01:10:324 (2,3) - You can put a jump here to fit the vocals.
  10. 01:21:263 (3) - Ctrl-G this would flow better.
I look forward to this map! It's been a while since you got Trick Box ranked.
Moo-Chan
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Joined November 2013
Moo-Chan
M4M from your queue~ :3

[Umi's Hard]
  1. 00:01:042 (1) - Move to x:136 y:252 to stack perfectly
  2. 00:03:694 (1,2) - Fix blanket
  3. 00:05:518 (2,4) - ^
  4. 01:16:788 (2) - I would say to move this closer to the slider. People playing a hard might not be able to read it when it's that spaced
[Insane]
  1. 00:03:529 (3) - Maybe make this note have a louder hitsound?
  2. 00:07:672 (6) - NC?
  3. 00:11:650 (1) - Move this to x:257 y:31 to stack correctly under the slider
  4. 00:18:612 (7) - Move to x:272 y:40 to stack correctly under the slider
  5. 00:19:606 (4) - NC?
  6. 00:20:766 (7,1) - Fix blanket
  7. 00:24:413 (1) - Remove NC
  8. 00:24:910 (3) - NC
  9. 00:39:496 (4) - ^
  10. 00:44:799 (5) - ^
  11. 00:50:435 (1) - Maybe NC this? Because of the SV change
  12. 00:52:755 (5) - NC
  13. 00:54:744 (3,5) - I would personally blanket these two. And if not, then blanket the head of 5 with the inner of 3
  14. 00:55:407 (5) - NC
  15. 00:58:391 (5) - ctrl - g, then move to x:220 y:128, then ctrl - g again to stack perfectly
  16. 01:01:208 (1) - Move to x:104 y:203 to stack perfectly
  17. 01:03:363 (5) - NC
  18. 01:04:026 (1) - Remove NC
  19. 01:11:153 (1) - ^
  20. 01:11:319 (3) - NC
  21. 01:16:623 (5) - ^
sorry for just the nc and stacks and stoof x.x

Nice diffs~ sorry I didn't mod them all u.u I'm quite tired
But I hope this helped ><
HabiHolic
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HabiHolic
Andrea's Mapping Back!!!!

good map!!

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Andrea
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Andrea
Thanks for the mods guys, fixed everything except the new combo suggestions and the blankets, I already tried improving them as much as I could and I think they're okay to go.

Updated now :3
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