Choucho - Authentic Symphony (TV Size) [OsuMania]

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lenpai
Better move this to pending. I mean, the spread is finished. WIP sections are only for marathons and incomplete maps.
Topic Starter
Aikawa
Thanks for the info Len :3 Just moved it to pending section.
lenpai
I find it weird to see "TV Size" on an eroge OP.
But lol idk my animu metadata.
_Zenith
Hi,From my queue!
>.<
Here is my mod!
Orange = you need pay attention.
Red = unrankable.
[General]
Artist: OK!
Title: OK!
Hitsound: OK!
Disabled countdown: OK!
For hitsound,Add all about piano notes a hit-hat sound is really bad idea..

[4K HD]
00:18:405 (18405|2) - I don't know what exactly you following for.
00:23:377 (23377|0,23891|0) - ^
00:28:177 You can add a note here.
00:38:462 (38462|0,38805|0) - Actually you don't use jack here. I know you want follow the pitch,but for better pattern.
00:46:348 - 00:49:091 ^
00:51:834 (51834|0,52177|1,52520|2,52862|3) - I don't know what exactly you following for,It's more like following the vocal but it is not.
01:03:491 (63491|3,63662|3,63834|3,63834|2) - Here is too,Don't use overuse jack. I know you want follow the pitch,But for better pattern,Exactly you don't need to do this.Just put the notes like stair or better pattern.
01:10:348 - 01:11:205 - Pattern weird.
01:12:062 (72062|0,72234|0,72405|0,72577|0,72748|0) -
01:12:062 (72062|2,72234|2,72405|2,72748|2,73091|2) -
Wow Dude,you jack too many times XD!
01:13:605 (73605|0,74120|0,74462|0,74805|0,75148|3,75491|3,75834|3) -
Ln jacks,I think that's really weird.

[4K NM]
00:21:491 (21491|0,21662|0) - Don't jack.
00:34:005 (34005|0,34348|0,34691|0,35034|0) - These jacks makes the pattern looks weird. Change these notes to other col.
00:38:462 (38462|3,38805|3,39148|3) - ^
01:06:920 (66920|0,69662|3) - Removed?

Well that's all my mods.

Good luck! :)
erlinadewi-
hi aikawasora >.<)/ Mod requested from Queue. and sorry for late

only mod 4K diffs, gomenne :(

Hitsound volume decrease to 30 or 25, i think very loud when you using 50
00:32:634 - add 1 note more for cymbal sound
01:20:634 - double, i think that sound same with 01:19:091 (79091|1,79091|3) - this
00:10:691 (10691|3) - move to 2 to avoid jack with LN
00:18:920 - http://puu.sh/mfJ61/6285b6bd47.png
00:21:491 (21491|0) - move to 2 to avoid jack
00:24:577 (24577|1,24748|2) - swap coloum
00:49:091 - till 00:53:205 - better change to single note, i think it's little hard when you using that LN pattern in normal difficult
01:12:234 (72234|0) - move to 3 then 01:12:320 (72320|2) - move to 2
00:02:120 (2120|3,2120|0) - move to 2 and 3
00:12:405 (12405|1,12920|1) - ghost LN
00:17:720 (17720|3,18405|2) - ^
00:23:377 (23377|0,23891|0,24234|1) - ^
00:24:577 (24577|3) - move to 3
00:26:634 (26634|3) - ghost LN
00:51:834 (51834|0,52005|1,52177|1,52348|2,52520|2,52691|3,52862|0,52862|3,53034|1,53205|0,53205|3) - i think it's better to re pattern again
00:53:205 - http://puu.sh/mfJAC/8dcccd00d4.png how about this :)


that mods just a suggest, so feel free to reject yaa ^^/

Goodluck Sora chan~ >w<)9
Takamori37
Big sorry for a quite long time delay because of my real life tasks.

Based on your NM Request Here.

I'm focusing in:
  1. Note Consistencies
  2. Situational Changes (Mainly in Kiai or somewhat)
  3. Note Balancing
  4. I won't change some patterns, mainly in unique patterns

| 0 | 1 | 2 | 3 |


[4K HD]
  1. 00:22:348 - Clap sound is here, add one note there.
  2. If ^^ applied, change some another impacts here,
  3. 00:24:748 - Seems looks same as before,
  4. 01:10:691 (70691|2,70691|3) - Too hard for < 3.00 stars, remove one of them in 01:10:691
  5. 01:17:891 - Situation shanges, add 0.
  6. 01:21:320 (81320|2,81320|1,81320|0) - Too crowd for cymbal, remove one of them.
  7. 01:23:205 - Situation changes, add 2.
  8. 01:26:120 - Morely like finishing, add 1.

| 0 | 1 | 2 | 3 | 4 | 5 | 6 |


[7K HD]
  1. 00:15:662 - A little drum hitsound here, in 00:16:177 should be added 1 note here.
    Seems like this,
  2. 00:38:805 - A little louder here, add 2.
  3. 00:55:948 - Kiai tansitions, add 0 for crowder.
  4. 00:58:691 - A drum sound here, add 6.
  5. 01:10:862 - Louder also, add 3.
  6. 01:17:891 - Transition also, add 6.
  7. 01:23:205 - Refer to 01:24:577 situation, Add 6 and 01:23:205 (83205|4) - move to 5.
dudehacker
Here's the instrumental used for reference:


EZ and NM seems good i don't see anything bad

I think you shouldnt overmap the intro too much, only the piano notes are loud enough to be mapped, feels weird playing them.
it would be better keep it like the NM difficulty for the intro.

00:12:234 (12234|2,12405|4,12577|6,12920|5,13091|3,13262|1) - remove
00:15:662 (15662|4,15834|1,16005|4) - remove
00:17:720 (17720|3,17891|4,18062|5,18405|6,18577|4,18748|2) - remove
00:23:205 (23205|3,23377|4,23548|5,23891|6,24062|5,24234|4) - remove
00:28:691 (28691|2,28862|3,29034|4,29377|3,29548|2,29720|1) - remove
Topic Starter
Aikawa
-[Apple]-, erlinadewi-, MrCrussader and dudehacker.

Guys big thanks for the mods. Hope I can get more for this to rank :)
jukkaduei
JUKKADUEI


From M4M req.

Column |1|2|3|4|

EZ is fine
00:30:062 - Move to column 3
00:30:234 - Move to column 2

HD is fine

Good luck with your beatmap
Toshiyuki Doma
I happened to make mod on your map :D

00:55:777 (55777|1,55862|2,55948|1) - 
change to...
00:55:777 (55777|2,55862|1,55948|2) -


Is this how you actually mod a map? XD
I guess that's the only flaw that I found. :D
Lefrave
Hellu~! =^-^=

This is from your M4M :)

00:32:634 (32634|0,32634|2,32634|1) - You should refrain from using such chords, since beginners already have a hard time playing normal chords, as is. In this one you can remove the note at column 1 and make it like the opposite of 00:38:120 (38120|0,38120|3,38462|2,38805|1,39148|2,39491|1,39834|2,40177|1,40520|2,40862|1,41205|2) - .
00:45:491 (45491|1,45834|2) - Either move these two down half a beat (to the thin white line below it x3), or up half a beat (to the thin white line above it).
01:19:091 (79091|1,79091|3,79091|0,80634|2,80634|0,80634|3) - As I said previously, better not have such chords, so remove the note in column 2, and in the other chord the one in column 1.
01:22:862 (82862|3) - move to column 3.
01:23:034 - add a note in column 2.
01:23:662 (83662|2,84005|1) - move them a column to the right.
That's about it, if I didn't miss anything.


00:44:805 (44805|2,44805|0) - A column to ze right :3
00:45:148 (45148|1) - Move to column 1.
01:15:148 (75148|0,75320|0,75491|1,75662|2,75834|3,76005|3,76177|2,76348|1) - This would be pretty hard for a NM player, and even for a little more experienced players if they play with fast speed. Instead you could replace it with another pattern like this for example:

Other than that, I think everything's good.


4K HD is fine, if you add the stuff arvinkent098 said. :D


Sorry, I'm a bit noob at 7K =^-^=


Good luck with your map! :)
Topic Starter
Aikawa

jukkaduei wrote:

JUKKADUEI


From M4M req.

Column |1|2|3|4|

EZ is fine
00:30:062 - Move to column 3 - Applied
00:30:234 - Move to column 2 - Applied

HD is fine

Good luck with your beatmap
Thanks for that quick mod there I'll check your map soon :D
Topic Starter
Aikawa

arvinkent098 wrote:

I happened to make mod on your map :D

00:55:777 (55777|1,55862|2,55948|1) - 
change to...
00:55:777 (55777|2,55862|1,55948|2) -


Is this how you actually mod a map? XD
I guess that's the only flaw that I found. :D
Applied

arvin-kun. uhhh I couldn't understand this mod very well but I applied it based on how the time code was posted here. If you wanna be able to apply a certain mod, just select the note in osu editor (highlight) then ctrl + c then ctrl + v into forum. It's basic copy paste :) Anyway thanks the mod is useful.
Topic Starter
Aikawa

Web Box wrote:

Hellu~! =^-^=

This is from your M4M :)

00:32:634 (32634|0,32634|2,32634|1) - You should refrain from using such chords, since beginners already have a hard time playing normal chords, as is. In this one you can remove the note at column 1 and make it like the opposite of 00:38:120 - Applied (38120|0,38120|3,38462|2,38805|1,39148|2,39491|1,39834|2,40177|1,40520|2,40862|1,41205|2) - .
00:45:491 (45491|1,45834|2) - Either move these two down half a beat (to the thin white line below it x3), or up half a beat (to the thin white line above it). - Applied
01:19:091 (79091|1,79091|3,79091|0,80634|2,80634|0,80634|3) - As I said previously, better not have such chords, so remove the note in column 2, and in the other chord the one in column 1. - Applied
01:22:862 (82862|3) - move to column 3. - Applied
01:23:034 - add a note in column 2. - Applied
01:23:662 (83662|2,84005|1) - move them a column to the right. - Applied
That's about it, if I didn't miss anything.


00:44:805 (44805|2,44805|0) - A column to ze right :3 - Applied
00:45:148 (45148|1) - Move to column 1. - Applied
01:15:148 (75148|0,75320|0,75491|1,75662|2,75834|3,76005|3,76177|2,76348|1) - This would be pretty hard for a NM player, and even for a little more experienced players if they play with fast speed. Instead you could replace it with another pattern like this for example: - Applied

Other than that, I think everything's good.


4K HD is fine, if you add the stuff arvinkent098 said. :D
Yup I did so :3

Sorry, I'm a bit noob at 7K =^-^=
Nah it's okay haha.

Good luck with your map! :)
Alright Thanks for those awesome mods as they were big help. If I could give more kudos I would but peppy would get mad lol. I'll get to your map asap. o/
Topic Starter
Aikawa
Updated

Added some changes after mods.
resuner
Hello my nigga sora

A fine mod from your bruh 8-)

[General]
>Artist: ちょうちょ
>Title: Authentic Symphony ( you can put "tv size" on tag )
>Source: ましろ色シンフォニー -Love is pure white-
>Tags: Separate with spaces, remove commas :)
Don't forget to fix it in other difficulties or it will conflict

[7K HD]
00:02:120 - remove 1 normal-hitclaps hitsound one is much better
00:28:005 (28005|5) - move to column 6
00:28:691 (28691|1,29034|2) - i suggest to make it single note instead of LN (http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5294703)
00:46:005 (46005|3) - move to column 2
00:53:720 - to 00:54:577 you can make this note in this part 00:08:634 - to 00:10:348
01:03:320 (63320|1) - move to column 6
01:19:434 (79434|2) - ^ to 2
01:25:948 (85948|4) - ^ to 5
01:28:605 - LNs end here

[4K HD]
00:03:320 (3320|2) - move to column 2
its fine to put note on this field since this is HD (http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5294892)
00:28:691 (28691|0,29034|2) - make it single notes
00:37:948 - add 1 note to column 3
00:38:462 (38462|1) - move to column 3
00:46:005 (46005|2,46177|1) - ctrl + H
00:59:548 (59548|2) - move to column 2
01:00:062 (60062|3) - ^ to 3
01:00:234 (60234|1) - ^ to 4
01:03:148 (63148|2) - ^ to 2
01:03:320 (63320|1) - ^ to 3
01:28:605 - LNs end here

That's all my nigga goodluck to your lewd map :lol:
Topic Starter
Aikawa

resuner wrote:

Hello my nigga sora

A fine mod from your bruh 8-)

[General]
>Artist: ちょうちょ - Applied
>Title: Authentic Symphony ( you can put "tv size" on tag ) Nah. I'll leave it like this.
>Source: ましろ色シンフォニー -Love is pure white-
>Tags: Separate with spaces, remove commas :)
Don't forget to fix it in other difficulties or it will conflict

[7K HD]
00:02:120 - remove 1 normal-hitclaps hitsound one is much better - Applied
00:28:005 (28005|5) - move to column 6 - Applied
00:28:691 (28691|1,29034|2) - i suggest to make it single note instead of LN (http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5294703) - Nope
00:46:005 (46005|3) - move to column 2 - Applied
00:53:720 - to 00:54:577 you can make this note in this part 00:08:634 - to 00:10:348 - If this was a MX dif I would.
01:03:320 (63320|1) - move to column 6 - Applied
01:19:434 (79434|2) - ^ to 2 - Applied
01:25:948 (85948|4) - ^ to 5 - Applied
01:28:605 - LNs end here - Applied

[4K HD]
00:03:320 (3320|2) - move to column 2 - Applied
its fine to put note on this field since this is HD (http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5294892) - Applied
00:28:691 (28691|0,29034|2) - make it single notes - Applied
00:37:948 - add 1 note to column 3 - Applied
00:38:462 (38462|1) - move to column 3 - Applied
00:46:005 (46005|2,46177|1) - ctrl + H - Applied
00:59:548 (59548|2) - move to column 2 - Applied
01:00:062 (60062|3) - ^ to 3 - Applied
01:00:234 (60234|1) - ^ to 4 - Applied
01:03:148 (63148|2) - ^ to 2 - Applied
01:03:320 (63320|1) - ^ to 3 - Applied
01:28:605 - LNs end here - Applied

That's all my nigga goodluck to your lewd map :lol:
[Thanks:]

Thanks mah nigga resu :v o/ Big help for this woop woop. Loli.!!!!
Etsu
Hello!

Sorry the delay has another pending requests :|

Mania NM from my Queue

Columns: 0|1|2|3

  1. None.
00:02:120 (2120|1) - delete? It is not a good idea to start double in EZ

00:22:177 (22177|2) - move in column 1? It goes with the voice in 00:22:520 (22520|2) - imo

00:24:920 (24920|1) - move in column 2?

00:28:005 (28005|3) - move column 1

00:30:748 (30748|0) - move column 2?

00:32:977 (32977|3,33320|0,33662|3,34005|0,34348|3,34691|0,35034|3,35377|0) - a little difficult for this diff... maybe you look good if these notes are in column 1 and 2 ->> 00:33:662 (33662|3,34005|0,34348|3,34691|0)

00:37:262 - perhaps follow the piano I hear there instead of that rhythm imo

00:38:462 (38462|2,38805|1,39148|2,39491|1,39834|2,40177|1,40520|2,40862|1,41205|2) - same in 00:32:977

00:42:577 (42577|0) - delete? break by the drum which ended in 00:42:234 (42234|1)

00:47:891 (47891|3) - delete?

00:53:205 (53205|3,53377|0,53548|3,53720|0,53891|3,54062|0,54234|3,54405|0) - if your do this? I think you should fill that column imo

01:14:805 (74805|2,75148|3) - control + g?

01:19:777 (79777|1) - delete? I follow the drum for 01:19:434 (79434|2,80120|0)

01:22:348 (82348|0) - move column 1?

01:23:034 (83034|1) - delete?
00:02:120 (2120|1,2120|2) - the same as ez... and if better double do in the diff HD?

00:07:434 (7434|3) - move column 1? a mini staircase imo

00:08:634 (8634|2,9320|1,10005|0) - I think it is not necessary yet... delete?

00:22:520 (22520|2,22862|1) - control + g?

00:29:205 (29205|1) - delete? It is not such an important sound


00:31:091 (31091|0) - move column 3

00:32:977 (32977|0,33320|0,33662|0) - move in parts... maybe you use it with HD

00:34:948 (34948|3) - delete? It is uncomfortable for NM ^

00:35:720 (35720|3) - move column 2?

00:40:434 (40434|3) - delete

00:41:205 (41205|1,41548|1,41891|1) - same... not put more than 3 notes in the same column in this diff

00:53:205 (53205|3,53377|0,53548|3,53720|0,53891|3,54062|0) - same in EZ

00:55:948 (55948|3) - I still say that LN is not necessary as it is a bit difficult for novice players... delete? (if you removed then accommodate notes 00:56:291 (56291|1,56634|2,56805|0,56977|1,57148|2,57491|0,57662|1,58005|0,58177|1,58348|2) - )

00:58:691 (58691|0) - ^

01:05:377 (65377|3) - move column 2?
00:02:120 (2120|2,2120|1) - fine doble

00:07:434 (7434|3) - move column 2, and 00:07:605 (7605|2) - move column 3, it feels good imo

00:10:691 (10691|3,10862|2) - control + g?

00:12:920 (12920|2,13091|1) - ^

00:17:034 (17034|0) - move column 1?

00:19:091 (19091|0,19262|2,19434|3) - control + g... is uncomfortable continue the LN's in 00:17:377 (17377|0) - imo

00:27:320 (27320|0) - move column 1?

00:46:862 (46862|2,47034|3) - control + g?

00:47:891 (47891|1) - move column 2?

01:09:834 (69834|3,70005|2) - control + g?

01:12:234 (72234|3,72320|2,72405|1) - if your do this?


Good luck and nice map :)
Topic Starter
Aikawa

Etsu wrote:

Hello!

Sorry the delay has another pending requests :|

Mania NM from my Queue

Columns: 0|1|2|3

  1. None.
00:02:120 (2120|1) - delete? It is not a good idea to start double in EZ - Applied

00:22:177 (22177|2) - move in column 1? It goes with the voice in 00:22:520 (22520|2) - imo - Applied

00:24:920 (24920|1) - move in column 2? - Applied

00:28:005 (28005|3) - move column 1 - Applied

00:30:748 (30748|0) - move column 2? - Applied

00:32:977 (32977|3,33320|0,33662|3,34005|0,34348|3,34691|0,35034|3,35377|0) - a little difficult for this diff... maybe you look good if these notes are in column 1 and 2 ->> 00:33:662 (33662|3,34005|0,34348|3,34691|0) - Applied

00:37:262 - perhaps follow the piano I hear there instead of that rhythm imo - Applied

00:38:462 (38462|2,38805|1,39148|2,39491|1,39834|2,40177|1,40520|2,40862|1,41205|2) - same in 00:32:977 - Applied

00:42:577 (42577|0) - delete? break by the drum which ended in 00:42:234 (42234|1) - Applied

00:47:891 (47891|3) - delete? - Applied

00:53:205 (53205|3,53377|0,53548|3,53720|0,53891|3,54062|0,54234|3,54405|0) - if your do this? I think you should fill that column imo - Applied

01:14:805 (74805|2,75148|3) - control + g? - Applied

01:19:777 (79777|1) - delete? I follow the drum for 01:19:434 (79434|2,80120|0) - Applied

01:22:348 (82348|0) - move column 1? - Applied

01:23:034 (83034|1) - delete?
- Applied

00:02:120 (2120|1,2120|2) - the same as ez... and if better double do in the diff HD? - Left it as is.

00:07:434 (7434|3) - move column 1? a mini staircase imo - Applied

00:08:634 (8634|2,9320|1,10005|0) - I think it is not necessary yet... delete? - Applied

00:22:520 (22520|2,22862|1) - control + g? - Applied

00:29:205 (29205|1) - delete? It is not such an important sound - Applied


00:31:091 (31091|0) - move column 3 - Applied

00:32:977 (32977|0,33320|0,33662|0) - move in parts... maybe you use it with HD - Applied

00:34:948 (34948|3) - delete? It is uncomfortable for NM ^ - Applied

00:35:720 (35720|3) - move column 2? - Applied

00:40:434 (40434|3) - delete - Applied

00:41:205 (41205|1,41548|1,41891|1) - same... not put more than 3 notes in the same column in this diff - Applied

00:53:205 (53205|3,53377|0,53548|3,53720|0,53891|3,54062|0) - same in EZ - Applied

00:55:948 (55948|3) - I still say that LN is not necessary as it is a bit difficult for novice players... delete? (if you removed then accommodate notes 00:56:291 (56291|1,56634|2,56805|0,56977|1,57148|2,57491|0,57662|1,58005|0,58177|1,58348|2) - ) - Applied

00:58:691 (58691|0) - ^ - Applied

01:05:377 (65377|3) - move column 2?
- Applied

00:02:120 (2120|2,2120|1) - fine doble - ok

00:07:434 (7434|3) - move column 2, and 00:07:605 (7605|2) - move column 3, it feels good imo - feels kimochi

00:10:691 (10691|3,10862|2) - control + g? - Applied

00:12:920 (12920|2,13091|1) - ^ - Applied

00:17:034 (17034|0) - move column 1? - Applied

00:19:091 (19091|0,19262|2,19434|3) - control + g... is uncomfortable continue the LN's in 00:17:377 (17377|0) - imo - Applied

00:27:320 (27320|0) - move column 1? - Applied

00:46:862 (46862|2,47034|3) - control + g? - Applied

00:47:891 (47891|1) - move column 2? - Applied

01:09:834 (69834|3,70005|2) - control + g? - Applied

01:12:234 (72234|3,72320|2,72405|1) - if your do this?
- Applied

Good luck and nice map :)
Thanks for this mod bro. Didn't really know how to fix EZ dif so it was big help thanks!
[Crz]Makii
nm from my queue
0 1 2 3
0 1 2 3 4 5 6
no kiai time? :v
[4k EZ]
  1. od7 hp7,8 is too high for beginners.
  2. 00:37:262 (37262|1) - move it to 2.
    *00:36:748 (36748|1,37262|1) - avoid unnecessary jacks in EZ diff.

[7K EZ]
  1. od7 hp7
  2. 00:42:234 (42234|0,42405|1,42577|2,42748|3,42920|4,43091|5,43262|6,43434|5,43605|2,43605|4) - they are too hard...I don't think any beginners can play.....
  3. a good diff,I like it.

[4k NM]
  1. od7.5 hp7.5
  2. 00:22:348 (22348|3) - listen like a overmap,delete it?
  3. 00:25:091 (25091|0) - 00:27:834 (27834|3) - 00:30:577 (30577|0) - ^
  4. 00:29:205 (29205|1) - which rhythm catched with this LN...remove it?

[7K NM]
  1. 00:21:491 (21491|3,21662|3) - jacks in middle column is too hard,try to move 00:21:491 (21491|3) - to 5 or 6 if you want to contiune jacks.
  2. same overmap as 4k NM,try to fix.
  3. 00:31:948 (31948|0,32634|0,32977|0,33320|0,33662|0,34005|0,34348|0,34691|0,35034|0) - what....it's NM diff,you use these jacks is too hard.though you want to make a key-effort,but it's not fit in NM diff.
  4. 00:38:120 (38120|6,38462|6,38805|6,39148|6,39491|6,39834|6,40177|6) - ^
  5. 01:06:748 (66748|6,66834|4,66920|2) - make them near,like 4 5 6 or 3 4 5
  6. 01:12:234 (72234|4,72320|2,72405|0) - ^
    *easy to know there is 1/4
  7. many jacks in this diff,though it's not unrankable but it's so hard for beginners,how about using more patterns to show?

Busy so only mod 4 diffs ;w;
good luck!
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