No KDS for that, this is only a very quick recheck for the Platter, as promised..
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- 00:03:310 (1,2) - Select these both together and CTRL + H them. This will create a better flow because in CTB everything is about typical left-right-left-right movements. Here you definitely need to stand too long between 00:02:710 (6,1) - .
- 00:05:710 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - Select all of these notes together again and CTRL + H them, so you will have some more movement between 00:04:510 (2,1) - without destroying the pattern at all, just flipping it.
- 00:07:810 (6,1) - Geez, this jump is way too high. Look clearly at the music, there is not any particular beat that emphasizes it. Best option is to stack 00:08:110 (1) - with 00:07:510 (5) - , so you create a simple triangle movement, which plays a lot easier.
- 00:36:911 (1,2,3,4) - Maybe decrease distances between these notes a bit, it feels a bit too extreme. But please keep the Dashes anyway, but easy ones.
- 00:42:312 (2,3) - These wall patterns... Please move them closer to the center again.
- 00:46:512 (1,2) - Personally I think the piano is too calm for any dash, so think about no dashes before the quite intense Kiai starts anyway.
- 00:47:712 (3,4,5,6) - Can be easier, too: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2210775
- 00:47:712 (3) - NC is okay here.
- 00:50:112 (4) - NC
- (...) and so on. Well about the NCs, please take a look on all your difficulties again. It is typical to set NCs very often in CTB, mostly on any or any second 1/1 stanza to keep the Plate of the Ryuuta as empty as possible. But this also depends on the music. Whenever there is a cymbal, drum or high vocal, you might consider adding an NC.
- 00:51:012 (6,1) - I think the HDash should be here instead of 00:51:312 (1,2) - . Listen to the vocals, definitely makes more sense that way.
- 01:06:913 (2,3,4,5) - This is overmapped. There are no clear beats on the 1/4 ticks. Use the 1/2 ticks. The following timelines works well:
- 01:09:013 (2,3) - HDash due to the cymbal.
- Mh, jussayin, the 2nd Kiai lacks of HDashes. Compare it with your 1st Kiai, it is much harder. Please rework the Kiai in a whole. Not gonna do it this post because it'sonly a recheck and you have the 1st kiai for compare anyway.
- 01:22:514 (1,2,1,2,3,4) - Select this whole pattern and CTRL + H it, to create some movement at 01:21:914 (5,1) -