Sphere - Future Stream · forum

Karen

Joined August 2013

Topic Starter

Karen 2014-10-26T14:42:49+00:00

M o k o r i wrote:
hi, from M4M~

[General]
・i recommend to change the source "初恋限定。" ⇒　"Hatsukoi Limited". (for reference: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/8230) old maps can't be reference,and it has been checked carefully.
・kiai time is not on scale. if you have any idea, ignore this. fixed

[Normal]
some sliders end are not on scale. check AImod.(ctrl+shift+a) fixed

・00:07:724 (1,2,3) - circle3 is overlapped to slide1. and it's good if you can remake slider and make blankets. k
・00:09:528 (4,5) - ^^ they can't blanket because of the DS
・00:17:197 (5,6) - 　make a blanket. ...k
・00:23:739 (4,5) - a little overlapped, adjust the placement. they must overlap because of the DS
・00:27:573 (3,4) - ^^ ^^
・00:30:054 (2,3) - objects are covering healthbar and over the window!! it's unrankable issue fixed
・00:37:498 (2) - make it symmetry, it's better look and feel. k
・00:45:393 (5,6,7) - it's better to adjust overlapping. k
・01:29:152 (1,2) - how about place center? hmm,i think no

[Hatsukoi]
・00:05:017 (4,5) - copy the slider4 and paste pattern to slider5. k
・00:54:641 (1) - near by healthbar, down its place. can't understand...
・00:59:152 (3) - overlapped to healthbar. [/color]

good luck!

EmingK wrote:
随便看两眼

This post is generated by EK's osu modpost generator.
Red=unrankable issue
Purple=Emphasis suggestion
Black=Suggestion
Gray=Feel free to ignore
[General]
clap声音太大丽，用AU啥的调低点，然后拉高整体音量. 现在有的地方节奏上压白线的地方感觉头重脚轻，不压白线的地方感觉空荡荡的.. 还好把.-.
调过timing? 绿线全unsnap了，对齐一下 [/color]

[Hatsukoi]
30%的音量太小，建议低音量部分调高些 k
00:03:889 (7) - 建议拿到下面去 k
00:43:927 (2,4) - 这两只note没听出来跟音乐啊改了
00:34:566 (8) - finish 没必要吧
01:00:054 (5) - NC k
01:22:385 (1,2) - NC对换 k
01:00:054 (5) - 这根绿线干啥的..后面又没有note 我觉得你复制错地方了，不过我知道你说的是什么...fixed

[Normal]
怎么一堆unsnap 没法看啊汗，all fixed

[Easy]
看下General调整绿线snap 这个得用英文.. 我在下面翻译一下吧.._.
00:57:348 - 15%音量听不到了吧，可能会unrankable
01:05:017 - 这里finish莫名，建议拿掉

美丽

Karen

2,860 posts

Joined August 2013

Topic Starter

Karen 2014-10-26T14:54:10+00:00

@KokoroStudiox3

EmingK wrote:
随便看两眼
[Easy]
看下General调整绿线snap Fixed by me
00:57:348 - 15%音量听不到了吧，可能会unrankable Translation: 15%Volume is too low,and maybe unrankable
01:05:017 - 这里finish莫名，建议拿掉 Translation: suggest to remove this Finish

美丽

Karen

2,860 posts

Joined August 2013

Topic Starter

Karen 2014-10-26T14:58:40+00:00

AIR wrote:

Harold Miner wrote:
Hard

00:25:779 (3,4,5) - 这几个的音量可以考虑逐渐变大√
00:47:433 (1,2,3) - 同上没必要
01:21:719 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 同上
00:34:801 - 这里应该能再放一个note 毕竟大白线空着总感觉不太好省略有时候效果不见得坏
00:53:974 - 感觉这里漏音了要补就要用1/4，这个难度用不上
00:56:681 (6) - NC？√√
00:58:260 - kiai可以考虑从这里开始否则喷泉已经出来了但是没有note打总感觉有点怪@ren,统一下看看要不要修kiai Kagamine Ren:我这的kiai就是这个地方啊...不知道你那的版本过旧还是啥>.<

update

osu file format v13

[General]
AudioFilename: Future Stream.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 1000
PreviewTime: 58250
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1.1
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1.1

[Metadata]
Title:Future Stream
TitleUnicode:Future Stream
Artist:Sphere
ArtistUnicode:スフィア
Creator:Kagamine Ren
Version:AIR's Hard
Source:初恋限定。
Tags:eLtigreXXx KokoroStudiox3 AIR opening Hatsukoi Limited Rimiteddo スフィア  kotobuki minako takagaki ayahi tomatsu haruka toyosaki aki 寿美菜子 高垣彩陽 豊崎愛生 戸松遥
BeatmapID:520109
BeatmapSetID:213500

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:6
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:6
ApproachRate:7
SliderMultiplier:1.4
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"zMmMp.jpg",0,0
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
3,100,163,162,255

[TimingPoints]
506,451.127819548872,4,2,1,60,1,0
616,-100,4,2,1,50,0,0
13937,-100,4,2,1,60,0,0
25769,-100,4,2,1,50,0,0
26671,-100,4,2,1,60,0,0
27573,-100,4,2,1,70,0,0
29829,-100,4,2,1,50,0,0
41107,-100,4,2,1,60,0,0
42009,-100,4,2,1,70,0,0
43814,-100,4,2,1,50,0,0
55994,-100,4,2,1,60,0,0
56671,-100,4,2,1,70,0,0
57358,-83.3333333333333,4,2,1,80,0,1
89613,-100,4,2,1,80,0,0


[Colours]
Combo1 : 255,0,0
Combo2 : 255,128,255
Combo3 : 255,128,0
Combo4 : 0,128,255

[HitObjects]
112,268,506,5,8,0:0:0:0:
368,316,1182,1,2,0:0:0:0:
368,316,1408,2,0,B|324:312|324:312|280:284|280:284|260:232,1,140,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
452,95,2310,2,0,P|444:147|364:195,1,140,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,128,3212,2,0,P|132:104|12:160,1,210,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
17,153,4115,1,8,0:0:0:0:
146,346,4791,5,2,0:0:0:0:
146,346,5017,2,0,B|126:206|126:206|170:266,1,210,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
166,261,5919,2,0,P|220:272|308:248,1,140,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
504,272,6821,2,0,B|448:296|448:296|412:356|412:356|312:340,1,210,10|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
240,324,7724,1,4,0:0:0:0:
256,112,8175,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,232,8626,2,0,B|120:220|120:220|136:224|136:224|208:208,1,140,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
457,196,9528,2,0,P|392:219|324:208,1,140,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
28,92,10430,2,0,L|168:120,1,140,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
308,304,11333,6,0,B|256:300|256:300|216:288|216:288|148:284,1,140,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
8,272,12009,1,2,0:0:0:0:
88,344,12235,2,0,P|116:280|96:208,1,140,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
20,80,12912,1,2,0:0:0:0:
20,80,13137,2,0,B|72:100|72:100|136:104|136:104|156:120,1,140,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
348,64,14039,2,0,L|508:56,2,140,8|8|4,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
372,248,15393,5,2,0:0:0:0:
248,304,15618,1,0,0:0:0:0:
248,304,15844,2,0,P|236:264|252:192,2,105,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
128,304,16746,2,0,L|56:300,1,70,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
20,192,17197,1,0,0:0:0:0:
136,152,17423,1,2,0:0:0:0:
136,152,17648,2,0,B|192:132|192:132|228:128|228:128|276:112,1,140,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
336,88,18325,1,2,0:0:0:0:
400,60,18551,6,0,L|388:200,1,140
436,328,19453,2,0,B|428:316|428:316|380:332|328:308|328:308|300:324,1,140
76,336,20355,1,0,0:0:0:0:
76,336,20581,2,0,P|110:333|145:327,1,70,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
172,184,21257,1,0,0:0:0:0:
172,184,21483,2,0,L|92:216,1,70,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
20,84,22160,6,0,P|84:96|156:72,1,140,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,40,22836,1,2,0:0:0:0:
358,73,23062,2,0,P|423:95|492:83,1,140
256,192,23964,2,0,B|228:150|163:160|163:160|121:210|152:257,1,210,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,24866,6,0,B|328:184|328:184|352:192|352:192|412:184,1,140
460,88,25543,1,8,0:0:0:0:
460,88,25769,2,0,P|484:144|476:204,2,105,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
360,36,26671,2,0,P|404:44|468:24,2,105,2|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,72,27573,2,0,P|192:60|140:76,2,105,8|8|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
340,144,28475,2,0,B|356:192|356:192|348:236|348:236|356:292,1,140,6|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
386,32,29378,6,0,P|325:64|256:72,1,140,12|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
160,40,30054,1,2,0:0:0:0:
160,40,30280,2,0,P|172:100|160:152,2,105,0|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
80,108,31182,2,0,L|4:124,1,70,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
60,208,31633,2,0,P|43:275|63:341,1,140
156,312,32310,1,2,0:0:0:0:
156,312,32423,2,0,L|272:308,1,105,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
352,332,32987,6,0,P|400:348|496:328,1,140
420,256,33663,2,0,L|408:224,2,35,8|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
488,180,34115,2,0,B|500:128|500:128|432:52,1,140,2|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,96,35017,2,0,L|264:176,1,70,0|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
200,248,35468,1,0,0:0:0:0:
200,248,35693,1,0,0:0:0:0:
112,208,35919,1,2,0:0:0:0:
112,208,36145,2,0,P|100:168|96:136,1,70,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
24,69,36596,6,0,P|95:42|172:69,1,140,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,96,37272,1,2,0:0:0:0:
256,96,37498,2,0,L|328:80,1,70,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
420,36,37949,2,0,L|436:104,1,70,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
488,160,38400,5,0,0:0:0:0:
432,212,38626,1,10,0:0:0:0:
380,156,38851,2,0,B|396:228|376:308,1,140
304,316,39528,1,10,0:0:0:0:
228,320,39754,2,0,P|184:312|144:316,1,70,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
88,348,40205,2,0,P|60:308|60:240,2,105,4|2|10,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
136,232,41107,2,0,P|140:184|104:124,2,105,2|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
32,148,42009,2,0,P|28:100|92:20,1,140,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
292,80,42912,6,0,L|432:68,1,140,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
480,212,43814,2,0,L|488:336,2,105,8|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
408,184,44716,2,0,P|311:220|212:191,1,210,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
124,120,45618,2,0,L|12:124,2,105,8|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
160,52,46521,2,0,P|184:128|160:196,1,140,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
128,312,47423,6,0,B|72:332|72:332|16:324,2,105,8|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
276,280,48325,2,0,P|228:280|176:236,2,105,2|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
428,328,49227,2,0,P|375:332|326:350,2,105,8|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
368,244,50130,2,0,P|368:172|408:112,1,140,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
184,60,51032,6,0,B|128:48|128:48|92:56|92:56|24:44,1,140,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
52,222,51934,2,0,B|100:232|100:232|128:220|128:220|188:232,2,140,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
88,140,53062,1,0,0:0:0:0:
88,140,53287,2,0,L|180:132,2,70,0|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,196,54190,1,0,0:0:0:0:
260,264,54415,1,0,0:0:0:0:
264,336,54641,1,8,0:0:0:0:
336,96,55092,5,2,0:0:0:0:
448,140,55318,2,0,L|480:124,2,35,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
448,140,55769,1,2,0:0:0:0:
356,208,55994,1,8,0:0:0:0:
336,96,56220,1,12,0:0:0:0:
116,160,56671,5,8,0:0:0:0:
256,172,56896,1,8,0:0:0:0:
20,100,58250,6,0,P|128:84|188:100,1,167.999994873047,6|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
264,140,58927,1,0,0:0:0:0:
348,108,59152,1,2,0:0:0:0:
484,236,59603,1,8,0:0:0:0:
420,300,59829,1,0,0:0:0:0:
420,300,60054,2,0,B|364:304|364:304|328:320|328:320|256:312,1,167.999994873047,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
164,320,60731,1,0,0:0:0:0:
72,332,60957,2,0,B|40:288|40:288|24:224|56:176,1,167.999994873047,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
176,40,61859,5,6,0:0:0:0:
260,80,62084,1,0,0:0:0:0:
260,80,62310,1,8,0:0:0:0:
348,48,62536,1,0,0:0:0:0:
440,64,62761,1,2,0:0:0:0:
440,64,62987,2,0,P|472:128|452:228,1,167.999994873047,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
456,220,63663,2,0,L|368:212,1,83.9999974365235,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
284,240,64115,2,0,L|184:232,1,83.9999974365235,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
108,212,64566,5,2,0:0:0:0:
24,248,64791,1,0,0:0:0:0:
24,248,65017,1,8,0:0:0:0:
132,332,65242,1,0,0:0:0:0:
132,332,65468,2,0,P|156:256|128:160,1,167.999994873047,6|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
64,116,66145,1,0,0:0:0:0:
100,32,66370,1,2,0:0:0:0:
280,80,66821,5,8,0:0:0:0:
372,68,67047,1,0,0:0:0:0:
372,68,67272,2,0,P|412:152|400:232,1,167.999994873047,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
332,280,67949,1,0,0:0:0:0:
420,316,68175,2,0,L|240:336,1,167.999994873047,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
164,312,68851,1,0,0:0:0:0:
164,312,69077,5,6,0:0:0:0:
28,344,69415,1,2,0:0:0:0:
60,208,69754,1,2,0:0:0:0:
60,208,69979,1,2,0:0:0:0:
188,156,70318,1,2,0:0:0:0:
76,72,70656,1,2,0:0:0:0:
192,40,70881,2,0,B|256:92|348:44|348:44|424:116|516:48,2,335.999989746094,6|2|6,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
272,208,73137,5,10,0:0:0:0:
360,180,73363,1,0,0:0:0:0:
360,180,73588,2,0,P|280:148|192:152,1,167.999994873047,0|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
112,184,74265,1,0,0:0:0:0:
20,172,74490,5,2,0:0:0:0:
56,260,74716,1,0,0:0:0:0:
56,260,74942,2,0,L|60:352,1,83.9999974365235,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
152,336,75393,2,0,L|240:328,1,83.9999974365235,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
328,316,75844,1,8,0:0:0:0:
480,212,76295,6,0,P|492:156|420:60,1,167.999994873047,6|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
344,52,76972,1,0,0:0:0:0:
344,52,77197,1,2,0:0:0:0:
256,76,77423,2,0,L|160:60,1,83.9999974365235,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
173,62,77874,2,0,B|112:32|52:56|52:56|12:128|68:184,1,251.999992309571,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
116,248,78776,1,0,0:0:0:0:
116,248,79002,2,0,L|216:240,1,83.9999974365235,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
292,260,79453,2,0,L|392:252,1,83.9999974365235,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
468,268,79904,5,6,0:0:0:0:
496,180,80130,1,0,0:0:0:0:
496,180,80355,1,8,0:0:0:0:
432,112,80581,1,0,0:0:0:0:
432,112,80806,2,0,P|392:96|264:96,1,167.999994873047,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
176,104,81483,1,0,0:0:0:0:
176,104,81709,5,6,0:0:0:0:
44,140,82047,1,2,0:0:0:0:
84,272,82385,1,2,0:0:0:0:
132,192,82611,1,2,0:0:0:0:
176,324,82949,1,2,0:0:0:0:
40,300,83287,1,2,0:0:0:0:
40,300,83513,2,0,P|132:268|228:288,1,167.999994873047,6|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
336,324,84190,6,0,L|388:336,2,41.9999987182618,0|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
336,324,84641,1,0,0:0:0:0:
432,232,84866,1,8,0:0:0:0:
484,112,85092,1,0,0:0:0:0:
484,112,85318,2,0,B|440:84|384:80|384:80|364:100|364:100|304:80|248:104,1,251.999992309571,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
120,36,86220,2,0,B|132:88|132:88|124:132|124:132|152:180,1,125.999996154785,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
240,228,86896,1,4,0:0:0:0:
256,192,87009,12,4,88701,0:0:0:0:
144,124,89152,5,0,0:0:0:0:
144,280,89378,1,0,0:0:0:0:

All diff updated

zxhzxhz

70 posts

Joined November 2012

zxhzxhz 2014-10-26T19:55:47+00:00

[Hatsukoi]
00:02:197 (5) - overmap
00:15:618 (6,7) - blanket
00:15:618 (6,7,8,1,2) - http://puu.sh/crEMk/317e9cf50d.jpg
8在5下面，滑条轻微调整一下以保持ds，00:17:423 (2) - 也调整一下位置
00:19:904 (5) - 形状调整一下和4一样
00:26:445 (3) - 92,175
00:27:348 (6) - 176,256
00:29:152 (6,7,1) - 这样的连打最好间距保持在0.9（和00:24:641 (2,3,4,5,6) - 一样）不然感觉很乱的说，前面后面同样的情况就不列举了
00:45:393 (6) - nc
00:29:152 (6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6) - http://puu.sh/crFFS/b2614ab132.jpg
00:44:490 (3,1) - 这俩弯的太狠了，稍微改一下
00:49:566 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - 强烈建议这些二连改短滑条，不然非常卡手（可能是因为我实力太弱orz）
01:03:663 (1) - http://puu.sh/crG5g/aabc3e6e92.jpg
01:04:340 (3,4,5) - http://puu.sh/crGbA/9a303a7918.jpg
01:16:295 (1) - 形状不怎么好看
美丽
偷个懒QAQ
祝你图早日rank

柑橘我毁图功力越来越强了(╯‵□′)╯︵┻━┻

truonant

408 posts

Joined October 2013

truonant 2014-10-27T01:18:19+00:00

Hello M4M from your queue.

Sorry for late mod, been really busy!

00:05:919 (1) –move to x240 y:224
00:25:769 (1,2,3) - suggestion: http://puu.sh/cs33G/ad03677031.jpg
00:26:671 (4,5) - suggestion: http://puu.sh/cs36G/151a692aa2.jpg
00:26:107 (2,3,4,5) - suggestion: http://puu.sh/cs3xP/ead22a8c60.jpg
00:37:272 (2,3,4,5,6) – make a star pattern shape
Suggestion: http://puu.sh/cs41d/e0d413651c.jpg

00:40:205 (1,2) – move so slider head stacks on 00:39:754 (3) –
00:39:979 (4) – move to x212 y340
00:40:881 (3) - move to x164 y:156
00:41:107 (4) - stack on 00:40:656 (2) -

00:51:483 – drum sound?
00:52:385 -^
00:52:836 (1,2,3,4,5) – make star pattern shape
01:13:363 (2,3,4,5,6) - ^
01:16:972 (3) – hard to read. move around or rotate 01:16:746 (2,3,4,5,6,7) -
01:21:032 (6,7) – weird distance kills the flow, space these out more

00:01:408 (3) – I think this will look better as a curved slider instead of bezier
00:01:182 (2) – if you’re going to map, you should do the same with 00:02:084 -, 00:02:987 –
00:04:115 (1) – NC here and remove NC from 00:04:791 (1) –
00:07:724 (6) – NC
00:17:423 (6) - - - remove this. It doesn’t fit with the vocals. And it doesn’t make sense to stack on slider head if there’s no syllable like here 00:15:618 (2) -
00:17:648 (7) – shorten to ½ slider and add circle at 00:18:099 –
00:21:032 – add circle and NC
00:21:483 (6) – turn slider into repeat slider
00:23:062 (3) – this slider doesn’t fit the vocals at 00:23:287 –
00:23:964 (4) – doesn’t hit vocal + downbeat at 00:24:415 - . If you insist on using a 6/4
00:25:543 (2) – clap doesn’t fit
00:38:400 (5,6,7) - Suggestion: http://puu.sh/cs6VB/58e0d4c5b9.jpg
00:38:400 (1) – remove NC and add it here 00:40:205
00:54:190 (5,6,7) – inconsistent spacing between these notes

00:45:393 (5) - overlap doesn’t look good and bad flow
01:02:761 (2) – blanket
01:08:175 (6) - stack

AIR

1,577 posts

Joined November 2012

AIR 2014-10-27T07:34:04+00:00

EmingK wrote:
[Hard]
有些间距看着比较别扭..比如00:18:325 (8) - 这只就像后挤进来的一样……放开一点嘛比如这样http://puu.sh/cr47y/d3c278aba2.jpg√
00:28:475 (6) - 前后平行一下嘛0.0 #治好多年强迫症#√√
00:34:566 - finish有奇效√√√
00:42:912 - 、00:43:363 - 、00:43:814 - 均建议加finish √
00:56:896 (7) - ^√
01:22:611 - ^√
01:29:378 (2) - ^√

√√√√√

truonant wrote:

00:01:408 (3) – I think this will look better as a curved slider instead of bezier√
00:01:182 (2) – if you’re going to map, you should do the same with 00:02:084 -, 00:02:987 –
00:04:115 (1) – NC here and remove NC from 00:04:791 (1) –√
00:07:724 (6) – NC√
00:17:423 (6) - - - remove this. It doesn’t fit with the vocals. And it doesn’t make sense to stack on slider head if there’s no syllable like here 00:15:618 (2) - √
00:17:648 (7) – shorten to ½ slider and add circle at 00:18:099 –
00:21:032 – add circle and NC
00:21:483 (6) – turn slider into repeat slider
00:23:062 (3) – this slider doesn’t fit the vocals at 00:23:287 –
00:23:964 (4) – doesn’t hit vocal + downbeat at 00:24:415 - . If you insist on using a 6/4
00:25:543 (2) – clap doesn’t fit√√
00:38:400 (5,6,7) - Suggestion: http://puu.sh/cs6VB/58e0d4c5b9.jpg
00:38:400 (1) – remove NC and add it here 00:40:205 √√
00:54:190 (5,6,7) – inconsistent spacing between these notes√

~~~

osu file format v13

[General]
AudioFilename: Future Stream.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 1000
PreviewTime: 58250
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1.1
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1.1

[Metadata]
Title:Future Stream
TitleUnicode:Future Stream
Artist:Sphere
ArtistUnicode:スフィア
Creator:Kagamine Ren
Version:AIR's Hard
Source:初恋限定。
Tags:eLtigreXXx KokoroStudiox3 AIR opening Hatsukoi Limited Rimiteddo スフィア  kotobuki minako takagaki ayahi tomatsu haruka toyosaki aki 寿美菜子 高垣彩陽 豊崎愛生 戸松遥
BeatmapID:520109
BeatmapSetID:213500

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:6
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:6
ApproachRate:7
SliderMultiplier:1.4
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"zMmMp.jpg",0,0
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
3,100,163,162,255

[TimingPoints]
506,451.127819548872,4,2,1,60,1,0
616,-100,4,2,1,50,0,0
13937,-100,4,2,1,60,0,0
25769,-100,4,2,1,50,0,0
26671,-100,4,2,1,60,0,0
27573,-100,4,2,1,70,0,0
29829,-100,4,2,1,50,0,0
41107,-100,4,2,1,60,0,0
42009,-100,4,2,1,70,0,0
43814,-100,4,2,1,50,0,0
55994,-100,4,2,1,60,0,0
56671,-100,4,2,1,70,0,0
57358,-83.3333333333333,4,2,1,80,0,1
89613,-100,4,2,1,80,0,0


[Colours]
Combo1 : 255,0,0
Combo2 : 255,128,255
Combo3 : 255,128,0
Combo4 : 0,128,255

[HitObjects]
52,224,506,2,0,B|104:220|104:220|136:228|136:228|196:224,1,140,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
336,272,1408,2,0,P|388:248|456:296,1,140,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
336,272,2310,2,0,P|344:192|388:136,1,140,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,128,3212,2,0,P|132:104|12:160,1,210,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
17,153,4115,5,8,0:0:0:0:
146,346,4791,1,2,0:0:0:0:
146,346,5017,2,0,B|126:206|126:206|170:266,1,210,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
166,261,5919,2,0,P|220:272|308:248,1,140,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
504,272,6821,2,0,B|448:296|448:296|412:356|412:356|312:340,1,210,10|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
240,324,7724,5,4,0:0:0:0:
256,112,8175,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,232,8626,2,0,B|120:220|120:220|136:224|136:224|208:208,1,140,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
457,196,9528,2,0,P|392:219|324:208,1,140,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
28,92,10430,2,0,L|168:120,1,140,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
308,304,11333,6,0,B|256:300|256:300|216:288|216:288|148:284,1,140,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
8,272,12009,1,2,0:0:0:0:
88,344,12235,2,0,P|116:280|96:208,1,140,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
20,80,12912,1,2,0:0:0:0:
20,80,13137,2,0,B|72:100|72:100|136:104|136:104|156:120,1,140,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
348,64,14039,2,0,L|508:56,2,140,8|8|4,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
372,248,15393,5,2,0:0:0:0:
248,304,15618,1,0,0:0:0:0:
248,304,15844,2,0,P|236:264|252:192,2,105,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
128,284,16746,2,0,L|116:356,1,70,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
24,260,17197,1,0,0:0:0:0:
136,152,17648,2,0,B|192:132|192:132|228:128|228:128|276:112,1,140,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
428,136,18325,1,2,0:0:0:0:
388,64,18551,6,0,P|348:124|376:204,1,140
412,324,19453,2,0,B|404:312|404:312|356:328|304:304|304:304|276:320,1,140
76,336,20355,1,0,0:0:0:0:
76,336,20581,2,0,P|110:333|145:327,1,70,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
172,184,21257,1,0,0:0:0:0:
172,184,21483,2,0,L|92:216,1,70,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
20,84,22160,6,0,P|84:96|156:72,1,140,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,40,22836,1,2,0:0:0:0:
358,73,23062,2,0,P|423:95|492:83,1,140
256,192,23964,2,0,B|228:150|163:160|163:160|121:210|152:257,1,210,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,24866,6,0,B|328:184|328:184|352:192|352:192|412:184,1,140
460,88,25543,1,2,0:0:0:0:
460,88,25769,2,0,P|484:144|476:204,2,105,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
360,36,26671,2,0,P|404:44|468:24,2,105,2|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,72,27573,2,0,P|192:60|140:76,2,105,8|8|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
340,144,28475,2,0,B|356:192|356:192|348:236|348:236|364:288,1,140,6|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
386,32,29378,6,0,P|325:64|256:72,1,140,12|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
160,40,30054,1,2,0:0:0:0:
160,40,30280,2,0,P|172:100|160:152,2,105,0|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
80,108,31182,2,0,L|4:124,1,70,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
60,208,31633,2,0,P|43:275|63:341,1,140
156,312,32310,1,2,0:0:0:0:
156,312,32423,2,0,L|272:308,1,105,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
352,332,32987,6,0,P|400:348|496:328,1,140
420,256,33663,2,0,L|408:224,2,35,8|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
488,180,34115,2,0,B|500:128|500:128|432:52,1,140,2|6,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,96,35017,2,0,L|264:176,1,70,0|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
200,248,35468,1,0,0:0:0:0:
200,248,35693,1,0,0:0:0:0:
112,208,35919,1,2,0:0:0:0:
112,208,36145,2,0,P|100:168|96:136,1,70,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
24,69,36596,6,0,P|95:42|172:69,1,140,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,96,37272,1,2,0:0:0:0:
256,96,37498,2,0,L|328:80,1,70,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
420,36,37949,2,0,L|436:104,1,70,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
488,160,38400,1,0,0:0:0:0:
432,212,38626,1,10,0:0:0:0:
380,156,38851,6,0,B|396:228|376:308,1,140
304,316,39528,1,10,0:0:0:0:
228,320,39754,2,0,P|184:312|144:316,1,70,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
88,348,40205,2,0,P|60:308|60:240,2,105,4|10|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
136,232,41107,2,0,P|140:184|104:124,2,105,2|10|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
32,148,42009,2,0,P|28:100|92:20,1,140,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
292,80,42912,6,0,L|432:68,1,140,12|12,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
480,212,43814,2,0,L|488:336,2,105,12|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
408,184,44716,2,0,P|311:220|212:191,1,210,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
124,120,45618,2,0,L|12:124,2,105,8|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
160,52,46521,2,0,P|184:128|160:196,1,140,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
128,312,47423,6,0,B|72:332|72:332|16:324,2,105,8|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
276,280,48325,2,0,P|228:280|176:236,2,105,2|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
428,328,49227,2,0,P|375:332|326:350,2,105,8|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
368,244,50130,2,0,P|368:172|408:112,1,140,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
184,60,51032,6,0,B|128:48|128:48|92:56|92:56|24:44,1,140,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
52,222,51934,2,0,B|100:232|100:232|128:220|128:220|188:232,2,140,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
88,140,53062,1,0,0:0:0:0:
88,140,53287,2,0,L|180:132,2,70,0|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,196,54190,1,0,0:0:0:0:
259,266,54415,1,0,0:0:0:0:
264,336,54641,1,8,0:0:0:0:
336,96,55092,5,2,0:0:0:0:
448,140,55318,2,0,L|480:124,2,35,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
448,140,55769,1,2,0:0:0:0:
356,208,55994,1,8,0:0:0:0:
336,96,56220,1,12,0:0:0:0:
116,160,56671,5,8,0:0:0:0:
256,172,56896,1,12,0:0:0:0:
20,100,58250,6,0,P|128:84|188:100,1,167.999994873047,6|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
264,140,58927,1,0,0:0:0:0:
348,108,59152,1,2,0:0:0:0:
484,236,59603,1,8,0:0:0:0:
420,300,59829,1,0,0:0:0:0:
420,300,60054,2,0,B|364:304|364:304|328:320|328:320|256:312,1,167.999994873047,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
164,320,60731,1,0,0:0:0:0:
72,332,60957,2,0,B|40:288|40:288|24:224|56:176,1,167.999994873047,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
176,40,61859,5,6,0:0:0:0:
260,80,62084,1,0,0:0:0:0:
260,80,62310,1,8,0:0:0:0:
348,48,62536,1,0,0:0:0:0:
440,64,62761,1,2,0:0:0:0:
440,64,62987,2,0,P|472:128|452:228,1,167.999994873047,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
456,220,63663,2,0,L|368:212,1,83.9999974365235,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
284,240,64115,2,0,L|184:232,1,83.9999974365235,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
108,212,64566,5,2,0:0:0:0:
24,248,64791,1,0,0:0:0:0:
24,248,65017,1,8,0:0:0:0:
132,332,65242,1,0,0:0:0:0:
132,332,65468,2,0,P|156:256|128:160,1,167.999994873047,6|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
64,116,66145,1,0,0:0:0:0:
100,32,66370,1,2,0:0:0:0:
280,80,66821,5,8,0:0:0:0:
372,68,67047,1,0,0:0:0:0:
372,68,67272,2,0,P|412:152|400:232,1,167.999994873047,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
332,280,67949,1,0,0:0:0:0:
420,316,68175,2,0,L|240:336,1,167.999994873047,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
164,312,68851,1,0,0:0:0:0:
164,312,69077,5,6,0:0:0:0:
28,344,69415,1,2,0:0:0:0:
60,208,69754,1,2,0:0:0:0:
60,208,69979,1,2,0:0:0:0:
188,156,70318,1,2,0:0:0:0:
76,72,70656,1,2,0:0:0:0:
192,40,70881,2,0,B|256:92|348:44|348:44|424:116|516:48,2,335.999989746094,6|2|6,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
272,208,73137,5,10,0:0:0:0:
360,180,73363,1,0,0:0:0:0:
360,180,73588,2,0,P|280:148|192:152,1,167.999994873047,0|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
112,184,74265,1,0,0:0:0:0:
20,172,74490,5,2,0:0:0:0:
56,260,74716,1,0,0:0:0:0:
56,260,74942,2,0,L|60:352,1,83.9999974365235,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
152,336,75393,2,0,L|240:328,1,83.9999974365235,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
328,316,75844,1,8,0:0:0:0:
480,212,76295,6,0,P|492:156|420:60,1,167.999994873047,6|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
344,52,76972,1,0,0:0:0:0:
344,52,77197,1,2,0:0:0:0:
256,76,77423,2,0,L|160:60,1,83.9999974365235,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
173,62,77874,2,0,B|112:32|52:56|52:56|12:128|68:184,1,251.999992309571,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
116,248,78776,1,0,0:0:0:0:
116,248,79002,2,0,L|216:240,1,83.9999974365235,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
292,260,79453,2,0,L|392:252,1,83.9999974365235,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
468,268,79904,5,6,0:0:0:0:
496,180,80130,1,0,0:0:0:0:
496,180,80355,1,8,0:0:0:0:
432,112,80581,1,0,0:0:0:0:
432,112,80806,2,0,P|392:96|264:96,1,167.999994873047,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
176,104,81483,1,0,0:0:0:0:
176,104,81709,5,6,0:0:0:0:
44,140,82047,1,2,0:0:0:0:
84,272,82385,1,2,0:0:0:0:
132,192,82611,1,6,0:0:0:0:
176,324,82949,1,2,0:0:0:0:
40,300,83287,1,2,0:0:0:0:
40,300,83513,2,0,P|132:268|228:288,1,167.999994873047,6|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
336,324,84190,6,0,L|388:336,2,41.9999987182618,0|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
336,324,84641,1,0,0:0:0:0:
432,232,84866,1,8,0:0:0:0:
484,112,85092,1,0,0:0:0:0:
484,112,85318,2,0,B|440:84|384:80|384:80|364:100|364:100|304:80|248:104,1,251.999992309571,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
120,36,86220,2,0,B|132:88|132:88|124:132|124:132|152:180,1,125.999996154785,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
240,228,86896,1,4,0:0:0:0:
256,192,87009,12,4,88701,0:0:0:0:
144,124,89152,5,0,0:0:0:0:
144,280,89378,1,4,0:0:0:0:

Spring Roll

230 posts

Joined April 2013

Spring Roll 2014-10-27T08:54:01+00:00

听说要在年底前摸完图

Koroko's Easy

01:19:002 (1) - blanket with 01:17:197 (4) -
kiaitime上加点whistle比较好，比如那些1,3白线上，不然本来kiaitime的音量就这么低，现在打起来像打空气一样
nice diff.

Normal

00:09:528 (4) - 我跟你说，在这种长度下，三点式的滑条是最整洁漂亮的滑条之一，还有一种是00:58:250 (1) - 这样的，我建议你把滑条都改一下，现在这样我觉得很乱，如果你说这是你的风格的话倒也没啥问题，不过我觉得这么吐槽你滑条的我应该不是第一个了
00:23:739 (4,5) - 排列不太好看，重叠部分有点多
00:34:566 - finish
00:35:693 - whistle 改成 finish
00:36:596 - ^
00:45:393 (5) - 节奏古怪，不如改成一个note接一个3/2的滑条
01:08:175 (6) - 你这是坑死人不偿命吗
kiai部分的音效有点混乱我没有看懂，就不评论了（

AIR's Hard

开头的节奏有点古怪，你看00:02:084 - 00:02:987 - 这两处明显有声音你没放note，00:12:009 (2,4) - 这两处没啥音你却放了note
00:45:618 (4,5) - blanket会好看点
01:13:588 - whistle
nice diff

Hatsukoi

这难度名没关系？？
00:59:152 (3) - 可能会挡血条
01:12:686 (1) - Ctrl+G试试
01:21:709 (1) - .......
懒比了就这样好了

然后我的那张图mapset补齐了你可以去摸啦

Karen

2,860 posts

Joined August 2013

Topic Starter

Karen 2014-10-27T15:16:07+00:00

蟆的偷懒打会图怎么这么多mod! stress

zxhzxhz wrote:
[Hatsukoi]
00:02:197 (5) - overmap 故意的.
00:15:618 (6,7) - blanket 这里排列全改了
00:15:618 (6,7,8,1,2) - http://puu.sh/crEMk/317e9cf50d.jpg
8在5下面，滑条轻微调整一下以保持ds，00:17:423 (2) - 也调整一下位置
00:19:904 (5) - 形状调整一下和4一样 k
00:26:445 (3) - 92,175
00:27:348 (6) - 176,256 这两个稍微变了位置
00:29:152 (6,7,1) - 这样的连打最好间距保持在0.9（和00:24:641 (2,3,4,5,6) - 一样）不然感觉很乱的说，前面后面同样的情况就不列举了改了
00:45:393 (6) - nc k
00:29:152 (6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6) - http://puu.sh/crFFS/b2614ab132.jpg 参考了一下改了
00:44:490 (3,1) - 这俩弯的太狠了，稍微改一下 k
00:49:566 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - 强烈建议这些二连改短滑条，不然非常卡手（可能是因为我实力太弱orz） keep
01:03:663 (1) - http://puu.sh/crG5g/aabc3e6e92.jpg k
01:04:340 (3,4,5) - http://puu.sh/crGbA/9a303a7918.jpg keep
01:16:295 (1) - 形状不怎么好看 k
美丽
偷个懒QAQ
祝你图早日rank
柑橘我毁图功力越来越强了(╯‵□′)╯︵┻━┻

r
Thanks for mod~!

truonant wrote:
Hello M4M from your queue.

Sorry for late mod, been really busy! np

00:05:919 (1) –move to x240 y:224 hmm...keep
00:25:769 (1,2,3) - suggestion: http://puu.sh/cs33G/ad03677031.jpg k
00:26:671 (4,5) - suggestion: http://puu.sh/cs36G/151a692aa2.jpg k
00:26:107 (2,3,4,5) - suggestion: http://puu.sh/cs3xP/ead22a8c60.jpg k
00:37:272 (2,3,4,5,6) – make a star pattern shape keep.
Suggestion: http://puu.sh/cs41d/e0d413651c.jpg mostly changed as you
00:40:205 (1,2) – move so slider head stacks on 00:39:754 (3) –
00:39:979 (4) – move to x212 y340
00:40:881 (3) - move to x164 y:156
00:41:107 (4) - stack on 00:40:656 (2) -
00:51:483 – drum sound?
00:52:385 -^ fixed
00:52:836 (1,2,3,4,5) – make star pattern shape changed a bit
01:13:363 (2,3,4,5,6) - ^ k
01:16:972 (3) – hard to read. move around or rotate 01:16:746 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - no change..i think it's not difficult in an insane diff
01:21:032 (6,7) – weird distance kills the flow, space these out more k

00:45:393 (5) - overlap doesn’t look good and bad flow k
01:02:761 (2) – blanket k
01:08:175 (6) - stack k

thanks for mod!

Spring Roll wrote:
听说要在年底前摸完图

Normal
00:09:528 (4) - 我跟你说，在这种长度下，三点式的滑条是最整洁漂亮的滑条之一，还有一种是00:58:250 (1) - 这样的，我建议你把滑条都改一下，现在这样我觉得很乱，如果你说这是你的风格的话倒也没啥问题，不过我觉得这么吐槽你滑条的我应该不是第一个了 hao,你这变态喜欢三点式
00:23:739 (4,5) - 排列不太好看，重叠部分有点多 k
00:34:566 - finish k
00:35:693 - whistle 改成 finish k
00:36:596 - ^
00:45:393 (5) - 节奏古怪，不如改成一个note接一个3/2的滑条 k
01:08:175 (6) - 你这是坑死人不偿命吗 fixed
kiai部分的音效有点混乱我没有看懂，就不评论了（我也看不懂

Hatsukoi
这难度名没关系？？为什么有关系
00:59:152 (3) - 可能会挡血条不挡吧
01:12:686 (1) - Ctrl+G试试 k
01:21:709 (1) - ....... ......（换了一个
懒比了就这样好了懒比了，不给kd了

然后我的那张图mapset补齐了你可以去摸啦年底之前

HabiHolic

5,372 posts

Joined October 2012

HabiHolic 2014-10-31T12:37:00+00:00

modding soon~

Shohei Ohtani

Shohei Ohtani 2014-10-31T18:45:49+00:00

Modding sooner

Overall:
00:57:348 - This is an interesting choice for Kiai. Mostly because there's not really any sort of impact point yet, you're doing the pick-ups to the chorus. And you get that in the preview point, but not in the kiai. You should probably put your kiai where the preview point is (And honestly, put your preview point where the kiai currently is)

Insane:
00:24:641 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - It's cool that you do the whole 0.5x thing for streams, I do that too, but the emphasis on that is that you need a sort of consistency when dealing with that. This is not consistent.
00:45:618 (1) - Remove NC
01:21:709 (1) - This is a pretty odd slider tbh
01:25:769 (2,3) - Really wish this was farther from (1). It's not bad, but it'd be cooler to show the distance and stuff, especially since there's such big jumps after

Hard:
00:01:408 (2) - Wish this was up a little higher so (1) flows straight to it
00:11:333 (1) - If you're going to do this, spread apart the two red points so the curve is more notable.
00:12:235 (3) - Like I feel like you adjusted the spacing for the sake of making things not overlap but they overlapped anyway so uhhh
00:19:453 (2) - This isn't as pretty as you think
00:33:663 (2) - This hitsound is SUPER out of place, especially since the drum beat is on the white tick, not the red tick (I'm not using my headphones, so if I'm a dumbass, then whoops)
00:38:400 (5,6,1) - I feel like this would be better mapped with removing (6), and having (1) be a jump from (5)
00:46:521 (5) - I really hate it when people go into my maps and are like "fix your blanket" because I honestly don't give two fucks about blankets, but. . . this looks desperately like it wants to be blanketed (or at least curved to match the circle). So either adjust that, or blanket it.
00:57:348 - KIAI IS NOT SNAPPED
01:00:054 (6) - If you're gonna do this, the slider should be like, not super wonky like this.
01:01:859 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Why the stacks??
01:10:881 (7) - The slider isn't the issue, it's the repeat. There's lots of cool words here, but you're just like "nah man repeat"

Normal:
00:04:115 (1) - This curve isn't really working all that great.
00:15:393 (2,3,4) - For a normal, it'd be better to have something assist people into getting the 1/4, such as having it within a repeat or something, rather than just expecting them to feel a triplet on the first vocal line. It's fine to do later, but for normal mode, the most important thing you have to do is establish the fact that you have a pattern as easily as possible.
00:28:475 (4) - This looks way too cramped
00:30:280 (3) - ^
00:35:017 (4,5) - This is kind of odd. Maybe have a note in between these 2 so the syncopation makes a little more sense.
00:43:814 (1,2,3) - For normal mode, you generally should try sticking to blue-tick notes being sliders, ESPECIALLY when it's the first in a section. That's because sliders have a bit more leniency, so people will be more successful even if they're not 100% competent in the rhythm.
00:44:716 (4,5) - The direction of the slider wants to go left, but the next note is to the right.
00:47:423 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - THIS. THIS IS HOW YOU DO IT. Gold star, use this for a reference point on how to deal with all the other things.
00:56:896 (3) - Stack might be a bit confusing for normal players.
00:58:250 (1) - Have (4) flow to this rather than just making it an awkward shift.
00:58:250 - DRUM THEORY. CLAPS ON THE FIRST AND THIRD SMALL WHITE TICK (or 2 and 4, if you're looking at it as measures). REMEMBER THAT.
01:29:152 (1,2) - This is now technically unrankable. Normal diffs should have 2 beats of blank space before the next notes.

Easy:
00:07:836 (1) - Stacks may be very confusing for easy players.
01:27:009 (1) - End this at the same time as the other diffs

For as long as my mod post was, I like the map. I'd suggest getting like, 2 more mods, then calling me back.

xxdeathx

2,661 posts

Joined July 2013

xxdeathx 2014-11-01T02:23:22+00:00

M4M hello.

[Easy]

00:06:821 (5,1) - Avoid stacking circles on slider ends. Too hard to see.
00:13:137 (3,4) - Blanket can be improved.
00:45:167 (4,5) - ^

[Normal]

00:01:408 (2,3,4) - This flow is not good because it requires sharp changes in angle between each object. Try to make it smoother:
SPOILER
00:06:596 (4,5) - Try to have the slider point in the same direction as the circle's path to it, or stack the circle and slider head.
00:15:393 (2,3) - You have a lot of 3/4 gaps which should be avoided in Easy/Normals. It's best to use 3/4 repeating sliders wherever they happen, like at 00:15:844 and 00:17:648
00:18:551 (1) - This slider should curve down to flow better from previous object.
00:35:468 (5,6) - Same as 00:06:596 (4,5)
00:41:107 (2,3) - Avoid stacking circles on slider ends. Too hard to see.
00:43:814 (1,2,3) - 00:45:618 (6) - Repeating 3/4 slider works much better than circles or ignoring it.
00:55:543 (2,3) - Same as earlier
00:58:250 (1) - Move this down, below 00:57:348 (4) - to flow better.
01:07:272 (5,6) - Don't stack on slider ends
01:22:611 (5,6,7) - Another 3/4 slider would work better here.
SPOILER
01:26:220 (4) - I think you have an extra slider point at the end.

[Hard]

00:05:919 (4) - You should really extend this slider by 1/2 beat or 1/4 beat + add a circle after to follow the music better.
00:06:821 (5) - This is a hard diff, don't ignore the strong music.
00:45:618 (4,5) - overlap is extremely ugly. I would blanket or at least not overlap them.
00:55:318 (2,3) - stacking a circle on the end of a repeat slider is confusing for inexperienced players to read. It's best to unstack.
01:24:190 (1,2) - ^
01:26:220 (6,7) - Can easily get mistaken for 1/2. Make the slider repeat.

[Insane]

00:08:175 (2,3) - awkward play, should ctrl-g (3)
00:32:423 - this is better as a circle so you can have keypress on the vocal
00:40:543 - ^
00:49:566 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - the rhythm in this area is hard to read. can't tell when something is 1/2 or 3/4. It's best to make sure that the gaps between objects are 1/2 or 1/4, like what you did 01:09:077 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - was good. You should make 00:49:227 (1,5) - sliders:
01:07:272 (1,2,3) - It's better to eliminate the jump between 01:07:272 (1,2) - so you have more emphasis on the 01:07:949 (2,3) - jump.
SPOILER
01:18:099 (1,2,3,4,5) - Ctrl-G these so it flows better from previous object.

Normal and Insane need a lot more work tbh with object placement and design. It means you can arrange the objects better to make the map look and play nicer. Good luck~

Flask

Beatmap Nominator

3,460 posts

Joined July 2011

Flask 2014-11-01T02:28:49+00:00

Artist: sphere

路過留個名 =w= nokd

Fycho

Global Moderator

2,479 posts

Joined August 2012

Fycho 2014-11-01T13:43:51+00:00

Flask wrote:
Artist: sphere

路過留個名 =w= nokd

wiki can't be used as reference as it's not official, please refer to p/3452861

其实这个大小写都无所谓，之前在这个图已经说过一番了，https://osu.ppy.sh/forum/p/3454195
~~既然F将要看的话那我就歇歇了=w=~~

Akatsuki Nagi

53 posts

Joined July 2014

Akatsuki Nagi 2014-11-01T14:53:02+00:00

pipa要飞啦！！！111
我怀疑我已经被暗地里打得不成人形了QAQ

[Hatsukoi]

01:09:415 (3,5) - 不加whistle感觉少了点东西
00:45:957 (2,3) - 这里太近了，打的时候很别扭，建议交换00:46:295 (3,4) - 和00:47:197 (6) - ，同时你可以考虑把00:46:746 (5) - 换个角度【其实我觉得不换更好
00:47:423 (1) - 滑条尾往前一个四分拍，分别在白线加个note感觉比较好，滑条尾的重音总觉得有点不够强烈
SPOILER
00:49:453 - ~00:51:032 - 这里音没下怎么准吧。。开50%听一下重音是在00:49:227 - 、00:49:566 - 、00:49:904 - 、00:50:130 - 、00:50:468 - 、00:51:032 - 几个地方，如果节奏下满应该这么下↓ 当然如果你不打算这么满（虽然我觉得有必要），起码00:49:566 (2,3) - 这个不能落在白线上
SPOILER

[AIR‘s Hard]

我能不能说我没看懂。。不是太了解这个bpm的hard是什么概念orz
看了一遍感觉没啥太值得吐槽的地方=-=

[Normal]

it seems all things are fine XD 【我真不是偷懒啊不要打我

[Easy]

00:06:821 (5,1) - Maybe not stack here
00:13:137 (3,4) - blanket?
01:04:566 (5) - ctrl+shift+r
SPOILER
01:06:370 (2,4) - blanket
01:21:709 (1) - are u sure it isnt outside? move a little left maybe better (and adjust the notes near this)

哥哥啊你快飞了，飞了之后带带我好不好呀T.T
主难度很不错呢，有努力还是有回报哒>w> 虽然我想说不放二连我们还是好朋友
低难度我现在也在愁。。看不太懂实在说不出几个地方来orz
祝好运w

Karen

2,860 posts

Joined August 2013

Topic Starter

Karen 2014-11-01T15:27:06+00:00

CDFA wrote:
Modding sooner

Overall:
00:57:348 - This is an interesting choice for Kiai. Mostly because there's not really any sort of impact point yet, you're doing the pick-ups to the chorus. And you get that in the preview point, but not in the kiai. You should probably put your kiai where the preview point is (And honestly, put your preview point where the kiai currently is) k,changed

Insane:
00:24:641 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - It's cool that you do the whole 0.5x thing for streams, I do that too, but the emphasis on that is that you need a sort of consistency when dealing with that. This is not consistent. changed to 0.5x
00:45:618 (1) - Remove NC fixed
01:21:709 (1) - This is a pretty odd slider tbh changed
01:25:769 (2,3) - Really wish this was farther from (1). It's not bad, but it'd be cooler to show the distance and stuff, especially since there's such big jumps after k

Normal:
00:04:115 (1) - This curve isn't really working all that great. ok.changed.
00:15:393 (2,3,4) - For a normal, it'd be better to have something assist people into getting the 1/4, such as having it within a repeat or something, rather than just expecting them to feel a triplet on the first vocal line. It's fine to do later, but for normal mode, the most important thing you have to do is establish the fact that you have a pattern as easily as possible. k
00:28:475 (4) - This looks way too cramped changed
00:30:280 (3) - ^
00:35:017 (4,5) - This is kind of odd. Maybe have a note in between these 2 so the syncopation makes a little more sense. k,it sounds better.
00:43:814 (1,2,3) - For normal mode, you generally should try sticking to blue-tick notes being sliders, ESPECIALLY when it's the first in a section. That's because sliders have a bit more leniency, so people will be more successful even if they're not 100% competent in the rhythm. changed to a repeat
00:44:716 (4,5) - The direction of the slider wants to go left, but the next note is to the right. k
00:47:423 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - THIS. THIS IS HOW YOU DO IT. Gold star, use this for a reference point on how to deal with all the other things.
00:56:896 (3) - Stack might be a bit confusing for normal players. k
00:58:250 (1) - Have (4) flow to this rather than just making it an awkward shift. k
00:58:250 - DRUM THEORY. CLAPS ON THE FIRST AND THIRD SMALL WHITE TICK (or 2 and 4, if you're looking at it as measures). REMEMBER THAT. hmm,you mean use drum claps on all the objects in kiai?,sry can't understand
01:29:152 (1,2) - This is now technically unrankable. Normal diffs should have 2 beats of blank space before the next notes. fixed

For as long as my mod post was, I like the map. I'd suggest getting like, 2 more mods, then calling me back.

thanks a lot! really helpful.

xxdeathx wrote:
M4M hello.

[Normal]
00:01:408 (2,3,4) - This flow is not good because it requires sharp changes in angle between each object. Try to make it smoother:
SPOILER
00:06:596 (4,5) - Try to have the slider point in the same direction as the circle's path to it, or stack the circle and slider head. k,stack
00:15:393 (2,3) - You have a lot of 3/4 gaps which should be avoided in Easy/Normals. It's best to use 3/4 repeating sliders wherever they happen, like at 00:15:844 and 00:17:648 k
00:18:551 (1) - This slider should curve down to flow better from previous object. k
00:35:468 (5,6) - Same as 00:06:596 (4,5) hmm..changed the slider's direction
00:41:107 (2,3) - Avoid stacking circles on slider ends. Too hard to see. k
00:43:814 (1,2,3) - 00:45:618 (6) - Repeating 3/4 slider works much better than circles or ignoring it. changed this part
00:55:543 (2,3) - Same as earlier fixed
00:58:250 (1) - Move this down, below 00:57:348 (4) - to flow better. moved a little down
01:07:272 (5,6) - Don't stack on slider ends k
01:22:611 (5,6,7) - Another 3/4 slider would work better here. k
SPOILER
01:26:220 (4) - I think you have an extra slider point at the end. fixed

[Insane]
00:08:175 (2,3) - awkward play, should ctrl-g (3) k
00:32:423 - this is better as a circle so you can have keypress on the vocal hmm..can't agree with u on this,i think it's better now
00:40:543 - ^
00:49:566 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - the rhythm in this area is hard to read. can't tell when something is 1/2 or 3/4. It's best to make sure that the gaps between objects are 1/2 or 1/4, like what you did 01:09:077 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - was good. You should make 00:49:227 (1,5) - sliders: changed most of this
01:07:272 (1,2,3) - It's better to eliminate the jump between 01:07:272 (1,2) - so you have more emphasis on the 01:07:949 (2,3) - jump. k
SPOILER
01:18:099 (1,2,3,4,5) - Ctrl-G these so it flows better from previous object. k
Normal and Insane need a lot more work tbh with object placement and design. It means you can arrange the objects better to make the map look and play nicer. Good luck~

Thanks a lot!!!

Nagi awa wrote:
pipa要飞啦！！！111
我怀疑我已经被暗地里打得不成人形了QAQ

[Hatsukoi]

01:09:415 (3,5) - 不加whistle感觉少了点东西 k
00:45:957 (2,3) - 这里太近了，打的时候很别扭，建议交换00:46:295 (3,4) - 和00:47:197 (6) - ，同时你可以考虑把00:46:746 (5) - 换个角度【其实我觉得不换更好改了位置
00:47:423 (1) - 滑条尾往前一个四分拍，分别在白线加个note感觉比较好，滑条尾的重音总觉得有点不够强烈滑条尾为毛要重音，我觉得滑条头重音比较重要
SPOILER
00:49:453 - ~00:51:032 - 这里音没下怎么准吧。。开50%听一下重音是在00:49:227 - 、00:49:566 - 、00:49:904 - 、00:50:130 - 、00:50:468 - 、00:51:032 - 几个地方，如果节奏下满应该这么下↓ 当然如果你不打算这么满（虽然我觉得有必要），起码00:49:566 (2,3) - 这个不能落在白线上这里跟的鼓点，不过这里节奏前面mod提到了我改了
SPOILER
[Normal]

it seems all things are fine XD 【我真不是偷懒啊不要打我必须大四
哥哥啊你快飞了，飞了之后带带我好不好呀T.T
主难度很不错呢，有努力还是有回报哒>w> 虽然我想说不放二连我们还是好朋友
低难度我现在也在愁。。看不太懂实在说不出几个地方来orz
祝好运w

谢mod，射你

Akatsuki Nagi

53 posts

Joined July 2014

Akatsuki Nagi 2014-11-01T15:37:35+00:00

Kagamine Ren wrote:
00:47:423 (1) - 滑条尾往前一个四分拍，分别在白线加个note感觉比较好，滑条尾的重音总觉得有点不够强烈滑条尾为毛要重音，我觉得滑条头重音比较重要
SPOILER

理解错了啦，我是说不应该滑条尾落重音，而实际上这里滑条尾有个重音（更具体其实是蓝线那边），加一个note能对上这里的节奏。test的时候我就感觉挺别扭的=-=

Karen

2,860 posts

Joined August 2013

Topic Starter

Karen 2014-11-01T15:40:47+00:00

Nagi awa wrote:
Kagamine Ren wrote:
00:47:423 (1) - 滑条尾往前一个四分拍，分别在白线加个note感觉比较好，滑条尾的重音总觉得有点不够强烈滑条尾为毛要重音，我觉得滑条头重音比较重要
SPOILER
理解错了啦，我是说不应该滑条尾落重音，而实际上这里滑条尾有个重音（更具体其实是蓝线那边），加一个note能对上这里的节奏。test的时候我就感觉挺别扭的=-=

可能对重音理解不一样...我觉得那个不是重音..

KokoroStudiox3

1,272 posts

Joined April 2011

KokoroStudiox3 2014-11-01T16:30:38+00:00

SPOILER

osu file format v13

[General]
AudioFilename: Future Stream.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 1000
PreviewTime: 57348
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 13147
DistanceSpacing: 1.2
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1.1

[Metadata]
Title:Future Stream
TitleUnicode:Future Stream
Artist:Sphere
ArtistUnicode:スフィア
Creator:Kagamine Ren
Version:Kokoro's Easy
Source:初恋限定。
Tags:eLtigreXXx KokoroStudiox3 AIR opening Hatsukoi Limited Rimiteddo スフィア  kotobuki minako takagaki ayahi tomatsu haruka toyosaki aki 寿美菜子 高垣彩陽 豊崎愛生 戸松遥
BeatmapID:520476
BeatmapSetID:213500

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:2
CircleSize:2
OverallDifficulty:1
ApproachRate:3
SliderMultiplier:0.9
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"RBcNv.jpg",0,0
Video,-103,"op.avi"
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
3,100,163,162,255

[TimingPoints]
506,451.127819548872,4,2,1,40,1,0
13137,-100,4,2,1,30,0,0
14039,-100,4,2,1,25,0,0
14829,-100,4,2,1,50,0,0
35693,-100,4,2,1,30,0,0
36145,-100,4,2,1,45,0,0
36596,-100,4,2,1,30,0,0
37047,-100,4,2,1,50,0,0
42912,-100,4,2,1,20,0,0
43363,-100,4,2,1,30,0,0
50581,-100,4,2,1,35,0,0
51032,-100,4,2,1,40,0,0
54190,-100,4,2,1,30,0,0
54641,-100,4,2,1,40,0,0
57348,-100,4,2,1,15,0,1
57799,-100,4,2,1,40,0,1
58250,-100,4,2,1,50,0,1
71784,-100,4,2,1,30,0,1
72235,-100,4,2,1,50,0,1
79453,-100,4,2,1,30,0,1
79904,-100,4,2,1,50,0,1
89603,-100,4,2,1,15,0,0


[Colours]
Combo1 : 255,0,0
Combo2 : 255,128,255
Combo3 : 255,128,0
Combo4 : 0,128,255

[HitObjects]
256,40,506,6,0,B|348:40|348:40|396:56|416:96,1,180,6|0,0:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
456,184,1859,2,0,P|464:228|456:272,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
360,300,2761,2,0,L|256:300,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
80,156,4115,6,0,P|40:224|80:312,1,180,4|2,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
140,232,5468,1,0,0:0:0:0:
208,308,5919,1,2,0:0:0:0:
272,232,6370,1,0,0:0:0:0:
336,308,6821,2,0,L|392:372,2,67.5,6|6|4,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
112,204,8626,6,0,L|52:132,2,90,0|0|0,0:0|1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
192,148,9979,1,0,1:0:0:0:
268,84,10430,1,0,0:0:0:0:
344,148,10881,1,0,1:0:0:0:
348,248,11333,6,0,P|276:292|192:248,1,180,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
216,156,12686,1,0,1:0:0:0:
164,72,13137,2,0,P|86:34|8:72,1,180,4|6,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
88,132,14490,1,6,0:0:0:0:
88,232,14942,6,0,B|92:276|92:276|64:316,2,90,4|0|0,0:0|1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
176,188,16295,1,0,1:0:0:0:
260,132,16746,2,0,B|256:88|256:88|284:48,2,90,0|0|0,0:0|1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
340,192,18099,1,0,1:0:0:0:
272,260,18551,6,0,P|360:288|424:240,1,180,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
424,140,19904,1,0,1:0:0:0:
328,112,20355,1,0,0:0:0:0:
244,168,20806,1,0,1:0:0:0:
168,224,21257,6,0,B|124:232|84:200|84:200|44:232|0:224,1,180
12,124,22611,1,0,1:0:0:0:
80,52,23062,1,0,0:0:0:0:
152,120,23513,1,0,1:0:0:0:
224,52,23964,6,0,P|272:40|312:52,2,90,0|0|0,0:0|1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
272,140,25318,1,0,1:0:0:0:
216,220,25769,2,0,B|164:292|164:292|120:276|68:296,2,180,4|0|4,0:1|0:0|0:1,0:0:0:0:
272,140,28024,2,0,L|324:52,2,90,0|0|0,1:0|0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
176,160,29378,6,0,P|220:224|316:228,1,180,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
400,176,30731,1,0,1:0:0:0:
452,264,31182,2,0,L|500:348,1,90,0|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
404,372,32084,2,0,L|359:293,1,90,0|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
304,212,32987,6,0,B|192:112|80:212|80:212|24:164,1,315,0|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
140,68,35242,2,0,P|188:60|240:72,1,90,0|4,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
328,76,36145,2,0,P|376:84|428:72,1,90,4|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
408,176,37047,1,0,1:0:0:0:
328,232,37498,5,0,0:0:0:0:
276,316,37949,1,0,1:0:0:0:
175,321,38400,1,2,0:0:0:0:
125,235,38851,1,0,1:0:0:0:
176,152,39302,2,0,P|208:116|220:76,1,90,0|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
120,72,40205,2,0,B|60:88|36:144|36:144|36:224,2,180,0|0|4,0:0|0:0|0:1,0:0:0:0:
360,72,42912,5,4,0:0:0:0:
432,152,43363,1,4,0:0:0:0:
360,232,43814,2,0,P|316:304|224:312,1,180,4|0,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
260,220,45167,1,8,0:0:0:0:
292,128,45618,2,0,P|205:135|159:209,1,180
100,288,46972,1,4,0:1:0:0:
52,200,47423,6,0,L|8:116,2,90,4|0|0,1:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
100,288,48776,1,8,0:0:0:0:
192,328,49227,2,0,B|276:360|276:296|376:332,1,180
464,356,50581,5,4,0:2:0:0:
432,264,51032,2,0,L|384:132,1,90,0|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
308,212,51934,2,0,L|260:80,1,90,0|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
236,40,52836,1,0,0:0:0:0:
152,92,53287,1,0,1:0:0:0:
108,180,53739,1,0,0:0:0:0:
116,280,54190,6,0,P|92:323|56:352,2,90,4|4|0,0:0|2:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
196,336,55543,2,0,P|254:303|340:284,1,135,0|4,0:0|0:1,0:0:0:0:
256,48,57348,1,0,0:0:0:0:
176,108,57799,1,0,0:0:0:0:
228,200,58250,6,0,P|180:268|88:264,1,180,4|0,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
12,208,59603,1,0,1:0:0:0:
16,108,60054,2,0,P|67:38|153:42,1,180
236,100,61408,5,0,1:0:0:0:
316,160,61859,2,0,L|400:216,1,90,0|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
352,300,62761,2,0,L|276:248,1,90,0|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
224,332,63663,2,0,L|148:280,1,90,0|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
60,224,64566,2,0,B|30:189|30:189|39:138,2,90,0|4|0,0:0|0:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
136,164,65919,5,0,1:0:0:0:
236,164,66370,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,76,66821,1,0,1:0:0:0:
300,76,67272,2,0,P|328:108|340:156,1,90,0|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
428,120,68175,2,0,P|440:168|460:204,1,90,0|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
376,256,69077,6,0,B|236:312|236:312|208:300,2,180,0|0|4,0:0|0:0|0:1,0:0:0:0:
192,188,71784,1,4,0:0:0:0:
108,136,72235,1,0,0:0:0:0:
8,124,72686,6,0,B|23:64|80:40|80:40|159:40,1,180,4|0,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
244,44,74039,1,0,1:0:0:0:
336,76,74490,2,0,B|416:116|416:116|444:208,1,180
364,264,75844,5,0,1:0:0:0:
268,236,76295,1,0,0:0:0:0:
208,156,76746,1,0,1:0:0:0:
152,236,77197,2,0,B|128:296|60:304|60:304|60:324,2,135,0|4|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
80,164,79002,5,0,0:0:0:0:
80,64,79453,1,4,0:0:0:0:
176,80,79904,2,0,B|224:104|236:136|236:136|236:236,1,180,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
372,376,81709,6,0,P|492:272|372:160,1,360,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
324,76,83964,2,0,B|208:76|208:76|176:88|156:112,1,180
112,200,85318,6,0,P|148:228|192:236,1,90,0|0,0:0|0:3,0:0:0:0:
288,240,86220,2,0,L|360:240,1,67.5,4|0,0:3|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,86896,12,0,89378,0:0:0:0:

AIR

1,577 posts

Joined November 2012

AIR 2014-11-02T11:13:55+00:00

osu file format v13

[General]
AudioFilename: Future Stream.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 1000
PreviewTime: 57348
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1.1
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1.1

[Metadata]
Title:Future Stream
TitleUnicode:Future Stream
Artist:Sphere
ArtistUnicode:スフィア
Creator:Kagamine Ren
Version:AIR's Hard
Source:初恋限定。
Tags:eLtigreXXx KokoroStudiox3 AIR opening Hatsukoi Limited Rimiteddo スフィア  kotobuki minako takagaki ayahi tomatsu haruka toyosaki aki 寿美菜子 高垣彩陽 豊崎愛生 戸松遥
BeatmapID:520109
BeatmapSetID:213500

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:6
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:6
ApproachRate:7
SliderMultiplier:1.4
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"zMmMp.jpg",0,0
Video,-103,"op.avi"
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
3,100,163,162,255

[TimingPoints]
506,451.127819548872,4,2,1,60,1,0
616,-100,4,2,1,50,0,0
13937,-100,4,2,1,60,0,0
25769,-100,4,2,1,50,0,0
26671,-100,4,2,1,60,0,0
27573,-100,4,2,1,70,0,0
29829,-100,4,2,1,50,0,0
41107,-100,4,2,1,60,0,0
42009,-100,4,2,1,70,0,0
43814,-100,4,2,1,50,0,0
55994,-100,4,2,1,60,0,0
56671,-100,4,2,1,70,0,0
58250,-83.3333333333333,4,2,1,80,0,1
89613,-100,4,2,1,80,0,0


[Colours]
Combo1 : 255,0,0
Combo2 : 255,128,255
Combo3 : 255,128,0
Combo4 : 0,128,255

[HitObjects]
68,284,506,6,0,B|120:280|120:280|152:288|152:288|212:284,1,140,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
336,272,1182,1,0,0:0:0:0:
336,272,1408,2,0,P|388:248|456:296,1,140,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
336,272,2310,2,0,P|344:192|388:136,1,140,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,128,3212,2,0,P|132:104|12:160,1,210,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
17,153,4115,5,8,0:0:0:0:
146,346,4791,1,2,0:0:0:0:
146,346,5017,2,0,B|126:206|126:206|170:266,1,210,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
166,261,5919,2,0,P|220:272|308:248,1,140,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
504,272,6821,2,0,B|448:296|448:296|412:356|412:356|312:340,1,210,10|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
240,324,7724,5,4,0:0:0:0:
256,112,8175,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,232,8626,2,0,B|120:220|120:220|136:224|136:224|208:208,1,140,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
457,196,9528,2,0,P|392:219|324:208,1,140,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
28,92,10430,2,0,L|168:120,1,140,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
308,304,11333,6,0,B|284:308|284:308|192:280|192:280|148:284,1,140,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
8,272,12009,1,2,0:0:0:0:
88,344,12235,2,0,P|116:280|96:208,1,140,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
152,116,12912,1,2,0:0:0:0:
20,79,13137,2,0,B|72:99|72:99|136:103|136:103|152:116,1,140,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
348,64,14039,2,0,L|508:56,2,140,8|8|4,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
372,248,15393,5,2,0:0:0:0:
248,304,15618,1,0,0:0:0:0:
248,304,15844,2,0,P|236:264|252:192,2,105,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
128,284,16746,2,0,L|116:356,1,70,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
24,260,17197,1,0,0:0:0:0:
136,152,17648,2,0,B|192:132|192:132|228:128|228:128|276:112,1,140,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
428,136,18325,1,2,0:0:0:0:
388,64,18551,6,0,P|348:124|376:204,1,140
412,324,19453,2,0,B|352:304|260:316,1,140
76,336,20355,1,0,0:0:0:0:
76,336,20581,2,0,P|110:333|145:327,1,70,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
172,184,21257,1,0,0:0:0:0:
172,184,21483,2,0,L|92:216,1,70,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
20,84,22160,6,0,P|84:96|156:72,1,140,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,40,22836,1,2,0:0:0:0:
358,73,23062,2,0,P|423:95|492:83,1,140
256,192,23964,2,0,B|228:150|163:160|163:160|121:210|152:257,1,210,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,24866,6,0,B|328:184|328:184|352:192|352:192|412:184,1,140
460,88,25543,1,2,0:0:0:0:
460,88,25769,2,0,P|484:144|476:204,2,105,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
360,36,26671,2,0,P|404:44|468:24,2,105,2|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,72,27573,2,0,P|192:60|140:76,2,105,8|8|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
340,144,28475,2,0,B|356:192|356:192|348:236|348:236|364:288,1,140,6|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
386,32,29378,6,0,P|325:64|256:72,1,140,12|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
160,40,30054,1,2,0:0:0:0:
160,40,30280,2,0,P|172:100|160:152,2,105,0|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
80,108,31182,2,0,L|4:124,1,70,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
60,208,31633,2,0,P|43:275|63:341,1,140
156,312,32310,1,2,0:0:0:0:
156,312,32423,2,0,L|272:308,1,105,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
352,332,32987,6,0,P|400:348|496:328,1,140
420,256,33663,2,0,L|408:224,2,35,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
488,180,34115,2,0,B|500:128|500:128|432:52,1,140,2|6,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,96,35017,2,0,L|264:176,1,70,0|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
200,248,35468,1,0,0:0:0:0:
200,248,35693,1,0,0:0:0:0:
112,208,35919,1,2,0:0:0:0:
112,208,36145,2,0,P|100:168|96:136,1,70,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
24,69,36596,6,0,P|95:42|172:69,1,140,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,96,37272,1,2,0:0:0:0:
256,96,37498,2,0,L|328:80,1,70,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
420,36,37949,2,0,L|436:104,1,70,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
488,160,38400,1,0,0:0:0:0:
284,196,38851,6,0,P|361:206|428:172,1,140,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
368,304,39528,1,2,0:0:0:0:
264,320,39754,2,0,P|220:312|180:316,1,70,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
88,348,40205,2,0,P|60:308|60:240,2,105,4|10|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
136,232,41107,2,0,P|140:184|104:124,2,105,2|10|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
32,148,42009,2,0,P|28:100|92:20,1,140,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
292,80,42912,6,0,L|432:68,1,140,12|12,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
480,212,43814,2,0,L|488:336,2,105,12|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
408,184,44716,2,0,P|311:220|212:191,1,210,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
72,176,45618,2,0,P|92:132|152:144,2,105,8|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
200,64,46521,2,0,P|232:132|200:208,1,140,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
128,312,47423,6,0,B|72:332|72:332|16:324,2,105,8|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
276,280,48325,2,0,P|228:280|176:236,2,105,2|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
428,328,49227,2,0,P|375:332|326:350,2,105,8|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
368,244,50130,2,0,P|368:172|408:112,1,140,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
184,60,51032,6,0,B|128:48|128:48|92:56|92:56|24:44,1,140,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
52,222,51934,2,0,B|100:232|100:232|128:220|128:220|188:232,2,140,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
88,140,53062,1,0,0:0:0:0:
88,140,53287,2,0,L|180:132,2,70,0|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,196,54190,1,0,0:0:0:0:
259,266,54415,1,0,0:0:0:0:
264,336,54641,1,8,0:0:0:0:
336,96,55092,5,2,0:0:0:0:
448,140,55318,2,0,L|480:124,2,35,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
448,140,55769,1,2,0:0:0:0:
356,208,55994,1,8,0:0:0:0:
336,96,56220,1,12,0:0:0:0:
116,160,56671,5,8,0:0:0:0:
256,172,56896,1,12,0:0:0:0:
20,100,58250,6,0,P|128:84|188:100,1,167.999994873047,6|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
264,140,58927,1,0,0:0:0:0:
348,108,59152,1,2,0:0:0:0:
484,236,59603,1,8,0:0:0:0:
420,300,59829,1,0,0:0:0:0:
420,300,60054,2,0,B|384:288|384:288|256:312,1,167.999994873047,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
164,320,60731,1,0,0:0:0:0:
72,332,60957,2,0,B|40:288|40:288|24:224|56:176,1,167.999994873047,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
176,40,61859,5,6,0:0:0:0:
260,80,62084,2,0,L|252:132,2,41.9999987182618,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
348,48,62536,1,0,0:0:0:0:
440,64,62761,1,2,0:0:0:0:
440,64,62987,2,0,P|472:128|452:228,1,167.999994873047,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
456,220,63663,2,0,L|368:212,1,83.9999974365235,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
284,240,64115,2,0,L|184:232,1,83.9999974365235,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
108,212,64566,5,2,0:0:0:0:
24,248,64791,1,0,0:0:0:0:
24,248,65017,1,8,0:0:0:0:
132,332,65242,1,0,0:0:0:0:
132,332,65468,2,0,P|156:256|128:160,1,167.999994873047,6|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
64,116,66145,1,0,0:0:0:0:
100,32,66370,1,2,0:0:0:0:
280,80,66821,5,8,0:0:0:0:
372,68,67047,1,0,0:0:0:0:
372,68,67272,2,0,P|412:152|400:232,1,167.999994873047,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
332,280,67949,1,0,0:0:0:0:
420,316,68175,2,0,L|240:336,1,167.999994873047,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
164,312,68851,1,0,0:0:0:0:
164,312,69077,5,6,0:0:0:0:
28,344,69415,1,2,0:0:0:0:
60,208,69754,1,2,0:0:0:0:
60,208,69979,1,2,0:0:0:0:
188,156,70318,1,2,0:0:0:0:
76,72,70656,1,2,0:0:0:0:
76,72,70881,2,0,P|136:48|88:144,1,251.999992309571,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
99,150,71784,6,0,P|148:132|352:160,1,251.999992309571,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
376,240,72686,1,0,0:0:0:0:
452,192,72912,2,0,L|504:204,2,41.9999987182618,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
456,284,73363,1,0,0:0:0:0:
376,240,73588,2,0,P|304:204|208:216,1,167.999994873047,2|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
112,184,74265,1,0,0:0:0:0:
20,172,74490,5,2,0:0:0:0:
56,260,74716,1,0,0:0:0:0:
56,260,74942,2,0,L|60:352,1,83.9999974365235,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
152,336,75393,2,0,L|240:328,1,83.9999974365235,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
328,316,75844,1,8,0:0:0:0:
480,212,76295,6,0,P|492:156|420:60,1,167.999994873047,6|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
344,52,76972,1,0,0:0:0:0:
344,52,77197,1,2,0:0:0:0:
256,76,77423,2,0,L|160:60,1,83.9999974365235,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
173,62,77874,2,0,B|112:32|52:56|52:56|12:128|68:184,1,251.999992309571,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
116,248,78776,1,0,0:0:0:0:
116,248,79002,2,0,L|216:240,1,83.9999974365235,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
292,260,79453,2,0,L|392:252,1,83.9999974365235,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
468,268,79904,5,6,0:0:0:0:
496,180,80130,1,0,0:0:0:0:
496,180,80355,1,8,0:0:0:0:
432,112,80581,1,0,0:0:0:0:
432,112,80806,2,0,P|392:96|264:96,1,167.999994873047,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
176,104,81483,1,0,0:0:0:0:
176,104,81709,5,6,0:0:0:0:
44,140,82047,1,2,0:0:0:0:
84,272,82385,1,2,0:0:0:0:
132,192,82611,1,6,0:0:0:0:
176,324,82949,1,2,0:0:0:0:
40,300,83287,1,2,0:0:0:0:
40,300,83513,2,0,P|132:268|228:288,1,167.999994873047,6|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
336,324,84190,6,0,L|388:336,2,41.9999987182618,0|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
336,324,84641,1,0,0:0:0:0:
432,232,84866,1,8,0:0:0:0:
484,112,85092,1,0,0:0:0:0:
484,112,85318,2,0,B|440:84|384:80|384:80|364:100|364:100|304:80|248:104,1,251.999992309571,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
120,36,86220,2,0,B|132:88|132:88|124:132|124:132|152:180,1,125.999996154785,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
240,228,86896,1,4,0:0:0:0:
256,192,87009,12,4,88701,0:0:0:0:
144,124,89152,5,0,0:0:0:0:
144,280,89378,1,4,0:0:0:0:

~~~

Karen

2,860 posts

Joined August 2013

Topic Starter

Karen 2014-11-02T14:13:17+00:00

All diffs updated

Colourful

80 posts

Joined July 2012

Colourful 2014-11-04T14:43:42+00:00

送一分

OblivioN

OblivioN 2014-11-22T06:33:35+00:00

Hatsukoi

00:09:077 (6,2,4) - 这个点重复的好多……把00:10:205 (2) - 移动到x 292 y 328附近，再把00:10:430 (3) - ctrl g ，这样会好一些
SPOILER
00:14:039 (1,1) - 这两个为什么要nc……？;w;00:14:942 (1) - 这里倒是应该nc……
00:20:355 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 虽然都有音，但是不建议这样stream过去，建议跟一下‘叮叮叮的声音，00:20:355 -和00:20:693 -例如:http://puu.sh/d0yw4/9747a950b2.png或者http://puu.sh/d0yzc/d804039750.png
00:23:964 (1,2,3,4) - 跟vocal吧……http://puu.sh/d0yMC/9de6b5a45f.png，毕竟你00:25:769 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5) - 这里都跟了
00:25:318 (4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6) - 这个排列实在不好看……自己再组合组合
00:28:475 (4) - 可以延长到00:28:814 -
00:29:378 (1,2) - 做成滑条，比较符合这里合唱的感觉【？我tm在说什么】
01:12:235 (5,1) - 这个……那么问题来了，这俩感觉不是特别直怎么办……所以01:12:235 (5,6) - 稍微修一下哇
对比图
整容后：整容前：
01:21:483 (8,1,2) - 不好看……改了吧，虽然说摸图应该提出建议，但是每个人的审美是不一样的:3所以我就不附加排列了。
01:25:769 (2,3) - 呜哇……好狠心啊，01:26:220 (3) - 放这么远，放x200 y 208 和01:24:190 (3) - 这个stack吧

kiai和不是kiai的地方ds几乎都是1.8没有什么区别呢……而且ds太高了对于排列来说就不太好控制。再有的问题就是有点乱用往返slider的感觉，也不是说乱用……就是用了以后让player感觉不舒服，例如00:16:746 (1,2) - 这里就让我觉得有些别扭，slider是个有弹性的东西，希望能加以琢磨和善用，虽然我也是作图弱鸡鸡，但是这一点还是能感觉到的

节奏上有些单调了，几乎都是stream/二分之一slider，可以多仔细听听，很多地方可以根据vocal或者bgm里特殊的音而做出不一样的感觉。排列方面虽然不太理想，需要加一点火候:3，不过还是建议加强物件之间的联系，当然也不要太强求了。附上一张bpm差不多，排列比较好我也炒鸡喜欢的一张图http://osu.ppy.sh/b/167963啊……我自以为是地说了好多…/.\

然后是重点要看的nm

你现在这个nm的确有些悲剧了……
其实做nm很简单:3
就是疯狂无脑flow blanket
我做nm是不太喜欢小部分的overlap的，所以我们要调一个适合的sv和一个适合的ds
对我个人来说，当两个1/1slider正好可以blanket成这样的时候就是合适了

SPOILER

于是我采用的是sv 1.3 ds 1.3
.-.其他的有点难以描述，……我尝试做了几秒钟，你可以看看
但是我不建议完全按我的风格来做，因为每个人都有自己喜欢的柑橘，所以慢慢寻找吧少年:3

code

osu file format v13

[General]
AudioFilename: Future Stream.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 1000
PreviewTime: 57348
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1.3
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1.1

[Metadata]
Title:Future Stream
TitleUnicode:Future Stream
Artist:Sphere
ArtistUnicode:スフィア
Creator:Kagamine Ren
Version:Normal
Source:初恋限定。
Tags:eLtigreXXx KokoroStudiox3 AIR opening Hatsukoi Limited Rimiteddo スフィア  kotobuki minako takagaki ayahi tomatsu haruka toyosaki aki 寿美菜子 高垣彩陽 豊崎愛生 戸松遥
BeatmapID:520110
BeatmapSetID:213500

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:3
CircleSize:3
OverallDifficulty:3
ApproachRate:4
SliderMultiplier:1.3
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
Video,-103,"op.avi"
0,0,"BOXXy.jpg",0,0
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations

[TimingPoints]
506,451.127819548872,4,2,1,50,1,0
14829,-100,4,2,1,60,0,0
42799,-100,4,2,1,50,0,0
57348,-100,4,2,1,80,0,1
89603,-100,4,2,1,80,0,0


[Colours]
Combo1 : 255,0,0
Combo2 : 255,128,255
Combo3 : 255,128,0
Combo4 : 0,128,255

[HitObjects]
72,44,506,2,0,P|88:140|52:232,1,195
32,312,1408,2,0,P|92:332|176:316,1,130
228,280,2084,1,0,0:0:0:0:
228,280,2310,2,0,P|296:272|372:304,1,130
428,332,2987,1,0,0:0:0:0:
428,332,3212,2,0,L|460:192,1,130
456,120,3889,1,0,0:0:0:0:
460,36,4115,2,0,P|376:20|332:36,1,130
296,108,4791,1,0,0:0:0:0:
296,108,5017,2,0,P|220:132|160:96,1,130
108,68,5693,1,0,0:0:0:0:
40,16,5919,2,0,L|60:152,1,130
72,228,6596,1,0,0:0:0:0:
72,312,6821,2,0,P|24:296|-4:256,2,97.5,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
148,276,7724,2,0,P|200:260|276:296,1,130

Hard

音量忽大忽小有点吓人……
前奏几个beat没有跟啊，00:02:084 - 00:02:987 -00:06:596 00:08:400 -00:09:302 -00:10:205 -
00:06:821 (5) - 改成一个3/4折返slider吧
00:23:964 (4) - 3/4折返
01:12:235 -01:25:769 -这两个音做一下

Last edited by OblivioN 2014-11-23T09:53:18+00:00, edited 3 times in total.

Karen

2,860 posts

Joined August 2013

Topic Starter

Karen 2014-11-22T13:08:20+00:00

OblivioN wrote:
Hatsukoi
00:09:077 (6,2,4) - 这个点重复的好多……把00:10:205 (2) - 移动到x 292 y 328附近，再把00:10:430 (3) - ctrl g ，这样会好一些
SPOILER
嗯好
00:14:039 (1,1) - 这两个为什么要nc……？;w;00:14:942 (1) - 这里倒是应该nc…… 重音想NC一下的..还是去掉了
00:20:355 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 虽然都有音，但是不建议这样stream过去，建议跟一下‘叮叮叮的声音，00:20:355 -和00:20:693 -例如:http://puu.sh/d0yw4/9747a950b2.png或者http://puu.sh/d0yzc/d804039750.png 这里弄了两个短滑条
00:23:964 (1,2,3,4) - 跟vocal吧……http://puu.sh/d0yMC/9de6b5a45f.png，毕竟你00:25:769 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5) - 这里都跟了嗯，改了
00:25:318 (4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6) - 这个排列实在不好看……自己再组合组合后面改成长折返了
00:28:475 (4) - 可以延长到00:28:814 - 看了下好像并不合适，keep
00:29:378 (1,2) - 做成滑条，比较符合这里合唱的感觉【？我tm在说什么】 k
01:12:235 (5,1) - 这个……那么问题来了，这俩感觉不是特别直怎么办……所以01:12:235 (5,6) - 稍微修一下哇好的，你这皮肤看的好清楚，我用的默认..不仔细看还看不出来...
对比图
整容后：整容前：
01:21:483 (8,1,2) - 不好看……改了吧，虽然说摸图应该提出建议，但是每个人的审美是不一样的:3所以我就不附加排列了。好的ww
01:25:769 (2,3) - 呜哇……好狠心啊，01:26:220 (3) - 放这么远，放x200 y 208 和01:24:190 (3) - 这个stack吧嗯好.-.
kiai和不是kiai的地方ds几乎都是180没有什么区别呢……而且ds太高了对于排列来说就不太好控制。再有的问题就是有点乱用往返slider的感觉，也不是说乱用……就是用了以后让player感觉不舒服，例如00:16:746 (1,2) - 这里就让我觉得有些别扭，slider是个有弹性的东西，希望能加以琢磨和善用，虽然我也是作图弱鸡鸡，但是这一点还是能感觉到的节奏上有些单调了，几乎都是stream/二分之一slider，可以多仔细听听，很多地方可以根据vocal或者bgm里特殊的音而做出不一样的感觉。排列方面虽然不太理想，需要加一点火候:3，不过还是建议加强物件之间的联系，当然也不要太强求了。附上一张bpm差不多，排列比较好我也炒鸡喜欢的一张图http://osu.ppy.sh/b/167963啊……我自以为是地说了好多…/.\ 唔，排列真是硬伤啊，看了很多很多图自己摆的时候还是不会摆.感觉没救
然后是重点要看的nm
你现在这个nm的确有些悲剧了……
其实做nm很简单:3
就是疯狂无脑flow blanket
我做nm是不太喜欢小部分的overlap的，所以我们要调一个适合的sv和一个适合的ds
对我个人来说，当两个1/1slider正好可以blanket成这样的时候就是合适了
SPOILER
于是我采用的是sv 1.3 ds 1.3
.-.其他的有点难以描述，……我尝试做了几秒钟，你可以看看
但是我不建议完全按我的风格来做，因为每个人都有自己喜欢的柑橘，所以慢慢寻找吧少年:3
code
osu file format v13

[General]
AudioFilename: Future Stream.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 1000
PreviewTime: 57348
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1.3
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1.1

[Metadata]
Title:Future Stream
TitleUnicode:Future Stream
Artist:Sphere
ArtistUnicode:スフィア
Creator:Kagamine Ren
Version:Normal
Source:初恋限定。
Tags:eLtigreXXx KokoroStudiox3 AIR opening Hatsukoi Limited Rimiteddo スフィア  kotobuki minako takagaki ayahi tomatsu haruka toyosaki aki 寿美菜子 高垣彩陽 豊崎愛生 戸松遥
BeatmapID:520110
BeatmapSetID:213500

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:3
CircleSize:3
OverallDifficulty:3
ApproachRate:4
SliderMultiplier:1.3
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
Video,-103,"op.avi"
0,0,"BOXXy.jpg",0,0
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations

[TimingPoints]
506,451.127819548872,4,2,1,50,1,0
14829,-100,4,2,1,60,0,0
42799,-100,4,2,1,50,0,0
57348,-100,4,2,1,80,0,1
89603,-100,4,2,1,80,0,0


[Colours]
Combo1 : 255,0,0
Combo2 : 255,128,255
Combo3 : 255,128,0
Combo4 : 0,128,255

[HitObjects]
72,44,506,2,0,P|88:140|52:232,1,195
32,312,1408,2,0,P|92:332|176:316,1,130
228,280,2084,1,0,0:0:0:0:
228,280,2310,2,0,P|296:272|372:304,1,130
428,332,2987,1,0,0:0:0:0:
428,332,3212,2,0,L|460:192,1,130
456,120,3889,1,0,0:0:0:0:
460,36,4115,2,0,P|376:20|332:36,1,130
296,108,4791,1,0,0:0:0:0:
296,108,5017,2,0,P|220:132|160:96,1,130
108,68,5693,1,0,0:0:0:0:
40,16,5919,2,0,L|60:152,1,130
72,228,6596,1,0,0:0:0:0:
72,312,6821,2,0,P|24:296|-4:256,2,97.5,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
148,276,7724,2,0,P|200:260|276:296,1,130
那个……其他diff等你新的nm出来以后我一起看

谢谢y哥ww，我re完Normal再找你啦ww

Nyark Tolegna

191 posts

Joined December 2013

Nyark Tolegna 2014-11-23T09:06:32+00:00

I was passing by here~

Hard

00:02:084 - 00:02:987 - Need hit circle no ?
00:18:551 (1) - Blanket
00:54:190 (5,6,7) - it would be best to place them perpendicular

Shohei Ohtani

Shohei Ohtani 2014-11-23T18:06:14+00:00

Coming back in

Overall:
00:07:724 - there ARE drums here, so it'd be nice if you added hitsounds to follow that.

Insane:
00:59:152 (3) - Overlaps with HP bar with standard skin
01:05:468 (1,2,3,4) - Maybe do a different combo color for this since it's hard to see with the video

Hard:
00:07:724 - Not sure if the hitsounds here neccesarily follow the music
00:14:942 - pls claps on 2 and 4
00:36:596 (1) - Finish on beginning of slider
00:46:521 (5) - Finish on end of slider?

Normal:
01:27:009 (1) - If I didn't mention this in my last mod, I'm literally retarded. There's no enough space between then end of the spinner and the next note!

Easy:
01:26:896 (1) - Hitsound or something at the end of this?

biggest issue now is just hitsounds being full and complete. The map itself is mostly fine.

Call me back after.

AIR

1,577 posts

Joined November 2012

AIR 2014-11-24T08:07:24+00:00

Hard

音量忽大忽小有点吓人…… 从人群中。。。改了
前奏几个beat没有跟啊，00:02:084 - 00:02:987 -00:06:596 00:08:400 -00:09:302 -00:10:205 - 差不多
00:06:821 (5) - 改成一个3/4折返slider吧唔。。
00:23:964 (4) - 3/4折返改成一拍还比较容易理解
01:12:235 -01:25:769 -这两个音做一下

[Hard]00:02:084 - 00:02:987 - Need hit circle no ?
00:18:551 (1) - Blanket
00:54:190 (5,6,7) - it would be best to place them perpendicular

thanks！

Hard:
00:07:724 - Not sure if the hitsounds here neccesarily follow the music
00:14:942 - pls claps on 2 and 4
00:36:596 (1) - Finish on beginning of slider
00:46:521 (5) - Finish on end of slider?

all fixed

osu file format v13

[General]
AudioFilename: Future Stream.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 1000
PreviewTime: 57348
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1.1
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1.1

[Metadata]
Title:Future Stream
TitleUnicode:Future Stream
Artist:Sphere
ArtistUnicode:スフィア
Creator:Kagamine Ren
Version:AIR's Hard
Source:初恋限定。
Tags:eLtigreXXx KokoroStudiox3 AIR opening Hatsukoi Limited Rimiteddo スフィア  kotobuki minako takagaki ayahi tomatsu haruka toyosaki aki 寿美菜子 高垣彩陽 豊崎愛生 戸松遥
BeatmapID:520109
BeatmapSetID:213500

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:6
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:6
ApproachRate:7
SliderMultiplier:1.4
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
Video,-103,"op.avi"
0,0,"BOXXy.jpg",0,0
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
3,100,163,162,255

[TimingPoints]
506,451.127819548872,4,2,1,60,1,0
506,-100,4,2,1,40,0,0
14039,-100,4,2,1,50,0,0
26671,-100,4,2,1,55,0,0
27573,-100,4,2,1,60,0,0
29829,-100,4,2,1,50,0,0
41107,-100,4,2,1,55,0,0
42009,-100,4,2,1,60,0,0
43814,-100,4,2,1,50,0,0
56671,-100,4,2,1,60,0,0
58250,-83.3333333333333,4,2,1,60,0,1
89603,-83.3333333333333,4,2,1,60,0,0


[Colours]
Combo1 : 241,170,249
Combo2 : 166,255,255
Combo3 : 236,225,96
Combo4 : 255,128,128

[HitObjects]
68,284,506,6,0,B|120:280|120:280|152:288|152:288|212:284,1,140,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
336,272,1182,1,0,0:0:0:0:
336,272,1408,2,0,P|388:248|456:296,1,140,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
336,272,2310,2,0,P|344:192|388:136,1,140,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,128,3212,2,0,P|132:104|12:160,1,210,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
17,153,4115,5,8,0:0:0:0:
146,346,4791,1,2,0:0:0:0:
146,346,5017,2,0,B|126:206|126:206|170:266,1,210,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
166,261,5919,2,0,P|220:272|308:248,1,140,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
504,272,6821,2,0,B|448:296|448:296|412:356|412:356|312:340,1,210,10|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
240,324,7724,5,0,3:0:0:0:
256,112,8175,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,232,8626,2,0,B|120:220|120:220|136:224|136:224|208:208,1,140,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
457,196,9528,2,0,P|392:219|324:208,1,140,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
28,92,10430,2,0,L|168:120,1,140,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
308,304,11333,6,0,B|284:308|284:308|192:280|192:280|148:284,1,140,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
8,272,12009,1,10,0:0:0:0:
88,344,12235,2,0,P|116:280|96:208,1,140,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
152,116,12912,1,10,0:0:0:0:
20,79,13137,2,0,B|72:99|72:99|136:103|136:103|152:116,1,140,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
348,64,14039,2,0,L|508:56,2,140,8|8|4,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
372,248,15393,5,2,0:0:0:0:
248,304,15618,1,0,0:0:0:0:
248,304,15844,2,0,P|236:264|252:192,2,105,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
128,284,16746,2,0,L|116:356,1,70,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
24,260,17197,1,0,0:0:0:0:
136,152,17648,2,0,B|192:132|192:132|228:128|228:128|276:112,1,140,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
428,136,18325,1,2,0:0:0:0:
388,64,18551,6,0,P|348:124|376:204,1,140
412,324,19453,2,0,B|352:304|260:316,1,140
76,336,20355,1,0,0:0:0:0:
76,336,20581,2,0,P|110:333|145:327,1,70,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
172,184,21257,1,0,0:0:0:0:
172,184,21483,2,0,L|92:216,1,70,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
20,84,22160,6,0,P|84:96|156:72,1,140,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,40,22836,1,2,0:0:0:0:
358,73,23062,2,0,P|423:95|492:83,1,140
256,192,23964,2,0,B|228:150|163:160|163:160|121:210|152:257,1,210,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,24866,6,0,B|328:184|328:184|352:192|352:192|412:184,1,140
460,88,25543,1,2,0:0:0:0:
460,88,25769,2,0,P|484:144|476:204,2,105,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
360,36,26671,2,0,P|404:44|468:24,2,105,2|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,72,27573,2,0,P|192:60|140:76,2,105,8|8|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
340,144,28475,2,0,B|356:192|356:192|348:236|348:236|364:288,1,140,6|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
386,32,29378,6,0,P|325:64|256:72,1,140,12|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
160,40,30054,1,2,0:0:0:0:
160,40,30280,2,0,P|172:100|160:152,2,105,0|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
80,108,31182,2,0,L|4:124,1,70,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
60,208,31633,2,0,P|43:275|63:341,1,140
156,312,32310,1,2,0:0:0:0:
156,312,32423,2,0,L|272:308,1,105,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
352,332,32987,6,0,P|400:348|496:328,1,140
420,256,33663,2,0,L|408:224,2,35,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
488,180,34115,2,0,B|500:128|500:128|432:52,1,140,2|6,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,96,35017,2,0,L|264:176,1,70,0|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
200,248,35468,1,0,0:0:0:0:
200,248,35693,1,0,0:0:0:0:
112,208,35919,1,2,0:0:0:0:
112,208,36145,2,0,P|100:168|96:136,1,70,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
24,69,36596,6,0,P|95:42|172:69,1,140,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,96,37272,1,2,0:0:0:0:
256,96,37498,2,0,L|328:80,1,70,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
420,36,37949,2,0,L|436:104,1,70,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
488,160,38400,1,0,0:0:0:0:
284,196,38851,6,0,P|361:206|428:172,1,140,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
368,304,39528,1,2,0:0:0:0:
264,320,39754,2,0,P|220:312|180:316,1,70,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
88,348,40205,2,0,P|60:308|60:240,2,105,4|10|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
136,232,41107,2,0,P|140:184|104:124,2,105,2|10|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
32,148,42009,2,0,P|28:100|92:20,1,140,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
292,80,42912,6,0,L|432:68,1,140,12|12,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
480,212,43814,2,0,L|488:336,2,105,12|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
408,184,44716,2,0,P|311:220|212:191,1,210,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
72,176,45618,2,0,P|92:132|152:144,2,105,8|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
200,64,46521,2,0,P|232:132|200:208,1,140,2|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
128,312,47423,6,0,B|72:332|72:332|16:324,2,105,8|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
276,280,48325,2,0,P|228:280|176:236,2,105,2|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
428,328,49227,2,0,P|375:332|326:350,2,105,8|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
368,244,50130,2,0,P|368:172|408:112,1,140,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
184,60,51032,6,0,B|128:48|128:48|92:56|92:56|24:44,1,140,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
52,222,51934,2,0,B|100:232|100:232|128:220|128:220|188:232,2,140,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
88,140,53062,1,0,0:0:0:0:
88,140,53287,2,0,L|180:132,2,70,0|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,196,54190,1,0,0:0:0:0:
259,266,54415,1,0,0:0:0:0:
264,336,54641,1,8,0:0:0:0:
336,96,55092,5,2,0:0:0:0:
448,140,55318,2,0,L|480:124,2,35,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
448,140,55769,1,2,0:0:0:0:
356,208,55994,1,8,0:0:0:0:
336,96,56220,1,12,0:0:0:0:
116,160,56671,5,8,0:0:0:0:
256,172,56896,1,12,0:0:0:0:
20,100,58250,6,0,P|128:84|188:100,1,167.999994873047,6|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
264,140,58927,1,0,0:0:0:0:
348,108,59152,1,2,0:0:0:0:
484,236,59603,1,8,0:0:0:0:
420,300,59829,1,0,0:0:0:0:
420,300,60054,2,0,B|384:288|384:288|256:312,1,167.999994873047,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
164,320,60731,1,0,0:0:0:0:
72,332,60957,2,0,B|40:288|40:288|24:224|56:176,1,167.999994873047,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
176,40,61859,5,6,0:0:0:0:
260,80,62084,2,0,L|252:132,2,41.9999987182618,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
348,48,62536,1,0,0:0:0:0:
440,64,62761,1,2,0:0:0:0:
440,64,62987,2,0,P|472:128|452:228,1,167.999994873047,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
456,220,63663,2,0,L|368:212,1,83.9999974365235,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
284,240,64115,2,0,L|184:232,1,83.9999974365235,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
108,212,64566,5,2,0:0:0:0:
24,248,64791,1,0,0:0:0:0:
24,248,65017,1,8,0:0:0:0:
132,332,65242,1,0,0:0:0:0:
132,332,65468,2,0,P|156:256|128:160,1,167.999994873047,6|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
64,116,66145,1,0,0:0:0:0:
100,32,66370,1,2,0:0:0:0:
280,80,66821,5,8,0:0:0:0:
372,68,67047,1,0,0:0:0:0:
372,68,67272,2,0,P|412:152|400:232,1,167.999994873047,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
332,280,67949,1,0,0:0:0:0:
420,316,68175,2,0,L|240:336,1,167.999994873047,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
164,312,68851,1,0,0:0:0:0:
164,312,69077,5,6,0:0:0:0:
28,344,69415,1,2,0:0:0:0:
60,208,69754,1,2,0:0:0:0:
60,208,69979,1,2,0:0:0:0:
188,156,70318,1,2,0:0:0:0:
76,72,70656,1,2,0:0:0:0:
76,72,70881,2,0,P|136:48|88:144,1,251.999992309571,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
99,150,71784,6,0,P|148:132|352:160,1,251.999992309571,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
376,240,72686,1,0,0:0:0:0:
452,192,72912,2,0,L|504:204,2,41.9999987182618,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
456,284,73363,1,0,0:0:0:0:
376,240,73588,2,0,P|304:204|208:216,1,167.999994873047,2|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
112,184,74265,1,0,0:0:0:0:
20,172,74490,5,2,0:0:0:0:
56,260,74716,1,0,0:0:0:0:
56,260,74942,2,0,L|60:352,1,83.9999974365235,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
152,336,75393,2,0,L|240:328,1,83.9999974365235,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
328,316,75844,1,8,0:0:0:0:
480,212,76295,6,0,P|492:156|420:60,1,167.999994873047,6|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
344,52,76972,1,0,0:0:0:0:
344,52,77197,1,2,0:0:0:0:
256,76,77423,2,0,L|160:60,1,83.9999974365235,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
173,62,77874,2,0,B|112:32|52:56|52:56|12:128|68:184,1,251.999992309571,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
116,248,78776,1,0,0:0:0:0:
116,248,79002,2,0,L|216:240,1,83.9999974365235,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
292,260,79453,2,0,L|392:252,1,83.9999974365235,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
468,268,79904,5,6,0:0:0:0:
496,180,80130,1,0,0:0:0:0:
496,180,80355,1,8,0:0:0:0:
432,112,80581,1,0,0:0:0:0:
432,112,80806,2,0,P|392:96|264:96,1,167.999994873047,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
176,104,81483,1,0,0:0:0:0:
176,104,81709,5,6,0:0:0:0:
44,140,82047,1,2,0:0:0:0:
84,272,82385,1,2,0:0:0:0:
132,192,82611,1,6,0:0:0:0:
176,324,82949,1,2,0:0:0:0:
40,300,83287,1,2,0:0:0:0:
40,300,83513,2,0,P|132:268|228:288,1,167.999994873047,6|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
336,324,84190,6,0,L|388:336,2,41.9999987182618,0|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
336,324,84641,1,0,0:0:0:0:
432,232,84866,1,8,0:0:0:0:
484,112,85092,1,0,0:0:0:0:
484,112,85318,2,0,B|440:84|384:80|384:80|364:100|364:100|304:80|248:104,1,251.999992309571,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
120,36,86220,2,0,B|132:88|132:88|124:132|124:132|152:180,1,125.999996154785,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
240,228,86896,1,4,0:0:0:0:
256,192,87009,12,4,88701,0:0:0:0:
144,124,89152,5,0,0:0:0:0:
144,280,89378,1,4,0:0:0:0:

Karen

2,860 posts

Joined August 2013

Topic Starter

Karen 2014-11-26T10:20:49+00:00

all updated!

Shohei Ohtani

Shohei Ohtani 2014-11-26T23:18:44+00:00

my kudosu

One more thing:

Normal:
01:27:009 (1) - You put the hitsound in the easy but not the normal ;ww;!! pls finish boomtiy boom

Shohei Ohtani

Shohei Ohtani 2014-11-27T19:16:33+00:00

uguu

Karen

2,860 posts

Joined August 2013

Topic Starter

Karen 2014-11-28T00:01:35+00:00

CDFA wrote:
uguu

thanks!

AIR

1,577 posts

Joined November 2012

AIR 2014-11-28T07:24:49+00:00

飞腊

DakeDekaane

osu! Alumni

3,500 posts

Joined February 2012

DakeDekaane 2014-11-29T04:14:35+00:00

ヽ(´□｀。)ﾉ

Artist should be "sphere", not "Sphere"
http://www.planet-sphere.jp/main.php

Also, no Hatsukoi/sphere BG?

Didn't plan to check it but I feel bad by just throwing some random post, lol

[

Easy]
I have no complains here.

[

Normal]
00:06:821 (3) - This blanket could be slightly better.
00:08:626 (3) - ^
00:14:942 (1) - So we have this slider going up and the next slider is in the bottom, not a big deal, but could this slider (1) have the end going down?
00:32:084 (6) - This blanketting (7) would be cool.
00:40:205 (1) - This tiny overlap can be easily avoided. Example: http://puu.sh/d9DLx.png
01:17:423 (3,4) - This really feels weird while playing, as we have the strong vocals, then suddenly you go for the instrumental, it'd be nice to have something like you did in 01:02:987 (3,4) -

[

Hard]
00:34:340 - This beat feels empty with nothing on it, make 00:34:115 (3) - a 1/2 slider with a reverse?
01:12:235 - Something similar about this.
01:25:769 - ^

[

Insane]
00:06:821 (5,6,7,1) - The spacing here is really misleading, as the four notes aren't the same in time, but have a very similar spacing, and the spacing in 00:06:370 (2,3) - is very similar to 00:06:821 (5,6) - , despite being different in time too try using a smaller spacing in 00:07:498 (7,1) - and in 00:06:370 (2,3) -
00:14:490 (10,11) - I don't think this jump fits nicely there, as the next note has not a big impact to deserve it.
00:43:588 (9,1,2,3) - Same issue about misleading 3/4 spacings.
01:25:769 (2) - I'd suggest to use a 1/2 slider for this, I know the intention, but by 1/2 slider you'd have a small pause which would emphasize vocals nicely.

That'd be all, I guess.

Fycho

Global Moderator

2,479 posts

Joined August 2012

Fycho 2014-11-29T05:18:08+00:00

okay, artist again:

according to the official site: http://planet-sphere.jp/main.php
some screenshots:

SPOILER

referring to this p/3455523 (it was not disqualified again, cuz it doesn't worth that, but not mean it's good, right?)

"sphere" only appears in picture not text.
in other words, both fine but we prefer Sphere more.

Karen

2,860 posts

Joined August 2013

Topic Starter

Karen 2014-11-29T06:07:22+00:00

DakeDekaane wrote:
ヽ(´□｀。)ﾉ

Artist should be "sphere", not "Sphere" As fycho said, 'Sphere' has no problem here
http://www.planet-sphere.jp/main.php

Also, no Hatsukoi/sphere BG? i can't find a nice BG which related to this song for this map.and,i think it's not a big issue,if you can find one,ok,i will change it

Didn't plan to check it but I feel bad by just throwing some random post, lol

[ Easy]
I have no complains here.

[ Normal]
00:06:821 (3) - This blanket could be slightly better.
00:08:626 (3) - ^
00:14:942 (1) - So we have this slider going up and the next slider is in the bottom, not a big deal, but could this slider (1) have the end going down?
00:32:084 (6) - This blanketting (7) would be cool.
00:40:205 (1) - This tiny overlap can be easily avoided. Example: http://puu.sh/d9DLx.png
01:17:423 (3,4) - This really feels weird while playing, as we have the strong vocals, then suddenly you go for the instrumental, it'd be nice to have something like you did in 01:02:987 (3,4) -

[ Insane]
00:06:821 (5,6,7,1) - The spacing here is really misleading, as the four notes aren't the same in time, but have a very similar spacing, and the spacing in 00:06:370 (2,3) - is very similar to 00:06:821 (5,6) - , despite being different in time too try using a smaller spacing in 00:07:498 (7,1) - and in 00:06:370 (2,3) -
00:14:490 (10,11) - I don't think this jump fits nicely there, as the next note has not a big impact to deserve it.
00:43:588 (9,1,2,3) - Same issue about misleading 3/4 spacings.
01:25:769 (2) - I'd suggest to use a 1/2 slider for this, I know the intention, but by 1/2 slider you'd have a small pause which would emphasize vocals nicely.

That'd be all, I guess.

my part all fixed,thanks!

KokoroStudiox3

1,272 posts

Joined April 2011

KokoroStudiox3 2014-11-29T06:56:15+00:00

:C

Shohei Ohtani

Shohei Ohtani 2014-11-29T19:56:12+00:00

Man I'm gonna need some industrial bubbles or something with how much they get popped

AIR

1,577 posts

Joined November 2012

AIR 2014-11-30T12:19:32+00:00

osu file format v13

[General]
AudioFilename: Future Stream.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 1000
PreviewTime: 57348
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1.1
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1.1

[Metadata]
Title:Future Stream
TitleUnicode:Future Stream
Artist:Sphere
ArtistUnicode:スフィア
Creator:Kagamine Ren
Version:AIR's Hard
Source:初恋限定。
Tags:eLtigreXXx KokoroStudiox3 AIR opening Hatsukoi Limited Rimiteddo スフィア  kotobuki minako takagaki ayahi tomatsu haruka toyosaki aki 寿美菜子 高垣彩陽 豊崎愛生 戸松遥
BeatmapID:520109
BeatmapSetID:213500

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:6
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:6
ApproachRate:7
SliderMultiplier:1.4
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
Video,-103,"op.avi"
0,0,"BOXXy.jpg",0,0
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
3,100,163,162,255

[TimingPoints]
506,451.127819548872,4,2,1,60,1,0
506,-100,4,2,1,40,0,0
14039,-100,4,2,1,50,0,0
26671,-100,4,2,1,55,0,0
27573,-100,4,2,1,60,0,0
29829,-100,4,2,1,50,0,0
41107,-100,4,2,1,55,0,0
42009,-100,4,2,1,60,0,0
43814,-100,4,2,1,50,0,0
56671,-100,4,2,1,60,0,0
58250,-83.3333333333333,4,2,1,60,0,1
89603,-83.3333333333333,4,2,1,60,0,0


[Colours]
Combo1 : 241,170,249
Combo2 : 166,255,255
Combo3 : 236,225,96
Combo4 : 255,128,128

[HitObjects]
68,284,506,6,0,B|120:280|120:280|152:288|152:288|212:284,1,140,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
336,272,1182,1,0,0:0:0:0:
336,272,1408,2,0,P|388:248|456:296,1,140,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
336,272,2310,2,0,P|344:192|388:136,1,140,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,128,3212,2,0,P|132:104|12:160,1,210,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
17,153,4115,5,8,0:0:0:0:
146,346,4791,1,2,0:0:0:0:
146,346,5017,2,0,B|126:206|126:206|170:266,1,210,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
166,261,5919,2,0,P|220:272|308:248,1,140,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
504,272,6821,2,0,B|448:296|448:296|412:356|412:356|312:340,1,210,10|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
240,324,7724,5,0,3:0:0:0:
256,112,8175,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,232,8626,2,0,B|120:220|120:220|136:224|136:224|208:208,1,140,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
457,196,9528,2,0,P|392:219|324:208,1,140,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
28,92,10430,2,0,L|168:120,1,140,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
308,304,11333,6,0,B|284:308|284:308|192:280|192:280|148:284,1,140,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
8,272,12009,1,10,0:0:0:0:
88,344,12235,2,0,P|116:280|96:208,1,140,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
152,116,12912,1,10,0:0:0:0:
20,79,13137,2,0,B|72:99|72:99|136:103|136:103|152:116,1,140,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
348,64,14039,2,0,L|508:56,2,140,8|8|4,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
372,248,15393,5,2,0:0:0:0:
248,304,15618,1,0,0:0:0:0:
248,304,15844,2,0,P|236:264|252:192,2,105,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
128,284,16746,2,0,L|116:356,1,70,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
24,260,17197,1,0,0:0:0:0:
136,152,17648,2,0,B|192:132|192:132|228:128|228:128|276:112,1,140,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
428,136,18325,1,2,0:0:0:0:
388,64,18551,6,0,P|348:124|376:204,1,140
412,324,19453,2,0,B|352:304|260:316,1,140
76,336,20355,1,0,0:0:0:0:
76,336,20581,2,0,P|110:333|145:327,1,70,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
172,184,21257,1,0,0:0:0:0:
172,184,21483,2,0,L|92:216,1,70,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
20,84,22160,6,0,P|84:96|156:72,1,140,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,40,22836,1,2,0:0:0:0:
358,73,23062,2,0,P|423:95|492:83,1,140
256,192,23964,2,0,B|228:150|163:160|163:160|121:210|152:257,1,210,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,24866,6,0,B|328:184|328:184|352:192|352:192|412:184,1,140
460,88,25543,1,2,0:0:0:0:
460,88,25769,2,0,P|484:144|476:204,2,105,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
360,36,26671,2,0,P|404:44|468:24,2,105,2|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,72,27573,2,0,P|192:60|140:76,2,105,8|8|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
340,144,28475,2,0,B|356:192|356:192|348:236|348:236|364:288,1,140,6|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
386,32,29378,6,0,P|325:64|256:72,1,140,12|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
160,40,30054,1,2,0:0:0:0:
160,40,30280,2,0,P|172:100|160:152,2,105,0|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
80,108,31182,2,0,L|4:124,1,70,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
60,208,31633,2,0,P|43:275|63:341,1,140
156,312,32310,1,2,0:0:0:0:
156,312,32423,2,0,L|272:308,1,105,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
352,332,32987,6,0,P|400:348|496:328,1,140
420,256,33663,2,0,L|408:224,2,35,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
496,184,34115,1,2,0:0:0:0:
496,184,34340,2,0,L|428:140,1,70,0|6,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,96,35017,2,0,L|264:176,1,70,0|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
200,248,35468,1,0,0:0:0:0:
200,248,35693,1,0,0:0:0:0:
112,208,35919,1,2,0:0:0:0:
112,208,36145,2,0,P|100:168|96:136,1,70,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
24,69,36596,6,0,P|95:42|172:69,1,140,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,96,37272,1,2,0:0:0:0:
256,96,37498,2,0,L|328:80,1,70,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
420,36,37949,2,0,L|436:104,1,70,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
488,160,38400,1,0,0:0:0:0:
284,196,38851,6,0,P|361:206|428:172,1,140,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
368,304,39528,1,2,0:0:0:0:
264,320,39754,2,0,P|220:312|180:316,1,70,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
88,348,40205,2,0,P|60:308|60:240,2,105,4|10|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
136,232,41107,2,0,P|140:184|104:124,2,105,2|10|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
32,148,42009,2,0,P|28:100|92:20,1,140,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
292,80,42912,6,0,L|432:68,1,140,12|12,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
480,212,43814,2,0,L|488:336,2,105,12|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
408,184,44716,2,0,P|311:220|212:191,1,210,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
72,176,45618,2,0,P|92:132|152:144,2,105,8|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
200,64,46521,2,0,P|232:132|200:208,1,140,2|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
128,312,47423,6,0,B|72:332|72:332|16:324,2,105,8|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
276,280,48325,2,0,P|228:280|176:236,2,105,2|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
428,328,49227,2,0,P|375:332|326:350,2,105,8|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
368,244,50130,2,0,P|368:172|408:112,1,140,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
184,60,51032,6,0,B|128:48|128:48|92:56|92:56|24:44,1,140,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
52,222,51934,2,0,B|100:232|100:232|128:220|128:220|188:232,2,140,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
88,140,53062,1,0,0:0:0:0:
88,140,53287,2,0,L|180:132,2,70,0|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,196,54190,1,0,0:0:0:0:
259,266,54415,1,0,0:0:0:0:
264,336,54641,1,8,0:0:0:0:
336,96,55092,5,2,0:0:0:0:
448,140,55318,2,0,L|480:124,2,35,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
448,140,55769,1,2,0:0:0:0:
356,208,55994,1,8,0:0:0:0:
336,96,56220,1,12,0:0:0:0:
116,160,56671,5,8,0:0:0:0:
256,172,56896,1,12,0:0:0:0:
20,100,58250,6,0,P|128:84|188:100,1,167.999994873047,6|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
264,140,58927,1,0,0:0:0:0:
348,108,59152,1,2,0:0:0:0:
484,236,59603,1,8,0:0:0:0:
420,300,59829,1,0,0:0:0:0:
420,300,60054,2,0,B|384:288|384:288|256:312,1,167.999994873047,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
164,320,60731,1,0,0:0:0:0:
72,332,60957,2,0,B|40:288|40:288|24:224|56:176,1,167.999994873047,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
176,40,61859,5,6,0:0:0:0:
260,80,62084,2,0,L|252:132,2,41.9999987182618,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
348,48,62536,1,0,0:0:0:0:
440,64,62761,1,2,0:0:0:0:
440,64,62987,2,0,P|472:128|452:228,1,167.999994873047,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
456,220,63663,2,0,L|368:212,1,83.9999974365235,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
284,240,64115,2,0,L|184:232,1,83.9999974365235,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
108,212,64566,5,2,0:0:0:0:
24,248,64791,1,0,0:0:0:0:
24,248,65017,1,8,0:0:0:0:
132,332,65242,1,0,0:0:0:0:
132,332,65468,2,0,P|156:256|128:160,1,167.999994873047,6|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
64,116,66145,1,0,0:0:0:0:
100,32,66370,1,2,0:0:0:0:
280,80,66821,5,8,0:0:0:0:
372,68,67047,1,0,0:0:0:0:
372,68,67272,2,0,P|412:152|400:232,1,167.999994873047,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
332,280,67949,1,0,0:0:0:0:
420,316,68175,2,0,L|240:336,1,167.999994873047,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
164,312,68851,1,0,0:0:0:0:
164,312,69077,5,6,0:0:0:0:
28,344,69415,1,2,0:0:0:0:
60,208,69754,1,2,0:0:0:0:
60,208,69979,1,2,0:0:0:0:
188,156,70318,1,2,0:0:0:0:
76,72,70656,1,2,0:0:0:0:
76,72,70881,2,0,P|136:48|88:144,1,251.999992309571,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
99,150,71784,6,0,P|148:132|268:144,1,167.999994873047,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
336,196,72460,1,0,0:0:0:0:
396,264,72686,1,0,0:0:0:0:
452,192,72912,2,0,L|504:204,2,41.9999987182618,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
456,284,73363,1,0,0:0:0:0:
376,240,73588,2,0,P|304:204|208:216,1,167.999994873047,2|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
112,184,74265,1,0,0:0:0:0:
20,172,74490,5,2,0:0:0:0:
56,260,74716,1,0,0:0:0:0:
56,260,74942,2,0,L|60:352,1,83.9999974365235,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
152,336,75393,2,0,L|240:328,1,83.9999974365235,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
328,316,75844,1,8,0:0:0:0:
480,212,76295,6,0,P|492:156|420:60,1,167.999994873047,6|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
344,52,76972,1,0,0:0:0:0:
344,52,77197,1,2,0:0:0:0:
256,76,77423,2,0,L|160:60,1,83.9999974365235,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
173,62,77874,2,0,B|112:32|52:56|52:56|12:128|68:184,1,251.999992309571,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
116,248,78776,1,0,0:0:0:0:
116,248,79002,2,0,L|216:240,1,83.9999974365235,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
292,260,79453,2,0,L|392:252,1,83.9999974365235,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
468,268,79904,5,6,0:0:0:0:
496,180,80130,1,0,0:0:0:0:
496,180,80355,1,8,0:0:0:0:
432,112,80581,1,0,0:0:0:0:
432,112,80806,2,0,P|392:96|264:96,1,167.999994873047,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
176,104,81483,1,0,0:0:0:0:
176,104,81709,5,6,0:0:0:0:
44,140,82047,1,2,0:0:0:0:
84,272,82385,1,2,0:0:0:0:
132,192,82611,1,6,0:0:0:0:
176,324,82949,1,2,0:0:0:0:
40,300,83287,1,2,0:0:0:0:
40,300,83513,2,0,P|132:268|228:288,1,167.999994873047,6|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
336,324,84190,6,0,L|388:336,2,41.9999987182618,0|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
336,324,84641,1,0,0:0:0:0:
432,232,84866,1,8,0:0:0:0:
484,112,85092,1,0,0:0:0:0:
484,112,85318,2,0,B|432:96|432:96|364:100|364:100|316:92,1,167.999994873047,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
140,44,86220,2,0,B|152:96|152:96|144:140|144:140|172:188,1,125.999996154785,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
240,228,86896,1,4,0:0:0:0:
256,192,87009,12,4,88701,0:0:0:0:
144,124,89152,5,0,0:0:0:0:
144,280,89378,1,4,0:0:0:0:

all fixed

Karen

2,860 posts

Joined August 2013

Topic Starter

Karen 2014-11-30T14:18:44+00:00

ok
all updated!

DakeDekaane

osu! Alumni

3,500 posts

Joined February 2012

DakeDekaane 2014-12-02T03:56:12+00:00

First of all, I apologize for rushing a bubble pop. As both are correct, artist can stay for consistency with the other ranked versions of this song.
About the BG, eh, I haven't watched the show so I can't help much here and not going to be picky about this.

Just a few stuff I'd want to say before rebubble.

[Normal]
00:14:942 (1) - Rotate this 20° anti-clockwise, so it leads better to the next slider
00:40:205 (1) - I think you're missing a whistle here.
01:17:423 (3) - Remove the finish in the end and add it in the beginning of 01:17:874 (4) - also, you could try moving a bit the long slider because the way it leads next note is a bit bad.

SPOILER

[Hard]
01:12:235 (1) - A finish in the end would be nice.
01:25:769 - ^ Same here, add the whistle like in the previous slider too.

[Insane]
00:14:716 (11) - You could try removing this note to keep clean the strongest beats here.

Don't kudosu this post, poke me back.

AIR

1,577 posts

Joined November 2012

AIR 2014-12-02T04:06:52+00:00

osu file format v13

[General]
AudioFilename: Future Stream.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 1000
PreviewTime: 57348
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1.1
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1.1

[Metadata]
Title:Future Stream
TitleUnicode:Future Stream
Artist:Sphere
ArtistUnicode:スフィア
Creator:Kagamine Ren
Version:AIR's Hard
Source:初恋限定。
Tags:eLtigreXXx KokoroStudiox3 AIR opening Hatsukoi Limited Rimiteddo スフィア  kotobuki minako takagaki ayahi tomatsu haruka toyosaki aki 寿美菜子 高垣彩陽 豊崎愛生 戸松遥
BeatmapID:520109
BeatmapSetID:213500

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:6
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:6
ApproachRate:7
SliderMultiplier:1.4
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
Video,-103,"op.avi"
0,0,"BOXXy.jpg",0,0
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
3,100,163,162,255

[TimingPoints]
506,451.127819548872,4,2,1,60,1,0
506,-100,4,2,1,40,0,0
14039,-100,4,2,1,50,0,0
26671,-100,4,2,1,55,0,0
27573,-100,4,2,1,60,0,0
29829,-100,4,2,1,50,0,0
41107,-100,4,2,1,55,0,0
42009,-100,4,2,1,60,0,0
43814,-100,4,2,1,50,0,0
56671,-100,4,2,1,60,0,0
58250,-83.3333333333333,4,2,1,60,0,1
89603,-83.3333333333333,4,2,1,60,0,0


[Colours]
Combo1 : 241,170,249
Combo2 : 166,255,255
Combo3 : 236,225,96
Combo4 : 255,128,128

[HitObjects]
68,284,506,6,0,B|120:280|120:280|152:288|152:288|212:284,1,140,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
336,272,1182,1,0,0:0:0:0:
336,272,1408,2,0,P|388:248|456:296,1,140,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
336,272,2310,2,0,P|344:192|388:136,1,140,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,128,3212,2,0,P|132:104|12:160,1,210,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
17,153,4115,5,8,0:0:0:0:
146,346,4791,1,2,0:0:0:0:
146,346,5017,2,0,B|126:206|126:206|170:266,1,210,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
166,261,5919,2,0,P|220:272|308:248,1,140,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
504,272,6821,2,0,B|448:296|448:296|412:356|412:356|312:340,1,210,10|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
240,324,7724,5,0,3:0:0:0:
256,112,8175,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,232,8626,2,0,B|120:220|120:220|136:224|136:224|208:208,1,140,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
457,196,9528,2,0,P|392:219|324:208,1,140,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
28,92,10430,2,0,L|168:120,1,140,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
308,304,11333,6,0,B|284:308|284:308|192:280|192:280|148:284,1,140,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
8,272,12009,1,10,0:0:0:0:
88,344,12235,2,0,P|116:280|96:208,1,140,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
152,116,12912,1,10,0:0:0:0:
20,79,13137,2,0,B|72:99|72:99|136:103|136:103|152:116,1,140,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
348,64,14039,2,0,L|508:56,2,140,8|8|4,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
372,248,15393,5,2,0:0:0:0:
248,304,15618,1,0,0:0:0:0:
248,304,15844,2,0,P|236:264|252:192,2,105,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
128,284,16746,2,0,L|116:356,1,70,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
24,260,17197,1,0,0:0:0:0:
136,152,17648,2,0,B|192:132|192:132|228:128|228:128|276:112,1,140,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
428,136,18325,1,2,0:0:0:0:
388,64,18551,6,0,P|348:124|376:204,1,140
412,324,19453,2,0,B|352:304|260:316,1,140
76,336,20355,1,0,0:0:0:0:
76,336,20581,2,0,P|110:333|145:327,1,70,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
172,184,21257,1,0,0:0:0:0:
172,184,21483,2,0,L|92:216,1,70,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
20,84,22160,6,0,P|84:96|156:72,1,140,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,40,22836,1,2,0:0:0:0:
358,73,23062,2,0,P|423:95|492:83,1,140
256,192,23964,2,0,B|228:150|163:160|163:160|121:210|152:257,1,210,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,24866,6,0,B|328:184|328:184|352:192|352:192|412:184,1,140
460,88,25543,1,2,0:0:0:0:
460,88,25769,2,0,P|484:144|476:204,2,105,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
360,36,26671,2,0,P|404:44|468:24,2,105,2|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,72,27573,2,0,P|192:60|140:76,2,105,8|8|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
340,144,28475,2,0,B|356:192|356:192|348:236|348:236|364:288,1,140,6|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
386,32,29378,6,0,P|325:64|256:72,1,140,12|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
160,40,30054,1,2,0:0:0:0:
160,40,30280,2,0,P|172:100|160:152,2,105,0|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
80,108,31182,2,0,L|4:124,1,70,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
60,208,31633,2,0,P|43:275|63:341,1,140
156,312,32310,1,2,0:0:0:0:
156,312,32423,2,0,L|272:308,1,105,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
352,332,32987,6,0,P|400:348|496:328,1,140
420,256,33663,2,0,L|408:224,2,35,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
496,184,34115,1,2,0:0:0:0:
496,184,34340,2,0,L|428:140,1,70,0|6,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,96,35017,2,0,L|264:176,1,70,0|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
200,248,35468,1,0,0:0:0:0:
200,248,35693,1,0,0:0:0:0:
112,208,35919,1,2,0:0:0:0:
112,208,36145,2,0,P|100:168|96:136,1,70,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
24,69,36596,6,0,P|95:42|172:69,1,140,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,96,37272,1,2,0:0:0:0:
256,96,37498,2,0,L|328:80,1,70,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
420,36,37949,2,0,L|436:104,1,70,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
488,160,38400,1,0,0:0:0:0:
284,196,38851,6,0,P|361:206|428:172,1,140,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
368,304,39528,1,2,0:0:0:0:
264,320,39754,2,0,P|220:312|180:316,1,70,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
88,348,40205,2,0,P|60:308|60:240,2,105,4|10|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
136,232,41107,2,0,P|140:184|104:124,2,105,2|10|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
32,148,42009,2,0,P|28:100|92:20,1,140,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
292,80,42912,6,0,L|432:68,1,140,12|12,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
480,212,43814,2,0,L|488:336,2,105,12|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
408,184,44716,2,0,P|311:220|212:191,1,210,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
72,176,45618,2,0,P|92:132|152:144,2,105,8|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
200,64,46521,2,0,P|232:132|200:208,1,140,2|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
128,312,47423,6,0,B|72:332|72:332|16:324,2,105,8|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
276,280,48325,2,0,P|228:280|176:236,2,105,2|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
428,328,49227,2,0,P|375:332|326:350,2,105,8|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
368,244,50130,2,0,P|368:172|408:112,1,140,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
184,60,51032,6,0,B|128:48|128:48|92:56|92:56|24:44,1,140,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
52,222,51934,2,0,B|100:232|100:232|128:220|128:220|188:232,2,140,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
88,140,53062,1,0,0:0:0:0:
88,140,53287,2,0,L|180:132,2,70,0|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,196,54190,1,0,0:0:0:0:
259,266,54415,1,0,0:0:0:0:
264,336,54641,1,8,0:0:0:0:
336,96,55092,5,2,0:0:0:0:
448,140,55318,2,0,L|480:124,2,35,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
448,140,55769,1,2,0:0:0:0:
356,208,55994,1,8,0:0:0:0:
336,96,56220,1,12,0:0:0:0:
116,160,56671,5,8,0:0:0:0:
256,172,56896,1,12,0:0:0:0:
20,100,58250,6,0,P|128:84|188:100,1,167.999994873047,6|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
264,140,58927,1,0,0:0:0:0:
348,108,59152,1,2,0:0:0:0:
484,236,59603,1,8,0:0:0:0:
420,300,59829,1,0,0:0:0:0:
420,300,60054,2,0,B|384:288|384:288|256:312,1,167.999994873047,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
164,320,60731,1,0,0:0:0:0:
72,332,60957,2,0,B|40:288|40:288|24:224|56:176,1,167.999994873047,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
176,40,61859,5,6,0:0:0:0:
260,80,62084,2,0,L|252:132,2,41.9999987182618,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
348,48,62536,1,0,0:0:0:0:
440,64,62761,1,2,0:0:0:0:
440,64,62987,2,0,P|472:128|452:228,1,167.999994873047,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
456,220,63663,2,0,L|368:212,1,83.9999974365235,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
284,240,64115,2,0,L|184:232,1,83.9999974365235,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
108,212,64566,5,2,0:0:0:0:
24,248,64791,1,0,0:0:0:0:
24,248,65017,1,8,0:0:0:0:
132,332,65242,1,0,0:0:0:0:
132,332,65468,2,0,P|156:256|128:160,1,167.999994873047,6|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
64,116,66145,1,0,0:0:0:0:
100,32,66370,1,2,0:0:0:0:
280,80,66821,5,8,0:0:0:0:
372,68,67047,1,0,0:0:0:0:
372,68,67272,2,0,P|412:152|400:232,1,167.999994873047,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
332,280,67949,1,0,0:0:0:0:
420,316,68175,2,0,L|240:336,1,167.999994873047,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
164,312,68851,1,0,0:0:0:0:
164,312,69077,5,6,0:0:0:0:
28,344,69415,1,2,0:0:0:0:
60,208,69754,1,2,0:0:0:0:
60,208,69979,1,2,0:0:0:0:
188,156,70318,1,2,0:0:0:0:
76,72,70656,1,2,0:0:0:0:
76,72,70881,2,0,P|136:48|88:144,1,251.999992309571,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
99,150,71784,6,0,P|148:132|268:144,1,167.999994873047,2|6,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
336,196,72460,1,0,0:0:0:0:
396,264,72686,1,0,0:0:0:0:
452,192,72912,2,0,L|504:204,2,41.9999987182618,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
456,284,73363,1,0,0:0:0:0:
376,240,73588,2,0,P|304:204|208:216,1,167.999994873047,2|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
112,184,74265,1,0,0:0:0:0:
20,172,74490,5,2,0:0:0:0:
56,260,74716,1,0,0:0:0:0:
56,260,74942,2,0,L|60:352,1,83.9999974365235,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
152,336,75393,2,0,L|240:328,1,83.9999974365235,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
328,316,75844,1,8,0:0:0:0:
480,212,76295,6,0,P|492:156|420:60,1,167.999994873047,6|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
344,52,76972,1,0,0:0:0:0:
344,52,77197,1,2,0:0:0:0:
256,76,77423,2,0,L|160:60,1,83.9999974365235,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
173,62,77874,2,0,B|112:32|52:56|52:56|12:128|68:184,1,251.999992309571,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
116,248,78776,1,0,0:0:0:0:
116,248,79002,2,0,L|216:240,1,83.9999974365235,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
292,260,79453,2,0,L|392:252,1,83.9999974365235,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
468,268,79904,5,6,0:0:0:0:
496,180,80130,1,0,0:0:0:0:
496,180,80355,1,8,0:0:0:0:
432,112,80581,1,0,0:0:0:0:
432,112,80806,2,0,P|392:96|264:96,1,167.999994873047,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
176,104,81483,1,0,0:0:0:0:
176,104,81709,5,6,0:0:0:0:
44,140,82047,1,2,0:0:0:0:
84,272,82385,1,2,0:0:0:0:
132,192,82611,1,6,0:0:0:0:
176,324,82949,1,2,0:0:0:0:
40,300,83287,1,2,0:0:0:0:
40,300,83513,2,0,P|132:268|228:288,1,167.999994873047,6|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
336,324,84190,6,0,L|388:336,2,41.9999987182618,0|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
336,324,84641,1,0,0:0:0:0:
432,232,84866,1,8,0:0:0:0:
484,112,85092,1,0,0:0:0:0:
484,112,85318,2,0,B|432:96|432:96|364:100|364:100|316:92,1,167.999994873047,6|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
140,44,86220,2,0,B|152:96|152:96|144:140|144:140|172:188,1,125.999996154785,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
240,228,86896,1,4,0:0:0:0:
256,192,87009,12,4,88701,0:0:0:0:
144,124,89152,5,0,0:0:0:0:
144,280,89378,1,4,0:0:0:0:

all fixed

Sphere - Future Stream

Sign In To Proceed

Don't have an account?

Sphere - Future Stream

M o k o r i wrote:

EmingK wrote:

EmingK wrote:

AIR wrote:

Harold Miner wrote:

EmingK wrote:

truonant wrote:

Koroko's Easy

Normal

AIR's Hard

Hatsukoi

zxhzxhz wrote:

truonant wrote:

Spring Roll wrote:

Normal

Hatsukoi

Flask wrote:

CDFA wrote:

xxdeathx wrote:

Nagi awa wrote:

Kagamine Ren wrote:

Nagi awa wrote:

Kagamine Ren wrote:

Hatsukoi

然后是重点要看的nm

Hard

OblivioN wrote:

Hatsukoi

然后是重点要看的nm

Hard

CDFA wrote:

DakeDekaane wrote:

New reply