Hey, M4M as we agreed.
General
- Perhaps get into the habit of using Grid Size 4 (tiny)? I think there are a few sliders you could make look much neater if you used this. Change grid size by going to View->Grid Size, or by pressing the hotkey (default G).
Easy
I would suggest using a higher distance snap so that everything isn't overlapping everything else around it so much.
- 00:02:871 (1) - I would have the opening note for an easy difficulty closer to the centre than this.
- 00:14:871 (2,1) - The flow between these can be improved. Point the sliders towards each other to improve it. Flow is important for lower difficulties and should atleast be used between combos if possible.
- 00:30:204 (1) - Make this blanket around 00:28:871 (3).
- 00:31:538 (2,3) - Make these blanket eachother.
- 01:32:204 (3,1) - Try and avoid these overlapping.
- 01:35:538 (3,1) - Make these blanket.
- 01:46:871 (1,3) - Try and avoid these touching.
- 02:29:204 (5) - Just have a single reverse. Double reverses are kinda hard to read when the slider is this size. There are questionable ones earlier int he map, but they seem to make sense, though if it were me, I would try and change those too.
- 02:46:538 (3) - Move this down so it's not halfway up 02:45:871 (2).
- 02:50:871 (1,2) - Make these blanket.
- 03:00:204 (3,1) - Same as above.
- 03:04:204 (1,3) - Make these the same shape.
Medium
- 00:07:538 (2,2) - Avoid this overlap.
- 00:16:204 (1,3) - Move 3 so it isn't touching 1.
- 00:26:871 (1,3) - Same as above.
- 00:37:871 (1,2,3,4) - This square formation can be improved.
- 00:45:871 (1,2,3) - Improve these blankets.
- 00:46:538 (2,4) - Make these stack perfectly.
- 01:08:204 (3,1) - Try and make it so these don't touch.
- 01:12:204 (1,3) - Try and avoid 1 overlap the tail of 3. Overlapping the body slightly should be fine, but should also be avoided if possible.
- 01:17:038 (4) - This red tick note felt like it came out of nowhere and I didn't expect it to be that fast when the rest of the song hasn't had anything like this. I would probably remove this.
- 01:38:871 (2) - Make it a Finish rather than a Clap.
- 01:48:871 (1,2,1) - This triangle formation can be improved.
- 01:49:871 (1,2,3) - Same as above.
- 02:34:871 (1,2) - Try and avoid these touching. Even better would be to blanket.
- 02:42:204 (1,1) - Improve the flow here.
- 03:15:871 (2,3) - Move 3 a bit higher up so that the flow is better.
- 03:20:871 (2,1) - Try and avoid these touching.
- 03:33:538 (1,3) - Make these the same shape.
Hard
I don't think you should use x0.8 Distance snap for regular speed combos where you did. The notes are overlapping where they don't really need to. You can afford to open the gap a bit more on Hard difficulty.
- 00:30:871 (1,2) - Either make these parallel. or make the angle between them a bit more distinct.
- 01:06:871 (1,3) - Try and avoid these touching.
- 01:12:204 (1,3) - Try and get the head of 1 and tail of 3 to perfectly stack. You can use Ctrl+G to reverse a slider to get the tail's co-ordinate.
- 01:20:871 (5,6) - Don't overlap these so much.
- 01:43:621 (4) - This blue tick slider seems out of place and doesn't fit with the music.
- 02:15:871 (1) - Don't make the entire slider a whilst; just the head.
- 02:26:538 (3,1) - Don't overlap these so much.
- 02:30:871 (5,6) - Improve the flow here.
- 02:31:538 (1,1) - Make these the same shape.
- 02:57:538 (1,1) - Make these perfectly stack.
- 03:02:204 (5,6) - Don't overlap these so much.
- 03:05:538 (3,4,5,6,1) - This square can be improved.
- 03:08:538 (1) - Don't make the enitre slider a clap; just the head.
- 03:11:538 (5,6) - This blanket can be improved.
- 03:23:538 (3,4) - Don't overlap these so much.
Insane
- 00:04:204 (4) - New Combo.
- 00:07:038 (7) - I would shorten this slider, or split it into two.
- 00:10:204 (6,1) - Make these blanket.
- 00:22:704 - Add a note here.
- 00:28:371 (3) - Shorten or split.
- 00:32:204 (1,3) - Try and avoid this overlap, or at least the overlap over the tail.
- 00:35:538 (4,1) - Perfectly stack with the tail.
- 00:51:204 (2,3,4) - Make the tails perfectly stack.
- 01:11:871 (5,2) - Either avoid the overlap, or stack.
- 01:21:621 (5,6,7,8,9,1) - The amount of claps here isn't really necessary and just feels out of place.
- 01:25:371 (2,3,4) - Move these around so that 2 is closer to 1 than 3 for better readability.
- 01:29:538 (1,2) - This blanket can be improved.
- 02:10:371 (3) - Shorten or split.
- 02:19:371 (3) - This feels out of place; I would use something else like a stream.
- 02:41:038 (3) - Shorten this, and make the stream before it longer perhaps.
- 03:03:538 (3,5) - Make these perfectly stack.
- 03:22:204 (3,4,5,1) - This triangle can be improved. Pay attention to the distance between them.
- 03:34:038 (3,4,5,6,7,1,2) - Make a more regular shape. Consider using the Create Polygon Circle feature (Ctrl+Shift+D).
Another
This difficulty is outside of my skill level, so I can't mod it as efficiently, but I'll do what I can.
- 00:07:704 (1) - Change this double reverse slider, as two reverses on a slider of this length can be hard to read.
- 00:51:204 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - Perhaps make a more regular shape instead of it feeling kind of random?
- 00:58:371 (9) - Another one of these double reverse sliders.
- 01:12:204 (1,3) - These blankets can be improved.
- 01:22:538 (11,12,13,14,1) - Make this stack with 01:21:621 (5,6).
- 01:54:038 (10) - Another double reverse.
- 03:08:871 (5,6) - Make these blanket perhaps?
- 03:10:954 (2) - This blanket can be slightly improved.
- 03:15:871 (7) - Same as above.
- 03:22:871 (8,10) - Don't completly obscure 10.
- 03:34:204 (3) - Another double reverse.
Good luck.
General
- Perhaps get into the habit of using Grid Size 4 (tiny)? I think there are a few sliders you could make look much neater if you used this. Change grid size by going to View->Grid Size, or by pressing the hotkey (default G).
Easy
I would suggest using a higher distance snap so that everything isn't overlapping everything else around it so much.
- 00:02:871 (1) - I would have the opening note for an easy difficulty closer to the centre than this.
- 00:14:871 (2,1) - The flow between these can be improved. Point the sliders towards each other to improve it. Flow is important for lower difficulties and should atleast be used between combos if possible.
- 00:30:204 (1) - Make this blanket around 00:28:871 (3).
- 00:31:538 (2,3) - Make these blanket eachother.
- 01:32:204 (3,1) - Try and avoid these overlapping.
- 01:35:538 (3,1) - Make these blanket.
- 01:46:871 (1,3) - Try and avoid these touching.
- 02:29:204 (5) - Just have a single reverse. Double reverses are kinda hard to read when the slider is this size. There are questionable ones earlier int he map, but they seem to make sense, though if it were me, I would try and change those too.
- 02:46:538 (3) - Move this down so it's not halfway up 02:45:871 (2).
- 02:50:871 (1,2) - Make these blanket.
- 03:00:204 (3,1) - Same as above.
- 03:04:204 (1,3) - Make these the same shape.
Medium
- 00:07:538 (2,2) - Avoid this overlap.
- 00:16:204 (1,3) - Move 3 so it isn't touching 1.
- 00:26:871 (1,3) - Same as above.
- 00:37:871 (1,2,3,4) - This square formation can be improved.
- 00:45:871 (1,2,3) - Improve these blankets.
- 00:46:538 (2,4) - Make these stack perfectly.
- 01:08:204 (3,1) - Try and make it so these don't touch.
- 01:12:204 (1,3) - Try and avoid 1 overlap the tail of 3. Overlapping the body slightly should be fine, but should also be avoided if possible.
- 01:17:038 (4) - This red tick note felt like it came out of nowhere and I didn't expect it to be that fast when the rest of the song hasn't had anything like this. I would probably remove this.
- 01:38:871 (2) - Make it a Finish rather than a Clap.
- 01:48:871 (1,2,1) - This triangle formation can be improved.
- 01:49:871 (1,2,3) - Same as above.
- 02:34:871 (1,2) - Try and avoid these touching. Even better would be to blanket.
- 02:42:204 (1,1) - Improve the flow here.
- 03:15:871 (2,3) - Move 3 a bit higher up so that the flow is better.
- 03:20:871 (2,1) - Try and avoid these touching.
- 03:33:538 (1,3) - Make these the same shape.
Hard
I don't think you should use x0.8 Distance snap for regular speed combos where you did. The notes are overlapping where they don't really need to. You can afford to open the gap a bit more on Hard difficulty.
- 00:30:871 (1,2) - Either make these parallel. or make the angle between them a bit more distinct.
- 01:06:871 (1,3) - Try and avoid these touching.
- 01:12:204 (1,3) - Try and get the head of 1 and tail of 3 to perfectly stack. You can use Ctrl+G to reverse a slider to get the tail's co-ordinate.
- 01:20:871 (5,6) - Don't overlap these so much.
- 01:43:621 (4) - This blue tick slider seems out of place and doesn't fit with the music.
- 02:15:871 (1) - Don't make the entire slider a whilst; just the head.
- 02:26:538 (3,1) - Don't overlap these so much.
- 02:30:871 (5,6) - Improve the flow here.
- 02:31:538 (1,1) - Make these the same shape.
- 02:57:538 (1,1) - Make these perfectly stack.
- 03:02:204 (5,6) - Don't overlap these so much.
- 03:05:538 (3,4,5,6,1) - This square can be improved.
- 03:08:538 (1) - Don't make the enitre slider a clap; just the head.
- 03:11:538 (5,6) - This blanket can be improved.
- 03:23:538 (3,4) - Don't overlap these so much.
Insane
- 00:04:204 (4) - New Combo.
- 00:07:038 (7) - I would shorten this slider, or split it into two.
- 00:10:204 (6,1) - Make these blanket.
- 00:22:704 - Add a note here.
- 00:28:371 (3) - Shorten or split.
- 00:32:204 (1,3) - Try and avoid this overlap, or at least the overlap over the tail.
- 00:35:538 (4,1) - Perfectly stack with the tail.
- 00:51:204 (2,3,4) - Make the tails perfectly stack.
- 01:11:871 (5,2) - Either avoid the overlap, or stack.
- 01:21:621 (5,6,7,8,9,1) - The amount of claps here isn't really necessary and just feels out of place.
- 01:25:371 (2,3,4) - Move these around so that 2 is closer to 1 than 3 for better readability.
- 01:29:538 (1,2) - This blanket can be improved.
- 02:10:371 (3) - Shorten or split.
- 02:19:371 (3) - This feels out of place; I would use something else like a stream.
- 02:41:038 (3) - Shorten this, and make the stream before it longer perhaps.
- 03:03:538 (3,5) - Make these perfectly stack.
- 03:22:204 (3,4,5,1) - This triangle can be improved. Pay attention to the distance between them.
- 03:34:038 (3,4,5,6,7,1,2) - Make a more regular shape. Consider using the Create Polygon Circle feature (Ctrl+Shift+D).
Another
This difficulty is outside of my skill level, so I can't mod it as efficiently, but I'll do what I can.
- 00:07:704 (1) - Change this double reverse slider, as two reverses on a slider of this length can be hard to read.
- 00:51:204 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - Perhaps make a more regular shape instead of it feeling kind of random?
- 00:58:371 (9) - Another one of these double reverse sliders.
- 01:12:204 (1,3) - These blankets can be improved.
- 01:22:538 (11,12,13,14,1) - Make this stack with 01:21:621 (5,6).
- 01:54:038 (10) - Another double reverse.
- 03:08:871 (5,6) - Make these blanket perhaps?
- 03:10:954 (2) - This blanket can be slightly improved.
- 03:15:871 (7) - Same as above.
- 03:22:871 (8,10) - Don't completly obscure 10.
- 03:34:204 (3) - Another double reverse.
Good luck.