_Gezo_ wrote:

Kurosanyan wrote:

[Futsuu]
Bon t'as une futsuu de 2,06 mais bon j'espère que ça va pas nazi pour si peu. inb4 OnoDQ

00:08:423 (2,1,1,2) - J'vois pas beaucoup ce genre de pattern sur toute la map, je te conseille de faire dk k histoire d'unifier à travers celle-ci Pas beaucoup ? Il revient 5 fois dans la map.
00:22:859 (1,1,2,3,4,5) - Ce pattern m'a l'air un peu compliqué pour une futsuu (plus ça rend le tout assez long si on compte les 6 notes en 1/1 avant), je te conseille de couper ça un peu. 00:22:859 (1) - ne sert pas à grand chose ici selon moi, je te conseille de le retirer. Fixed
00:46:995 (1) - ~ 00:53:536 (1) - Un peu long pour un pattern sans 2/1, mais honnêtement je vois pas comment simplifier vu que chaque note a sa place. J'ai retiré le kk du kkd.
01:19:702 (2,3,1,2) - Comme tout au début du mod de la diff. Pareil pour 01:26:920 (2,3,1,2) - . Même réponse.

[Muzukashii]
00:08:874 (1,2,1) - kkk pour suivre la hauteur ? (comme 00:12:709 (1,2,3) - ) J'utilse ddd pour garder mon pattern en d k d et coller au beat.
00:19:025 (1) - La hauteur ne change pas par rapport à tes autres k, change ça en k aussi ? Si tu dis non à ça, le reste suivant le même raisonnement tu pourras carrément retirer ce qui te convient pas sur les suggestions en-dessous Changé en ddd, la dernière note est un d pour coller au beat encore une fois.
00:22:634 (1) - 00:26:243 (1) - 00:47:897 (1) - 00:55:115 (1) - 01:33:010 (1) - 01:40:228 (1) - 01:43:837 (1) - ^
01:36:619 (1) - ^ (doute) Idem
01:03:461 (1,2) - 01:07:070 (1,2) - 01:10:679 (2,1) - dd ? C'est con comme ça mais t'as la même chose juste après sur dd Ce n'est pas tout à fait la même chose, je trouve que ça colle mieux comme ça. Pour le dernier, j'ai remplacé par d d d k par contre.
01:19:138 (1) - Bouge ça sur la white tick at change en k ? Le placement de la note est assez bizarre de mon côté. La même chose sur 01:22:859 (1) - , 01:26:468 (1) - Fixed
00:42:935 (1,2) - Overlap de notes, c'est pas bon (surtout une big note sur une normal note). Bouge la TS à 00:43:499 - ? Slow retiré.

[Oni]
Overlaps : 00:42:935 (1,2) - 01:11:807 (1,2) - Comme en muzu Viré aussi.
Overlap majeur : 00:59:175 (1,2,3,1) - Faut VRAIMENT changer ça sinon Ono va tous nous tuer. Onopls
00:21:393 (2,1) - dk ? La musique s'y prête mieux imo Remplacé dk kd par kd dk.
00:24:213 (6,7,8,9,10,11) - Euh j'avoue ne pas vraiment piger le but de ce pattern... Tout est en 1/2 ici, je vois pas pourquoi tu fais un pattern en 2-4. Remplacé par d ddk.
00:29:175 (2,1,1,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,1) - Je verrais mieux ddkddk d ddkk ici. Parce que poulet. Mais c'est toi qui vois. Fixed. Parce que poulet.
00:51:168 (1,1,2,1,1,1,2,1) - Léger overmap ici, y'a pas beaucoup de points intéressants pour un mini stream. Viré la première note.
01:04:476 (3) - Retire ça, aucun cue dans la musique. Plus, mini-pause. Fixed
01:07:747 (1,2,1,1) - dddd, les sons sont exactement les mêmes. Fixed
01:37:747 (5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14) - La musique ne s'y prête pas du tout, et le poulet il est pas en train de gueuler de la sorte; j'te conseille de changer ça aussi. Fixed


Mon cerveau a ragequit

1. 00:30:303 (1) - i feel this triplet is a bit weird to play. maybe 00:30:303 (1) - move to 00:30:754 - as a k for the chicken's voice? also if you want to keep triplet, dkd will get better sound totally.
2. 00:39:326 (1) - K? it lacks the consistency with 00:35:717 (1) - 00:39:326 (1) - . pitch is not the same but its really strong sound as with them. D also fits better.
3. 01:19:927 (3) - or 01:20:153 (1) - should be removed. this part is actually calm part. therefore, 4plet doesnt fit for the flow.
4. 01:27:145 (3,1) - same.

1. 00:29:288 (1) - remove? this pattern is fine for me since bpm is too low but its really hard to catch the rhythm. im sure players get confused.
2. 00:39:326 (1) - same as Futsuu. it needs finisher sound imo.
3. 00:49:476 (2,3) - 2 notes of triplet move to 00:49:363 - . i mean 00:49:363 - dd d d k here. sounds better for me.
4. 00:56:694 (2,3) - same.
5. 01:04:138 (1,2) - k. d d doesnt fit because the pitch of chicken's voice is clearly higher than previous notes.
6. 01:07:747 (1,1) - same.
7. 01:17:897 - ~ 01:28:047 - no need triplet sound for the same reason as Futsuu. they are just not good for the flow of song.
8. 01:24:664 (1) - why is this slider shorter than 00:13:386 (1) - ? really plays weird even if its just intentional.

1. 00:39:326 (1) - the same as others.
2. 01:03:799 (3,1,1,1,2) - almost the same reason as Muzukashii. kddk k will get better imo.
3. 01:07:408 - same. kddkkkk or something?
4. 01:20:040 (1) - 01:27:258 (1) - remove for the same reason as others.

TKS wrote:

[ Futsuu]

1. 00:30:303 (1) - i feel this triplet is a bit weird to play. maybe 00:30:303 (1) - move to 00:30:754 - as a k for the chicken's voice? also if you want to keep triplet, dkd will get better sound totally. I'll go with k dk.
2. 00:39:326 (1) - K? it lacks the consistency with 00:35:717 (1) - 00:39:326 (1) - . pitch is not the same but its really strong sound as with them. D also fits better. I want to make it different because of the sound, I'll try D.
3. 01:19:927 (3) - or 01:20:153 (1) - should be removed. this part is actually calm part. therefore, 4plet doesnt fit for the flow. Removed (1)
4. 01:27:145 (3,1) - same. same.

[ Muzukashii]

1. 00:29:288 (1) - remove? this pattern is fine for me since bpm is too low but its really hard to catch the rhythm. im sure players get confused. Yup and it gets a better consistency with the next pattern this way.
2. 00:39:326 (1) - same as Futsuu. it needs finisher sound imo. D again
3. 00:49:476 (2,3) - 2 notes of triplet move to 00:49:363 - . i mean 00:49:363 - dd d d k here. sounds better for me. Yeah, it probably sounds better, but I want to keep a rhythm consistency and this is a bit too hard to play imo.
4. 00:56:694 (2,3) - same. same.
5. 01:04:138 (1,2) - k. d d doesnt fit because the pitch of chicken's voice is clearly higher than previous notes. Not sure if it really doesn't fit but I like how the pattern looks with k k and it sounds good too, so I'll follow your suggestion.
6. 01:07:747 (1,1) - same. ^
7. 01:17:897 - ~ 01:28:047 - no need triplet sound for the same reason as Futsuu. they are just not good for the flow of song. Fixed
8. 01:24:664 (1) - why is this slider shorter than 00:13:386 (1) - ? really plays weird even if its just intentional. Uuuh, that's because I had x0,75 SV and forgot to fix the slider. Fixed on Oni too.

[Oni]

1. 00:39:326 (1) - the same as others. D
2. 01:03:799 (3,1,1,1,2) - almost the same reason as Muzukashii. kddk k will get better imo. Fixed
3. 01:07:408 - same. kddkkkk or something? Yup
4. 01:20:040 (1) - 01:27:258 (1) - remove for the same reason as others. Removed.

DakeDekaane wrote:

[General]
wow no Kantan *cries*

[ Oni]
00:06:393 - I think there should be a note (preferably a don) here instead a slider end, this will make it consistent with the rest of the chicken sounds here, the slider wouldn't be bad as a 1/2 slider, but up to you if you decide to remove/change it because this. Replaced by a k and a d. Rip sliders. :'(


[ Muzukashii]
I'm a bit worried about the ddk and kkd patterns, but ddd or kkk just doesn't fit there nicely, so I think it's okay to keep them. Should be fine.
00:29:514 (2) - This note should be moved to 00:29:288 - so it follows the chicken better. Changed the whole pattern into k k kk d d dd to make it easy to play.
00:34:927 (1) - This should be on 00:34:814 - for the chicken and 00:35:040 (1) - could be changed as a kat as it has a higher tone than the next. Removed this note and 00:35:491 - instead.
00:38:311 (1,3) - ^Something similar.
00:41:920 (1) - and 00:42:258 (1) - ^
01:01:544 (2) - Remove to be consistent with 01:09:213 - ? To be consistent, I need to remove both triples. I removed both and the first d k of the pattern too, it's d k d k d now.

[ Futsuu]
00:05:717 - and 00:06:168 - add notes (kats) here, or do something like you did in 01:23:311 (2,1) - ? the way you have now feels a bit incomplete. Fixed with dk kk k.

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Mao wrote:

cute song