21:37 Riari: I'll make it quick
21:37 *Riari is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/514151 Chata - Dango Daikazoku [Salad]]
21:37 Riari: Timeline then gameplay
21:38 Riari: 00:06:910 (4) - Shorten this by 1/2 and circles on white and red ticks after? alternatively you could have a 1/2 slider from 00:07:510 -
21:39 Riari: Fits the vocals much better and I think the vocals are better to map on this
21:40 Pappy: I want to follow cymbals here, no change I think
21:40 Riari: thats fine
21:41 Riari: 00:18:910 (2) - This covers too much empty space, suggesting you bring it back and place a circle at 00:20:110 -
21:43 Pappy: Okay
21:46 Riari: 00:24:911 (1) - Make this a repeater? You can replace the slider you overlap with a 1/2 or a 1/1 starting at 00:26:111 - as they both fit quite well.
21:53 Riari: ?
21:54 Pappy: god, I forgot to reply ;_; I fixed it, sorry for delay
21:54 Riari: no problem
21:54 Riari: i thought you abandoned me
21:55 Riari: 01:03:913 (2) - Remove this and put a circle at 01:04:213 - There is nothing significant at the head of the slider, especially for a Salad.
21:57 Pappy: This is kind of strange beat, I prefer to keep as it is.
21:58 Riari: 01:06:013 (2,3) - Replace with a 1/2 slider starting 01:06:013 - keeps the strong beat the slider starts on but the tail lands on nothing so it doesn't fit as well.
21:59 Pappy: You're right, changed
22:00 Riari: 01:09:313 (3) - Head of this slider sounds like its on nothing to me, going to suggest you remove it and put a circle at 01:09:613 - maybe?
22:01 Pappy: Here is place for special hitsound, so I must keep it to get hitsounds consistent.
22:01 Riari: Okay
22:02 Riari: 01:20:713 (3) - Replace this? parts of the slider dont seem to fit.
22:02 Riari: Suggesting:
22:02 Riari: 01:20:713 - Circle here, 01:21:014 - 1/2 repeater here and maybe a circle at 01:22:214 -?
22:03 Riari: This is mainly to focus the notes onto the vocals at 01:20:713 - and 01:21:314 -
22:03 Riari: A 1/1 slider starting at 01:21:314 - also sounds really nice
22:05 Pappy: 1/1 slider on 00:51:462 (1) - sounds well
22:06 Riari: hm?
22:06 Riari: That sounds good, but start a 1/2 slider on the white tick after it?
22:07 Pappy: wait, I'm lost, how?
22:07 Riari: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2285877
22:08 Riari: Timeline only, note placement is completely random on the grid.
22:09 Pappy: god
22:09 Riari: ?
22:10 Pappy: I wanted to say that here: 01:21:314 - 1/1 slider sounds good, why it posted 00:51:612 (2) - O.o
22:10 Pappy: nevermind
22:10 Riari: ah
22:10 Riari: well it still makes sense 8)
22:11 Riari: you accidentally pointed out a good point
22:12 Pappy: okay owo
22:15 Riari: Playwise it seems fine, there are no extremely difficult parts to the map salad-wise and most dashes do fit so nothing to say there.
22:16 Pappy: yess
22:16 *Riari is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/514155 Chata - Dango Daikazoku [Cup]]
22:16 *Pappy is away: afk for a moment, sorry
22:16 Riari: Same again, Timeline then gameplay.
22:19 Riari: Only timeline problem here is at 01:20:713 (3) - , I would suggest you place a circle at 01:20:713 - and have a 1/1 slider from 01:21:314 - , it fits much better as the first half of the repeater goes over nothing.
22:21 Pappy: So the same as in salad, changed.
22:25 Pappy: Anything else?
22:25 Riari: Nothing cup-wise
22:25 Riari: but the SV differences
22:25 Riari: Salad is the same as the Platter
22:26 Riari: I would suggest putting the salad at 1.60 for an even spread but i don't really think its needed.
22:27 Pappy: I will change if anybody will say it again
22:27 Riari: Also; the difference in score between your Salad and Platter is worrying.
22:27 Pappy: Changing SV goees to remap most of patterns.
22:27 Riari: there is a 100k difference between both; this might be a rankability issue.
22:28 Riari: I would talk to a QAT about that, I think it was a reason that contributed for the Tekken map to be DQ'd.
22:30 Riari: But that is outside what I know, good luck with the rest of your map!