TicClick wrote:

The difficulty gap still persists: Normal is too easy and adding another difficulty won't help if you aren't going to change anything in Normal. You (Sharlo) need to make it harder, please. You can use this Normal → https://osu.ppy.sh/b/445518 as a good example.

1. 00:05:166 (3,4) - would look better if you centered them; also add new combo on 3
2. 00:07:909 (1,2) - looks poor and unpolished; try coming up with a better pattern?
3. 00:10:309 (3) - new combo
4. 00:36:366 (2,3) - using a simple arc as a slider shape would look better because it'd blanket the note, then: http://puu.sh/cuUWH/b12873ab9a.jpg
   
   Regarding the kiai part, you could remove some notes to reduce the density, for example, notes like 00:51:452 (4) - in the very end of each musical phrase.
   
   
5. 01:10:995 (3,4) - would look better if you centered them; also add new combo on 3
6. 01:16:138 (3) - add new combo
7. 01:16:481 (1) - silence its end

1. 00:02:595 (2,6) - is unnecessary and overloads the beginning; moreover it's inconsistent with the rest of the map, consider removing
2. 00:13:395 (1) - should have finish
3. 00:14:595 (2) - in patterns like this one, you may add a trailing note: http://puu.sh/cuUuJ/f3d087ac34.jpg
4. 01:18:366 (1) - I feel like this is too short for a Normal; have you tried mapping a pattern like this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2183252 (also silence the end, like it's done in LUNATiC and Hard)

TicClick wrote:

rechecking
[Easy]

1. 00:05:166 (3,4) - would look better if you centered them; also add new combo on 3 fixed
2. 00:07:909 (1,2) - looks poor and unpolished; try coming up with a better pattern? changed the pattern
3. 00:10:309 (3) - new combo fixed
4. 00:36:366 (2,3) - using a simple arc as a slider shape would look better because it'd blanket the note, then: http://puu.sh/cuUWH/b12873ab9a.jpg fixed
   
   Regarding the kiai part, you could remove some notes to reduce the density, for example, notes like 00:51:452 (4) - in the very end of each musical phrase. considered it's kiai time and this song is not so smooth, if delete this notes, it will be a bit empty
   
   
5. 01:10:995 (3,4) - would look better if you centered them; also add new combo on 3 fixed
6. 01:16:138 (3) - add new combo fixed
7. 01:16:481 (1) - silence its end fixed

CDFA wrote:

so are you gonna fix it or

Oracle wrote:

听说是狮鹫的徒弟

Sharlo wrote:

Oracle wrote:

听说是狮鹫的徒弟

不 是我的

那个跪在地上哭的表情