Hey, nice song you have there.
SKIN:
About the dango's... you should probably make it more small, it can be confusing because a little quarter of it doesn't count.
See?
I like it though, creative.
CUP:
AP: Lower it, I know it's Easy and all, but that's the point. (4 would be okay.)
OD: I always like the OD behind the AP, so I give it a 3. OR you could make this, leave the AP as it is, and lower the OD to 3.
Nothing besides that, really relaxing if you ask me.
PLATTER:
Very well done, I actually enjoyed it a lot.
HP: Raise it to 6.
AP: Raise it to 8 or 9, it's the hard one right?
OD: If you raise the AP to 8, 7. If you raise it to 9, 8.
Nothing aside from that.
SALAD:
AP: Raise it to 7.
00:36:311 (4) - Make it 2 circles.
00:41:112 (3) - Same here.
00:50:412 (4) - Make it a circle.
00:52:962 (5) - Erase this.
01:00:312 (5) - 2 circles.
01:12:163 (5) - Erase this.
That's all, good map, I love Clannad.
But really now, change that little thing I told you of the Skin, it's important.
'luck.
SKIN:
About the dango's... you should probably make it more small, it can be confusing because a little quarter of it doesn't count.
See?
I like it though, creative.
CUP:
AP: Lower it, I know it's Easy and all, but that's the point. (4 would be okay.)
OD: I always like the OD behind the AP, so I give it a 3. OR you could make this, leave the AP as it is, and lower the OD to 3.
Nothing besides that, really relaxing if you ask me.
PLATTER:
Very well done, I actually enjoyed it a lot.
HP: Raise it to 6.
AP: Raise it to 8 or 9, it's the hard one right?
OD: If you raise the AP to 8, 7. If you raise it to 9, 8.
Nothing aside from that.
SALAD:
AP: Raise it to 7.
00:36:311 (4) - Make it 2 circles.
00:41:112 (3) - Same here.
00:50:412 (4) - Make it a circle.
00:52:962 (5) - Erase this.
01:00:312 (5) - 2 circles.
01:12:163 (5) - Erase this.
That's all, good map, I love Clannad.
But really now, change that little thing I told you of the Skin, it's important.
'luck.