Sey wrote:

Well as I already said ingame to you, CLSW: Please let us try to consult a third BAT for this. I am really unsure about this and I personally think the Salad feels very easy, I am used to harder ones.

@Pappy: If you decide to keep your Salad as it is & with less Dashes check the rest of my recheck anyway, please.

CLSW wrote:

[Platter]
Fix its CS to 3.5 for consistency with other diffs.

01:14:713 (4) - x : 468 for hyperdash.

Call me back if you were ready.

CLSW wrote:

*Changed its title from (TV Animation Ver.) -> (TV Size).

Go for it!

Ranking Criteria wrote:

The video's audio track must be removed from the video file. The audio track in video is not used in osu!, so removing it reduces that filesize of the beatmap.

Ranking Criteria wrote:

There must not be any unused files in the map's folder except for the map's .osb file (since they sometimes get added even if the map doesn't have a storyboard) and storyboard .thumb files (since they are automatically created in image directories). Unused files add extra file size which is unnecessary.]

1. fruit-bananas-overlay.png
2. fruit-bananas.png
3. fruit-drop-overlay.png

1. 00:11:110 (2) - Replace this with a 1/2 repeater? Fit's the vocals perfectly fine and helps solve the spread issue stated above.
2. 00:15:910 (2) - 1/2 slider and a circle? Much more vocal orientated compared to similar sections but does flow well with the instrumental section too.
3. 00:32:111 (1,2) - Replace it with something like this: Fixes the score issue and I feel like it follows better.
4. 00:40:811 (4,5) - Swap this out for a 1/2 repeater? Sounds much more accurate to me.
5. 01:04:513 (4) - Swap this for a 1/2 and a circle on the white tick? Sounds a lot better with the vocals.

1. 00:48:912 (1,2) - 1/1 slider and a circle on the red tick? More simplistic and fitting of a salad, helps with score issue stated above.
2. 00:58:512 (1,2) - 1/1 slider? More simplistic and helps fix the score issue.
3. 00:59:712 (4) - Swap similar sections like these out for a singular circle? Slider seems fine but I think in this difficulty a circle would serve the purpose better. Examples: 01:09:313 (3) -
4. 01:12:913 (1) - Extend to a 1/1, more simplistic and fitting for this difficulty level.

1. Hitsounds: You can save a lot of space with them. "soft-hitfinish2" for example can be cropped about 3 seconds (look the graphic down here). That file is currently huge! (<1MB). "soft-hitfinish" is also huge, and you can only hear its 1st second out of 3.
   
   SPOILER

   
2. Skin: To complete the set of fruits you'll need to add "fruit-bananas.png", "fruit-bananas-overlay.png" and "fruit-drop-overlay.png".
3. Metadata:
   
   1. ArtistUnicode: "茶太"
   2. Title: "Dango Daikazoku -TV animation Ver.-"
   3. TitleUnicode: "だんご大家族 -TV animation Ver.-"
   4. Tags: is Jun Maeda the composer or sth? Otherwise it isn't that relevant and can be removed from there.
4. 01:23:714 (1,2,3,4) - You cannot let those notes inaudible. Raise the volume there.

1. There's not a real beat at 00:56:712 - , or at least very hard to even recognize. In all diffs you mapped that part however. The vocals already end a little earlier but it's hard to find a proper spot, maybe it's better to keep a single note in each difficulty at 00:56:112 - . The same counts for 01:15:313 - : You did it right in Salad, but not in Cup. In Platter you probably should wipe 01:15:613 (2) - since there also isn't a real audible beat.

1. 01:23:714 (2) - Please divide that slider into 2 single sliders as you did in the Salad to stress the note at 01:24:314 - .

1. Use Slider Tick Rate 2 here, to at least have a bit of higher fruit density. The spread between Salad and Platter isn't too high already, but this wiill give the song 12 extra droplets, which is better than nothing.

Sey wrote:

No KDS.

I want to point just a very few last things and then I can re-bubble it. I accept your decision that you wanted to keep these difficulties easy, even though the Platter could have been more adventurous. But that's fine, you decided to keep it that way and it's nothing that is going to make this mapset oacceptable.

[General]

1. There's not a real beat at 00:56:712 - , or at least very hard to even recognize. In all diffs you mapped that part however. The vocals already end a little earlier but it's hard to find a proper spot, maybe it's better to keep a single note in each difficulty at 00:56:112 - . The same counts for 01:15:313 - : You did it right in Salad, but not in Cup. In Platter you probably should wipe 01:15:613 (2) - since there also isn't a real audible beat.

[Cup]

1. 01:23:714 (2) - Please divide that slider into 2 single sliders as you did in the Salad to stress the note at 01:24:314 - .

[Platter]

1. Use Slider Tick Rate 2 here, to at least have a bit of higher fruit density. The spread between Salad and Platter isn't too high already, but this wiill give the song 12 extra droplets, which is better than nothing.

Call me back once you applied this.

1. Somehow the TickRate is still 1, although you wanted to change it to 2 ><
2. 00:59:412 (3) - I expected to have a HDash for the beat 00:59:712 - as in the previous case, where you had the custom cymbal. Would it be possible to do it here too? You'll need to split the slider into 2 circles though.
3. 01:04:513 (4) - Apply Ctrl-C, to enhance the lyrics with a light dash.
4. 01:25:214 (4) - What about deleting this note and adding a spinner till 01:26:114 - where the lyrics end? You don't have any, and with such calm songs there'll be lots of ties in the top positions :p