Zweib wrote:

Fujiyama Panic wrote:

I can barely pass 5star mapss and theeeeere you are trying to go for 7stars. thx m8 :<

it is because beatmaps around 130bpm (not dtable) are hard to enjoy imo
it can be too slow to stream while stressful for single tap

if you want to improve your playing skill i'm glad to help :>

1. Why don't you simply change to AR9 OD8? These decimal settings don't make much sense, really
2. 02:40:672 (1) - This note felt a bit awkward to play due to its lower distance from the previous object, you should replace (4) and (1) in a different way
3. 02:53:914 (2,3,1) - Q____Q That's confusional, please move (1) far away these two 1/4 notes
4. 04:49:344 (5) - Why don't you just copy (4) and make a symmetric pattern?
5. 05:07:156 (2,3,2,3) - I expected a harder pattern here due to the wubs, so how about replacing the pattern with two 1/4 sliders with high spacing?
6. 05:14:656 (2) - That's quite a flabby shape, try the one mentioned below, this feels better to play to me:
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7. 05:19:813 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Hmm, that doesn't play as good as I thought by watching the editor, I find this kind of slow streams really uneasy, if you ask me. My suggestion consists in dividing them in couples as you already did several times throughout the whole map as I tried to do in the screenshow below (pretty sure you can do better than me, but I hope you understand the idea!):
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8. 06:52:859 (1) - Try to highlight the angle you are trying to make with these redpoints, I don't really see a big difference from a straight slider now

Leader wrote:

This is wonderful

[KATAOMOI]

1. Why don't you simply change to AR9 OD8? These decimal settings don't make much sense, really you're right lol
2. 02:40:672 (1) - This note felt a bit awkward to play due to its lower distance from the previous object, you should replace (4) and (1) in a different way uh when I tried to keep proper distance snap for 4,1,2 i found it not easy to aim. Maybe you can regard (1) as an anti-jump due to 1/1 in 128bpm is quite long. Anyway I reduce the distance between 1,2,3 may help relieve the difficulty
3. 02:53:914 (2,3,1) - Q____Q That's confusional, please move (1) far away these two 1/4 notes orz but i really want to keep this. I reduce the spacing that the approaching circles can be seen more clearly(it's not that hard in 128bpm if you dim the bg imo)
4. 04:49:344 (5) - Why don't you just copy (4) and make a symmetric pattern? uh why not ;w;
5. 05:07:156 (2,3,2,3) - I expected a harder pattern here due to the wubs, so how about replacing the pattern with two 1/4 sliders with high spacing? i replaced 3, I guess it's better than before 0.0
6. 05:14:656 (2) - That's quite a flabby shape, try the one mentioned below, this feels better to play to me: hmm stretched the slider by a little, but the upper part I want to keep vertical
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7. 05:19:813 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Hmm, that doesn't play as good as I thought by watching the editor, I find this kind of slow streams really uneasy, if you ask me. My suggestion consists in dividing them in couples as you already did several times throughout the whole map as I tried to do in the screenshow below (pretty sure you can do better than me, but I hope you understand the idea!): yay it's cool while perhaps I used this too much. So I reduce the distance in Y axis and added NCs for easier aiming
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8. 06:52:859 (1) - Try to highlight the angle you are trying to make with these redpoints, I don't really see a big difference from a straight slider nowok!

Call me back when you've fixed and I'll shoot a second bubble

iMage-- wrote:

\:D/

Fujiyama Panic wrote:

Couldn't you take the original pic that belongs to the Single of that album?
http://i.ytimg.com/vi/tnvHEk1frJk/maxresdefault.jpg

Or is that too late now, as it's already ranked? =<


here the full picture without text: https://cs.sankakucomplex.com/data/a1/b ... pg?2934103
https://chan.sankakucomplex.com/post/show/2934103

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Zweib wrote:

Fujiyama Panic wrote:

Couldn't you take the original pic that belongs to the Single of that album?
http://i.ytimg.com/vi/tnvHEk1frJk/maxresdefault.jpg

Or is that too late now, as it's already ranked? =<


here the full picture without text: https://cs.sankakucomplex.com/data/a1/b ... pg?2934103
https://chan.sankakucomplex.com/post/show/2934103

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thank you! but my friend already pended another song in this album, which took the album cover as bg，thus i picked another one！

and thank all；；

Zweib wrote:

https://osu.ppy.sh/s/114887

and Minakami Yuki & Amamiya Yuko collaborated a better version not upload yet

:>

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maaagic wrote:

おめでとう