Hi there owo/
M4M :>
M4M :>
General
- Try to add some combo colours that fits with the background :> because these doesnt fit at all >.<
- You can disable this (unless youre planning on making a Storyboard, then uncheck this) :>
Victoire
- 00:03:925 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - you could use the same spacing on this whole stream, because the music doesnt build up here
- 00:41:936 (1,2,3) - these 3 notes doesnt look that good tbh (personal preference)
- 01:28:470 - this feels a bit weird, try placing a single 01:28:300 - and a triple 01:28:470 - it should be an important beat there and it doesnt fit on the end of a slider
- 02:06:396 (1,2,3) - try giving these more form, looks cluttered to me
- 03:19:266 (3,4,5,6,7) - this doesnt look good (personal preference) try giving it more form, like this
- 03:49:948 (7,8,9,10,1) - this stream does not feel good, try like this
- 03:53:698 (5) - have the same DS here as these two 03:53:357 (3,4) - around x:213 y:227 should be fine :>
- 04:14:664 (1,2,3) - try not to stack these with the singles before, makes it hard to read, space them out a little more
- 04:24:294 (11) - distance space this note between here 04:24:038 (10,1) - around x:458 y:163 should be fine
- 04:24:720 (2,3,4) - same with this
- 04:39:720 (5,6,7) - ^
- 04:41:084 (3,4,5) - ^
- 04:42:703 (4) - place at x:365 y:230
- 05:12:448 (4,5,6) - do like this instead
- 05:15:175 (4,5,6) - same as I said above, it loses flow tbh
- 05:29:067 (8,9,10,11) - recreate this stream, doesnt look good, you can try like this
- 05:42:448 (5,6,7) - its your choice, but I think it would fit better if you had the same DS as I said above