1. Advanced (2.88 stars, 437 notes)
2. Attraction (3.56 stars, 629 notes)
3. Easy (1.34 stars, 204 notes)
4. Hard (3.13 stars, 579 notes)
5. Normal (1.86 stars, 309 notes)

1. Easy diffs are highly recommended to keep the distance spacing the same throughout the song. eg. 00:12:244 is very hard to read as the distance is the same but the rhythm is not
2. Try and avoid overlapping the objects like at 02:05:436
3. 02:31:744 - Pattern is kinda boring with the vocals. Consider using sliders at this part
4. 02:32:551 - Move to 02:32:667

1. 00:34:744 (1) - Remove NC
2. 00:34:974 (1) - ^
3. 00:45:821 (1) - distance spacing
4. 00:49:974 (6) - doesn't fit the rhythm. Try this
5. 01:42:128 (4) - Try avoid overlapping objects
6. 01:58:513 (1) - Not enough time after spinner. Try end at 02:01:282
7. 02:10:974 (3) - spacing (too close)
8. Too many spinners at 02:15:128 onwards
9. 03:08:667 (1,2,3,4) - don't overdo this pattern, gets boring

[ Rizen ] wrote:

[Easy]

1. Easy diffs are highly recommended to keep the distance spacing the same throughout the song. eg. 00:12:244 is very hard to read as the distance is the same but the rhythm is not
2. Try and avoid overlapping the objects like at 02:05:436
3. 02:31:744 - Pattern is kinda boring with the vocals. Consider using sliders at this part
4. 02:32:551 - Move to 02:32:667

[Normal]

1. 00:34:744 (1) - Remove NC
2. 00:34:974 (1) - ^
3. 00:45:821 (1) - distance spacing
4. 00:49:974 (6) - doesn't fit the rhythm. Try this
5. 01:42:128 (4) - Try avoid overlapping objects
6. 01:58:513 (1) - Not enough time after spinner. Try end at 02:01:282
7. 02:10:974 (3) - spacing (too close)
8. Too many spinners at 02:15:128 onwards
9. 03:08:667 (1,2,3,4) - don't overdo this pattern, gets boring

Gray Veyron wrote:

Hello~ Direct mod!

[> General <]

1. - The background is okay and good quality. You should resize the dimension to a rankable size (since it's 16:9) > 1366x768
2. - Why this "Ore no Imouto ga Konna ni Kawaii Wake ga nai" is together on source and tags? remove on source and the tags will count them on. Fixed.
3. - The volume is too high and loud, you should decrease it to 70%, 60%, or 50%.Fixed. Put hitsound volume to 70%
4. - Timing Check: BPM is okay, but the offset is a bit early, try on 4,080.Fixed. Seems to have solved many problems with beat placement.
5. - Adjust a preview point somewhere on any part. My suggestion > 01:03:128 Fixed. Put timing point at 00:18:849

[> Normal <]

1. - I don't think i can give you mods on this due to overmap or mapping level is too low, but i can help you with some major issues i pointed out.
2. - I can see you mainly focus on vocals in most parts. I perfer to follow the beats more than the vocals.
3. 00:09:359 (1) - I see that this wiggle slider is unrankable, or try to make it's borders visible by splitting the points off.
4. 00:18:821 (1) - You shouldn't add more reverse arrows on a slider. This might bore players when they're playing your map.
5. 00:40:974 (4) - You should add a note here, leaving some strong beats empty would feel awkward.
6. 01:16:051 (4) - Same as 00:09:359 (1) -, but bigger than that.
7. 01:43:974 (4,1) - It's not recommended if a spinner appears really quick. Since some players want to prepare for a spinner, you should bring it up early. Give a little space.
8. 02:07:282 (5,2) - Try to avoid this kind of overlaps, keep the pattern visible and clear for players to notice.
9. 03:28:974 (3) - This slider is sure looks straight, but i think it's too simple and somewhat overmapped. How about curving it? or remove the slider and map a few notes?
10. - I haven't point out others because they have the same issues as the mods above. So try to find some in this diff.
    
    Did a major beatmap redesign which involved all of the changes.

[> Hard <]

1. - Almost the same issues as the previous diff, but some issues here are different than the once i've told.
2. 00:05:436 (4,5,6,7) - This is alike burai flow, which is unrankable. You might need to remap their position to avoid this.
3. 00:41:897 (4,5) - This is quite confusing to players when a slider's arrow overlaps the circle. They might think there are no circles front of it and would get a miss. Try not to do this on other parts.
4. 01:11:667 (1,2,3,4,5) - Pattern is fine, but overmapped. You'll need to listen to the song track instead of vocals or background musics.
5. 01:19:282 (4,5,6,7) - Overlapping circles head and tail. The flow might not be clear to players.
6. 02:46:051 (1,2) - The extended slider here doesn't make sense with the song track neither your own track. So shorten the slider to the red tick.
7. - I've seen some patterns were okay, but i think it's not nessesary if the pattern got worse while playing on. So try to remap some parts nearby the ending. The starting is okay, but few of them needs a 'fix'.
   
   Did a beatmap redesign which involved all of these changes. However 1 or 2 parts I had to use repeating sliders otherwise the patterns would feel repetitive.

I think that's all for me. You'll need to learn more of mapping and rhythm hearing. Or try to ask another modder to help you with this map than just me >_>
Well... Good Luck!

1. There are some things that are really bugging me.
   but, the most important one is your placing style.
   The most notes you placed or focused on the vocals. now, last modder said he prefered to follow the beat,
   but, and dont get me wrong, it is preffered by a lot of people to follow the beat.
   that is because circles place on the beat are easier to predict, while vocals needs to be learned.
   if someone hears the song for the first time, and the beats are placed on vocal lines, then he is going to have some trouble.
   especially playing higher difficulties.
   
   https://osu.ppy.sh/forum/viewtopic.php?f=56&t=58959
   t/86329
   t/37194
   
   I think if you read these post, especially the first one, it will help you understand what i'm trying to say
   and hope it will make you a better beatmapper.

Fryz3 wrote:

Hi! modder came from: p/3643355/

General

1. There are some things that are really bugging me.
   but, the most important one is your placing style.
   The most notes you placed or focused on the vocals. now, last modder said he prefered to follow the beat,
   but, and dont get me wrong, it is preffered by a lot of people to follow the beat.
   that is because circles place on the beat are easier to predict, while vocals needs to be learned.
   if someone hears the song for the first time, and the beats are placed on vocal lines, then he is going to have some trouble.
   especially playing higher difficulties.
   
   https://osu.ppy.sh/forum/viewtopic.php?f=56&t=58959
   t/86329
   t/37194
   
   I think if you read these post, especially the first one, it will help you understand what i'm trying to say
   and hope it will make you a better beatmapper.

sorry that i´ve got to end it like this, but I think it needs a lot of work.
I can´t help you, but I hope these post will guide you in the right way

SoGa wrote:

General

1. Why is this complete map has no hitsound ? Histound is also an important facts for this rhythm game tho , without the hitsound , the whole map sound boring .Consider to learn about how to put hitsound

Fixed. Now it sounds really nice. Thanks for showing me the way sir, or madam.


Note: As I did rework a lot of stuff, I made changes but not fully according to what SoGa suggested.

Easyl

1. AR3 or AR4 fit better there than AR2 tho Fixed. Changed to AR3
2. i would use 1.0 for SVNo change. This is aimed at newer players so I would like to make it a nice and chilled.
3. 00:04:080 i think the volume 50-60 is ok for the intro . Fixed. Changed to 60%
4. 00:05:926 (3) - i prefer this
5. 00:07:310 (4) - i would use this rhythm instead
6. 00:09:156 (1) - Not really recommend to put a spinner here ,becuz after a spinner , u have to left 4 gaps of white ticks .look at the image
7. 00:14:695 (1,1) - ^ same as above
8. 00:22:080 Here is clear a sound there , add a note pls
9. 00:23:926 ^ or maybe just turn this into a 1/1 slider 00:23:464 (5) -
10. 00:22:541 (4) - NC Fixed
11. 00:24:387 (6) - NC Fixed
12. 00:28:080 (3) - NC Fixed
13. 00:38:695- Add a note Fixed
14. 00:39:156 (4) - NC here Fixed
15. 00:42:849- Add a note Fixed
16. 00:45:618 (1,1) - same as the top one mentioned
17. 00:48:849 (2) - don't just use red point to draw a slider , it seems bad tho , draw it more smoothly something like this is ok Fixed. Learned my lesson, so I use a lot of blanket sliders. Looks much nicer thanks to you.
18. 00:52:080 (4) - NC Fixed
19. 00:53:926 consider to add a note here
20. 00:54:387 (2) - For this one , is a little bit hard for newby to react tho , i would put something like this instead
21. 00:59:464 (4,5) - ^
22. 01:40:541 (2) - ^
23. 00:55:772 (1) - turn this one into 2 1/1 slider fit better there
24. 01:08:695 (3) - i would put this one following this 01:07:310 (2) - slider-tail . It is more clearly and ez to play
25. 01:42:387 add a note here
26. 01:44:695 ^
27. 01:47:464 (1) - putting here is a little bit weird , i would put it to blanket if i cant , i will probably do this instead
28. 02:02:233 (1,2) - This kind of Overlap is seems bad tho ..hope u can fix it
29. 02:04:080 (2) - NC
30. 02:26:695 (4) - change this in to a 1/1 slider instead ,02:24:387 (1,2,3,4,5) - this part for newb is too hard i think
31. 03:03:156 (2,3,4) - two 1/1 slider fit better than 3 notes instead
32. 03:10:541 (3,4) - ^
33. 03:21:618 (4) - ^
34. 03:25:310 (3) - i will do instead of current placement
35. 03:27:156 (4) - ^

Note: As I did rework a lot of stuff, I made changes but not fully according to what SoGa suggested.

Normal

1. Ar4 is ok
2. SV 1.1 is ok ,the current one is a little bit fast maybe
3. 00:04:772 (4,5) - how about move this 2 forward a tick? i mean 00:04:772 (4) - start at 00:05:003 -
4. 00:07:310 (1,2,3,4) - maybe u can try this ? it is not overlap and more aesthetics
5. 00:09:156 (5) - This slider start here 00:09:618 - not here 00:09:156 - and also recommend to change the current pattern , is not smooth tho
6. 00:13:310 (6,7) - Blanket it em more beautiful pls
7. 00:15:618 (2,3) - ^
8. 00:31:772 (1,1) - This is the same as i mentioned as easy , but in normal ,after a spinner , u have to left one instead of four Fixed
9. 00:59:464 (9) - NC
10. 01:10:772 - delete this note
11. 01:47:926 (1) - NC
12. 01:54:156 Add a note here
13. 01:58:080 Add a note here and start the spinner at 01:58:541 end here
14. 02:18:387 (1) - delete the spinner and map it
15. 02:22:079 (2) - This one is not fit the song lmao , change this instead
16. 02:23:464 (5) - delete this one and add a note here if u change the above one 02:23:233
17. 02:28:079 (5) - There is unnecessary to slow this one down and it supposed to end here 02:29:926
18. 02:31:310 (7) - change it into 2 note
19. 02:49:310 (5) - change to a note only
20. 02:52:079 (1) - NC this one just for consistency that ur putting NC following 2 big whiteticks
21. 02:57:156 (1) - 1/1 slider fit here better
22. 03:08:002 (7) - u add a 1/2 slider here and why is here has nothing ？03:09:849 ，do the samething as 03:08:002 (7) - for consistency
23. 03:11:695 ^
24. 03:13:541 ^
25. 03:15:156 a reverse slider here , and delete the following 2 notes
26. 03:18:156 (8) - this one move to here 03:17:695 (6) - and delete , 03:17:696 (6,7) -

I will end my mod here , hope i help u ,if u still don't understand what i've said , feel free to catch me in-game , the rest hards im not going to mod em due to insufficient quality maybe , 其实是我懒,要摸4个full diff搞死我 Try it now. You will be surprised

;w; Good Luck

DahplA wrote:

Hi, DahplA here posting from Jloughman14's and DahplA's Modding team. This is a response in regards to this request. Please be sure to vote here on how helpful our mod was.

General

1. I'm pretty sure you still have default combo colours. There is nothing wrong with default combo colours . However I will change it to something else.

Mecheman's Hard+

1. Circle Size 5 on a <4 star? I'd consider lowering this. (Same with Hard) For the hard diff, as there is nothing crazy in terms of patterns, and the fact that it looks better with cs5 on, along with quite a low od to compensate for small cs, I would not change that. For Mecheman's hard+, I am thinking of getting it reduced to 4<x<5 Circle Size
2. 00:09:628 (11) - Maybe NC here because it follows a different rhythm
3. 00:14:705 (1) - Why not stack this?
4. 00:40:320 (12) - Shouldn't there be NC here?
5. 00:40:551 (13) - Space this out more
6. 00:48:859 (2,3) - Make these sliders the same (as in copy paste)
7. 00:58:782 (1,2) - Maybe curve these out more
8. 01:05:474 (2) - Straighten this out more
9. 01:19:551 (5,6) - This may be too hard to read for that level of difficulty
10. 02:05:128 (1) - Random NC
11. 03:12:166 (1,1,1) - Remove NCs
12. Just a quick note: The NCs need to be more consistent, but because I cannot tell where you want them, I can't suggest where to remove and where to place. I'd recommend just putting them 4 or 8 beats. [b ]I am placing new combo's every 8 beats for every difficulty. [/b]

All of the above is up to Mecheman; he is reworking it now as I speak

Hard

1. 00:11:013 (1) - ^ I am placing new combo's every 8 beats for every difficulty.
2. 00:12:397 (5) - This is placed too close to previous circle Changed. Reverse the starting position and rotated it 40 degrees anticlockwise. Doing that not only fixed your suggestion, but it unexpectedly blankets the next note .
3. 00:22:090 (6) - Stack? That one I will not change. The reason is that I placed note 6 to complete the diamond pattern, and that note is blanketed by the slider (3.)
4. 00:37:551 (1) - ^ Will not change that because that is part of a triangle pattern with note 2 of the previous combo, slider end of slider 1 from the previous combo and slider 1 from this combo. It blankets the next note as well.
5. 00:39:859 (4) - Maybe have the sliderend stack on 00:39:397 (2) - I did not even think about that (thanks for pointing it out ). Fixed and looks better.
6. 00:53:705 (1) - Stack Sadly, no stack as I placed that there for a pattern.
7. 00:55:782 (1) - Blanket Done.
8. 00:56:936 (5) - ^ I use that slider to blanket the next triplet, not the triplet 2,3,4.
9. 00:59:474 (1,2,3) - Doesn't fit the rhythm (There are several more spots this occurs) This one is interesting, I do agree with the change shown in the image at that time, at 01:58:551 and 02:22:230. However, at the chorus, I do use the 1,2,3 pattern but it actually fits in this area. Moreover when I used it at the non vocal parts it does fit and adds a change to the pattern. Thanks for that though.
   
   SPOILER

   
10. 01:03:166 (1) - Blanket Fixed.
11. 01:38:936 (5) - ^ This one makes a diamond pattern and already blankets notes 2 and 3. No change here.
12. 02:05:474 (1) - ^ Fixed.
13. 03:06:859 (1) - Stack No change because I like the current flow of it right now.

FreeSongs wrote:

Hihi^^ as you request!

Because I am pretty bad at modding easy diffs, the mod below is only my personal suggestion ;_;

[Easy]
00:06:397 (4) - 3/4 sliders like this are too hard for beginners imo. Try to avoid using those sliders in easy diffs. I decided that only on very long sliders does it end on a blue tick, but at parts like these, I used 4/4 Sliders
00:17:013 (3,1) - how about making a blanket here? like this:

Fixed
There are a lot of blankets that can be improved. For example, 00:18:859 (1,2) - 00:18:859 (1,3) - 00:26:243 (1,2,3) - , ... Improved some of them but as I use distance snap, at times I cannot get a perfect blanket, so I tried doing as best as I could.
A perfect and pretty blanket is like what you did here: 00:57:628 (3,4) - Yay.
I think thats pretty much all I want to say for easy ;_;

[Normal]
00:35:474 (6) - This is a little bit hard for beginners, and it is not recommended to have multiple reverese on a short slider. Fixed
01:48:628 (4) - 03:21:628 (6) - ^ Fixed for the first one. However, for the second one, as there is a break between the end of the repeating slider and the next note, it should be fine. Therefore I did not change that.
01:03:166 (1,2,3) - Again, it is very rare to put circle at blue tick since its a little bit too difficult. I would do something like this

01:11:013 (2,3,4) - Same as above. consider to use sliders to make it easier to play as suggested above. Fixed. Other places I found out and I fixed them. Thanks for helping me for that.

[Hard]
00:31:090 (5,6,7,8,9) - How about making the pattern symmetrical like this?

Fixed. Thanks so much for pointing that out. I intended for it to be symmetrical. Must have been an oversight.
01:11:243 (3) - Consider to follow the vocal here 01:11:359 - like this

Fixed. It does sound better. At first I thought it will be much harder for the person playing it, but the low overall difficulty should compensate for that.
02:03:166 (4) - 02:10:320 (7) - ^
Fixed for 2:10:320, but the above suggestion did not work for 2:03:166, so I tried a different method which works just as well. :O. Moreover, there are other sections in which I managed to follow the beat to the vocals without raising difficulty by that much.
02:18:974 (10) - Shorten by 1/4 and remove clap at the slider end. Fixed
03:08:243 (10) - This reverse slider is too difficult to read imo. I suggest to shorten it into single reverse slider and add circles at 03:08:705 - 03:08:936 - Fixed. I added circles at 3:08:705 and 3:08:936, but not in between as it felt off if I did that.
03:29:013 (7) - ^ Fixed

Hope this helps!
Good luck!

Gamu wrote:

hello! sorry for the delay... Do not worry about that

[ General]

1. Works In Progress/Help ⇒ Pending Beatmaps When Uploaded I will move it.
   Please move the forum
2. Found unused .wav files: "soft-slidertick3.wav" and "normal-hitwhistle2.wav". You must delete them. Fixed
3. Inconsistency in combo colours: Easy diff is different from other diffs, so you might want to unify this combo colors. Fixed
   
   image

   
4. Source: 俺の妹がこんなに可愛いわけがない。
   I'd like to recommend that you change to Japanese source. It is the correct. Done
5. Tags: Clara Alice Fixed
   Add they name. ClariS is unit name.
6. Disable the "Widescreen Support". It doesn't work in this mapset. Fixed

[ Easy]

1. Difficulty setting is a little low. Please change to HP2 and OD2. Fixed
2. 01:58:551 (1) - Add a soft-hitfinish! Fixed
3. 02:39:166 (1) - Placement and looks is bad. Please try to create like this slider~Fixed
   
   image

   
4. 02:44:705 (3) - You can create a beautiful slider. Fixed
   
   image

   
5. 02:48:397 (3) - ^ Fixed
   
   image

   
6. 03:17:936 (2) - spacing error. It should be 1.06~1.14x Fixed
7. 03:38:233 (T) - this green line is unsnapped. snap to 03:38:243. Also I'd like to recommend that you change the volume to 5%. Fixed and I made the change to every difficulty for consistency. Sounds nicer.

[ Normal]

1. Difficulty setting is a little low. Please change to OD4. Fixed
2. 01:55:551 (3) - Arrow is hidden. Readability is important in normal diff, so please change the placement. Fixed. Redesigned that area and the beats after that to make it more clean.
3. 02:07:551 (4,5) - This rhythm is difficult to understand. Please try changing the slider (5) to circle (02:08:243) Fixed
4. 02:37:090 (4,5) - ^Fixed
5. 02:44:243 (2,3) - ^Fixed
6. 02:51:859 (3,4) - ^Fixed
7. 02:53:474 (1,2) - ^Fixed
   
   image

   

[ Hard]

1. Difficulty setting is a little high. Please change to HP5 and CS4. Changed HP Drain to 5. CS will be at 5 for the time being, because when I put it to CS4, it does not feel right; it does not clean and it looks too compressed.
2. 01:09:859 (X) - Add a circle! Fixed
3. 02:38:474 (X) - ^ Fixed
4. 03:01:320 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - It is so difficult to read the rhythm in hard level. Don't stacking!Fixed and only stacked notes 1 and 5.

[ Mecheman's Hard+]

1. 01:03:166 (1) - Add a soft-hitfinish at the start point! Fixed on behalf of Mecheman
2. 02:02:243 (1) - ^ Fixed on behalf of Mecheman
3. 02:29:936 (1) - Maybe this slider is not permitted. It is not possible to read the flow of the slider ball...Fixed by Mecheman.

Sorry for short modding ;w; Either that means that you did not find anything wrong with the rest of the beatmaps, or there were a lot of problems and it would have been a pain to go through all of them. I hope it is the former lol.
Good luck! Thanks.

rhalp10 wrote:

Sorry My Queue For STDHas Been Closed I Can't Handle That Mode Anymore ..

hanyuu_nanodesu wrote:

Hey, I got bored xD
originally coming from your modding Q...
Maybe you can mod my map in return : https://osu.ppy.sh/s/322414

[General]

1. I don't think you really need to add kiai here 03:16:090 maybe if you want, you just have to turn the kiai on and turn it off again after that so the stars would just pop up to avoid too much kiai. I did quick bursts of kiai for that moment. Thanks for that.
2. Maybe you better put the audio preview before the chorus like here 01:02:705 or here 02:01:782 but it's up to you. Changed to the former time.

[Easy]

1. There's a DS problem, maybe you can fix it.
2. 00:09:166 (2,5) - Stack them? for neater look. For easy difficulties, there is no stacking
3. 00:11:474 (1) - Actually, ending this slider on blue tick causing a polarity problem... I think it can't be helped since you are following the vocal, but maybe you can change it by following the background sound instead... Fixed
4. 01:34:551 (2) - Adjust the shape more so the tick would fall on the pointy part...
5. 02:11:936 (3) - Same polarity problem, maybe just end it on white tick just like what you did on the previous part, like this 01:05:474 (3) - or 01:12:859 (4) - will do just fine. Fixed
6. 02:12:859 (1,4) - Stack the heads properly, again for neater looks. For easy difficulties, there is no stacking
7. 02:55:782 (3) - Again, just end it on white tick Fixed
8. Basically a good map, almost nothing to mod because you actually follow the rhythm well. But I think you must improve your blanket for neater looks, use approach circle as a guide. Most of your blankets, like this 00:20:243 (2,3) - or 00:27:628 (2,3) - or 03:21:628 (2,1) - and many more are imperfect, so you better fix them. Fixed

[Normal]

1. Almost look like Hard in first glance o-o maybe this should be Normal+ I do not know why this difficulty is rated so high.
2. Still, a DS problem, fix it. Fixed
3. 00:07:320 (1) - Why the lonesome combo? You don't change the SV right? don't need to NC right after. Oversight. Fixed
4. 00:11:474 (1,2) - Switch these two places. http://puu.sh/ilK73/7b29deb6eb.jpg Would follow the rhythm better. Fixed
5. 00:29:936 (1) - Extend the spinner here 00:33:166 and add a clap hitsound maybe? According to a previous modder [SoGa], he said that there should be at least a break of 2 beats for a spinner. Therefore there is no change.
6. 00:39:397 (5) - Move this to behind 00:40:090 (7) - so it looks like this http://puu.sh/ilKfR/c70daf142e.jpg it'll follow the vocal better. Fixed
7. 00:44:936 (2,3) - Switch place again, follow the vocal. http://puu.sh/ilKiT/7cd32ebd1c.jpg Fixed
8. 00:45:859 (4) - Move this behind 00:46:551 (6) - http://puu.sh/ilKlR/d8790dcb2e.jpg Fixed
9. 01:44:936 (1) - Unnecessary spinner, kinda out of place, just map this part.
10. 03:03:166 (5,6) - Delete (5), move (6) 1/2 tick forward and add a reverse, will fit better I think. http://puu.sh/ilKys/fd56340700.jpg
11. 03:09:859 (5) - Add a reverse? there's a pretty big sound here 03:10:320 Fixed that area. This area is probably the reason why my star difficulty is overrated.
12. Pretty good as well ^^, just need some improvement, again, in placing. Ah, and some note: I know it's better to start a slider on white tick, but if there's vocal that support, you can add slider at red tick to follow it; there are plenty in this song.

[Hard]

1. Circle size from 3 (in Normal) to 4.5 is a pretty big jump in diff, why don't just use CS 4? It's not comfortable to play with too small CS as well. I started with cs 5, because with cs4 it felt too cluttered and really easy. Cs 5 was too much of a hassle so I decided to settle on cs 4.5.
2. 00:06:859 Add a note here for better polarity? :3 Does not fit
3. 00:20:936 (8,12) - Stack properly~ Changed in remake. There is no stack there.
4. 01:25:320 (1,2,3) - This don't seem to fit well at the part, just keep the notes on white and red tick for this instrumental part. Changed in remake.
5. No break? A break here is actually pretty good 02:17:013 You need some break to adjust position, especially for mouse player (like me x-x) Did a break at 01:17:936. I did not put a break at 02:17:013 because this is mapped differently to the rest of the song, and I really wanted to map it.
6. Yeah, you're right, this is almost like old map, but better. I don't really like this kind of map so I can't really mod it; but that doesn't mean your map is bad, it's good, I have to say but you need to improve your placement, again ^^ Fixed a lot of stuff.
   I did a full remake of hard, so most of the stuff you mentioned does not apply here .

I'll end my mod here, I think the other Hard is not my type as well xD
Good luck~ :3

Damn score

uhh, dat misses >.<

1. I don't like small circles (CS>4)
2. I can see that sometimes the blankets are imperfect and there are some overlaps, it looks untidy
3. I don't really like double triplets. Like this http://puu.sh/iqDwV/09cab373a9.jpg got a lot of 100 there.
4. A slider like this 00:58:321 (8) - don't seem to fit the vocal. Use it for wiggle sound.
5. 01:02:243 (7) - This slider sounds weird... A note here 01:01:090 followed by a spinner would be better...
6. And I don't like this kind of rhythm 02:17:705 (5,6) - nothing wrong, just disliked it. Missed there.
7. And damn that speed up at end >.< Missed a lot there xD
8. 02:54:743 (5,6,7,8) - Combo breaker for me. The rhythm is kinda weird, four time stream, tricky for me. Plus the shape make it even harder.

hanyuu_nanodesu wrote:

Hi, requested test play

Damn score

uhh, dat misses >.<

Asking me to testplay is like telling me to mod according to my taste, so this is what I think

1. I don't like small circles (CS>4) I like small circles. The return of CS4+ Hard difficulties are imminent.
2. I can see that sometimes the blankets are imperfect and there are some overlaps, it looks untidy Fixing that at the moment.
3. I don't really like double triplets. Like this http://puu.sh/iqDwV/09cab373a9.jpg got a lot of 100 there.
4. A slider like this 00:58:321 (8) - don't seem to fit the vocal. Use it for wiggle sound. Extended the slider by 1 tick and it seems to be better than before.
5. 01:02:243 (7) - This slider sounds weird... A note here 01:01:090 followed by a spinner would be better... Fixed and applied it at another location. Amazingly all my difficulties have the same amount of sliders now.
6. And I don't like this kind of rhythm 02:17:705 (5,6) - nothing wrong, just disliked it. Missed there. Tried to employ variety between double notes and the slider.
7. And damn that speed up at end >.< Missed a lot there xD I did that on purpose, since I like to speed up the slider velocity around 40% from the finish.
8. 02:54:743 (5,6,7,8) - Combo breaker for me. The rhythm is kinda weird, four time stream, tricky for me. Plus the shape make it even harder. Changed Shape

That's all, no kudos. Thanks for testplay. It seems to me that the rework has worked.
Good luck

1. 00:06:397 (4) - copy paste next slider shape, doesnt really look that good with two sliders side by side with different shapes. would also blanket which looks cleaner.
   00:07:320 (5) - nc
2. 00:11:474 (1) - I don't think it's any different from previous verse, I think you should map this instead
   00:14:705 (2,1) - swap nc to follow vocals, I think thats better because easy-normal generally map after vocals over percussion so might aswell nc accordingly. there are more like these but you can find them
3. 00:26:243 (1,3) - these are curved a bit too much, the blanketing is weird because of it and i think it'd look better straightened out just a little little bit
4. 00:39:628 (5) - fix like this http://puu.sh/iNMwk.jpg
5. 00:46:090 (3) - also excessively curved, you should try to make the borders of the circle have equal distance to the sliderborders http://puu.sh/iNMyZ.jpg
6. 00:56:705 (2) - might be hard to play for newer players, sliders that pushes the flow so much like this is generally only used in insane or higher
7. 01:05:013 (2) - move up one box (4 pixels)
8. 01:06:397 (4) - move this one up a bit looks better imo
9. 01:14:705 (1) - unnecessary nc
10. 01:56:243 (3) - clap

1. 00:09:166 (3,4) - doesnt flow well from previous slider, try this 00:09:166 (3,4) -
2. 00:11:474 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - this whole rhythm is too difficult compared to previously imo, you had mostly 1/1 and 3/4 before and now theres a lot of 1/2 which can be overwhelming, or map the beggining with this rhythm, as long as its consistent
   00:14:705 (7,1) - excessively curved
3. 00:16:551 (2,3,4) - try placing like this, flows nicer and (2) isnt so close to previous slider http://puu.sh/iNNc3.jpg
4. 00:53:705 (6) - can place 1/1 slider here instead to follow held sound of vocal
5. 00:24:628 (4,5,6) - ctrl+h flows better, but you need to adjust next objects a bit
6. 00:34:782 (4) - center red anchor point and curve less looks better
7. 00:53:705 (6) - can place 1/1 slider here instead to follow held sound of vocal
8. 01:08:705 (4) - curve less
9. 01:12:397 (4) -
10. 01:56:243 (4) - clap
11. 02:57:166 (7,1) - swap nc
12. 03:21:628 (6) - you should never have more than one repeat unless its 1/4 sliders in hards or higher, no one ever uses more than 1 for longer slider in modern maps, so players naturally move away from the slider after the first repeat and so they will break.
13. 03:27:859 (4) - previous pattern doesnt flow well into this, you can just ctrl+h 03:27:859 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10) -

1. 00:03:628 - I think you should map this whole section with a slower sv, and slightly smaller spacing, because right now its keeping the same momentum as 00:18:859 - even though is a lot calmer.
2. 00:08:243 (2) - curve less
3. 00:13:320 (6) - not very good blanket
4. 00:14:705 (9) - copy paste 00:15:628 (2) - slider shape and ctrl+h+j
5. 00:21:166 (9) - curve less
6. 02:09:166 (10) - kinda confusing stacked under triplet, easier to read if you stack under previous slider
7. 02:17:705 (5,6) - stack looks better and more comfortable to play, i dont think there should be movement like this on doubles. doubles are actually difficult enough to play because its harder to keep rhythm on them, and doubles are pretty new to people playing hard diffs, so make them moving only makes them more annoying. there are more like these that i think you should fix.
8. 02:17:013 - same as first point, this section is a breakdown and should be slower
9. 02:54:166 (2,4,5) - overlap, move up 02:54:628 (4,5) -
10. 03:12:397 (1,2,3) - theres too much momentum in this pattern, notice how your cursor moves at pretty constant speed until you come to this where it has to speed up a lot without any change in music I think you should just follow the rhythm and melody.
11. 03:19:782 (1) - stack sliderend on previous slider looks better
12. 03:29:705 (10) - move this to x413 y122 and it flows better, move everything else down with it.