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Sharlo - Songs Compilation

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xxdeathx
2,661 posts
Joined July 2013
xxdeathx
55 stars, am I really the first mod


  • Sumisola
  1. 00:27:668 (2) - Delete this circle, it does not belong here. It is 3/4 on a tick without anything in the music to support it.
  2. 00:51:223 (1,1) - 1/4 jump is a little hard without getting 100 or breaking combo imo
    Flower
  3. 01:56:841 (1,2) - Circle followed by slider rhythm doesn't fit the music here. Just have 1 slider start where the circle is.
  4. 02:28:944 (1) - Ctrl-G plays a lot better.
  5. 02:32:781 (5,6,7,8,9) - I wouldn't use a stream here because you want to emphasize the strong vocal at 02:32:955 (7). Definitely should delete 02:33:043 (8,9) - and maybe use a slider at 02:32:955 instead.
  6. 02:33:304 - ^ I suggest having the slider end at here so you don't ignore the vocal.
    alacat
  7. 02:50:283 (5,6) - blanket is off, move circle to 384, 188.
    nymph
  8. 03:42:873 (1) - You shouldn't use 3/4 sliders if you're ignoring the music on the 1/2 tick 03:43:103. The spacing also makes it hard to play this without getting a 100 on the slider end.
  9. 03:51:642 (4) - 328, 140 for blanket
  10. 03:52:565 (6) - 140, 192
  11. 03:59:950 (7,1) - Not exactly overlapped.
  12. 04:12:873 (3,4,5) - Check your blankets:
    SPOILER
  13. 04:30:411 (1,2) - ^
  14. 04:50:719 (7) - Use 1/2 slider so you don't ignore the music on the red tick.
  15. 04:52:565 (1) - ^
    Frost
  16. 06:01:628 (1) - 06:15:643 (1) - Ctrl-G flows better because it will let the player continue to the slider without a sharp change in direction.
  17. 06:04:037 (3) - Move to 416, 124 to improve blanket
    Narcissu
  18. 06:55:302 (4) - Curve the other way like this plays a little better:
    SPOILER
    Feiqiu
  19. 08:19:170 (1) - 1/2 Repeat slider to cover the vocals?
  20. 08:24:874 (4) - Don't ignore the vocal:
  21. 08:29:310 (1) - ^
    Sharlo
  22. 08:57:474 (3,4,5) - Try to align these as a curve so it looks smoother.
    Sharlo
  23. 09:47:490 (6,7,1) - Unreadable overlap, please arrange a different way.
    Laurier
  24. 10:43:624 (3,1) - Recommend swap NC here so it seperates 1/1 from 1/2 notes.
  25. 11:22:324 (1,2) - Blanket these?


Good luck~
Kyouren
5,583 posts
Joined October 2012
Kyouren
Osu! need more Sharlo! :P

Go! Go! Sharlo!
P A N
2,346 posts
Joined December 2011
P A N
[Sumisola]
  1. 00:21:692 (1) - unnecessary NC imo. the beat is not different with next beat so..
  2. 00:27:668 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - well.. somehow I though that these notes should have the same spacing since the beat is consistent, better keep the spacing consistent too. I think current spacing is not fit with music well. even you follow something, 00:28:957 (9) shouldn't be that big spacing but it's fine to has big spacing to (1) since there have cymbal on (1)
  3. 00:35:051 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - some triple pattern are not flow well, but 00:33:410 (6,7,8) are really nice flow so I suggest you to place the stream pattern (or triple) like that or similar.
  4. 00:36:692 (5) - I think NC should be on this note to follow the cymbal sound and big white tick. so remove NC on 00:36:223 (1) but it has many ways to add it, you can add like that but at least remove NC on 00:37:395 (1). it's up to you though.
  5. 00:36:926 (1,1) - remove NC, unnecessary.
  6. 00:39:035 (1,1) - hmm sorry if I misunderstand something but I really don't understand what NC are you following here so I suggest to remove both? NC too often is not good imo.
  7. 00:43:723 (1,5) - swap NC?
  8. 01:00:598 (1,5) - ^
  9. 01:02:004 (1) - remove NC?
  10. 01:04:113 (6) - move to stack with 01:02:004 (1) for make it neater?
  11. 01:07:629 (1) - remove NC?
  12. 01:15:129 (1,9) - swap NC, or if it weird maybe you can just try to add NC on 9.
  13. 01:21:223 (6) - balance spacing is better here imo, I suggest to place it on 232|120.
  14. btw just want to say that someone will mention 01:01:067 (5) - better blanket.
[Flower]
  1. 02:26:066 (10) - remove note here sounds really better for me.
  2. 02:29:293 (2) - ctrl+g is more flow for me, up to you though, it's not a problem at all.
  3. 02:33:130 (9) - NC.
[Nymph]
  1. 04:14:488 (7) - perfect stack on tail.
  2. 04:29:950 (10) - I'm not sure but you can change this to slider to follow the vocal.
  3. 04:58:103 - start a break here instead?
  4. well please take care about some 1/4 that have the same with 1/2 spacing.
[Natcissu]
  1. 06:37:802 (3) - I saw you stack many times so why don't you stack here too?
[Fycho]
  1. 08:01:001 (2) - is this spacing too big for normal/calm beat? and I also think that ctrl+g is more flow :(
[Sharlo]
  1. 08:58:323 (5) - hmm would be great if you spread this into 2 circles to make the second circle fit with cymbal but it's not a problem so it's up to you.
  2. 09:02:851 (4,5) - place somewhere else to make the spacing from 5 to 6 bigger? to make it fit with cymbal.
  3. 09:03:417 (6) - btw NC should be on this?
  4. 09:09:927 (5) has bigger spacing than 09:08:795 (2) that has cymbal sound is weird but not a problem, you can not fix.
  5. 09:48:885 (4) - NC?
which part I didn't mention = fine and look perfect
GL
sjoy
1,025 posts
Joined April 2012
sjoy
[1]
00:38:918 add a note?
00:39:035 (1) - why NC?
00:42:317 (1) - add clap on the tail
00:53:567 (1) - just a bit big spacing
01:02:942 (1) - how about moving to 73,268?
[2]
01:45:504 (9) - move to the top right corner?
[3]
02:52:344 (3) - add clap on the tail?
02:56:008 (3) - ^
03:07:000 (3) - ^
[4]
04:39:642 (6) - NC
04:50:719 (7) - ^
[5]
06:24:402 (2) - triangle jump?
[6]
07:09:302 (1) - ctrl+g
[7]
08:19:170 (1) - try more curve
[89]
09:36:792 (1) - add whistle
09:38:652 (1) - ^
09:44:234 (1) - ^
09:51:676 (1) - ^
09:53:536 (1) - ^
[10]
11:22:324 (1,2) - use 1/2 sliders or notes better than 1/1 imo


sorry ,I can't mod at all ~
Narcissu
1,744 posts
Joined August 2012
Narcissu

xxdeathx wrote:

06:55:302 (4) - Curve the other way like this plays a little better:……ok ~
SPOILER

P A N wrote:

06:37:802 (3) - I saw you stack many times so why don't you stack here too?……stack now ~

sjoy wrote:

07:09:302 (1) - ctrl+g……我覺得五角比較正常……
修了那個邊角跳嗯
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lkx_Shore
1,453 posts
Joined January 2010
lkx_Shore

General

  1. Bg尺寸弄成1024x768比较好吧。
  2. 去掉Enable countdown?
  3. 没有AudioLeadIn时间会让玩家不知所措被水淹没，改成2000吧。
  4. OD7有点太送，如果改成8的话排行榜上的分数会更多异化。我觉得一堆不同的分数比全是SS有趣。

Sumisola

  1. 00:37:629 (2) - 其实在这个比较柔和的前奏里用normal-whistle是很奇怪的，我还是比较建议你换成别的自定义音效，其实用soft-whistle就好了。
  2. 00:41:379 (5,1,1) - 为什么漏clap?这里音乐和前面没有什么大的变化...和前面保持一致才不会使得违和感增强。
  3. 00:42:317 (1) - 滑条头加Finish。这里太空了，可以用Finish增加打击感。
  4. 00:43:957 (3) - 去掉whistle吧，显吵，用clap来加这种音效梗更好不是么。
  5. 00:52:043 - 和 00:51:926 - 可以补note。
  6. 00:54:504 (5) - 滑条头加Whistle,去掉尾部的Whistle，效果更佳哦。
  7. 00:56:848 (6) - 滑条尾加Whistle,然后把00:57:317 (1) - 的Whistle换成Finish.
  8. 01:02:942 (1) - Note补Whistle，01:03:410 (4) - 滑条尾巴补Whistle，增加整体效果。
  9. 01:04:817 (1) - 滑条头补个Finish.
  10. 01:10:207 (7) - 强音补Whistle，然后还有一个选择是把01:09:973 (6) - 的whistle去掉。
  11. 01:10:442 (1) - 不必要的3/4滑条，可以换成滑条接2连打。这样还可以把01:10:676 - 漏掉的强音补上Whistle从而减少违和感。
  12. 01:12:317 (3) - 滑条头补Finish，滑条折返中的Whistle没必要加，另外这里换成1/1或3/4比reverse slider的效果更好。
  13. 01:14:426 (2) - 因为01:14:309 - 是一个效果较强的1/1音，所以01:14:192 - 换成1/1滑条或01:14:543 - 加上note效果会更好。
  14. 01:17:942 (1) - 强音补Finish.
  15. 01:21:692 (3) - 补上Finish.
  16. 01:23:684 (1) - 转盘末尾使用5%音量。


Flower


  • 其实这个曲子挺多地方适合加soft-Finish,不加点？例如下面这些地方我都觉得挺适合的。相同的地方我就扒出来一次好了。
    Soft-Finish
    01:57:888 (5) -
    01:58:062 (1,1,1,1) -
    02:17:083 (3,4) -
  1. 01:48:818 (3) - 换成note接1/2滑条？打击弱音手感有点怪。

alacat

  1. 02:53:260 (3) - Add a finish and remove the whistle on the slider start. Use Finish better then whistle imo. And Same as this part 03:07:916 (3) - .
  2. 03:14:329 (1) - Change to stream for emphasize the vocal? Cuz vocal start on 03:14:558 (2) - ，But 03:14:329 (1) - is not vocal.

Nymph

  1. 03:43:796 (3) - 换成note接1/2?红线处有人声强音，打下去比较好，而1/2也能补上大白线的音效。
  2. 03:56:257 (7) - 可以试试改成2连，并加一个Whistle音效到03:56:373 - 的头上。多变有趣的节奏会使得谱面不那么无聊。
  3. 04:11:950 (1,2) - 一进Kiaitime就用小间距？这样感觉很奇怪。而且节奏略微空缺，可以在04:12:873 (3) - 的前面加上note形成3连打。
  4. 04:19:334 (1) - 强音补Finish,为了增强打击感。
  5. 04:23:026 (1) - 滑条头补Finish，理由同上。
  6. 04:23:719 (3,6) - 加Whistle？
  7. 04:24:873 (7,8,9) - 白线加Finish，音乐里的那个音效和Finish很合，加了会有不错的效果。
  8. 04:34:103 (1) - 滑条头补Finish，理由和04:19:334 (1) - 一样。
  9. 可以考虑在04:57:642 - 和04:57:988 - 和04:58:103 - 加Note,全部带Whistle音效，大白线note带Finish。可以让谱面不那么无聊。

Frostmourne

  1. 05:46:519 (3) - Change to 3hit? 3hit rhythm more fun then 1/2 slider at here imo.
  2. 05:48:270 (2) - Same as above.
  3. 05:49:146 (1,2,3) - Use bigger DS make a jump part for emphasize the vocal?
  4. 05:55:059 (1) - Add a Finish on the slider start? Effect same as this part 05:37:322 (5) - .
  5. 06:09:073 (1) - Add a Finish on slider start and remove clap? Effect same as above, And now look like have a bit clap spam imo.
  6. 06:20:022 (2) - Use clap hitsound better then whistle hitsound imo. And i think you can use 60% volume at here.

Narcissu


  • 哇，Pro 麻婆 and DT 毁灭者.
    你的3/4滑条接Note的梗多数看起来其实没有什么必要，我觉得都换成1/1也挺好的...
  1. 06:37:802 (3) - 我觉得换成两个Note好点，当然不换也没什么所谓。
  2. 06:48:469 (3) - 同上
  3. 06:51:969 (1) - 嗯，从Nc上能看出你知道这里音乐变了...但为什么note还是用上面那套梗？换一套不正符合音乐变化了的意义么。

Fycho

  1. 07:31:001 (3) - 补个Whistle?这里有点空。
  2. 07:37:761 (3) - 补Whistle?理由同上。
  3. 07:48:113 (5) - 这里可以补个Whistle...要说理由的话我又说不出...
  4. 07:50:015 (4) - 去掉滑条尾的Whistle?开头可以静一点。
  5. 08:00:367 (1,4) - 这个遮叠看起来有点不舒服(
  6. 08:12:726 (2) - 去掉clap，唐突的音效。
  7. 08:26:247 (3) - 同上。
  8. 08:32:796 (1) - 转盘尾用5%音量。

Sharlo

  1. 08:58:323 (5) - 滑条尾巴的Finish去掉然后换成Whistle，两个这种自定义Finish音效连起来太吵了。
  2. 09:06:955 (5,6) - 可以试试加Clap,我觉得效果不错。
  3. 09:17:851 (3) - 加Finish?像09:07:945 (1,2) - 一样加法。
  4. 09:33:536 (1,1,1) - 加Whistle?空着有点单调。
  5. 09:42:024 (6,7) - 加Clap?另外这曲子直接用Normal-Finish就太重了，用的时候稍微减减音量。
  6. 09:44:234 (1) - 像这种你自己唱的稍微重点音可以全加上Whistle..
  7. 这一串节奏太无聊了，试试这个。加红点的地方用normalSampleset，黄点部分堆叠，绿点部分带偏移。另外最后的Finish用Soft的。
    rhythm

    5叠在6的上面

Laurier

  1. 10:30:724 (1) - Add a Finish on the slider start.
  2. 10:54:124 (2) - Add a Finish?
  3. 11:03:424 (4) - Add a Clap? Have a bit empty at here imo.
  4. 11:09:724 (3,4) -Change to 1/2 slider? Use 1/2 slider will make it coherent.

Others

我还以为会有夏洛x澄空的part。
横扫饥饿活力无限。
sammy711
207 posts
Joined November 2012
sammy711
来了来了~~
[General]
:idea: normal-hitfinish13.wav is an unused file in Folder
N:13 does not exist in the Inherited Section
And I can't find any 8,0:1 (which means Normal Finish) in the osu file
this

:idea: Since Sharlo you mostly sing the whloe song which includes non-kiai and kiai, you should add kiai time here in order to enhance the effect of this marathon. Just like what Amamiya Yuko did in his Rabbit face
this

:idea: You can also add the Japanese name of these song to the tags, like what Fycho did in Chorathon(寝·逃·げでリセット！ ビードロ模様 ねぐせ ふわふわ クローバー かくしごと). This will enable player to find this Marathon by searching their Japanese title .

:idea: The Romanised title of ビードロ模様 is incorrect, it should be Vidro Moyou, not Virdro Moyou. You can check it in the ranked versions of this song


[Sumisola]
:idea: 00:32:004 (5) - maybe add a whistle to follow the background sound?
:idea: 00:42:317 (1) - Maybe a clap on the tail is needed
:idea: 00:50:754 (1) - this should be (284,248) and 00:51:223 (1) - this should be (352,228) in order that 00:49:817 (1,1,1,1) - keeps a straight line
:idea: 00:41:379 (5) - This slider is over-dangerous... A over-screen slider on default skin which touches the life bar will have high possibility to be regarded as problem
this
/me hugs moeSora
[Flower]
:idea: 01:49:865 - The NC may be at here instead of 01:50:214 - from my perspective
:idea: 02:26:066 (10,1) - This distance is 0.1x shorten than the previous circle. Feel bad on vision effect imo
:idea: 02:34:874 - Unsnapped break here. Drag this break to 02:34:874 -
this
[alacat]
:idea: 02:50:283 (5,6) - blanket
さすがalacat、何一つ指摘できるところが見つからない ｗｗｗ
[Nymph]
:idea: 04:14:257 (6) - Isn't this actually on about (303,265)? Neither the distance nor the stack looks fine here...
:idea: 04:56:373 - How about drag the break after this song to 04:57:642. Change from silent to non-silent can be stressed by a delayed break
[Frostmourne]
Nothing to say... Really good one
[Narcissu]
I keep the same idea as lkx_shore which says the 3/4 slider don't make much sense
:idea: 06:35:302 (4) - whistle on the tail for the background sound
:idea: 06:35:636 (5) - ^
:idea: 06:45:969 (4,5) - ^
:idea: 06:49:969 (3) - Remove the whistle on the head for there is no clear sound of music box
:idea: 06:51:969 (1,2,3) - I am a little confused for the music changed here but you keep the pattern before.. I think you should change one
:idea: 06:56:302 (2) - the same with 06:35:302 (4)
[Fycho]
:idea: 07:48:747 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - This part is the slow part in the song, so maybe you can change the NC way into 2 downbeat with 1 NC. Moreover, You can try setting the NC with the lyric here, which said: "Grey na Fuan, Blue na tameiki " Using Grey combo color and Blue combo color is a good try here. ( setting 07:45:367 (1) - this NC into blue can avoid duplicate color)
here

[Sharlo]
:idea: 09:03:417 (6) -the NC should be here. This will keep consistent with this 09:21:530 (1)
09:57:257 (1) - Consider shift this slider for a bit ww 09:57:490 - here is a sound and maybe putting the turning point a little later will give a better effect.
here
:idea: 09:59:117 (1) - ^
:idea: 10:06:559 (1,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,1) - I suggest remove the normal sampleset here and set the normal sampleset to the tail of 10:06:559 (1) - ,10:07:257 (3,7,9) - to stress the voice of "oh" here
[Laurier]
:idea: 10:44:374 (4) - Clap here plays better I think !!!
:idea: 11:03:874 (7) - This clap comes too sudden because 11:03:124 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - this part all whistle. I think 11:03:424 (4) - this clap will be better.
:idea: 11:13:243 - I dont think sound here is faint enough to be ignored here. Apparently the drum sound does not stop here ever. Maybe adding a circle here fits the music better and plays better, like the pattern below
like this

(6 is under the tail of 11:12:574 (8) )
このマラソンの中で一番すごい部分だと思います　さすがローリエさん :D


呼 摸完了 祝早rnak1！！ :oops:
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pw384
2,287 posts
Joined January 2012
pw384
夏罗大法好！

mod info:
Black: Suggestions.
Bule: Emphasis suggestions.
Red: Unrankable stuffs. Must be fixed.


[General]
  1. 快做SB!!!!!11111


[Sumisola]
  1. 00:37:395 (1) - 去掉NC
  2. 00:39:035 (1) - ^
  3. 00:39:504 (1) - ^
  4. 01:12:082 (1,2,3) - 全部移动到x=256,y=152? 我觉得01:11:965 - 前后可能需要一个小跳
  5. 01:22:160 (4,5) - 移动到xc=8,y=184? 这样和slider衔接得比较好


[Flower]
  1. 01:35:737 (1,2,3) - 花花啊成熟点
  2. 01:48:121 (5) - x=12,y=100? 感觉妖怪强迫症
  3. 01:57:016 (2,3) - blanket坠毁


[alacat]
  1. kkkkk, awesome mapping


[Nymph]
  1. 03:29:950 (6,7) - 我觉得这里好卡手啊
  2. 04:25:680 - 加note?


[Frostmourne]
  1. 05:47:614 (5) - imo it's better not to stack it. Try moving it to somewhere around x=20,y=184
  2. 05:54:621 (1) - using 0.9x slider velocity here seems to be better than 0.75x


[Narcissu]
  1. 06:39:969 (1,2) - 分开来，像前几个做的那样
  2. 06:50:636 (1,2) - ^


[Fycho]
  1. 07:48:747 (1) - 我觉得用直的滑条，向下倾斜一点会比较好
  2. 没啥


[Sharlo]
  1. 09:47:490 (6,7,1) - 小心被狗围剿，虽然我觉得除了flow不太顺没啥大问题


[Laurier]
  1. Probably the best part of this map

有星的时候来射一个><
Fycho
Global Moderator
2,479 posts
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Fycho

sammy711 wrote:

来了来了~~
[General]
:idea: [color=#FF0000]normal-hitfinish13.wav is an unused file in Folder
N:13 does not exist in the Inherited Section
N13我有特殊的用途
@sharlo，务必别remove
[ C r a c k ]
172 posts
Joined November 2013
[ C r a c k ]
Only for you Sharlo! ♥ ( 　ﾉ・ω・)ノ
alacat
osu! Alumni
3,872 posts
Joined May 2011
alacat
SPOILER

xxdeathx wrote:

alacat
[*]02:50:283 (5,6) - blanket is off, move circle to 384, 188. no change.

sjoy wrote:

[3]
02:52:344 (3) - add clap on the tail?
02:56:008 (3) - ^
03:07:000 (3) - ^ hm, It's nice patterns but not fit to me.

lkx_Shore wrote:

alacat

  1. 02:53:260 (3) - Add a finish and remove the whistle on the slider start. Use Finish better then whistle imo. And Same as this part 03:07:916 (3) - . I feel it's too loud here.
  2. 03:14:329 (1) - Change to stream for emphasize the vocal? Cuz vocal start on 03:14:558 (2) - ，But 03:14:329 (1) - is not vocal. no change.

sammy711 wrote:

[alacat]
:idea: 02:50:283 (5,6) - blanket same as above.
さすがalacat、何一つ指摘できるところが見つからない ｗｗｗ arigato :>

Thank you for checking :3
Kibbleru
osu! Alumni
5,844 posts
Joined August 2013
Kibbleru
hey sry late owo


  • ~Memento~
  1. Nice bg owo
  2. 00:27:668 (2) - doesn't really follow music.. remove?
  3. 00:31:770 (4,5) - consider spacing this out a bit more? antijump doesn't really make much sense here
  4. 00:43:254 - u should map out this strong beat owo
  5. 00:44:192 (5,6) - k these.. seriously, if you wana use an extended slider at least make sure you're not missing out on any beats like here you missed a vocal to make an extended slider, really does not fit.
    00:46:067 (1,2) - ^
    01:10:442 (1,2) - ^
  6. 01:21:692 (3,4) - perhaps space this out a bit? looks weird when they touch

    ---
  7. 01:49:865 (6,1) - swap nc? nc should be on the downbeat imo
  8. 01:43:935 (5,1) - consider making a bigger jump since the (1) is a pretty strong beat
  9. 01:46:900 (6,1) - imo antijump doesn't feel right since there still is a beat at 01:47:074 -
  10. 02:15:252 - silence the slider end here? the double hit normal just sound weird since you're using an extended slider
    02:20:833 - ^
  11. 02:18:653 (5) - removing this gives a pretty nice antijump owo try it out?
  12. 02:33:130 (1) - NC? would make sense and imo looks nicer with 02:33:479 (1,1) - that way

    ---
  13. 03:03:107 (4) - add whistle?

    ---
  14. 03:39:411 (2,3) - stack better? (you can ctrl g (3) so u can stack it with the head and then ctrl g back)

    ---

    nothing noticeable found in Frosty's part

    ---
  15. 06:39:969 (1,2) - space this out so that they don't overlap for mainly consistency?
    06:50:636 (1,2) - ^
  16. 06:43:802 (5,1) - consider making this jump bigger since (1) is a very strong beat

    ---

    Fycho Senpai <3
  17. 07:31:001 (3) - add whistle maybe? feels empty without one o-o
  18. 07:37:761 (3,4,5,6) - add a whistle somewhere in here, feels empty suddenly o-o
  19. 08:04:592 (6,9) - consider NCing either one of these (or both) since this combo is kinda long
  20. 08:12:726 (2) - clap doesn't really fit the drum in the music :/ (the one in the music is more like a kick)
  21. 08:26:141 (2) - remove this to be consistent with before? 08:12:620 -

    ---

    Sup sharlo
  22. 09:18:700 (2,3) - try making a bigger jump here, the (3) is on a strong crash sound and should have a bigger jump compared to the previous jumps
  23. 09:48:885 (4) - consider NC here, that way it fits more with 09:49:234 (1,1) -
  24. 10:00:978 (1,1) - they overlap barely and it doesn't look too nice :(
    10:01:908 (1,1) - ^

    ---
  25. 10:51:724 (1) - consider nc? combo gets kinda long
  26. 11:00:424 (4,1) - anti jump kinda feels weird, stops the movement while the music doesn't really "pause"
Fushimi Rio
Fushimi Rio
From pm request
[sumisola]
00:35:051 (2,3,4) - 感觉位置应该往左下移一点
00:38:098 - 哨子有点太响了……
[flower]
01:39:051 (2) - 放在上面？
[alacat]
none.
[nymph]
none.
[frostmourne]
05:44:329 (4) - stack to 05:43:453 (3) - ?
[narcissu]
06:32:802 (4) - 拉得太开了 ctrl+g吧
06:53:636 (2) - 3/4+circle把这个音强调的有点过了
[fycho]
none.
[sharlo]
none.
[laurier]
11:13:249 - add something here? sounds a bit strange now

看了看也没写出什么东西 只能说抱歉了orz
alacat
osu! Alumni
3,872 posts
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alacat

Kibbleru wrote:

03:03:107 (4) - add whistle? It's better to add a whistle on next note imo 03:03:336 (5) -
Thanks modding :3
Narcissu
1,744 posts
Joined August 2012
Narcissu

lkx_Shore wrote:

General


  • [notice]

    Narcissu

    [list:1337]
    哇，Pro 麻婆 and DT 毁灭者.
    你的3/4滑条接Note的梗多数看起来其实没有什么必要，我觉得都换成1/1也挺好的...……都去掉了……累死我了……
  1. 06:37:802 (3) - 我觉得换成两个Note好点，当然不换也没什么所谓。……ok
  2. 06:48:469 (3) - 同上
  3. 06:51:969 (1) - 嗯，从Nc上能看出你知道这里音乐变了...但为什么note还是用上面那套梗？换一套不正符合音乐变化了的意义么。只是人聲變了啊111……

384059043 wrote:

[Narcissu]
  1. 06:39:969 (1,2) - 分开来，像前几个做的那样……厚
  2. 06:50:636 (1,2) - ^

sammy711 wrote:

[Narcissu]
I keep the same idea as lkx_shore which says the 3/4 slider don't make much sense ……都去掉了
:idea: 06:35:302 (4) - whistle on the tail for the background sound……唔……我只是在圈和滑條頭下whistle而已……
:idea: 06:35:636 (5) - ^
:idea: 06:45:969 (4,5) - ^
:idea: 06:49:969 (3) - Remove the whistle on the head for there is no clear sound of music box
:idea: 06:51:969 (1,2,3) - I am a little confused for the music changed here but you keep the pattern before.. I think you should change one
:idea: 06:56:302 (2) - the same with 06:35:302 (4)

Kibbleru wrote:

[*]06:39:969 (1,2) - space this out so that they don't overlap for mainly consistency? …… ok
06:50:636 (1,2) - ^
[*]06:43:802 (5,1) - consider making this jump bigger since (1) is a very strong beat……jump now 111

imoutosan wrote:

[narcissu]
06:32:802 (4) - 拉得太开了 ctrl+g吧……好
06:53:636 (2) - 3/4+circle把这个音强调的有点过了……3/4全部美麗了
EncoreW
833 posts
Joined June 2013
EncoreW
[Sumisola]

00:27:317 (1,2,3) - 这地方可能有点难读懂啊，而且NC都一样的，可能有人会当3连处理掉了

00:45:598 (9) - 这地方还是感觉弧度朝下的比较好打flow
大概就是这样的 http://puu.sh/ebaIr/adb752d703.jpg

00:47:942 (1,1) - 这两个滑条的blanket似乎不是太严格？

[Flower]

02:02:946 (3) - NC？

[Alacat]

02:50:283 (5,6) - 5后半段和6的blanket似乎不是太好，建议6的最后一个白点移到X241Y158附近，倒数第二个移到X263Y179附近

02:52:344 (3) - 长度明显不够为啥还放一个120度环绕的梗。。

[Nymph]

03:51:642 (4) - blanket，建议移到X326Y144附近

04:14:488 (7,8) - 这两个感觉可以往上移动一些，8的末尾和前面的6且一起会比较好看

04:47:950 (7,1,2) - 这几个的为止感觉放到1的末尾和前面的8重叠会好看一点

[Forstmourne]

None

[Narcissu]

None

[Fycho]

07:21:705 (1,2) - blanket，建议把2移到X123Y196附近

[Sharlo]

None

[Laurier]

10:58:624 (2,3,4,5,6) - 还是觉得跳的距离慢慢变大要比两个等边三角形来的好看点。。建议是把4移到X314Y290附近



刚刚忘了分开讲了。。
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