Wojjan wrote:

I don't know why you storyboarded in the video. Why didn't you just add the video?

Wojjan wrote:

I don't know why you storyboarded in the video. Why didn't you just add the video?

Hitoshirenu Shourai wrote:

SPOILER

(General)
01:01:737 (Storyboard) - Questionable content. I'm not complaining, but children might. Well actually, I am complaining, that's a bit distracting. Hilarious, but distracting nonetheless. XD;;

(Easy)
00:42:709 (5) - Looks better if you move it 4 up on the current grid.
01:28:140 (1) - I suggest having the spinner start on the actual "hoo" instead of a little before it (1/2 note later than the current position. New position: 01:28:309).

(Normal)
01:28:052 (1) - As with Easy, I suggest having it start at 01:28:309 instead.

(Hard)
00:44:080 (4) - Move this 1/4 back on the timeline (New Position: 00:43:995). Adjust placement accordingly.
01:28:052 (1) - Again, I suggest having it start at 01:28:309 instead.

(Lunatic)
01:28:052 (1) - Yeah, I still think 01:28:309 works better. >_>

Nice map. Love the storyboard. ^^

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abalee wrote:

Hmm... try to change the framedelay of "montha-" to 170 and "montha-" to 85. that seems better(the origin looks a bit rapid).
and how about use instant fade in "montha-" like

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1. Also, the text file... well, I'd really vote for removing that out since no one's supposed to be dwelling around there. osz2 is looking at you. It's about something really minor, so there shouldn't be any problems with leaving it in the thread only.
2. The mapping is okay... it could be better, but you're getting there. Have you ever tried pattern-based mapping~?

1. Has anyone checked timing? I'm not completely sure, but I'm getting +7ms from what you have. Current one sounds a bit early.

1. The spinner is a bit distracting. I have difficulty telling where the approach circle is, reading what the words that pop up say, etc. I'm aware it's fully readable while being static, but as a quick glampse (much like when a spinner pops up and goes), it is kind of a problem. Perhaps you could look into that.

1. The SB image... I understand why you don't want to resize it lower, but, you see, it just can't be that large. It isn't a guideline, it's a rule. Sorry. You could, I don't know, perhaps have the zoomed in part in a separate image and use that for when it's fullscreen.

1. Oh you. You used the test build, didn't you?!
   
   

   osu!test, when writing Easy and Normal's metadata, wrote:

   [Metadata]
   Title:Hinarin's Relation of Misfortune (Short ver.)
   TitleUnicode:
   Artist:IOSYS
   ArtistUnicode:
   Creator:Kitsunemimi
   Version:Easy
   Source:Touhou
   Tags:ARM monotone sound sepher Path Apotropaic God Dark Road Side Fate Hina
   BeatmapID:112405
   BeatmapSetID:13038

   ...I am not exactly sure if it's going to be a problem (feel free to prove me wrong), but it'd be much better if you resaved these .osu files for this public build.

1. The slider on Lunatic... I honestly had no idea where to go. The color between the edges didn't make enough contrast; it blends too much, if you get what I mean. I'm not exactly sure if it's rankable, but I'm against it.

1. There are exactly three unsnapped objects on Lunatic. Make sure to fix them~
2. At Lunatic, exactly at 00:23:517 everything's supposed to be snapped at 1/3 yet there's some stuff in red ticks. Mistake?

Gens wrote:

There are exactly three unsnapped objects on Lunatic. Make sure to fix them~

Gens wrote:

At Lunatic, exactly at 00:23:517 everything's supposed to be snapped at 1/3 yet there's some stuff in red ticks. Mistake?

Gens wrote:

I am still somewhat doubtful about timing, but every offset I get has been a little late, so it might be just me.

Backfire wrote:

Who's hating? o-o