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Aso Natsuko - More-more LOVERS!!(TV ver.) [OsuMania]

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arcwinolivirus wrote:

"Arcwinolivirus BAT checking/modding"

Take note that I am focusing on note patterns, comfortability, placements and consistency.
Also, do not be afraid to reject some parts of my mod but reason them out with sense.

Also, if I suggest to remove a certain note, be sure to move the hitsound on the other note beside the suggested note.


[General]
Audio: OK!
BG: OK!
BPM: OK!
Offset: OK!
Preview Time: OK!
AiMod:
• Lv.6 - 01:00:063 - notes isnt snapped by 1ms. Must Fix. hope it's not wrong now ;w;.. i'm using stable not cutting edge

as for metadata:
• Title should be More-more LOVERS!! (TV Size) with small "M" at the 2nd "more". Other ranked of the same song has this title. Must change.
done :3
Column:
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4K - |1|2|3|4|

[Lv.6]
SPOILER
00:05:834 (5834|1) - move to 3 to have right-left hand balance before the 00:06:163 (6163|0) for comfortability.

00:26:438 (26438|3) - change to single/short note as it does not have a consistent long sound just like you did at 00:36:987 (36987|2) - (I assume this is the vocal but its quite inconsistent to LN for. Not even the bass with not-that-long sound). And if applied.. waa.. i've decide to remove it ;w;.. tell me if i'm wrong

00:26:932 (26932|2,26932|1) - move to 1 and 4 accordingly for comfortability and impact sound.

00:54:625 - add note to 1 as its better to be 2-noters since it is a really strong/impact sound

01:24:295 (84295|0,84295|3) - extend these LNs until 01:25:119 as the long sound ends there and just like you did in Lv.10 difficulty. kk. all fixed :3

[Lv.10]
SPOILER
00:02:207 (2207|0) - add soft-hitclap HS just like Lv.14's

00:25:943 (25943|1,26108|2,26273|3,26438|0) - add soft-hitwhistle HS. Lv.14's

00:27:097 (27097|1) - ^

00:31:548 (31548|1) - soft-hitclap. lv.14's

00:32:537 - add note to 4. Strong sound as 00:27:262 (27262|3,27262|0) -

00:35:834 - Recommending: http://puu.sh/dECgg/2077dba698.jpg
• The LN follows the bass-like melody. You did this at Lv. 14
• Removed the LN at previous state since it is inconsistent and not following any long sound
• In the image I gave, the last 2 LNs added with soft-hitclap hitsound as Lv.14 have it.

00:37:482 (37482|2) - remove. Only single LN is enough here and it is only 1 instrument. Lv.14 do not have this note.

00:38:306 (38306|1,38389|0) - add soft-hitwhistle

00:39:625 (39625|2,39707|3) - ^

00:40:943 (40943|1,41026|0) - ^

00:40:449 - add note to 4 or 1 for beat+synth

00:41:768 - ^ to 2

00:42:262 (42262|1,42345|2) - add soft-hitwhistle

00:53:801 (53801|3,53801|0,53801|2,53965|3,53965|1,53965|0,54130|3,54130|0,54130|2) - make this 2-noters just like you did at 01:12:097 (72097|3,72097|2,72262|0,72262|1,72427|3,72427|2,72592|0,725 92|1) as it is not very strong enough to be 3-noters in the difficulty. Let the Lv.14 have the 3-noters for this part.

00:59:570 (59570|2) - add soft-hitwhistle.

01:10:614 - add note to 2. consistent beat sound.

01:20:174 (80174|2,80504|0,80834|2,81163|1) - add soft-hitwhistle. like Lv.14's

01:26:932 (86932|2,86932|1) - remove. Lv.14 does not even have this 4-noters.

01:26:768 - add note to 3 for that tom-drum sound. all fixed too :3

[Lv.14]
SPOILER
00:03:031 (3031|0,3196|1,3361|3) - remove these notes as there is no additional sounds included here. not like 00:02:207 (2207|1,2372|1,2537|3,2702|3) - which has a really strong sound

00:03:856 (3856|2) - move to 4

00:06:163 (6163|0) - add soft-hitwhistle

00:06:163 - add note to 3 since strong start sound.

00:06:493 until 00:11:768 - Reduce those 3-noters to 2-noters as they are only beatsounds + hithat. Not like 00:12:097 (12097|3,12097|2,12097|1,12427|0,12427|1,12427|2,12757|3,12757|0,12757|1) - which are very acceptable since the instrument there is beat+hithat+cymbals.

00:15:394 (15394|1) - remove.

00:16:713 until 00:25:943 - Same as previous. Reduce 3-noters on ONLY beatsound+hithat sounds. Snare sounds are fine to be 3-noters like 00:17:042 (17042|1,17042|2,17042|3,17702|3,17702|0,17702|2). These redusage are to avoid overmapping.

00:26:768 (26768|1) - change to short note just like lv.10's

00:39:954 - add note to 3 beat sound.

00:44:240 (44240|1,44570|2,44899|0,45229|3,45559|1) - add another note on it to become 2-noters since we have additional sound there.

00:46:878 (46878|0,47207|3,47537|0) - ^

00:47:867 (47867|1) - remove. 3-noter keypress on a only beat sound.

00:52:152 (52152|0) - change to short note as this is quite inconsitent and LN alone there.

00:54:954 to 01:06:823 - since this is the chorus part, The 3-noters with 2-noters are good for me~

01:15:724 (75724|3) - add soft-hitclap like Lv.10's

01:26:603 , 01:26:685 , 01:26:768 - add notes for those tom-drums sound there.

01:26:932 - add note to 2 and 3 as the final strong notes. all done :3
[Overall]
MM! Cool song choice and also good 4k mapset. Good luck! :)
oke. all have been fixed :3 thanks senpai :lol:
[AyanoTatemaya]
revive? :(
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[AyanoTatemaya] wrote:

revive? :(
yups :3
sorry i was busy in the last 2 months .. ;w;
Arzenvald
oh nice, finally revived..

some general check & thingy thingy

[General & Metadata]
http://vgmdb.net/album/21818
http://official.stardust.co.jp/natsukoaso/disc.html

Artist : 麻生夏子

Romanized Artist : Natsuko Aso
according the album & the information from the singer profile http://official.stardust.co.jp/natsukoaso/profile.html)

Title : More-more LOVERS!!

Romanized Title : More-more LOVERS!!

Timing : it's sightly late in 25%.. i asked people, and they thinks the offset is correctly at 887 / 00:00:887 -.. to fix this :
1. Timing > Move All Notes in time > type -2 ms , then press ok
2. press F6 > then select all timing section, then Move Selected Offset by -2 ms http://puu.sh/ghFp7.png , then press ok

after you move the offset
Unsnapped Preview Time in all diff, fix to 00:54:623 -

the pattern is satisfying for me.. while waiting arcwin, better to re-check everything.. x3

good luck!
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ExUsagi wrote:

oh nice, finally revived..

some general check & thingy thingy

[General & Metadata]
http://vgmdb.net/album/21818
http://official.stardust.co.jp/natsukoaso/disc.html

Artist : 麻生夏子

Romanized Artist : Natsuko Aso
according the album & the information from the singer profile http://official.stardust.co.jp/natsukoaso/profile.html)

Title : More-more LOVERS!! then i should delete "TV Size" thing :3

Romanized Title : More-more LOVERS!!

Timing : it's sightly late in 25%.. i asked people, and they thinks the offset is correctly at 887 / 00:00:887 -.. to fix this :
1. Timing > Move All Notes in time > type -2 ms , then press ok
2. press F6 > then select all timing section, then Move Selected Offset by -2 ms http://puu.sh/ghFp7.png , then press ok

after you move the offset
Unsnapped Preview Time in all diff, fix to 00:54:623 -

the pattern is satisfying for me.. while waiting arcwin, better to re-check everything.. x3

good luck!
well... everything has fixed :3 .... arcwin where are uuuu ?? :P
Zan-
[Metadata]
  1. Title: More-more LOVERS!! (TV ver.) / 麻生夏子 | Source 1
  2. Romanised: More-more LOVERS!! (TV ver.) / Natsuko Asou | Source 2

well, im not really sure about this too
you better ask more experienced metadata hunter like alacat or KSHR

gl~
i'm ninzan
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Zan - wrote:

[Metadata]
  1. Title: More-more LOVERS!! (TV ver.) / 麻生夏子 | Source 1
  2. Romanised: More-more LOVERS!! (TV ver.) / Natsuko Asou | Source 2

well, im not really sure about this too
you better ask more experienced metadata hunter like alacat or KSHR

gl~
i'm ninzan
hmm... yeah... i need to ask to them about metadata ... woke thanks zan :P
Rido
googoooooooo burger
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bakabakemono wrote:

googoooooooo burger
go where ????? :P
alacat
  • As request about metadata
  1. Romanised Artist : Aso Natsuko

    1. Eastern artists must be written in the proper 'surname firstname' format (e.g. Japanese/Chinese/Korean). For artists which have a preferred romanisation, use this one. If you're unsure of your artist's name, then check previously ranked maps, Google, Wikipedia, or ask a BN for help.
  2. Title : More-more LOVERS!!(TV ver.)
    Romanised : More-more LOVERS!!(TV ver.)



    Webpage : http://www.lantis.jp/release-item2.php?id=d379c1f7078264c0043a1deba82fc3b1
  3. Source : えむえむっ!

    Please move to tags "MM!"

    Additional modding :

  4. Soft-hitclap has a bit delay. Please use it :3 I fixed delay ~ : http://puu.sh/gnsqH/60cd43caa8.wav

  5. BG size must be 1366 x 768. Please use it ~ http://puu.sh/gnsyj/045ca766a3.jpg
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alacat wrote:

  • As request about metadata
  1. Romanised Artist : Aso Natsuko

    1. Eastern artists must be written in the proper 'surname firstname' format (e.g. Japanese/Chinese/Korean). For artists which have a preferred romanisation, use this one. If you're unsure of your artist's name, then check previously ranked maps, Google, Wikipedia, or ask a BN for help.
  2. Title : More-more LOVERS!!(TV ver.)
    Romanised : More-more LOVERS!!(TV ver.)



    Webpage : http://www.lantis.jp/release-item2.php?id=d379c1f7078264c0043a1deba82fc3b1
  3. Source : えむえむっ!

    Please move to tags "MM!"

    Additional modding :

  4. Soft-hitclap has a bit delay. Please use it :3 I fixed delay ~ : http://puu.sh/gnsqH/60cd43caa8.wav

  5. BG size must be 1366 x 768. Please use it ~ http://puu.sh/gnsyj/045ca766a3.jpg
yoshh all fixed thanks :oops:
PatZar
untick widescreen supporter on Lv.14, Lv.10. Unless you have not using Storyboard.
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Genocide wrote:

untick widescreen supporter on Lv.14, Lv.10. Unless you have not using Storyboard.
woo forget that.. i'll fix that later ;w;
[AyanoTatemaya]
are there any bns planning to bubble this map?
if not, then i'll be happy to do a final check, since i already modded this 3 months ago. :)

anyway, here's a simple-check on Lv.14 diff, focusing on optimization of some patterns and comfortability.
(the diff on the right is your original diff btw, to enable comparison between them)

Col: 1|2|3|4

01:18:359 - http://puu.sh/gt4Nx/daa1215338.jpg
01:19:513 - http://puu.sh/gt4QG/f3a274226e.jpg
01:20:255 - http://puu.sh/gt4Wq/6a71d2d8e0.jpg
01:21:491 (81491|1) - move to 4, to distinguish the 2 base notes following it from the current one, and to avoid unnecessary jacks
01:22:150 (82150|3,82315|2) - swap col. makes more sense that way
01:22:810 - http://puu.sh/gt5cb/e0174a5c31.jpg

call me after you've applied it, and i'll do a final check.
NO KUDOS
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[AyanoTatemaya] wrote:

are there any bns planning to bubble this map?
if not, then i'll be happy to do a final check, since i already modded this 3 months ago. :)
ahh of course.. still waiting for re-check from arcwin..
i'll contact you later for confirmation :)
arcwinolivirus
Had some deeper mod to mapper, rechecked notes, Aimod, hitsound and it seems metadata already fixed. Good luck~!

BUBBLED!
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wooo bubbled :o ... thanks arcwin :D
[AyanoTatemaya]

-[BURGERKILL]- wrote:

wooo bubbled :o ... thanks arcwin :D
i just hoped that you could at least considered my previous post before arc's check. (there's no reply)
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[AyanoTatemaya] wrote:

i just hoped that you could at least considered my previous post before arc's check. (there's no reply)

ahh. sorry about that i'm really" confused and don't know what should i do. in that time ... ;w;
Rido
Hayo loh ger :v
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wkwkwkwk greget mode on :v
[AyanoTatemaya]

-[BURGERKILL]- wrote:

ahh. sorry about that i'm really" confused and don't know what should i do. in that time ... ;w;
It's alright. They were mostly just suggestions anyway. Just be more attentive next time, okay? The next one might be a fix for an unrankable issue.

And with that, here's your approval for rank!
faza872
Congrats :)
troke
Congrats BURGERKILL
alacat
Gratz :3
Rido
GRATZZZZZ COEEEG owo)b
Kyousuke-
wow gratss!!
[ Mephisto ]
Gratz O/
Rekete
Congrats BURGERKILL !!! :D :D :D
Sky_Demon
Nice Song Grz! :)
-[ AmiShici ]-
Good Job Pak 8-)
[Super23Nova]
Yay Ranked :D
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[AyanoTatemaya] wrote:

-[BURGERKILL]- wrote:

ahh. sorry about that i'm really" confused and don't know what should i do. in that time ... ;w;
It's alright. They were mostly just suggestions anyway. Just be more attentive next time, okay? The next one might be a fix for an unrankable issue.

And with that, here's your approval for rank!
roger that sir :D

faza872 wrote:

Congrats :)

-Troke- wrote:

Congrats BURGERKILL

alacat wrote:

Gratz :3

bakabakemono wrote:

GRATZZZZZ COEEEG owo)b

Kyousuke- wrote:

wow gratss!!

[ Mephisto ] wrote:

Gratz O/

R3k3T3 wrote:

Congrats BURGERKILL !!! :D :D :D

Sky_Demon wrote:

Nice Song Grz! :)

-[ AmiShici ]- wrote:

Good Job Pak 8-)

[Super23Nova] wrote:

Yay Ranked :D
kwkw thanks guys :D
Surono
aku rindu kamu mas pocong......
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