Aphrodena wrote:

[Aphrodena's Modding Queue]
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[General]
Lots of vocal mapping, but good map overall.

Um, uh... sorry for the delay? ;_;

Mod

[4K EZ]
00:16:083 (16083|3,16583|0) - Ctrl+H for PR (first little tinkle noise is lower pitched) done~
01:17:915 (77915|2) - Add because strong sound with cymbal instead just moved this to 3, i dont like the idea of it being the first 3 chord in the whole map

[4K NM]
Looks fine to me~

[4K HD]
00:26:083 (26083|0) - Move to |1|
00:26:249 (26249|1) - Move to |0| -> These 2 suggestions match the synth that decreases in pitch oki done ~
00:29:416 (29416|1) - Add one because strong sound done~
00:43:083 - Not sure if you missed this or you intentionally ignored it, but there's a rim shot here
00:47:083 - ^ done both

[4K MX]
No complaints here, probably because I can't play the map well enough to give it a good mod. (I mean, 650k reallllllly)

Good luck! (No kudosu if you didn't find my mod helpful ^^)

Kuo Kyoka wrote:

sasakure.UK feat. Hatsune Miku - SeventH-HeaveN [Osu!Mania Modding]

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From Kuo Kyoka's osu!mania Modding Queue

Mod Requested by Starry-

[Generals]
- BPM: Okay
- Offset: Okay
- AiMod: No Problem
- Tags: Okay
- BG: Better to change one, in this background have the text: Solosail (sm16151555) Use google and like: http://www.tudou.com/programs/view/bdkZi3Uaeqk/ !Not SeventH-HeaveN so suggest to change one ah yes. changed it entirely.
- Kiai: Okay

Column
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“Here come of some suggest for your map, I always check fullmap, if I’m too tried I will come back soon, or only check that keys by the request! And remember to reply the mod when you’re accepcted it or not! And forget my kud if my suggest is useful ~ Thanks for requested me ~

[EZ+]

SPOILER

1. Suggest 00:21:416 - to 00:24:083 - make like 00:18:749 - to 00:20:083 - its irregular because the vocal starts on a red tick. however i added notes to compensate the lack in consistency with hitsounds.
2. 00:25:583 - change the pattern like: cause in 00:25:916 (25916|0,26249|0) - seems repeating http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2393496 no change, ii think its fine. goes with pitch and easier to play like this.
3. 00:37:416 - here, change pattern like this: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2393504 (The pitch not always the same so change the pattern) ^, i can ignore minor pitch relevancies if it's a lot more playable for the player. i dont want it too hard.
4. Here also: 00:55:749 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2393506 ^
5. 00:59:248 - to 01:01:081 - suggest: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2393510 changed because in kiai
6. Here 01:09:915 - same, try this: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2393515 done
7. 01:17:915 - to 01:25:915 - the song doesnt have only voice? try to have some are beat, not following voice is better for this part specifically the beat is a little bit more mellow. i wanted to map the highlights in the song >< again first mapset lol..
   This diff need more works

[NM]

SPOILER

1. 00:53:416 (53416|0) - move to 00:53:577 - no real noise apart from synth, no change
   Nice in my options but need works on the zig-zag patterns

[HD]

SPOILER

1. Only in 00:26:583 (26583|2,26749|3,26916|2,27249|2) - have those strong beat, suggest 00:27:416 - move one no change, dont feel need for it
   Nice diff

[Sora's MX]

SPOILER

1. 00:23:749 - add a note in 4, have a drum sound in here added note in 2 instead
2. 00:26:583 - and 00:26:916 - add a note, same beat with 00:26:749 - rearranged
   Im not good much at 4K, seems good but seems too much notes too

[Comment]
Eh~ Hatsune Miku >w< This song so good ~ But patterns on EZ and NM need more works actually! Anyway, the map is good, so I wont mod too much!
Suggest to change the bg (it's unrankable because of the text) and pls go rank this map ~ thank you! changed a few EZ patterns around, NM didn't seem that bad. changed bg. sorry if i declined a lot
Good luck ~

HOST wrote:

hi starryberry- toastHOST :3
mod from queue~~


colum 1 / 2 / 3 / 4


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[EZ+]

00:09:249 (9249|0) - end 00:10:083 ended at red tick instead, rearranged a bunch

01:17:915 (77915|0) - end 01:23:248 okai


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[NM]

00:13:416 ~ 00:28:416 - i think long notes are better to following low tone of synthesizer. if u dont wanna it, just ignore these suggestions.

00:13:416 (13416|3) - end 00:14:749

00:18:749 (18749|3) - end 00:20:083

00:19:916 (19916|0) - change to single note

00:21:916 (21916|0) - start 00:21:416. end 00:22:749 done all

00:22:083 (22083|1,22249|2,22416|3,22583|2,22916|3) - remove rearranged hugely

00:21:916 - add LN 3, end 00:22:749 i start not to follow vocals here

00:24:083 (24083|3) - end 00:25:416 ok

00:33:916 (33916|1) - remove
00:34:083 (34083|0) - start 00:33:916
00:34:083 (34083|3) - start 00:34:249
two LNs end 00:34:416 ok all

00:51:249 (51249|2) - move 1
00:51:583 (51583|1) - move 4
00:52:083 (52083|0,52083|3) - move 2, 3
00:52:583 (52583|1,52583|2) - move 1, 4 done all

made quite a few rearrangements in this diff, needs a bit more work

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[Sora's MX]

00:54:916 (54916|0,54916|3) - start 00:54:749 ok


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<3
good luck

17VA wrote:

[MX]

00:30:083 (30083|1,30166|0,30249|1) - looks uncomfortable. 1,2,1 column might be better. done

00:47:916 - ^ http://puu.sh/et1QJ/1b317fb72b.png ok

00:52:083 (52083|2,52083|1,52249|1,52249|0,52249|3) - ctrl + h. same pattern has been used, but different tone. ok

01:02:915 - how about this way ? http://puu.sh/et22n/946f4b425c.jpg ok

[HD]

00:40:583 (40583|2) - 2nd column? ok

00:45:416 - add. strong beat ok

00:53:416 (53416|1,53416|2) - 3,4 column is better imo rearranged

00:53:749 (53749|2,53749|1,53749|0) - use symmetric hold here. looks uncomfortable. rearranged

00:56:416 (56416|2) - 4th column rearranged

01:06:415 - http://puu.sh/et2zf/243bea35dc.jpg little uncomfortable lol changed

Pharos21 wrote:

Hi Ho Hell...... Whaa.... What a beautiful Song... Great (^.^)b

OK Ahem... Hi Ho Hello

M4M from (See Signature) Here

Sorry for the delay..

OK since this song are my fav. so I''ll Going All out For this and Mod all diff that i can take....

OK

General's are fine so i'll skip it

The MOD

Colom 1.2.3.4

EZ+

00:09:749 (9749|1) - Move to 4 (more comfortable) keeping for balance ;w;

00:25:583 (25583|2) - Move to 2 it fits nicely here

00:26:749 (26749|3) - Change to LN till 00:27:249 (27249|0) - oonly really focused on the synth to make LN here

00:42:749 (42749|1) - Move to 3 ( More comfortable ) keeping for balance

00:53:249 addl note at 2 and then 00:53:416 (53416|3) - Move to 3 i think is fine, adding note will make it inconsistent with rest of pattern ;w;

00:53:749 (53749|1) - Move to 4 and then make this


00:59:415 (59415|0,59582|3,59748|1,59915|0,60082|2,60248|3) - Make this ok rearranged

01:08:581 (68581|1,68915|2,69081|0) - I suggest you should avoid using this . i think this are too hard for EZ
So
01:08:581 (68581|1) - Move to 3
01:08:915 (68915|2) - Move to 2

01:09:248 (69248|3) - move to 3
01:09:581 (69581|0) - Move to 4 rearranged all a bit

01:10:415 (70415|3,70581|1,70748|2,70915|0,71081|2,71248|1) - I think this are too hard.. Try this

01:11:748 (71748|2) - for this and the other that similiar with this.. i suggest you change it to LN till 01:12:081 (72081|3) - okayo

01:13:248 (73248|1) - Delete no but rearranged instead

NM

00:18:749 (18749|3) - End it here > 00:19:583 (19583|2) - ended at synth

00:37:583 (37583|1) - Move to 1 ok

01:17:081 (77081|3) - Delete fits keep

HD

HP or OD = 7 or 7.5 (have mercy please TT_TT)

00:25:249 (25249|0) - Delete.. pattern ok

The rest are clean~

Give me Kudo now so i can convert it to star... I really love the song and the Mapset >.<

GL And Get Ranked soon ^.^

Kruzon wrote:

4K Column Format: 1 l 2 l 3 l 4

4K Easy+

SPOILER

00:09:249 (9249|0) - i thought it ends here instead 00:10:083 (10083|0) - vocal ends there, keep
00:57:915 (57915|0) - what is this note following? imo, these need notes instead 00:57:748 (57748|1) - and 00:58:082 (58082|1) - following vocal here is better hmm yes, but then itl'l be inconsistent with pattern :c

01:17:915 (77915|0) - perhaps it's more proper and balance if you end it on the same line as 01:23:081 (83081|3) - hmm still think it ends here, keep >.<

4K NM

SPOILER

00:20:083 (20083|2) - i hear a chime here, and add
00:18:749 (18749|3) - end this long note on same line as this 00:19:916 (19916|0) - , consistent presentation of long notes long notes here aren't really following this vocal

00:29:916 (29916|3,29916|2,30249|0,30249|3) - feels off.. 00:29:916 (29916|2,29916|3) - feels like it's the one should be widened and 00:30:249 (30249|3,30249|0) - narrowed, pitch-wise done

00:38:416 (38416|3) - = 00:39:916 (39916|0) - ? dont quite understand ;w;

00:40:083 (40083|2,40083|3) - move to 2 and 3 kinda more balanced like this
00:57:415 (57415|1) - what is this following? i suggest move 2/4 beat forward since the vocal and instrument starts there rearrange

good luck ^^