Finally i finished xD The hard v2 is completely new and i've also changed all the sounds now wait for mods
Thanks for the mod RIP
I'm only modding this part, the one that almost nobody seems to have modded, probably because it's really hard to judge. Or, well, it looks hard to judge.
Note to the mapper: You just simply CAN'T leave the map as this right now. If you guys are really aiming for rankings, this difficulty MUST be deleted or remapped. It's a completely overmapped version of Amasuro's Insane, who in fact did a great job mapping that difficulty. YOUR map is a complete mess, and, I repeat it, if you are aiming for ranking, you should think of doing an Easy.
00:05:870 (2,3) - Overmapped. There's no sound here, why are you placing random sliders?
00:29:459 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - Completely unnecessary.
00:30:998 (1) - About this slider and the following ones: The first one (1) should be start right here 00:30:966 - Now it comes the hardest part of explaining an overmapping. Why are you placing all these 00:30:998 (1,2,3,1) - random things where there's no more than the vocal and the following beat sounds at 00:31:767 - I don't get, what were you trying to do? This difficulty is completely overmapped. The map itself is wonderful, amazing. But you are not following the rhythm, dude. Just focus on the beats and/or the vocals.
00:31:895 (2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - All this part should be follow the vocal. The beats are almost non-existant, so why are you placing a lot of circles and sliders when there's nothing more than just a voice? Please, reconsider remapping this part as it makes no sense at all.
00:40:229 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - This is like the most acceptable part of the map before the streams. You are overmapping as you do in all the whole song, but at least you are following the vocals at some parts. I also think that you should reduce the slider velocity for that part, a bit.
00:43:305 (1,2,3,1) - This should be combined into 1 slider, or at least 2.
From 00:44:331 (2) - to 01:18:690 (6) - should be complete remap. There's no excuse like saying "but I'm just following the rhythm of the song!! I will not remap it just because you are saying this, this part makes a lot of sense". Well, maybe I'm wrong. But to my PoV, the only stuff that is "not that bad" in all this part are some sliders that all well-timed and actually match the song very well. However, most of the circles don't become clear at all, so you start losing the rhythm of the map as it goes on and on.
From 01:20:229 (1) - to 01:30:870 (5) - follow the same instructions that I told you above. And please, follow the vocals in this part, that's super important! You can also consider changing the slider velocity to something more slow... this is a very calm part and should be follow like that.
01:31:382 (2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6) - This part is actually fanstatic. However, I would suggest you to remove 01:31:511 (3,4) - these two circles. Also, and, in my opinion, 01:31:382 (2,3,4) - all that part should be a slider, from 01:31:382 - to 01:31:639 - having a reverse at 01:31:511 - that would make a lot of sense, and you could also leave the following 6 circles.
From 01:32:536 (1) - to 01:44:716 (6) - same I told you before.
02:03:305 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - Map these sliders in 1/6, please. They fit better with the guitar.
From 02:15:612 (1) - to 02:30:869 (4) - consider a remap as well.
I'm not going to go down on everything since I would like to have a reply of the mapper first, and see if he's willing to work on it on a larger scale. But in any case, I'm open for conversation and counselling about all types of issues that might or might not be coming up, be they related to ranking, the map in general or anything really.
No, this is not a flame, this is criticism aimed at improving this specific map's quality and making it the best it could be rather than leaving it as a dirty and untidy draft of its actual potential. Please do not take this the wrong way.
That was my mod.
Simotorre, if you want a more for the other difficulties I will do it for free. I just wanted to give my advice as we talked via in-game.
Good luck with it, Simo!
Thanks for the help i fixed hard v2, tomorrow i'll do the rest
Lazer wrote:[HARD V2]
00:05:613 (1,2) - This cannot be ranked, I suggest making the spacing /ALOT/ less far from each other
00:09:075 (1) - Never end a slider on a downbeat! (Big white tick) - Also you should improve the blanket you made here Remember to turn off grid snap for detail changes!
00:11:767 - I suggest putting a beat here
00:17:921 - ^
00:24:844 (4) - If this is supposed to be a blanket, improve it
00:26:382 (1) - ^
00:34:844 (3,4) - Make blanket
00:42:151 (4,5,6,7) - UNRANKABLE
00:45:613 (6,1) - Improve blanket
01:04:459 (1) - Make downbeat a clickable thing
01:13:690 (1) - ^
01:15:228 (4) - ^^
01:20:248 - Unsnapped time point
01:22:921 (1) - Downbeat needs to be clickable
01:24:074 (3,4) - Blanket this
01:33:304 (2,3,4) - This won't work
01:39:972 (3) - Clickable downbeat please
01:45:292 - You NEED to make the break shorter, it's above 30 seconds! I'll do tomorrow this part xD i totally forgot
02:10:228 (3) - Downbeat clickable!
02:14:843 (1,2,3,4) - Y'cannot.
02:17:728 (5) - Oddly placed
02:19:074 - Missing beat
02:20:228 (6) - End it on the white tick
02:25:612 (3,4) - Make blanket
To whoever made this; You are going to need more experience in mapping- Go try to mod some maps/learn from other mods/look at other ranked maps and try to comprehend on how to create a map (You will need improvements on your; Flow, Patterns, Placement and Rhythm) i know, i'm still a newbie in fact xD
00:01:382 (2,3,4,5) - Unrankable
00:04:459 (6) - You cannot have this repeater end on a downbeat, downbeat needs to be clickable!
00:09:459 (2) - Improve blanket
00:12:152 (1) - Clickable downbeat!
00:13:690 (4) - ^
00:15:228 (7) - ^^
00:21:767 (1,2) - Eye-sore overlap
00:24:459 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - This whole part needs a re-map
00:28:690 (3) - 100% Unrankable
00:32:151 (2) - Clickable downbeat!
00:44:267 - Two weird unsnapped timepoints here
00:44:459 (3) - Downbeat click!
00:46:382 (3) - ^
00:49:459 (1) - Slider goes through healthbar :^<
00:58:690 (3,4) - Dirty overlap
01:01:767 (3,4,5) - Needs better flow
01:03:305 (2,4) - Overlappp
01:08:690 (2,3,4,5) - Too hard
01:15:613 (2,3,4) - You need to improve the blanketing by alot here
01:30:997 (7,8,9,10,11,12) - You really cannot have this, I will stop the mod here and just tell you that you will have to get more experience to rank this, See above at Hard V2 on what you should do ^^
Overall, the idea is nice... I like it- However, this just simply cannot be ranked as it has too much jumps/flow/spacing problems, sorry :^<
Hey, a rankable diff!
Check for your blankets and re-look over the map for flow issues because there are some ^^
Good luck with your map!