Pereira006 wrote:

hi ! *waiting 2 month* gg

[Extra]

Gameplay:

1. 01:25:064 (1) - this isn't should be remove NC ? this part rhythm is similiar in begin
2. 01:27:394 (1) - ^ same
3. 01:29:724 (1) - ^ same
4. 02:36:874 (1) - ^ same Removed all NCs here

[Nigthmare]

Hitsound:

1. 00:00:016 (T) - you forget change N:C1 to S like other diff's Yeah, fixed~

Gameplay:

1. 01:23:899 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,3,1,2) - I do understand you try but you don't use NC same as in begin ? I suppose it would be better that way, fixed.
2. 02:37:021 (1) - same extra Done~

[]
ok now hitsound is consistency
No need kudosu, call me when you fix this

Pereira006 wrote:

alrigth, let's try!

Rebubble

1. 02:19:894 - What's up with this Timing Section? I don't see the purpose of it as the music snaps to the old section, and only Coldtooth's difficulties are following it at the moment (which sounds off). I know it's in the Ranked Version, but it seems like a mistake.

1. 00:30:161 (1,2) - Hmm what's up with the random NCing here? The NC should be on (2), it follows both the music and the pattern better.
2. 00:30:598 (3,4,5,1,2,1) - Again, quite random NCing. Shouldn't the NC be here 00:31:472 - instead of the two notes around that? Also, the back and forth here 00:30:598 (3,4,5) - was quite unintuitive to play and difficult to read for me, and I don't really understand why the spacing is so low here 00:31:181 (5,1) - . I would suggest this fix for this pattern: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4024607
3. 00:56:812 (1,2,3) - NC should be at (3) instead to follow your logic, because there is no back-and-forth pattern here.
4. 01:13:414 (1) - I feel like this is missing a hitound. Consider using Normal Sampleset here, because the sound is identical to the ones you followed with Normal Sampleset. This might apply to lower diffs as well.
5. 01:22:734 (1) - Same as above.
6. 01:58:268 (1,2,3,1) - Why are these NCs here?
7. 02:06:715 (5) - I expected a NC here for consistency with similar patterns.
8. Yeah, take a look at those NCs again. I think you are trying to NC after patterns, but it needs to be consistent if you want to do that.

1. 00:57:394 (7,8) - The flow wasn't the best here, going upwards after (7) didn't feel intuitive to me. Pattern suggestion: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4024719
2. 01:41:666 (6) - Hmm this seems like an odd decision... Why didn't you just mirror 01:41:083 (4) - to make a diamond?

1. 00:36:715 (3) - You are missing a Drum Whistle here. Same applies for the Advanced.
2. 01:45:307 (2,3) - This gap feels empty, almost as if you deleted something. Consider to add a circle at 01:45:598 - atleast.
3. 01:48:365 - Why is there no Drum Whistle here? Same for the Advanced.
4. The difficulty gap to Insane is quite big. Oh well, should be acceptable.

Desperate-kun wrote:

Checking high-SP bubbles. Sadly, I need to bubble pop because of a Timing Issue.

[General]

1. 02:19:894 - What's up with this Timing Section? I don't see the purpose of it as the music snaps to the old section, and only Coldtooth's difficulties are following it at the moment (which sounds off). I know it's in the Ranked Version, but it seems like a mistake. Alright I got rid of it.

[Nightmare]

1. 00:30:161 (1,2) - Hmm what's up with the random NCing here? The NC should be on (2), it follows both the music and the pattern better. Okay, done.
2. 00:30:598 (3,4,5,1,2,1) - Again, quite random NCing. Shouldn't the NC be here 00:31:472 - instead of the two notes around that? Also, the back and forth here 00:30:598 (3,4,5) - was quite unintuitive to play and difficult to read for me, and I don't really understand why the spacing is so low here 00:31:181 (5,1) - . I would suggest this fix for this pattern: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4024607 Yeah, that's much better, done.
3. 00:56:812 (1,2,3) - NC should be at (3) instead to follow your logic, because there is no back-and-forth pattern here. Done~
4. 01:13:414 (1) - I feel like this is missing a hitound. Consider using Normal Sampleset here, because the sound is identical to the ones you followed with Normal Sampleset. This might apply to lower diffs as well. Okay, I added normal samplesets on the difficulties where this is applicable.
5. 01:22:734 (1) - Same as above. ^
6. 01:58:268 (1,2,3,1) - Why are these NCs here? Originally had them to help reading, but I suppose it's perfectly readable as it is, got rid of the NCs.
7. 02:06:715 (5) - I expected a NC here for consistency with similar patterns. Added
8. Yeah, take a look at those NCs again. I think you are trying to NC after patterns, but it needs to be consistent if you want to do that. I'll have a look :3

[Insane]

1. 00:57:394 (7,8) - The flow wasn't the best here, going upwards after (7) didn't feel intuitive to me. Pattern suggestion: Agreed, changed. https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4024719
2. 01:41:666 (6) - Hmm this seems like an odd decision... Why didn't you just mirror 01:41:083 (4) - to make a diamond? Lol I'm not sure, probably an accident. Fixed!

[Coldtooth's Hard]

1. 00:36:715 (3) - You are missing a Drum Whistle here. Same applies for the Advanced. Yeah I noticed, fixed~
2. 01:45:307 (2,3) - This gap feels empty, almost as if you deleted something. Consider to add a circle at 01:45:598 - atleast. Indeed, added a circle where you suggested.
3. 01:48:365 - Why is there no Drum Whistle here? Same for the Advanced. Alright, added drum whistles
4. The difficulty gap to Insane is quite big. Oh well, should be acceptable.

Okay everything seems nice overall, except the hitsounding. This song has very dominant instruments in the "loud" sections, the kicks snares etc. It plays really weird if such a strong sound is just mapped with a Soft Hitnormal. I pointed out a few missing hitsounds in my mod, but it would be nice if you can go through all diffs and watch out if there are missing hitsounds and if the hitsounding is consistent. Yeah I went through the diff after applying your suggestions and I think they're good now.

Call me back when you are done with that

Pereira006 wrote:

Everthing look good

Qualify

congratz your first map qualify

Desperate-kun wrote:

Rebubbled!

-Faded- wrote:

Thanks so much for bubble + qualify, I don't know what to say... <3